Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Verses of dust
Goldfinch60 said:

We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.

Andy

March 15th, 2025 02:10

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Ellen Marsell said:

Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.

March 14th, 2025 14:05

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 14th, 2025 12:16

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏

March 14th, 2025 09:58

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Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 14th, 2025 09:49

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Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,

March 14th, 2025 09:22

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Teddy.15 said:

And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹

March 14th, 2025 08:55

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arqios said:

Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved

March 14th, 2025 05:35

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Salvia.S said:

Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.

March 14th, 2025 05:25

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Lorenz said:

Impressing image !

March 14th, 2025 05:04

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David Wakeling said:

I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others miss by a mile.A very thought provoking piece

March 14th, 2025 05:00

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Buttercup said:

heyy that was wonderful

March 14th, 2025 02:36

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Lorenz said:

Here\'s a text that speaks to me !

March 13th, 2025 14:40

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.

March 13th, 2025 14:21

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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Felt this one deeply. Very powerful

March 13th, 2025 13:13

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orchidee said:

A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.

March 13th, 2025 12:10

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Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.

March 13th, 2025 09:41

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Neville said:



Be careful what you wish for .. is something my parents taught me long ago & I am still a great believer in .. not because I am either this or that .. but because I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to put all my eggs in the same frying pan .. Still very muchly enjoyed .. Neville

March 13th, 2025 08:32

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

This theme is just so foreign to me, I am not sure what to say. 🤷‍♂️🤣 All kidding aside, well done on this, Soren. This, my friend, is a poignant meditation on mortality, with vivid imagery that contrasts light and darkness. Mortality and the swift passage of time are well thought out in this piece. I love how you\'ve captured life’s brevity so creatively, where a single night’s sleep transforms a child into an old man. Hauntingly beautiful poetic exposé on one of the most universal experiences to not just humanity, but all of life. Well done. 🌹👏

March 13th, 2025 07:32

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Poetic Licence said:

A very powerful writ around the visitor of death, I wouldn\'t mind which way i die violent or gentle, just as long as its quick, great write

March 13th, 2025 06:52

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arqios said:

Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively 🙏🏻🕊

March 13th, 2025 05:37

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David Wakeling said:

This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo

March 13th, 2025 04:53

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Teddy.15 said:

Most dignified, as I\'ve lost many loved ones at a young age I truly dig deep and reflect on death in all its glory, before 1974 I believe I was in fact dead, because I wasn\'t alive, I know this will make sense to you because you know me well, I don\'t believe we should live in fear of death, because it is a natural cycle of the gift of life, none can escape it in the end. Stunning poem my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

March 13th, 2025 04:37

Bee in your bonnet sonnet
Tom Dylan said:

This really packed a punch. Modern life in a nutshell. A fine, thought-provoking piece.

March 13th, 2025 03:28

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Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren but luckily I think outside the box and have reality in my life.

Andy

March 13th, 2025 01:43

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Mutley Ravishes said:

What a mess! Is planet Earth a dumping ground for all the basket cases of the Universe?! Wait a minute, I\'m here too!!

March 12th, 2025 18:37

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arqios said:

So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊

March 12th, 2025 17:36

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Teddy.15 said:

Dearest Sorrenbarret, you have hit so many of the sore points in which I dislike about our world, who would have ever thought these things up 30 years ago? I\'m glad I was born in the 70\'s I have seen a lot of wonderful things but also a lot I wish I hadn\'t. 🌹 Brilliant ❤️ some days I would definitely return my husband lol 🤣

March 12th, 2025 16:59

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Jerry Reynolds said:

A good write, SB.
No thanks, One mother and one wife
I have found it to be enough.

March 12th, 2025 12:55

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Poetic Licence said:

When you write it like that, you realise how much of the modern is fake, entertaining and enjoyable read

March 12th, 2025 07:56



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