Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Night of dream dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed! Very true, my friend. This actually, has sparked an idea! So, well done...and thank you! This one, btw, is one of my more faves of yours and that says a lot because you have so many great ones to choose from! Bravo, friend! 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 19:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed! Very true, my friend. This actually, has sparked an idea! So, well done...and thank you! This one, btw, is one of my more faves of yours and that says a lot because you have so many great ones to choose from! Bravo, friend! 👏🌹
February 23rd, 2025 19:33
Night of dream dust
Neville said:
Made me feel a tad sad mate .. not sure whether it\'s my age or the weather .. every now and then certain words get me like this .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:07
Neville said:
Made me feel a tad sad mate .. not sure whether it\'s my age or the weather .. every now and then certain words get me like this .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:07
Night of dream dust
Poetic Licence said:
Discomfort keeps the mind alert and alive, yet I was very comfortable reading this piece on a lazy Sunday, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 06:47
Poetic Licence said:
Discomfort keeps the mind alert and alive, yet I was very comfortable reading this piece on a lazy Sunday, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 06:47
Night of dream dust
arqios said:
What a punch and a drop! The last line just picked it all up and blew it all away🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
What a punch and a drop! The last line just picked it all up and blew it all away🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 06:21
Night of dream dust
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Night of dream dust
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Reeling one in
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
Reeling one in
NinjaGirl said:
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
February 22nd, 2025 19:40
NinjaGirl said:
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
February 22nd, 2025 19:40
Reeling one in
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like fishing. And the worst is when the fish aren\'t biting. This gets a fave for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
February 22nd, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like fishing. And the worst is when the fish aren\'t biting. This gets a fave for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
February 22nd, 2025 09:49
Reeling one in
Teddy.15 said:
lol catching a fish without a hook, now that\'s something I would try to do, 🤣 I guess sometimes things aren\'t meant to be caught, a most wonderful amusing write dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 22nd, 2025 07:23
Teddy.15 said:
lol catching a fish without a hook, now that\'s something I would try to do, 🤣 I guess sometimes things aren\'t meant to be caught, a most wonderful amusing write dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 22nd, 2025 07:23
Reeling one in
arqios said:
In real time I haven’t fished for about 25 years which bothers me to no end… and also in real time, poeting as with everything else these days, feels like fishing… I find if I just let loose, and that I have from time to time… hardly anyone would have a taste for my poetry… so what should the ratios be in the give and take… it changes from day to day and from case to case… (sigh) 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
In real time I haven’t fished for about 25 years which bothers me to no end… and also in real time, poeting as with everything else these days, feels like fishing… I find if I just let loose, and that I have from time to time… hardly anyone would have a taste for my poetry… so what should the ratios be in the give and take… it changes from day to day and from case to case… (sigh) 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:16
Reeling one in
David Wakeling said:
The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
February 22nd, 2025 04:50
David Wakeling said:
The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
February 22nd, 2025 04:50
Reeling one in
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed today\'s read, have a great weekend
February 22nd, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed today\'s read, have a great weekend
February 22nd, 2025 04:26
Reeling one in
Goldfinch60 said:
In my younger days I used to go fishing every weekend, a great time was had sitting there with Nature.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
In my younger days I used to go fishing every weekend, a great time was had sitting there with Nature.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 03:09
Flies
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who have all steal from those who have nothing soren. Good anomaly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those who have all steal from those who have nothing soren. Good anomaly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:58
Reeling one in
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I went fishing for KP\'s supper. I caught an old boot so I cooked that for her instead. lol.
February 22nd, 2025 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I went fishing for KP\'s supper. I caught an old boot so I cooked that for her instead. lol.
February 22nd, 2025 02:46
Record Player
faie said:
I enjoyed the poem. Reading it made me think of the record spinning on the turntable and how carefree life becomes at that moment when the music sounds.
February 21st, 2025 21:59
faie said:
I enjoyed the poem. Reading it made me think of the record spinning on the turntable and how carefree life becomes at that moment when the music sounds.
February 21st, 2025 21:59
Flies
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a amazing. The flies almost took on super human status as they dictated the scene.Good fun Well done
February 21st, 2025 16:03
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a amazing. The flies almost took on super human status as they dictated the scene.Good fun Well done
February 21st, 2025 16:03
Flies
NinjaGirl said:
I hate flies! Some people know what\'s not theirs but chose to continue anyway...
February 21st, 2025 12:21
NinjaGirl said:
I hate flies! Some people know what\'s not theirs but chose to continue anyway...
February 21st, 2025 12:21
Flies
orchidee said:
They only live 3 weeks anyway, I read somewhere. Ahh. Maggot Pie for KP\'s supper tonight. But Fido and I are having roast beef! lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:21
orchidee said:
They only live 3 weeks anyway, I read somewhere. Ahh. Maggot Pie for KP\'s supper tonight. But Fido and I are having roast beef! lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:21
Flies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting! 🪰 LOL! Obviously many metaphors here, but I chose to read this as is 🪰 and...I\'ll pass the plate! 🤣 🌹👏 Seriously, well done on this brilliant piece, Soren. Observational poetry that really can work on so many other levels. A must fave for me. 🪰
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February 21st, 2025 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting! 🪰 LOL! Obviously many metaphors here, but I chose to read this as is 🪰 and...I\'ll pass the plate! 🤣 🌹👏 Seriously, well done on this brilliant piece, Soren. Observational poetry that really can work on so many other levels. A must fave for me. 🪰
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February 21st, 2025 11:17
Flies
2781 said:
It\'s enough to turn you off your food. Thing is, they know a good meal when they see one.
February 21st, 2025 09:06
2781 said:
It\'s enough to turn you off your food. Thing is, they know a good meal when they see one.
February 21st, 2025 09:06
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