Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Traps
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Traps
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
Traps
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sonnet soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ByqYEzugleE?si=DJoutTLBuEXk7-Rw
August 22nd, 2025 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sonnet soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ByqYEzugleE?si=DJoutTLBuEXk7-Rw
August 22nd, 2025 01:27
Wind
arqios said:
Whisper to roar
Roots torn wide
Her fury spent
Sighs can\'t hide
August 21st, 2025 18:37
arqios said:
Whisper to roar
Roots torn wide
Her fury spent
Sighs can\'t hide
August 21st, 2025 18:37
Wind
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great poem, sorenbarrett, very timely. We are waiting on an angry wind today and tomorrow.
August 21st, 2025 08:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great poem, sorenbarrett, very timely. We are waiting on an angry wind today and tomorrow.
August 21st, 2025 08:13
Wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mariah named, and Mariah sung...your wind becomes voice, lament, and judgment all at once. This is mythic writing, brother. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mariah named, and Mariah sung...your wind becomes voice, lament, and judgment all at once. This is mythic writing, brother. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:07
Wind
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wind\" revolves around the duality of nature\'s forces—its beauty and gentleness contrasted with its destructive power. The wind is personified as an overwhelming force that commands respect and submission from all living beings, symbolizing both the inevitability of nature\'s fury and the fragility of existence. The Poet includes themes of destruction, reverence, and the cyclical nature of life and death. You appear to be seeking to elicit an emotional response regarding humanity\'s relationship with nature, underscoring both reverence and fear in the face of natural forces. It serves as a contemplation on the inevitability of destruction and the cycle of life
August 21st, 2025 06:43
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wind\" revolves around the duality of nature\'s forces—its beauty and gentleness contrasted with its destructive power. The wind is personified as an overwhelming force that commands respect and submission from all living beings, symbolizing both the inevitability of nature\'s fury and the fragility of existence. The Poet includes themes of destruction, reverence, and the cyclical nature of life and death. You appear to be seeking to elicit an emotional response regarding humanity\'s relationship with nature, underscoring both reverence and fear in the face of natural forces. It serves as a contemplation on the inevitability of destruction and the cycle of life
August 21st, 2025 06:43
Wind
Teddy.15 said:
Waves of mounting torment in screams bewail
Rage long dormant from heaving breast to rail
Rooted trees give way to its brutal force
Bringing old giants to their knees in its course
With souch grace you do write, this is beautiful in Italy we call the wind \"il vento\" it\'s also a beautiful word. Stunning my friend. Such emotion and imagery. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
Waves of mounting torment in screams bewail
Rage long dormant from heaving breast to rail
Rooted trees give way to its brutal force
Bringing old giants to their knees in its course
With souch grace you do write, this is beautiful in Italy we call the wind \"il vento\" it\'s also a beautiful word. Stunning my friend. Such emotion and imagery. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 05:06
Seasons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. You captured the cycle...death, rest, and rebirth—in language both delicate and vivid. Well crafted, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. You captured the cycle...death, rest, and rebirth—in language both delicate and vivid. Well crafted, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:56
Seasons
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every season the smells the warmth and the snow, my favourite season is autumn, I\'m feeling really joyful today. 🍁 Stunning poem as ever my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2025 12:29
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every season the smells the warmth and the snow, my favourite season is autumn, I\'m feeling really joyful today. 🍁 Stunning poem as ever my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2025 12:29
Seasons
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful imagery of this poem paints to perfection the seasons in all their splendor. I\'m now yearning for autumn and all its delights. Excellent write!
August 20th, 2025 11:01
Bella Shepard said:
The beautiful imagery of this poem paints to perfection the seasons in all their splendor. I\'m now yearning for autumn and all its delights. Excellent write!
August 20th, 2025 11:01
Seasons
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A picture drawn with words. Enjoyed reading it so much
August 20th, 2025 10:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A picture drawn with words. Enjoyed reading it so much
August 20th, 2025 10:39
Let it go
hzugman said:
Judgment is a tricky thing that all too often turns out to e of ourselves. Good write.
August 20th, 2025 09:50
hzugman said:
Judgment is a tricky thing that all too often turns out to e of ourselves. Good write.
August 20th, 2025 09:50
Seasons
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yore poems are good! Spellchecker didn\'t notice the you\'re/you\'re difference. lol.
August 20th, 2025 07:42
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Yore poems are good! Spellchecker didn\'t notice the you\'re/you\'re difference. lol.
August 20th, 2025 07:42
Memories
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was sure to follow, given the way he was behaving...
August 20th, 2025 07:12
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was sure to follow, given the way he was behaving...
August 20th, 2025 07:12
Seasons
RSM0812 said:
The cycle of life contains remarkable beauty. Just like this poem. Beautiful.
August 20th, 2025 06:01
RSM0812 said:
The cycle of life contains remarkable beauty. Just like this poem. Beautiful.
August 20th, 2025 06:01
Seasons
Friendship said:
The poet beautifully portrays the four seasons—autumn, spring, summer, and winter—highlighting the transformations in nature and the vibrant activities that unfold within each season, especially the revitalizing preparation for new life in spring, particularly with the life cycle of birds. The poem inspires us to reflect on the interconnectedness of all living things and the nurturing role that nature plays in the life cycle.
August 20th, 2025 05:48
Friendship said:
The poet beautifully portrays the four seasons—autumn, spring, summer, and winter—highlighting the transformations in nature and the vibrant activities that unfold within each season, especially the revitalizing preparation for new life in spring, particularly with the life cycle of birds. The poem inspires us to reflect on the interconnectedness of all living things and the nurturing role that nature plays in the life cycle.
August 20th, 2025 05:48
Seasons
Neville said:
Tis indeed bloomin luverly .. I can feel autumn write now, deep down in my bones & like never before quite this early .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 04:58
Neville said:
Tis indeed bloomin luverly .. I can feel autumn write now, deep down in my bones & like never before quite this early .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 04:58
Nothing anymore
NafisaSB said:
makes me ponder that we try to dig deep into the meaning of fossils, but are unaware of what\'s going on around us..a thought provoking write
August 20th, 2025 02:15
NafisaSB said:
makes me ponder that we try to dig deep into the meaning of fossils, but are unaware of what\'s going on around us..a thought provoking write
August 20th, 2025 02:15
Elixir of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing thoughts to my mind.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing thoughts to my mind.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:18
The poet
NafisaSB said:
your verses always impress - and this is no different - very well expressed
August 19th, 2025 23:38
NafisaSB said:
your verses always impress - and this is no different - very well expressed
August 19th, 2025 23:38
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