Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The Maid
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true—
from milk to love to rest, each phase shines through.

June 13th, 2025 03:35

The Maid
Demar Desu said:

great poem of desires and wisdom with age!

June 13th, 2025 03:23

The Maid
Demar Desu said:

Hahaha, we are up at the same time Soren!

June 13th, 2025 03:23

The secret inside out
Goldfinch60 said:

Opposites attract soren. Fine words.

Andy

June 13th, 2025 01:20

The secret inside out
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 12th, 2025 09:30

Double
Tom Dylan said:

A fine poem on an intriguing topic. The amount of times people encounter the double of people they know. Maybe there is something in it.

June 12th, 2025 06:44

The secret inside out
Demar Desu said:

Ying yang

June 12th, 2025 04:51

The secret inside out
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s very well written, they are not things people would normally see, but when see it laid out like this, it\'s so obvious, enjoyed the read

June 12th, 2025 04:49

The secret inside out
David Wakeling said:

For me this is a strong exploration of the contrary nature of realty. From simplicity to complexity end with one and many.This is quite a thoughtful approach to this eternal problem. Is reality real or is it made up of unreality.This made me think.Excellent

June 12th, 2025 04:13

The secret inside out
Reynaldo Casison said:


Nice one soren

Nice Insight on dualities

June 12th, 2025 03:40

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Thomas W Case said:

Superb. Very creative.

June 11th, 2025 17:21

What you can\'t accept in yourself
John Prophet said:

“ Control seen as a tool to command a world seen as cruel....” so true…..

June 11th, 2025 14:57

What you can\'t accept in yourself
MendedFences27 said:

Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does destroy lives. Some end up living alone like a hermit. - Phil A.

June 11th, 2025 12:57

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Reta said:

Such an interesting structure and a very intriguing read. Well done.

June 11th, 2025 12:13

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 11th, 2025 11:27

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Damaso said:

\"Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide... ...................it\'s here.\" I have to say, my friend, it shook my head this morning. Thanks so much for sharing. One of my favorites! Cheers

June 11th, 2025 07:42

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Salvia.S said:

Thoughtful and truthful with haunting rhythm. Very well written!

June 11th, 2025 06:04

Years
jarcher54 said:

At 71, I am not sure I like this! (-:

June 11th, 2025 05:04

What you can\'t accept in yourself
Poetic Licence said:

A very intriguing write, we have them insecurities some of us in bucket loads, and we should protect ourselves better against them, as they can so easily be our downfall, really enjoyed the read

June 11th, 2025 04:38

What you can\'t accept in yourself
David Wakeling said:

This is quite an interesting new style.It resembles a List of contents of a book. Ranging from Suspicion, insecurity and trust issue and there origins.It is however a little sinister in that it ends with the need for Protection.Fascinating piece.Made me stop and think

June 11th, 2025 04:08

What you can\'t accept in yourself
jarcher54 said:

Clever and a bit ominous!

June 11th, 2025 04:05

Double
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren we may well have doubles in this world\'

Andy

June 11th, 2025 01:18

What is perfect
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Touches the heart this write does!

June 10th, 2025 18:00

Double
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. You nailed it.

June 10th, 2025 13:07

Sleep on
Antara Sinha said:

It\'s an interesting poem with a deep thought. Keep writing poems and express your creative ideas.

June 10th, 2025 11:29

Damaged
Salvia.S said:

This is so true! Very well written.

June 10th, 2025 11:03

Double
Poetic Licence said:

Very interesting write which i have always wondered, there clearly are people who are identical in looks, I have wondered if in thought, feelings etc they are the same, enjoyed the read

June 10th, 2025 07:08

Damaged
rrodriguez said:

So true. When our island was devastated by hurricane Maria, time and nature were the factors that brought healing. Thank you for sharing your poem.

June 10th, 2025 06:42

Double
David Wakeling said:

This raises some important philosophical questions about individuality and genetics.I used to have a boss once and I saw her on the train one morning.I said hello to her only to find it was an identical looka like.Scary but true. Great poem that made me think

June 10th, 2025 04:08

Succulent
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, those spikes defend the beauty within all.

Andy

June 10th, 2025 01:47



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