Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A grip too tight
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
A grip too tight
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
A grip too tight
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
A grip too tight
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
A grip too tight
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Too warm
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Flies
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
Mourning Doves
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren, Your poem is rich and evocative, creating vivid imagery that draws me as the reader into the scene. Words like \"chilling,\" \"bare,\" \"mourn,\" and \"frigid\" evoke a sense of coldness and desolation, while terms like \"cuddle,\" \"caress,\" and \"comforter\" highlight the warmth and intimacy shared between the doves. Your poem revolves around themes of companionship, vulnerability, and the harshness of nature. It portrays the bond between two mourning doves as they seek warmth and solace amidst the cold and desolation of winter. The subject matter reflects on the fragility of life and the inevitable threats that come with it, emphasizing both the tenderness of their relationship and the looming presence of danger.
March 7th, 2025 19:53
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren, Your poem is rich and evocative, creating vivid imagery that draws me as the reader into the scene. Words like \"chilling,\" \"bare,\" \"mourn,\" and \"frigid\" evoke a sense of coldness and desolation, while terms like \"cuddle,\" \"caress,\" and \"comforter\" highlight the warmth and intimacy shared between the doves. Your poem revolves around themes of companionship, vulnerability, and the harshness of nature. It portrays the bond between two mourning doves as they seek warmth and solace amidst the cold and desolation of winter. The subject matter reflects on the fragility of life and the inevitable threats that come with it, emphasizing both the tenderness of their relationship and the looming presence of danger.
March 7th, 2025 19:53
Too warm
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Mass hysteria
Friendship said:
This poem is very deep and dark, yet a little disturbing. Soren, Your poem explores the themes of destruction and transformation as prerequisites for social change, suggesting that dismantling existing structures, even functional ones, is necessary to address societal issues. The imagery of violence and sacrifice represents the harsh realities of change and the moral ambiguities involved in challenging the status quo. References to mythological figures like Charon, the ferryman of the dead, and the butcher evoke a sense of inevitability and darkness surrounding the process of change.
March 7th, 2025 17:22
Friendship said:
This poem is very deep and dark, yet a little disturbing. Soren, Your poem explores the themes of destruction and transformation as prerequisites for social change, suggesting that dismantling existing structures, even functional ones, is necessary to address societal issues. The imagery of violence and sacrifice represents the harsh realities of change and the moral ambiguities involved in challenging the status quo. References to mythological figures like Charon, the ferryman of the dead, and the butcher evoke a sense of inevitability and darkness surrounding the process of change.
March 7th, 2025 17:22
Between a rock and a hard place
Friendship said:
Soren , poem reflects on the unpredictability of life, the inherent dangers of living closely with nature, and the suddenness of loss. It serves as a meditation on the vulnerability of human existence in the face of powerful natural forces.it has me thinking!
March 7th, 2025 11:37
Friendship said:
Soren , poem reflects on the unpredictability of life, the inherent dangers of living closely with nature, and the suddenness of loss. It serves as a meditation on the vulnerability of human existence in the face of powerful natural forces.it has me thinking!
March 7th, 2025 11:37
Soliloquy of courage, honesty and forgiveness
Friendship said:
Wow a very powerful poem, Soren, Forgiveness seems to be a complex word to comprehend at times! Your poem centers around the theme of self-honesty and the courage required to confront one\'s true self. It emphasizes the importance of acknowledging one\'s flaws, taking responsibility for them, and the liberating power of forgiveness. Ultimately, it advocates for authenticity, suggesting that one must be true to oneself to foster genuine relationships with others. the psychological and emotional struggles of self-acceptance, the perils of self-deception, and the transformative power of forgiveness. It reflects on the internal battle one faces when confronting personal inadequacies and the importance of owning one\'s truth. Yet Your poem serves as a call to action, encouraging readers to confront their own truths, embrace their flaws, and find freedom through self-forgiveness. It aims to inspire courage in the pursuit of self-honesty and authenticity.
March 7th, 2025 11:21
Friendship said:
Wow a very powerful poem, Soren, Forgiveness seems to be a complex word to comprehend at times! Your poem centers around the theme of self-honesty and the courage required to confront one\'s true self. It emphasizes the importance of acknowledging one\'s flaws, taking responsibility for them, and the liberating power of forgiveness. Ultimately, it advocates for authenticity, suggesting that one must be true to oneself to foster genuine relationships with others. the psychological and emotional struggles of self-acceptance, the perils of self-deception, and the transformative power of forgiveness. It reflects on the internal battle one faces when confronting personal inadequacies and the importance of owning one\'s truth. Yet Your poem serves as a call to action, encouraging readers to confront their own truths, embrace their flaws, and find freedom through self-forgiveness. It aims to inspire courage in the pursuit of self-honesty and authenticity.
March 7th, 2025 11:21
Flies
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
Too warm
Friendship said:
OH, Soren, the extreme heat of summer days, Your poem serves to highlight the discomfort brought on by extreme heat and the human (and animal) response to it, reflecting on the environmental challenges and the reliance on technology, like air conditioning or fans, to cope with such conditions. also can be interpreted as set in the peak of summer, during a particularly sweltering day. Try to stay cool my friend, have a great day,
March 7th, 2025 06:09
Friendship said:
OH, Soren, the extreme heat of summer days, Your poem serves to highlight the discomfort brought on by extreme heat and the human (and animal) response to it, reflecting on the environmental challenges and the reliance on technology, like air conditioning or fans, to cope with such conditions. also can be interpreted as set in the peak of summer, during a particularly sweltering day. Try to stay cool my friend, have a great day,
March 7th, 2025 06:09
Too warm
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
I feel a sense of might become, with global warming, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 05:27
Too warm
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Neville said:
Now that is bloomin hot .. Sounds like a global warming warning to me ..
March 7th, 2025 04:57
Too warm
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
David Wakeling said:
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56
Too warm
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, only the best for the devil 🤣 oh how I know this feeling, it can be truly unbearable the summer heat here in Italy, I cannot have air-conditioning because I\'m an asthma sufferer and allergic to dust, hey maybe that old devil bought my soul lol wonderful rhyme and I could feel the heat, Dante is down there having a party I believe 🌹
March 7th, 2025 03:57
Too warm
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Some of those overhead cooler things give out an icy blast, even in Summer. Then it\'s colder indoors than outdoors. Doh! It\'s a draught that\'s more unpleasant than actually being outdoors on a chilly windy day.
March 7th, 2025 03:28
Blinded by the light
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so intent on going one way soren that we ignore other things around us.
Andy
March 7th, 2025 02:15
Truth
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem delves into the subjective nature of art appreciation, highlighting the diverse factors that shape individual perceptions and evaluations of a work of art. It underscores that art interpretation is profoundly personal, influenced by unique experiences, emotions, and perspectives, thereby prompting reflection on the essence of art and the pivotal role of personal experiences, societal influences, and emotional states in art perception and valuation. It invites readers to examine their own emotions and biases when engaging with art, ultimately implying that the true value of art resides in individual interpretation.
March 6th, 2025 20:29
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem delves into the subjective nature of art appreciation, highlighting the diverse factors that shape individual perceptions and evaluations of a work of art. It underscores that art interpretation is profoundly personal, influenced by unique experiences, emotions, and perspectives, thereby prompting reflection on the essence of art and the pivotal role of personal experiences, societal influences, and emotional states in art perception and valuation. It invites readers to examine their own emotions and biases when engaging with art, ultimately implying that the true value of art resides in individual interpretation.
March 6th, 2025 20:29
Never enough
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,Your poem discusses the various attributes people might look for in romantic or platonic relationships, such as looks, trust, communication, and kindness. It ultimately encourages readers to appreciate what they have rather than seeking an unattainable ideal.
March 6th, 2025 20:15
Friendship said:
Well written,Soren,Your poem discusses the various attributes people might look for in romantic or platonic relationships, such as looks, trust, communication, and kindness. It ultimately encourages readers to appreciate what they have rather than seeking an unattainable ideal.
March 6th, 2025 20:15
I alone
Friendship said:
Very creative ,Soren,Your poem draws on figures from biblical stories who experienced abandonment, struggle, and ultimately survival, reflecting on the speaker\'s own feelings of being cast aside while also hinting at the power of renewal and hope. Your line breaks serve to create pauses that emphasize the connection between the words and their meanings, allowing the reader to absorb the weight of each figure mentioned. You seem to serve to articulate the speaker\'s feelings of loneliness and survival while exploring the possibility of redemption and rebirth through the lens of shared human and biblical experiences
March 6th, 2025 20:10
Friendship said:
Very creative ,Soren,Your poem draws on figures from biblical stories who experienced abandonment, struggle, and ultimately survival, reflecting on the speaker\'s own feelings of being cast aside while also hinting at the power of renewal and hope. Your line breaks serve to create pauses that emphasize the connection between the words and their meanings, allowing the reader to absorb the weight of each figure mentioned. You seem to serve to articulate the speaker\'s feelings of loneliness and survival while exploring the possibility of redemption and rebirth through the lens of shared human and biblical experiences
March 6th, 2025 20:10
Words and questions
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem explores the weight of unspoken words and unasked questions, suggesting that some truths can haunt us and influence our emotional state long after they are experienced. It implies that confronting painful memories can lead to suffering and despair. and the lasting effects of emotional turmoil, encouraging readers to reflect on their own experiences with unspoken words and unresolved issues.
March 6th, 2025 14:22
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem explores the weight of unspoken words and unasked questions, suggesting that some truths can haunt us and influence our emotional state long after they are experienced. It implies that confronting painful memories can lead to suffering and despair. and the lasting effects of emotional turmoil, encouraging readers to reflect on their own experiences with unspoken words and unresolved issues.
March 6th, 2025 14:22
Panic
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
Friendship said:
Soren,Your poem explores feelings of anxiety and trepidation in the face of an impending but uncertain threat. It captures the essence of living with a sense of foreboding and an inability to escape from the emotional turmoil that accompanies such feelings. Yet your poem aims to articulate the often unspoken feelings of anxiety that accompany the unknown, providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their fears. It seeks to evoke empathy and understanding in the reader, highlighting the shared human experience of facing uncertainty.
March 6th, 2025 14:10
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