Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The Seed
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
The Seed
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Read
RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
Forgiveness
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
Forgiveness
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all move on into a new and better life soren.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all move on into a new and better life soren.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:53
Forgiveness
RSM0812 said:
This poem is full of emotion and despair. Its imagry has a sad and almost desparity to it. Nice job.
September 18th, 2025 20:10
RSM0812 said:
This poem is full of emotion and despair. Its imagry has a sad and almost desparity to it. Nice job.
September 18th, 2025 20:10
Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one struck deep. Very powerful. The musty cloth and dirt feel like despair itself, yet you strip it back to hope. That final image...crust of dirt falling like a forgiven sin...lingers long after reading. Honest and redemptive, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one struck deep. Very powerful. The musty cloth and dirt feel like despair itself, yet you strip it back to hope. That final image...crust of dirt falling like a forgiven sin...lingers long after reading. Honest and redemptive, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:07
Forgiveness
Paul Bell said:
This is like out with the old, in with the new.
Yet it goes slightly deeper, and maybe forgiveness comes hard.
September 18th, 2025 15:03
Paul Bell said:
This is like out with the old, in with the new.
Yet it goes slightly deeper, and maybe forgiveness comes hard.
September 18th, 2025 15:03
Forgiveness
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems leave no choice other than a resounding fave. The lines \"rain of despair need cleaning in spring\'s bright air\"- how I wish I could have thought something like those. But that\'s wishful thinking. The bow has to be to the master. Not a good poem, but a great one.
September 18th, 2025 09:44
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems leave no choice other than a resounding fave. The lines \"rain of despair need cleaning in spring\'s bright air\"- how I wish I could have thought something like those. But that\'s wishful thinking. The bow has to be to the master. Not a good poem, but a great one.
September 18th, 2025 09:44
Forgiveness
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant as always! I am so in awe of your ability! Always a joy to read!
September 18th, 2025 06:16
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant as always! I am so in awe of your ability! Always a joy to read!
September 18th, 2025 06:16
Forgiveness
Teddy.15 said:
Well, I guess I can safely say this is absolutely stunning in rhyme and meaning, so much dignity acceptance and wisdom. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 18th, 2025 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
Well, I guess I can safely say this is absolutely stunning in rhyme and meaning, so much dignity acceptance and wisdom. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 18th, 2025 03:26
A slow fly
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read soren, I hope you get out of jail soon. LOL
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun read soren, I hope you get out of jail soon. LOL
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:44
A slow fly
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is humorous and lively but kind of sad. A comically foolish yet endearing man whose greed and poor judgment lead him into trouble. From childhood, but he also has a mischievous charm that makes people smile. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:35
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is humorous and lively but kind of sad. A comically foolish yet endearing man whose greed and poor judgment lead him into trouble. From childhood, but he also has a mischievous charm that makes people smile. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:35
A slow fly
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Emotional sir... Yes, only the weak, poor and those the rich tagged as dumb goes to jail. The rich escape. A question if the rule of law truly is equal.
September 17th, 2025 12:30
A slow fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the night...wild, funny, but carrying a truth about justice and who gets caught. You nailed that balance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:03
A slow fly
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Thick as teeth on a Comb\', I like it .
A lot of truth in your last lines too.
Enjoyed reading.
September 17th, 2025 08:23
Suicide an twa
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem that flows wonderfully. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 06:57
A slow fly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just too good. In one hand it is funny, but a closer look reveals scial commentary- somehow brings to mind Chaplin\'s movies. What I loved most was the absence of drama. A flat tone, that brought out the bite in the social commentary. Very well done.
September 17th, 2025 05:15
A slow fly
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
I had a great chuckle at your language, you really have made him sound dumb, kudos imagery emotion and last lines superb, it is indeed the slow flies that get squatted. A wonderful life lesson filled with great wisdom, and irony. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 03:47
Suicide an twa
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those truly in love will be one at there demise soren. Fine words.
Andy
September 17th, 2025 01:26
Don\'t mix them up
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
whats write for me said:
Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.
September 16th, 2025 21:51
Suicide an twa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!
September 16th, 2025 15:23
Suicide an twa
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, a love story never to be resolved... Well done, dear friend.
September 16th, 2025 09:32
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, a love story never to be resolved... Well done, dear friend.
September 16th, 2025 09:32
Suicide an twa
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme of this is complicated and artistic in style. It beckons sadness yet companionship. I enjoyed, very much.
September 16th, 2025 09:24
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme of this is complicated and artistic in style. It beckons sadness yet companionship. I enjoyed, very much.
September 16th, 2025 09:24
Suicide an twa
Kevin Hulme said:
Loves a strange old bird. The Intensity can be frightening. Good one.
September 16th, 2025 08:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Loves a strange old bird. The Intensity can be frightening. Good one.
September 16th, 2025 08:30
Suicide an twa
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of love as an intense, often destructive force that can transcend the physical realm, leading to a tragic union in death. It suggests that the strength of their emotional bond drives the lovers to take extreme measures to remain together, viewing death as a means of escaping a world they deem profane. Yet the poet addresses the topic of suicide in the context of a romantic relationship, highlighting how love can lead individuals to make irreversible decisions. It reflects on the pain of separation and the desire for eternal unity, even at the cost of life. The complexities of love and the pain of separation can lead to desperate actions.
September 16th, 2025 08:24
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of love as an intense, often destructive force that can transcend the physical realm, leading to a tragic union in death. It suggests that the strength of their emotional bond drives the lovers to take extreme measures to remain together, viewing death as a means of escaping a world they deem profane. Yet the poet addresses the topic of suicide in the context of a romantic relationship, highlighting how love can lead individuals to make irreversible decisions. It reflects on the pain of separation and the desire for eternal unity, even at the cost of life. The complexities of love and the pain of separation can lead to desperate actions.
September 16th, 2025 08:24
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