Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Thad Wilk said:

A deep, dark and
thought provoking write! ๐Ÿค”
A few things came to mind,
political one.. ,๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Thank you for sharing
wonderfully woven!! ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace. Thad

November 26th, 2024 11:19

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Neville said:



I\'m not entirely sure whether this has anything to do with subliminal messages that historically were used (for example in cinemas) to get folk to buy a particular product .. if it is, then it works .. but if it isn\'t, then it works .. even better ... Neville

November 26th, 2024 10:54

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 26th, 2024 10:46

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful write, friend! Well done! I have felt this, and it is an important exercise to consider how external influences shape our desires and how we grapple with the passage of time and the allure of escapism. I could not find a time to want to escape more than now. And we just got through a ton of political ads, not to bring that into it, where what was once despised is now idolized. Then we get ourselves into the holiday season. โ€œBuried peace mournsโ€ indeed! Not sure if I am correct in my interpretation, but this is what hit me when I read. Again, well done Soren! A wonderful write! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ

November 26th, 2024 09:37

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arqios said:

Mmmโ€ฆ quite thought provoking! It might also be interesting to see how memories vary for each specific ad between persons or generations even.

November 26th, 2024 07:14

Drip from the tap
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an intriguing write about the place we have always probably been in soren.

Andy

November 26th, 2024 02:43

Little bird
NafisaSB said:

so beautiful, and so true.. freedom is so essential in life

November 25th, 2024 23:49

Drip from the tap
RSM0812 said:

Story of my life. Reminds me of the pain and lonliness a person can feel when they have no one to turn to.

November 25th, 2024 22:00

Drip from the tap
Mutley Ravishes said:

Physics, math and chemicals
Have gone mental
Intellectual
Overdrive!


November 25th, 2024 19:01

Drip from the tap
aDarkerMind said:

as impressive as always Soren.

worthy of much applause.

November 25th, 2024 14:52

Drip from the tap
Teddy.15 said:

Superb dear sorrenbarret I could hear the drip. ๐ŸŒน

November 25th, 2024 14:37

Sepia dreams
River123 said:

Thatโ€™s surrealism at its finest . Beautiful images .
Luv it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

November 25th, 2024 12:25

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Doggerel Dave said:

Wonder if that guy sleeping on the bench in the park....... go Soren?

November 25th, 2024 09:06

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is excellent, friend. I have been there and know this situation and feeling well. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘ Bravo in capturing it so poignantly. And the title...brilliant!

November 25th, 2024 08:52

Drip from the tap
orchidee said:

I don\'t recognise KP\'s face now with all the botox. I thought it was an old trout. lol.

November 25th, 2024 07:44

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Neville said:



where have all the plumbers gone when you need one or two eh\' ๐Ÿ˜Ž

November 25th, 2024 07:03

Drip from the tap
arqios said:

Like the incessant dripping of the tap! Soren, this is marve!

November 25th, 2024 05:40

Fear
Bobby O said:

Sir, like you added an additional chapter to Danteโ€˜s Inferno all of that would be a hell descriptive queasy. Iโ€™m glad Iโ€™m not at that place. You did a good job man you stayed with the story and stuck with it and delivered. Nice job. Sensei.

November 25th, 2024 03:41

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Goldfinch60 said:

Luckily I have been a good boy for most of my life soren. LOL

Andy

November 25th, 2024 02:53

Fear
Mutley Ravishes said:

\"Though your sins are like scarlet, they will be white as snow. If they are red as crimson, they will become like wool.\"
How does this happen? Nothing like a mystery to get the juices flowing!

November 24th, 2024 20:19

Fear
Alan R said:

Soo profound! The flow, the agonyโ€ฆ.

November 24th, 2024 19:01

Fear
Cassie58 said:

You have summed up the emotion
of fear here Soren superbly. Not an place any of us wants to visit. Well penned.

November 24th, 2024 17:18

Fear
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Powerful expression of fear, and your use of language to describe that which is so universal, really delivers. Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

November 24th, 2024 16:01

Glass prison
SureshG said:

Simplicity evoking sense of joy.

November 24th, 2024 13:32

Fear
Neville said:



........................... could this be a portrait of purgatory by any chance .. asking because I am both intrigued and very nosey .. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿง๐Ÿ‘

November 24th, 2024 13:08

Fear
orchidee said:

I\'ll give KP, not pieces of glass under the skin (that\'s going too far, says Fido to me), but bug prickles across the flesh - as in creepy crawlies lol.

November 24th, 2024 13:01

Distant drumes
Teddy.15 said:

May the drums roll for an encore superb. ๐ŸŒน

November 24th, 2024 12:05

Fear
Teddy.15 said:

Painful reading my friend, brilliantly executed as always, packing a massive punch and reflection. ๐ŸŒน Something I have suffered from is definitely fear but I always try to overcome even if it takes a while.

November 24th, 2024 10:14

Fear
2781 said:

Guantanamo Bay?

November 24th, 2024 08:09

Fear
arqios said:

Now that was very real, excruciating!

November 24th, 2024 07:33



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