Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Probability
Lorenz said:
Time is this fluctuating probable of which our ego is the center .
July 12th, 2025 07:54
Lorenz said:
Time is this fluctuating probable of which our ego is the center .
July 12th, 2025 07:54
Probability
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, your poem explores the concept of time and existence, suggesting that reality is shaped by individual perception and desire. It posits that events are inevitable if one is patient, and that the journey through life is marked by a subjective experience of time. The poet is provoking thought about the nature of reality and time, encouraging readers to reflect on their own perceptions and experiences. It seeks to illuminate the idea that understanding and patience can lead to clarity and enlightenment in the face of life\'s uncertainties. { the nature of time!}
July 12th, 2025 06:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, your poem explores the concept of time and existence, suggesting that reality is shaped by individual perception and desire. It posits that events are inevitable if one is patient, and that the journey through life is marked by a subjective experience of time. The poet is provoking thought about the nature of reality and time, encouraging readers to reflect on their own perceptions and experiences. It seeks to illuminate the idea that understanding and patience can lead to clarity and enlightenment in the face of life\'s uncertainties. { the nature of time!}
July 12th, 2025 06:34
Probability
Poetic Licence said:
I get confused regarding time, some say time is a collection of stages and those stages continue even in afterlife, so effectively time never ends, then there are those who think we don\'t have enough time to do what we want before time runs out, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
I get confused regarding time, some say time is a collection of stages and those stages continue even in afterlife, so effectively time never ends, then there are those who think we don\'t have enough time to do what we want before time runs out, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 05:45
Probability
David Wakeling said:
I always wonder if we can really understand Time. Does it even exist? A interesting poem that made me think that it is just seeing.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:21
David Wakeling said:
I always wonder if we can really understand Time. Does it even exist? A interesting poem that made me think that it is just seeing.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:21
Not too smart
Goldfinch60 said:
Such bravery soren, so glad that you overcame the snake.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such bravery soren, so glad that you overcame the snake.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:15
Not too smart
David Wakeling said:
Just trying to survive. A snake will kill and have no guilt.A fascinating tale of survival here.To kill the snake you need to cut off its head.Well done
July 11th, 2025 19:26
David Wakeling said:
Just trying to survive. A snake will kill and have no guilt.A fascinating tale of survival here.To kill the snake you need to cut off its head.Well done
July 11th, 2025 19:26
Not too smart
Kevin Hulme said:
Here in England I can\'t imagine being attacked by a Rattlesnake.
Would being bothered by a Butterfly be of any use.
Good Write.
July 11th, 2025 18:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Here in England I can\'t imagine being attacked by a Rattlesnake.
Would being bothered by a Butterfly be of any use.
Good Write.
July 11th, 2025 18:26
Not too smart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha—this was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way through. That final punchline landed perfectly. Grit, humor, and a dash of self-awareness. Totally you. Loved this! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha—this was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way through. That final punchline landed perfectly. Grit, humor, and a dash of self-awareness. Totally you. Loved this! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:39
Not too smart
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of human bravery and folly in the face of nature\'s dangers. It highlights the absurdity of wrestling with wild animals and reflects on the idea of courage versus recklessness. Ultimately, the poet questions his own sanity for taking on such a challenge. using humor to reflect on the absurdity of challenging nature, ultimately questioning what it means to be brave.
July 11th, 2025 13:07
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of human bravery and folly in the face of nature\'s dangers. It highlights the absurdity of wrestling with wild animals and reflects on the idea of courage versus recklessness. Ultimately, the poet questions his own sanity for taking on such a challenge. using humor to reflect on the absurdity of challenging nature, ultimately questioning what it means to be brave.
July 11th, 2025 13:07
Not too smart
arqios said:
...now that’s a gutsy yarn, served with a healthy dose of absurd bravado and self-aware cheek 🕊️🙏🏻
July 11th, 2025 07:23
arqios said:
...now that’s a gutsy yarn, served with a healthy dose of absurd bravado and self-aware cheek 🕊️🙏🏻
July 11th, 2025 07:23
Not too smart
Tony Grannell said:
\'Fools rush in...\' and sometimes strike it lucky. It\'s the adventure in the risk taking, the bravery when in fear and the excitement in breaking rules - all in all you did slay the critter and who knows, perhaps saved someone\'s life from the rattler\'s fangs. If that\'s the act of a fool, well, let the foolish reign. I love the lighthearted approach you have taken in this episode of: The Life of the Poet Soren. Very well done, my friend.
You are in fine spirits, I trust,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 07:14
Tony Grannell said:
\'Fools rush in...\' and sometimes strike it lucky. It\'s the adventure in the risk taking, the bravery when in fear and the excitement in breaking rules - all in all you did slay the critter and who knows, perhaps saved someone\'s life from the rattler\'s fangs. If that\'s the act of a fool, well, let the foolish reign. I love the lighthearted approach you have taken in this episode of: The Life of the Poet Soren. Very well done, my friend.
You are in fine spirits, I trust,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 07:14
Not too smart
Poetic Licence said:
I think only you can answer that, wonderful tale of bravery and lunacy combined, really enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
I think only you can answer that, wonderful tale of bravery and lunacy combined, really enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 06:18
Not too smart
Doggerel Dave said:
😆🤣Indeed - pertinent question presented in rhymic form, Sir.
July 11th, 2025 05:41
Doggerel Dave said:
😆🤣Indeed - pertinent question presented in rhymic form, Sir.
July 11th, 2025 05:41
Lost art
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of the past will lead us to a good place in our life soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of the past will lead us to a good place in our life soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:42
Lost art
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one, SB. I guess poetry is safe from falling and shattering, and can still be considered as art. Do we remember every poem we write? I don\'t think so, but my memory is less sharp than it should be. Your \'lump of clay\' can be a poem as well as a life. We mold many things in life, from art and such, to ourselves and our children. Hopefully we achieve some success. A very thoughtful poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one, SB. I guess poetry is safe from falling and shattering, and can still be considered as art. Do we remember every poem we write? I don\'t think so, but my memory is less sharp than it should be. Your \'lump of clay\' can be a poem as well as a life. We mold many things in life, from art and such, to ourselves and our children. Hopefully we achieve some success. A very thoughtful poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:55
Lost art
Damaso said:
I don\'t see where I authorized my mind to be taken over like this. I felt like someone was spying on me, even fearing the possibility of learning more. Brilliant, yet dark. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:28
Damaso said:
I don\'t see where I authorized my mind to be taken over like this. I felt like someone was spying on me, even fearing the possibility of learning more. Brilliant, yet dark. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:28
Lost art
arqios said:
The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more preferable than statues being pulled off their base. Got me thinking 🤔 hard🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:51
arqios said:
The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more preferable than statues being pulled off their base. Got me thinking 🤔 hard🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:51
Lost art
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The molding, the warping, the eventual shattering—it’s all there, silently devastating. The line, “maybe it doesn’t matter”, hit me like a whisper at the edge of forgetting. You sculpted something incredibly haunting and memorable here. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
July 10th, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The molding, the warping, the eventual shattering—it’s all there, silently devastating. The line, “maybe it doesn’t matter”, hit me like a whisper at the edge of forgetting. You sculpted something incredibly haunting and memorable here. Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
July 10th, 2025 08:56
Lost art
Soman Ragavan said:
The mind is always transforming things around us. \"into what we will them to be\" : we shape experiences, etc. to suit us. What stays in memory for very long turns indeed to rock -- resisting changes.
July 10th, 2025 08:26
Soman Ragavan said:
The mind is always transforming things around us. \"into what we will them to be\" : we shape experiences, etc. to suit us. What stays in memory for very long turns indeed to rock -- resisting changes.
July 10th, 2025 08:26
Lost art
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as how we mould ourselves over time, or how we think we do, believing that over time we have changed, but that is not always the case, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:29
Poetic Licence said:
I see this as how we mould ourselves over time, or how we think we do, believing that over time we have changed, but that is not always the case, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 05:29
Lost art
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It can be taken two ways.The life of a clay staue and the life of a Man.I could be wrong but that\'s how I saw it on first reading. Enjoyable read either way
July 10th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It can be taken two ways.The life of a clay staue and the life of a Man.I could be wrong but that\'s how I saw it on first reading. Enjoyable read either way
July 10th, 2025 04:25
A vision
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but new life will come from all that you have written about.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but new life will come from all that you have written about.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:20
Cycles
Tony Grannell said:
The never ending vices and crimes of man whilst sowing the seeds of wrath in filth for the next generation, as with all previous generations. A good and true kick in the stomach poem, to the point with deft pronouncements of raw honesty. Excellent.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 11:58
Tony Grannell said:
The never ending vices and crimes of man whilst sowing the seeds of wrath in filth for the next generation, as with all previous generations. A good and true kick in the stomach poem, to the point with deft pronouncements of raw honesty. Excellent.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 11:58
A vision
MendedFences27 said:
What goes around comes around, and we all pay for out transgressions eventually. The world is full of enough blame to go around.
Loved the rhyming. Always ending with a rose is good idea. S3 L4 is a warning to us all. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:53
MendedFences27 said:
What goes around comes around, and we all pay for out transgressions eventually. The world is full of enough blame to go around.
Loved the rhyming. Always ending with a rose is good idea. S3 L4 is a warning to us all. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:53
A vision
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger, and glimpses of fractured light. 😔 The images cut sharp, but it’s the rhythm beneath it all that kept me swaying with each stanza. That final rose? Rootless, spined, and enshrined—it lingers. Well crafted, my friend. 🌹👏 A fave!
July 9th, 2025 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger, and glimpses of fractured light. 😔 The images cut sharp, but it’s the rhythm beneath it all that kept me swaying with each stanza. That final rose? Rootless, spined, and enshrined—it lingers. Well crafted, my friend. 🌹👏 A fave!
July 9th, 2025 10:43
A vision
Bella Shepard said:
This stream of consciousness flows brilliantly from beginning to end, as carries us along upon each ripple of reflection. Loved it!
July 9th, 2025 09:40
Bella Shepard said:
This stream of consciousness flows brilliantly from beginning to end, as carries us along upon each ripple of reflection. Loved it!
July 9th, 2025 09:40
A vision
The ScarletBard said:
Each line of this poem makes you think in a totally different way..
A totally different feeling, a different aspect of life.
Has to be the most thought provoking write I have ever seen..
Stunning pice
July 9th, 2025 09:13
The ScarletBard said:
Each line of this poem makes you think in a totally different way..
A totally different feeling, a different aspect of life.
Has to be the most thought provoking write I have ever seen..
Stunning pice
July 9th, 2025 09:13
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