Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Guilt
NafisaSB said:



August 26th, 2024 00:00

Guilt
NafisaSB said:

lovely write - so eloquently expressed - enjoyed the line \'guilt is the silt..\' - so true..

August 26th, 2024 00:00

Guilt
Dan Williams said:

You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted jewel from the master.

August 25th, 2024 23:55

Guilt
orchidee said:

The only \'guilt\' KP has is her \'gilded botox!\' lol. Good write SB.

August 25th, 2024 12:40

Guilt
Cassie58 said:

Guilt is the silt washed down from
the storm

That is a superb line

Better the guilt is on the move, rather than
solidified. That has to be progress.

Much enjoyed. A great read sorenbarrett.

August 25th, 2024 12:20

Guilt
Bella Shepard said:

I suppose guilt comes to all of us, in varying degrees, it is part of being human. A very wise and reflective write my friend.

August 25th, 2024 09:32

Guilt
Teddy.15 said:

How very beautiful and so very true, we can\'t change what is done but we can try not to have it in the future. 🌹

August 25th, 2024 05:50

Guilt
aDarkerMind said:

a most impressive write soren.

one to fave for sure.

August 25th, 2024 05:47

Music of the heart
Cassie58 said:

A fabulous metaphor. That’s relationships for you. How boring the same tune would be lol. So nicely composed. Have a happy Sunday.

August 25th, 2024 02:59

Music of the heart
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, music can take you to so many places and bring every emotion to you.

Andy

August 25th, 2024 01:08

Music of the heart
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

August 25th, 2024 00:06

Music of the heart
Dan Williams said:

I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.

August 24th, 2024 23:58

Music of the heart
Mase ♪ said:

Beautiful write Soren! 🌹🙏

August 24th, 2024 20:04

Music of the heart
Doggerel Dave said:

Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my experience, and your musical analogy feels very apt to me. Thanks

August 24th, 2024 16:26

Music of the heart
Teddy.15 said:

Indeed yesterday in tune today so out of tune it\'s just a mess. lol what a wonderful metaphor. 🌹

August 24th, 2024 16:18

Music of the heart
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 24th, 2024 13:00

Roots
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, sometimes we just do not have any idea what is going on.

Andy

August 24th, 2024 01:43

Roots
Dan Williams said:

Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith indeed.

August 23rd, 2024 23:56

Roots
rrodriguez said:

This is something to think about. Thou shall not judge, but we do it anyway. Enjoyed it! Be blessed!

August 23rd, 2024 20:21

Roots
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. You nailed it.

August 23rd, 2024 15:14

Roots
orchidee said:

Also - me again - gotta go now and prepare more sewage for KP\'s dinner! lol.

August 23rd, 2024 11:33

Roots
Doggerel Dave said:

Well put Soren. But let’s hope that at least some see the perhaps necessary ‘quick to judge’ as merely a working hypothesis, subject to change as new evidence becomes available

August 23rd, 2024 07:36

Roots
Neville said:


I\'m with Cassie .. you have excelled sb .. wiser and more cerebral than both my hemispheres & frontal lobe put together .. Top notch sir .. Neville

August 23rd, 2024 06:27

Roots
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

August 23rd, 2024 06:20

Roots
Teddy.15 said:

Oh you just managed to get inside my mind, and me I to the very depths of this clock hey wonderful metaphor so deep and incredibly inspiring. 🌹 Tic-toc.

August 23rd, 2024 05:34

Roots
Cassie58 said:

Never judge a book by its cover comes to mind, and that should apply to people too. If you don’t know how they tick, you shouldn’t pass judgement. I love the reference to the hidden roots of trees. So much wisdom here. Have a great day sorenbarrett.

August 23rd, 2024 04:57

Right or wrong
Goldfinch60 said:

To see what is right or wrong one must be prepared to look and listen which many do not bother to do in these modern times soren.

Andy

August 23rd, 2024 01:10

Right or wrong
Mase ♪ said:

Maybe right and wrong has a little to do with opinion! Because law is definitely not always right! Good write Soren!

August 22nd, 2024 22:48

Right or wrong
evenwheniLie said:

Word play; excellent!

August 22nd, 2024 14:22

Right or wrong
rengoku said:

very good rhyming soren!

August 22nd, 2024 11:53



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