Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



On edge
Michael Edwards said:

A great read - it flows and worth another visit.

December 22nd, 2024 08:40

On edge
Teddy.15 said:

Just beautiful dearest Sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

December 22nd, 2024 07:40

On edge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I have absolutely had those thoughts ride those storms and they can be friggin\' turbulent. On edge indeed. Well expressed, my friend. The imagery in this is rich, surreal and multilayered, just the way I like it. Well done! ๐Ÿ‘

December 22nd, 2024 07:23

On edge
2781 said:

Take off to many layers and God knows what you find!

December 22nd, 2024 05:59

On edge
Mutley Ravishes said:

\"Inside a thought riding a storm.\" One of the best lines I\'ve ever read, Soren!

December 22nd, 2024 04:09

On edge
arqios said:

Loving the title choice on this one Soren, sets up the whole poem with tension, instability and vulnerability. In its chaos, offering a profound exploration of memory, pain, and the subtle hint of potential for renewal. An thought provoking \'portrait\' of the intricate and often turbulent nature of our minds, and the enduring hope that lies beneath the surface.

December 22nd, 2024 03:51

On edge
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 22nd, 2024 03:22

God\'s Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, may your god go with you.

Andy

December 22nd, 2024 02:14

God\'s Christmas
Doggerel Dave said:

Let folks make what they will of the Festive Season. You have made it with your well honed piece. A rich read, Soren. But it is going to take more than all the charities put together at all times of the year to resolve poverty and inequality.
I\'m going to raise a glass to all those poor poets in the north who are suffering in the Winter Solstice.๐Ÿ˜Š

December 21st, 2024 18:59

God\'s Christmas
Thad Wilk said:

Yes Christmas ๐ŸŽ„ seasons
a time of the year to show
we care, peace and goodwills
a blessing we all still share. ๐Ÿ™
Awesome poem, thoughts
and message!!๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ‘
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ y

December 21st, 2024 18:01

God\'s Christmas
David Wakeling said:

A thoughtful poem.Brings some reality to the fantasy of Christmas.Made me think

December 21st, 2024 14:52

God\'s Christmas
Teddy.15 said:

So very powerful with an enormity of metaphor that is most appreciated as I myself am not a single bit religious. Brilliant dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

December 21st, 2024 14:49

Love of a father
Cassie58 said:

This is a moving read. It speaks to me of nurture. Qualities passed from father to son. I found strength in the lines and so much more. Strong roots, great foundations. Very nice Soren.

December 21st, 2024 14:03

God\'s Christmas
Cassie58 said:

Christmas time, a time to count our own blessings and to remember the many people who struggle with life for a myriad of different reasons. A time to be generous to those less fortunate. A beautiful, compassionate poem Soren. I am not a fan of organised religion but spiritual I will always be. Lovely work.

December 21st, 2024 13:58

God\'s Christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:

โ€œ Christ lives in beggar clothes, / Allah in an infant\'s smile / Buddha is a rose that grows out of a garbage pile.โ€ This is the heart of the Christmas messageโ€ฆthat we are all connected and should not ignore others in their plight. That no one should be left without hope, peace, joy and loveโ€ฆnot on Christmas Day or any other. Yet so many are. Your poem is excellent, my friend!

December 21st, 2024 13:41

God\'s Christmas
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 21st, 2024 13:21

God\'s Christmas
2781 said:

Thought provoking read, as usual!
Christmas will be whatever it is. It also comes from the heart.

December 21st, 2024 07:22

Love of a father
rhmn_7 said:

A rosebush resembling a father (or the other way around), from head to toe, is very unique indeed. Great poem!

December 21st, 2024 07:20

God\'s Christmas
Poetic Licence said:

To me this well written piece is a stark reminder of how Christmas does not bring all people together, in some cases it increases the divides between the Have`s, The Pretenders and the Have not`s, i really enjoyed reading this, Thank you

December 21st, 2024 06:30

God\'s Christmas
arqios said:

Hey Soren, this poem is a profound and thought-provoking reflection on the true meaning of charity and the divine presence in everyday life. The stark contrasts you draw between superficial displays of wealth and the genuine needs of others powerfully highlight the disconnect that often exists in society.

December 21st, 2024 06:05

God\'s Christmas
Neville said:


These words maketh my Christmas .. I doubt they can be beat .. Me & mine are presently prepping for our annual night shift at a Night Shelter not a million miles away .. Neville

December 21st, 2024 04:57

God\'s Christmas
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

December 21st, 2024 03:54

Love of a father
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words on everlasting life soren.

Andy

December 21st, 2024 02:44

Love of a father
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
Fantastic poem and
dedication to Fathers!!
Love it!! ๐Ÿ˜
Thanks for sharing my friend!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 20th, 2024 17:14

Love of a father
Teddy.15 said:

A truly profound poem, so very much appreciated as I\'m a women who was never in sync with her father until a couple of years ago. ๐ŸŒน

December 20th, 2024 15:23

Love of a father
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

December 20th, 2024 11:02

Love of a father
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! As a father who still has his father in his life, this one has a special place in my heart. โค๏ธ

December 20th, 2024 09:11

Love of a father
arqios said:

Profoundly moved: never connected a rosebush with fatherhood.. wow!!! I love gardening and the forest, even more connections. Thanks for sharing. :-)

December 20th, 2024 07:33

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Cassie58 said:

Itโ€™s all about making money and cutting corners. The worse part of capitalism. I dislike intensely the way the world is moving. We need a more compassionate and a less throw away world Soren. You hit your point across well.

December 20th, 2024 07:30

Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Goldfinch60 said:

That is what it is like nowadays soren, back in my days we fixed things and did not just buy new things.

Andy

December 20th, 2024 02:47



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