Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Eye of a madman
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Rights that are left
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Rights that are left
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Rights that are left
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Rights that are left
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
One small voice
Teddy.15 said:
Imagery is superb and so too the metaphor. 🩷
November 10th, 2023 00:46
Teddy.15 said:
Imagery is superb and so too the metaphor. 🩷
November 10th, 2023 00:46
One small voice
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I thought paradigm was a pair of dimes (U.S. money). lol.
November 9th, 2023 14:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I thought paradigm was a pair of dimes (U.S. money). lol.
November 9th, 2023 14:18
No one
rhmn_7 said:
You have witnessed yourself, so there is someone in that story.
October 22nd, 2023 09:04
rhmn_7 said:
You have witnessed yourself, so there is someone in that story.
October 22nd, 2023 09:04
No one
Firefall said:
What amazing experiences! You can feel your love of nature.
October 17th, 2023 16:04
Firefall said:
What amazing experiences! You can feel your love of nature.
October 17th, 2023 16:04
No one
orchidee said:
I never knew ya did all that already, being only age, erm, 21 again! heehee.
October 17th, 2023 09:49
orchidee said:
I never knew ya did all that already, being only age, erm, 21 again! heehee.
October 17th, 2023 09:49
No one
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
October 17th, 2023 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
October 17th, 2023 08:43
No one
Teddy.15 said:
I read something very similar on your home notes which I found incredibly marvelous. You truly are inspiring Sorenbarret ❤️
October 17th, 2023 08:09
Teddy.15 said:
I read something very similar on your home notes which I found incredibly marvelous. You truly are inspiring Sorenbarret ❤️
October 17th, 2023 08:09
No one
Pop64 said:
A person who has seen and done so much, Wonderfully descriptive write
October 17th, 2023 06:44
Pop64 said:
A person who has seen and done so much, Wonderfully descriptive write
October 17th, 2023 06:44
No one
novaa said:
Beautifully describes an adventurous connection with nature. Loved it!
October 17th, 2023 06:04
novaa said:
Beautifully describes an adventurous connection with nature. Loved it!
October 17th, 2023 06:04
Hanging by fingernails
L. B. Mek said:
we\'re in-sync again in our posts my friend
lift them syllable weights
pump those positivity muscles
ink those knockout metaphors
claim your belt and reign supreme!
i\'ll be in your corner
iced towels and Vaseline in-hand!
October 16th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
we\'re in-sync again in our posts my friend
lift them syllable weights
pump those positivity muscles
ink those knockout metaphors
claim your belt and reign supreme!
i\'ll be in your corner
iced towels and Vaseline in-hand!
October 16th, 2023 04:51
Pitbull blood sport
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I\'m a dog in a fight against Cerberus\' rage in the betting pit.
Released in a fog, from the cage, a loss, in a murderous double cross, that dries spit.
I\'ve been bit, ears torn. Too late! Rabid, howls and growls fill the air.
As I sit, in scorn, at hell\'s gate, foaming jowls, gnashing teeth bare.\'
we don\'t need to wait till we\'re at
hell\'s gates
to wage war with Cerberus\'s heads
they visit us, in our daily chaos
taking bites at a time, we knew this
when reading Dante\'s words:
\'\'Abandon all hope ye who enter here\'
thus it\'s too late, to try and fight
once through those inferno gates
no, cherished friend
let\'s gnarl and bark and bite
our ill-fate\'s, one at a time
whilst we still can...!
October 16th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I\'m a dog in a fight against Cerberus\' rage in the betting pit.
Released in a fog, from the cage, a loss, in a murderous double cross, that dries spit.
I\'ve been bit, ears torn. Too late! Rabid, howls and growls fill the air.
As I sit, in scorn, at hell\'s gate, foaming jowls, gnashing teeth bare.\'
we don\'t need to wait till we\'re at
hell\'s gates
to wage war with Cerberus\'s heads
they visit us, in our daily chaos
taking bites at a time, we knew this
when reading Dante\'s words:
\'\'Abandon all hope ye who enter here\'
thus it\'s too late, to try and fight
once through those inferno gates
no, cherished friend
let\'s gnarl and bark and bite
our ill-fate\'s, one at a time
whilst we still can...!
October 16th, 2023 04:46
Hanging by fingernails
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fulfilled life continue for a long time to come soren.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that fulfilled life continue for a long time to come soren.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:26
Hanging by fingernails
2781 said:
Down here they legislate against risk taking.
October 15th, 2023 07:08
2781 said:
Down here they legislate against risk taking.
October 15th, 2023 07:08
Hanging by fingernails
Teddy.15 said:
And may you do some more for a very long time to come sir. A fabulous poem that sped up as I read it, living life on the edge teaches us so very much. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 06:50
Teddy.15 said:
And may you do some more for a very long time to come sir. A fabulous poem that sped up as I read it, living life on the edge teaches us so very much. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 06:50
Pitbull blood sport
orchidee said:
Man mistreating animals again. The dogs surely only do it because they are trained to do it.
October 14th, 2023 02:09
orchidee said:
Man mistreating animals again. The dogs surely only do it because they are trained to do it.
October 14th, 2023 02:09
Time
L. B. Mek said:
Time for sale?
not thanks
I\'m good living out
the original sentence
I was fated with
ya\'ll stay and enjoy
the show
I wait for my spaceship
escape, no regrets
I wasn\'t made for this
denomination of a life
too old a soul..
too weary a heart..
and see too much
despite my short-sighted
handicap..
lol
October 13th, 2023 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
Time for sale?
not thanks
I\'m good living out
the original sentence
I was fated with
ya\'ll stay and enjoy
the show
I wait for my spaceship
escape, no regrets
I wasn\'t made for this
denomination of a life
too old a soul..
too weary a heart..
and see too much
despite my short-sighted
handicap..
lol
October 13th, 2023 06:04
All\'z he, I, me, r (things arn\'t what they used to be)
L. B. Mek said:
\'how strong the song\'
and oh what glory
in having lived that song
once,
even though all the bitter
notes,
that glory can never be
forgot...
I so relate to your
poetic melancholy musicality, my friend
some might disagree
but I choose to believe
there is glory in having experienced
then lost
than, to have never known
and be left bereft of the details
so many sing about
when celebrating life..
in the ashes of aftermath
let us remember and hold-on
to what warmth
that fire once granted our frozen
hearts..
(what can i say dear Poet
BRILLIANT!)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'how strong the song\'
and oh what glory
in having lived that song
once,
even though all the bitter
notes,
that glory can never be
forgot...
I so relate to your
poetic melancholy musicality, my friend
some might disagree
but I choose to believe
there is glory in having experienced
then lost
than, to have never known
and be left bereft of the details
so many sing about
when celebrating life..
in the ashes of aftermath
let us remember and hold-on
to what warmth
that fire once granted our frozen
hearts..
(what can i say dear Poet
BRILLIANT!)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 05:59
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time can be so unnerving in our life sometimes but my time on this world has been wonderful, may yours be the same Soren.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Time can be so unnerving in our life sometimes but my time on this world has been wonderful, may yours be the same Soren.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:07
All\'z he, I, me, r (things arn\'t what they used to be)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:33
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