Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Words of smoke
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

July 10th, 2024 14:15

Words of smoke
Teddy.15 said:

A fight between two, even when the heart pounds sadness and disappointment at the end of the day the air is cleared. Truly beautiful and speaks loud and clear to me. 🌹

July 10th, 2024 08:34

Words of smoke
orchidee said:

Well, I want to breathe in fresh air, not 2781\'s air! lol.
KP is full of hot air, not thin air. lol.

July 10th, 2024 07:35

Words of smoke
2781 said:

Breath in the good shit
Breath out the bullshit! X

July 10th, 2024 06:31

Twilight Man
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 10th, 2024 00:18

Twilight Man
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, dear sorrenbarret beautiful. 🌹 I absolutely love your last stanza

July 9th, 2024 10:43

Twilight Man
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 9th, 2024 10:23

Leaves
2781 said:

Bringing forth his fruit in his season...

July 8th, 2024 09:24

Leaves
Goldfinch60 said:

Such fine true words soren.

Andy

July 8th, 2024 01:21

Leaves
Teddy.15 said:

Picture perfect, the world is filled with different colour and shape and size leaves, a metaphor stunning on my eyes. 🌹

July 7th, 2024 16:42

Leaves
Doggerel Dave said:

Leaves = poems....\'some dead, some alive\' says it all . Thanks Soren.

July 7th, 2024 16:28

Leaves
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

July 7th, 2024 16:08

Leaves
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks so much Orchi it\'s appreciated

July 7th, 2024 15:18

Leaves
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 7th, 2024 13:32

Dark things
Goldfinch60 said:

Silence is so important in life soren.

Andy

July 6th, 2024 01:39

Dark things
Teddy.15 said:

Deliciously dark with a dream like sense. 🌹

July 5th, 2024 16:58

Dark things
Parisab said:

That’s a stunning description of a night terror-great method with the dream analysis…

July 5th, 2024 10:09

Dark things
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks Orchi.

July 5th, 2024 09:08

Dark things
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 5th, 2024 09:05

Caviar
Goldfinch60 said:

The bad things in the world can be overcome in time soren.

Andy

July 5th, 2024 01:24

Caviar
Parisab said:

That’s what I feel like….

July 4th, 2024 16:30

Caviar
Teddy.15 said:

Well that is exactly how I would describe caviar. I\'m curious to know did you mean to write champagne the way you did? I\'m just being curious here. 🤣 🌹 Brilliant as ever

July 4th, 2024 12:16

Caviar
Thomas W Case said:

wow. Powerful stuff. Lots of emotion.

July 4th, 2024 11:46

Caviar
orchidee said:

A bad hair day?! lol.

July 4th, 2024 08:30

Caviar
Manslick said:

hell no. Sounds like a call to chaos.

July 4th, 2024 07:34

Human?
Goldfinch60 said:

Dogs can be true friends soren.

Andy

July 4th, 2024 01:15

Human?
Doggerel Dave said:

This seems to me to be less a portrait of a dog than an oblique critique with respect to human frailty, Soren. True?

July 3rd, 2024 22:00

Human?
orchidee said:

A quiz now - ooh! Since when was [insert name of person who is not human - or only just] human?! lol.
My answer is KP. heehee.

July 3rd, 2024 11:12

Human?
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, I thought this was a poem about me! lol 🤣

July 3rd, 2024 10:31

Drunken lullabies
Doggerel Dave said:

Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem highlighting \'home a wrecker\' and the correct point in comments re self motivation cover all I wanted to contribute.
Poem shot straight and true.

July 2nd, 2024 18:28



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