Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
To an old dog
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
orchidee said:
We do miss them - pets are pet of the family. And now my poem: To an old trout who I won\'t miss at all! You knows her. lol. I would miss Fido 100 times more. heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:38
To an old dog
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but I\'ve never heard of a dog stabbing you in the back.
Sadly, can\'t be said for the other lot. Probably why dogs rock.
October 4th, 2025 04:20
To an old dog
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write - I would miss my little Stanley so much - the best companion I could ask for so loving and always by my side - currently asleep on the arm of a chair after his walk - or should I say our walk.
October 4th, 2025 03:30
Holes in our day
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Poetic Licence said:
All the signs of old age which I display very well, wear and tear physically and mentally and the increasing lack of ability for the body like nature, to repair it\'s self, have fun
October 4th, 2025 00:23
Degrees
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem reminded me of quantum physics where our usual expectations of definitives get defeated. Beautifully rendered- non deterministic yet not ambiguous.
October 3rd, 2025 09:09
Lost music of the forest
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Funnily enough, for me the difining lines were \"Walking toward it the sound diminished, fading off into only creaking trees\". They told me tbat for a few things a look or hear from afar is more appropriate than a look under the microscope. Belief is such a thing.
Apologies for misinterpretation.
October 3rd, 2025 08:51
Holes in our day
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The last line \" dreams grew of rhyme\'s rust\" was phenomenal.
October 3rd, 2025 08:34
Holes in our day
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Paul Bell said:
Life is a good-worn path and maybe dreams are more distant now, but we plough through, cos life is still a great journey.
The pencil is still sharp, and the words still go together.
October 3rd, 2025 08:18
Holes in our day
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
Soman Ragavan said:
A good depiction of life, of destiny, of our experiences. Like roots, we struggle to make a future, to safeguard ourselves.
October 3rd, 2025 07:44
Holes in our day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is beautifully layered. The cracks, roots, and worn paths unfold as metaphors for time, wear, and memory itself. Always grateful for your craft, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is beautifully layered. The cracks, roots, and worn paths unfold as metaphors for time, wear, and memory itself. Always grateful for your craft, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:25
Holes in our day
Mike Prestridge said:
This is great. Please forgive me for my short comments, as I am new to poetry and am not sure what I am looking for in order to critique. I can appreciate good writing, though and that\'s what I would consider this.
October 3rd, 2025 06:33
Mike Prestridge said:
This is great. Please forgive me for my short comments, as I am new to poetry and am not sure what I am looking for in order to critique. I can appreciate good writing, though and that\'s what I would consider this.
October 3rd, 2025 06:33
Holes in our day
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between nature and human constructs, reflecting on the passage of time, the resilience of life, and the fragility of human character. It suggests that despite efforts to build a strong and enduring foundation (symbolized by bricks and caring deeds), nature finds a way to infiltrate and challenge those constructs.
October 3rd, 2025 06:16
Lost music of the forest
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The sounds of Nature ae wonderous Soren.
Andy
October 3rd, 2025 01:47
Lost music of the forest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the breeze...something glimpsed, sought, and elusive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2025 16:49
Lost music of the forest
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
arqios said:
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
Lost music of the forest
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the tension between skepticism and belief, particularly in the context of nature and the ethereal. It reflects on the beauty of the natural world and the elusive quality of its music, suggesting that even if one does not believe in supernatural entities, there are experiences in nature that evoke a sense of wonder and mystery.
October 2nd, 2025 06:48
Shaping
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
William Hromada said:
Compost of past day\'s thoughts, growth from what rots!!’ What a thought!
October 2nd, 2025 04:42
Read
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Aman 12 said:
poetry bleeds to feed the mind...the alliteration is working really well.
October 2nd, 2025 02:22
Indigestion
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Tom Dylan said:
So much packed into those lines. A fine write, Soren.
October 2nd, 2025 02:15
Shaping
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That valve often needs opening to bring glory into our lives soren.
Andy
October 2nd, 2025 01:14
Shaping
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this breathes with renewal. The way you shape the day through pruning feels alive with quiet hope, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this breathes with renewal. The way you shape the day through pruning feels alive with quiet hope, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:53
Shaping
God’s Will said:
Oh I like that one. That reminds me of a bit of encouragement I got one day.
. Today
Correct punctuation
October 1st, 2025 13:57
God’s Will said:
Oh I like that one. That reminds me of a bit of encouragement I got one day.
. Today
Correct punctuation
October 1st, 2025 13:57
Gently
2781 said:
Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.
October 1st, 2025 09:01
2781 said:
Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it.
October 1st, 2025 09:01
Shaping
arqios said:
Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle metaphor for caring for the mind. It reminds me that letting go of what’s withered isn’t loss; it’s making space for new blooms. A quiet, hopeful reminder that growth often begins in what we clear away. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 07:36
arqios said:
Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle metaphor for caring for the mind. It reminds me that letting go of what’s withered isn’t loss; it’s making space for new blooms. A quiet, hopeful reminder that growth often begins in what we clear away. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 07:36
Shaping
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem conveys the theme of personal growth and renewal through the metaphor of gardening. It emphasizes the importance of pruning away negative thoughts and experiences to foster new growth and creativity in life.
October 1st, 2025 06:58
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem conveys the theme of personal growth and renewal through the metaphor of gardening. It emphasizes the importance of pruning away negative thoughts and experiences to foster new growth and creativity in life.
October 1st, 2025 06:58
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