Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fallen leaves
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
Fallen leaves
rin said:
It looks like it\'s peaceful, but it\'s difficult to carry on.
Strange things still happen.
There\'s one thing I don\'t understand. I would appreciate it if you could tell me why you chose the title \"Fallen Leaves.\"
January 2nd, 2025 05:32
rin said:
It looks like it\'s peaceful, but it\'s difficult to carry on.
Strange things still happen.
There\'s one thing I don\'t understand. I would appreciate it if you could tell me why you chose the title \"Fallen Leaves.\"
January 2nd, 2025 05:32
Fallen leaves
Teddy.15 said:
The very importance of life, very apt for today. Superbly powerful. 🌹
January 2nd, 2025 05:31
Teddy.15 said:
The very importance of life, very apt for today. Superbly powerful. 🌹
January 2nd, 2025 05:31
Bugged out
Cassie58 said:
I hate to see the death of any living thing. I would pause and reflect on its living, insect or not. Some would label me nuts 😂
Happy new year Soren.
January 1st, 2025 15:30
Cassie58 said:
I hate to see the death of any living thing. I would pause and reflect on its living, insect or not. Some would label me nuts 😂
Happy new year Soren.
January 1st, 2025 15:30
New gods
David Wakeling said:
This is quite good.It captures the changing nature of Mythology.Excellent rhyme as well
January 1st, 2025 15:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite good.It captures the changing nature of Mythology.Excellent rhyme as well
January 1st, 2025 15:25
New gods
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, we grapple with belief systems all our lives, if we are thinking beings. If we are not, we follow the herd in relative bliss which is far easier. Your poem speaks tof thoughts we should not fear, but embrace, that we may come to our own understanding and find peace within ourselves. I applaud you.!
January 1st, 2025 10:41
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, we grapple with belief systems all our lives, if we are thinking beings. If we are not, we follow the herd in relative bliss which is far easier. Your poem speaks tof thoughts we should not fear, but embrace, that we may come to our own understanding and find peace within ourselves. I applaud you.!
January 1st, 2025 10:41
New gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I would offer something to say, except our friend arqios said it...and better than I would have at that! LOL! A wonderful, thought-provoking write, Soren. Happy New Year my friend! 🥂🍾
January 1st, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I would offer something to say, except our friend arqios said it...and better than I would have at that! LOL! A wonderful, thought-provoking write, Soren. Happy New Year my friend! 🥂🍾
January 1st, 2025 09:26
New gods
orchidee said:
Zeus will be idolatry, though he never existed in my view.
January 1st, 2025 05:19
orchidee said:
Zeus will be idolatry, though he never existed in my view.
January 1st, 2025 05:19
New gods
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt this will raise a few eyebrows and questions, but i enjoyed the piece, well written.
January 1st, 2025 04:57
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt this will raise a few eyebrows and questions, but i enjoyed the piece, well written.
January 1st, 2025 04:57
New gods
Teddy.15 said:
Well then I\'m the orchid queen 🤣 how very beautiful, the power is with each human. Happy New Year ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:47
Teddy.15 said:
Well then I\'m the orchid queen 🤣 how very beautiful, the power is with each human. Happy New Year ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:47
New gods
arqios said:
In my experience and observation (which isn’t saying much) it is innately human and cyclical to develop and rebirth belief systems and we are most likely going to do it again and again well into the future… very astute metaphor! Juicy stuff so early in the year… a poetic celebration 🎉 🥳
January 1st, 2025 04:41
arqios said:
In my experience and observation (which isn’t saying much) it is innately human and cyclical to develop and rebirth belief systems and we are most likely going to do it again and again well into the future… very astute metaphor! Juicy stuff so early in the year… a poetic celebration 🎉 🥳
January 1st, 2025 04:41
Bugged out
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍 great read indeed
and possibly true¿?
🦋 Insects may 🐝
have their own angels too!! 😁
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 31st, 2024 23:00
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍 great read indeed
and possibly true¿?
🦋 Insects may 🐝
have their own angels too!! 😁
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 31st, 2024 23:00
Bugged out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first, I was thinking a moth, not sure why. But then again, maybe a moth, in the right context, could be an angel! Whatever delivers a message is a messenger. Simple as that. Anyway, wonderful poem Soren. Happy New Year, my friend! 🌹👏
December 31st, 2024 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first, I was thinking a moth, not sure why. But then again, maybe a moth, in the right context, could be an angel! Whatever delivers a message is a messenger. Simple as that. Anyway, wonderful poem Soren. Happy New Year, my friend! 🌹👏
December 31st, 2024 09:16
Bugged out
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting take on finding bugs or shells of them.I liked the rhyme Well done
December 31st, 2024 07:23
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting take on finding bugs or shells of them.I liked the rhyme Well done
December 31st, 2024 07:23
Bugged out
Poetic Licence said:
I wonder if the fly had their own angel, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
I wonder if the fly had their own angel, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 06:26
Bugged out
arqios said:
you see there was a reason why as a child I wanted to be an winged angel! For now the only angels around are the poems we share and enjoy. In a manner of speaking, that is.... Happy New Year Soren!!! 🎉🥳
December 31st, 2024 03:45
arqios said:
you see there was a reason why as a child I wanted to be an winged angel! For now the only angels around are the poems we share and enjoy. In a manner of speaking, that is.... Happy New Year Soren!!! 🎉🥳
December 31st, 2024 03:45
Bugged out
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so stunning, you could be talking about the angel insect, I\'ve never seen one, or could be metaphor either way as you always do it, with class and beauty. 🌹
December 31st, 2024 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so stunning, you could be talking about the angel insect, I\'ve never seen one, or could be metaphor either way as you always do it, with class and beauty. 🌹
December 31st, 2024 03:38
Give and take
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren,many people give all to others in their lives. Keep smiling.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren,many people give all to others in their lives. Keep smiling.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 02:57
Shadows
NafisaSB said:
interesting reflections - am trying to decipher the actual meaning behind it - hoping all the shadows are chased away soon, and replaced by a beautiful rainbow
December 30th, 2024 23:52
NafisaSB said:
interesting reflections - am trying to decipher the actual meaning behind it - hoping all the shadows are chased away soon, and replaced by a beautiful rainbow
December 30th, 2024 23:52
Give and take
arqios said:
The power of that one smile! And to think it is in everyone’s arsenal. But somewhere along personal lines a safety latch was welded to keep these smiles inaccessible… oh dear, where is my imagination going….
December 30th, 2024 21:20
arqios said:
The power of that one smile! And to think it is in everyone’s arsenal. But somewhere along personal lines a safety latch was welded to keep these smiles inaccessible… oh dear, where is my imagination going….
December 30th, 2024 21:20
Give and take
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful poem,
short and sweet I must say!
Eloquently expressed
brought a big smile to my day!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 20:40
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful poem,
short and sweet I must say!
Eloquently expressed
brought a big smile to my day!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 20:40
Give and take
Ellen Marsell said:
In these few lines you were able to convey such depth and enormous power of feelings.
December 30th, 2024 15:14
Ellen Marsell said:
In these few lines you were able to convey such depth and enormous power of feelings.
December 30th, 2024 15:14
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