Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
What happened to beauty?
Teddy.15 said:
It can all change in a click of a moment, for better or for worse. Powerful and poetic as your work always is. 🌹
January 10th, 2025 05:23
Teddy.15 said:
It can all change in a click of a moment, for better or for worse. Powerful and poetic as your work always is. 🌹
January 10th, 2025 05:23
The muse\'s dirge
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all have those lost poems but in time they will come back when our Muse finds them within us.
Andy
January 10th, 2025 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all have those lost poems but in time they will come back when our Muse finds them within us.
Andy
January 10th, 2025 02:13
The muse\'s dirge
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning 💪
kind of poignant 😢
I must say!
A muse lost can
make blue skies
turn gray. 🗿
Awesome penning
great rhyme and flow,
I don\'t think 🤔 your muse
will ever go!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:03
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning 💪
kind of poignant 😢
I must say!
A muse lost can
make blue skies
turn gray. 🗿
Awesome penning
great rhyme and flow,
I don\'t think 🤔 your muse
will ever go!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:03
The muse\'s dirge
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this, I feel I\'ve got rooms that look like this--writing on the walls and broken mirrors.
January 9th, 2025 21:48
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this, I feel I\'ve got rooms that look like this--writing on the walls and broken mirrors.
January 9th, 2025 21:48
The muse\'s dirge
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. It looks like youe muse is back.
January 9th, 2025 18:13
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. It looks like youe muse is back.
January 9th, 2025 18:13
Chickens
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Your words blew me away! I can relate to so much in this. To quote Bob Dylan, I try my best to be just like I am, but everybody wants me to be just like them.
January 9th, 2025 10:36
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Your words blew me away! I can relate to so much in this. To quote Bob Dylan, I try my best to be just like I am, but everybody wants me to be just like them.
January 9th, 2025 10:36
The muse\'s dirge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the muse. Sometimes there, but then sometimes on vacation. But where would we be without the inspiration...and I do believe that the breaks often spark seasons of even greater productivity. Well expressed, my friend! Here\'s to the craft! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the muse. Sometimes there, but then sometimes on vacation. But where would we be without the inspiration...and I do believe that the breaks often spark seasons of even greater productivity. Well expressed, my friend! Here\'s to the craft! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:53
The muse\'s dirge
arqios said:
The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how to entice them to stay. Thanks for this splendid read 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 9th, 2025 06:52
arqios said:
The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how to entice them to stay. Thanks for this splendid read 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 9th, 2025 06:52
The muse\'s dirge
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but reflective write, a pleasure to read. wish i could write like this, loved it
January 9th, 2025 06:06
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but reflective write, a pleasure to read. wish i could write like this, loved it
January 9th, 2025 06:06
The muse\'s dirge
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Same old stuff, you mean?! lol.
January 9th, 2025 05:30
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Same old stuff, you mean?! lol.
January 9th, 2025 05:30
The muse\'s dirge
Teddy.15 said:
I am not convinced, your muse is with you for eternity 🤣 my dear sorrenbarret what a wonderful powerful and very humble write. 🌹
January 9th, 2025 05:21
Teddy.15 said:
I am not convinced, your muse is with you for eternity 🤣 my dear sorrenbarret what a wonderful powerful and very humble write. 🌹
January 9th, 2025 05:21
Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:
In this world we need to become harder in life to stop those who don\'t care about anything bring harm to you.
Andy
January 9th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
In this world we need to become harder in life to stop those who don\'t care about anything bring harm to you.
Andy
January 9th, 2025 02:48
Chickens
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
some cool wisdom I see!! 👍
Love the 🐔🐢
metaphor, fit perfectly!!
GREAT rhyme and flow,,
penned superbly!🤩
Best regards ✌️
January 8th, 2025 19:54
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem
some cool wisdom I see!! 👍
Love the 🐔🐢
metaphor, fit perfectly!!
GREAT rhyme and flow,,
penned superbly!🤩
Best regards ✌️
January 8th, 2025 19:54
Chickens
David Wakeling said:
This reminds me of Aesops fables only deeper.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:50
David Wakeling said:
This reminds me of Aesops fables only deeper.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:50
Chickens
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ll wake up one day and say
\"Why the hell was I so afraid
Of a bunch of chickens!\"
Great write, Soren.
January 8th, 2025 18:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ll wake up one day and say
\"Why the hell was I so afraid
Of a bunch of chickens!\"
Great write, Soren.
January 8th, 2025 18:38
Chickens
orchidee said:
Good write SB. As in another comment here, I tell KP she\'s ugly, and now she believes it. I needn\'t have wasted my breath telling her that though. lol.
January 8th, 2025 09:50
orchidee said:
Good write SB. As in another comment here, I tell KP she\'s ugly, and now she believes it. I needn\'t have wasted my breath telling her that though. lol.
January 8th, 2025 09:50
Chickens
Poetic Licence said:
Quite often the pecking is the first part of some thing more serious, like bullying, Intimidation, Humiliation, belittling etc etc, it would be idle for everyone to grow a rhino skin and not let effect them on the outside, not everyone has that capability. You can be as tough as old boots but sometimes the pecking gets through. As the old saying goes, if someone tells you often enough you are ugly, eventually you end up thinking you are ugly. Saying all that i still enjoyed the read and the context it was written in, thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:54
Poetic Licence said:
Quite often the pecking is the first part of some thing more serious, like bullying, Intimidation, Humiliation, belittling etc etc, it would be idle for everyone to grow a rhino skin and not let effect them on the outside, not everyone has that capability. You can be as tough as old boots but sometimes the pecking gets through. As the old saying goes, if someone tells you often enough you are ugly, eventually you end up thinking you are ugly. Saying all that i still enjoyed the read and the context it was written in, thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:54
Chickens
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diversity is what makes this world so beautiful and so challenging. For me, I would rather take the challenges that come with it than to live with no diversity. Growing up in a rural setting, there was almost ZERO diversity...so I literally seek it out and have my whole adult life. Conversely, I spent till about 16 trying to \"fit\" in and shed what made me unique in order not appear different than the herd. At 16...that facade came crashing down and never returned. Why? Because I learned quick that no matter how I \"appeared\" to other people, they were still not going to accept me. So, I said \"f@*k them!\" and started to be myself and hung around people who accepted me for who I was. I\'ve not looked back. In this poem, the title goes along with the content. People who are afraid to appear different and keep up appearances. But that can, of course, and should change. A powerful metaphor indeed, my friend. 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diversity is what makes this world so beautiful and so challenging. For me, I would rather take the challenges that come with it than to live with no diversity. Growing up in a rural setting, there was almost ZERO diversity...so I literally seek it out and have my whole adult life. Conversely, I spent till about 16 trying to \"fit\" in and shed what made me unique in order not appear different than the herd. At 16...that facade came crashing down and never returned. Why? Because I learned quick that no matter how I \"appeared\" to other people, they were still not going to accept me. So, I said \"f@*k them!\" and started to be myself and hung around people who accepted me for who I was. I\'ve not looked back. In this poem, the title goes along with the content. People who are afraid to appear different and keep up appearances. But that can, of course, and should change. A powerful metaphor indeed, my friend. 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 07:50
Chickens
arqios said:
Now that just opens up the idea of being hen-pecked and growing a tortoise shell that thickens in response to adversity. Like a friend of mine relates quite often, remain always soft on the inside but be sure to be tough skinned like the turtle on the outside 🐢
January 8th, 2025 07:17
arqios said:
Now that just opens up the idea of being hen-pecked and growing a tortoise shell that thickens in response to adversity. Like a friend of mine relates quite often, remain always soft on the inside but be sure to be tough skinned like the turtle on the outside 🐢
January 8th, 2025 07:17
Chickens
Teddy.15 said:
A wisdomful.peice that can relate to so many things in our world today, but what I see is a message that says be yourself and be proud no matter of anyone\'s opinions and find the courage to believe in you. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 04:19
Teddy.15 said:
A wisdomful.peice that can relate to so many things in our world today, but what I see is a message that says be yourself and be proud no matter of anyone\'s opinions and find the courage to believe in you. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 04:19
Condemned
Goldfinch60 said:
AI has become the ruination of mankind soren, we just do not talk to each other in person anymore.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
AI has become the ruination of mankind soren, we just do not talk to each other in person anymore.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:54
Condemned
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem
thoughts and
message,
eloquently expressed.! 👍
That\'s where all
computers are sent when their
time comes, to rest. RIP 😢
Thanks for scaring (sharing) 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:00
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem
thoughts and
message,
eloquently expressed.! 👍
That\'s where all
computers are sent when their
time comes, to rest. RIP 😢
Thanks for scaring (sharing) 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:00
Condemned
Dan Williams said:
Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes my daughter to explain technology to me now.
January 7th, 2025 20:42
Dan Williams said:
Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes my daughter to explain technology to me now.
January 7th, 2025 20:42
Gone
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely, appropriate. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:31
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely, appropriate. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:31
Condemned
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The subject is very close to my heart. A fascinating poem, makes one question the path of progress on the rubble of the dead. Loved it!
January 7th, 2025 20:22
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The subject is very close to my heart. A fascinating poem, makes one question the path of progress on the rubble of the dead. Loved it!
January 7th, 2025 20:22
Stronger than Love
Teddy.15 said:
Well looky here, I\'m digging up your gorgeous work this evening dear sorrenbarret wow sir. wow and what an ending or should I say neverending. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:33
Teddy.15 said:
Well looky here, I\'m digging up your gorgeous work this evening dear sorrenbarret wow sir. wow and what an ending or should I say neverending. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:33
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