Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Dust
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine emotional words soren.

Andy

November 14th, 2025 02:17

Dust
drniran said:

Physically gone but the memories left
Not easy anymore to find nor chances of getting theft

November 14th, 2025 00:35

Soft dreams
Aman 12 said:

a dreamscape imagery where beauty and despair wrestle...rain sometimes just stains.

November 13th, 2025 21:26

Dust
arqios said:

This leaves a gentle ache where echoed voices filter like fading leaves. Very tender and altogether human. And like rain can be simultaneously heavy and luminous, both happy and sad, washing us and resonating with our soul. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

November 13th, 2025 20:59

Dust
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes a fine Poem. Sometimes the People who have gone still Pop Up in dreams now and then.
And then the Realisation of the truth when you wake is Heartbreaking.

November 13th, 2025 19:42

Dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this reads like memory weather…leaves scattering, voices thinning, old companions dissolving into dusk. Beautiful and heavy, my friend. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 13th, 2025 15:11

Lost music of the forest
Kevin Hulme said:

I really like this . Mother Nature Crying out for all the Wrongs we\'ve caused: Who knows.
A fine Poem.

November 13th, 2025 14:44

Dust
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I wish KP would disappear, but she never does. Well, only to go to the botox clinic. heehee.

November 13th, 2025 14:43

Dust
NinjaGirl said:

There have been and will be many...one day I should like to reunite and wonder what happened to them all. I love the imagery and rhyme!

November 13th, 2025 14:28

Awakening
hacklec said:

Well done. Maybe the wonderful imagery you create here will help me remember my dreams! Keep dreaming.

November 13th, 2025 14:27

Dust
Lorenz said:

Voices calling in a nearby beyond !

November 13th, 2025 13:39

Dust
Neilton said:

Since im in a really emotional state right now you poem made me cry.But that just shows the talent it takes to make somebody cry with your words.Amazing poem.

November 13th, 2025 12:21

Dust
Paul Bell said:

When you count your friends on one hand, you know the day is dawning.
Check your time clock, the conductor shouted, time is moving on.
Where did the years go.

November 13th, 2025 10:21

Dust
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant and sad.

November 13th, 2025 09:40

Dust
Teddy.15 said:

Withered away with time, ah my dear sorrenbarret this one hits hard, you have overseas friends, not quite the same I know. I guess the older we get the more we see in loss and all. πŸ’œ

November 13th, 2025 05:29

Dust
Michael Edwards said:

A super yet so very sad write - superbly drafted.

November 13th, 2025 03:56

Deep slumber
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words soren, may those dreams become reality.

Andy

November 13th, 2025 02:12

Deep slumber
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time, stitched memories, and the fog of waking. Luminous work, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

November 12th, 2025 21:06

Spinoza\'s god
MatPie said:

Gonna love Spinoza, lovely poem!

November 12th, 2025 20:21

Spinoza\'s god
Jon Nakapalau said:

Impressive!

November 12th, 2025 19:14

Deep slumber
Teddy.15 said:

A famous spin on life and death and all that\'s inside this sandwich of life. 🌹

November 12th, 2025 14:13

Insomnia of life
Luke Bensing said:

thank you!

November 12th, 2025 11:04

Deep slumber
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
BOO! I shout. Now why did I have to come along and wake ya up there?! lol.

November 12th, 2025 10:10

Deep slumber
arqios said:

I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

November 12th, 2025 07:55

Spinoza\'s god
Keyara S Trotman said:

Are there any times that you’ve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren πŸ₯‚πŸ’•

November 12th, 2025 06:55

Awakening
rebellion_in_sanity said:

A definite fave.

November 12th, 2025 05:53

Solo climbing
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work

November 12th, 2025 04:34

Deep slumber
Lorenz said:

Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....

November 12th, 2025 04:27

Spinoza\'s god
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. Thanks for sharing.

November 12th, 2025 03:30

Spinoza\'s god
Kevin Hulme said:

I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.

November 11th, 2025 20:08



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