Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fear
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem revolves around the overwhelming sensation of fear and anxiety. It depicts the paralyzing effect of fear that looms over time, creating a sense of impending doom and dread. Your poem focuses on the internal struggle with fear, how it manifests physically and emotionally, and the desire to avoid confronting the reality that fuels this fear, which I know so well. Yet there\'s nobody there to help or understand you. you\'re alone with all these fears in a dark box Feeling so hopeless alone and most of all Broken!
February 19th, 2025 12:29
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem revolves around the overwhelming sensation of fear and anxiety. It depicts the paralyzing effect of fear that looms over time, creating a sense of impending doom and dread. Your poem focuses on the internal struggle with fear, how it manifests physically and emotionally, and the desire to avoid confronting the reality that fuels this fear, which I know so well. Yet there\'s nobody there to help or understand you. you\'re alone with all these fears in a dark box Feeling so hopeless alone and most of all Broken!
February 19th, 2025 12:29
Divine waste
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
Missing You
Friendship said:
Your Poem seems to have theme of disconnection and the unpredictability of emotions.to me how one becomes a Ghost.
February 19th, 2025 10:10
Friendship said:
Your Poem seems to have theme of disconnection and the unpredictability of emotions.to me how one becomes a Ghost.
February 19th, 2025 10:10
Relics of the lost
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
Where it all began
Friendship said:
Very well written,Soren,as a person myself that grow up on water,Your poem can be interpreted as a reflection on humanity\'s relationship with the sea, exploring both its nurturing and destructive aspects. The imagery evokes a timeless quality, suggesting a connection to ancient myths and the origins of life. The overall tone indicates a reverence for nature, urging a person to contemplate their place within this vast, interconnected ecosystem.
February 19th, 2025 09:06
Friendship said:
Very well written,Soren,as a person myself that grow up on water,Your poem can be interpreted as a reflection on humanity\'s relationship with the sea, exploring both its nurturing and destructive aspects. The imagery evokes a timeless quality, suggesting a connection to ancient myths and the origins of life. The overall tone indicates a reverence for nature, urging a person to contemplate their place within this vast, interconnected ecosystem.
February 19th, 2025 09:06
In dreams
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem seeks to articulate the complex emotions surrounding loss and the difficulty of holding onto joyful memories, the bittersweet reality of memories that fade over time.it is what it is.
February 19th, 2025 08:55
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem seeks to articulate the complex emotions surrounding loss and the difficulty of holding onto joyful memories, the bittersweet reality of memories that fade over time.it is what it is.
February 19th, 2025 08:55
Divine waste
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Divine waste
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
Divine waste
arqios said:
Once the poet’s tears were salt off the Earth… these days the value appear to have dropped almost like a stock market crash.. and still we weep…
February 19th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Once the poet’s tears were salt off the Earth… these days the value appear to have dropped almost like a stock market crash.. and still we weep…
February 19th, 2025 05:39
Divine waste
David Wakeling said:
Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I enjoyed reading
February 19th, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I enjoyed reading
February 19th, 2025 05:20
Divine waste
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful and it\'s a kudos from me. 🌹
February 19th, 2025 05:14
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful and it\'s a kudos from me. 🌹
February 19th, 2025 05:14
Relics of the lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrows dawn will bring the light for those memories to be remembered soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Tomorrows dawn will bring the light for those memories to be remembered soren.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:49
Relics of the lost
Neville said:
There is so much here to ponder and dwell on .. but for me, perhaps the most encouraging and enlightening thing is that so many of us who write on a regular basis imagine the same and such similar things and variously weave them into our daily offerings.. Note to self go check on box of loose photos asap .. N
February 18th, 2025 14:09
Neville said:
There is so much here to ponder and dwell on .. but for me, perhaps the most encouraging and enlightening thing is that so many of us who write on a regular basis imagine the same and such similar things and variously weave them into our daily offerings.. Note to self go check on box of loose photos asap .. N
February 18th, 2025 14:09
Record Player
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You bring the music to life. I miss records. Excellent.
February 18th, 2025 11:34
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You bring the music to life. I miss records. Excellent.
February 18th, 2025 11:34
Relics of the lost
aDarkerMind said:
as good as you have ever written Soren.
in the mist of the eye the world dissolves.....
every line took me.
another to favour my friend.
February 18th, 2025 10:34
aDarkerMind said:
as good as you have ever written Soren.
in the mist of the eye the world dissolves.....
every line took me.
another to favour my friend.
February 18th, 2025 10:34
Relics of the lost
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful, nostalgic, and thought-provoking poetry. Well written!
February 18th, 2025 08:31
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful, nostalgic, and thought-provoking poetry. Well written!
February 18th, 2025 08:31
Not to be confused
whats write for me said:
There is a longing that is palpable in this, perhaps to hear the voices of those who have passed, to see their smile and feel their touch. Maybe a love that never was.
February 18th, 2025 08:03
whats write for me said:
There is a longing that is palpable in this, perhaps to hear the voices of those who have passed, to see their smile and feel their touch. Maybe a love that never was.
February 18th, 2025 08:03
Relics of the lost
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Can I put KP in a dusty drawer - or cupboard - and throw away the key?! lol
February 18th, 2025 06:05
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Can I put KP in a dusty drawer - or cupboard - and throw away the key?! lol
February 18th, 2025 06:05
Relics of the lost
Teddy.15 said:
Where only the mind has the key, how very poetic and a beautiful creative way to say it, ah, the mind, each and everyone unique and as a population world wide there\'s quite a few. I think there is an infinity of things to learn about the mind, and we each have to embrace our own, but we must also consider others, up most beauty in this. 🌹 Empathy compassion and self awareness it\'s all in here. 🌹
February 18th, 2025 06:03
Teddy.15 said:
Where only the mind has the key, how very poetic and a beautiful creative way to say it, ah, the mind, each and everyone unique and as a population world wide there\'s quite a few. I think there is an infinity of things to learn about the mind, and we each have to embrace our own, but we must also consider others, up most beauty in this. 🌹 Empathy compassion and self awareness it\'s all in here. 🌹
February 18th, 2025 06:03
Relics of the lost
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes there are so many relics tucked away we can\'t find all the keys, some great lines in this enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes there are so many relics tucked away we can\'t find all the keys, some great lines in this enjoyable read
February 18th, 2025 05:25
Relics of the lost
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. So poetic and filled with inspiring lines. Very enjoyable to read.
February 18th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful. So poetic and filled with inspiring lines. Very enjoyable to read.
February 18th, 2025 05:21
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