Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Exquisite
L. B. Mek said:
Grecian myth and Homer, wisdom
alive and well!
brilliantly, reimagined
and succinctly worded
yet, deep with nuanced
commentary,
on our despairingly mythological, endless
\'age of anxiety\'
and that, escapism via
Hennessey or Valium induced
warped reality
of nihilistically, grim:
progressive modernity
(just a Brilliant execution!
thanks for sharing)
January 31st, 2022 08:07
L. B. Mek said:
Grecian myth and Homer, wisdom
alive and well!
brilliantly, reimagined
and succinctly worded
yet, deep with nuanced
commentary,
on our despairingly mythological, endless
\'age of anxiety\'
and that, escapism via
Hennessey or Valium induced
warped reality
of nihilistically, grim:
progressive modernity
(just a Brilliant execution!
thanks for sharing)
January 31st, 2022 08:07
Words
Buzz Bray said:
Powerful words about words and how they can hurt even without being meant to. To lose that communication in a relationship is terrible. You convey the feelings very well. Excellent read.
January 29th, 2022 16:48
Buzz Bray said:
Powerful words about words and how they can hurt even without being meant to. To lose that communication in a relationship is terrible. You convey the feelings very well. Excellent read.
January 29th, 2022 16:48
My Dark Side
Paul Bell said:
It feels like you\'ve just moved over to the dark side, and you\'re going to stay there, hell or high water.
January 29th, 2022 07:17
Paul Bell said:
It feels like you\'ve just moved over to the dark side, and you\'re going to stay there, hell or high water.
January 29th, 2022 07:17
When
Buzz Bray said:
I really like this poem. The structure i.e. question - answer, reminds me of a didactic poem I read long ago. \"When does defective become perfect?...When hate becomes love.\" Excellent!
January 27th, 2022 07:57
Buzz Bray said:
I really like this poem. The structure i.e. question - answer, reminds me of a didactic poem I read long ago. \"When does defective become perfect?...When hate becomes love.\" Excellent!
January 27th, 2022 07:57
All Things
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and kind comments
January 26th, 2022 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and kind comments
January 26th, 2022 15:38
All Things
Crystal Hope said:
love the metaphor and feelings you expressed yourself.
wonderful write
January 26th, 2022 15:15
Crystal Hope said:
love the metaphor and feelings you expressed yourself.
wonderful write
January 26th, 2022 15:15
A longing for honey
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and comment. Maybe get out from under the hives thumb
January 25th, 2022 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your review and comment. Maybe get out from under the hives thumb
January 25th, 2022 07:22
A longing for honey
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be Andrew or Harry. One needs a maid\'s slap, the other needs to get from under the wive\'s thumb.
January 25th, 2022 07:00
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be Andrew or Harry. One needs a maid\'s slap, the other needs to get from under the wive\'s thumb.
January 25th, 2022 07:00
The Web
Daydream Believer said:
Beautiful poem
You captured its magical elegance
But also it’s darker side hints in your well woven lines ⭐️
January 22nd, 2022 08:04
Daydream Believer said:
Beautiful poem
You captured its magical elegance
But also it’s darker side hints in your well woven lines ⭐️
January 22nd, 2022 08:04
A moment in time
dusk arising said:
I think this is among the finest pieces i have read here on mps over the years. Very relateable for me in my grey haired years.
Truly excellent and a must for being placed among my favourites.
Thank you for such a wonderful read.
January 19th, 2022 11:47
dusk arising said:
I think this is among the finest pieces i have read here on mps over the years. Very relateable for me in my grey haired years.
Truly excellent and a must for being placed among my favourites.
Thank you for such a wonderful read.
January 19th, 2022 11:47
A moment in time
Travis Kasparov said:
Cool poem. I like the rhyme scheme and theme
January 19th, 2022 10:32
Travis Kasparov said:
Cool poem. I like the rhyme scheme and theme
January 19th, 2022 10:32
Nature
GypsyLady said:
what a wonderful brevity with an inspirational message of endurance and strength! Love it!
January 18th, 2022 10:14
GypsyLady said:
what a wonderful brevity with an inspirational message of endurance and strength! Love it!
January 18th, 2022 10:14
Nature
L. B. Mek said:
soon
but never: too
soon
(wonderful, thanks for sharing)
January 18th, 2022 08:38
L. B. Mek said:
soon
but never: too
soon
(wonderful, thanks for sharing)
January 18th, 2022 08:38
Point of view
GypsyLady said:
this is cleverly done with wonderful rhyme and flow, and a very thought-provoking piece as well! Quite enjoyable!
January 17th, 2022 16:39
GypsyLady said:
this is cleverly done with wonderful rhyme and flow, and a very thought-provoking piece as well! Quite enjoyable!
January 17th, 2022 16:39
Aren’t We Special
L. B. Mek said:
\'What is smart? Adaptivity is a start\'
acute commentary
from an observant mind
inking
words of poetic insight..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 17th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'What is smart? Adaptivity is a start\'
acute commentary
from an observant mind
inking
words of poetic insight..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 17th, 2022 06:39
At the end of my fope
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I appreciate your comments
January 16th, 2022 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I appreciate your comments
January 16th, 2022 20:38
At the end of my fope
L. B. Mek said:
buttery-smooth, flow
kinda like how most lies
are stealthily silken, whispered
to bypass our awareness..
a fun read, thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 07:39
L. B. Mek said:
buttery-smooth, flow
kinda like how most lies
are stealthily silken, whispered
to bypass our awareness..
a fun read, thanks for sharing
January 14th, 2022 07:39
Esau
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your comment. Yes unfortunately that is true.
January 12th, 2022 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for your comment. Yes unfortunately that is true.
January 12th, 2022 10:01
Esau
Paul Bell said:
Liberty, fought and paid for, just don\'t mention it out loud, or you could lose your liberty.
January 12th, 2022 06:09
Paul Bell said:
Liberty, fought and paid for, just don\'t mention it out loud, or you could lose your liberty.
January 12th, 2022 06:09
Soft Darkness
geekslutnerdgirl said:
I really like this. It moves you beyond space time.
January 9th, 2022 11:14
geekslutnerdgirl said:
I really like this. It moves you beyond space time.
January 9th, 2022 11:14
Soft Darkness
Paul Bell said:
This feels like the very end of life and beyond.
January 9th, 2022 09:53
Paul Bell said:
This feels like the very end of life and beyond.
January 9th, 2022 09:53
Purpose
spilleronsheet said:
True so true
Very beautiful and powerful words
Especially hooked to the last lines
Welcome to mps dear poet
Keep writing and sharing
January 3rd, 2022 14:18
spilleronsheet said:
True so true
Very beautiful and powerful words
Especially hooked to the last lines
Welcome to mps dear poet
Keep writing and sharing
January 3rd, 2022 14:18
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