Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flocks
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
Flocks
arqios said:
Always makes me wonder how we in subtle ways respond to the signs around us without even knowing to have been doing so, just like these migratory birds, for millennia to uncharted memory. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:17
arqios said:
Always makes me wonder how we in subtle ways respond to the signs around us without even knowing to have been doing so, just like these migratory birds, for millennia to uncharted memory. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:17
Secret of the hive
Goldfinch60 said:
May that harmony always be in your life soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
May that harmony always be in your life soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:19
Secret of the hive
Doggerel Dave said:
Got this one, I think, Soren (makes a change!) A write I thoroughly enjoyed.
Two small issues:
Never heard of stingless bees before (though the bees I’ve encountered haven’t been unfriendly….)
The communal behaviour is obviously wired in, and it may well be that the addition of reason and independent thought which has bought humanity down!! 🙃
February 8th, 2025 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Got this one, I think, Soren (makes a change!) A write I thoroughly enjoyed.
Two small issues:
Never heard of stingless bees before (though the bees I’ve encountered haven’t been unfriendly….)
The communal behaviour is obviously wired in, and it may well be that the addition of reason and independent thought which has bought humanity down!! 🙃
February 8th, 2025 18:10
Secret of the hive
David Wakeling said:
Ya gotta love bees.Honey makes the hive go round.This is delightful read.I enjoyed reading
February 8th, 2025 15:49
David Wakeling said:
Ya gotta love bees.Honey makes the hive go round.This is delightful read.I enjoyed reading
February 8th, 2025 15:49
Secret of the hive
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, a wonderful message about the power of a community. Thank you for sharing
February 8th, 2025 13:36
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, a wonderful message about the power of a community. Thank you for sharing
February 8th, 2025 13:36
Secret of the hive
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, an extraordinary insect and you have given us the reason why they are also queens. Superb. 🐝 🌹 The richness is right here my friend.
February 8th, 2025 13:19
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, an extraordinary insect and you have given us the reason why they are also queens. Superb. 🐝 🌹 The richness is right here my friend.
February 8th, 2025 13:19
Secret of the hive
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, Your poem masterfully reveals stingless bees\' extraordinary harmony and synergy, showcasing their community-driven spirit and the transformative power of unity over individual pursuits. You illuminate the bees\' unique lifestyle, focusing on the breathtaking beauty of their existence rather than their honey production. You seem to aim to inspire a deeper appreciation for the vital importance of community, cooperation, and the awe-inspiring beauty of life in the natural world, encouraging me as the reader to marvel at the intricate relationships within the ecosystem.
February 8th, 2025 09:48
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, Your poem masterfully reveals stingless bees\' extraordinary harmony and synergy, showcasing their community-driven spirit and the transformative power of unity over individual pursuits. You illuminate the bees\' unique lifestyle, focusing on the breathtaking beauty of their existence rather than their honey production. You seem to aim to inspire a deeper appreciation for the vital importance of community, cooperation, and the awe-inspiring beauty of life in the natural world, encouraging me as the reader to marvel at the intricate relationships within the ecosystem.
February 8th, 2025 09:48
Secret of the hive
Poetic Licence said:
For me a interesting and enjoyable read as there is a lot to admire and learn from the way nature lives and looks after itself. Bees are a wonderful self sufficient community but they are also a dictatorship, with severe punishment for falling out of line. Still a lovely write
February 8th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
For me a interesting and enjoyable read as there is a lot to admire and learn from the way nature lives and looks after itself. Bees are a wonderful self sufficient community but they are also a dictatorship, with severe punishment for falling out of line. Still a lovely write
February 8th, 2025 08:18
Secret of the hive
aDarkerMind said:
the individual will survive....
lets hope one day we will all learn from the harmony of bees.
a most exceptional write Soren.
February 8th, 2025 06:32
aDarkerMind said:
the individual will survive....
lets hope one day we will all learn from the harmony of bees.
a most exceptional write Soren.
February 8th, 2025 06:32
Secret of the hive
arqios said:
Like a beekeeper’s song! A ‘ quiet’ but busy and buzzy well occupied life. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
Like a beekeeper’s song! A ‘ quiet’ but busy and buzzy well occupied life. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:34
Secret of the hive
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was just thinking of honeybees, and then I come across this rhyme!
I\'m working on getting this body to produce its own honey - need some harmony to do that!
Beautiful work, Soren.
February 8th, 2025 03:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
I was just thinking of honeybees, and then I come across this rhyme!
I\'m working on getting this body to produce its own honey - need some harmony to do that!
Beautiful work, Soren.
February 8th, 2025 03:40
Warning
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, I just cannot understand how or why people do this.
Andy
February 8th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, I just cannot understand how or why people do this.
Andy
February 8th, 2025 02:49
Warning
Dan Williams said:
And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate. Nice work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:27
Dan Williams said:
And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate. Nice work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:27
Warning
Friendship said:
Disturbing images of neglect, yet unfortunately, they ring true. We inhabit a world plagued by sickness, where we have collectively failed to safeguard our most vulnerable members. This poem, Soren, is a masterpiece. Your work employs potent imagery to craft a vivid tableau of the suffering endured by infants and children, as well as the surrounding decay. Despite our education, society has failed our children. While some of us possess a moral compass, a significant proportion of individuals are unfit to assume parental responsibilities.
February 7th, 2025 13:47
Friendship said:
Disturbing images of neglect, yet unfortunately, they ring true. We inhabit a world plagued by sickness, where we have collectively failed to safeguard our most vulnerable members. This poem, Soren, is a masterpiece. Your work employs potent imagery to craft a vivid tableau of the suffering endured by infants and children, as well as the surrounding decay. Despite our education, society has failed our children. While some of us possess a moral compass, a significant proportion of individuals are unfit to assume parental responsibilities.
February 7th, 2025 13:47
Warning
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever read from you Soren.
with every word ringing true.
a most outstanding write my friend;
February 7th, 2025 13:35
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever read from you Soren.
with every word ringing true.
a most outstanding write my friend;
February 7th, 2025 13:35
Warning
Cassie58 said:
Dark as dark can be, and this is still going on in some places. Hard to believe, but it is a shocking truth. Well penned Soren. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:04
Cassie58 said:
Dark as dark can be, and this is still going on in some places. Hard to believe, but it is a shocking truth. Well penned Soren. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:04
Warning
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love this line ... \"Shake and shake, in an oven bake,\"
February 7th, 2025 11:59
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love this line ... \"Shake and shake, in an oven bake,\"
February 7th, 2025 11:59
Warning
arqios said:
It is said that there will always the the vulnerable ones in any grouping, hence vigilance and compassion, proactive participation is necessary. In some cultures it is understood that the whole “village” in its entirety is responsible and the heart of rearing its children. Apathy and the blind eye are among the silent killers of society.
February 7th, 2025 06:18
arqios said:
It is said that there will always the the vulnerable ones in any grouping, hence vigilance and compassion, proactive participation is necessary. In some cultures it is understood that the whole “village” in its entirety is responsible and the heart of rearing its children. Apathy and the blind eye are among the silent killers of society.
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Warning
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very graphic and disturbing picture, in a good way. Reminds me off a scene of that Shakespeare play you cannot mention, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very graphic and disturbing picture, in a good way. Reminds me off a scene of that Shakespeare play you cannot mention, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Warning
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is graphic.It certainly paints a picture imprisonment.Excellent
February 7th, 2025 04:51
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is graphic.It certainly paints a picture imprisonment.Excellent
February 7th, 2025 04:51
Warning
Teddy.15 said:
So incredibly powerful dark and true to what the world is fast becoming. Some humans don\'t deserve to see the light of day. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 04:43
Teddy.15 said:
So incredibly powerful dark and true to what the world is fast becoming. Some humans don\'t deserve to see the light of day. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 04:43
Musings
Michael Edwards said:
Such great use of the laguage - a masterful write.
February 7th, 2025 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Such great use of the laguage - a masterful write.
February 7th, 2025 02:51
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