Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The fly
Lorenz said:

Lord of flies .William Golden .1954.

December 18th, 2024 09:18

Call of the earth
NafisaSB said:

comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure


December 18th, 2024 07:22

Words of the prophets
NafisaSB said:

it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread

December 18th, 2024 07:11

The fly
Teddy.15 said:

There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb ๐ŸŒน

December 18th, 2024 06:00

The fly
Melancholic~Onion said:

These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.

December 18th, 2024 03:52

The fly
arqios said:

Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, itโ€™s thousand googly eyes to boot!

December 18th, 2024 03:47

The fly
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 18th, 2024 03:34

Call of the earth
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope you are not suffering from dementia soren, my wife had it and I know all about it, she passed five years ago with dementia.

Andy

December 18th, 2024 02:49

Call of the earth
Neville said:


I have thought about it long and hard and now conclude there is no way you could have chosen a more apt title to front a topic that if we take enough breaths will have a vast impact on us all .. I have never been afraid of dying or of my own departure, but I am not keen on this getting old malarky .. the losses seem to occur back on back & with increasing ferociousness .. I still have my hair and a few marbles but still feel like a casualty .. I am not in the least bit surprised by the number of folk ho rate these words of yours so highly my friend .. and believe me, I do too .. Neville ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

December 18th, 2024 01:28

Call of the earth
Dan Williams said:

It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding things to counter this mood get harder and harder to find. \"Now winter\'s cold is coming\".

December 18th, 2024 00:51

Call of the earth
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll circle around for a bit longer if you don\'t mind - if I take this too seriously, I\'ll crash...
Not sure if you are serious about the cost of living, Soren - be interesting, as I can\'t see metaphors being very handy there....๐Ÿ˜œ

December 17th, 2024 23:16

Call of the earth
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful work, time never loses. Carpe Diem, my friend.

December 17th, 2024 22:52

Call of the earth
Ladywithaquill said:

Death and decay make for great poetry!

December 17th, 2024 19:44

Call of the earth
Mutley Ravishes said:

This body will rot
Only if it\'s in the grave
Is that not the intention
Of the Creator, I say?!
Look to the east
On your quest
Then take the journey
To the west


December 17th, 2024 19:38

Call of the earth
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

Open. Honest. Truth. Very well written!

December 17th, 2024 15:47

Call of the earth
David Wakeling said:

In each life there is a rise and fall. There secret is not to care.A powerful existential poem

December 17th, 2024 14:40

Call of the earth
gray0328 said:

We must accept the aging process, but we don\'t have to like it. I still have all my hair, but I\'m losing other things. Nice work Soren

December 17th, 2024 13:34

Peace on earth, good will
vicecream said:

Much for us to learn from our woody brethren

December 17th, 2024 12:58

The perfect poem
Starlight said:

Awwwโค

December 17th, 2024 12:40

Call of the earth
Poetic Licence said:

For a minute i thought i was reading my doctors report, really enjoyed the read

December 17th, 2024 11:22

Call of the earth
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 17th, 2024 10:30

Call of the earth
arqios said:

Liked and Faved. Part of me has days like thatโ€ฆ now Iโ€™m nursing my sore feet. Just back from a much needed shift as the cost of living keeps us toiling even past what once was typical in oneโ€™s lifespan. So we trudge along like a tattered jalopy.

December 17th, 2024 08:28

Call of the earth
Teddy.15 said:

Well aren\'t you just a beam of sunshine today... ๐Ÿ’œ So incredibly gracious an honest look at the seasons of one\'s self.

December 17th, 2024 04:01

Call of the earth
Lorenz said:

Inspired writing as a part of imortality...

December 17th, 2024 03:55

Call of the earth
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 17th, 2024 03:19

Poseidon\'s bones
Goldfinch60 said:

I used to smoke a meerschaum pipe many years ago soren.

Andy

December 17th, 2024 02:50

Poseidon\'s bones
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Oh boy, did it make me toil! Chemistry was weak kneed...Meerschaum, well it was something I skipped...now it came to boil ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ค

Absolutely loved it

December 17th, 2024 01:27

Poseidon\'s bones
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks for the info, Soren. I wonder if Mithrandir\'s pipe was made of meerschaum?

December 16th, 2024 18:53

Poseidon\'s bones
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

December 16th, 2024 17:11

Poseidon\'s bones
Thad Wilk said:

My Granddad had a
collection of different
styles of pipes he used
to own!
I wonder if any were
made of, chip of sea bone!ยฟยฟ
Awesome read, brought
back some mem\'ries. ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 16th, 2024 16:13



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