Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Kiss of death
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a different way to look at life soren, intriguing words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a different way to look at life soren, intriguing words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:22
Kiss of death
Dan Williams said:
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09
Dan Williams said:
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09
Little bird
Dan Williams said:
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality but so eloquently put. Bravo.
November 22nd, 2024 00:00
Dan Williams said:
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality but so eloquently put. Bravo.
November 22nd, 2024 00:00
Kiss of death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very through-provoking. Love the juxtaposition used in this piece. Very effective! 👏🌹
November 21st, 2024 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very through-provoking. Love the juxtaposition used in this piece. Very effective! 👏🌹
November 21st, 2024 11:38
Little bird
Cassie58 said:
Children can be cruel simply because they haven’t been taught compassion. Reminds me of animals kept in zoos and canaries in cages. Both touching and sad Soren.
November 21st, 2024 08:53
Cassie58 said:
Children can be cruel simply because they haven’t been taught compassion. Reminds me of animals kept in zoos and canaries in cages. Both touching and sad Soren.
November 21st, 2024 08:53
Kiss of death
arqios said:
Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully expressed, evocative and provocative. So much to unpack in such a tiny package 📦
November 21st, 2024 06:15
arqios said:
Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully expressed, evocative and provocative. So much to unpack in such a tiny package 📦
November 21st, 2024 06:15
Kiss of death
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to think about in this gem. Death Marriage Freedom and Friendship. The Fantastic Four. A wonderful piece. Well done
November 21st, 2024 05:03
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to think about in this gem. Death Marriage Freedom and Friendship. The Fantastic Four. A wonderful piece. Well done
November 21st, 2024 05:03
Kiss of death
Neville said:
wow, every now and zen, something reminds me of that legendary Bruce Lee saying .. writing without writing .. and like death, tis inevitable ..
November 21st, 2024 04:32
Neville said:
wow, every now and zen, something reminds me of that legendary Bruce Lee saying .. writing without writing .. and like death, tis inevitable ..
November 21st, 2024 04:32
Little bird
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen to many animals and humans soren through no fault of their own.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen to many animals and humans soren through no fault of their own.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:04
Little bird
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember killing ants for \"fun\" as a kid. And smashing their nests up in woodlands.
When I grew up, I remember someone telling me about the \"rush\" of doing evil.
Great write, Soren.
November 20th, 2024 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember killing ants for \"fun\" as a kid. And smashing their nests up in woodlands.
When I grew up, I remember someone telling me about the \"rush\" of doing evil.
Great write, Soren.
November 20th, 2024 18:58
Little bird
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am way off, but I kept thinking of life in gilded cage. Very powerful and introspective poem.
November 20th, 2024 15:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am way off, but I kept thinking of life in gilded cage. Very powerful and introspective poem.
November 20th, 2024 15:03
Little bird
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem,
thoughts and message penned!! 👍
Great rhyme AND flows
like a gentle stream,
much enjoyed my friend,!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 20th, 2024 14:58
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem,
thoughts and message penned!! 👍
Great rhyme AND flows
like a gentle stream,
much enjoyed my friend,!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 20th, 2024 14:58
Little bird
Bobby O said:
I liked this one. I’m still thinking about it. When should we have known better !?
Rhetorical Q. You’re off the hook so now I’m thinking if I had a nickel for each grasshopper I let fir in a jar.
November 20th, 2024 10:22
Bobby O said:
I liked this one. I’m still thinking about it. When should we have known better !?
Rhetorical Q. You’re off the hook so now I’m thinking if I had a nickel for each grasshopper I let fir in a jar.
November 20th, 2024 10:22
Little bird
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a memory, but a permanent part of you. Had a budgie in a cage as a kid..... Short but to the point. Thanks Soren.
November 20th, 2024 08:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a memory, but a permanent part of you. Had a budgie in a cage as a kid..... Short but to the point. Thanks Soren.
November 20th, 2024 08:31
Little bird
Neville said:
this is, in its entirety and also contains an important moralistic message .. so, despite it reading like a nursery crime you are henceforth forgived ..
November 20th, 2024 08:25
Neville said:
this is, in its entirety and also contains an important moralistic message .. so, despite it reading like a nursery crime you are henceforth forgived ..
November 20th, 2024 08:25
Little bird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very sad and thought-provoking poem. With the literal interpretation aside, this poem makes for a fine metaphor on how we can end up treating human beings as well. A well-written, simple...yet profound...poem that works on multiple levels. 🌹👏
November 20th, 2024 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very sad and thought-provoking poem. With the literal interpretation aside, this poem makes for a fine metaphor on how we can end up treating human beings as well. A well-written, simple...yet profound...poem that works on multiple levels. 🌹👏
November 20th, 2024 07:46
Little bird
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of men were born in chains. Like nature is to man, and man is to himself. The ending is a classic like some of your works should be.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of men were born in chains. Like nature is to man, and man is to himself. The ending is a classic like some of your works should be.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
Little bird
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful work.I love the rhyme.It is debatable whether a bird should be caged or set free. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:03
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful work.I love the rhyme.It is debatable whether a bird should be caged or set free. Well done
November 20th, 2024 06:03
Little bird
arqios said:
Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green thumb though, for the longest time. Birthed the sow at the farm. But couldn’t keep an aviary alive.
November 20th, 2024 05:55
arqios said:
Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green thumb though, for the longest time. Birthed the sow at the farm. But couldn’t keep an aviary alive.
November 20th, 2024 05:55
Laugh oneself blind
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is awful at the moment but some of us can find the goodness and love in pour own small worlds soren.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is awful at the moment but some of us can find the goodness and love in pour own small worlds soren.
Andy
November 20th, 2024 02:07
Laugh oneself blind
Dan Williams said:
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really rung true to me. That and being turned away because \"I made too much money\". \"Reparations to who never suffered loss\" these days really rankles.
November 20th, 2024 01:51
Dan Williams said:
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really rung true to me. That and being turned away because \"I made too much money\". \"Reparations to who never suffered loss\" these days really rankles.
November 20th, 2024 01:51
Laugh oneself blind
NafisaSB said:
a power packed poem that spares no punches. great write
November 20th, 2024 00:40
NafisaSB said:
a power packed poem that spares no punches. great write
November 20th, 2024 00:40
Truth
NafisaSB said:
what a concept of truth - beautifully described..no words to express my admiration.
November 20th, 2024 00:37
NafisaSB said:
what a concept of truth - beautifully described..no words to express my admiration.
November 20th, 2024 00:37
Laugh oneself blind
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that very last line for sure Soren, given my take on it. Injustice in the world which goes way beyond the law.
November 19th, 2024 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that very last line for sure Soren, given my take on it. Injustice in the world which goes way beyond the law.
November 19th, 2024 19:31
Laugh oneself blind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine if this present humanity was to continue indefinitely? Where on earth would it end up?!
Great write, Soren
November 19th, 2024 19:19
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine if this present humanity was to continue indefinitely? Where on earth would it end up?!
Great write, Soren
November 19th, 2024 19:19
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