Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The rusty nail
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things in our lives last for a very long time soren, this makes life wonderful.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things in our lives last for a very long time soren, this makes life wonderful.
Andy
September 13th, 2024 01:53
The rusty nail
Mutley Ravishes said:
Some houses are held together without nails!
Great write, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 18:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
Some houses are held together without nails!
Great write, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 18:36
The rusty nail
2781 said:
I\'ve noticed with nails (and other fasteners), they erode from the inside, often failing without warning.
September 12th, 2024 18:04
2781 said:
I\'ve noticed with nails (and other fasteners), they erode from the inside, often failing without warning.
September 12th, 2024 18:04
The rusty nail
Doggerel Dave said:
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail which did tear my shirt and accepted the consequences.
On your clear account as a metaphor, there are many creatives (not exclusively poets) whose work, initially disparaged or ignored, gain acceptance as contributions to culture and social cohesion just as the nail, hammered in, continues to hold the house in place.
Interesting write I enjoyed, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail which did tear my shirt and accepted the consequences.
On your clear account as a metaphor, there are many creatives (not exclusively poets) whose work, initially disparaged or ignored, gain acceptance as contributions to culture and social cohesion just as the nail, hammered in, continues to hold the house in place.
Interesting write I enjoyed, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 16:56
The rusty nail
Cassie58 said:
A wonderful metaphor for life. Love this poem Soren. I am feeling pretty rusty myself lately.
September 12th, 2024 09:40
Cassie58 said:
A wonderful metaphor for life. Love this poem Soren. I am feeling pretty rusty myself lately.
September 12th, 2024 09:40
The rusty nail
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and reminds us to renovate and keep ourselves well. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 05:39
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and reminds us to renovate and keep ourselves well. 🌹
September 12th, 2024 05:39
Rust and steel
Neville said:
This is just so darned good .. I\'m stuck for words .. Neville
September 12th, 2024 04:40
Neville said:
This is just so darned good .. I\'m stuck for words .. Neville
September 12th, 2024 04:40
Rust and steel
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Your words carry deep meanings and much wisdom.
I very much enjoyed the words and the rhyme.
A beautiful piece my friend.
September 12th, 2024 02:01
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Your words carry deep meanings and much wisdom.
I very much enjoyed the words and the rhyme.
A beautiful piece my friend.
September 12th, 2024 02:01
Shadows
Dan Williams said:
The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting, eh?
September 12th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting, eh?
September 12th, 2024 00:21
Shadows
Neville said:
very muchly enjoyed .. can\'t beat a bit o noir can ya .. N ☯️
September 11th, 2024 14:21
Neville said:
very muchly enjoyed .. can\'t beat a bit o noir can ya .. N ☯️
September 11th, 2024 14:21
Rust and steel
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we all have our own way to make our lives wonderful.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren, we all have our own way to make our lives wonderful.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:44
Rust and steel
Dan Williams said:
\"And rainbow’s ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is. Bravo.
September 11th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
\"And rainbow’s ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is. Bravo.
September 11th, 2024 00:37
Rust and steel
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\"👏
Terrific poem,
wonderful brevity!!
Great rhyme and flow,
expressed superbly! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 10th, 2024 23:08
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\"👏
Terrific poem,
wonderful brevity!!
Great rhyme and flow,
expressed superbly! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 10th, 2024 23:08
Rust and steel
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Rust and steel
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poet’s Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. 🌹 By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not 🌹
September 10th, 2024 06:58
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poet’s Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. 🌹 By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not 🌹
September 10th, 2024 06:58
A thirsty dream
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.👍
September 10th, 2024 01:49
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.👍
September 10th, 2024 01:49
A thirsty dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
A thirsty dream
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
A thirsty dream
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Bricks of hope
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! 😀
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! 😀
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
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