Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Tree of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within us soren and needs to be felt.
Andy
January 4th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within us soren and needs to be felt.
Andy
January 4th, 2025 02:24
Tree of life
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem
my friend!! 👍🌲
Great word choices, rhyme
flow and blend!!
Last two lines rocked it!
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:37
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem
my friend!! 👍🌲
Great word choices, rhyme
flow and blend!!
Last two lines rocked it!
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:37
Tree of life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery and metaphor on the cycle of life, the passage of time, the endurance of trials (the twisted knots), and yet what stands is a tree providing shelter for others. So beautiful! Liked and faved! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery and metaphor on the cycle of life, the passage of time, the endurance of trials (the twisted knots), and yet what stands is a tree providing shelter for others. So beautiful! Liked and faved! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 13:17
Tree of life
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery is outstanding, the sentiment of life captured in the moment speaks to me. Embrace the beauty while it is there before you, for it is transient. This is a poem to wrap yourself in.
January 3rd, 2025 10:14
Bella Shepard said:
The imagery is outstanding, the sentiment of life captured in the moment speaks to me. Embrace the beauty while it is there before you, for it is transient. This is a poem to wrap yourself in.
January 3rd, 2025 10:14
Fallen leaves
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Literally the poem kicks like a mule on our sensibility. The line \"No one grieves over fallen leaves\" sums it all. Powerful work which questions our morality. Thoroughly enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 09:55
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Literally the poem kicks like a mule on our sensibility. The line \"No one grieves over fallen leaves\" sums it all. Powerful work which questions our morality. Thoroughly enjoyed the read
January 3rd, 2025 09:55
Tree of life
arqios said:
This is such a powerful meditation on the duality of beauty and strength. It can point readers to look beyond superficial appearances and appreciate the enduring qualities that define true worth. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece!
January 3rd, 2025 07:37
arqios said:
This is such a powerful meditation on the duality of beauty and strength. It can point readers to look beyond superficial appearances and appreciate the enduring qualities that define true worth. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece!
January 3rd, 2025 07:37
Fallen leaves
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on many levels. For some reason, this had the feel of Bob Dylan to it. Could imagine these as song lyrics. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 06:12
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on many levels. For some reason, this had the feel of Bob Dylan to it. Could imagine these as song lyrics. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 06:12
Tree of life
Poetic Licence said:
I see the slow decay and passing of the beauty of life, then to be slowly reborn. Beautifully written piece of work which i really enjoyed reading.
January 3rd, 2025 05:51
Poetic Licence said:
I see the slow decay and passing of the beauty of life, then to be slowly reborn. Beautifully written piece of work which i really enjoyed reading.
January 3rd, 2025 05:51
Tree of life
Mutley Ravishes said:
This rhyme
Brought to mind
Tolkien.
Beautifully woven words, Soren
January 3rd, 2025 05:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
This rhyme
Brought to mind
Tolkien.
Beautifully woven words, Soren
January 3rd, 2025 05:17
Tree of life
Teddy.15 said:
I see humanity in this with an outstanding metaphor I see protection pride knowledge and wisdom. That\'s just what I see, all entwined into some elegant beautiful poetry. 🌹
January 3rd, 2025 03:54
Teddy.15 said:
I see humanity in this with an outstanding metaphor I see protection pride knowledge and wisdom. That\'s just what I see, all entwined into some elegant beautiful poetry. 🌹
January 3rd, 2025 03:54
Fallen leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, taking ones own life is so heartfelt for others left wondering why.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, taking ones own life is so heartfelt for others left wondering why.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:30
Fallen leaves
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem
on the cycle of life. 🙏
Great imagery,
love the title \'Fallen Leaves\'
outstanding use of metaphor!👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 2nd, 2025 22:53
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem
on the cycle of life. 🙏
Great imagery,
love the title \'Fallen Leaves\'
outstanding use of metaphor!👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 2nd, 2025 22:53
New gods
2781 said:
I am the Lord, and there is none else, there is no God besides me: I girded thee, though thou hast not known me:
January 2nd, 2025 20:17
2781 said:
I am the Lord, and there is none else, there is no God besides me: I girded thee, though thou hast not known me:
January 2nd, 2025 20:17
Shadows
NinjaGirl said:
I do love shadows, seems to be the ever-evolving existence and then end to humanity. the humans don\'t die at night like the shadows do, but in a day or two, it seems the humanity does
January 2nd, 2025 17:50
NinjaGirl said:
I do love shadows, seems to be the ever-evolving existence and then end to humanity. the humans don\'t die at night like the shadows do, but in a day or two, it seems the humanity does
January 2nd, 2025 17:50
Bugged out
NinjaGirl said:
as much as I hate insects, this poem makes their life sound sad, and tragically beautiful--a nod to traditional poetry that i enjoy!
January 2nd, 2025 17:47
NinjaGirl said:
as much as I hate insects, this poem makes their life sound sad, and tragically beautiful--a nod to traditional poetry that i enjoy!
January 2nd, 2025 17:47
Fallen leaves
NinjaGirl said:
very tragic, another one gone...death holds the victim in its arms but breaks the heart of friends and family
January 2nd, 2025 17:45
NinjaGirl said:
very tragic, another one gone...death holds the victim in its arms but breaks the heart of friends and family
January 2nd, 2025 17:45
Hole
NinjaGirl said:
Love seems to be a battle which ages us, suddenly you can\'t make sense of their texts or calls, no better than a stone tablet and chalk
January 2nd, 2025 17:40
NinjaGirl said:
Love seems to be a battle which ages us, suddenly you can\'t make sense of their texts or calls, no better than a stone tablet and chalk
January 2nd, 2025 17:40
Fallen leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem speaks of life\'s incessant march onward (to what exactl?) as we remain haunted by the sins of our past as well as the ones yet to be perpetrated. In this poem, I read of a lynching or an execution of a run away slave...but that is, for me, while time and people may have forgotten that event long ago, while no body was found, and no tracks left behind...the breeze knows of it, the ghosts of the birds flying overhead know of it. And, truthfully, those collective skeletons, they always come out eventually...often times through history repeating itself. So, in this I see that cycle. I could be way off here with my interpretation, but that is how it I am reading it right now. Regardless, well done, my Soren! 🌹👏
January 2nd, 2025 15:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem speaks of life\'s incessant march onward (to what exactl?) as we remain haunted by the sins of our past as well as the ones yet to be perpetrated. In this poem, I read of a lynching or an execution of a run away slave...but that is, for me, while time and people may have forgotten that event long ago, while no body was found, and no tracks left behind...the breeze knows of it, the ghosts of the birds flying overhead know of it. And, truthfully, those collective skeletons, they always come out eventually...often times through history repeating itself. So, in this I see that cycle. I could be way off here with my interpretation, but that is how it I am reading it right now. Regardless, well done, my Soren! 🌹👏
January 2nd, 2025 15:14
Fallen leaves
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read about the cycle of life and the contrasts of pain and suffering that go with it a long the way, enjoyed the read
January 2nd, 2025 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read about the cycle of life and the contrasts of pain and suffering that go with it a long the way, enjoyed the read
January 2nd, 2025 09:25
Fallen leaves
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
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