Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Forest fig
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is one of your masterpieces, crafted so creatively with poetic excellence, the shoots, roots and fruits of dear trees. Kudos!
July 22nd, 2025 08:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is one of your masterpieces, crafted so creatively with poetic excellence, the shoots, roots and fruits of dear trees. Kudos!
July 22nd, 2025 08:38
Forest fig
Soman Ragavan said:
There is indeed a metaphor with humans. Humans, too, want to grow bigger and taller.
--\"High regions are never without storms.\"
--\"The higher you rise, the bigger the fall.\"
--\"High places have their precipices.\"
--\"The highest tree has the greatest fall.\"
From the book \"3000 proverbs\" by Sam Phillips.
July 22nd, 2025 08:34
Soman Ragavan said:
There is indeed a metaphor with humans. Humans, too, want to grow bigger and taller.
--\"High regions are never without storms.\"
--\"The higher you rise, the bigger the fall.\"
--\"High places have their precipices.\"
--\"The highest tree has the greatest fall.\"
From the book \"3000 proverbs\" by Sam Phillips.
July 22nd, 2025 08:34
Forest fig
Friendship said:
Nicely said. The poem \"Forest Fig\" embodies themes of growth, resilience, and the natural cycle of life, inspiring us to reflect on the journey of a tree, symbolizing the aspirations, struggles, and eventual transformation of living beings. The tree\'s evolution from a wild, free entity into a more brittle state invites a sense of nostalgia and contemplation about life\'s impermanence, the cyclical nature of existence, and the interconnectedness of all living things, uplifting us to cherish life\'s precious journey.
July 22nd, 2025 07:38
Friendship said:
Nicely said. The poem \"Forest Fig\" embodies themes of growth, resilience, and the natural cycle of life, inspiring us to reflect on the journey of a tree, symbolizing the aspirations, struggles, and eventual transformation of living beings. The tree\'s evolution from a wild, free entity into a more brittle state invites a sense of nostalgia and contemplation about life\'s impermanence, the cyclical nature of existence, and the interconnectedness of all living things, uplifting us to cherish life\'s precious journey.
July 22nd, 2025 07:38
Forest fig
Poetic Licence said:
Hands up i haven\'t got a clue
I am baffled and confused
Yet I have read and enjoyed
Today\'s puzzle you deployed
July 22nd, 2025 06:51
Poetic Licence said:
Hands up i haven\'t got a clue
I am baffled and confused
Yet I have read and enjoyed
Today\'s puzzle you deployed
July 22nd, 2025 06:51
Forest fig
Priya Tomar said:
Well worded
Clever rhyming scheme , lovely lyric
It can also be a metaphor for human growth....
July 22nd, 2025 06:41
Priya Tomar said:
Well worded
Clever rhyming scheme , lovely lyric
It can also be a metaphor for human growth....
July 22nd, 2025 06:41
Insignificant
NafisaSB said:
even if alone, man alone has the capacity to make an impact, and a small significant change by his existence...no one is insignificant, not even the smallest being - each has its own niche and part to play in the universe - so stand up and be counted - you may feel you are small in the grand scheme of things - yes we are small - but we do have a purpose which we were born to fulfill
July 22nd, 2025 00:13
NafisaSB said:
even if alone, man alone has the capacity to make an impact, and a small significant change by his existence...no one is insignificant, not even the smallest being - each has its own niche and part to play in the universe - so stand up and be counted - you may feel you are small in the grand scheme of things - yes we are small - but we do have a purpose which we were born to fulfill
July 22nd, 2025 00:13
Why me?
Damaso said:
Throwing stones, where to hide so many hands? Inner judgment is the best judgment, the one we must face. Thank you so much for sharing. A great reflection and splendid writing. Best regards, Cor.
July 21st, 2025 15:25
Damaso said:
Throwing stones, where to hide so many hands? Inner judgment is the best judgment, the one we must face. Thank you so much for sharing. A great reflection and splendid writing. Best regards, Cor.
July 21st, 2025 15:25
Why me?
Bella Shepard said:
A reluctance to take responsibility, and then to accept accountability seems to be pervasive these days, especially in the upper eschalons of our society, dare I say government. At what point did we lose our moral compass. Great and thought provoking write!
July 21st, 2025 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
A reluctance to take responsibility, and then to accept accountability seems to be pervasive these days, especially in the upper eschalons of our society, dare I say government. At what point did we lose our moral compass. Great and thought provoking write!
July 21st, 2025 15:22
Slumbering light
Musdeenthoughts said:
Amazing flow! Beautiful expression of figures of speech!! This is Beautifully written
July 21st, 2025 11:36
Musdeenthoughts said:
Amazing flow! Beautiful expression of figures of speech!! This is Beautifully written
July 21st, 2025 11:36
What were they thinking?
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 enough said in those three letters. Happy Monday! Lol
July 21st, 2025 08:55
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 enough said in those three letters. Happy Monday! Lol
July 21st, 2025 08:55
Not too smart
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A powerful writer! Humorous and always a lesson in each write!
July 21st, 2025 08:53
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A powerful writer! Humorous and always a lesson in each write!
July 21st, 2025 08:53
Why me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You wrote a poem with long, sharp fangs, Soren. My kind of poem! Each line flips the blame with precision…like watching denial unravel in real time. “Blame the hammer striking the thumb”—yeah. You don’t miss. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You wrote a poem with long, sharp fangs, Soren. My kind of poem! Each line flips the blame with precision…like watching denial unravel in real time. “Blame the hammer striking the thumb”—yeah. You don’t miss. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:33
Why me?
arqios said:
What a fierce cascade of inversion,“Why Me?” reads like a howl against moral misdirection and the failure to confront true culpability.
July 21st, 2025 08:00
arqios said:
What a fierce cascade of inversion,“Why Me?” reads like a howl against moral misdirection and the failure to confront true culpability.
July 21st, 2025 08:00
Why me?
Friendship said:
Well written, I firmly believe that we are all guilty of this; it is an intrinsic aspect of human behavior. We all engage in this behavior. I do not think that any single individual can be ruled out. Your poem \"Why Me!\" addresses the theme of misplaced blame and the human tendency to assign responsibility for our own suffering or failures to external forces rather than recognizing our own roles in these situations. It critiques the irrationality of blaming inanimate objects or the vulnerable for the consequences of our actions. The poet explores the idea of accountability and the absurdity of blaming others or inanimate objects for our own choices and outcomes. The imagery evokes violence, hardship, and the struggle for understanding in the face of suffering.
July 21st, 2025 06:42
Friendship said:
Well written, I firmly believe that we are all guilty of this; it is an intrinsic aspect of human behavior. We all engage in this behavior. I do not think that any single individual can be ruled out. Your poem \"Why Me!\" addresses the theme of misplaced blame and the human tendency to assign responsibility for our own suffering or failures to external forces rather than recognizing our own roles in these situations. It critiques the irrationality of blaming inanimate objects or the vulnerable for the consequences of our actions. The poet explores the idea of accountability and the absurdity of blaming others or inanimate objects for our own choices and outcomes. The imagery evokes violence, hardship, and the struggle for understanding in the face of suffering.
July 21st, 2025 06:42
Why me?
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Looking for that escape goat to ease your own conscience, some find it easier to just blaming without looking for the real fault, often themselves, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:18
Why me?
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Priya Tomar said:
Criticism of human tendency to externalise blame....
Baby crying.... society often faults most vulnerable or marginalised section....
Clever rhyming scheme....
Nice to read it....
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Weak and strong
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Friendship said:
Your poem embarks on a profound exploration of the transformative power of language and the art of poetry, illuminating the vital importance of vibrant, evocative words that resonate deeply with the reader on an emotional level. It masterfully juxtaposes weak and strong language, revealing how the potency of words can elevate the beauty and impact of poetry to unprecedented heights. The poem seeks to convey the intricate complexities and nuances inherent in the noble craft of writing poetry, inspiring both writers and readers to recognize the boundless power of words to evoke emotions, foster connections, and transcend boundaries.
July 20th, 2025 15:06
Weak and strong
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
I see you were busy in the kitchen with this one. Wonderful culinary analogies to enlighten and nourish one\'s understanding of the art(s) of poetry and to do so with a sprinkle of humour. More informative than any lecture - experience and love of the subject rings through. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:42
Weak and strong
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Bella Shepard said:
This is truly a master class in poetry, given by the master craftsman. Excellent!
July 20th, 2025 08:34
Weak and strong
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Priya Tomar said:
Meta poem...
Lovely food metaphors
Fabric and threads suggest poetry is not just sponteneous but well constructed, meanings woven in........
Very nice .
July 20th, 2025 05:08
Weak and strong
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t think I have read a more creative or clever way of describing a recipe a poem, thoroughly enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 04:30
The tooth
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
I got a chill reading this, some homes I was in this happened or tying to a door and slamming, I felt all the pain as i read this, nicely expressed
July 19th, 2025 08:05
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