Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Greater love hath no man
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, love cna be so compellingly wonderful in life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, love cna be so compellingly wonderful in life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:08
The band
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren beautifully written out “The band” I can say, one thing I’ve noticed is that the word “band” isn’t capitalized. Now is there a reason as to why this is such? What is the meaning behind your title, when we are referring to the word band, there is a marching of people. For your poem your main point or maybe your main focus was on bees. I do love the background picture you’ve provided as this does correlate with your poem. With bees or even fish the background gives coral vibes or even where bees hide, or with pollen per-say. Your poem is nature, it’s a natural sense, environmental such. 🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:49
Keyara S Trotman said:
My dearest Soren beautifully written out “The band” I can say, one thing I’ve noticed is that the word “band” isn’t capitalized. Now is there a reason as to why this is such? What is the meaning behind your title, when we are referring to the word band, there is a marching of people. For your poem your main point or maybe your main focus was on bees. I do love the background picture you’ve provided as this does correlate with your poem. With bees or even fish the background gives coral vibes or even where bees hide, or with pollen per-say. Your poem is nature, it’s a natural sense, environmental such. 🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:49
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Keyara S Trotman said:
ADORATION 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 My dear Soren I love how everything is fluent. There is rhyme and rhythm. Your word choices, “ berserk” just curious have you ever seen someone go beserk???
You stated in your writing that which I’d like to point out:
“Life blood spent, present of content drains from veins that spurt and flow
Perfume\'s scent, love\'s air bent, pain will vent from a poetic blow”
This is beautiful.. there a feeling of horror, yet we are referring to poetry, and poetry can be so many genres. Here you’ve managed for me yet I don’t know your particular aim here but I got horrifying, it’s terrifying.
Overall your piece is amazing… well put together, structured 👏🏼🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:38
Keyara S Trotman said:
ADORATION 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 My dear Soren I love how everything is fluent. There is rhyme and rhythm. Your word choices, “ berserk” just curious have you ever seen someone go beserk???
You stated in your writing that which I’d like to point out:
“Life blood spent, present of content drains from veins that spurt and flow
Perfume\'s scent, love\'s air bent, pain will vent from a poetic blow”
This is beautiful.. there a feeling of horror, yet we are referring to poetry, and poetry can be so many genres. Here you’ve managed for me yet I don’t know your particular aim here but I got horrifying, it’s terrifying.
Overall your piece is amazing… well put together, structured 👏🏼🥂✨✨✨
September 21st, 2025 20:38
Greater love hath no man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you trace...from mother to martyr to hidden love...this feels raw, unvarnished, and deeply human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you trace...from mother to martyr to hidden love...this feels raw, unvarnished, and deeply human. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 21st, 2025 18:36
Greater love hath no man
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive me dearest sorrenbarret but I see this as a rape poem, one that a women takes the greatest sacrifice, grows a life and gives to another as a gift, regardless of her torture. Kudos my friend. 🌹
September 21st, 2025 12:16
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive me dearest sorrenbarret but I see this as a rape poem, one that a women takes the greatest sacrifice, grows a life and gives to another as a gift, regardless of her torture. Kudos my friend. 🌹
September 21st, 2025 12:16
Greater love hath no man
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Being daft - in second place of greatness - me, laying down me life, well me cash, for KP\'s botox! lol. Sewage for dinner again dear! lol.
September 21st, 2025 11:28
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Being daft - in second place of greatness - me, laying down me life, well me cash, for KP\'s botox! lol. Sewage for dinner again dear! lol.
September 21st, 2025 11:28
Greater love hath no man
TommyDingo said:
Poetry at its finest! Brilliantly written!
September 21st, 2025 09:14
TommyDingo said:
Poetry at its finest! Brilliantly written!
September 21st, 2025 09:14
Greater love hath no man
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem explores the theme of sacrifice and the complexities of love, particularly the lengths one might go to for the sake of another. It highlights the idea that true love often involves selflessness and taking on burdens, even to the point of personal ruin or misunderstanding.
September 21st, 2025 07:04
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem explores the theme of sacrifice and the complexities of love, particularly the lengths one might go to for the sake of another. It highlights the idea that true love often involves selflessness and taking on burdens, even to the point of personal ruin or misunderstanding.
September 21st, 2025 07:04
Catinga was his name
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, you can never see the beauty within the outside of anybody.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, you can never see the beauty within the outside of anybody.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:09
Catinga was his name
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece is unforgettable. You build him from stench, stagger, and worn shoes, a man derided and reviled. Yet the final turn...that toothless grin, innocence shining despite a world gone wild...redeems the whole portrait. A character both broken and whole, disgrace on the outside yet grace within. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this piece is unforgettable. You build him from stench, stagger, and worn shoes, a man derided and reviled. Yet the final turn...that toothless grin, innocence shining despite a world gone wild...redeems the whole portrait. A character both broken and whole, disgrace on the outside yet grace within. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:16
Catinga was his name
Teddy.15 said:
Loved your first stanza it made me chuckle at the imagery, hey we have a few like this in London too, as I have an enormous compassion and empathy, your last stanza made me think, we are all different but in the end we are all the same, we are human yet very rarely does one find the treatment the same, easy to hate easy to judge kindness is definitely a reward to those who give it, and those less fortunate who receive it. 🌹 A powerful piece that brings reflections to the reader.
September 20th, 2025 09:49
Teddy.15 said:
Loved your first stanza it made me chuckle at the imagery, hey we have a few like this in London too, as I have an enormous compassion and empathy, your last stanza made me think, we are all different but in the end we are all the same, we are human yet very rarely does one find the treatment the same, easy to hate easy to judge kindness is definitely a reward to those who give it, and those less fortunate who receive it. 🌹 A powerful piece that brings reflections to the reader.
September 20th, 2025 09:49
Catinga was his name
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Read the line \"Inside undefiled by a world gone wild,\" quite a few times. I don\'t know why it really spoke...
Perhaps that line brought about the contrast..
September 20th, 2025 09:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Read the line \"Inside undefiled by a world gone wild,\" quite a few times. I don\'t know why it really spoke...
Perhaps that line brought about the contrast..
September 20th, 2025 09:29
Catinga was his name
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I thought it was gonna be about a cat. \'Here, puss, dinner time!\' lol.
September 20th, 2025 08:46
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I thought it was gonna be about a cat. \'Here, puss, dinner time!\' lol.
September 20th, 2025 08:46
Catinga was his name
Friendship said:
Well-written. Never judge a book by its cover. This poem revolves around the juxtaposition of societal judgment and the intrinsic worth of an individual, illustrated through the character of Catinga. The subject matter delves into themes of poverty, alienation, and the innocence that can exist despite external circumstances. Catinga, although reviled and marginalized by society, embodies a certain wisdom and purity that contrasts sharply with the disdain he receives from others. The poem invites readers to reconsider notions of value and dignity, suggesting that true worth lies beyond superficial appearances and societal standards.
September 20th, 2025 08:25
Friendship said:
Well-written. Never judge a book by its cover. This poem revolves around the juxtaposition of societal judgment and the intrinsic worth of an individual, illustrated through the character of Catinga. The subject matter delves into themes of poverty, alienation, and the innocence that can exist despite external circumstances. Catinga, although reviled and marginalized by society, embodies a certain wisdom and purity that contrasts sharply with the disdain he receives from others. The poem invites readers to reconsider notions of value and dignity, suggesting that true worth lies beyond superficial appearances and societal standards.
September 20th, 2025 08:25
The Seed
Goldfinch60 said:
But many of those seeds will bring new life to the world soren.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
But many of those seeds will bring new life to the world soren.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:51
The Seed
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a dense, symbolic, and highly reflective poem. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:54
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a dense, symbolic, and highly reflective poem. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:54
The Seed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen seeds like this grow…isolation spreading where trust once lived. You’ve captured that hard truth with honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen seeds like this grow…isolation spreading where trust once lived. You’ve captured that hard truth with honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:31
The Seed
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning metaphor, imagery, I can feel the power of this all consuming deadly sin. Superb!
September 19th, 2025 08:37
The Seed
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the destructive nature of greed and selfishness, which undermine community and compassion. It contrasts individuality with the collective good, highlighting how self-serving actions can lead to isolation and a loss of trust. The subject matter delves into the metaphor of a plant growing from a seed of greed, illustrating how negative traits can stifle growth and hope, ultimately resulting in despair.
September 19th, 2025 06:55
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RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
RSM0812 said:
A lot of really good rhyms here and a deeper story. Nicely done for sure.
September 19th, 2025 06:03
Forgiveness
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
William Hromada said:
nice, the feeling of shedding the old and looking forward to the new.
September 19th, 2025 04:21
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