Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, beautiful words soren to lead me into this \'new Spring day\'.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, beautiful words soren to lead me into this \'new Spring day\'.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:21
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orchidee said:
You know that Helios chappie?!
It\'s not a person, daft Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 17th, 2024 11:09
orchidee said:
You know that Helios chappie?!
It\'s not a person, daft Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 17th, 2024 11:09
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2781 said:
More thought provoking- if I hadn\'t read your comment I would find it a critique of today, if not tomorrow.
February 17th, 2024 06:43
2781 said:
More thought provoking- if I hadn\'t read your comment I would find it a critique of today, if not tomorrow.
February 17th, 2024 06:43
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Teddy.15 said:
Utter beauty within your lines I was totally hynotized and in a spin right to the end and then I saw it I saw spring. Another kudos dear sorenbarret. 🌹 Thank you for sharing your poetry I am so sincerely excited each time to read your magnificent work. 🤗
February 17th, 2024 05:34
Teddy.15 said:
Utter beauty within your lines I was totally hynotized and in a spin right to the end and then I saw it I saw spring. Another kudos dear sorenbarret. 🌹 Thank you for sharing your poetry I am so sincerely excited each time to read your magnificent work. 🤗
February 17th, 2024 05:34
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Doggerel Dave said:
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the first and last really anchor the whole piece for me.
February 16th, 2024 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the first and last really anchor the whole piece for me.
February 16th, 2024 19:21
Make me one to go
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty. I like your kind of humour... O.
February 16th, 2024 15:41
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty. I like your kind of humour... O.
February 16th, 2024 15:41
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Teddy.15 said:
A very sad day for the world your poem is timeless, as ever making the reader digest your thoughts and reflections, fabulous last words sadly true my dear friend. A superb and extremely powerful piece of poetry. 🌹
February 16th, 2024 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
A very sad day for the world your poem is timeless, as ever making the reader digest your thoughts and reflections, fabulous last words sadly true my dear friend. A superb and extremely powerful piece of poetry. 🌹
February 16th, 2024 12:10
Make me one to go
Goldfinch60 said:
We may well be fleeced soren but all we have done is been moved to a better place in our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
We may well be fleeced soren but all we have done is been moved to a better place in our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:19
Make me one to go
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of Limoncello a shot glass filled with southern lemons and it\'s just what the doctor ordered any time after dinner. 🤗
February 15th, 2024 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of Limoncello a shot glass filled with southern lemons and it\'s just what the doctor ordered any time after dinner. 🤗
February 15th, 2024 12:23
Make me one to go
Bella Shepard said:
Such a potent sensory feel to this poem. As I read I can smell the lemon, taste its tartness and visualize the empty shell. Good things come in small packages, and here something wonderful!
February 15th, 2024 09:06
Bella Shepard said:
Such a potent sensory feel to this poem. As I read I can smell the lemon, taste its tartness and visualize the empty shell. Good things come in small packages, and here something wonderful!
February 15th, 2024 09:06
Make me one to go
orchidee said:
I must be briefer sometimes. Is it the soul of wit - brevity? From \'Hamlet\'. Lots of Shakey\'s quotable quotes in that, but he also said some daft stuff, I think.
February 15th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
I must be briefer sometimes. Is it the soul of wit - brevity? From \'Hamlet\'. Lots of Shakey\'s quotable quotes in that, but he also said some daft stuff, I think.
February 15th, 2024 02:57
A white crow on black snow
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, many people just do not want to see beyond the accepted reality.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, many people just do not want to see beyond the accepted reality.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:25
Prevarication
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate outcome..........
February 15th, 2024 00:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate outcome..........
February 15th, 2024 00:34
A white crow on black snow
arqios said:
A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only clue. This poem has me thinking on several tangents!
February 14th, 2024 05:59
arqios said:
A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only clue. This poem has me thinking on several tangents!
February 14th, 2024 05:59
A white crow on black snow
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe we each have a story and that we should treat eachother with compassion and empathy and never to judge a book by it\'s cover dear sorenbarret, another breathtaking piece of poetry which makes the reader pause to look through all the imagery. Your first lines to your last just wonderful. 🌹
February 14th, 2024 03:58
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe we each have a story and that we should treat eachother with compassion and empathy and never to judge a book by it\'s cover dear sorenbarret, another breathtaking piece of poetry which makes the reader pause to look through all the imagery. Your first lines to your last just wonderful. 🌹
February 14th, 2024 03:58
A white crow on black snow
orchidee said:
I shall look into these important variations! Good write SB.
I saw a black cat in a coal cellar at midnight - is that a variation?
February 14th, 2024 03:51
orchidee said:
I shall look into these important variations! Good write SB.
I saw a black cat in a coal cellar at midnight - is that a variation?
February 14th, 2024 03:51
Prevarication
orchidee said:
I recall procrasti-wotsit - procrastination, but not a lot of prevarication! lol.
February 13th, 2024 05:23
orchidee said:
I recall procrasti-wotsit - procrastination, but not a lot of prevarication! lol.
February 13th, 2024 05:23
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orchidee said:
Sins of commission, and sins of omission. How much pay is the \'commission\'? Doh! heehee. Not THAT sort of commission, says Fido.
Also - a bit of tongue twister:
\'We have done those things which we ought not to have done; and have left undone those things which we ought to have done\'.
Should we try a bit of prevari-wotsit?!
February 13th, 2024 05:19
orchidee said:
Sins of commission, and sins of omission. How much pay is the \'commission\'? Doh! heehee. Not THAT sort of commission, says Fido.
Also - a bit of tongue twister:
\'We have done those things which we ought not to have done; and have left undone those things which we ought to have done\'.
Should we try a bit of prevari-wotsit?!
February 13th, 2024 05:19
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Teddy.15 said:
Well I do believe the proof is simply in the pudding if you know what I mean. And maybe a red face now and again one would hope lol this is a fun one for me 😁 my dear sorenbarret I can tell a liar a mile away, unfortunate from experience. A wonderful senryu provoking the reader to respond. Hopefully honestly.🤣 🌹
February 13th, 2024 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
Well I do believe the proof is simply in the pudding if you know what I mean. And maybe a red face now and again one would hope lol this is a fun one for me 😁 my dear sorenbarret I can tell a liar a mile away, unfortunate from experience. A wonderful senryu provoking the reader to respond. Hopefully honestly.🤣 🌹
February 13th, 2024 05:16
Prevarication
arqios said:
Delving into the depths in its brevity. These lines possess and regenerate power in the pondering thereof.
February 13th, 2024 05:12
arqios said:
Delving into the depths in its brevity. These lines possess and regenerate power in the pondering thereof.
February 13th, 2024 05:12
Dragonfly
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, dragon flies are wonderful to watch.
Andy
February 13th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, dragon flies are wonderful to watch.
Andy
February 13th, 2024 02:48
Dragonfly
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture of the dragonfly perfectly. Superb work.
February 12th, 2024 15:39
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture of the dragonfly perfectly. Superb work.
February 12th, 2024 15:39
Dragonfly
Teddy.15 said:
You make it look flawlessly easy (kudos) beautiful emotional and just a true joy to read. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 11:33
Teddy.15 said:
You make it look flawlessly easy (kudos) beautiful emotional and just a true joy to read. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 11:33
Dragonfly
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m enraptured by a dragonfly when I rarely see them, Soren. And certainly not in the variety of colours (Sizes also?) or quantities you do. You have penned a fitting tribute.
February 12th, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m enraptured by a dragonfly when I rarely see them, Soren. And certainly not in the variety of colours (Sizes also?) or quantities you do. You have penned a fitting tribute.
February 12th, 2024 07:14
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