Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Tears of night
arqios said:

We’ve had a couple of late afternoons with ‘storm cells’ that caused power outages, flooding and mangled trees, last night’s was particularly fierce and this poem has captured its mood and intensity.

October 9th, 2024 04:58

A leaf
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren and so very meaningful.

Andy

October 9th, 2024 01:24

A leaf
Dan Williams said:

Helps takes the demise easier and gently predicts the future. Sensitive and accurate, as usual. With you, \"as usual\" is almost redundant.

October 9th, 2024 00:11

A leaf
Thad Wilk said:

A most splendid and
eloquently expressed
poem and
the imagery sublime!! 🎖️
Another grand slam,
seems you do it all the time!! 😄
My pleasure to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 8th, 2024 20:57

A leaf
Ladywithaquill said:

I am just a fan of all your poems. You have such a way with words, the imagery, the rhyme, the rhythm, somehow you manage to make it perfect every single time. And this fall poem is no exception.

October 8th, 2024 15:09

A leaf
MaxSmith said:

Beautifuly written, appreciated the leaf reference to delve deep with your story.

October 8th, 2024 14:00

A leaf
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 8th, 2024 11:28

A leaf
Tony36 said:

L9ve it

October 8th, 2024 09:49

A leaf
Neville said:



This is more autumnal than October and in all its hues .. Let\'s just leaf it at that .. but with a dubble 👍👍\'s up from me .. Neville

October 8th, 2024 07:53

A leaf
arqios said:

The cadence and forward movement of this poem brings us along a journey, like all of life together at once, presented to us by the seasons. Majestic Soren!

October 8th, 2024 06:49

A leaf
peet said:

Lovely words and a deep meaning there.

October 8th, 2024 06:08

Rights of respect
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, what has happened to respect in this current world in which we live?

Andy

October 8th, 2024 01:09

Piled logs
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning,
skillfully expressed indeed!! 👍
Great use of metaphor,
and my pleasure to read!!
Best regards. ✌️
Thad


October 7th, 2024 22:45

Rights of respect
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍
Powerful penning
I have to say!! 💪
Last stanza
blew me away!! 💯
Eloquently woven!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 7th, 2024 18:19

Rights of respect
markashley1961 said:

nice

October 7th, 2024 06:45

Piled logs
Neville said:



It\'s that bloomin time of year again isn\'t it .. beautiful but starting to get ever so chilly .. Neville

October 7th, 2024 03:31

Piled logs
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories can be very important in time soren.

Andy

October 7th, 2024 01:16

Life is but a dream
A.H. Browning said:

Excellent‼️‼️‼️

October 7th, 2024 00:31

Piled logs
Dan Williams said:

\"to become but an ashen memory\", kind of like us I guess. More good work here.

October 7th, 2024 00:08

Piled logs
arqios said:

Solid and strong, Soren! Innate indelible beauty in pristine lines. So glad to chance upon it 😊

October 6th, 2024 23:09

Masters of the universe?
arqios said:

Boneless fish would look like jellyfish minus the jelly and sea cucumbers 🥒 without that rubbery feel… gripping imagery!

October 6th, 2024 22:55

Piled logs
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

October 6th, 2024 19:05

Dust of a dream
arqios said:

Mighty images, familiar but filled with image and meaning. Resonates with souls well traveled 🙏🏻

October 6th, 2024 18:03

Piled logs
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 6th, 2024 07:49

Piled logs
Demar Desu said:

This poem should be stamped on any business that does cremation

October 6th, 2024 04:55

Circles of the invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

You ae right soren, being on this earth is just a flash in the pan of our existence.

Andy

October 6th, 2024 01:08

Circles of the invisible
Dan Williams said:

The idea of \"negatives of trees\" terrifies me. Especially when described by \"invisible ink from a dried-up pen\" So nice.

October 6th, 2024 00:12

Circles of the invisible
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write. Indeed we are all born dying and the race back does being! Amazingly deep and profound write!!! From the first line to the last, brilliant!

October 5th, 2024 21:27

Circles of the invisible
2781 said:

Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.

October 5th, 2024 10:45

Circles of the invisible
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 5th, 2024 08:28



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