Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Give and take
Tristan Robert Lange said:

You know, for a guy who\'s not religious, you certainly sound like this guy who was quoted in Matthew 25:38-45. 🤣 Of course, those words aren\'t \"religion\" (as in dogma), they\'re what we should be aspiring to. For real, this is what being human ought to be about, helping the other when in need and, conversely, being helped when in need. This is an easy fave for me, my dear friend. Thank you for expressing it! 🌹👏 An inspiring and aspiring read for this morning!

December 30th, 2024 09:10

Give and take
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 30th, 2024 08:34

Give and take
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful write about an act of complete unselfishness, a rarity these days, really enjoyed the read.

December 30th, 2024 04:41

Give and take
Teddy.15 said:

Kindness and compassion really do go further than anything else a human can have. Selflessly giving to someone more in need. It\'s all born out of love 🌹

December 30th, 2024 04:41

Give and take
Bobby O said:

I now will define unselfish collaboration in a manner akin to these words.

December 30th, 2024 04:28

Glory of naught
Goldfinch60 said:

But if you dig below that rot the light of your life will still shine soren.

Andy

December 30th, 2024 02:49

Glory of naught
Thad Wilk said:

So poignant!! 😢
The wound may
heal but the scars
and pain still remain.. 👍
A superb read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad


December 29th, 2024 21:16

Glory of naught
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I love this existential reflection! 🥰 The contrast between “Glimmering glitter” and “festering sores of decay” shows both life’s fleeting beauty and inevitable decline. Also, that final line was mind-blowing! 🤯 It perfectly encapsulates existence’s cyclical nature. Bravo, my dear friend! 🌹👏

December 29th, 2024 16:47

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domilla said:

Well penned sorren

December 29th, 2024 16:02

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Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine poem, SB

December 29th, 2024 15:18

Shadows
Cassie58 said:

Night and day, shade and light. There is a point when they are so very closely linked. There is much beauty here Soren. Lovely.

December 29th, 2024 13:23

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Neville said:



There is a lot to be said for nothing & about it too don\'tcha know .. and then, there are those who make a fuss about something and never let you forget about it .. this is ragged and real, just the way I like em .. Neville

December 29th, 2024 13:17

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Bella Shepard said:

Happy or unhappy, we own the memories that have shaped us. We must live with them, and hopefully put them in some perspective. Love when you challange me to think. Great write!

December 29th, 2024 12:57

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Teddy.15 said:

Reminds me of one of my most favourite people, who now has dementia. I\'m losing a bit of her every day. 🌹 An exquisite poem dear sorrenbarret. 🌹

December 29th, 2024 09:28

Glory of naught
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I\'m giving KP debris of rot for supper tonight! lol.

December 29th, 2024 09:13

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Poetic Licence said:

A reflection on past wounds and pain, and even though a wound may heal the memory lives on. Enjoyed the read

December 29th, 2024 07:18

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aDarkerMind said:

rainbow bubbles pop and pour.....

a most impressive write Soren, as always.

December 29th, 2024 05:37

Glory of naught
arqios said:

One of those reminiscences… and how they are so real and so fresh feeling, still!

December 29th, 2024 05:16

Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

But as each day lengthens
Within this New Year
The nights get shorter
And the shadows linger
Linger for life to be seen.

Andy

December 29th, 2024 02:49

Night
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Loved it!

December 29th, 2024 00:37

Shadows
Dan Williams said:

Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.

December 28th, 2024 19:59

Shadows
arqios said:

I myself have made acquaintance of existing in the grey, part shadow-part light. Very interesting to see that in poetry. Never fails to catch attention.

December 28th, 2024 19:02

Shadows
David Wakeling said:

This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s style. All you need is a few guitar chords. Brilliant

December 28th, 2024 15:29

Shadows
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating and
thought provoking
write i must say!! 🤔
Have no fear, dark shadows
fade away
at the end of day! Love it!! 😍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 28th, 2024 13:45

Shadows
Bella Shepard said:

A very enigmatic write my friend. It makes me wonder where the boundary of shadow ends and life begins, I think.

December 28th, 2024 12:24

Shadows
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 28th, 2024 12:06

Shadows
Neville said:



what\'s not to know, like or love there\'s nowt to fear in shadows no matter how dark nor deep .. .. Neville

December 28th, 2024 10:28

Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love this poem Soren. In it, I love the the play with light and shadow, life and death, reflection and movement...each juxtaposition serving to give one a sense of the passage of time and, of course, the cyclical nature of existence. This is an existential poem at its best and the ending 🤯. Indeed, with the absence of light there are no shadows. Profoundly powerful my friend! 🌹👏

December 28th, 2024 09:21

Shadows
Poetic Licence said:

I am not going to claim i fully understand it, but i have found it interesting and enjoyable to read, and will read again later.

December 28th, 2024 06:08

Shadows
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful 🌹

December 28th, 2024 05:09



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