Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gone
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, some lovely lines. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
January 7th, 2025 08:33
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, some lovely lines. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
January 7th, 2025 08:33
Condemned
rin said:
From a human perspective, it\'s a dystopia, but I wonder if it\'s possible to shine a light of hope even from there.
January 7th, 2025 06:30
rin said:
From a human perspective, it\'s a dystopia, but I wonder if it\'s possible to shine a light of hope even from there.
January 7th, 2025 06:30
Condemned
arqios said:
Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at once repulsed by leaking batteries, your imagery paints in the walls of the mind! A definite keeper in this poem. šš»ššš»
January 7th, 2025 06:01
arqios said:
Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at once repulsed by leaking batteries, your imagery paints in the walls of the mind! A definite keeper in this poem. šš»ššš»
January 7th, 2025 06:01
Condemned
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like an old Mental Health Hospital i used to help out in, but no, i am still working it out but have enjoyed my daily read, thank you
January 7th, 2025 04:23
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like an old Mental Health Hospital i used to help out in, but no, i am still working it out but have enjoyed my daily read, thank you
January 7th, 2025 04:23
Condemned
orchidee said:
Sounds like a description of KP! I am horrible to her! Awww. lol.
I rarely get the true meaning of anything \'hidden\' in poems. In some cases I become offensive - \'Grr! No, I didn\'t meant that at all\' is the reply. (lol)
January 7th, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Sounds like a description of KP! I am horrible to her! Awww. lol.
I rarely get the true meaning of anything \'hidden\' in poems. In some cases I become offensive - \'Grr! No, I didn\'t meant that at all\' is the reply. (lol)
January 7th, 2025 03:37
Gone
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
poignant indeed! š¢
Terrific brevity,
and rhyme and flow!!
A really captivating read,!!š
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:54
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
poignant indeed! š¢
Terrific brevity,
and rhyme and flow!!
A really captivating read,!!š
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:54
Gone
NinjaGirl said:
I really, really like this poem, love the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 20:54
NinjaGirl said:
I really, really like this poem, love the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 20:54
Gone
Bella Shepard said:
Gone, but not forgotten. This poem possesses incredible imagery, and a beautifully flowing rhyming pattern that accentuates every line, everything to love.
January 6th, 2025 10:56
Bella Shepard said:
Gone, but not forgotten. This poem possesses incredible imagery, and a beautifully flowing rhyming pattern that accentuates every line, everything to love.
January 6th, 2025 10:56
Gone
arqios said:
Such delicate balance between the intensity of love and its inevitable loss. Iām astounded by its effective expression šš»šš»š
January 6th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
Such delicate balance between the intensity of love and its inevitable loss. Iām astounded by its effective expression šš»šš»š
January 6th, 2025 07:51
Gone
Teddy.15 said:
I see the wishful longing for something incredibly important, I don\'t know why, but I always lean towards a home, not to have been lost. Absolutely beautiful poetry dear sorrenbarret š¹
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Teddy.15 said:
I see the wishful longing for something incredibly important, I don\'t know why, but I always lean towards a home, not to have been lost. Absolutely beautiful poetry dear sorrenbarret š¹
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Gone
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of lost love that cannot help but touch your heart, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of lost love that cannot help but touch your heart, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:55
Gone
Cassie58 said:
This beautiful poem of lost love touched my heart. I was reminded, there is always a reason for the heartache. So poetic in expression and imagery Soren.
January 6th, 2025 04:50
Cassie58 said:
This beautiful poem of lost love touched my heart. I was reminded, there is always a reason for the heartache. So poetic in expression and imagery Soren.
January 6th, 2025 04:50
Gone
David Wakeling said:
This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well done.
January 6th, 2025 04:39
David Wakeling said:
This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well done.
January 6th, 2025 04:39
Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all need to see all in our world.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all need to see all in our world.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:23
Reflections
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! šš
An outstanding poem
and eye pleasing imagery!!š«
Great rhyme scheme
penned superbly!! š
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:51
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! šš
An outstanding poem
and eye pleasing imagery!!š«
Great rhyme scheme
penned superbly!! š
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:51
My kind of music
aDarkerMind said:
words fail me Soren.
as good as you have ever written.
a true masterpiece my friend;
January 5th, 2025 11:27
aDarkerMind said:
words fail me Soren.
as good as you have ever written.
a true masterpiece my friend;
January 5th, 2025 11:27
My kind of music
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I believe music moves us and connects with us at different levels of our being. This poem almost paints a picture of how music connects with us. Truly incredible!
January 5th, 2025 09:17
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I believe music moves us and connects with us at different levels of our being. This poem almost paints a picture of how music connects with us. Truly incredible!
January 5th, 2025 09:17
Reflections
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marshes are beautiful. Where I used to live there was a boardwalk section of the Appalachian trail that cut right through a marsh. Their ecosystems are complex and lush. Wonderful poem that shows beauty in things most people pass right by...or may even find ugly. Love this poem, my friend. ā¤ļø Here\'s to Sobek!
January 5th, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Marshes are beautiful. Where I used to live there was a boardwalk section of the Appalachian trail that cut right through a marsh. Their ecosystems are complex and lush. Wonderful poem that shows beauty in things most people pass right by...or may even find ugly. Love this poem, my friend. ā¤ļø Here\'s to Sobek!
January 5th, 2025 07:56
Reflections
aDarkerMind said:
enjoyed every line Soren.
a pleasure to read my friend.
January 5th, 2025 06:18
aDarkerMind said:
enjoyed every line Soren.
a pleasure to read my friend.
January 5th, 2025 06:18
Reflections
Teddy.15 said:
Such beautiful reflections, reminds me of when I was a child and we lived by a gigantic pond. Your nature and all the imagery have come alive. š¹
January 5th, 2025 06:06
Teddy.15 said:
Such beautiful reflections, reminds me of when I was a child and we lived by a gigantic pond. Your nature and all the imagery have come alive. š¹
January 5th, 2025 06:06
Reflections
arqios said:
Always fascinated me, the cyclical nature of beauty. Not much about this out there but here we are and your poem delivers. A contemplative beauty featuring a \'moulting\' Sobek!
January 5th, 2025 05:26
arqios said:
Always fascinated me, the cyclical nature of beauty. Not much about this out there but here we are and your poem delivers. A contemplative beauty featuring a \'moulting\' Sobek!
January 5th, 2025 05:26
Reflections
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is everywhere and in everything, just in some cases you have to keep digging, Really enjoyed the read, Enjoy your day
January 5th, 2025 04:57
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty is everywhere and in everything, just in some cases you have to keep digging, Really enjoyed the read, Enjoy your day
January 5th, 2025 04:57
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