Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Thoughts of a narcissist
GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
Thoughts of a narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
Thoughts of a narcissist
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they canβt think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they canβt think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
In and outside
Rozina said:
Excellent metaphor. Some couples do end up looking like each other, finish each other\'s sentences........
April 20th, 2022 17:50
Rozina said:
Excellent metaphor. Some couples do end up looking like each other, finish each other\'s sentences........
April 20th, 2022 17:50
In and outside
dusk arising said:
I have decided to go it alone but so as not to appear unusual i have now grown to the size of two to keep up appearances.
P.S. it\'s not working for me.
April 20th, 2022 04:44
dusk arising said:
I have decided to go it alone but so as not to appear unusual i have now grown to the size of two to keep up appearances.
P.S. it\'s not working for me.
April 20th, 2022 04:44
Ups and downs
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading these lines. The English language is so interesting and often perplexing!
April 19th, 2022 17:53
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading these lines. The English language is so interesting and often perplexing!
April 19th, 2022 17:53
Ups and downs
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.
April 19th, 2022 11:56
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.
April 19th, 2022 11:56
Ups and downs
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Ups and downs
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Psychotic world
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
Psychotic world
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet π
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet π
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Psychotic world
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Psychotic world
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
Psychotic world
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
All or nothing
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
All or nothing
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
Moment to moment
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Two sides of a coin
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
All things are possible
Bella Shepard said:
The contemplation here for the reader is incredible. It touches on the very nature of reality, and how I think we can never really understand it. Does it even exist, what is time? I have my homework for the afternoon, and probably into tomorrow. Thank you for this wonderful metaphysical ride, I love it!
April 14th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
The contemplation here for the reader is incredible. It touches on the very nature of reality, and how I think we can never really understand it. Does it even exist, what is time? I have my homework for the afternoon, and probably into tomorrow. Thank you for this wonderful metaphysical ride, I love it!
April 14th, 2022 13:57
All things are possible
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you touch on the metaphysical and philosophical with your poetry. I do believe we\'re all connected through one long and ethereal link. Can\'t wait to see you on the flipside!
April 14th, 2022 08:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how you touch on the metaphysical and philosophical with your poetry. I do believe we\'re all connected through one long and ethereal link. Can\'t wait to see you on the flipside!
April 14th, 2022 08:17
Pick my pocket
Bella Shepard said:
I think my head just exploded; yep, there it is all over the keyboard. You have a way of hitting the proverbial nail on the head, really hard. I can now stop muttering all those things to myself, and sit down peacefully, enjoy my book and my cup of tea. Loved it!!!
April 13th, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
I think my head just exploded; yep, there it is all over the keyboard. You have a way of hitting the proverbial nail on the head, really hard. I can now stop muttering all those things to myself, and sit down peacefully, enjoy my book and my cup of tea. Loved it!!!
April 13th, 2022 11:44
Pick my pocket
Christina8 said:
Wow what an eye opener of a poem sorenbarrett! I thought I paid a lot of taxes, but then you have to think what are they for? Great job!!
April 13th, 2022 09:26
Christina8 said:
Wow what an eye opener of a poem sorenbarrett! I thought I paid a lot of taxes, but then you have to think what are they for? Great job!!
April 13th, 2022 09:26
Intelligence
Pearcemelville ε ζ said:
the arrogant human
the arrogance of
Humanity
π
I like how you joined
the last two rhymes into
one sentence and what i
thread would be effective
linguistically and visually
is to remove the empty line
and place it above allowing
the final sentence to stand alone
The Verdict
April 12th, 2022 14:28
Pearcemelville ε ζ said:
the arrogant human
the arrogance of
Humanity
π
I like how you joined
the last two rhymes into
one sentence and what i
thread would be effective
linguistically and visually
is to remove the empty line
and place it above allowing
the final sentence to stand alone
The Verdict
April 12th, 2022 14:28
Intelligence
dusk arising said:
Of course mankind is superior, mankind can kill more species than any other and just by the magic of pushing a button... some accolade huh?
April 12th, 2022 07:58
dusk arising said:
Of course mankind is superior, mankind can kill more species than any other and just by the magic of pushing a button... some accolade huh?
April 12th, 2022 07:58
Pieces
Rocky Lagou said:
I literally love the line: \"It\'s noon with a broken compass.\" I sense that broken compass stands for the path we all take that can get hazy along the way. We\'re all searching for an elusive paradise. This is a great reflection.
April 11th, 2022 09:06
Rocky Lagou said:
I literally love the line: \"It\'s noon with a broken compass.\" I sense that broken compass stands for the path we all take that can get hazy along the way. We\'re all searching for an elusive paradise. This is a great reflection.
April 11th, 2022 09:06
Pieces
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
distilled lines of insightful, truth
as a cascading waterfall
of seamless, poetry
just a wonderfully
thought provoking, reading experience
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
distilled lines of insightful, truth
as a cascading waterfall
of seamless, poetry
just a wonderfully
thought provoking, reading experience
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 06:47
Pieces
dusk arising said:
Its been a strange sort of a day really, what is a tortoise shell doing on my cat? Your post is a real head scratcher which is refreshing in these horribly serious days.
April 11th, 2022 06:33
dusk arising said:
Its been a strange sort of a day really, what is a tortoise shell doing on my cat? Your post is a real head scratcher which is refreshing in these horribly serious days.
April 11th, 2022 06:33
Longing
Bella Shepard said:
Long ago memories, when enough time has passed it\'s as if they were a dream. The older you get, the sweeter they are. Thank you for reminding me.
April 10th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
Long ago memories, when enough time has passed it\'s as if they were a dream. The older you get, the sweeter they are. Thank you for reminding me.
April 10th, 2022 12:36
Longing
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those entertaining days of time gone by and the lessons we like to kid ourselves we\'ve learned. Wisdom is a comfort blanket when just as you say beneath its warm smugness we want the thrill of the ride \"just one more time\"
April 10th, 2022 11:28
dusk arising said:
Ah yes those entertaining days of time gone by and the lessons we like to kid ourselves we\'ve learned. Wisdom is a comfort blanket when just as you say beneath its warm smugness we want the thrill of the ride \"just one more time\"
April 10th, 2022 11:28
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