Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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orchidee said:

Good write SB. That fat beardy bloke has gone for another year! lol.

December 25th, 2024 03:12

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Goldfinch60 said:

Two types of life brought into our world soren, may the softer ones fill it with glory.

Andy

December 25th, 2024 02:53

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Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem
and so true! πŸ‘
Terrific use of
metaphor,
great rhyme, rhythm
and flow!!πŸ’―
Tempered and forged
quite eloquently, thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
PS: Merry Christmas! πŸŽ„β›„πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„πŸŒŸ

December 24th, 2024 22:01

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Michael Edwards said:

I read your poem and one thought came to mind \'forged in the brighest flame\' a line that will go into my \'Ideas Box\' for later use - a sign of a great poem - ie one thar inspires others.

December 24th, 2024 15:17

Call of the earth
Bragee said:

Life remains undefeated

December 24th, 2024 14:23

The fly
Bragee said:

So important to watch the company you keep!

December 24th, 2024 14:22

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Bella Shepard said:

Could it be that adversity is the best teacher, if the student embraces it and learns. You\'ve given much food for thought here, and I thank you.

December 24th, 2024 13:17

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful and deep poem that can both be taken outwardly (meaning an outward view of the world) or inwardly (at one\'s own self, circumstances, and influence on others). Either way, brilliantly penned, my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and your family.

December 24th, 2024 11:04

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Teddy.15 said:

Peace on earth my dear friend, peace on earth, may 2025 be a year where all world leaders find more wisdom and inspiration and demonstrate it for our young instead of what we have been seeing in these years🌹

December 24th, 2024 04:08

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

December 24th, 2024 03:54

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Neville said:


I have a thing about damascus steel & have a fine collection of sharp pointy things all custom made in forges from around the globe .. all kept in a temperature controlled environment .. I also have a thing about Damascus & Syria and loose sleep over both on a regular basis .. I may be a million miles off target today but it had to be said & it felt safer letting go of it here .. forgive me .. Neville

December 24th, 2024 03:31

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arqios said:

The malleable seem to gain more durability and longevity, in general.

December 24th, 2024 03:30

Ax of division
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, sometime those cracks are never healed.

Andy

December 24th, 2024 02:51

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MendedFences27 said:

Your poem digs deep into the wounds that never heal. Some situations are not salvageable. Sometimes a clean break is the only solution. - Phil A.

December 23rd, 2024 23:39

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David Wakeling said:

This is an interesting style. Creates a Charles Dicken like atmosphere. Excellent.

December 23rd, 2024 21:12

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Thad Wilk said:

Yes, Father Time can\'t
always heal all wounds
and if so, the scars will
never really fade. 😒
A very touching poem
eloquently penned!! πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 23rd, 2024 20:20

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Teddy.15 said:

Sweet dearest sorrenbarret, I have always been at odds with my father, I so appreciate this Sir. 🌹

December 23rd, 2024 17:18

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Michael Edwards said:

Many are the wounds that never heal in the generation affected and often in future generations - and still the human race clings to its many Gods.

December 23rd, 2024 16:45

On edge
Sealgair said:

Great job!

December 23rd, 2024 14:09

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Neville said:



The first cut is not always the deepest, is it .. but hey, now you got me sounding like a chip off the old block .. and now I can\'t get Thor out of my head .. but he had a hammer didn\'t he .. πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„πŸ‘

December 23rd, 2024 13:07

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Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Brilliant.

December 23rd, 2024 12:31

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Poetic Licence said:

Some wounds we can only put a bandage on, well written

December 23rd, 2024 11:40

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Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2024 10:52

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, time does not heal all wounds. Well expressed my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 23rd, 2024 10:11

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 23rd, 2024 03:53

On edge
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have had those problems on the edge of our lives soren but to reach the age I have I have overcome them.

Andy

December 23rd, 2024 03:04

On edge
Thad Wilk said:

A fantastic poem
the imagery out of sight! πŸ‘
Great rhyme, rhythm and flow,
a treat to recite!! πŸ’―πŸ‘
My pleasure to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad


December 22nd, 2024 20:02

On edge
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous imagery.

December 22nd, 2024 15:27

On edge
Cassie58 said:

A stream of thoughts which appear to be random, almost like over thinking. Interesting imagery Soren. Beautifully penned.

December 22nd, 2024 14:26

On edge
Bella Shepard said:

Metaphorically sublime, rhythmicaly beautiful, such a gem!

December 22nd, 2024 13:32



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