Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Tombs to dreams
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
How you look at it
Bella Shepard said:
For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have framed it on the page serves to emphasize the opposites of life that have to be there. Such a great write my friend, and such a fav!
November 28th, 2022 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have framed it on the page serves to emphasize the opposites of life that have to be there. Such a great write my friend, and such a fav!
November 28th, 2022 12:25
How you look at it
Neville said:
.. uniquely poemed and elsewise excellent too .. very much enjoyed ..
November 28th, 2022 07:00
Neville said:
.. uniquely poemed and elsewise excellent too .. very much enjoyed ..
November 28th, 2022 07:00
How you look at it
L. B. Mek said:
a great write, with an important message!
thank you, kind Poet
(this, that perspective: directive
of mindset
and importance of outlook
defining choices
curating regrets
and anchoring our achievements
if only
all monumental crossroads in life
came with angled mirrors
to widen the scope of our horizons)
November 28th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
a great write, with an important message!
thank you, kind Poet
(this, that perspective: directive
of mindset
and importance of outlook
defining choices
curating regrets
and anchoring our achievements
if only
all monumental crossroads in life
came with angled mirrors
to widen the scope of our horizons)
November 28th, 2022 06:39
How you look at it
dusk arising said:
The choice is from within us once our mettel is tested.
November 28th, 2022 06:15
dusk arising said:
The choice is from within us once our mettel is tested.
November 28th, 2022 06:15
How you look at it
Doggerel Dave said:
And I thought I\'d got hope - despair, glass half full/empty all sorted. You\'ve given my picture more colour, Soren.
November 28th, 2022 05:53
Doggerel Dave said:
And I thought I\'d got hope - despair, glass half full/empty all sorted. You\'ve given my picture more colour, Soren.
November 28th, 2022 05:53
How you look at it
arqios said:
A poem that celebrates and uplifts! Thanks Soren.
November 28th, 2022 05:17
arqios said:
A poem that celebrates and uplifts! Thanks Soren.
November 28th, 2022 05:17
A thin line
arqios said:
So thin in fact that one does overlap the other that is dominant. Growing up they told us that everyone has a dash of neuroses, one and all. The human mind is not black or white but actually filled with much grey matter. LOL. Good to be reading this. Thanks Soren. /Rik.
November 23rd, 2022 07:43
arqios said:
So thin in fact that one does overlap the other that is dominant. Growing up they told us that everyone has a dash of neuroses, one and all. The human mind is not black or white but actually filled with much grey matter. LOL. Good to be reading this. Thanks Soren. /Rik.
November 23rd, 2022 07:43
A thought
Bella Shepard said:
Concise and beautifully to the point. The last line is a gem. Love it!
November 17th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Concise and beautifully to the point. The last line is a gem. Love it!
November 17th, 2022 12:31
Where is the rhyme?
Bella Shepard said:
This is a rhyming junkies dream, and I stand accused. Love it, love it, love it! You have striven and so beautifully given, a piece so sublime it staggers my mind. I have to rave, cause it\'s such a fav!
November 16th, 2022 16:22
Bella Shepard said:
This is a rhyming junkies dream, and I stand accused. Love it, love it, love it! You have striven and so beautifully given, a piece so sublime it staggers my mind. I have to rave, cause it\'s such a fav!
November 16th, 2022 16:22
Where is the rhyme?
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting soren, I\'ll have to give it some thought.... Nah, too much of a traditionalist to try it myself....but provided you give me warning first....
November 15th, 2022 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting soren, I\'ll have to give it some thought.... Nah, too much of a traditionalist to try it myself....but provided you give me warning first....
November 15th, 2022 19:42
Where is the rhyme?
arqios said:
I\'ve seen a first word rhyme posted and it was quite interesting. This being the second!
November 15th, 2022 07:31
arqios said:
I\'ve seen a first word rhyme posted and it was quite interesting. This being the second!
November 15th, 2022 07:31
I alone
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve created something very unique with this rhyming pattern, and it should have a name. I read it aloud, placing emphasis on the first word of each line, and the result was quite intriguing. Will there be more? Hope so.
November 13th, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve created something very unique with this rhyming pattern, and it should have a name. I read it aloud, placing emphasis on the first word of each line, and the result was quite intriguing. Will there be more? Hope so.
November 13th, 2022 14:26
I alone
arqios said:
A profound weaving Soren. Truly moved by this and on a Sunday as well!
November 13th, 2022 07:39
arqios said:
A profound weaving Soren. Truly moved by this and on a Sunday as well!
November 13th, 2022 07:39
Mea Culpa
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyming pattern and cadence of this piece, it makes me want to read it aloud in one breath. It\'s energy is palpable and truly serves to enhance the emotion of a painful relationship. Well done dear friend!
November 12th, 2022 13:44
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyming pattern and cadence of this piece, it makes me want to read it aloud in one breath. It\'s energy is palpable and truly serves to enhance the emotion of a painful relationship. Well done dear friend!
November 12th, 2022 13:44
Go!
Bella Shepard said:
I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself singing it. A great way to refresh!
November 12th, 2022 12:23
Bella Shepard said:
I think you should have set this one to music, I can just hear myself singing it. A great way to refresh!
November 12th, 2022 12:23
Amare
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:19
Amare
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:18
Bella Shepard said:
You address the enigma of love in such a profound way, every line rings so true. I guess you could point to the biological element, and say that it\'s neurons firing and hormones releasing. But can you really measure it in a laboratory? You have described what is incomprehensible so beautifully, and it is such a fav.
November 12th, 2022 12:18
Amare
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Amare
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
Amare
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
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