Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



A leaf
MaxSmith said:

Beautifuly written, appreciated the leaf reference to delve deep with your story.

October 8th, 2024 14:00

A leaf
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 8th, 2024 11:28

A leaf
Tony36 said:

L9ve it

October 8th, 2024 09:49

A leaf
Neville said:



This is more autumnal than October and in all its hues .. Let\'s just leaf it at that .. but with a dubble ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘\'s up from me .. Neville

October 8th, 2024 07:53

A leaf
arqios said:

The cadence and forward movement of this poem brings us along a journey, like all of life together at once, presented to us by the seasons. Majestic Soren!

October 8th, 2024 06:49

A leaf
peet said:

Lovely words and a deep meaning there.

October 8th, 2024 06:08

Rights of respect
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, what has happened to respect in this current world in which we live?

Andy

October 8th, 2024 01:09

Piled logs
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning,
skillfully expressed indeed!! ๐Ÿ‘
Great use of metaphor,
and my pleasure to read!!
Best regards. โœŒ๏ธ
Thad


October 7th, 2024 22:45

Rights of respect
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Powerful penning
I have to say!! ๐Ÿ’ช
Last stanza
blew me away!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Eloquently woven!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

October 7th, 2024 18:19

Rights of respect
markashley1961 said:

nice

October 7th, 2024 06:45

Piled logs
Neville said:



It\'s that bloomin time of year again isn\'t it .. beautiful but starting to get ever so chilly .. Neville

October 7th, 2024 03:31

Piled logs
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories can be very important in time soren.

Andy

October 7th, 2024 01:16

Life is but a dream
A.H. Browning said:

Excellentโ€ผ๏ธโ€ผ๏ธโ€ผ๏ธ

October 7th, 2024 00:31

Piled logs
Dan Williams said:

\"to become but an ashen memory\", kind of like us I guess. More good work here.

October 7th, 2024 00:08

Piled logs
arqios said:

Solid and strong, Soren! Innate indelible beauty in pristine lines. So glad to chance upon it ๐Ÿ˜Š

October 6th, 2024 23:09

Masters of the universe?
arqios said:

Boneless fish would look like jellyfish minus the jelly and sea cucumbers ๐Ÿฅ’ without that rubbery feelโ€ฆ gripping imagery!

October 6th, 2024 22:55

Piled logs
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

October 6th, 2024 19:05

Dust of a dream
arqios said:

Mighty images, familiar but filled with image and meaning. Resonates with souls well traveled ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

October 6th, 2024 18:03

Piled logs
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 6th, 2024 07:49

Piled logs
Demar Desu said:

This poem should be stamped on any business that does cremation

October 6th, 2024 04:55

Circles of the invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

You ae right soren, being on this earth is just a flash in the pan of our existence.

Andy

October 6th, 2024 01:08

Circles of the invisible
Dan Williams said:

The idea of \"negatives of trees\" terrifies me. Especially when described by \"invisible ink from a dried-up pen\" So nice.

October 6th, 2024 00:12

Circles of the invisible
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write. Indeed we are all born dying and the race back does being! Amazingly deep and profound write!!! From the first line to the last, brilliant!

October 5th, 2024 21:27

Circles of the invisible
2781 said:

Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.

October 5th, 2024 10:45

Circles of the invisible
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 5th, 2024 08:28

Circles of the invisible
David Wakeling said:

This is quite a journey filled with amazing imagery. Very pleasant to read.

October 5th, 2024 06:58

Slumber painted dreams
Neville said:



I don\'t think that orange coloured tick tack woz an orange coloured tick tack

October 5th, 2024 06:55

Circles of the invisible
Neville said:


at first glance I couldn\'t see where you were going ..
but having gone around again, it was as clear as the nose on my face ..

October 5th, 2024 06:51

Slumber painted dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren.

Andy

October 5th, 2024 01:45

Slumber painted dreams
Dan Williams said:

You are just too clever. Fine work.

October 5th, 2024 00:08



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