Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Too many
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.
Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.
Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 6th, 2024 11:32
Too many
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
thoughts and message too! 🤔
Awesome rhyme and flow,
way to go, thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 6th, 2024 09:33
Too many
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
Neville said:
they say it\'ll be all right on the night .. but somehow what with everything that is going on, I doubt it .. you can beat an egg but you can\'t beat nature ..
August 6th, 2024 07:30
Too many
orchidee said:
Go to a busy town - arghhh - people and more people! lol.
August 6th, 2024 07:23
orchidee said:
Go to a busy town - arghhh - people and more people! lol.
August 6th, 2024 07:23
Too many
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful imagery and mother nature\'s wrath, well she can certainly turn up a baobab or two. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 6th, 2024 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful imagery and mother nature\'s wrath, well she can certainly turn up a baobab or two. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 6th, 2024 05:02
From a tiny view
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I mean \"Drinking knowledge from a media latrine\" is just inspired. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:57
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I mean \"Drinking knowledge from a media latrine\" is just inspired. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:57
From a tiny view
orchidee said:
Now this is spooky - the poem changed from verses to one whole piece, then back again to verses!
Maybe a blip when I pressed the \'like\' button?! Good write SB.
August 5th, 2024 14:13
orchidee said:
Now this is spooky - the poem changed from verses to one whole piece, then back again to verses!
Maybe a blip when I pressed the \'like\' button?! Good write SB.
August 5th, 2024 14:13
From a tiny view
Neville said:
I have tried to see the world through a childs eyes but sadly, I think I lost it way back .. this post made me think about perception in general a topic that I have long been interested in .. nice one my friend .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 13:32
Neville said:
I have tried to see the world through a childs eyes but sadly, I think I lost it way back .. this post made me think about perception in general a topic that I have long been interested in .. nice one my friend .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 13:32
From a tiny view
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 brilliant what magical lies children can make up, and of course the adult too. I found this to be most endearing, I\'ve worked with children all my life. Mountains out of mole hills 🌹
August 5th, 2024 08:21
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 brilliant what magical lies children can make up, and of course the adult too. I found this to be most endearing, I\'ve worked with children all my life. Mountains out of mole hills 🌹
August 5th, 2024 08:21
Silent colors
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Bobby O said:
“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !
August 5th, 2024 05:31
Silent colors
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That colour fills our life soren and will always do so.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:44
Silent colors
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.
August 4th, 2024 23:36
Silent colors
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
love it!
Eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Great rhyme scheme,
flow and blend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 4th, 2024 22:13
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
love it!
Eloquently penned my friend! 👍
Great rhyme scheme,
flow and blend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 4th, 2024 22:13
Silent colors
Teddy.15 said:
And I do now to thee, one of my most favourite poets who also values the colour blue, I see nothing but acceptance and peace in this. We all have our own choices in life and it\'s really literally because religion or sexual preferences or colours are all blinded by love as long as we are happy. And I bow to you darling friend. Kudos. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:36
Teddy.15 said:
And I do now to thee, one of my most favourite poets who also values the colour blue, I see nothing but acceptance and peace in this. We all have our own choices in life and it\'s really literally because religion or sexual preferences or colours are all blinded by love as long as we are happy. And I bow to you darling friend. Kudos. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:36
Silent colors
Neville said:
Some, as you suggest hardly make a sound while others scream and roar .. My old sensei (now long gone) had a colour for everything and everyone .. He saw me in terms of purple and white .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:24
Neville said:
Some, as you suggest hardly make a sound while others scream and roar .. My old sensei (now long gone) had a colour for everything and everyone .. He saw me in terms of purple and white .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:24
Silent colors
Bella Shepard said:
We use silence in many different ways, and you have expressed so cleverly and beautifully the various forms, each with its equivalent emotional color. Great Write!
August 4th, 2024 12:51
Bella Shepard said:
We use silence in many different ways, and you have expressed so cleverly and beautifully the various forms, each with its equivalent emotional color. Great Write!
August 4th, 2024 12:51
Silent colors
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Not only do you suggest meals for KP, but also places for her holidays - fetid sewers! How come you know what she likes? lol.
August 4th, 2024 08:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Not only do you suggest meals for KP, but also places for her holidays - fetid sewers! How come you know what she likes? lol.
August 4th, 2024 08:25
Silent colors
aDarkerMind said:
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is Blue.
most impressed.
August 4th, 2024 06:55
aDarkerMind said:
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is Blue.
most impressed.
August 4th, 2024 06:55
Silent colors
2781 said:
I can\'t like that one. Should I pray for a speedy recovery?
August 4th, 2024 06:38
2781 said:
I can\'t like that one. Should I pray for a speedy recovery?
August 4th, 2024 06:38
Sannyasi to love
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read the poem thrice. Slowly it dawned on me that the theme is about the ephemeral quality of material possessions. I might be totally off, please do correct me if that was the case.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read the poem thrice. Slowly it dawned on me that the theme is about the ephemeral quality of material possessions. I might be totally off, please do correct me if that was the case.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
Sannyasi to love
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the unity of opposites .. these words seem to endorse the principle and reinforces my faith in it and in poetry .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 02:08
Neville said:
I am a great believer in the unity of opposites .. these words seem to endorse the principle and reinforces my faith in it and in poetry .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 02:08
Sannyasi to love
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and that last stanza is so good.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and that last stanza is so good.
Andy
August 4th, 2024 01:21
Sannyasi to love
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Discard your heart indeed.! Short and sweet. Bravo.
August 3rd, 2024 23:44
Dan Williams said:
Wow. Discard your heart indeed.! Short and sweet. Bravo.
August 3rd, 2024 23:44
Sirens
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
Don\'t be afraid
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
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