Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Temple of broken rock
Lorenz said:

A beautiful text closely linked to my form of inspiration !

November 5th, 2024 06:22

Temple of broken rock
Teddy.15 said:

A fabulous piece of poetry with an enormous amount of educational benefits too. Thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

November 5th, 2024 06:19

Temple of broken rock
Neville said:



I spent many a happy moment among the Greek islands which at the time and has since served as the inspiration for many of my own scribbles .. nice ink sir

November 5th, 2024 05:57

Dance
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Fantastic πŸ‘‹

November 5th, 2024 03:16

Birth of a poem
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The line \"Can you touch a bell\'s chime?\" will echo in my mind for a long time to come! The poem is simply stunning

November 5th, 2024 02:58

Dance
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, luckily I have never never done that dance.

Andy

November 5th, 2024 02:52

Dance
Neville said:


Oh\' wot a brilliant play on words sir, and with only the one act .. the final one at that .. enjoyed to the very last drop .. Neville

November 5th, 2024 01:20

Church, through the eyes of a child
Rin the Magnificent said:

Delightfully penned, Soren!
Thou captured what just could be a universal children\'s feature.
Excellent work, as per usuall!

November 5th, 2024 00:45

Dance
NafisaSB said:

lovely write - i only hope none of the fellow poets have to suffer it - or even mankind in general

November 5th, 2024 00:35

Dance
Thad Wilk said:

Great poem
thought provoking i\'d say!! πŸ€”
That Tyburn Jig
I\'ll never do, no way Jōse!!🀣
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad

November 4th, 2024 17:34

Dance
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 4th, 2024 16:11

Expectations
Aloo Denish Obiero said:

Wow, what great poem with a powerful message! Indeed societal expectations can weigh you down; and unmet expectations bring untold frustrations

November 4th, 2024 13:09

Dance
Lorenz said:

\"The public hangman dancing the tyburn jig !\'\'
Gruesom story that I have just discovered ...

November 4th, 2024 12:01

Dance
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Theres\' the hymn \'Lord of the dance\'. It\'s balanced, not that life is just some escapism of dance at every step - pun intended there! So olde writers speak of \'the dance of life\'.

November 4th, 2024 10:11

Dance
Teddy.15 said:

During which act? 🀣 Hilarious imagery 🌹

November 4th, 2024 05:27

King of day queen of night
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, the sun and the moon bring such wonders to us.

Andy

November 4th, 2024 02:44

Bear
Thad Wilk said:

🀣🀣
After the first
5 lines I couldn\'t
\"BEAR IT\" 🐻 I had to laugh!
πŸ‘‰ (No pun) ,πŸ‘ˆπŸ˜‚
Thanks fur sharing my friend!
Beast regards ✌️ peace. Thad


November 3rd, 2024 19:43

Birth of a poem
Ladywithaquill said:

Just the right inspiration to write about anything and everything!

November 3rd, 2024 19:15

King of day queen of night
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 3rd, 2024 12:51

King of day queen of night
Lorenz said:

Some lines seem to come from the centuries of Nostradamus !

November 3rd, 2024 11:27

King of day queen of night
Thad Wilk said:

An outstanding poem,
eye pleasing imagery!πŸŒžπŸŒ›
The rhyme, the metaphor,
woven wonderfully!! πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad


November 3rd, 2024 11:09

King of day queen of night
arqios said:

Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Don’t know enough of that science to calculate.

November 3rd, 2024 07:27

King of day queen of night
Teddy.15 said:

One of the finest ever nature poems I\'ve ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret 🌹

November 3rd, 2024 07:10

King of day queen of night
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting read soren. I like it. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

November 3rd, 2024 05:00

King of day queen of night
Neville said:



Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..

November 3rd, 2024 04:39

Birth of a poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.

Andy

November 3rd, 2024 02:18

Birth of a poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!

November 3rd, 2024 01:22

Birth of a poem
Dan Williams said:

Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. \"Born from mind\'s womb, words lost in menses\" sums that up nicely. Fine work.

November 2nd, 2024 23:38

Birth of a poem
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 2nd, 2024 21:16

Birth of a poem
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! 🌞
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 2nd, 2024 20:41



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