Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A bad rap(tor)?
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
A bad rap(tor)?
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
A bad rap(tor)?
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
A bad rap(tor)?
Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
A bad rap(tor)?
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Time eroded memories
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Neville said:
Just like I like my coffee .. very noir & then some .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 14:26
Familiarity of the nonexistent
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful Write Soren! flows so well.
August 13th, 2024 11:36
One in all, all in one
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written two stanzas here sorenbarrett, that reminds us the importance of a true core unity, despite our many differences.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
August 13th, 2024 11:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and delving. 😱
Love it! 👍
Great rhyme and flow,.
captivating throughout!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 13th, 2024 09:05
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
A beautiful lovely poem. It hits deep my friend. Well done poet.
August 13th, 2024 09:02
Time eroded memories
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Soren. Love the imagery.
August 13th, 2024 06:42
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t go to sleep come to the 70 disco with me, oh my dear sorrenbarret this one made me shake, you have managed to get into my mind when I have dreams of the dead and then awake. Superbly dark and actually incredibly relatable and beautifully written. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:13
Time eroded memories
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Dan Williams said:
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27
Time eroded memories
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Neville said:
I have long found it helpful to take notes in order to help preserve situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way .. I now find it crucial .. lest we forget ..
August 13th, 2024 00:07
Time eroded memories
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
gray0328 said:
speaks to the fleeting nature of memories and how they shape our identity. Well Done Soren
August 12th, 2024 11:51
Time eroded memories
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
MendedFences27 said:
Do as we all do, embellish. Those \"Time Eroded Memories\" can be expanded and cleaned up and converted to poetry. Your poem states the truth and is therefore poetic. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2024 10:59
Time eroded memories
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
You have summarized life in a few words. Beautiful, well done.
August 12th, 2024 09:53
Point of view
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on so many levels. Thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2024 06:33
Time eroded memories
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
You have captured the very essence of this poem in the title, beautifully done 🌹
August 12th, 2024 04:57
Point of view
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
Neville said:
the interpretation of stimulus as deemed by the senses past present and future ..
the above definition has remained with me ever since our first lectures on the subject of perception many many many years ago .. and boy, have you just reinforced that here .. you are absolutely right and the rule is, it applies to absolutely everything and everyone .. the topic features large in my would be novel (A Certain Point of Beauty) ..
A splendid offering today sorenbarrett .. 100/100 at least ..
Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:23
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