Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Garden with no gardener
Dan Williams said:
A veritable symphony of flora and fauna. Very nicely done.
September 23rd, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
A veritable symphony of flora and fauna. Very nicely done.
September 23rd, 2024 00:04
Garden with no gardener
Thad Wilk said:
You have painted
a most stunning scene 😍
An outstanding
poem, picturesque
and serene! 🐦 🌈 🌺
Thanks for sharing my friend! ☺️
Best regards o Thad
September 22nd, 2024 20:56
Thad Wilk said:
You have painted
a most stunning scene 😍
An outstanding
poem, picturesque
and serene! 🐦 🌈 🌺
Thanks for sharing my friend! ☺️
Best regards o Thad
September 22nd, 2024 20:56
Garden with no gardener
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of flowers to have to be gardening!
September 22nd, 2024 10:24
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of flowers to have to be gardening!
September 22nd, 2024 10:24
Garden with no gardener
Neville said:
I am a very keen horneythologist but never heard of a gralha .. I can just picture the multicoloured vista .. splendid .. Neville
September 22nd, 2024 09:43
Neville said:
I am a very keen horneythologist but never heard of a gralha .. I can just picture the multicoloured vista .. splendid .. Neville
September 22nd, 2024 09:43
Garden with no gardener
aDarkerMind said:
nature in all it\'s splendour Soren.
picture perfect
as is every line you have written.
September 22nd, 2024 06:26
aDarkerMind said:
nature in all it\'s splendour Soren.
picture perfect
as is every line you have written.
September 22nd, 2024 06:26
Garden with no gardener
Teddy.15 said:
Isn\'t nature superb, I too have a yellow orchid and I too don\'t have a garden, yet I care for it the same. This is precious 🌹
September 22nd, 2024 06:14
Teddy.15 said:
Isn\'t nature superb, I too have a yellow orchid and I too don\'t have a garden, yet I care for it the same. This is precious 🌹
September 22nd, 2024 06:14
Expectations
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines are so very true soren, we are what we are and need to value ourselves.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines are so very true soren, we are what we are and need to value ourselves.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:17
Expectations
Dan Williams said:
Best advice I\'ve received this year. Nailed it again.
September 22nd, 2024 01:09
Dan Williams said:
Best advice I\'ve received this year. Nailed it again.
September 22nd, 2024 01:09
Expectations
Cassie58 said:
I love this poem. It speaks to me. We have raised our three grandchildren. We just want them to be happy. They are all different, pursuing what they want to do at their own pace and in their own way. You can’t force your own expectations on your kids. It just doesn’t work.
September 21st, 2024 19:02
Cassie58 said:
I love this poem. It speaks to me. We have raised our three grandchildren. We just want them to be happy. They are all different, pursuing what they want to do at their own pace and in their own way. You can’t force your own expectations on your kids. It just doesn’t work.
September 21st, 2024 19:02
Expectations
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the impeccable rhyme and the last two lines, Soren.
September 21st, 2024 16:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the impeccable rhyme and the last two lines, Soren.
September 21st, 2024 16:36
Expectations
aDarkerMind said:
well you hit the spot with this fine write Soren.
far too many good lines to pick from.
very impressed.
September 21st, 2024 12:47
aDarkerMind said:
well you hit the spot with this fine write Soren.
far too many good lines to pick from.
very impressed.
September 21st, 2024 12:47
Expectations
Neville said:
I read this earlier and thought it was great .. came back this evening and it still is .. excellent mate absolutely ..
September 21st, 2024 12:08
Neville said:
I read this earlier and thought it was great .. came back this evening and it still is .. excellent mate absolutely ..
September 21st, 2024 12:08
Expectations
orchidee said:
Why do I persist in trying to make a silk purse out a sow\'s ear? Or cast my pearls before swine? i.e. KP! lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:54
orchidee said:
Why do I persist in trying to make a silk purse out a sow\'s ear? Or cast my pearls before swine? i.e. KP! lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:54
Expectations
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful message you convey, love this stanza
You can\'t make an orange tree into a pear
A hammer is not a saw
table never a chair
a flamingo is not a macaw
As a mother to an 11 year old I so appreciate this, we do not follow religion, he can choose for himself when he is older, nor do we push him to be someone we want him to be, i am very strict with politeness, and its paid off as he is the most polite in my town, but as for what we want him to be well we have no expectation except that he is happy. Such a gorgeous post dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 21st, 2024 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful message you convey, love this stanza
You can\'t make an orange tree into a pear
A hammer is not a saw
table never a chair
a flamingo is not a macaw
As a mother to an 11 year old I so appreciate this, we do not follow religion, he can choose for himself when he is older, nor do we push him to be someone we want him to be, i am very strict with politeness, and its paid off as he is the most polite in my town, but as for what we want him to be well we have no expectation except that he is happy. Such a gorgeous post dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 21st, 2024 04:40
Junkyard of time
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those word will always be there for you and for us.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those word will always be there for you and for us.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:44
Junkyard of time
Dan Williams said:
God that \"water of poetry\" is grand, inspired. Add this to your list of winners.
September 21st, 2024 00:08
Dan Williams said:
God that \"water of poetry\" is grand, inspired. Add this to your list of winners.
September 21st, 2024 00:08
Junkyard of time
Bobby O said:
I really like it.
A font sublime ?
Slime through me off but WTF do I know. I really like it
September 20th, 2024 23:38
Bobby O said:
I really like it.
A font sublime ?
Slime through me off but WTF do I know. I really like it
September 20th, 2024 23:38
Junkyard of time
aDarkerMind said:
you have a gift for words Soren.
of that, there is no doubt.
am a fan and will always be my friend.
September 20th, 2024 13:00
aDarkerMind said:
you have a gift for words Soren.
of that, there is no doubt.
am a fan and will always be my friend.
September 20th, 2024 13:00
Junkyard of time
Neville said:
I have sipped from that very same cup .. excellent sir .. brimming over in fact
September 20th, 2024 10:28
Neville said:
I have sipped from that very same cup .. excellent sir .. brimming over in fact
September 20th, 2024 10:28
Junkyard of time
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating poem
great use of metaphor,
rhyme spot on poet!! 👍
Much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 20th, 2024 10:24
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating poem
great use of metaphor,
rhyme spot on poet!! 👍
Much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 20th, 2024 10:24
Junkyard of time
Accidental Poet said:
So glad I took the time to read this, time not wasted soren. 😉👍
September 20th, 2024 08:35
Accidental Poet said:
So glad I took the time to read this, time not wasted soren. 😉👍
September 20th, 2024 08:35
Junkyard of time
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor for living and making memories here I see a beginning a middle and an end. Beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 20th, 2024 07:40
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor for living and making memories here I see a beginning a middle and an end. Beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 20th, 2024 07:40
Junkyard of time
orchidee said:
Ahh, a drink for KP, though invisible - a cup of rhyme. I\'m still feeding her sewage. lol.
September 20th, 2024 07:08
orchidee said:
Ahh, a drink for KP, though invisible - a cup of rhyme. I\'m still feeding her sewage. lol.
September 20th, 2024 07:08
Handicap
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing piece, Soren, with some fantastic lines.
September 20th, 2024 05:21
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing piece, Soren, with some fantastic lines.
September 20th, 2024 05:21
Handicap
Neville said:
I like this very much ..
I also think the whole thing could work if the word kill replaced save in the summative line .. just saying on behalf of a friend .. Neville
September 20th, 2024 01:32
Neville said:
I like this very much ..
I also think the whole thing could work if the word kill replaced save in the summative line .. just saying on behalf of a friend .. Neville
September 20th, 2024 01:32
Handicap
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, humans should not interfere with Nature as it has its own way of progressing.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, humans should not interfere with Nature as it has its own way of progressing.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:20
Handicap
Dan Williams said:
Smooth, evocative, typical. Yet another winner.
September 20th, 2024 01:03
Dan Williams said:
Smooth, evocative, typical. Yet another winner.
September 20th, 2024 01:03
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