Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Naive
teardrop said:
Great concept and beautiful metaphors! Thank you for the read.
February 13th, 2025 08:46
teardrop said:
Great concept and beautiful metaphors! Thank you for the read.
February 13th, 2025 08:46
Naive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetic license is what is brilliant about poetry. Like changing truth, indeed. Employ away! 🤣 This poem speaks to the sort of disillusionment that comes with age and experience, revealing that youthful idyllic notions of love and truth are simplistic and that reality is more complex and semper mutans or ever-changing (Whenever I can use Latin 😜). This really hits home for me and, i would imagine, many of us who find ourselves middle-aged (or younger or older) and realizing that our youthful ideals didn\'t really turn out as expected. We were all young and naive once! So, this piece is brilliant and 💯 relatable! Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poetic license is what is brilliant about poetry. Like changing truth, indeed. Employ away! 🤣 This poem speaks to the sort of disillusionment that comes with age and experience, revealing that youthful idyllic notions of love and truth are simplistic and that reality is more complex and semper mutans or ever-changing (Whenever I can use Latin 😜). This really hits home for me and, i would imagine, many of us who find ourselves middle-aged (or younger or older) and realizing that our youthful ideals didn\'t really turn out as expected. We were all young and naive once! So, this piece is brilliant and 💯 relatable! Well done, dear poet and friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 08:08
Naive
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is masked by wearing a floating ash cloak, that is a wonderful line. When we are young we are Naive and inexperienced in the harsh reality`s of life, so it is easy to be deceived by what we want to believe, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is masked by wearing a floating ash cloak, that is a wonderful line. When we are young we are Naive and inexperienced in the harsh reality`s of life, so it is easy to be deceived by what we want to believe, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 06:13
Naive
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a match made in Disney land.This poem made me think
February 13th, 2025 05:08
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a match made in Disney land.This poem made me think
February 13th, 2025 05:08
Naive
arqios said:
Wow, from slipping to disappearing to dissipating to disguising… like a slippery slope.”Ghostly deceptions,” indeed 🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 03:39
arqios said:
Wow, from slipping to disappearing to dissipating to disguising… like a slippery slope.”Ghostly deceptions,” indeed 🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 03:39
Naive
orchidee said:
I gave KP an old coat covered in ash for her birthday! lol.
February 13th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
I gave KP an old coat covered in ash for her birthday! lol.
February 13th, 2025 03:20
Naive
Teddy.15 said:
I have been writing about my first love for most of 30 years, that young open blinded moment is a must and I would never ever take it back, it taught me more than most of what I now know about love, your title is perfect, I would say to these young go live your love. A beautiful honest portrait of what in fact is love. 🌹 Wonderful.
February 13th, 2025 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
I have been writing about my first love for most of 30 years, that young open blinded moment is a must and I would never ever take it back, it taught me more than most of what I now know about love, your title is perfect, I would say to these young go live your love. A beautiful honest portrait of what in fact is love. 🌹 Wonderful.
February 13th, 2025 03:17
Dragonfly
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
skittering insect
buzzfeeding “mosquito hawk”
try to guess my name
February 12th, 2025 11:54
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
skittering insect
buzzfeeding “mosquito hawk”
try to guess my name
February 12th, 2025 11:54
Music top hits
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I\'m an \'oldie\' preferring traditional stuff mainly. When something is re-done, or re-issued, I sometimes think \'Now you\'ve ruined it!\' Doh! There\'s a ghastly expression if some Psalms have been \'updated\'. We may say \'Now you\'ve murdered that Psalm\'.
February 12th, 2025 11:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I\'m an \'oldie\' preferring traditional stuff mainly. When something is re-done, or re-issued, I sometimes think \'Now you\'ve ruined it!\' Doh! There\'s a ghastly expression if some Psalms have been \'updated\'. We may say \'Now you\'ve murdered that Psalm\'.
February 12th, 2025 11:38
Music top hits
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Factory assembled bubble gum nothingness that lacks soul and will never move the cosmos like true art will. Truthfully, every generation has had this so long as a music \"industry\" has been around. Elvis, himself, got rich and famous off of the backs of some very talented people who happened to be \"the wrong color\" at the time. It is the very true and ugly underbelly of the music business. To each their own. As for me, I\'ve never been much of a radio listener. I\'m a music adventurer, but I do it on my own without the droning of the industry telling me what to consume! LOL! Well, I guess the industry still reaches us if we consume music of any variety, but I severely limit its reach! LOL! Well done on this Soren. 🌹👏
February 12th, 2025 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Factory assembled bubble gum nothingness that lacks soul and will never move the cosmos like true art will. Truthfully, every generation has had this so long as a music \"industry\" has been around. Elvis, himself, got rich and famous off of the backs of some very talented people who happened to be \"the wrong color\" at the time. It is the very true and ugly underbelly of the music business. To each their own. As for me, I\'ve never been much of a radio listener. I\'m a music adventurer, but I do it on my own without the droning of the industry telling me what to consume! LOL! Well, I guess the industry still reaches us if we consume music of any variety, but I severely limit its reach! LOL! Well done on this Soren. 🌹👏
February 12th, 2025 10:31
Music top hits
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of modern music! Well done!
February 12th, 2025 07:31
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of modern music! Well done!
February 12th, 2025 07:31
Music top hits
Poetic Licence said:
I am a vinyl person and always have been, there are very artists around these days that can actually sing live and it sounds like a record, and the art of writing great songs has long gone. Love this poem highlighting the artificial music they churn out today.
February 12th, 2025 06:05
Poetic Licence said:
I am a vinyl person and always have been, there are very artists around these days that can actually sing live and it sounds like a record, and the art of writing great songs has long gone. Love this poem highlighting the artificial music they churn out today.
February 12th, 2025 06:05
Music top hits
arqios said:
Very rarely is a remake better than the original and I for one would pick preferred versions and renditions. Maybe they are that good to pass up redoing? So perhaps not totally a lack of originality. Perhaps 🤔🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:43
arqios said:
Very rarely is a remake better than the original and I for one would pick preferred versions and renditions. Maybe they are that good to pass up redoing? So perhaps not totally a lack of originality. Perhaps 🤔🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 05:43
Music top hits
David Wakeling said:
The music industry is a mess.I still listen to vinyl.It seems more genuine.Thoughtful poem on a modern topic.Well done
February 12th, 2025 05:16
David Wakeling said:
The music industry is a mess.I still listen to vinyl.It seems more genuine.Thoughtful poem on a modern topic.Well done
February 12th, 2025 05:16
Music top hits
Teddy.15 said:
How true, we all have our own taste, I say bring back the vinyl of the 70\'s that\'s mine. A thought-provoking piece. We have some of the finest singers in the world also in Italy. 🌹
February 12th, 2025 04:45
Teddy.15 said:
How true, we all have our own taste, I say bring back the vinyl of the 70\'s that\'s mine. A thought-provoking piece. We have some of the finest singers in the world also in Italy. 🌹
February 12th, 2025 04:45
Carpe diem without conscience
Mutley Ravishes said:
Wanting to exist until the end of time is our secret wish, isn\'t it? It has been demonstrated to us that this can be a living reality - if we are prepared to pay the price of entry!
Great write, Soren.
February 11th, 2025 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
Wanting to exist until the end of time is our secret wish, isn\'t it? It has been demonstrated to us that this can be a living reality - if we are prepared to pay the price of entry!
Great write, Soren.
February 11th, 2025 18:55
Carpe diem without conscience
David Wakeling said:
That is the clear message of youth.A powerful poem about casting caution to the wind.Made me think
February 11th, 2025 15:11
David Wakeling said:
That is the clear message of youth.A powerful poem about casting caution to the wind.Made me think
February 11th, 2025 15:11
Carpe diem without conscience
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is relatable on many levels. Living is a risky business, and yet we often ignore that fact. Nothing is guaranteed. What is really, truly known? And yet, the risk doesn\'t go away by staying stagnant in one place. So, we might as well intentionally risk living life and let the journey be our home. That is what I get out of this...that and the last line, so true. I think we all live like we will never die. It\'s a wonderful poem, and all around profound on this one! ❤️🙏
February 11th, 2025 12:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is relatable on many levels. Living is a risky business, and yet we often ignore that fact. Nothing is guaranteed. What is really, truly known? And yet, the risk doesn\'t go away by staying stagnant in one place. So, we might as well intentionally risk living life and let the journey be our home. That is what I get out of this...that and the last line, so true. I think we all live like we will never die. It\'s a wonderful poem, and all around profound on this one! ❤️🙏
February 11th, 2025 12:06
Carpe diem without conscience
aDarkerMind said:
only one word to write on this piece Soren.....
Superb.
thank you my friend;
February 11th, 2025 11:19
aDarkerMind said:
only one word to write on this piece Soren.....
Superb.
thank you my friend;
February 11th, 2025 11:19
Carpe diem without conscience
Cassie58 said:
My Dad and both my brothers pushed boundaries, were talented in business, reckless in approach at times and two of them died young. They certainly lived for the day. The women in the family were far more cautious. This writing really makes one look inwardly and reflect on their own experiences. I am not a gambler in any way:) maybe I learned lessons. Great read Soren.
February 11th, 2025 10:16
Cassie58 said:
My Dad and both my brothers pushed boundaries, were talented in business, reckless in approach at times and two of them died young. They certainly lived for the day. The women in the family were far more cautious. This writing really makes one look inwardly and reflect on their own experiences. I am not a gambler in any way:) maybe I learned lessons. Great read Soren.
February 11th, 2025 10:16
Carpe diem without conscience
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this read, take the gamble or play safe, or always a difficult question, but no progress has ever been made without taking a chance, lovely writing
February 11th, 2025 08:37
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this read, take the gamble or play safe, or always a difficult question, but no progress has ever been made without taking a chance, lovely writing
February 11th, 2025 08:37
Carpe diem without conscience
arqios said:
Our freedom needs to be exercised and stood up for. No one ever pioneered nor thrived sitting down. A thesis well taken in this poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
Our freedom needs to be exercised and stood up for. No one ever pioneered nor thrived sitting down. A thesis well taken in this poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:27
Carpe diem without conscience
Teddy.15 said:
Living for today, as much as we may wish too, there hopefully will be a tomorrow so being cautious of what we do is a must some don\'t have that and live on the edge always, I\'ve lived both, I took a massive gamble with nothing to lose and I gained, yet not always the case. A brilliant peice of poetry dearest sorrenbarret that will.make many reflect on your lines. 🌹 Wonderful title too. 🌹
February 11th, 2025 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Living for today, as much as we may wish too, there hopefully will be a tomorrow so being cautious of what we do is a must some don\'t have that and live on the edge always, I\'ve lived both, I took a massive gamble with nothing to lose and I gained, yet not always the case. A brilliant peice of poetry dearest sorrenbarret that will.make many reflect on your lines. 🌹 Wonderful title too. 🌹
February 11th, 2025 03:56
Tickles from the past
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:23
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