Life is what you make it
Teddy.15 said:

Superb your message, and full of magnificent wisdom I shall show this one to my son, what a way to wake the reader up and make them take a look at the bigger picture that with a positive attitude we can in fact live our lives to the full, despite all of the obstacles and madness. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

August 7th, 2024 04:51

Too many
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

Isn\'t it ironic that small things in life can turn into disastrous situations. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it has a lot of meaning. Well done.
Thank you

August 7th, 2024 03:06

From a tiny view
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words soren, if only we could go back to the innocence of childhood it would be wonderful.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:41

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Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination of lower fertility, personal choice and economic necessity, I hear, I hear.
But your well formed little icicle sends cold winds round my ears and is for my money more realistic.
Here the South is suffering a more than usually cold winter….thus the icicle… (South pole cooked and sent this way?)


August 6th, 2024 18:45

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AuburnScribbler said:

A brilliantly written two stanzas here sorenbarrett.

Your poem highlights the fact, that no proud human can ever think themselves a master of the planet.

Also, it highlights the importance and the respect of the concept of space, which you mention with a particular clarity in the second stanza.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

August 6th, 2024 11:32

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2781 said:

The seed, that produced the seeds, seed..

August 6th, 2024 07:59

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orchidee said:

Go to a busy town - arghhh - people and more people! lol.

August 6th, 2024 07:23

From a tiny view
Dan Williams said:

I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I mean \"Drinking knowledge from a media latrine\" is just inspired. Nice work.

August 5th, 2024 22:57

From a tiny view
orchidee said:

Now this is spooky - the poem changed from verses to one whole piece, then back again to verses!
Maybe a blip when I pressed the \'like\' button?! Good write SB.

August 5th, 2024 14:13

From a tiny view
Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🤣 brilliant what magical lies children can make up, and of course the adult too. I found this to be most endearing, I\'ve worked with children all my life. Mountains out of mole hills 🌹

August 5th, 2024 08:21

Silent colors
Bobby O said:

“Sculpts meaning without a note” a powerful line And u love the dog and monkey in a sack though I’m still trying to unwrap it and that helps make this poem great !

August 5th, 2024 05:31

Silent colors
Dan Williams said:

Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors; this does that very well. Thanks.

August 4th, 2024 23:36

Silent colors
Teddy.15 said:

And I do now to thee, one of my most favourite poets who also values the colour blue, I see nothing but acceptance and peace in this. We all have our own choices in life and it\'s really literally because religion or sexual preferences or colours are all blinded by love as long as we are happy. And I bow to you darling friend. Kudos. 🌹

August 4th, 2024 15:36

Silent colors
Neville said:



Some, as you suggest hardly make a sound while others scream and roar .. My old sensei (now long gone) had a colour for everything and everyone .. He saw me in terms of purple and white .. Neville

August 4th, 2024 13:24

Silent colors
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
Not only do you suggest meals for KP, but also places for her holidays - fetid sewers! How come you know what she likes? lol.

August 4th, 2024 08:25