Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Within a hair
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Good stuff.

April 25th, 2025 11:23

Within a hair
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write SB. I tried the Jesus reference on Linda once. Didn\'t work. She said when you can walk on water you can have a beard.

April 25th, 2025 08:20

Blinded by the light
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:

This is one of the most powerful poems I\'ve ever read. You have a real talent of capturing emotions in your writing 💖

April 25th, 2025 08:13

Within a hair
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful poem that, as I read it, is sending the message that each of us are unique...and should be comfortable in our own \"beards\" so-to-speak. Really enjoyed. A fave from me. 🧔‍♂️ 🌹👏

April 25th, 2025 08:12

Child innocence
Thoughtless said:

A complaint about every new technology. However, social media may be a successful villain.

April 25th, 2025 07:43

Within a hair
Tony Grannell said:

Bearded and moustachioed myself, I have no choice but to agree wholeheartedly with your poem - haha! A well groomed passage of poetry with a gem of an ending.

All the best,
Tony.

April 25th, 2025 07:40

Within a hair
orchidee said:

The 3 little pigs story - the hair of my chinny chin chin! lol.

April 25th, 2025 07:22

Hard Words
John Prophet said:

Great piece of writing
John

April 25th, 2025 06:53

Within a hair
David Wakeling said:

Nothing wrong with a beard. Keeps you warm in winter. Interesting poem

April 25th, 2025 05:19

What\'s in a name
dimpy said:

excellent...

April 25th, 2025 03:39

Within a hair
arqios said:

My reading of this today takes me to the thought of conscientious living through decades being true to self as hair takes time to grow and requires maintenance to keep it durable for years and may even crown our appearance 🙏🏻🕊️

April 25th, 2025 03:16

Within a hair
Teddy.15 said:

We are each different and unique none better than the other, I love the message in this dearest sorrenbarret, we should all learn to just live in a place within ourselves and on the outer shell that brings us peace acceptance and pride. 🌹

April 25th, 2025 03:13

Hard Words
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we must not harm anybody soren, life is good.

Andy

April 25th, 2025 01:07

Hard Words
Tony Grannell said:

How often and unbeknown, we as passersby damage our natural surroundings, be it, discarded litter, a trodden bloom or a skimming stone taking down a bird on the wing as you metaphorically impress in another excellent poem by your good self. From ripples to waves the damage is done. A fine, fine poem indeed.

Kind regards,
Tony.

April 24th, 2025 14:31

Hard Words
Muse of Calliope said:

You always take the time to leave such thoughtful comments and I just want to say I appreciate your contributions here; such a beautiful poem too.

April 24th, 2025 14:27

Hard Words
orchidee said:

KP gets her own back. She says \'People in glass houses shouldn\'t throw stones\'. But she throws them at me when I\'m in the greenhouse - cos I give her sewage stew for lunch. LOL.

April 24th, 2025 10:56

Hard Words
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Words have the power to bring life or destroy it. A powerful metaphor that really needs to further analysis. It speaks for itself. Brilliant. A fave from me. 🌹👏

April 24th, 2025 09:08

Hard Words
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:

Heartfelt read. Well written, great!

April 24th, 2025 06:15

Hard Words
MDStone said:

As the old saying goes, “sticks and stones”… ah but they can hurt us and they do. And we in the carelessness of our own whims sometimes leave a mark or end a “life” as we knew it. Perfectly tucked into metaphorical language and a skillfully crafted image. My thoughts like ripples across my brain. Thank you, as always for sharing your gift of words with us.

April 24th, 2025 05:25

Hard Words
David Wakeling said:

This is well constructed as always.Sad about the bird but hey that\'s life.Clever poem

April 24th, 2025 05:11

Hard Words
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and their unintended consequences. The imagery of skipping stones creating ripples mirrors how even small choices can have far-reaching effects—sometimes harming the fragile beauty around us.

April 24th, 2025 04:52

Hard Words
Teddy.15 said:

I could never write a metaphor as masterful as you dearest sorrenbarret, I have never had a poetry book truly published into a book and I often wonder what would people say, how would it be perceived? For some the fact of the matter is we write for ourselves and we shouldn\'t walk on egg shells in case we offend, there really is nothing or no one to offend, however if the reader sees otherwise that is in fact the problem only of the reader. Your work has kept me coming back to read more for a very long time, at the moment I am reading a lot of Sylvia Plath, who in some very strange ways reminds me of me, and inspires my latest writing. Never stop being you and never stop writing your masterpiece\'s of stunning poetry. 🌹

April 24th, 2025 04:07

What\'s in a name
Goldfinch60 said:

Bliss overcomes all ills in our lives soren.

Andy

April 24th, 2025 01:13

What\'s in a name
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

April 23rd, 2025 22:33

What\'s in a name
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

You piece words together so effortlessly. Bringing to life a beautiful rhythm and again; a favorite 🤩

April 23rd, 2025 13:48

What\'s in a name
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 23rd, 2025 11:23

What\'s in a name
Teddy.15 said:

Exquisite imagery and poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 stunning

April 23rd, 2025 09:07

What\'s in a name
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! This poem is both playful and rich with philosophical reflection—like a modern parable cloaked in wordplay and floral metaphor. And subversive, too! Chastity found in an orgy, Peace adored through hedonistic convergence, and Bliss remaining untouched by it all. Brilliant, Soren. Seriously. You flip norms on their head, challenging those who cling to them. Compassion, peace, and bliss—these cannot be confined by our rigid frameworks. Bravo! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.

April 23rd, 2025 07:14

What\'s in a name
arqios said:

I had a friend once, several in fact, during the nascent days of online poetry. We were friends and comrades without the aid of offline acquaintance- hence we grew intimate in our words and essence even as we had masqueraded behind avatars, nom de plume and internet “anonymity.” 🕊🙏🏻

April 23rd, 2025 06:09

What\'s in a name
David Wakeling said:

What an amazing poem. All the great states of mind: Love Passion Charity Compassion Peace and Diversity.All woven into the old question What is in a name.I
think just about everything is in these names.Well done

April 23rd, 2025 05:35



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