Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Riddle
David Wakeling said:
This one is well written.I must say it is a riddle.It has a number of interpretations.For me it is life through the looking glass.Alice in wonderland
January 12th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
This one is well written.I must say it is a riddle.It has a number of interpretations.For me it is life through the looking glass.Alice in wonderland
January 12th, 2025 04:49
Riddle
LP2187 said:
A really good poem about (I think) reality and perception through a mirror, I enjoyed reading!
January 12th, 2025 04:09
LP2187 said:
A really good poem about (I think) reality and perception through a mirror, I enjoyed reading!
January 12th, 2025 04:09
Flies buzz
Neville said:
When its dead and gone, it might not be as quiet or quite as it seems .. there\'s always likely to be a certain amount of residual buzzing to contend with .. methinks .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:26
Neville said:
When its dead and gone, it might not be as quiet or quite as it seems .. there\'s always likely to be a certain amount of residual buzzing to contend with .. methinks .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:26
Flies buzz
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but that love will always be there untarnished.
Andy
January 12th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but that love will always be there untarnished.
Andy
January 12th, 2025 02:23
The muse\'s dirge
NafisaSB said:
i think the muse is very much alive in you - keep it strong and safe
happy musing, and composing
January 12th, 2025 01:23
NafisaSB said:
i think the muse is very much alive in you - keep it strong and safe
happy musing, and composing
January 12th, 2025 01:23
Flies buzz
NafisaSB said:
images of past love come creeping up to us at the oddest ties - loved the way you have composed this - keepitup
January 12th, 2025 01:22
NafisaSB said:
images of past love come creeping up to us at the oddest ties - loved the way you have composed this - keepitup
January 12th, 2025 01:22
Flies buzz
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
mind blowing imagery!! 😳
Really captured
the readers attention!!🤩
Thanks for sharing
love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
mind blowing imagery!! 😳
Really captured
the readers attention!!🤩
Thanks for sharing
love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:43
Flies buzz
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my Divorce. Death of love and fear.Powerful stuff.Some anger and sadness here.
January 11th, 2025 15:56
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my Divorce. Death of love and fear.Powerful stuff.Some anger and sadness here.
January 11th, 2025 15:56
Flies buzz
Friendship said:
your poem explores the haunting nature of lost love and the emotional aftermath of heartbreak.
January 11th, 2025 15:18
Friendship said:
your poem explores the haunting nature of lost love and the emotional aftermath of heartbreak.
January 11th, 2025 15:18
Flies buzz
Bella Shepard said:
I get a feeling of love buried, but not necessarily dead, waiting in the recesses of the mind like bothersome flies buzzing, giving no peace. Brilliantly versed!
January 11th, 2025 14:05
Bella Shepard said:
I get a feeling of love buried, but not necessarily dead, waiting in the recesses of the mind like bothersome flies buzzing, giving no peace. Brilliantly versed!
January 11th, 2025 14:05
Flies buzz
NinjaGirl said:
This is lovely, such a powerful insight. Rot becomes perfume, and where there was once love, there is hate. So beautiful!
January 11th, 2025 14:02
NinjaGirl said:
This is lovely, such a powerful insight. Rot becomes perfume, and where there was once love, there is hate. So beautiful!
January 11th, 2025 14:02
What happened to beauty?
gray0328 said:
We toss things out just to get something new when the things we toss still have beauty. Enjoyed it Soren
January 11th, 2025 14:01
gray0328 said:
We toss things out just to get something new when the things we toss still have beauty. Enjoyed it Soren
January 11th, 2025 14:01
Flies buzz
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
Flies buzz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Flies buzz
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
Flies buzz
arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
Flies buzz
Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
Flies buzz
Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Flies buzz
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
Flies buzz
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve included some more recipe ideas for foods for me to give to KP! lol
January 11th, 2025 04:24
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve included some more recipe ideas for foods for me to give to KP! lol
January 11th, 2025 04:24
What happened to beauty?
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is still out there soren but not many people look for it nowadays, I do though.
Andy
January 11th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is still out there soren but not many people look for it nowadays, I do though.
Andy
January 11th, 2025 02:53
What happened to beauty?
Dan Williams said:
\"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective. The eye of too many beholders is behind blinders. Noce work.
January 11th, 2025 01:31
Dan Williams said:
\"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective. The eye of too many beholders is behind blinders. Noce work.
January 11th, 2025 01:31
What happened to beauty?
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, true beauty in
this world 🌎 today
Seems to be just
throw away.. 😢
Powerful penning
my friend!! ,💯👌
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 22:51
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, true beauty in
this world 🌎 today
Seems to be just
throw away.. 😢
Powerful penning
my friend!! ,💯👌
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 22:51
What happened to beauty?
David Wakeling said:
This is a honest and sad commentary on modern life.Where is the Beauty indeed. Well written
January 10th, 2025 15:28
David Wakeling said:
This is a honest and sad commentary on modern life.Where is the Beauty indeed. Well written
January 10th, 2025 15:28
What happened to beauty?
Bella Shepard said:
As we have become creatures of consumption, everything must be disposable or have a shelf life. You rightly ask the question \"What happened to beauty\"? I fear we have lost a true appreciation of it, for what we call beautiful today is nothing at all. Bravo!!
January 10th, 2025 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
As we have become creatures of consumption, everything must be disposable or have a shelf life. You rightly ask the question \"What happened to beauty\"? I fear we have lost a true appreciation of it, for what we call beautiful today is nothing at all. Bravo!!
January 10th, 2025 10:54
The muse\'s dirge
Tom Dylan said:
A great piece, Soren. Some cracking lines. The image of poems pouring through cracks in the floor. Just fantastic.
January 10th, 2025 10:36
Tom Dylan said:
A great piece, Soren. Some cracking lines. The image of poems pouring through cracks in the floor. Just fantastic.
January 10th, 2025 10:36
What happened to beauty?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title poses a great question and the poem delivers quite the societal critique. Nothing is lasting and the trivial seems to be all that is valued in this topsy turvy world. Great poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title poses a great question and the poem delivers quite the societal critique. Nothing is lasting and the trivial seems to be all that is valued in this topsy turvy world. Great poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:27
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