Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Fear
Bobby O said:

Sir, like you added an additional chapter to Danteโ€˜s Inferno all of that would be a hell descriptive queasy. Iโ€™m glad Iโ€™m not at that place. You did a good job man you stayed with the story and stuck with it and delivered. Nice job. Sensei.

November 25th, 2024 03:41

Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

Luckily I have been a good boy for most of my life soren. LOL

Andy

November 25th, 2024 02:53

Fear
Mutley Ravishes said:

\"Though your sins are like scarlet, they will be white as snow. If they are red as crimson, they will become like wool.\"
How does this happen? Nothing like a mystery to get the juices flowing!

November 24th, 2024 20:19

Fear
Alan R said:

Soo profound! The flow, the agonyโ€ฆ.

November 24th, 2024 19:01

Fear
Cassie58 said:

You have summed up the emotion
of fear here Soren superbly. Not an place any of us wants to visit. Well penned.

November 24th, 2024 17:18

Fear
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Powerful expression of fear, and your use of language to describe that which is so universal, really delivers. Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

November 24th, 2024 16:01

Glass prison
SureshG said:

Simplicity evoking sense of joy.

November 24th, 2024 13:32

Fear
Neville said:



........................... could this be a portrait of purgatory by any chance .. asking because I am both intrigued and very nosey .. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿง๐Ÿ‘

November 24th, 2024 13:08

Fear
orchidee said:

I\'ll give KP, not pieces of glass under the skin (that\'s going too far, says Fido to me), but bug prickles across the flesh - as in creepy crawlies lol.

November 24th, 2024 13:01

Distant drumes
Teddy.15 said:

May the drums roll for an encore superb. ๐ŸŒน

November 24th, 2024 12:05

Fear
Teddy.15 said:

Painful reading my friend, brilliantly executed as always, packing a massive punch and reflection. ๐ŸŒน Something I have suffered from is definitely fear but I always try to overcome even if it takes a while.

November 24th, 2024 10:14

Fear
2781 said:

Guantanamo Bay?

November 24th, 2024 08:09

Fear
arqios said:

Now that was very real, excruciating!

November 24th, 2024 07:33

Metal cage
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful words soren, may that Spirit rise from the cage and go onto a great life.

Andy

November 24th, 2024 02:17

Whispers
A.H. Browning said:

Very nice. What was the inspiration, if you donโ€™t mind me asking. Kindest regards.

November 23rd, 2024 20:27

Metal cage
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Powerful.

November 23rd, 2024 18:53

Little bird
Teddy.15 said:

Such an honest look at life and also as a child, most innocent yet painfully stuck within the soul, I saw a boy throw a stone at a seagull once and it died, I\'m not sure he was ever remorseful. โค๏ธ

November 23rd, 2024 18:12

Metal cage
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery was like taking a walk into my future somewhat, by the end I had goosebumps, beautiful dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

November 23rd, 2024 17:29

Metal cage
David Wakeling said:

This is powerful. It summarizes the human condition perfectly. Wonderful. reminds me of my honeymoon.Just kidding

November 23rd, 2024 14:18

Metal cage
RSM0812 said:

Sounds like a trip to an airport. Lol. Your vivid imagery is excellent. It paints a perfect picture.

November 23rd, 2024 13:12

Metal cage
Tony36 said:

Powerful write

November 23rd, 2024 11:53

Metal cage
Neville said:



This reminds me of Poe .. and Madonna very scary stuff ..๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

November 23rd, 2024 10:43

Metal cage
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Aging is not for the faint of heart, and yet even the faint of heart canโ€™t avoid aging. A conundrum! Wonderfully painted, Soren! ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

November 23rd, 2024 08:35

Metal cage
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 23rd, 2024 08:14

Metal cage
arqios said:

A powerfully evocative image. Reminded me of Nana in her last days, I refused to directly look at her so as not to mar the memory I chose to keep of her. So I approached her as always but relied on my peripheral vision, she was mostly blind by then, cataract cloud in one eye and a failed corneal transplant in the other. Strange how this particular reading brought me there. It may take me elsewhere on another day.

November 23rd, 2024 06:53

Distant drumes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, reminding us of times gone by.

Andy

November 23rd, 2024 02:39

Distant drumes
Thomas W Case said:

You take the reader on the journey with you. Excellent work.

November 22nd, 2024 13:25

Distant drumes
orchidee said:

Ahh, drumes in the title! heehee.

November 22nd, 2024 09:35

Distant drumes
arqios said:

Reminds me of what I consider a classic with Spencer Tracy as well as the Oregon Trail.

November 22nd, 2024 08:58

Distant drumes
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem feels of the wild west and the ills of Western expansion! Great poem! Instant fave! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ–คโค๏ธ๐Ÿ–ค

November 22nd, 2024 08:38



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