Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Left behind
Teddy.15 said:
Your description of memory is a wow from me, and perception too, simply a wow. Your wisdom and talents are truly on a level of their own. Wonderful and by the way your imagery had me twisted. 🌹
August 1st, 2025 06:02
Teddy.15 said:
Your description of memory is a wow from me, and perception too, simply a wow. Your wisdom and talents are truly on a level of their own. Wonderful and by the way your imagery had me twisted. 🌹
August 1st, 2025 06:02
Left behind
Poetic Licence said:
Droplets of wisdom beautifully laid out, another very enjoyable read
August 1st, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
Droplets of wisdom beautifully laid out, another very enjoyable read
August 1st, 2025 05:28
Left behind
Tony Grannell said:
A good afternoon from here, Soren,
When you take away all the philosophies, the religions, the political systems, the markets and borders, it all boils down to this poem - the mud of memory and good and evil are but one. A superlative and profound passage of poetic wisdom. Much praise for this one, one to linger well after the reading.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:11
Tony Grannell said:
A good afternoon from here, Soren,
When you take away all the philosophies, the religions, the political systems, the markets and borders, it all boils down to this poem - the mud of memory and good and evil are but one. A superlative and profound passage of poetic wisdom. Much praise for this one, one to linger well after the reading.
Your fellow poet and friend,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:11
No choice
Goldfinch60 said:
But we are still here soren and will be forever in mind and spirit.
Andy
August 1st, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
But we are still here soren and will be forever in mind and spirit.
Andy
August 1st, 2025 01:10
Maybe
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The optimist: maybe; the pessimist: maybe not but there is always the maybe. The multi syllable rhyming technique gives the poem a rap flavour which I have enjoyed very much and the poem complete is splendid. An out-and out joy to read. Very well done, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 13:15
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
The optimist: maybe; the pessimist: maybe not but there is always the maybe. The multi syllable rhyming technique gives the poem a rap flavour which I have enjoyed very much and the poem complete is splendid. An out-and out joy to read. Very well done, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 13:15
No choice
Damaso said:
Wow, in just a few lines you\'ve managed to shake every layer of this world with a disturbing statement. Crazy, I really enjoyed it. I\'ll read it again and again. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 11:57
Damaso said:
Wow, in just a few lines you\'ve managed to shake every layer of this world with a disturbing statement. Crazy, I really enjoyed it. I\'ll read it again and again. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 11:57
No choice
jim56 said:
this is a powerful and emotional write
words say so much to get feelings across
u have expressd the poem so well
very well written brilliant job jim
July 31st, 2025 07:11
jim56 said:
this is a powerful and emotional write
words say so much to get feelings across
u have expressd the poem so well
very well written brilliant job jim
July 31st, 2025 07:11
No choice
Friendship said:
This poem, \"No choice,\" revolves around the existential struggle of human life, emphasizing the feeling of being thrust into existence without consent. The poet touches upon themes of helplessness, fear, and the inevitability of death. The imagery of being \"torn from the womb\" and \"washed up on a foreign shore\" highlights feelings of dislocation and vulnerability in the face of life\'s uncertainties. This reflects my feelings when contemplating my own experiences of being thrust into a world that often feels alien and overwhelming.
July 31st, 2025 06:56
Friendship said:
This poem, \"No choice,\" revolves around the existential struggle of human life, emphasizing the feeling of being thrust into existence without consent. The poet touches upon themes of helplessness, fear, and the inevitability of death. The imagery of being \"torn from the womb\" and \"washed up on a foreign shore\" highlights feelings of dislocation and vulnerability in the face of life\'s uncertainties. This reflects my feelings when contemplating my own experiences of being thrust into a world that often feels alien and overwhelming.
July 31st, 2025 06:56
I love roses
rrodriguez said:
Beautiful! My wife\'s rose plant is blooming a little plink rose. Your brought that to mind.
July 31st, 2025 06:54
rrodriguez said:
Beautiful! My wife\'s rose plant is blooming a little plink rose. Your brought that to mind.
July 31st, 2025 06:54
No choice
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. Stays brilliantly shy of the specific. I can just plug it in anywhere.
July 31st, 2025 06:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. Stays brilliantly shy of the specific. I can just plug it in anywhere.
July 31st, 2025 06:06
No choice
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write, of the suffering some people are going through today, infront of what we laughingly call the civilised world, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and touching write, of the suffering some people are going through today, infront of what we laughingly call the civilised world, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 05:36
No choice
Tony Grannell said:
You could have easily been referring to a child in Gaza, the first thing to come to mind after reading this. A powerfully wrought verse, to express so much with so few words and to capture the minds, souls and hearts of many a poet. A superb passage of poetry, my friend, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:21
Tony Grannell said:
You could have easily been referring to a child in Gaza, the first thing to come to mind after reading this. A powerfully wrought verse, to express so much with so few words and to capture the minds, souls and hearts of many a poet. A superb passage of poetry, my friend, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 05:21
Vanity
Teddy.15 said:
lol that\'s hilarious, all\'s well that ends well. 🤣 Brilliantly written. Love the imagery. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:41
Teddy.15 said:
lol that\'s hilarious, all\'s well that ends well. 🤣 Brilliantly written. Love the imagery. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:41
No choice
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, makes me think of all the good people who just want a chance at life. Wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, makes me think of all the good people who just want a chance at life. Wonderful theme my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:38
Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
Liberation is there within us soren, all we need is to believe in ourselves.
Andy
July 31st, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Liberation is there within us soren, all we need is to believe in ourselves.
Andy
July 31st, 2025 02:18
Now
Denise Roddis said:
A thought-provoking piece - that makes you reflect on your life.
July 30th, 2025 17:06
Denise Roddis said:
A thought-provoking piece - that makes you reflect on your life.
July 30th, 2025 17:06
Maybe
Bella Shepard said:
So much of life revolves around the word \"maybe\", and with poetic brilliance you capture the feeling place of hesitancy or uncertainty that plagues us all from time to time. Beatifully done!
July 30th, 2025 10:01
Bella Shepard said:
So much of life revolves around the word \"maybe\", and with poetic brilliance you capture the feeling place of hesitancy or uncertainty that plagues us all from time to time. Beatifully done!
July 30th, 2025 10:01
Maybe
Friendship said:
Well-written, Sorenbarrett, with a bit of twists and turns, uncertainties, but I kind of maybe think I got it! Your poem seems to revolve around uncertainty and the search for meaning in various aspects of life. The repeated use of \"maybe\" suggests a contemplation of possibilities and the complexities of human thoughts and emotions. You explore themes of self-reflection, hesitation, and the pursuit of understanding in the face of confusion and doubt. The poem delves into the interplay between imagination, reality, and the struggle for self-acceptance and transformation.
July 30th, 2025 07:45
Friendship said:
Well-written, Sorenbarrett, with a bit of twists and turns, uncertainties, but I kind of maybe think I got it! Your poem seems to revolve around uncertainty and the search for meaning in various aspects of life. The repeated use of \"maybe\" suggests a contemplation of possibilities and the complexities of human thoughts and emotions. You explore themes of self-reflection, hesitation, and the pursuit of understanding in the face of confusion and doubt. The poem delves into the interplay between imagination, reality, and the struggle for self-acceptance and transformation.
July 30th, 2025 07:45
Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Maybe
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Maybe
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
Night\'s refuge
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
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