Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The poet
arqios said:
The wife’s last car was christened Pegasus, it was poetry when we motored about on road trips-a suitable parallelism 🙏🏻🕊️
August 12th, 2025 05:25
arqios said:
The wife’s last car was christened Pegasus, it was poetry when we motored about on road trips-a suitable parallelism 🙏🏻🕊️
August 12th, 2025 05:25
The poet
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A very fitting analogy: the equine poet at the trot to canter and finally at the gallop, the last furlong, past the post and the poem complete. A most unusual and engaging poem in your usual gifted style. Very well done, I really enjoyed this one.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:16
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A very fitting analogy: the equine poet at the trot to canter and finally at the gallop, the last furlong, past the post and the poem complete. A most unusual and engaging poem in your usual gifted style. Very well done, I really enjoyed this one.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:16
The poet
Teddy.15 said:
That is just how I would describe yours always, even I get adrenaline when reading them. Funny how your poetry makes my emotions always so heightened and inspired. 🤣 🌹 Lord sorrenbarret 🌹
August 12th, 2025 04:38
Teddy.15 said:
That is just how I would describe yours always, even I get adrenaline when reading them. Funny how your poetry makes my emotions always so heightened and inspired. 🤣 🌹 Lord sorrenbarret 🌹
August 12th, 2025 04:38
Glimpses
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us soren.
Andy
August 12th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there for us soren.
Andy
August 12th, 2025 01:44
Glimpses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned here…all the sharper for the darkness pressing in. That final image of night’s skin peeling away is a beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned here…all the sharper for the darkness pressing in. That final image of night’s skin peeling away is a beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:30
No choice
SureshG said:
“washed up on a foreign shore”, amazing phrase, declaring one’s arrival, only to disappear
August 11th, 2025 13:05
SureshG said:
“washed up on a foreign shore”, amazing phrase, declaring one’s arrival, only to disappear
August 11th, 2025 13:05
Glimpses
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, an idea for KP and I. As you mention tar, I will tar and feather her! lol.
August 11th, 2025 09:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, an idea for KP and I. As you mention tar, I will tar and feather her! lol.
August 11th, 2025 09:11
Glimpses
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
NinjaGirl said:
Lovely untangling of darkness versus light...would love to see a connection of sunrise and sunset to them as well!
August 11th, 2025 08:45
Glimpses
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
It would be wonderful if the night removed those shackles allowing more light to be freed from the darkened world, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:03
No choice
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
No words to describe how deeply felt this is
August 11th, 2025 07:50
Glimpses
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Glimpses\" revolves around the contrast between light and darkness, symbolizing hope and despair, as well as freedom and confinement. The poet reflects on the transient nature of light (day) and the inevitability of darkness (night), suggesting a struggle for liberation from the oppressive forces of despair. The imagery evokes a yearning for enlightenment and clarity amidst the overwhelming presence of darkness.
August 11th, 2025 06:40
Glimpses
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
I saw so much more than just a glimpse, oh sorrenbarret so wonderful. 🌹
August 11th, 2025 05:06
Glimpses
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where each moment of brightness feels precious and temporary. I was struck by how vividly you gave both forces agency; the night binding, the day breaking free. It left me with a quiet yearning for the next burst of light. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:06
Left behind
NinjaGirl said:
Right and wrong are perception to man, but God knows the sinner and the broken, priest and the whole...
August 10th, 2025 14:08
NinjaGirl said:
Right and wrong are perception to man, but God knows the sinner and the broken, priest and the whole...
August 10th, 2025 14:08
Nothing anymore
NinjaGirl said:
Too much new is being pumped into our systems...we forget the old history of others, of tragedies we could avoid
August 10th, 2025 14:07
NinjaGirl said:
Too much new is being pumped into our systems...we forget the old history of others, of tragedies we could avoid
August 10th, 2025 14:07
Broken
NinjaGirl said:
Weren\'t we once all so beautiful? So perfect before life\'s weather tainted our own? But isn\'t it lovely to see a naturally-made pearl, imperfect and lumpy...the bumpy pumpkins are certainly my favorite, and shattered glass is so lovely to look at
August 10th, 2025 14:06
NinjaGirl said:
Weren\'t we once all so beautiful? So perfect before life\'s weather tainted our own? But isn\'t it lovely to see a naturally-made pearl, imperfect and lumpy...the bumpy pumpkins are certainly my favorite, and shattered glass is so lovely to look at
August 10th, 2025 14:06
Sand in a bottle
NinjaGirl said:
\"We spend a lot of time crying over wasted time\" Hours may have been lost, but we have hours to come to experience.
August 10th, 2025 14:03
NinjaGirl said:
\"We spend a lot of time crying over wasted time\" Hours may have been lost, but we have hours to come to experience.
August 10th, 2025 14:03
Sand in a bottle
orchidee said:
Yes, a bit like me collecting water in a sieve?! lol.
August 10th, 2025 11:46
orchidee said:
Yes, a bit like me collecting water in a sieve?! lol.
August 10th, 2025 11:46
Sand in a bottle
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The accursed hourglass, no matter which way you turn it, it just keeps flowing. You have captured \'time\' succinctly in poetic perception and skill. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 09:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The accursed hourglass, no matter which way you turn it, it just keeps flowing. You have captured \'time\' succinctly in poetic perception and skill. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 09:57
Sand in a bottle
Bella Shepard said:
Time is the one thing that we cannot, but would love to, control. Such a perfect metaphor in the hourglass. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:46
Bella Shepard said:
Time is the one thing that we cannot, but would love to, control. Such a perfect metaphor in the hourglass. Beautifully versed my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:46
Sand in a bottle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for it. Like a diamond in the rough. That image of crawling in circles twice a day says so much with so little. You’ve bottled time itself here, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for it. Like a diamond in the rough. That image of crawling in circles twice a day says so much with so little. You’ve bottled time itself here, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 08:08
Sand in a bottle
Poetic Licence said:
As of now, regardless of wealth you cannot buy time and bank it, but who knows that might change, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
As of now, regardless of wealth you cannot buy time and bank it, but who knows that might change, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:17
Sand in a bottle
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the transient nature of life and the futility of trying to hold onto fleeting moments. It reflects on how we often desire things that are unattainable while grappling with the inevitability of time and loss. Sand in a bottle serves as a metaphor for time and experiences that are difficult to hold onto. Your poem likely aims to provoke thought about the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own desires and the inevitability of time passing. It serves as a reminder of the beauty and sorrow inherent in existence.
August 10th, 2025 06:04
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the transient nature of life and the futility of trying to hold onto fleeting moments. It reflects on how we often desire things that are unattainable while grappling with the inevitability of time and loss. Sand in a bottle serves as a metaphor for time and experiences that are difficult to hold onto. Your poem likely aims to provoke thought about the human condition, encouraging readers to reflect on their own desires and the inevitability of time passing. It serves as a reminder of the beauty and sorrow inherent in existence.
August 10th, 2025 06:04
Sand in a bottle
Teddy.15 said:
I see poverty in many forms in here. Powerful and worth reading many times. Wonderful my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 10th, 2025 04:18
Teddy.15 said:
I see poverty in many forms in here. Powerful and worth reading many times. Wonderful my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 10th, 2025 04:18
Why me?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent incisive poem that inverts the common culpability narrative.🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:40
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent incisive poem that inverts the common culpability narrative.🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:40
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