Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Memories
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Memories
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Memories
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
Memories
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Forest fig
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
Vanity
Neville said:
I guess you could say she was tickled pink soren .. I\'m pretty sure my pooch is pawtistic .. she only licks what she pre-furrs or she likes a lot .. but then, its a dogs life innit .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:05
Neville said:
I guess you could say she was tickled pink soren .. I\'m pretty sure my pooch is pawtistic .. she only licks what she pre-furrs or she likes a lot .. but then, its a dogs life innit .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:05
Vanity
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A feline fashionista fleeing the amorous dog. I feel sorry for the poor dog, a love unrequited. A most humorous offering in your usual excellent style and a true tale to boot.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 13:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A feline fashionista fleeing the amorous dog. I feel sorry for the poor dog, a love unrequited. A most humorous offering in your usual excellent style and a true tale to boot.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 13:19
Vanity
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Donald Duck wears no...... underwear! Oops. lol.
July 28th, 2025 09:42
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Donald Duck wears no...... underwear! Oops. lol.
July 28th, 2025 09:42
Vanity
Doggerel Dave said:
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good for you, Soren.
July 28th, 2025 09:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good for you, Soren.
July 28th, 2025 09:02
Vanity
Poetic Licence said:
Very entertaining and well captured in the write, I have seen a dog and cat have this type of relationship, the dog wishing to be a bit more amorous than the cat would like, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
Very entertaining and well captured in the write, I have seen a dog and cat have this type of relationship, the dog wishing to be a bit more amorous than the cat would like, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 06:08
Vanity
Friendship said:
The poem \"Vanity\" revolves around the theme of pride and its consequences. It explores the humorous dynamics between a dapper cat and a dog who becomes infatuated with him. The poem touches on topics such as self-image, romantic advances, and the awkwardness of relationships, ultimately highlighting the cat\'s struggle with vanity and his decision to flee from unwanted attention.
July 28th, 2025 05:37
Friendship said:
The poem \"Vanity\" revolves around the theme of pride and its consequences. It explores the humorous dynamics between a dapper cat and a dog who becomes infatuated with him. The poem touches on topics such as self-image, romantic advances, and the awkwardness of relationships, ultimately highlighting the cat\'s struggle with vanity and his decision to flee from unwanted attention.
July 28th, 2025 05:37
Vanity
arqios said:
This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly skewers vanity with perfect comedic timing. I adore how your clever rhymes and playful twists invite us to chuckle at pride’s folly ...keep spinning these charming tales! 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly skewers vanity with perfect comedic timing. I adore how your clever rhymes and playful twists invite us to chuckle at pride’s folly ...keep spinning these charming tales! 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2025 04:09
The circle
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth
July 28th, 2025 01:40
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth
July 28th, 2025 01:40
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Tony Grannell said:
Excellent, Soren, well put, well composed with compassion and dignity. The world is full of beautiful imperfections where perfection lies within. \'Don\'t judge a book...\', as the saying goes. A poem filled with great understanding. Well done, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 12:34
Tony Grannell said:
Excellent, Soren, well put, well composed with compassion and dignity. The world is full of beautiful imperfections where perfection lies within. \'Don\'t judge a book...\', as the saying goes. A poem filled with great understanding. Well done, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 12:34
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Lorna said:
Aaahhhh if we could only save everything and everyone........
July 27th, 2025 07:27
Lorna said:
Aaahhhh if we could only save everything and everyone........
July 27th, 2025 07:27
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Friendship said:
I am compelled to express my admiration for this remarkable poem. It has a profound impact, conveying a message that is both powerful and moving. The imagery is exquisite, creating a picture that is both beautiful and unforgettable. To me, your poem seems to explore themes of creativity, communication, and the fragility of life. It highlights the struggles of those who may be marginalized or misunderstood, as well as the beauty found in nature and the cycle of life and death. You painted rich with imagery. Like \"a painter with no hands,\" \"deaf mute no one understands,\" and \"the song of a bird,\" these phrases create vivid pictures and emotional resonance. The use of contrasts, such as \"green grass\" and \"a shell that looks like hell,\" emphasizes the dichotomy between beauty and suffering. It seems to serve as a reminder to appreciate the depth and potential within all beings and things, advocating for empathy and understanding in a world that often overlooks the intricate stories behind appearances.
July 27th, 2025 07:21
Friendship said:
I am compelled to express my admiration for this remarkable poem. It has a profound impact, conveying a message that is both powerful and moving. The imagery is exquisite, creating a picture that is both beautiful and unforgettable. To me, your poem seems to explore themes of creativity, communication, and the fragility of life. It highlights the struggles of those who may be marginalized or misunderstood, as well as the beauty found in nature and the cycle of life and death. You painted rich with imagery. Like \"a painter with no hands,\" \"deaf mute no one understands,\" and \"the song of a bird,\" these phrases create vivid pictures and emotional resonance. The use of contrasts, such as \"green grass\" and \"a shell that looks like hell,\" emphasizes the dichotomy between beauty and suffering. It seems to serve as a reminder to appreciate the depth and potential within all beings and things, advocating for empathy and understanding in a world that often overlooks the intricate stories behind appearances.
July 27th, 2025 07:21
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
arqios said:
Don’t throw anything away. You never know the gift within. Hidden life waits in broken things. A crack can let new light through. Silence can still sing its song. Small wonders shine without words. Listen to the quiet voices. Believe in unseen potential. Something to take to heart every moment of every day.
July 27th, 2025 06:50
arqios said:
Don’t throw anything away. You never know the gift within. Hidden life waits in broken things. A crack can let new light through. Silence can still sing its song. Small wonders shine without words. Listen to the quiet voices. Believe in unseen potential. Something to take to heart every moment of every day.
July 27th, 2025 06:50
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Poetic Licence said:
Dont discard people just because they look different or you don\'t understand them, try getting to know the person inside the shell you don\'t like the look off, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 06:50
Poetic Licence said:
Dont discard people just because they look different or you don\'t understand them, try getting to know the person inside the shell you don\'t like the look off, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 06:50
Weak and strong
jim56 said:
love this it has everything feeling expression emotion
words say everything as you read it
nice flow beautifully written jim
July 27th, 2025 05:35
jim56 said:
love this it has everything feeling expression emotion
words say everything as you read it
nice flow beautifully written jim
July 27th, 2025 05:35
Don\'t throw them away you don\'t know what is inside
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking, this reminds us not to judge too quickly or discard what we don’t fully understand. Nicely done 👍
July 27th, 2025 05:25
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking, this reminds us not to judge too quickly or discard what we don’t fully understand. Nicely done 👍
July 27th, 2025 05:25
Night\'s refuge
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and the line \"Life \'tis but a dream, passing in the blink of an eye\" is so very true.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren and the line \"Life \'tis but a dream, passing in the blink of an eye\" is so very true.
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:51
Night\'s refuge
Jeremy Leach said:
Very well crafted and an eternally interesting topic. Reading this makes me stop and think about it all, which is good.
July 27th, 2025 01:42
Jeremy Leach said:
Very well crafted and an eternally interesting topic. Reading this makes me stop and think about it all, which is good.
July 27th, 2025 01:42
Night\'s refuge
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams had such a wonderful, mystical aura, before we neurologically disected them. This beautiful poem evokes a mysticism that I think we will always choose hold on to. Excellent write!
July 26th, 2025 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams had such a wonderful, mystical aura, before we neurologically disected them. This beautiful poem evokes a mysticism that I think we will always choose hold on to. Excellent write!
July 26th, 2025 14:40
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