Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Jingle Bills
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen an eight legged horse. It would save money to hire it, and save a horse\'s energy. Only one horse needed instead of two? lol.
December 16th, 2022 09:59
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen an eight legged horse. It would save money to hire it, and save a horse\'s energy. Only one horse needed instead of two? lol.
December 16th, 2022 09:59
Sombras
L. B. Mek said:
\'Changing with every transformation The stronger the love The more we are captive The greater the control\'
I hear Pessoa, more specifically
Albert Caeiro
that most pragmatic and cynical
of poetic voices
but in that very directness
there\'s a romanticism straining at the leashes
wishing, the world was more like the way your wrote it
I just wish i could speak/read the language to appreciate it in full
December 16th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Changing with every transformation The stronger the love The more we are captive The greater the control\'
I hear Pessoa, more specifically
Albert Caeiro
that most pragmatic and cynical
of poetic voices
but in that very directness
there\'s a romanticism straining at the leashes
wishing, the world was more like the way your wrote it
I just wish i could speak/read the language to appreciate it in full
December 16th, 2022 05:11
Panic
L. B. Mek said:
what a relatable distillation
at once offering a comprehensive
description
and simultaneously, invoking remembrance
of our own experiences..
really well executed, a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 16th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
what a relatable distillation
at once offering a comprehensive
description
and simultaneously, invoking remembrance
of our own experiences..
really well executed, a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 16th, 2022 04:58
Sombras
arqios said:
In the shadows is a truth, a concept that is nascent as the womb good one Soren. Bom dia! (And I am not fluent in Portuguese at all!)
December 15th, 2022 19:40
arqios said:
In the shadows is a truth, a concept that is nascent as the womb good one Soren. Bom dia! (And I am not fluent in Portuguese at all!)
December 15th, 2022 19:40
Panic
arqios said:
As with night terrors and anxiety attacks, the sheerness of unadulterated panic is often unexplainable to the mind! Thanks Soren
December 14th, 2022 20:48
arqios said:
As with night terrors and anxiety attacks, the sheerness of unadulterated panic is often unexplainable to the mind! Thanks Soren
December 14th, 2022 20:48
Panic
Doggerel Dave said:
Impending doom I cannot quite place... Thankfully once I declined the medication, it disappeared. A well written reminder of a terrible time. Thanks Soren.
December 14th, 2022 19:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Impending doom I cannot quite place... Thankfully once I declined the medication, it disappeared. A well written reminder of a terrible time. Thanks Soren.
December 14th, 2022 19:01
Cat as trophy
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun
had those minutiae details
of a true story..
a lovely read, thank you!
December 12th, 2022 00:54
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun
had those minutiae details
of a true story..
a lovely read, thank you!
December 12th, 2022 00:54
Nowhere
L. B. Mek said:
this series of poetic witticisms imbued with acute commentary
are so much fun to read
I just hope you had a great time writing them
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 12th, 2022 00:49
L. B. Mek said:
this series of poetic witticisms imbued with acute commentary
are so much fun to read
I just hope you had a great time writing them
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
December 12th, 2022 00:49
Cat as trophy
hzugman said:
A delightful tale and at least they were boxers thankfully.
December 11th, 2022 20:12
hzugman said:
A delightful tale and at least they were boxers thankfully.
December 11th, 2022 20:12
Cat as trophy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren, these things do happen.
Andy
December 11th, 2022 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren, these things do happen.
Andy
December 11th, 2022 03:07
Cat as trophy
arqios said:
Leaves on breathless! A true story telling poem. Most delightful.
December 10th, 2022 19:32
arqios said:
Leaves on breathless! A true story telling poem. Most delightful.
December 10th, 2022 19:32
Cat as trophy
Doggerel Dave said:
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now, Soren.
Misunderstandings are commonplace when it comes to human interactions,, yours was well told and and great fun...as I wasn\'t in your situation ....
December 10th, 2022 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Black cat in witness box ? A convincing Meow?
Glad your are out now, Soren.
Misunderstandings are commonplace when it comes to human interactions,, yours was well told and and great fun...as I wasn\'t in your situation ....
December 10th, 2022 18:45
Cat as trophy
Neville said:
a very believable & enjoyable tale sir .. sounds like it was one of those oops as he stoops kinda situations .. :)
December 10th, 2022 11:48
Neville said:
a very believable & enjoyable tale sir .. sounds like it was one of those oops as he stoops kinda situations .. :)
December 10th, 2022 11:48
Nowhere
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
December 8th, 2022 18:40
Nowhere
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.
December 8th, 2022 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely a Dreamtime - a place where negativity could have a positive application - Thanks Soren.
December 8th, 2022 17:48
Conscience
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a serious question in this little pearl. A blameless life might give sweet repose, but on the other hand who does not at times second guess everything they\'ve ever done. Thank you for my contemplation of the day.
December 2nd, 2022 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a serious question in this little pearl. A blameless life might give sweet repose, but on the other hand who does not at times second guess everything they\'ve ever done. Thank you for my contemplation of the day.
December 2nd, 2022 15:02
Tombs to dreams
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly powerful message!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'life\'s climb is ever easier
if we empty our baggage
as we go
if we carry too much regret
doubt we\'ll make it far
before we break down...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly powerful message!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'life\'s climb is ever easier
if we empty our baggage
as we go
if we carry too much regret
doubt we\'ll make it far
before we break down...)
December 2nd, 2022 05:04
Tombs to dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so special, live in the now soren.
Andy
December 1st, 2022 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so special, live in the now soren.
Andy
December 1st, 2022 02:28
Tombs to dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
All I have is now - dead right Soren.
The \'dead\' may well be true of tomorrow, but today is here, I have it, can use it. Yesterday cannot be changed.
Confirm I understood every word of your poem. Important principle engaged with here.
November 30th, 2022 18:03
Doggerel Dave said:
All I have is now - dead right Soren.
The \'dead\' may well be true of tomorrow, but today is here, I have it, can use it. Yesterday cannot be changed.
Confirm I understood every word of your poem. Important principle engaged with here.
November 30th, 2022 18:03
Tombs to dreams
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
Tombs to dreams
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
Bella Shepard said:
This poem touches every nerve. Truer words were never spoken. Each day is ours to make, and cherish, if only we have the wisdom to realize it. A very powerful write my friend, can\'t help but be a fav.
November 30th, 2022 10:16
How you look at it
Bella Shepard said:
For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have framed it on the page serves to emphasize the opposites of life that have to be there. Such a great write my friend, and such a fav!
November 28th, 2022 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
For me, this poem became more powerful with each line. The way you have framed it on the page serves to emphasize the opposites of life that have to be there. Such a great write my friend, and such a fav!
November 28th, 2022 12:25
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