Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The forge
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice Soren. I would change \'extacy\' to ecstasy.\'
May 31st, 2025 11:20
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice Soren. I would change \'extacy\' to ecstasy.\'
May 31st, 2025 11:20
Recognition
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I cannot imagine any poet not getting this. This is a wonderful write, one of which I definitely relate to. Observers, aren\'t we all? 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I cannot imagine any poet not getting this. This is a wonderful write, one of which I definitely relate to. Observers, aren\'t we all? 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:29
Recognition
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I walked so far but there is so little I know\" - Good of you to give us the rest, Soren.... thoroughly appreciated.
May 31st, 2025 07:25
Doggerel Dave said:
\"I walked so far but there is so little I know\" - Good of you to give us the rest, Soren.... thoroughly appreciated.
May 31st, 2025 07:25
Recognition
Salvia.S said:
This is a very beautiful piece of writing with vivid & evocative imagery, capturing the essence of - seasonal transitions, nature\'s beauty, life cycles & ephemeral joy. Very well written 🌹
May 31st, 2025 05:52
Salvia.S said:
This is a very beautiful piece of writing with vivid & evocative imagery, capturing the essence of - seasonal transitions, nature\'s beauty, life cycles & ephemeral joy. Very well written 🌹
May 31st, 2025 05:52
Recognition
Poetic Licence said:
I am always staggered by how little I actually know in relation to others, but one thing I do know is arrogance is not a nice quality, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
I am always staggered by how little I actually know in relation to others, but one thing I do know is arrogance is not a nice quality, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 05:45
Recognition
Soman Ragavan said:
\"there is so little I know...\" We think we have seen a lot, we have gone through a lot. Still, life surprises us everyday. We get surprises even at home, even from people we have known for years... Life is full of surprises. In fact, the signs were always there, it is just that we did not notice, we did not know where to look.
May 31st, 2025 04:19
Soman Ragavan said:
\"there is so little I know...\" We think we have seen a lot, we have gone through a lot. Still, life surprises us everyday. We get surprises even at home, even from people we have known for years... Life is full of surprises. In fact, the signs were always there, it is just that we did not notice, we did not know where to look.
May 31st, 2025 04:19
Recognition
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Packed with powerful imagery. Mingling each moment to get a poem written and a Life lived. An enjoyable read
May 31st, 2025 04:01
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Packed with powerful imagery. Mingling each moment to get a poem written and a Life lived. An enjoyable read
May 31st, 2025 04:01
The forge
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes have to destroy something to save it, eh?
May 31st, 2025 01:06
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes have to destroy something to save it, eh?
May 31st, 2025 01:06
Good taste
spilleronsheet said:
Dark humour I must say…but I ended up enjoying especially the last line, the dental floss😂
May 31st, 2025 00:20
spilleronsheet said:
Dark humour I must say…but I ended up enjoying especially the last line, the dental floss😂
May 31st, 2025 00:20
Dance with the wind
rrodriguez said:
This is so alive, so rhythmic! So full of energy. It paints wind as a force of motion and freedom. I love to feel the wind. I live next to the mountains, and the wind is so wonderful. This is excellent! I enjoy reading about the wind.
May 30th, 2025 20:08
rrodriguez said:
This is so alive, so rhythmic! So full of energy. It paints wind as a force of motion and freedom. I love to feel the wind. I live next to the mountains, and the wind is so wonderful. This is excellent! I enjoy reading about the wind.
May 30th, 2025 20:08
Just old
Keeter C said:
My best friend is of an age I will never get.
Birthed she did but did she ever regret?
In old age I try to make amends as much as I am able.
May 30th, 2025 17:22
Keeter C said:
My best friend is of an age I will never get.
Birthed she did but did she ever regret?
In old age I try to make amends as much as I am able.
May 30th, 2025 17:22
The forge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I so get this. A Shamanic rite, passage through fire 🔥 Purged. Purified. Transformed. Brilliant poem that can be taken many different ways. Still, its magic is potent! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 30th, 2025 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I so get this. A Shamanic rite, passage through fire 🔥 Purged. Purified. Transformed. Brilliant poem that can be taken many different ways. Still, its magic is potent! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 30th, 2025 16:21
The forge
Salvia.S said:
This is intense and beautifully raw. It captures the pain and power of transformation with striking imagery and emotion. A fave 🌹
May 30th, 2025 09:57
Salvia.S said:
This is intense and beautifully raw. It captures the pain and power of transformation with striking imagery and emotion. A fave 🌹
May 30th, 2025 09:57
The forge
Poetic Licence said:
My sense is being consumed by passion thinking it is love and it\'s not, leaving you badly burned and scared, I can see there are possibles, very enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
My sense is being consumed by passion thinking it is love and it\'s not, leaving you badly burned and scared, I can see there are possibles, very enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 06:27
Pebbles
Soman Ragavan said:
We will notice the fleetingness of the following :
--melting snowman
--burning log
--eaten meal
--sand castle washed away
--ice sculpture melted
-- a song sung, with the echoes lost
The metaphor of the pebble skipping on water is an intriguing one. You drop the pebble vertically and it sinks. You flip it horizontally and it skips over the water for some time, bounding over, but it will finally sink. The ripples that arise will disappear.
Many scenes of fleetingness.
Poets seek immortality through their works.
“(On GAUTHIER). In a world in which everything is impermanent, the poet, by rearranging reality into art, can create something that will have more permanent value. ...... Art can thus provide the poet with a solace for his mortality while he is alive and the hope of immortality in death….” \"TWELVE FRENCH POETS. 1820-1900. AN ANTHOLOGY OF 19TH CENTURY FRENCH POETRY.\" London : Longmans, Green and Co., 1957. (Third impression, 1959). (With an Introduction and Notes by Douglas Parmée). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
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May 30th, 2025 05:48
Soman Ragavan said:
We will notice the fleetingness of the following :
--melting snowman
--burning log
--eaten meal
--sand castle washed away
--ice sculpture melted
-- a song sung, with the echoes lost
The metaphor of the pebble skipping on water is an intriguing one. You drop the pebble vertically and it sinks. You flip it horizontally and it skips over the water for some time, bounding over, but it will finally sink. The ripples that arise will disappear.
Many scenes of fleetingness.
Poets seek immortality through their works.
“(On GAUTHIER). In a world in which everything is impermanent, the poet, by rearranging reality into art, can create something that will have more permanent value. ...... Art can thus provide the poet with a solace for his mortality while he is alive and the hope of immortality in death….” \"TWELVE FRENCH POETS. 1820-1900. AN ANTHOLOGY OF 19TH CENTURY FRENCH POETRY.\" London : Longmans, Green and Co., 1957. (Third impression, 1959). (With an Introduction and Notes by Douglas Parmée). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
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May 30th, 2025 05:48
The forge
David Wakeling said:
This is a fascinating piece. It can be taken in many different ways. For me its about Passion and the effect on the human condition. Made me think. Well done compadre
May 30th, 2025 04:02
David Wakeling said:
This is a fascinating piece. It can be taken in many different ways. For me its about Passion and the effect on the human condition. Made me think. Well done compadre
May 30th, 2025 04:02
Dance with the wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on dancing soren, life is full of music to dance to.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on dancing soren, life is full of music to dance to.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:21
Dance with the wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the wind and love to dance. Love this metaphor even more...though this could just be taken literally too. I\'ve witnessed such days around a clothes line. And guess whose childhood butt had to go pick the pins up? 🤣 Excellent job, Soren! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the wind and love to dance. Love this metaphor even more...though this could just be taken literally too. I\'ve witnessed such days around a clothes line. And guess whose childhood butt had to go pick the pins up? 🤣 Excellent job, Soren! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:37
Redemption in deception
Kevin Hulme said:
Nothing wrong in bending the Truth to protect feelings. Well Said.
May 29th, 2025 18:58
Kevin Hulme said:
Nothing wrong in bending the Truth to protect feelings. Well Said.
May 29th, 2025 18:58
Dance with the wind
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - a lot like that......................................................................!
May 29th, 2025 09:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - a lot like that......................................................................!
May 29th, 2025 09:02
Just old
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - a little bit like that....................................................................!
May 29th, 2025 08:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - a little bit like that....................................................................!
May 29th, 2025 08:39
Dance with the wind
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape you shared with us, sir. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you so much. Greetings.
May 29th, 2025 08:28
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape you shared with us, sir. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you so much. Greetings.
May 29th, 2025 08:28
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