Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Condemned
Dan Williams said:
Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes my daughter to explain technology to me now.
January 7th, 2025 20:42
Dan Williams said:
Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes my daughter to explain technology to me now.
January 7th, 2025 20:42
Gone
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely, appropriate. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:31
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely, appropriate. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:31
Condemned
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The subject is very close to my heart. A fascinating poem, makes one question the path of progress on the rubble of the dead. Loved it!
January 7th, 2025 20:22
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The subject is very close to my heart. A fascinating poem, makes one question the path of progress on the rubble of the dead. Loved it!
January 7th, 2025 20:22
Stronger than Love
Teddy.15 said:
Well looky here, I\'m digging up your gorgeous work this evening dear sorrenbarret wow sir. wow and what an ending or should I say neverending. š¹
January 7th, 2025 16:33
Teddy.15 said:
Well looky here, I\'m digging up your gorgeous work this evening dear sorrenbarret wow sir. wow and what an ending or should I say neverending. š¹
January 7th, 2025 16:33
Condemned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Solid state brains\". An excellent poem, Soren! Loved the wording and imagery a ton! š¹š
January 7th, 2025 15:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Solid state brains\". An excellent poem, Soren! Loved the wording and imagery a ton! š¹š
January 7th, 2025 15:01
Condemned
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this I could see a really lonely robot. Brilliant, we really are slaves to all this technology and social media, I truly fear for my Son who isn\'t even 12 yet. š¹
January 7th, 2025 14:32
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this I could see a really lonely robot. Brilliant, we really are slaves to all this technology and social media, I truly fear for my Son who isn\'t even 12 yet. š¹
January 7th, 2025 14:32
Gone
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, some lovely lines. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
January 7th, 2025 08:33
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, some lovely lines. Thanks for sharing, Soren.
January 7th, 2025 08:33
Condemned
rin said:
From a human perspective, it\'s a dystopia, but I wonder if it\'s possible to shine a light of hope even from there.
January 7th, 2025 06:30
rin said:
From a human perspective, it\'s a dystopia, but I wonder if it\'s possible to shine a light of hope even from there.
January 7th, 2025 06:30
Condemned
arqios said:
Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at once repulsed by leaking batteries, your imagery paints in the walls of the mind! A definite keeper in this poem. šš»ššš»
January 7th, 2025 06:01
arqios said:
Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at once repulsed by leaking batteries, your imagery paints in the walls of the mind! A definite keeper in this poem. šš»ššš»
January 7th, 2025 06:01
Condemned
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like an old Mental Health Hospital i used to help out in, but no, i am still working it out but have enjoyed my daily read, thank you
January 7th, 2025 04:23
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like an old Mental Health Hospital i used to help out in, but no, i am still working it out but have enjoyed my daily read, thank you
January 7th, 2025 04:23
Condemned
orchidee said:
Sounds like a description of KP! I am horrible to her! Awww. lol.
I rarely get the true meaning of anything \'hidden\' in poems. In some cases I become offensive - \'Grr! No, I didn\'t meant that at all\' is the reply. (lol)
January 7th, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Sounds like a description of KP! I am horrible to her! Awww. lol.
I rarely get the true meaning of anything \'hidden\' in poems. In some cases I become offensive - \'Grr! No, I didn\'t meant that at all\' is the reply. (lol)
January 7th, 2025 03:37
Gone
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
poignant indeed! š¢
Terrific brevity,
and rhyme and flow!!
A really captivating read,!!š
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:54
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
poignant indeed! š¢
Terrific brevity,
and rhyme and flow!!
A really captivating read,!!š
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:54
Gone
NinjaGirl said:
I really, really like this poem, love the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 20:54
NinjaGirl said:
I really, really like this poem, love the vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 20:54
Gone
Bella Shepard said:
Gone, but not forgotten. This poem possesses incredible imagery, and a beautifully flowing rhyming pattern that accentuates every line, everything to love.
January 6th, 2025 10:56
Bella Shepard said:
Gone, but not forgotten. This poem possesses incredible imagery, and a beautifully flowing rhyming pattern that accentuates every line, everything to love.
January 6th, 2025 10:56
Gone
arqios said:
Such delicate balance between the intensity of love and its inevitable loss. Iām astounded by its effective expression šš»šš»š
January 6th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
Such delicate balance between the intensity of love and its inevitable loss. Iām astounded by its effective expression šš»šš»š
January 6th, 2025 07:51
Gone
Teddy.15 said:
I see the wishful longing for something incredibly important, I don\'t know why, but I always lean towards a home, not to have been lost. Absolutely beautiful poetry dear sorrenbarret š¹
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Teddy.15 said:
I see the wishful longing for something incredibly important, I don\'t know why, but I always lean towards a home, not to have been lost. Absolutely beautiful poetry dear sorrenbarret š¹
January 6th, 2025 05:04
Gone
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of lost love that cannot help but touch your heart, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of lost love that cannot help but touch your heart, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 04:55
Gone
Cassie58 said:
This beautiful poem of lost love touched my heart. I was reminded, there is always a reason for the heartache. So poetic in expression and imagery Soren.
January 6th, 2025 04:50
Cassie58 said:
This beautiful poem of lost love touched my heart. I was reminded, there is always a reason for the heartache. So poetic in expression and imagery Soren.
January 6th, 2025 04:50
Gone
David Wakeling said:
This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well done.
January 6th, 2025 04:39
David Wakeling said:
This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well done.
January 6th, 2025 04:39
Gone
LP2187 said:
A great poem of sacrifice and loss. Short experiences can leave a long-lasting impact, but love can be costly. Enjoyed reading this.
January 6th, 2025 04:36
LP2187 said:
A great poem of sacrifice and loss. Short experiences can leave a long-lasting impact, but love can be costly. Enjoyed reading this.
January 6th, 2025 04:36
Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all need to see all in our world.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all need to see all in our world.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:23
Reflections
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! šš
An outstanding poem
and eye pleasing imagery!!š«
Great rhyme scheme
penned superbly!! š
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:51
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! šš
An outstanding poem
and eye pleasing imagery!!š«
Great rhyme scheme
penned superbly!! š
Thanks for sharing much enjoyed!!
Best regards āļø Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:51
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