Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Sepia dreams
Bobby O said:

Wow, that’s a statement not that the past doesn’t have meaning but you allowed it to be the same rain plan just a little instead of building up an imagination of greatness like I probably do so it’s real and you’re ready for next. What’s next?

October 31st, 2024 02:47

Sepia dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Those picture bring back such memories soren.

Andy

October 31st, 2024 02:21

Tears of night
Rin the Magnificent said:

Beautiful imagery, picturesque feeling of the coming storm.
Liked it very much!

October 31st, 2024 00:42

Sepia dreams
Dan Williams said:

Like a dream. Cold reality at the end. Very nice.

October 30th, 2024 23:36

Never
Dan Williams said:

All here is wonderful but the last two lines are huge, magnificent. I learn from you.

October 30th, 2024 23:29

Never
MR.apocalypse said:

lol this reminds me of a poem i wrote. the snap of the whip and the uttering of a word/ they both can be quick and they both can be heard/ the barrel of a gun and the words that are spoken/ one can make a heart stop and one can leave a heart broken

October 30th, 2024 21:18

Sepia dreams
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve read this 20 times today and every time it just gets more powerful. 🌹

October 30th, 2024 12:44

Sepia dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 30th, 2024 11:20

Never
sunshine777 said:

Love it, the ending line, perfect

October 30th, 2024 10:41

Never
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. Some cracking imagery.

October 30th, 2024 10:10

Sepia dreams
Tony36 said:

Awesome

October 30th, 2024 09:45

Sepia dreams
Neville said:



Excellent .. no punches pulled here and the one aimed at the kidney was delivered perfectly .. In my mind memorably so .. but then I\'ve always had a thing about sepia .. Neville

October 30th, 2024 06:16

Sepia dreams
arqios said:

That brought back memories. Over the weekend I found myself sharing some old photos of us cousins ain our chat group- the first of us had exited this scene just over a year ago.

October 30th, 2024 05:55

Sepia dreams
David Wakeling said:

This has a wonderful nostalgic feel about it. An old photograph can say so much. Well done

October 30th, 2024 05:33

Never
Goldfinch60 said:

So many things can happen and be reversed in life soren.

Andy

October 30th, 2024 02:48

Never
Doggerel Dave said:

Never knew about \'never\', Soren. Seems I continue to learn something new. Will ponder this and use with discretion (cannot recollect if I\'ve ever sinned in the past!) Many thanks for the tip.

October 29th, 2024 22:02

Never
orchidee said:

I don\'t fancy a spot of seppuku. Not now, thanks, it\'ll put me off me food. I thought someone said \'Fancy a spot of Supper Haikus?\' Doh! lol.

October 29th, 2024 11:40

Never
Lorenz said:

Elegant style !

October 29th, 2024 10:09

Never
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 29th, 2024 09:28

Never
Neville said:



I\'m much more a hardly ever kinda guy .. and rarely if ever say neva .. no kiddin

October 29th, 2024 09:06

Never
arqios said:

Never! Never ever! Ever, ever, never!


October 29th, 2024 05:08

Never
Teddy.15 said:

Dipends on my mood, sometimes I\'d sell my soul to the devil. So very powerful in imagery and emotion 💙 🌹

October 29th, 2024 04:35

More than clay
Teddy.15 said:

Wow 💜

October 29th, 2024 04:03

More than clay
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the core of our body and mind can be infinite soren

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:46

More than clay
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The opening lines are simply captivating, then the rest of the piem seems to flow naturally like a stream on a hilly terrain. Loved it 🎇

October 29th, 2024 03:08

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
sunshine777 said:

Very unique, one of a kind no doubt

October 28th, 2024 19:28

More than clay
Neilton said:

Great work here sorenbarret ! You never fail to impress me with your talent 💓

October 28th, 2024 16:49

More than clay
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 28th, 2024 12:48

More than clay
Neville said:



and there at the heart of the matter, having dug deep, it lies patiently just waiting to be found ..

October 28th, 2024 11:29

More than clay
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderfully captivating
and evocative write!! 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm and
flow, way to go!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed
a pleasure to recite!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

October 28th, 2024 10:03



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