Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Love has many levels
Teddy.15 said:
a light once kindled, leads from far away
the rope strands frayed, decayed, hope lingers
vomiting emotions of a drowning day
clouds slip through my fingers
An incredible achievement to write about grief with such beauty and dignity, as I read every line it tells me someone is deeply missed. Absolutely beautiful all we can do when grief visits is to embrace it and embrace it you have. A light once lit is indeed always flickering. 🌹
February 29th, 2024 03:53
Teddy.15 said:
a light once kindled, leads from far away
the rope strands frayed, decayed, hope lingers
vomiting emotions of a drowning day
clouds slip through my fingers
An incredible achievement to write about grief with such beauty and dignity, as I read every line it tells me someone is deeply missed. Absolutely beautiful all we can do when grief visits is to embrace it and embrace it you have. A light once lit is indeed always flickering. 🌹
February 29th, 2024 03:53
Love has many levels
orchidee said:
Cooeee Jonah, you escaped yet?! A miracle that he was not digested by the whale/big fish.
February 29th, 2024 03:06
orchidee said:
Cooeee Jonah, you escaped yet?! A miracle that he was not digested by the whale/big fish.
February 29th, 2024 03:06
Love has many levels
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dove bring light and love to all soren.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dove bring light and love to all soren.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:51
Love has many levels
2781 said:
Thought provoking, again.
I think of redemption.
February 29th, 2024 02:04
2781 said:
Thought provoking, again.
I think of redemption.
February 29th, 2024 02:04
Past undone
Bella Shepard said:
They say that time can only go forward, we can only change the past in our mind. A chilling write my friend, that speaks to ghosts of the past. The time ticks on and your words capture its indifference. Kudos!!
February 28th, 2024 16:51
Bella Shepard said:
They say that time can only go forward, we can only change the past in our mind. A chilling write my friend, that speaks to ghosts of the past. The time ticks on and your words capture its indifference. Kudos!!
February 28th, 2024 16:51
Past undone
Teddy.15 said:
3 incredibly powerful stanza\'s so much imagery and emotion your last lines gave me goosebumps as the imagery is painful. Superb as ever. 🌹
February 28th, 2024 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
3 incredibly powerful stanza\'s so much imagery and emotion your last lines gave me goosebumps as the imagery is painful. Superb as ever. 🌹
February 28th, 2024 03:38
Past undone
orchidee said:
Doh! They wish all my songs would begin at the end - when I\'m singing \'em, that is! lol.
February 28th, 2024 03:03
orchidee said:
Doh! They wish all my songs would begin at the end - when I\'m singing \'em, that is! lol.
February 28th, 2024 03:03
Majesty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I could see the Universe in your words.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I could see the Universe in your words.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:17
Majesty
Meera Mere said:
\'Night\'s silver crescent smile.\' It painted such a beautiful and serene picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing
February 27th, 2024 12:06
Meera Mere said:
\'Night\'s silver crescent smile.\' It painted such a beautiful and serene picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing
February 27th, 2024 12:06
Majesty
Cassie58 said:
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty and wisdom in your words. You have gifted your readers with a gem. Have a lovely day.
February 27th, 2024 03:55
Cassie58 said:
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty and wisdom in your words. You have gifted your readers with a gem. Have a lovely day.
February 27th, 2024 03:55
Majesty
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly beautiful I found myself thinking of those already in that distant sky above, I cannot choose a favourite line because as you always do, you create such beauty and make it come alive. So much to enjoy in this dear sorrenbarret, I just love it. 🌹
February 27th, 2024 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly beautiful I found myself thinking of those already in that distant sky above, I cannot choose a favourite line because as you always do, you create such beauty and make it come alive. So much to enjoy in this dear sorrenbarret, I just love it. 🌹
February 27th, 2024 03:17
The candle
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how bad things get soren we all rise from the ashes into the light.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how bad things get soren we all rise from the ashes into the light.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:23
The candle
Teddy.15 said:
Simply exquisite, with dark there is always hope of light, sometimes the candles go out or just flicker and sometimes they can guide. 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:15
Teddy.15 said:
Simply exquisite, with dark there is always hope of light, sometimes the candles go out or just flicker and sometimes they can guide. 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:15
The candle
orchidee said:
I said to KP \'You get on my wick (on my nerves)\'. She replied: \'Ya got no wick; ya candle\'s all burnt up!\' lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:10
orchidee said:
I said to KP \'You get on my wick (on my nerves)\'. She replied: \'Ya got no wick; ya candle\'s all burnt up!\' lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:10
Song of a siren
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:20
Song of a siren
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I\'m going to enjoy it while I can...
A well crafted write.
February 25th, 2024 05:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I\'m going to enjoy it while I can...
A well crafted write.
February 25th, 2024 05:24
Song of a siren
Cloie said:
Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It\'s like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!
February 25th, 2024 05:13
Cloie said:
Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It\'s like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!
February 25th, 2024 05:13
Song of a siren
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me someone\'s blood is being drained, a gothic feel and magnificent imagery song of a siren indeed kudos. 🌹 🦇
February 25th, 2024 04:44
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me someone\'s blood is being drained, a gothic feel and magnificent imagery song of a siren indeed kudos. 🌹 🦇
February 25th, 2024 04:44
Darkness Come
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren but out of that darkness the light will be there for you and for all of us.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren but out of that darkness the light will be there for you and for all of us.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 01:59
Darkness Come
orchidee said:
Can ya put a light on? I can\'t see a thing in the dark! lol.
February 24th, 2024 08:43
orchidee said:
Can ya put a light on? I can\'t see a thing in the dark! lol.
February 24th, 2024 08:43
Darkness Come
Teddy.15 said:
Another outstanding poem, none can escape the hands of Death but your words make it in a strange way exciting.
Buried in the tomb of forgetfulness
Washed in waters of fantasy
Cleansed in the fires of regretful stress
Left clothed so scantily
Love this stanza but your ending is superb too. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:20
Teddy.15 said:
Another outstanding poem, none can escape the hands of Death but your words make it in a strange way exciting.
Buried in the tomb of forgetfulness
Washed in waters of fantasy
Cleansed in the fires of regretful stress
Left clothed so scantily
Love this stanza but your ending is superb too. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:20
Sundial
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one soren, time is so timeless in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one soren, time is so timeless in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:41
Sundial
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one soren, time is so timeless in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one soren, time is so timeless in our lives.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:26
Sundial
Bella Shepard said:
We can\'t control it, we can only watch as it passes. But we feel the need to constantly measure it. Incredible write my friend, each stanza a facet of that which we can never hold onto.
February 23rd, 2024 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
We can\'t control it, we can only watch as it passes. But we feel the need to constantly measure it. Incredible write my friend, each stanza a facet of that which we can never hold onto.
February 23rd, 2024 15:47
Sundial
Doggerel Dave said:
\"time and tide wait for no man\" - yours a much richer explanation, Soren.
(If you happen to like thrillers as a means of relaxation try \'The Lost Man\' By Jane Harper.)
February 23rd, 2024 09:04
Doggerel Dave said:
\"time and tide wait for no man\" - yours a much richer explanation, Soren.
(If you happen to like thrillers as a means of relaxation try \'The Lost Man\' By Jane Harper.)
February 23rd, 2024 09:04
Sundial
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Do sundials know when the clocks go back/forward?
I been struggling with this dang iron sundial, trying to put it back an hour, but it won\'t budge! lol.
February 23rd, 2024 06:45
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Do sundials know when the clocks go back/forward?
I been struggling with this dang iron sundial, trying to put it back an hour, but it won\'t budge! lol.
February 23rd, 2024 06:45
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