Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Yesterday
rhmn_7 said:
Time alters everybody, like it or not, but in essence some still manage to stay the same.
August 18th, 2024 05:58
rhmn_7 said:
Time alters everybody, like it or not, but in essence some still manage to stay the same.
August 18th, 2024 05:58
Time eroded memories
Vsevolod Fomin said:
You have a very interesting poetic rhythm in your poems, the lines rhyme through one, there is a melodiousness when you listen to the poems to yourself. The lines are a little longer at the end, which creates a strong pulse effect and creates an atmosphere of total immersion in the poem.
August 18th, 2024 05:12
Vsevolod Fomin said:
You have a very interesting poetic rhythm in your poems, the lines rhyme through one, there is a melodiousness when you listen to the poems to yourself. The lines are a little longer at the end, which creates a strong pulse effect and creates an atmosphere of total immersion in the poem.
August 18th, 2024 05:12
Yesterday
Dan Williams said:
See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21
Dan Williams said:
See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21
Ripples
Dan Williams said:
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling. Very nice.
August 17th, 2024 23:18
Dan Williams said:
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling. Very nice.
August 17th, 2024 23:18
Yesterday
Cheeky Missy said:
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They showed us when we were young about the glorious future which lay ahead, but only lent us hints about the ugly face its elder being owned.
Paul McCartney\'s tribute seemed too fitting, so I included it.
August 17th, 2024 17:59
Cheeky Missy said:
[https://youtu.be/c3rkEeFS7Ng?si=fGqfiF5p0UsjwQsl]
They showed us when we were young about the glorious future which lay ahead, but only lent us hints about the ugly face its elder being owned.
Paul McCartney\'s tribute seemed too fitting, so I included it.
August 17th, 2024 17:59
Yesterday
Garth Rakumakoe said:
With every sentence one can feel how the hammer drives the nail home on this one. It starts of candidly, only to sober raw hurt, that stares one in the face, only to leave you peacefully, and without confrontation. Message delivered, gifted one.
August 17th, 2024 12:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
With every sentence one can feel how the hammer drives the nail home on this one. It starts of candidly, only to sober raw hurt, that stares one in the face, only to leave you peacefully, and without confrontation. Message delivered, gifted one.
August 17th, 2024 12:17
Yesterday
MendedFences27 said:
The constant change of life, exemplified by your poem. It reads like a sad story, with a not too happy ending. Sometimes, in reflection, we are able to select the good bits and enjoy those memories in later years. A fine poem. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:45
MendedFences27 said:
The constant change of life, exemplified by your poem. It reads like a sad story, with a not too happy ending. Sometimes, in reflection, we are able to select the good bits and enjoy those memories in later years. A fine poem. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:45
Yesterday
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of the most touching poems I\'ve ever read about missing ones wife, loved every line especially about your son, I really understand. Beautiful as can be and so creative. Bravo my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:10
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of the most touching poems I\'ve ever read about missing ones wife, loved every line especially about your son, I really understand. Beautiful as can be and so creative. Bravo my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:10
Yesterday
Neville said:
there are those who insist that nothing is new, or nothing ever changes ..
I say nothing stays the same and you just gone and proved it .. nice, very ..
August 17th, 2024 07:24
Neville said:
there are those who insist that nothing is new, or nothing ever changes ..
I say nothing stays the same and you just gone and proved it .. nice, very ..
August 17th, 2024 07:24
Yesterday
Doggerel Dave said:
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I think you covered that nicely.
August 17th, 2024 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I think you covered that nicely.
August 17th, 2024 05:52
Ripples
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:17
Ripples
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 16th, 2024 17:54
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 16th, 2024 17:54
Ripples
Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Ripples
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
Ripples
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
A taste of honey
Goldfinch60 said:
No never been kissed by a bee but have been kissed many times by my beeautiful lover.
Andy
August 16th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
No never been kissed by a bee but have been kissed many times by my beeautiful lover.
Andy
August 16th, 2024 01:19
Silent colors
Parisab said:
The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….
August 16th, 2024 01:03
Parisab said:
The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….
August 16th, 2024 01:03
Memory the cruelest reward
Dan Williams said:
Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This might be the most optimistic thing ever. Thanks, I needed that.
August 15th, 2024 23:58
Dan Williams said:
Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This might be the most optimistic thing ever. Thanks, I needed that.
August 15th, 2024 23:58
A taste of honey
Dan Williams said:
Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16
Dan Williams said:
Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16
A taste of honey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem is 🐝 the bee’s knees! 🐝 Thank you please! Excellent write! Enjoyed it a lot! A sweet 🍯 and beautiful poetic musing! Bravo!
August 15th, 2024 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem is 🐝 the bee’s knees! 🐝 Thank you please! Excellent write! Enjoyed it a lot! A sweet 🍯 and beautiful poetic musing! Bravo!
August 15th, 2024 22:46
A taste of honey
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
A taste of honey
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
A taste of honey
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
A taste of honey
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
A taste of honey
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
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