Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Glimpses
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
Glimpses
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
No choice
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
Glimpses
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Glimpses
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Glimpses
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
Left behind
NinjaGirl said:
Right and wrong are perception to man, but God knows the sinner and the broken, priest and the whole...
August 10th, 2025 14:08
NinjaGirl said:
Right and wrong are perception to man, but God knows the sinner and the broken, priest and the whole...
August 10th, 2025 14:08
Nothing anymore
NinjaGirl said:
Too much new is being pumped into our systems...we forget the old history of others, of tragedies we could avoid
August 10th, 2025 14:07
NinjaGirl said:
Too much new is being pumped into our systems...we forget the old history of others, of tragedies we could avoid
August 10th, 2025 14:07
Broken
NinjaGirl said:
Weren\'t we once all so beautiful? So perfect before life\'s weather tainted our own? But isn\'t it lovely to see a naturally-made pearl, imperfect and lumpy...the bumpy pumpkins are certainly my favorite, and shattered glass is so lovely to look at
August 10th, 2025 14:06
NinjaGirl said:
Weren\'t we once all so beautiful? So perfect before life\'s weather tainted our own? But isn\'t it lovely to see a naturally-made pearl, imperfect and lumpy...the bumpy pumpkins are certainly my favorite, and shattered glass is so lovely to look at
August 10th, 2025 14:06
Sand in a bottle
NinjaGirl said:
\"We spend a lot of time crying over wasted time\" Hours may have been lost, but we have hours to come to experience.
August 10th, 2025 14:03
NinjaGirl said:
\"We spend a lot of time crying over wasted time\" Hours may have been lost, but we have hours to come to experience.
August 10th, 2025 14:03
Sand in a bottle
orchidee said:
Yes, a bit like me collecting water in a sieve?! lol.
August 10th, 2025 11:46
orchidee said:
Yes, a bit like me collecting water in a sieve?! lol.
August 10th, 2025 11:46
Sand in a bottle
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The accursed hourglass, no matter which way you turn it, it just keeps flowing. You have captured \'time\' succinctly in poetic perception and skill. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 09:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The accursed hourglass, no matter which way you turn it, it just keeps flowing. You have captured \'time\' succinctly in poetic perception and skill. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 09:57
Sand in a bottle
Bella Shepard said:
Time is the one thing that we cannot, but would love to, control. Such a perfect metaphor in the hourglass. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:46
Bella Shepard said:
Time is the one thing that we cannot, but would love to, control. Such a perfect metaphor in the hourglass. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:46
Sand in a bottle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for it. Like a diamond in the rough. That image of crawling in circles twice a day says so much with so little. You’ve bottled time itself here, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for it. Like a diamond in the rough. That image of crawling in circles twice a day says so much with so little. You’ve bottled time itself here, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 08:08
Sand in a bottle
Poetic Licence said:
As of now, regardless of wealth you cannot buy time and bank it, but who knows that might change, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
As of now, regardless of wealth you cannot buy time and bank it, but who knows that might change, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:17
Sand in a bottle
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the transient nature of life and the futility of trying to hold onto fleeting moments. It reflects on how we often desire things that are unattainable while grappling with the inevitability of time and loss. Sand in a bottle serves as a metaphor for time and experiences that are difficult to hold onto. Your poem likely aims to provoke thought about the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own desires and the inevitability of time passing. It serves as a reminder of the beauty and sorrow inherent in existence.
August 10th, 2025 06:04
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the transient nature of life and the futility of trying to hold onto fleeting moments. It reflects on how we often desire things that are unattainable while grappling with the inevitability of time and loss. Sand in a bottle serves as a metaphor for time and experiences that are difficult to hold onto. Your poem likely aims to provoke thought about the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own desires and the inevitability of time passing. It serves as a reminder of the beauty and sorrow inherent in existence.
August 10th, 2025 06:04
Sand in a bottle
Teddy.15 said:
I see poverty in many forms in here. Powerful and worth reading many times. Wonderful my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 10th, 2025 04:18
Teddy.15 said:
I see poverty in many forms in here. Powerful and worth reading many times. Wonderful my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 10th, 2025 04:18
Why me?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent incisive poem that inverts the common culpability narrative.🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:40
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent incisive poem that inverts the common culpability narrative.🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:40
Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
But they can all be put in the past soren and we can move on into a better life from the experience gained.
Andy
August 10th, 2025 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
But they can all be put in the past soren and we can move on into a better life from the experience gained.
Andy
August 10th, 2025 01:27
Broken
hzugman said:
Wear your scars (physical, mental and emotional) with pride. Afterall they\'re a huge part of making you who you are.
August 9th, 2025 12:18
hzugman said:
Wear your scars (physical, mental and emotional) with pride. Afterall they\'re a huge part of making you who you are.
August 9th, 2025 12:18
Broken
Priya Tomar said:
In writing the metaphor \" broken trophy\" you spent your literary treasure.
Nothing is permanent.
In fact, we have to embrace death in order to live.
August 9th, 2025 11:55
Priya Tomar said:
In writing the metaphor \" broken trophy\" you spent your literary treasure.
Nothing is permanent.
In fact, we have to embrace death in order to live.
August 9th, 2025 11:55
Broken
Abdullah123 said:
I think the last line perfectly embodies the message of this poem. Grea Write
August 9th, 2025 08:58
Abdullah123 said:
I think the last line perfectly embodies the message of this poem. Grea Write
August 9th, 2025 08:58
Broken
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I\'m horrible in saying - Ahhh, a super list of things to give to KP for Ch......! lol. Woof! You don\'t really mean it, says Fido to me.
I recite that magpie thingy to her, but it goes: One for sorrow, two for sorrow, three for sorrow, etc. hehehe.
August 9th, 2025 08:31
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I\'m horrible in saying - Ahhh, a super list of things to give to KP for Ch......! lol. Woof! You don\'t really mean it, says Fido to me.
I recite that magpie thingy to her, but it goes: One for sorrow, two for sorrow, three for sorrow, etc. hehehe.
August 9th, 2025 08:31
Broken
Kevin Hulme said:
This covers so many things: like a Victorian Swimsuit. Good Write.
August 9th, 2025 07:53
Kevin Hulme said:
This covers so many things: like a Victorian Swimsuit. Good Write.
August 9th, 2025 07:53
Broken
Teddy.15 said:
Going through life without scars would be boring. I have mental and physical scars, I cherish it all. Another wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 9th, 2025 07:44
Teddy.15 said:
Going through life without scars would be boring. I have mental and physical scars, I cherish it all. Another wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 9th, 2025 07:44
Broken
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Broken\" explores the theme of loss and the impermanence of beauty, reflecting on how something once pristine can become tarnished and undesirable due to life\'s struggles and conflicts. It explores the feelings of regret and melancholy associated with deterioration, both physical and emotional. The metaphor of a broken trophy symbolizes dreams or relationships that have been damaged or diminished over time. I relate to the human experience of feeling flawed or defeated after facing challenges.
August 9th, 2025 06:47
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Broken\" explores the theme of loss and the impermanence of beauty, reflecting on how something once pristine can become tarnished and undesirable due to life\'s struggles and conflicts. It explores the feelings of regret and melancholy associated with deterioration, both physical and emotional. The metaphor of a broken trophy symbolizes dreams or relationships that have been damaged or diminished over time. I relate to the human experience of feeling flawed or defeated after facing challenges.
August 9th, 2025 06:47
Broken
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarette. This gem covers a lot of bases.
August 9th, 2025 06:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, sorenbarette. This gem covers a lot of bases.
August 9th, 2025 06:01
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