Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Who said that?
Friendship said:
Nicely said.Your poem is a hilarious take on life\'s ridiculousness, using humor and colloquial language to show that, sometimes, you have to laugh at the absurdity of it all. It\'s full of over-the-top comparisons and down-to-earth imagery that highlight the quirks of life, the inevitability of aging and death, and the stubbornness of human nature. The subject matter is all about embracing the weirdness of life and finding the humor in our shared human experience. Sometimes a poem\'s mission is to tickle your funny bone while sneakily dropping some knowledge on human nature and life\'s ridiculous moments, all via humor and wacky imagery. Humor\'s like a superhero cape that helps you cope with life\'s absurdities and challenges. This poem is a playful yet poignant romp through life\'s quirks, delivered in a voice and style that\'s all its own.
May 3rd, 2025 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely said.Your poem is a hilarious take on life\'s ridiculousness, using humor and colloquial language to show that, sometimes, you have to laugh at the absurdity of it all. It\'s full of over-the-top comparisons and down-to-earth imagery that highlight the quirks of life, the inevitability of aging and death, and the stubbornness of human nature. The subject matter is all about embracing the weirdness of life and finding the humor in our shared human experience. Sometimes a poem\'s mission is to tickle your funny bone while sneakily dropping some knowledge on human nature and life\'s ridiculous moments, all via humor and wacky imagery. Humor\'s like a superhero cape that helps you cope with life\'s absurdities and challenges. This poem is a playful yet poignant romp through life\'s quirks, delivered in a voice and style that\'s all its own.
May 3rd, 2025 08:50
Who said that?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today. Thank you so much, my friend! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today. Thank you so much, my friend! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:20
Who said that?
David Wakeling said:
I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read
May 3rd, 2025 03:29
David Wakeling said:
I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read
May 3rd, 2025 03:29
A lot of wind
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.
Andy
May 3rd, 2025 01:29
Hands that grasp
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
jarcher54 said:
Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!
May 2nd, 2025 21:09
Acts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?
May 2nd, 2025 12:34
A lot of wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
A lot of wind
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
MDStone said:
I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
May 2nd, 2025 10:17
A lot of wind
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
hzugman said:
Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.
May 2nd, 2025 09:59
A lot of wind
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
Friendship said:
Beautifully crafted, the \"vertical lake held in place by the force of the gale\" powerfully symbolizes life\'s unpredictable journey, where natural forces shape our paths. The poem inspires reflection on life\'s twists and turns, and how external forces can transform and elevate human existence. It also celebrates the human spirit\'s capacity for resilience and adaptation in the face of nature\'s awe-inspiring power.
May 2nd, 2025 08:19
A lot of wind
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
David Wakeling said:
an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
May 2nd, 2025 05:11
A lot of wind
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Teddy.15 said:
A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
A lot of wind
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Victor Bolshov said:
Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!
May 2nd, 2025 05:02
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.
Andy
May 2nd, 2025 01:45
Blackness\' light
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Dan Williams said:
First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from earth\'s nipples\" could carry it all by themselves. Nice.
May 1st, 2025 21:21
Good taste
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he needed a \'Bigger Boat\' as someone once said.
Enjoyable poem
May 1st, 2025 18:23
Ponderings
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Lorenz said:
Squeaking thinking machine .Reminiscent of pink floyds themes .
May 1st, 2025 13:00
Ponderings
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Tony Grannell said:
What caught my attention was \'A silent Rustle,\' a conflict, as in imagining sounds, a cacophony of presumed sounds and the madness therein, an aural paranoia , \'echoing in my brain\'. Frightening to say the least and very well captured in this exceedingly interesting and well written poem. Excellent!
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 11:36
Ponderings
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Good write SB. It\'s KP squeaking and creeping about! lol.
May 1st, 2025 10:53
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