Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Time bandit
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 5th, 2025 10:51

Time bandit
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This sounds like years wasted on a relationship that ends in ruin and all that time...wasted. A profoundly tragic poem that rings true for many, I would imagine. Well done, my friend. See you on the other side of my vacation!

February 5th, 2025 10:05

Time bandit
arqios said:

The passing of time, it’s implications and inevitabilities corrodes, erodes, and defaces… like a bandit… or something like that. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 5th, 2025 07:12

Time bandit
MDStone said:

Wow! All who lived very long at all, know that feeling of violation. That someone that something that was a bandit who stole from us. It was a heartfelt read. One that stirred feelings and memories. Thank you for sharing with us.

February 5th, 2025 06:17

Time bandit
Poetic Licence said:

I know this will be wrong. This write gives me the feel of someone who has spent their entire life just thinking of themselves and taking whatever they wanted from a partner without giving anything in return. Now realises it is to late to put that write. Beauty pf poetry makes you think, a very enjoyable read and wonderful imagery, even if i am wrong.

February 5th, 2025 05:17

Time bandit
David Wakeling said:

This is quite sad but I think a lot of divorced people feel this way. I certainly did. Well constructed poem with wisdom as well.

February 5th, 2025 05:13

Time bandit
Neville said:



This is excellence poemed .. so there\'s still a glimmer of hope to hang onto .. & likewise, awarded πŸ’―/πŸ’― plus a dubble πŸ‘πŸ‘

February 5th, 2025 05:08

Time bandit
Teddy.15 said:

Time has a lot to answer for. This is magnificent and powerful with fantastic imagery and emotion. 🌹

February 5th, 2025 04:16

Reflections
Salvia.S said:

A unique blend of scientific and philosophical concepts. Well written!

February 5th, 2025 03:33

Reflections
2781 said:

Is it still a mystery?
Everything old is new again.

February 5th, 2025 03:12

Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:

Time and space will always be with us soren, enjoy every moment.

Andy

February 5th, 2025 02:50

Yesterday\'s embers
Simurgh said:

Wonderful, brilliant!

February 4th, 2025 22:03

Reflections
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

February 4th, 2025 13:25

Reflections
Teddy.15 said:

Your first line has enough imagery for infinity for me, as you know I\'m married to a physics doctorate, so I\'m going to share this one and come back later, I\'ve been reading this all day kudos my friend I absolutely love every line. I want to see what he says and sees in this, and I\'ll let you know. 🌹

February 4th, 2025 12:06

Reflections
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 4th, 2025 10:53

Yesterday\'s embers
Cassie58 said:

And out of the ashes comes new growth. Great metaphor here sorenbarrett. Visually beautiful words. Have a happy Tuesday.

February 4th, 2025 08:58

Reflections
Poetic Licence said:

Delving into the confusing world of science, where all are as one and the same, while at other times they are different, well written read that makes you think, enjoyed the read

February 4th, 2025 06:20

Reflections
David Wakeling said:

There is a lot of Physics in this.Wonderful.I enjoyed reading Well done.Made me think

February 4th, 2025 05:26

Reflections
orchidee said:



February 4th, 2025 03:31

Reflections
orchidee said:

Good writ SB. Is it that the particles are IN the waves, so that light can be both waves and particles? I\'m no scientist, physicist, etc.

February 4th, 2025 03:31

Yesterday\'s embers
Goldfinch60 said:

Those ashes scattered will help new life to grow soren.

Andy

February 4th, 2025 02:52

Yesterday\'s embers
Neville said:



I am very much a tree hugger and have lost count of the number of excellent & likewise memorable examples of poetree that I have admired .. this must now rank amongst the wood I am sowing .. Neville

February 3rd, 2025 15:57

Yesterday\'s embers
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

February 3rd, 2025 10:48

Ants
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Soren. A fine write.

February 3rd, 2025 09:28

Yesterday\'s embers
arqios said:

They stand tall and strong until the final moments when all that is left is their burnt out stump. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 3rd, 2025 06:41

Ants
RSM0812 said:

Ants compared to pirates. I love it.

February 3rd, 2025 06:38

Yesterday\'s embers
Salvia.S said:

A beautiful and poignant poem with a haunting quality!

February 3rd, 2025 06:11

Yesterday\'s embers
David Wakeling said:

I see the burning of a great tree here. Very well written with emotive imagery

February 3rd, 2025 05:48

Yesterday\'s embers
Poetic Licence said:

I get the sense of a falling crown and fading life, enjoyable read to start the week

February 3rd, 2025 04:25

Deflowered
Mysty Monroe said:

This is very good. I love how you did this and the raw yet exotic take on the subject

February 3rd, 2025 04:22



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