Glass prison
Rin the Magnificent said:

Lovely poem, showing that there\'s a thin line betwixt admiring beauty - free in nature -
and watching it slowly decay, once pluck\'d for our private amusement, admiration, gratification.
One ought to ponder: do we really need to destroy beauty to admire its fleeting grace?
Wonderfully written, Soren. Take care!

November 9th, 2024 03:48

Glass prison
Dan Williams said:

Was this the prison with the glass ceiling?

November 9th, 2024 01:02

Glass prison
arqios said:

Visually captivating and unlocking the gates of interpretation and flight 👍🏻

November 8th, 2024 20:39

Glass prison
MR.apocalypse said:

very nice


November 8th, 2024 15:06

Glass prison
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I agree with Lorenz, this rings of Baudelaire. Love it when synchronicity happens. I love Baudelaire and also love this poem. Definitely check out \"Les Fleurs du mal\" (The Flowers of Evil). Great collection of poetry that parts of were banned. Now, back to your poem, a truly great piece, my friend, to evoke one of the poetic greats. This is an easy fave! 🙏👏👏🌹💐🖤

November 8th, 2024 12:04

Glass prison
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one.


November 8th, 2024 09:06

A twisted tail
Goldfinch60 said:

Those serpents can get in many places soren, one day we may be able to get rid of them.

Andy

November 8th, 2024 02:45

A twisted tail
Thad Wilk said:

👏 👏 Clapping!
A great poem,
evocative and true! 🙏
Forgiveness could be
applied to quite a few! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad


November 7th, 2024 13:12

A twisted tail
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 7th, 2024 10:41

A twisted tail
Teddy.15 said:

Post election? Although you have also given a fair description in your first stanza of my older sister. Powerful dearest sorrenbarret and relatable for so many subjects 🌹

November 7th, 2024 04:21

Window of a tear
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, we never know from where our next words will come, my poem today is one of those.

Andy

November 7th, 2024 02:21

Temple of broken rock
NafisaSB said:

beautiful quilt made up of varying elements. enjoyed how you have interwoven things that seem so unrelated. kudos

November 6th, 2024 23:04

Window of a tear
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍
Love this poem
thoughts and ideas
you\'ve expressed!! 🤩
Awesomazing read!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad


November 6th, 2024 21:08

Window of a tear
David Wakeling said:

This is great. The message is clear and is important. Enjoyable

November 6th, 2024 19:43

Window of a tear
Neville said:



You have somehow managed to craft a portal into the very heart of poetry .. bravo


November 6th, 2024 13:06