Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Let it go
Lorenz said:
I wonder about the philosophical aspect of the text ,but I appreciate the elegance of the word !
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Lorenz said:
I wonder about the philosophical aspect of the text ,but I appreciate the elegance of the word !
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Let it go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame and find freedom in release. The rhymes give it a measured, almost meditative cadence. Well done, my friend. A very strong poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame and find freedom in release. The rhymes give it a measured, almost meditative cadence. Well done, my friend. A very strong poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:09
Let it go
Priya Tomar said:
Some good advices that should be followed .
Very nice ....
August 15th, 2025 08:50
Priya Tomar said:
Some good advices that should be followed .
Very nice ....
August 15th, 2025 08:50
Let it go
rebellion_in_sanity said:
High philosophy in a zipped format. Simply loved it. Great write
August 15th, 2025 06:58
rebellion_in_sanity said:
High philosophy in a zipped format. Simply loved it. Great write
August 15th, 2025 06:58
Let it go
Poetic Licence said:
Blame to easy to apportion by those refusing to except responsibility for their own actions. If you cannot be honest with yourself, how can others ever trust you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
Blame to easy to apportion by those refusing to except responsibility for their own actions. If you cannot be honest with yourself, how can others ever trust you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:15
Let it go
Teddy.15 said:
Your language read out loud is a rap and made me chuckle, never a truer word said my dear sorrenbarret, your wisdom and indirect advice is sparkling in this. 🌹 🤭
August 15th, 2025 04:27
Teddy.15 said:
Your language read out loud is a rap and made me chuckle, never a truer word said my dear sorrenbarret, your wisdom and indirect advice is sparkling in this. 🌹 🤭
August 15th, 2025 04:27
Sky vine
Goldfinch60 said:
That climb into the world is there for us all soren.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That climb into the world is there for us all soren.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:08
Sky vine
NinjaGirl said:
I always do love nature in a story, I suppose it\'s what makes us human. Lovely!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
NinjaGirl said:
I always do love nature in a story, I suppose it\'s what makes us human. Lovely!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
Sky vine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light (I love the imagery), only to end in a bittersweet turn. Again, I love the imagery, which is earthy yet delicate. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light (I love the imagery), only to end in a bittersweet turn. Again, I love the imagery, which is earthy yet delicate. Well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:53
Sky vine
Neville said:
this reminds me, or rather makes me imagine a determined quest for freedom .. reaching for the sky & breaking free from some kind of hypothetical shackles .. I like it a lot .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:08
Neville said:
this reminds me, or rather makes me imagine a determined quest for freedom .. reaching for the sky & breaking free from some kind of hypothetical shackles .. I like it a lot .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:08
Sky vine
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend. You can see the whole story unfolding painted in watercolors. Incredible writing, majestic fluidity. One of my favorites. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 14th, 2025 10:51
Damaso said:
Beautiful, my friend. You can see the whole story unfolding painted in watercolors. Incredible writing, majestic fluidity. One of my favorites. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 14th, 2025 10:51
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good, fierce but controlled. The contrast carries the words with immense force.
August 14th, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good, fierce but controlled. The contrast carries the words with immense force.
August 14th, 2025 10:05
Scraps given
rebellion_in_sanity said:
There are pieces we give to others that live and some to those long dead - simply too good
August 14th, 2025 10:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
There are pieces we give to others that live and some to those long dead - simply too good
August 14th, 2025 10:00
Sky vine
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning dear sorrenbarret barret even more so because my late brother was called Lee, and I am curing my orchids at the moment, they surely need some TLC 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:28
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning dear sorrenbarret barret even more so because my late brother was called Lee, and I am curing my orchids at the moment, they surely need some TLC 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:28
Sky vine
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of jack and the beanstalk for some reason, has a touch of stairway to heaven about it, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of jack and the beanstalk for some reason, has a touch of stairway to heaven about it, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:45
Watermarks
Kevin Hulme said:
Could do with plenty of Rain at the moment in Europe by all accounts.
Good one.
August 13th, 2025 20:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Could do with plenty of Rain at the moment in Europe by all accounts.
Good one.
August 13th, 2025 20:46
Watermarks
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning metaphor and imagery, yes ditch the old coat and wipe your eyes my dear friend. Gorgeous. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning metaphor and imagery, yes ditch the old coat and wipe your eyes my dear friend. Gorgeous. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:10
Watermarks
MendedFences27 said:
\'Tendrils of rain\" give life to it. As though it was on the attack. That is exactly how it feels. Glad there came a new resolve at the end, but the rain may have other ideas. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2025 12:03
MendedFences27 said:
\'Tendrils of rain\" give life to it. As though it was on the attack. That is exactly how it feels. Glad there came a new resolve at the end, but the rain may have other ideas. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2025 12:03
Watermarks
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I didn\'t buy KP a new coat. I gave her an old boot instead! lol.
She bought a new dress too. I said\' What\'s that old sack you\'re wearing, dear?\' heehee.
August 13th, 2025 11:41
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I didn\'t buy KP a new coat. I gave her an old boot instead! lol.
She bought a new dress too. I said\' What\'s that old sack you\'re wearing, dear?\' heehee.
August 13th, 2025 11:41
Watermarks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just fall…it seeps in, leaves its trace, and refuses to vanish. The rhyme gives it an easy flow, but the truth beneath it lingers heavy. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just fall…it seeps in, leaves its trace, and refuses to vanish. The rhyme gives it an easy flow, but the truth beneath it lingers heavy. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 11:14
Watermarks
Poetic Licence said:
Oh boy I have bought many new coats over years, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
Oh boy I have bought many new coats over years, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:52
The poet
Neville said:
I know I\'ve said it before but what else is a metaphor if it can\'t be fit snug in a poem and be savoured .. well writ sir S .. N
August 13th, 2025 02:04
Neville said:
I know I\'ve said it before but what else is a metaphor if it can\'t be fit snug in a poem and be savoured .. well writ sir S .. N
August 13th, 2025 02:04
The poet
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, I feel more like a jackass than a horse and my poems are the weight of a ten day journey. But I loved your metaphor and it felt true. Loved, \"A feather from the wing of Pegasus.\" - Phil A.
August 12th, 2025 15:54
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, I feel more like a jackass than a horse and my poems are the weight of a ten day journey. But I loved your metaphor and it felt true. Loved, \"A feather from the wing of Pegasus.\" - Phil A.
August 12th, 2025 15:54
The poet
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I really enjoyed it. I completely agree with this post. Inspiring and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 12th, 2025 12:19
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, I really enjoyed it. I completely agree with this post. Inspiring and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 12th, 2025 12:19
Sand in a bottle
Keeter C said:
Yet I still waste the most precious commodity. Very nicely put!
August 12th, 2025 10:56
Keeter C said:
Yet I still waste the most precious commodity. Very nicely put!
August 12th, 2025 10:56
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