Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Father
arqios said:
Happy Father\'s Day 🙏🏻🕊️ I have a feeling perfection-imperfection dynamic is on many a mind today.
June 15th, 2025 03:53
arqios said:
Happy Father\'s Day 🙏🏻🕊️ I have a feeling perfection-imperfection dynamic is on many a mind today.
June 15th, 2025 03:53
Junk
Tony Grannell said:
Like a ruderal bloom appearing out of the junk in this splendid poem. Sometimes the subject of a poem can distract from its excellence, as is the case here. I always love reading your poetry but this one really got me. Line into line with perfect continuity and wording balances the poem complete in its artistry. If you found this one in the trash, please keep searching. Excellent, Soren, truly.
All the best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:03
Tony Grannell said:
Like a ruderal bloom appearing out of the junk in this splendid poem. Sometimes the subject of a poem can distract from its excellence, as is the case here. I always love reading your poetry but this one really got me. Line into line with perfect continuity and wording balances the poem complete in its artistry. If you found this one in the trash, please keep searching. Excellent, Soren, truly.
All the best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:03
Junk
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at a time.
June 14th, 2025 13:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at a time.
June 14th, 2025 13:01
Junk
orchidee said:
Ahh, more ideas for KP\'s dinners - scraps, junk, sewage, debris, trash, etc. She loves \'em! lol.
June 14th, 2025 12:33
orchidee said:
Ahh, more ideas for KP\'s dinners - scraps, junk, sewage, debris, trash, etc. She loves \'em! lol.
June 14th, 2025 12:33
Junk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writer\'s block. The muse takes a vacay. Every writer\'s dread turned into an eventual triumph. And, look what we have here, a poem about junk that isn\'t junk at all! That\'s the beauty of it really. Even when all we have are scraps of ideas left over of what we wanted to write, even when the muse has gone, something brilliant can emerge. This is one such emergence, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writer\'s block. The muse takes a vacay. Every writer\'s dread turned into an eventual triumph. And, look what we have here, a poem about junk that isn\'t junk at all! That\'s the beauty of it really. Even when all we have are scraps of ideas left over of what we wanted to write, even when the muse has gone, something brilliant can emerge. This is one such emergence, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:27
Junk
Poetic Licence said:
That is an incredibly harsh self critiques of ones poetry from a wonderful writer, that gives so much pleasure in their writing,
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
That is an incredibly harsh self critiques of ones poetry from a wonderful writer, that gives so much pleasure in their writing,
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Junk
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Rambling through the clutter-land of my mind OH the things I find.
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Rambling through the clutter-land of my mind OH the things I find.
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Junk
Soman Ragavan said:
It happens to writers. Sometimes it\'s a travel through a desert. The words, the ideas don\'t turn up. Inspiration is a mystery and is beyond anyone\'s control. When it happens you must make the most of it. Reading Wordsworth\'s (1770-1850) work, you will notice that as from a certain point, his writings became rather bland.
June 14th, 2025 06:31
Soman Ragavan said:
It happens to writers. Sometimes it\'s a travel through a desert. The words, the ideas don\'t turn up. Inspiration is a mystery and is beyond anyone\'s control. When it happens you must make the most of it. Reading Wordsworth\'s (1770-1850) work, you will notice that as from a certain point, his writings became rather bland.
June 14th, 2025 06:31
Junk
teardrop said:
Love the description of poems past, well and maybe even current. Well thats what popped in my mind. Writers block? Or the words you write aren;t exactly what your looking for. We as writers are our own worse critics. At least that is the was I took this piece. but hey, I enjoyed reading your words and the metaphors were well worth the read. Thank you for making me think this early morning. As well as the smile of my face, Very well thought out .
June 14th, 2025 05:32
teardrop said:
Love the description of poems past, well and maybe even current. Well thats what popped in my mind. Writers block? Or the words you write aren;t exactly what your looking for. We as writers are our own worse critics. At least that is the was I took this piece. but hey, I enjoyed reading your words and the metaphors were well worth the read. Thank you for making me think this early morning. As well as the smile of my face, Very well thought out .
June 14th, 2025 05:32
Junk
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a little despairing although it ends in hope. It is a tough analysis of the state of your poetry. I am here to say that your poetry is amazing and I hope you continue writing.Take heart better days ahead
June 14th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a little despairing although it ends in hope. It is a tough analysis of the state of your poetry. I am here to say that your poetry is amazing and I hope you continue writing.Take heart better days ahead
June 14th, 2025 04:17
What you can\'t accept in yourself
NafisaSB said:
find the answers suggested very fascinating and agree with quite a few
thanks for sharing
June 13th, 2025 23:46
NafisaSB said:
find the answers suggested very fascinating and agree with quite a few
thanks for sharing
June 13th, 2025 23:46
Passing on
Abraham Konchellah said:
Are moments really moments if we quickly convert them to memories? I read this poem really sloowly
June 13th, 2025 13:23
Abraham Konchellah said:
Are moments really moments if we quickly convert them to memories? I read this poem really sloowly
June 13th, 2025 13:23
The Maid
Tony Grannell said:
Hello soren,
Hand made love, a very subtle way of putting it, and as for \'back swaying\' along in old age, aptly observed and rendered forth with doddering panache - excellent! Even the thought of making a bed is a labour in itself. A delightful verse of humour to carry me through the day. Thank you very much for sharing this one.
From one self \'maid\' man to another,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:40
Tony Grannell said:
Hello soren,
Hand made love, a very subtle way of putting it, and as for \'back swaying\' along in old age, aptly observed and rendered forth with doddering panache - excellent! Even the thought of making a bed is a labour in itself. A delightful verse of humour to carry me through the day. Thank you very much for sharing this one.
From one self \'maid\' man to another,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:40
The Maid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the Monoryhme scheme and word play. So true. Great poem, my friend. 🌹👏
June 13th, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the Monoryhme scheme and word play. So true. Great poem, my friend. 🌹👏
June 13th, 2025 09:10
The Maid
Soman Ragavan said:
The ageing process is a most striking thing. When you compare someone\'s pictures in old age and in young age, you would never believe the transformation, the wreckage that age creates. The wrinkles come from nowhere, the skin sags.... It has been said that after 50 everything heads south. All things start sagging about us. Perhaps there is a cold logic for the ageing process. Generations have to succeed each other, to make room for new ones. This ensures the survival of the race.
June 13th, 2025 06:24
Soman Ragavan said:
The ageing process is a most striking thing. When you compare someone\'s pictures in old age and in young age, you would never believe the transformation, the wreckage that age creates. The wrinkles come from nowhere, the skin sags.... It has been said that after 50 everything heads south. All things start sagging about us. Perhaps there is a cold logic for the ageing process. Generations have to succeed each other, to make room for new ones. This ensures the survival of the race.
June 13th, 2025 06:24
The Maid
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, SB. In NY, it is 6, and I make my bed when I get up. At least one thing was done successfully today.
June 13th, 2025 06:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, SB. In NY, it is 6, and I make my bed when I get up. At least one thing was done successfully today.
June 13th, 2025 06:01
The Maid
Doggerel Dave said:
Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through what should have been my afternoon nap....👍
Faved
June 13th, 2025 05:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through what should have been my afternoon nap....👍
Faved
June 13th, 2025 05:47
The Maid
NafisaSB said:
Enjoyed the play on the word made/maid. Nice poem that encompasses the full span of life- fantastic
June 13th, 2025 04:42
NafisaSB said:
Enjoyed the play on the word made/maid. Nice poem that encompasses the full span of life- fantastic
June 13th, 2025 04:42
The Maid
David Wakeling said:
This was clever and fun.Made me smile.Wonderful word play on maid and made.Excellent
June 13th, 2025 04:09
David Wakeling said:
This was clever and fun.Made me smile.Wonderful word play on maid and made.Excellent
June 13th, 2025 04:09
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