Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Styles
NinjaGirl said:
\"Beauty goes naked\" I was NOT expecting that! I\'d say I\'m comfort according to your poem! Good work as always!
September 5th, 2025 14:21
NinjaGirl said:
\"Beauty goes naked\" I was NOT expecting that! I\'d say I\'m comfort according to your poem! Good work as always!
September 5th, 2025 14:21
Styles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then strips it back...comfort worn in, deceit dressed up, arrogance trying too hard, and beauty just showing up plain...no need for clothing or hiding away. Simple, clear, and sharp. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then strips it back...comfort worn in, deceit dressed up, arrogance trying too hard, and beauty just showing up plain...no need for clothing or hiding away. Simple, clear, and sharp. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 09:52
Styles
Friendship said:
Well-written, but the only thing is you painted an image that I cannot get out of my head of a naked poet, a little bit disturbing, as the first image in my head for the morning, but well said. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of authenticity versus superficiality. It suggests that true comfort and identity are often found in simplicity, while societal constructs like deceit, arrogance, and beauty are frequently adorned with artificial embellishments.
September 5th, 2025 09:01
Friendship said:
Well-written, but the only thing is you painted an image that I cannot get out of my head of a naked poet, a little bit disturbing, as the first image in my head for the morning, but well said. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of authenticity versus superficiality. It suggests that true comfort and identity are often found in simplicity, while societal constructs like deceit, arrogance, and beauty are frequently adorned with artificial embellishments.
September 5th, 2025 09:01
Avocado
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is beautifully written. Avocados are delicious.
September 5th, 2025 08:37
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is beautifully written. Avocados are delicious.
September 5th, 2025 08:37
Styles
orchidee said:
I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed such a state. It put me off me dinner for a month. Well, put me off fish anyway, as she\'s an old trout. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:47
orchidee said:
I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed such a state. It put me off me dinner for a month. Well, put me off fish anyway, as she\'s an old trout. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:47
Styles
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this as a woman I feel the last line so much. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 5th, 2025 06:05
Teddy.15 said:
Reading this as a woman I feel the last line so much. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
September 5th, 2025 06:05
Fear myths of the unknown
NafisaSB said:
may be a safe bet, but it would be great to have the strength to fly free - it would open up a beautiful world full of lovely surprises...
September 5th, 2025 01:20
NafisaSB said:
may be a safe bet, but it would be great to have the strength to fly free - it would open up a beautiful world full of lovely surprises...
September 5th, 2025 01:20
Fear myths of the unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren with so much truth in them.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren with so much truth in them.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:03
Fear myths of the unknown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still cling to…brutal, unflinching truth. That image of dogs still loving those that beat them really hit hard. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still cling to…brutal, unflinching truth. That image of dogs still loving those that beat them really hit hard. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:06
Fear myths of the unknown
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love it.
September 4th, 2025 14:34
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written, love it.
September 4th, 2025 14:34
Fear myths of the unknown
Keeter C said:
Deep. A statement on socialism or communism? Or a statement on those who would give up freedoms for security? Nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:44
Keeter C said:
Deep. A statement on socialism or communism? Or a statement on those who would give up freedoms for security? Nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:44
Fear myths of the unknown
NinjaGirl said:
We crave safety so much that we don\'t realize what we\'re sacrificing to get it. The price of a government for sure. Well done, and an easy favorite!
September 4th, 2025 11:08
NinjaGirl said:
We crave safety so much that we don\'t realize what we\'re sacrificing to get it. The price of a government for sure. Well done, and an easy favorite!
September 4th, 2025 11:08
Too long
RSM0812 said:
When one door closes another one opens up. Nice write.
September 4th, 2025 10:17
RSM0812 said:
When one door closes another one opens up. Nice write.
September 4th, 2025 10:17
Fear myths of the unknown
RSM0812 said:
This poem conveys the power of a strong leader. For good or bad. In tyranny we still must survive as a species. Great write.
September 4th, 2025 10:09
RSM0812 said:
This poem conveys the power of a strong leader. For good or bad. In tyranny we still must survive as a species. Great write.
September 4th, 2025 10:09
Fear myths of the unknown
Teddy.15 said:
You have hypnotized me with this one. Brilliant & powerful. 🌹 We are all these things and more.
September 4th, 2025 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
You have hypnotized me with this one. Brilliant & powerful. 🌹 We are all these things and more.
September 4th, 2025 09:31
Fear myths of the unknown
Jerry Reynolds said:
A solid write, sorenbarrett. So much to reflect on.
September 4th, 2025 07:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
A solid write, sorenbarrett. So much to reflect on.
September 4th, 2025 07:20
Fear myths of the unknown
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, better the tyrant you know than the one you don\'t know. Birds that are caged go through a painful tragedy. They will never see the free world. They will drop dead in the cage. Then the \"owner\" brings in another bird... The faithfulness of dogs is such that even ones that are beaten will still wag their tail in friendship at the very people who aggress them !...
September 4th, 2025 04:32
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, better the tyrant you know than the one you don\'t know. Birds that are caged go through a painful tragedy. They will never see the free world. They will drop dead in the cage. Then the \"owner\" brings in another bird... The faithfulness of dogs is such that even ones that are beaten will still wag their tail in friendship at the very people who aggress them !...
September 4th, 2025 04:32
Read till your eyes bleed
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning. Lyrical and meaningful.
September 4th, 2025 03:27
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning. Lyrical and meaningful.
September 4th, 2025 03:27
Little armor
Keeter C said:
I’ve been told of armadillo on the half shell on a campfire. Never tried it and I don’t think I will..
September 3rd, 2025 19:05
Keeter C said:
I’ve been told of armadillo on the half shell on a campfire. Never tried it and I don’t think I will..
September 3rd, 2025 19:05
Plastic legacy
Keeter C said:
Ah yes but magical
Plastics will save the forest, don’t you know what’s good for us?!
September 3rd, 2025 18:59
Keeter C said:
Ah yes but magical
Plastics will save the forest, don’t you know what’s good for us?!
September 3rd, 2025 18:59
Read till your eyes bleed
Keeter C said:
Interesting. A pearl is formed around an irritant yet smooth and we value them
Greatly.
The human body is the same but the product is not.
Does the rose know its value over the weed?
This deserves another read. Definitely a good one!
September 3rd, 2025 18:53
Keeter C said:
Interesting. A pearl is formed around an irritant yet smooth and we value them
Greatly.
The human body is the same but the product is not.
Does the rose know its value over the weed?
This deserves another read. Definitely a good one!
September 3rd, 2025 18:53
Plastic legacy
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite your justified aesthetic objections, plastic has it\'s place in this society today; however, its all pervasiveness, inadequate disposal and thus pollution which are the real issues.
September 3rd, 2025 12:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite your justified aesthetic objections, plastic has it\'s place in this society today; however, its all pervasiveness, inadequate disposal and thus pollution which are the real issues.
September 3rd, 2025 12:52
Read till your eyes bleed
NinjaGirl said:
This is so well-written, and an interesting commentary. I think humans like things that sparkle and shine, not caring that it comes from a clam or a rock. It\'s interesting what we define as valuable.
September 3rd, 2025 12:13
NinjaGirl said:
This is so well-written, and an interesting commentary. I think humans like things that sparkle and shine, not caring that it comes from a clam or a rock. It\'s interesting what we define as valuable.
September 3rd, 2025 12:13
Read till your eyes bleed
orchidee said:
But I don\'t want my eyes to bleed - heehee. Good write SB.
But KP goes blue in the face - asking me endlessly to cook her summat decent! She says \'Oh no, not sewage again!\' lol.
September 3rd, 2025 11:49
orchidee said:
But I don\'t want my eyes to bleed - heehee. Good write SB.
But KP goes blue in the face - asking me endlessly to cook her summat decent! She says \'Oh no, not sewage again!\' lol.
September 3rd, 2025 11:49
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