Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Tattoos and scars
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, some cracking lines in this one.

September 6th, 2024 06:46

Tattoos and scars
2781 said:

What\'s that saying-by the time you get old you have the face that you deserve!

September 6th, 2024 06:19

Tattoos and scars
Neilton said:

Great write once again! I\'m glad I stopped by

September 6th, 2024 04:08

Majesty
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, that light will always be in your life.

Andy

September 6th, 2024 01:18

Majesty
Dan Williams said:

This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But \"Elysium\"? goes the opposite way.

September 6th, 2024 01:06

Majesty
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
What I want to know now is - Does the No.7 bus go too Elysium? lol. Or it might be the No.10 bus. heehee.

September 5th, 2024 08:52

Majesty
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, your poem really paints a picture! I love how you describe the sky changing and the way you connect day and night to life and death. You capture the cycle brilliantly. The rhymes flow nicely, and your words create strong images..Great write all around!

September 5th, 2024 07:48

Majesty
Teddy.15 said:

I just blew all the lights in my house by saying wow. Utterly superb poetry sorrenbarret I have a feeling the fire means so much to you as you have written a lot lately, I can feel it. ๐ŸŒน

September 5th, 2024 06:52

Majesty
John Prophet said:

Wonderful flow in the work. Nice!

September 5th, 2024 06:37

Dust of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

That gutter of time is with us all but the longer the gutter the brighter our life will be soren.

Andy

September 5th, 2024 01:39

Dust of dreams
Dan Williams said:

I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep them coming.

September 5th, 2024 00:10

Inferno
Rocky Lagou said:

This is top notch, Sorren. I\'m glad to see you still posting whenever I pop back on this site. The inferno is real. The fire is real. The scariest part isn\'t coming to terms with this reality, but what to do with it.

September 4th, 2024 22:20

Dust of dreams
jim56 said:

like the way you wrote this
and words you have chosen
to express your poem
you have a talent for writing
brilliant work xxx

September 4th, 2024 13:04

Dust of dreams
Teddy.15 said:

We must trust in destiny because in the end at least for me, it\'s always what it was meant to be

The dust of dreams blows in destinyโ€˜s winds
This lines is just wonderful. ๐ŸŒน

September 4th, 2024 09:16

Inferno
Tom Dylan said:

A cracking piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. The words flow so well. Really enjoyed.

September 4th, 2024 05:45

Dust of dreams
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

The words are deeply felt my friend. I sense sadness and lack of hope.
But one should always be optimistic my friend.
I liked your rhymes.

September 4th, 2024 05:44

Inferno
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words soren. We all seem to be heading for that darker place but in the place I seem to be I see the light and I am sure many others will see that light as well.

Andy

September 4th, 2024 01:13

Inferno
Dan Williams said:

Wow, this is grim and despairing, right up my alley. I approve.

September 4th, 2024 00:38

Inferno
Thad Wilk said:

Wow ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Powerful penning,
strong feelings and
awesomazing imagery too! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
My pleasure to
read today thank you! ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad


September 3rd, 2024 21:56

Inferno
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

September 3rd, 2024 20:24

Inferno
Cheeky Missy said:

Whoa! What are we delving into herein?! The countless martyrs burned alive at the stake for their beliefs? The recent Olympic contender who returned from worship to be sacrificed? Ghastly and macabre, poignant in brevity, this culls memories aplenty.

September 3rd, 2024 17:19

Inferno
aDarkerMind said:

one to be remembered......

and faved soren.

a cracking write!

September 3rd, 2024 13:52

Inferno
Teddy.15 said:

This just makes me think of the state of our world dearest sorrenbarret and I mean the wars ๐ŸŒน

September 3rd, 2024 13:42

Inferno
orchidee said:

Ahh, bit of a heatwave?! lol.

September 3rd, 2024 10:31

Without Grace
jim56 said:

love this poem well written
good to read

September 3rd, 2024 07:53

Inferno
Doggerel Dave said:

Climate change really getting to you is it , Soren?

September 3rd, 2024 06:58

Roots of generosity
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Soren, and that last line is just perfect.

September 3rd, 2024 06:19

Roots of generosity
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, that love is out there for us all.

Andy

September 3rd, 2024 01:21

Roots of generosity
Dan Williams said:

And, don\'t forget, help process oxygen. Well spoken.

September 3rd, 2024 00:06

Roots of generosity
Bella Shepard said:

I wish that we all had this tree growing in our yards dear poet, it would be a true Garden of Eden. Loved it!

September 2nd, 2024 14:15



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