Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Three-Fourths Time
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant interpretation
Distilling the essence of this scene
while keeping to a rhythmic flow
of entwined heart\'s
embraced, in the dance of life
counting, to get that timing right
to insure they\'re forever, in-step
with each other\'s desires...
(this song still get me as well)
thank you oh wise Poet
(I read and learn)
September 15th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant interpretation
Distilling the essence of this scene
while keeping to a rhythmic flow
of entwined heart\'s
embraced, in the dance of life
counting, to get that timing right
to insure they\'re forever, in-step
with each other\'s desires...
(this song still get me as well)
thank you oh wise Poet
(I read and learn)
September 15th, 2023 04:51
Beyond Love
Teddy.15 said:
challenge completed this is a masterpiece
I cannot choose a favourite part each line has its beauty and elegance and I could never argue the depth of a woman\'s love as I am one. Superb beauty throughout 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:51
Teddy.15 said:
challenge completed this is a masterpiece
I cannot choose a favourite part each line has its beauty and elegance and I could never argue the depth of a woman\'s love as I am one. Superb beauty throughout 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:51
Beyond Love
Bella Shepard said:
Parisab has said it perfectly, can\'t tamper with that. If you plumb the depths of a woman\'s love, it is as deep as the sea, and as expansive as the heavens. Thank you for this beautiful poem!
September 14th, 2023 14:41
Bella Shepard said:
Parisab has said it perfectly, can\'t tamper with that. If you plumb the depths of a woman\'s love, it is as deep as the sea, and as expansive as the heavens. Thank you for this beautiful poem!
September 14th, 2023 14:41
Beyond Love
Parisab said:
Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet you there were many more who loved their work as a mother would their child but gained no traction or support for their art to be seen and be compensated-I bet that most of the ‘muses’ were probably artists and contributed to the ‘celebrated (mostly male) artists’ work-thanks for the write
September 14th, 2023 14:07
Parisab said:
Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet you there were many more who loved their work as a mother would their child but gained no traction or support for their art to be seen and be compensated-I bet that most of the ‘muses’ were probably artists and contributed to the ‘celebrated (mostly male) artists’ work-thanks for the write
September 14th, 2023 14:07
Three-Fourths Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder like me - and non the worse for that, Soren. Tripped through it lightly.
September 12th, 2023 19:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder like me - and non the worse for that, Soren. Tripped through it lightly.
September 12th, 2023 19:07
Three-Fourths Time
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, kudos and it did in fact feel just like a waltz, and I\'d come back any day for a dance like this. 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:43
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, kudos and it did in fact feel just like a waltz, and I\'d come back any day for a dance like this. 💖
September 12th, 2023 10:43
All men
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, now
we must do one for those sisters
that were being marginalised
while these geniuses were thriving,
contrasted, side by side
Bronte\'s, Austen, Woolf, George Eliot, Toni Morrison, Maya, Harper Lee, Louisa Alcott
etc
September 11th, 2023 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, now
we must do one for those sisters
that were being marginalised
while these geniuses were thriving,
contrasted, side by side
Bronte\'s, Austen, Woolf, George Eliot, Toni Morrison, Maya, Harper Lee, Louisa Alcott
etc
September 11th, 2023 02:35
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
L. B. Mek said:
the irony
in assuming, \'some\'
need policy to help them achieve
you\'re inadvertently stating
they can\'t do it otherwise
so instead of creating a society
with equal playing fields
\'they\'
rather stay on their inherited hills
look down and offer a rope
to those they deem lesser
and think of themselves as heroes
...
vanity, I name thee charity...
September 11th, 2023 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
the irony
in assuming, \'some\'
need policy to help them achieve
you\'re inadvertently stating
they can\'t do it otherwise
so instead of creating a society
with equal playing fields
\'they\'
rather stay on their inherited hills
look down and offer a rope
to those they deem lesser
and think of themselves as heroes
...
vanity, I name thee charity...
September 11th, 2023 02:27
All men
Bobby O said:
This is really great. Not as critique but as proof of inspiration from your phrase and form. The power on that page could also fit in a cause and effect format, extracting and displaying the tangible quality of each reference.
Ie; …, lived in Woods of Thoreau learned natures beauty and absorbed some of its wonder and helped me grow ..,
That’s corny but you get the point. Tiny bits of impactful info validates and separates with evidence of greatness
September 10th, 2023 22:51
Bobby O said:
This is really great. Not as critique but as proof of inspiration from your phrase and form. The power on that page could also fit in a cause and effect format, extracting and displaying the tangible quality of each reference.
Ie; …, lived in Woods of Thoreau learned natures beauty and absorbed some of its wonder and helped me grow ..,
That’s corny but you get the point. Tiny bits of impactful info validates and separates with evidence of greatness
September 10th, 2023 22:51
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are all unique and have our own path to walk in our lives.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are all unique and have our own path to walk in our lives.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:00
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Bella Shepard said:
Point of view well taken, and very well expressed. How to achieve equality that suits everyone will always be a struggle.
September 9th, 2023 14:35
Bella Shepard said:
Point of view well taken, and very well expressed. How to achieve equality that suits everyone will always be a struggle.
September 9th, 2023 14:35
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a hard one to respond to Soren. Are you sure that equal opportunity exists? If not, how would you achieve it?
Neat poem executed with your customary skill, but I’m not sure the argument addresses the problem..
September 9th, 2023 07:44
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a hard one to respond to Soren. Are you sure that equal opportunity exists? If not, how would you achieve it?
Neat poem executed with your customary skill, but I’m not sure the argument addresses the problem..
September 9th, 2023 07:44
Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no
Teddy.15 said:
I most enjoy being unique, as you make such a brilliant point we are all very different and it\'s better to be, your ebola stew made me chuckle, so to an excellent point, your last stanza so very powerful and thought provoking as a mother it sparked fear. Excellent read excellent subject. 💖
September 9th, 2023 07:15
Teddy.15 said:
I most enjoy being unique, as you make such a brilliant point we are all very different and it\'s better to be, your ebola stew made me chuckle, so to an excellent point, your last stanza so very powerful and thought provoking as a mother it sparked fear. Excellent read excellent subject. 💖
September 9th, 2023 07:15
Always
Pop64 said:
as well without the writer, there would be no reader, no viewer, no interpreter. This, however, needs no interpretation as it is quite clear in its imagery with the truth of the ying and yang. Nicely penned!
September 8th, 2023 07:22
Pop64 said:
as well without the writer, there would be no reader, no viewer, no interpreter. This, however, needs no interpretation as it is quite clear in its imagery with the truth of the ying and yang. Nicely penned!
September 8th, 2023 07:22
Abject terror
L. B. Mek said:
rich in iconic imagery
reads like a serenade
to the scenic passages
in our poetic realities..
\'Piercing crystal slivers of frigid fear, puncture a barren plain of sterile white\'
we truth scribblers
ink, with emotionality\'s
shaky fingers
September 8th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
rich in iconic imagery
reads like a serenade
to the scenic passages
in our poetic realities..
\'Piercing crystal slivers of frigid fear, puncture a barren plain of sterile white\'
we truth scribblers
ink, with emotionality\'s
shaky fingers
September 8th, 2023 03:40
Blind eye
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\' it would appear a depression, with no threat of detection\'
stealth as its key threat
this thing that hunts our moments of solitary peace
wounds us anew with forgotten emotions n regrets
\'In the crash of the sea, paranoia is born all along its course\'
do we hide or surrender and accept that inevitable demise
how to conquer a fear, hidden within our heartbeats
\'until is found a hope that does arise
the belief of champions,\'
and how do we triumph
by learning, champions are made not born
curated in that furnace of incessant strife
first learning, how to survive
how to appreciate
those small mercies in our lives..
September 8th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\' it would appear a depression, with no threat of detection\'
stealth as its key threat
this thing that hunts our moments of solitary peace
wounds us anew with forgotten emotions n regrets
\'In the crash of the sea, paranoia is born all along its course\'
do we hide or surrender and accept that inevitable demise
how to conquer a fear, hidden within our heartbeats
\'until is found a hope that does arise
the belief of champions,\'
and how do we triumph
by learning, champions are made not born
curated in that furnace of incessant strife
first learning, how to survive
how to appreciate
those small mercies in our lives..
September 8th, 2023 03:36
Musical smoke
L. B. Mek said:
a scented cigarette refrain
vivid ashes of a life
cherished and inked poetic
(simply,
a most beautiful
read..)
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
a scented cigarette refrain
vivid ashes of a life
cherished and inked poetic
(simply,
a most beautiful
read..)
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 03:27
Abject terror
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry my friend didn\'t mean to startle just entertain. Thanks so much for the read Bella.
September 7th, 2023 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry my friend didn\'t mean to startle just entertain. Thanks so much for the read Bella.
September 7th, 2023 15:18
Abject terror
orchidee said:
Oh no, you pinched a wedding speech that someone read out for KP and me! lol.
September 7th, 2023 13:20
orchidee said:
Oh no, you pinched a wedding speech that someone read out for KP and me! lol.
September 7th, 2023 13:20
Abject terror
Bella Shepard said:
You had me in Abject terror all the way through. Descriptive words that penetrate the psyche, I may sleep with the light on tonight, and periodically look under the bed. You are a force to be reckoned with my friend. Powerful stuff here!
September 7th, 2023 13:06
Bella Shepard said:
You had me in Abject terror all the way through. Descriptive words that penetrate the psyche, I may sleep with the light on tonight, and periodically look under the bed. You are a force to be reckoned with my friend. Powerful stuff here!
September 7th, 2023 13:06
Blind eye
Teddy.15 said:
We all at sometime or other have a cloud or two over us, this is beautiful. Such depth of meaning and imagery. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:13
Teddy.15 said:
We all at sometime or other have a cloud or two over us, this is beautiful. Such depth of meaning and imagery. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:13
Musical smoke
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have woven music and smoke into one. The words come to life and the feel of the poem is real. I can hear it, smell it, taste it. Beautiful!
September 4th, 2023 12:01
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have woven music and smoke into one. The words come to life and the feel of the poem is real. I can hear it, smell it, taste it. Beautiful!
September 4th, 2023 12:01
Musical smoke
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Orchi appreciate the effort to put out the flame but it has already burned out.
September 4th, 2023 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Orchi appreciate the effort to put out the flame but it has already burned out.
September 4th, 2023 11:03
Musical smoke
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I\'m on me way with a water syphon to put out your smoking guitar! lol.
September 4th, 2023 09:08
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I\'m on me way with a water syphon to put out your smoking guitar! lol.
September 4th, 2023 09:08
Nothing is everything
Doggerel Dave said:
This is now....
Thanks for defining it so clearly, Soren.
September 4th, 2023 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
This is now....
Thanks for defining it so clearly, Soren.
September 4th, 2023 04:48
Nothing is everything
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
\'Here significance has no point
location is meaningless
Existence and nonexistence are joint\'
what refined lines
what depth of wisdom you showcase
what poetic delight
(I bow to your superior talent, wise Poet)
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
\'Here significance has no point
location is meaningless
Existence and nonexistence are joint\'
what refined lines
what depth of wisdom you showcase
what poetic delight
(I bow to your superior talent, wise Poet)
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 04:33
Nothing is everything
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful starting with your title you have delved into the behind the scene which isn\'t always easy to do. Beautiful. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 03:51
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful starting with your title you have delved into the behind the scene which isn\'t always easy to do. Beautiful. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 03:51
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