Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
No worries
Friendship said:
I enjoy your sense of humor in the morning it made me chuckle! 😂
The poem revolves around the notion of security in relationships. It suggests that marrying someone who is not conventionally attractive (an \"ugly wife\") or financially poor can lead to a more stable and less complicated relationship. The poem implies that such choices can help avoid jealousy, insecurity, and societal pressures. It focuses on unconventional views of love and marriage, challenging societal norms regarding beauty and wealth.
September 8th, 2025 06:49
Friendship said:
I enjoy your sense of humor in the morning it made me chuckle! 😂
The poem revolves around the notion of security in relationships. It suggests that marrying someone who is not conventionally attractive (an \"ugly wife\") or financially poor can lead to a more stable and less complicated relationship. The poem implies that such choices can help avoid jealousy, insecurity, and societal pressures. It focuses on unconventional views of love and marriage, challenging societal norms regarding beauty and wealth.
September 8th, 2025 06:49
No worries
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Now I know why my wife married me, and there was I, thinking I was handsome. A poem full of sound advice though never given, rendered forth with dollops of humour and awkward truths.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
September 8th, 2025 06:44
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Now I know why my wife married me, and there was I, thinking I was handsome. A poem full of sound advice though never given, rendered forth with dollops of humour and awkward truths.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
September 8th, 2025 06:44
No worries
arqios said:
The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they live to tell so many tales as well.
September 8th, 2025 05:58
arqios said:
The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they live to tell so many tales as well.
September 8th, 2025 05:58
No worries
Neville said:
Now aint that so often the truth .. I just happen to have been very lucky .. Bloomin brilliant .. Neville 😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:41
Neville said:
Now aint that so often the truth .. I just happen to have been very lucky .. Bloomin brilliant .. Neville 😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:41
Night spells
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the way it flowed. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2025 02:21
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Love the way it flowed. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2025 02:21
Night spells
Acheel said:
Hail Soren sayer of these mighty words throng
In sorrow brewed this unbroken, unsung song?
September 8th, 2025 00:14
Acheel said:
Hail Soren sayer of these mighty words throng
In sorrow brewed this unbroken, unsung song?
September 8th, 2025 00:14
What is a poet?
nami said:
oh YES, how different and yet so same. The common misery of the poets, the way we pour it into our pages, this is beautiful.
September 7th, 2025 23:04
nami said:
oh YES, how different and yet so same. The common misery of the poets, the way we pour it into our pages, this is beautiful.
September 7th, 2025 23:04
Recognition
nami said:
\"The lingering memory of a fading kiss\", this is haunting and beautiful. SO nicely done!!
September 7th, 2025 23:02
nami said:
\"The lingering memory of a fading kiss\", this is haunting and beautiful. SO nicely done!!
September 7th, 2025 23:02
Why?
NafisaSB said:
Really true. We always bow to the demands of society and try to toe the expected line
Resonates with me 👏✌️👍💐
September 7th, 2025 19:19
NafisaSB said:
Really true. We always bow to the demands of society and try to toe the expected line
Resonates with me 👏✌️👍💐
September 7th, 2025 19:19
Night spells
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an incantation, and the imagery keeps it pulsing with depth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an incantation, and the imagery keeps it pulsing with depth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:33
Why?
Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with all you say and the way you said it.
Fine Poem.
Also I never understood when Bugs Bunny came out of a Shower; he had a Towel draped around his waist; when usually he wore nothing at all. But that\'s something else.
September 7th, 2025 18:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Agree with all you say and the way you said it.
Fine Poem.
Also I never understood when Bugs Bunny came out of a Shower; he had a Towel draped around his waist; when usually he wore nothing at all. But that\'s something else.
September 7th, 2025 18:30
Night spells
arqios said:
Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in parallel universes, superbly resonant and relatable.
September 7th, 2025 17:14
arqios said:
Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in parallel universes, superbly resonant and relatable.
September 7th, 2025 17:14
Night spells
NinjaGirl said:
I would definitely agree with the \"borrower,\" sense. It\'s the idea that no story is wholly original, only borrowed parts and memories. As for the rest: well written and an enjoyable read!
September 7th, 2025 16:52
NinjaGirl said:
I would definitely agree with the \"borrower,\" sense. It\'s the idea that no story is wholly original, only borrowed parts and memories. As for the rest: well written and an enjoyable read!
September 7th, 2025 16:52
Why?
Tony Grannell said:
... and nakedness in the arts is accepted, Soren. Weather plays a large part in culture of modesty just as much as religion does. Impropriety is in the eye of the beholder depending on society. How you have composed this poem is a wonder. Eight lines and so much therein. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 7th, 2025 11:03
Tony Grannell said:
... and nakedness in the arts is accepted, Soren. Weather plays a large part in culture of modesty just as much as religion does. Impropriety is in the eye of the beholder depending on society. How you have composed this poem is a wonder. Eight lines and so much therein. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 7th, 2025 11:03
Night spells
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, the repeated roles of the poet really emphasize the power of words to shape and transform life. Such powerful imagery and rhythm! Beautifully written.
September 7th, 2025 09:07
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, the repeated roles of the poet really emphasize the power of words to shape and transform life. Such powerful imagery and rhythm! Beautifully written.
September 7th, 2025 09:07
Night spells
Friendship said:
The intention behind the poem appears to be a meditation on the complexities of the creative process, revealing the emotional weight that accompanies artistic expression. It serves as both a personal reflection and a commentary on the broader human experience of searching for meaning amidst chaos.
September 7th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
The intention behind the poem appears to be a meditation on the complexities of the creative process, revealing the emotional weight that accompanies artistic expression. It serves as both a personal reflection and a commentary on the broader human experience of searching for meaning amidst chaos.
September 7th, 2025 07:49
Why?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The line “Our soul undressed in our eyes\" brings in only one question. Is there a relationship between physical nudity and psychological nakedness? Somehow I felt being naked was not hard but baring one\'s mind was a challenge. Perhaps it\'s an aside. Great poem. Thank you
September 7th, 2025 02:30
Why?
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren. Different cultures have such differing ways.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren. Different cultures have such differing ways.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:12
Styles
David Hopkins said:
Such perfect simplicity!
This is so far one of my favorites…
September 6th, 2025 14:45
David Hopkins said:
Such perfect simplicity!
This is so far one of my favorites…
September 6th, 2025 14:45
Why?
orchidee said:
Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he replied \'Why?\' to everything, question or not. lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:39
orchidee said:
Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he replied \'Why?\' to everything, question or not. lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:39
Why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul, eyes, and words together as our most revealing touch really struck me. Strong piece, my friend. And a great question to title it. Why? Indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2025 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul, eyes, and words together as our most revealing touch really struck me. Strong piece, my friend. And a great question to title it. Why? Indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2025 10:14
Why?
Friendship said:
Well written, the eyes are the reflections of our inner selves that we carry with us.
The \"soul undressed in our eyes\" serves as a metaphor for emotional transparency and honesty in a relationship. To me, this poem captures the essence of love as a complex interplay of vulnerability and connection, using evocative language and a fluid structure that enhances its emotional depth.
September 6th, 2025 07:58
Friendship said:
Well written, the eyes are the reflections of our inner selves that we carry with us.
The \"soul undressed in our eyes\" serves as a metaphor for emotional transparency and honesty in a relationship. To me, this poem captures the essence of love as a complex interplay of vulnerability and connection, using evocative language and a fluid structure that enhances its emotional depth.
September 6th, 2025 07:58
Why?
Teddy.15 said:
Yes we are not born into any type culture by choice, and those women who have no say in the beauty of their beings or any say in education truly is a poor point of any culture in my humble opinion. A great theme sad for those who are imprisoned by their own culture which they cannot escape nor embrace. Kudos. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 07:32
Teddy.15 said:
Yes we are not born into any type culture by choice, and those women who have no say in the beauty of their beings or any say in education truly is a poor point of any culture in my humble opinion. A great theme sad for those who are imprisoned by their own culture which they cannot escape nor embrace. Kudos. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 07:32
Why?
arqios said:
We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and tolerated while shock effect is somewhat of a weapon and a comeback.
September 6th, 2025 06:10
arqios said:
We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and tolerated while shock effect is somewhat of a weapon and a comeback.
September 6th, 2025 06:10
Why?
Keyara S Trotman said:
“Our souls undressed in our eyes” this a beautiful line here. Gives volume. I love that there some depth to this 👌🏻 “fluid exchange” this sounds quite interesting. When you say “fluid exchange”, raw very raw overall this poem is intimate, If that is what’s supposed to be given here! Lovelyyy 👏🏻
September 6th, 2025 04:33
Keyara S Trotman said:
“Our souls undressed in our eyes” this a beautiful line here. Gives volume. I love that there some depth to this 👌🏻 “fluid exchange” this sounds quite interesting. When you say “fluid exchange”, raw very raw overall this poem is intimate, If that is what’s supposed to be given here! Lovelyyy 👏🏻
September 6th, 2025 04:33
Fear myths of the unknown
gray0328 said:
This hit home Soren thank you for sharing
September 6th, 2025 03:57
gray0328 said:
This hit home Soren thank you for sharing
September 6th, 2025 03:57
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