Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Poseidon\'s bones
Thad Wilk said:
My Granddad had a
collection of different
styles of pipes he used
to own!
I wonder if any were
made of, chip of sea bone!¿¿
Awesome read, brought
back some mem\'ries. 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 16:13
Thad Wilk said:
My Granddad had a
collection of different
styles of pipes he used
to own!
I wonder if any were
made of, chip of sea bone!¿¿
Awesome read, brought
back some mem\'ries. 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 16:13
Poseidon\'s bones
Cassie58 said:
This poem is full of intrigue. It is beautifully penned Soren, but the meaning eluded me. I had to scroll to find out further. I am thankful for learning something new today. Delightful reading.
December 16th, 2024 12:53
Cassie58 said:
This poem is full of intrigue. It is beautifully penned Soren, but the meaning eluded me. I had to scroll to find out further. I am thankful for learning something new today. Delightful reading.
December 16th, 2024 12:53
Poseidon\'s bones
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this poem reminded me of an elderly couple i used to help, the old fella used to smoke these beautifully carved pipes, said there was nothing better. The wife said at his funeral Smoking might have killed him, but the pipes paid for the funeral, a lovely poem
December 16th, 2024 12:09
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this poem reminded me of an elderly couple i used to help, the old fella used to smoke these beautifully carved pipes, said there was nothing better. The wife said at his funeral Smoking might have killed him, but the pipes paid for the funeral, a lovely poem
December 16th, 2024 12:09
Poseidon\'s bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, bravo...it is not often one sends me down a 🐇 hole of research, as I am a pretty well researched person. 🤣 That said, I have to confess I did have to look up meerschaum and, wow! I pretty much could figure out it was a sort of sea foam or something of that nature; however, when you got to smoking it...I knew I had to look it up. In this poem I see themes of transformation (soft to hard, color changes, etc.), versatility (represented by meerschaum\'s multiple uses)...and the interplay between natural materials and human culture and ingenuity (storing pipes in gourds...and using meerschaum as an incense burner). Anyway, multiple layers to this wonderful poem, my dear friend! 🌹👏
December 16th, 2024 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, bravo...it is not often one sends me down a 🐇 hole of research, as I am a pretty well researched person. 🤣 That said, I have to confess I did have to look up meerschaum and, wow! I pretty much could figure out it was a sort of sea foam or something of that nature; however, when you got to smoking it...I knew I had to look it up. In this poem I see themes of transformation (soft to hard, color changes, etc.), versatility (represented by meerschaum\'s multiple uses)...and the interplay between natural materials and human culture and ingenuity (storing pipes in gourds...and using meerschaum as an incense burner). Anyway, multiple layers to this wonderful poem, my dear friend! 🌹👏
December 16th, 2024 09:44
Poseidon\'s bones
Doggerel Dave said:
You are giving Dr Google a run for his money up there, Soren.
December 16th, 2024 06:28
Doggerel Dave said:
You are giving Dr Google a run for his money up there, Soren.
December 16th, 2024 06:28
Poseidon\'s bones
David Wakeling said:
Fascinating story about Meerchaum. I got a feeling I actually learned something for the first time in years.Well done
December 16th, 2024 06:11
David Wakeling said:
Fascinating story about Meerchaum. I got a feeling I actually learned something for the first time in years.Well done
December 16th, 2024 06:11
Poseidon\'s bones
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and evocative poem. It also serves as a reminder of the intricate beauty found in the materials that surround us and the transformative power of human creativity.
December 16th, 2024 06:03
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and evocative poem. It also serves as a reminder of the intricate beauty found in the materials that surround us and the transformative power of human creativity.
December 16th, 2024 06:03
Poseidon\'s bones
Teddy.15 said:
So very poetic and I\'m going to ask if may be so bold to let me in as I\'m not sparky on this one! 🤣
December 16th, 2024 05:15
Teddy.15 said:
So very poetic and I\'m going to ask if may be so bold to let me in as I\'m not sparky on this one! 🤣
December 16th, 2024 05:15
Poseidon\'s bones
Neville said:
Holy smoke .. that\'s far from elementary my dear sb .. wot would Moriarty think of thee .. I still have my fathers old un and occasionally sniff on it .. 😎👍
December 16th, 2024 04:58
Neville said:
Holy smoke .. that\'s far from elementary my dear sb .. wot would Moriarty think of thee .. I still have my fathers old un and occasionally sniff on it .. 😎👍
December 16th, 2024 04:58
How
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always come out of the shadows into the glory of the light soren.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always come out of the shadows into the glory of the light soren.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:48
How
NinjaGirl said:
The kicker is both are true, but you choose what to see
December 15th, 2024 20:08
NinjaGirl said:
The kicker is both are true, but you choose what to see
December 15th, 2024 20:08
How
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
What can I say
except may you have
many a sunny day, 😀🌄
Great read my friend!!
Rock on! Loved it! 😍🎵🎶🎶🎶
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:02
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
What can I say
except may you have
many a sunny day, 😀🌄
Great read my friend!!
Rock on! Loved it! 😍🎵🎶🎶🎶
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:02
How
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful contradictions. More than one poem here. Fantastic work Soren. Much enjoyed.
December 15th, 2024 13:40
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful contradictions. More than one poem here. Fantastic work Soren. Much enjoyed.
December 15th, 2024 13:40
How
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the sense of duality, imperfections in perfection. Not sure if I got it right. Lovely poem!
December 15th, 2024 09:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the sense of duality, imperfections in perfection. Not sure if I got it right. Lovely poem!
December 15th, 2024 09:39
How
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is both one poem full of juxtaposition, and two separate poems woven into one. I absolutely love this piece. Each poem tells something opposite from the other...and together. 🤯 Well done, my friend. An easy fave for sure. 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is both one poem full of juxtaposition, and two separate poems woven into one. I absolutely love this piece. Each poem tells something opposite from the other...and together. 🤯 Well done, my friend. An easy fave for sure. 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:50
How
Neville said:
Impressively crafted and likewise captivating .. Loved from the off but then .. not sure which visit exactly, maybe my third, it hit me & I was near blinded by their conjoint beauty .. @ least💯/💯in my book & truly .. Neville 👍😎👍
December 15th, 2024 05:22
Neville said:
Impressively crafted and likewise captivating .. Loved from the off but then .. not sure which visit exactly, maybe my third, it hit me & I was near blinded by their conjoint beauty .. @ least💯/💯in my book & truly .. Neville 👍😎👍
December 15th, 2024 05:22
How
Teddy.15 said:
Two glorious poems woven in, how very clever 🌹 wonderful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 15th, 2024 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Two glorious poems woven in, how very clever 🌹 wonderful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 15th, 2024 04:51
How
Caring dove said:
Interesting and engaging writing
I liked reading this
December 15th, 2024 03:37
Caring dove said:
Interesting and engaging writing
I liked reading this
December 15th, 2024 03:37
Peace on earth, good will
Doggerel Dave said:
Tree as a symbol, a personification perhaps, of all that many see as a vision and hope for, seems pretty valid Soren. The irony in the last line is not lost on me.
Thanks.
December 14th, 2024 22:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Tree as a symbol, a personification perhaps, of all that many see as a vision and hope for, seems pretty valid Soren. The irony in the last line is not lost on me.
Thanks.
December 14th, 2024 22:42
Fisherman\'s song
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and fisherman\'s song! 🐠🐟
Eloquently penned my friend!
Made me wanna sing along! 🎵 🎶 🎶
Thanks for sharing, loved it! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:44
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and fisherman\'s song! 🐠🐟
Eloquently penned my friend!
Made me wanna sing along! 🎵 🎶 🎶
Thanks for sharing, loved it! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:44
Peace on earth, good will
arqios said:
Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the mirror that faces us.... straight in the eye. Sometimes I know we are all of us to blame.
December 14th, 2024 18:34
arqios said:
Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the mirror that faces us.... straight in the eye. Sometimes I know we are all of us to blame.
December 14th, 2024 18:34
Fisherman\'s song
David Wakeling said:
So many vivid images here. So well constructed. A hint of Jesus as well
December 14th, 2024 15:06
David Wakeling said:
So many vivid images here. So well constructed. A hint of Jesus as well
December 14th, 2024 15:06
Fisherman\'s song
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Fisherman\'s song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. 🌹👏 Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. 🌹👏 Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
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