Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Jigsaw
amepiesces said:
just wow.... i read it 4 time in a row ..and the last line what you did a child could....wow
December 20th, 2022 08:39
amepiesces said:
just wow.... i read it 4 time in a row ..and the last line what you did a child could....wow
December 20th, 2022 08:39
Circular journey
L. B. Mek said:
a healthy way to stare down our finite fate
and appreciate
there is more we lack the wisdom to glean...
I like open ended, endings
to my stories
since, none of us know how this will all, end
as much as we try and guess what it all means..
(a wonderfully contemplative write
this be our \'atoms to atoms\'
of antiquity\'s \'ashes to ashes\')
December 19th, 2022 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
a healthy way to stare down our finite fate
and appreciate
there is more we lack the wisdom to glean...
I like open ended, endings
to my stories
since, none of us know how this will all, end
as much as we try and guess what it all means..
(a wonderfully contemplative write
this be our \'atoms to atoms\'
of antiquity\'s \'ashes to ashes\')
December 19th, 2022 04:54
Jingle Bills
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry dear Poet I read your wonderfully insightful words and I couldn\'t help just typing away
a feeble poetic response
thanks for sharing and inspiring)
society needs, its festivities
to cut through, life\'s endless repetitiveness
to help manufacture
collective moments of gaiety
so once
we celebrated, our harvests
and now we celebrate our faith anchored deities,
whatever it takes, to distract us
to insure we survive, life itself
so every year, someone
finds newfound joy in those firecrackers
or gets that perfect present for their loved one
or get\'s that turkey to come out, just right
whatever it is, whatever it takes
let it be
we do it all, in the hope
that we\'ll be the generation
to finally discover, the why
in that we inherit and are indoctrinated
to appreciate...
so let it be
now \'Cyber Monday\'s\'
whatever works, next
let it be...
December 19th, 2022 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
(sorry dear Poet I read your wonderfully insightful words and I couldn\'t help just typing away
a feeble poetic response
thanks for sharing and inspiring)
society needs, its festivities
to cut through, life\'s endless repetitiveness
to help manufacture
collective moments of gaiety
so once
we celebrated, our harvests
and now we celebrate our faith anchored deities,
whatever it takes, to distract us
to insure we survive, life itself
so every year, someone
finds newfound joy in those firecrackers
or gets that perfect present for their loved one
or get\'s that turkey to come out, just right
whatever it is, whatever it takes
let it be
we do it all, in the hope
that we\'ll be the generation
to finally discover, the why
in that we inherit and are indoctrinated
to appreciate...
so let it be
now \'Cyber Monday\'s\'
whatever works, next
let it be...
December 19th, 2022 04:47
Jingle Bills
Doggerel Dave said:
For some genuine Christians, all this commercialisation must rankle. For me if it\'s not Christmas, then Easter, Mother\'s day, Father\'s day, even Halloween all seem to be of the same mold.
I, an agnostic atheist still exchange presents on Christmas day......
Thanks for the steep learning curve, Soren - never heard of Odin or Black Friday...
December 16th, 2022 16:14
Doggerel Dave said:
For some genuine Christians, all this commercialisation must rankle. For me if it\'s not Christmas, then Easter, Mother\'s day, Father\'s day, even Halloween all seem to be of the same mold.
I, an agnostic atheist still exchange presents on Christmas day......
Thanks for the steep learning curve, Soren - never heard of Odin or Black Friday...
December 16th, 2022 16:14
Jingle Bills
orchidee said:
A ditty came to me, but not a full poem:
Ding dong, merrily on high,
On earth the tills are ringing....
December 16th, 2022 10:01
orchidee said:
A ditty came to me, but not a full poem:
Ding dong, merrily on high,
On earth the tills are ringing....
December 16th, 2022 10:01
Jingle Bills
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen an eight legged horse. It would save money to hire it, and save a horse\'s energy. Only one horse needed instead of two? lol.
December 16th, 2022 09:59
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen an eight legged horse. It would save money to hire it, and save a horse\'s energy. Only one horse needed instead of two? lol.
December 16th, 2022 09:59
Sombras
L. B. Mek said:
\'Changing with every transformation The stronger the love The more we are captive The greater the control\'
I hear Pessoa, more specifically
Albert Caeiro
that most pragmatic and cynical
of poetic voices
but in that very directness
there\'s a romanticism straining at the leashes
wishing, the world was more like the way your wrote it
I just wish i could speak/read the language to appreciate it in full
December 16th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Changing with every transformation The stronger the love The more we are captive The greater the control\'
I hear Pessoa, more specifically
Albert Caeiro
that most pragmatic and cynical
of poetic voices
but in that very directness
there\'s a romanticism straining at the leashes
wishing, the world was more like the way your wrote it
I just wish i could speak/read the language to appreciate it in full
December 16th, 2022 05:11
Panic
L. B. Mek said:
what a relatable distillation
at once offering a comprehensive
description
and simultaneously, invoking remembrance
of our own experiences..
really well executed, a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 16th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
what a relatable distillation
at once offering a comprehensive
description
and simultaneously, invoking remembrance
of our own experiences..
really well executed, a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 16th, 2022 04:58
Sombras
arqios said:
In the shadows is a truth, a concept that is nascent as the womb good one Soren. Bom dia! (And I am not fluent in Portuguese at all!)
December 15th, 2022 19:40
arqios said:
In the shadows is a truth, a concept that is nascent as the womb good one Soren. Bom dia! (And I am not fluent in Portuguese at all!)
December 15th, 2022 19:40
Panic
arqios said:
As with night terrors and anxiety attacks, the sheerness of unadulterated panic is often unexplainable to the mind! Thanks Soren
December 14th, 2022 20:48
arqios said:
As with night terrors and anxiety attacks, the sheerness of unadulterated panic is often unexplainable to the mind! Thanks Soren
December 14th, 2022 20:48
Panic
Doggerel Dave said:
Impending doom I cannot quite place... Thankfully once I declined the medication, it disappeared. A well written reminder of a terrible time. Thanks Soren.
December 14th, 2022 19:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Impending doom I cannot quite place... Thankfully once I declined the medication, it disappeared. A well written reminder of a terrible time. Thanks Soren.
December 14th, 2022 19:01
Cat as trophy
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun
had those minutiae details
of a true story..
a lovely read, thank you!
December 12th, 2022 00:54
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun
had those minutiae details
of a true story..
a lovely read, thank you!
December 12th, 2022 00:54
Nowhere
L. B. Mek said:
this series of poetic witticisms imbued with acute commentary
are so much fun to read
I just hope you had a great time writing them
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 12th, 2022 00:49
L. B. Mek said:
this series of poetic witticisms imbued with acute commentary
are so much fun to read
I just hope you had a great time writing them
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 12th, 2022 00:49
Cat as trophy
hzugman said:
A delightful tale and at least they were boxers thankfully.
December 11th, 2022 20:12
hzugman said:
A delightful tale and at least they were boxers thankfully.
December 11th, 2022 20:12
Cat as trophy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren, these things do happen.
Andy
December 11th, 2022 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren, these things do happen.
Andy
December 11th, 2022 03:07
Cat as trophy
arqios said:
Leaves on breathless! A true story telling poem. Most delightful.
December 10th, 2022 19:32
arqios said:
Leaves on breathless! A true story telling poem. Most delightful.
December 10th, 2022 19:32
Cat as trophy
Doggerel Dave said:
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now, Soren.
Misunderstandings are commonplace when it comes to human interactions,, yours was well told and and great fun...as I wasn\'t in your situation ....
December 10th, 2022 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now, Soren.
Misunderstandings are commonplace when it comes to human interactions,, yours was well told and and great fun...as I wasn\'t in your situation ....
December 10th, 2022 18:45
Cat as trophy
Neville said:
a very believable & enjoyable tale sir .. sounds like it was one of those oops as he stoops kinda situations .. :)
December 10th, 2022 11:48
Neville said:
a very believable & enjoyable tale sir .. sounds like it was one of those oops as he stoops kinda situations .. :)
December 10th, 2022 11:48
Nowhere
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:40
Nowhere
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.
December 8th, 2022 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.
December 8th, 2022 17:48
Conscience
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a serious question in this little pearl. A blameless life might give sweet repose, but on the other hand who does not at times second guess everything they\'ve ever done. Thank you for my contemplation of the day.
December 2nd, 2022 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a serious question in this little pearl. A blameless life might give sweet repose, but on the other hand who does not at times second guess everything they\'ve ever done. Thank you for my contemplation of the day.
December 2nd, 2022 15:02
Tombs to dreams
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly powerful message!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'life\'s climb is ever easier
if we empty our baggage
as we go
if we carry too much regret
doubt we\'ll make it far
before we break down...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly powerful message!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'life\'s climb is ever easier
if we empty our baggage
as we go
if we carry too much regret
doubt we\'ll make it far
before we break down...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:04
Tombs to dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so special, live in the now soren.
Andy
December 1st, 2022 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so special, live in the now soren.
Andy
December 1st, 2022 02:28
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