Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Slumbering light
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Slumbering light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Slumbering light
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
Slumbering light
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Slumbering light
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Slumbering light
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Slumbering light
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Slumbering light
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Slumbering light
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
I love roses
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
I love roses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
I love roses
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
I love roses
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
I love roses
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
I love roses
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
I love roses
Teddy.15 said:
With much more than one meaning here, as I am also a woman, I find this deeply profound there is something truly special about a rose and you have given it a pedestal 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 04:11
Teddy.15 said:
With much more than one meaning here, as I am also a woman, I find this deeply profound there is something truly special about a rose and you have given it a pedestal 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 04:11
I love roses
Caring dove said:
Really nice writing and with a nice flow to your words .. tho it’s sad when we see a flower not looking ‘ happy ‘ like they might do in summer or spring
July 2nd, 2025 03:30
Caring dove said:
Really nice writing and with a nice flow to your words .. tho it’s sad when we see a flower not looking ‘ happy ‘ like they might do in summer or spring
July 2nd, 2025 03:30
Little bird
Goldfinch60 said:
That feather is o important for the memory in life soren.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That feather is o important for the memory in life soren.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 01:42
Now
Funmiwrites said:
Indeed we became what we are, while searching for what we didn\'t have.
July 2nd, 2025 00:43
Funmiwrites said:
Indeed we became what we are, while searching for what we didn\'t have.
July 2nd, 2025 00:43
Little bird
David Wakeling said:
The one that got away. Still there isn\'t any bitterness here.Happy for the time had.A deep metaphor of a significant reklationship.Enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 19:24
David Wakeling said:
The one that got away. Still there isn\'t any bitterness here.Happy for the time had.A deep metaphor of a significant reklationship.Enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 19:24
Little bird
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless yet fleeting. The imagery of the bird and feather lingers like a bittersweet melody in the heart.
July 1st, 2025 14:21
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless yet fleeting. The imagery of the bird and feather lingers like a bittersweet melody in the heart.
July 1st, 2025 14:21
Little bird
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, this tale tells of a lost love. Symbolisms of birds and flight and a feather left. It was sad but tempered in the symbols. It\'s amazing how a love lost can linger for decades Nice poetry. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:13
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, this tale tells of a lost love. Symbolisms of birds and flight and a feather left. It was sad but tempered in the symbols. It\'s amazing how a love lost can linger for decades Nice poetry. - Phil A.
July 1st, 2025 14:13
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