Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Almost a sonnet
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!
April 28th, 2022 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!
April 28th, 2022 14:49
Almost a sonnet
dusk arising said:
The kind of love we all desire and should feel.
I am a loner. Alone in life but i know i have the love of an angel with me always. An angel who loves me for what i am and validates my existence, embraces me in times of stress, lifts me, holds my hand as I write.
April 28th, 2022 10:13
dusk arising said:
The kind of love we all desire and should feel.
I am a loner. Alone in life but i know i have the love of an angel with me always. An angel who loves me for what i am and validates my existence, embraces me in times of stress, lifts me, holds my hand as I write.
April 28th, 2022 10:13
Almost a sonnet
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled it almost a sonnet because it does not have perfect iambic pentameter
April 28th, 2022 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled it almost a sonnet because it does not have perfect iambic pentameter
April 28th, 2022 09:03
Almost a sonnet
Rocky Lagou said:
Literally spectacular. I adore this strong bond you\'re conveying and it could truly feel like all things are possible when you have another who supports you unconditionally. Very well done, this is surely a lovely sonnet.
April 28th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Literally spectacular. I adore this strong bond you\'re conveying and it could truly feel like all things are possible when you have another who supports you unconditionally. Very well done, this is surely a lovely sonnet.
April 28th, 2022 08:33
Out of Eden
Bella Shepard said:
You seem to have captured the mood of the time. We are dishonoring our Eden even today. Very well said.
April 27th, 2022 11:07
Bella Shepard said:
You seem to have captured the mood of the time. We are dishonoring our Eden even today. Very well said.
April 27th, 2022 11:07
Out of Eden
Rocky Lagou said:
Welp, pretty much epitomizes the whole banishment of Adam and Eve, very well and succinct. However, I feel this could be deeper for the relationships in today\'s age. Well done!
April 27th, 2022 09:03
Rocky Lagou said:
Welp, pretty much epitomizes the whole banishment of Adam and Eve, very well and succinct. However, I feel this could be deeper for the relationships in today\'s age. Well done!
April 27th, 2022 09:03
Psychological cancer
Luna Nera said:
We must have worked with the same people LOL I love the cleverness of the title ✌
April 26th, 2022 17:56
Luna Nera said:
We must have worked with the same people LOL I love the cleverness of the title ✌
April 26th, 2022 17:56
Psychological cancer
dusk arising said:
WE shall all share the peace of interment or cremation one day though I believe our spirits will pass into another realm.
I think many of us carry a sadness from a past event or many events but these are concealed from the day to day. I have a deep sadness for some thing very close to me but i do not let it show unless a trigger finds a chink in my quite thin armour.
When people are terribly hurt the pain resides within them forever but for most of us we can say we are more than that pain, I will not let myself become that pain.
Yours is a very sad poem and I am sorrowed to read you carry such pain. I empathise and wish you the strength to face each day through.
April 26th, 2022 08:38
dusk arising said:
WE shall all share the peace of interment or cremation one day though I believe our spirits will pass into another realm.
I think many of us carry a sadness from a past event or many events but these are concealed from the day to day. I have a deep sadness for some thing very close to me but i do not let it show unless a trigger finds a chink in my quite thin armour.
When people are terribly hurt the pain resides within them forever but for most of us we can say we are more than that pain, I will not let myself become that pain.
Yours is a very sad poem and I am sorrowed to read you carry such pain. I empathise and wish you the strength to face each day through.
April 26th, 2022 08:38
Psychological cancer
Rocky Lagou said:
A quite downhearted perspective. I can relate though, sometimes others can make you feel this way or maybe it could\'ve been brought up from self. But nonetheless I hope you can fight on and keep your head up.
April 26th, 2022 08:37
Rocky Lagou said:
A quite downhearted perspective. I can relate though, sometimes others can make you feel this way or maybe it could\'ve been brought up from self. But nonetheless I hope you can fight on and keep your head up.
April 26th, 2022 08:37
Psychological cancer
Distant View said:
Deep sadness can be a killer. It can indeed be like a cancer eating away at the heart and mind. A sad poem, but one filled with respect.
April 26th, 2022 08:21
Distant View said:
Deep sadness can be a killer. It can indeed be like a cancer eating away at the heart and mind. A sad poem, but one filled with respect.
April 26th, 2022 08:21
The death of Osiris
Rozina said:
Yes it is true. We often take things for granted especially when it\'s been around for so long. Then suddenly it\'s not there and the loss is profound. A good write.
April 25th, 2022 17:50
Rozina said:
Yes it is true. We often take things for granted especially when it\'s been around for so long. Then suddenly it\'s not there and the loss is profound. A good write.
April 25th, 2022 17:50
The death of Osiris
Bella Shepard said:
From comfort to loss in 6 beautiful lines. Well done poet!
April 25th, 2022 16:04
Bella Shepard said:
From comfort to loss in 6 beautiful lines. Well done poet!
April 25th, 2022 16:04
The death of Osiris
dusk arising said:
There are many \'sunlights\' we may bathe in and whilst relaxed take them for granted only to feel their true worth and value once they are gone.
Experiencing the void of loss teaches us to value the sunlight whilst it shines and pay it due respect, homage and love that we may enjoy it\'s company in a shared harmony.
April 25th, 2022 13:42
dusk arising said:
There are many \'sunlights\' we may bathe in and whilst relaxed take them for granted only to feel their true worth and value once they are gone.
Experiencing the void of loss teaches us to value the sunlight whilst it shines and pay it due respect, homage and love that we may enjoy it\'s company in a shared harmony.
April 25th, 2022 13:42
Twilight
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day... just add the evening song of a blackbird and I\'m content.
Lovely poem to contemplate.
April 24th, 2022 06:42
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day... just add the evening song of a blackbird and I\'m content.
Lovely poem to contemplate.
April 24th, 2022 06:42
We were not created in God\'s image we created God in ours
Distant View said:
I must agree with your words here. The trouble with religion is that each different belief thinks that theirs is the one true religion, and everybody else is wrong!
April 23rd, 2022 08:32
Distant View said:
I must agree with your words here. The trouble with religion is that each different belief thinks that theirs is the one true religion, and everybody else is wrong!
April 23rd, 2022 08:32
We were not created in God\'s image we created God in ours
dusk arising said:
Very well said but ... ssshhh the brainwashed may be watching and you\'ll upset them. I have... regularly.
Though I\'ll admit it\'s fun to watch their rhetotic struggling for logic.
When I was a small child I used to wonder who were these sinners who my religious instruction teachers would talk of and why did they always seem to be sinning. Religious instruction actually introduced sin into my young life.
April 23rd, 2022 08:15
dusk arising said:
Very well said but ... ssshhh the brainwashed may be watching and you\'ll upset them. I have... regularly.
Though I\'ll admit it\'s fun to watch their rhetotic struggling for logic.
When I was a small child I used to wonder who were these sinners who my religious instruction teachers would talk of and why did they always seem to be sinning. Religious instruction actually introduced sin into my young life.
April 23rd, 2022 08:15
Just a mollusk
Rozina said:
I never knew. Such interesting creatures. Monogamous like the albatross although climate change has brought some changes to their lifestyle. Thank you for this intriguing poem.
April 22nd, 2022 19:52
Rozina said:
I never knew. Such interesting creatures. Monogamous like the albatross although climate change has brought some changes to their lifestyle. Thank you for this intriguing poem.
April 22nd, 2022 19:52
Just a mollusk
Bella Shepard said:
What an extraordinary relationship you have had with octopuses, I did look up the plural, and what wonderful observations. I\'ve seen several documentaries on the species and you\'re right, they are the most intelligent of creatures. Your poem is so beautiful and loving, and expresses the very nature of these sentient beings.
April 22nd, 2022 16:43
Bella Shepard said:
What an extraordinary relationship you have had with octopuses, I did look up the plural, and what wonderful observations. I\'ve seen several documentaries on the species and you\'re right, they are the most intelligent of creatures. Your poem is so beautiful and loving, and expresses the very nature of these sentient beings.
April 22nd, 2022 16:43
Thoughts of a narcissist
Rocky Lagou said:
Sorrennnnn SORRENNNNN!!! YOU ATE IT UP with this one. I\'m literally at a loss for words. I love your sass and your sarcasm with the lines \"Selfish? I never sold a fish in my life\" I literally gagged when i read that line, and this poem LITERALLY encapsulates my messages in most of my poetry: live for yourself. In the poem \"Giving Up Poetry\" I tried to convey that message of, \"Just because I promote focusing on self, doesn\'t mean we shouldn\'t focus on others.\" I totally live for kindness and generosity, but to put it straightforward, if we can\'t love ourselves, how in the world are we going to love others. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2022 12:40
Rocky Lagou said:
Sorrennnnn SORRENNNNN!!! YOU ATE IT UP with this one. I\'m literally at a loss for words. I love your sass and your sarcasm with the lines \"Selfish? I never sold a fish in my life\" I literally gagged when i read that line, and this poem LITERALLY encapsulates my messages in most of my poetry: live for yourself. In the poem \"Giving Up Poetry\" I tried to convey that message of, \"Just because I promote focusing on self, doesn\'t mean we shouldn\'t focus on others.\" I totally live for kindness and generosity, but to put it straightforward, if we can\'t love ourselves, how in the world are we going to love others. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2022 12:40
Just a mollusk
L. B. Mek said:
I favourited for your author\'s comment, alone..
a great write, introducing
a world many have little access to
I for one, thank you!
April 22nd, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
I favourited for your author\'s comment, alone..
a great write, introducing
a world many have little access to
I for one, thank you!
April 22nd, 2022 05:59
Just a mollusk
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words about these incredible beasties. ive heard it said that of all the creations on the planet they are the most likely to be of alien origin. Each tentacle has a mind of its own too.
Super celebration of these creations from you today.
April 22nd, 2022 05:36
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words about these incredible beasties. ive heard it said that of all the creations on the planet they are the most likely to be of alien origin. Each tentacle has a mind of its own too.
Super celebration of these creations from you today.
April 22nd, 2022 05:36
Thoughts of a narcissist
Rozina said:
Enjoyed this play on words which describes this personality perfectly.
April 21st, 2022 17:44
Rozina said:
Enjoyed this play on words which describes this personality perfectly.
April 21st, 2022 17:44
Thoughts of a narcissist
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite interesting to read a poem on a personality. You did get the pulse of narcissist perfectly. Nice write !!
April 21st, 2022 13:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite interesting to read a poem on a personality. You did get the pulse of narcissist perfectly. Nice write !!
April 21st, 2022 13:38
Thoughts of a narcissist
Bella Shepard said:
I read this through the first time, and enjoyed. Upon the second reading I got the Selfish, never sold a fish in my life and had to burst out laughing. How did I miss that the first time? The true narcissist can justify anything, and you\'ve captured that to a tee.
April 21st, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
I read this through the first time, and enjoyed. Upon the second reading I got the Selfish, never sold a fish in my life and had to burst out laughing. How did I miss that the first time? The true narcissist can justify anything, and you\'ve captured that to a tee.
April 21st, 2022 13:12
Thoughts of a narcissist
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
Thoughts of a narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
Thoughts of a narcissist
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they can’t think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they can’t think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
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