Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Why me?
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again there is such playful rhythm among serious subject matter . I am so delighted to read your work with rhythm Sir. The internal rhythmic structure of this piece really bounces and propels it forward. (I love to rhyme myself and really do find your sense of rhythm wonderful!... You have an excellent internal metronome with words. Thankyou your poetry uplifted my day. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 03:02
ElizabethMoroz said:
Again there is such playful rhythm among serious subject matter . I am so delighted to read your work with rhythm Sir. The internal rhythmic structure of this piece really bounces and propels it forward. (I love to rhyme myself and really do find your sense of rhythm wonderful!... You have an excellent internal metronome with words. Thankyou your poetry uplifted my day. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 03:02
Don\'t mix them up
ElizabethMoroz said:
A spiritual warning tied up with the gift of rhyme among its multiple warnings and comparisons -wise words indeed! Thought provoking and imagery rich as well as being structurally and rhythmically deft and melodic. Thankyou again for the inspired work! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:34
ElizabethMoroz said:
A spiritual warning tied up with the gift of rhyme among its multiple warnings and comparisons -wise words indeed! Thought provoking and imagery rich as well as being structurally and rhythmically deft and melodic. Thankyou again for the inspired work! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 15th, 2025 02:34
Lost art
NafisaSB said:
agree with your thoughtful message about memories, and how they transform
Great work
July 14th, 2025 23:31
NafisaSB said:
agree with your thoughtful message about memories, and how they transform
Great work
July 14th, 2025 23:31
Crazy sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of a man whose fall into the world of madness and violence was never of his own making , his path was decided the day he had the accident, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:50
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of a man whose fall into the world of madness and violence was never of his own making , his path was decided the day he had the accident, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:50
Crazy sonnet
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your \'Crazy Sonnet\' is haunting and raw, gripping with its dark narrative and unflinching imagery. The relentless rhythm mirrors the protagonist\'s descent into madness, leaving a chilling impact. A stark, unforgettable piece.
July 14th, 2025 12:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your \'Crazy Sonnet\' is haunting and raw, gripping with its dark narrative and unflinching imagery. The relentless rhythm mirrors the protagonist\'s descent into madness, leaving a chilling impact. A stark, unforgettable piece.
July 14th, 2025 12:54
Crazy sonnet
arqios said:
Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to sparkle thru however great the topic to rue.
July 14th, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to sparkle thru however great the topic to rue.
July 14th, 2025 12:49
Crazy sonnet
Bella Shepard said:
This poem tells tragicaly of the misery human beings live with, and the destructive power it can have. A life that never seemed to have a chance, confined within a cell of regret. A sad story, honestly and well told.
July 14th, 2025 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
This poem tells tragicaly of the misery human beings live with, and the destructive power it can have. A life that never seemed to have a chance, confined within a cell of regret. A sad story, honestly and well told.
July 14th, 2025 10:37
Crazy sonnet
orchidee said:
A dark joke. They was gonna send KP to the \'chair\' but all her botox made the wiring blow a fuse! lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:58
orchidee said:
A dark joke. They was gonna send KP to the \'chair\' but all her botox made the wiring blow a fuse! lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:58
Crazy sonnet
Priya Tomar said:
Your have God gifted poetic power, your rhyming scheme is beautiful
You displayed the harsh reality of social system through this poetry
July 14th, 2025 07:41
Priya Tomar said:
Your have God gifted poetic power, your rhyming scheme is beautiful
You displayed the harsh reality of social system through this poetry
July 14th, 2025 07:41
Double
Priya Tomar said:
Your rhyming scheme is highly praiseworthy.
To me ,your poetry is a sweet song
July 14th, 2025 06:45
Priya Tomar said:
Your rhyming scheme is highly praiseworthy.
To me ,your poetry is a sweet song
July 14th, 2025 06:45
Damaged
Priya Tomar said:
Absolutely right
Your art of writing is really praiseworthy.
A layman can be a good thinker by reading your poetry.
July 14th, 2025 06:37
Priya Tomar said:
Absolutely right
Your art of writing is really praiseworthy.
A layman can be a good thinker by reading your poetry.
July 14th, 2025 06:37
Crazy sonnet
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tragic descent into madness and violence of a man who is shaped by trauma, mental illness, and societal neglect. It portrays a dark narrative of how childhood experiences, compounded by war and psychological treatment, lead to horrific actions and eventual imprisonment. The poet serves as a critique of how society treats those with mental illness and the consequences of neglect and dehumanization. It raises questions about responsibility, the effects of trauma, and the complexities of human behavior when influenced by factors beyond one\'s control.
\"There is an ironic twist in how the man, who is a victim of his circumstances, becomes a perpetrator of violence.
July 14th, 2025 06:37
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tragic descent into madness and violence of a man who is shaped by trauma, mental illness, and societal neglect. It portrays a dark narrative of how childhood experiences, compounded by war and psychological treatment, lead to horrific actions and eventual imprisonment. The poet serves as a critique of how society treats those with mental illness and the consequences of neglect and dehumanization. It raises questions about responsibility, the effects of trauma, and the complexities of human behavior when influenced by factors beyond one\'s control.
\"There is an ironic twist in how the man, who is a victim of his circumstances, becomes a perpetrator of violence.
July 14th, 2025 06:37
What is a poet?
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello again,
I sincerely love your relationship with stocatto and rhyme in this piece and find the pace and excitation of subject matter intriguing and delightful. You are a gifted wordsmith Sir. Kind regards Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:43
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello again,
I sincerely love your relationship with stocatto and rhyme in this piece and find the pace and excitation of subject matter intriguing and delightful. You are a gifted wordsmith Sir. Kind regards Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:43
Crazy sonnet
David Wakeling said:
Wow a hair raising story.Well told with clever rhyme structure.Excellent writing mi amigo
July 14th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
Wow a hair raising story.Well told with clever rhyme structure.Excellent writing mi amigo
July 14th, 2025 04:24
Crazy sonnet
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello, your sense of internal rhythmic structure is excellent and you weave a compelling narrative whilst maintaining the cadence and stocatto of your rhyme. Well done on a macabre and interesting piece of poetic work, Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:20
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello, your sense of internal rhythmic structure is excellent and you weave a compelling narrative whilst maintaining the cadence and stocatto of your rhyme. Well done on a macabre and interesting piece of poetic work, Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:20
Scraps given
Goldfinch60 said:
This is all our experience in life soren and you cannot teach experience.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
This is all our experience in life soren and you cannot teach experience.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:22
Scraps given
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said my friend, the gift of giving returns to us a hundred fold. Thank you for this lovely contemplation!
July 13th, 2025 14:45
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said my friend, the gift of giving returns to us a hundred fold. Thank you for this lovely contemplation!
July 13th, 2025 14:45
Probability
RSM0812 said:
Light at the end of a dark tunnel. Good will always win. I really liked this poem. Thank you for commenting on my work also.
July 13th, 2025 12:22
RSM0812 said:
Light at the end of a dark tunnel. Good will always win. I really liked this poem. Thank you for commenting on my work also.
July 13th, 2025 12:22
Scraps given
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully captures the quiet pain of loss and the deep meaning behind giving of oneself. It\'s heartfelt, reflective, and leaves a lasting impression. Very well written!!!!
July 13th, 2025 10:28
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully captures the quiet pain of loss and the deep meaning behind giving of oneself. It\'s heartfelt, reflective, and leaves a lasting impression. Very well written!!!!
July 13th, 2025 10:28
Scraps given
Tony Grannell said:
The sacrifices of life, be they large or small so that others may possess and benefit from that which offered, be that at the expense, pain or a gift of the benefactor. It\'s the kindness and the essence therein that is humanity. Of those who have lost, that is, out of kindness have been found in the rewards of the recipients. A wonderful poem in all. Composed with insight and compassion. Very well done, Soren.
All the very best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 10:19
Tony Grannell said:
The sacrifices of life, be they large or small so that others may possess and benefit from that which offered, be that at the expense, pain or a gift of the benefactor. It\'s the kindness and the essence therein that is humanity. Of those who have lost, that is, out of kindness have been found in the rewards of the recipients. A wonderful poem in all. Composed with insight and compassion. Very well done, Soren.
All the very best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 10:19
I love roses
Priya Tomar said:
What a beautiful poetry, it seems metaphor of life from birth to death
July 13th, 2025 09:03
Priya Tomar said:
What a beautiful poetry, it seems metaphor of life from birth to death
July 13th, 2025 09:03
Scraps given
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully said, Soren. There’s something deeply human in the way you frame loss...not just as suffering, but as offering. That final line especially struck me…giving our best piece so that it endures. Quietly profound, my friend. Thank you for this. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully said, Soren. There’s something deeply human in the way you frame loss...not just as suffering, but as offering. That final line especially struck me…giving our best piece so that it endures. Quietly profound, my friend. Thank you for this. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:15
Scraps given
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion of loss and the act of giving oneself to others. It reflects on the pieces of ourselves that we lose over time—whether through experiences, relationships, or the passage of time—and how these lost fragments shape our identity. You emphasize the beauty and significance of sharing parts of ourselves with others, suggesting that the act of giving can lead to emotional fulfillment and connection. seeks to encourage readers to embrace the act of giving pieces of themselves to others, the poet suggesting that while we may lose parts of ourselves, the act of sharing can lead to deeper connections and a sense of purpose. It invites reflection on the beauty of vulnerability and the importance of cherishing the connections we make throughout life.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion of loss and the act of giving oneself to others. It reflects on the pieces of ourselves that we lose over time—whether through experiences, relationships, or the passage of time—and how these lost fragments shape our identity. You emphasize the beauty and significance of sharing parts of ourselves with others, suggesting that the act of giving can lead to emotional fulfillment and connection. seeks to encourage readers to embrace the act of giving pieces of themselves to others, the poet suggesting that while we may lose parts of ourselves, the act of sharing can lead to deeper connections and a sense of purpose. It invites reflection on the beauty of vulnerability and the importance of cherishing the connections we make throughout life.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
Scraps given
Poetic Licence said:
I have always got so much more pleasure out of giving than recieving, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
I have always got so much more pleasure out of giving than recieving, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 05:35
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