Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Birth of a poem
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.
Superbly crafter dear friend. 🌹
November 2nd, 2024 04:50
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one
How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.
Superbly crafter dear friend. 🌹
November 2nd, 2024 04:50
Glimpses of the past
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful memories soren, they mean so much to us.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful memories soren, they mean so much to us.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:10
Glimpses of the past
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thoughts of the past!! 👍
Fond mem\'ries that
will forever last!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 1st, 2024 10:07
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thoughts of the past!! 👍
Fond mem\'ries that
will forever last!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 1st, 2024 10:07
Glimpses of the past
arqios said:
That’s the beauty of having made memories! It’s a stash that can be retrieved at any time and for most occasions 👍🏻
November 1st, 2024 07:01
arqios said:
That’s the beauty of having made memories! It’s a stash that can be retrieved at any time and for most occasions 👍🏻
November 1st, 2024 07:01
Glimpses of the past
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem about the joy of memories. In fact memories are everything. Well done
November 1st, 2024 06:13
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful poem about the joy of memories. In fact memories are everything. Well done
November 1st, 2024 06:13
Glimpses of the past
Teddy.15 said:
A glimpse of the past, some like me, have the black ink of your sepia, but here I see your mother and a beautiful moment of serenity, what we have up there in our memory box is a miracle, sometimes beautiful other times terrifying. A wonderful theme you have shared this week. 🌹
November 1st, 2024 05:03
Teddy.15 said:
A glimpse of the past, some like me, have the black ink of your sepia, but here I see your mother and a beautiful moment of serenity, what we have up there in our memory box is a miracle, sometimes beautiful other times terrifying. A wonderful theme you have shared this week. 🌹
November 1st, 2024 05:03
Bear
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily there are no bears in the UK soren but there is an advert on TV which is relevant.
https://youtu.be/5gNT0SWf3Ls?si=12bYltztgpzITwcz
Andy
November 1st, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily there are no bears in the UK soren but there is an advert on TV which is relevant.
https://youtu.be/5gNT0SWf3Ls?si=12bYltztgpzITwcz
Andy
November 1st, 2024 01:50
Bear
Dan Williams said:
Pretty clever for a consumed soul. Very well done, do I need to add \'as usual\'?
October 31st, 2024 23:46
Dan Williams said:
Pretty clever for a consumed soul. Very well done, do I need to add \'as usual\'?
October 31st, 2024 23:46
Bear
Kerry said:
It\'s a real pleasure to discover your poems...and your biography. The only thing I can think of to say is...try riding an ostridge! You\'d be surprised haha
October 31st, 2024 10:10
Kerry said:
It\'s a real pleasure to discover your poems...and your biography. The only thing I can think of to say is...try riding an ostridge! You\'d be surprised haha
October 31st, 2024 10:10
Bear
Doggerel Dave said:
Can hardly bear to half believe, given your biography, Soren, that your story might bear closer inspection….
October 31st, 2024 05:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Can hardly bear to half believe, given your biography, Soren, that your story might bear closer inspection….
October 31st, 2024 05:57
Bear
Neville said:
Yep, it doesn\'t bear thinking about .. does it .. you can run, climb and try to hide but that bare behind you is gonna tear ya butt write off in the end .. or even before it .. they aint nuthin like they were back in goldilocks .. 🐻🐻❄️🐼🐧👍
October 31st, 2024 05:48
Neville said:
Yep, it doesn\'t bear thinking about .. does it .. you can run, climb and try to hide but that bare behind you is gonna tear ya butt write off in the end .. or even before it .. they aint nuthin like they were back in goldilocks .. 🐻🐻❄️🐼🐧👍
October 31st, 2024 05:48
Bear
arqios said:
Quite a horror this entanglement and one which I could not possibly bear!
October 31st, 2024 05:27
arqios said:
Quite a horror this entanglement and one which I could not possibly bear!
October 31st, 2024 05:27
Bear
Lorenz said:
Once in Canada I came across a bear.( About 50 meters away).But it was a peaceful Teddy .I just stopped and let it pass .
October 31st, 2024 05:06
Lorenz said:
Once in Canada I came across a bear.( About 50 meters away).But it was a peaceful Teddy .I just stopped and let it pass .
October 31st, 2024 05:06
Bear
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 wow, your language and imagery is superb although terrifying in the same moment, I wouldn\'t want to be face by a bear 🐻 that\'s why I always have honey in my purse. Fabulous creative piece dear sorrenbarret. Ah bet that bear were very appy !
October 31st, 2024 04:52
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 wow, your language and imagery is superb although terrifying in the same moment, I wouldn\'t want to be face by a bear 🐻 that\'s why I always have honey in my purse. Fabulous creative piece dear sorrenbarret. Ah bet that bear were very appy !
October 31st, 2024 04:52
Sepia dreams
Bobby O said:
Wow, that’s a statement not that the past doesn’t have meaning but you allowed it to be the same rain plan just a little instead of building up an imagination of greatness like I probably do so it’s real and you’re ready for next. What’s next?
October 31st, 2024 02:47
Bobby O said:
Wow, that’s a statement not that the past doesn’t have meaning but you allowed it to be the same rain plan just a little instead of building up an imagination of greatness like I probably do so it’s real and you’re ready for next. What’s next?
October 31st, 2024 02:47
Sepia dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Those picture bring back such memories soren.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those picture bring back such memories soren.
Andy
October 31st, 2024 02:21
Tears of night
Rin the Magnificent said:
Beautiful imagery, picturesque feeling of the coming storm.
Liked it very much!
October 31st, 2024 00:42
Rin the Magnificent said:
Beautiful imagery, picturesque feeling of the coming storm.
Liked it very much!
October 31st, 2024 00:42
Sepia dreams
Dan Williams said:
Like a dream. Cold reality at the end. Very nice.
October 30th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Like a dream. Cold reality at the end. Very nice.
October 30th, 2024 23:36
Never
Dan Williams said:
All here is wonderful but the last two lines are huge, magnificent. I learn from you.
October 30th, 2024 23:29
Dan Williams said:
All here is wonderful but the last two lines are huge, magnificent. I learn from you.
October 30th, 2024 23:29
Never
MR.apocalypse said:
lol this reminds me of a poem i wrote. the snap of the whip and the uttering of a word/ they both can be quick and they both can be heard/ the barrel of a gun and the words that are spoken/ one can make a heart stop and one can leave a heart broken
October 30th, 2024 21:18
MR.apocalypse said:
lol this reminds me of a poem i wrote. the snap of the whip and the uttering of a word/ they both can be quick and they both can be heard/ the barrel of a gun and the words that are spoken/ one can make a heart stop and one can leave a heart broken
October 30th, 2024 21:18
Sepia dreams
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this 20 times today and every time it just gets more powerful. 🌹
October 30th, 2024 12:44
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this 20 times today and every time it just gets more powerful. 🌹
October 30th, 2024 12:44
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