Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little armor
Aman 12 said:
A charming blend of fun facts and clever rhymes. I am amazed by the poems you write. This one was educational and entertaining.
September 10th, 2025 09:59
Aman 12 said:
A charming blend of fun facts and clever rhymes. I am amazed by the poems you write. This one was educational and entertaining.
September 10th, 2025 09:59
To spill one\'s guts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in every line. The finale with the poet’s bowels turned out hits like a confession carved in blood. Seriously loved that ending! Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in every line. The finale with the poet’s bowels turned out hits like a confession carved in blood. Seriously loved that ending! Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:34
Flowering tree
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Nature is peculiar in that nothing lasts forever and yet it\'s always there and as always in its four poetic forms - the seasons, especially so, your peach tree. A lovely poem of life, death and rebirth. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 10th, 2025 08:41
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Nature is peculiar in that nothing lasts forever and yet it\'s always there and as always in its four poetic forms - the seasons, especially so, your peach tree. A lovely poem of life, death and rebirth. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 10th, 2025 08:41
To spill one\'s guts
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some great lines, Soren. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2025 06:06
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write with some great lines, Soren. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2025 06:06
Flowering tree
cellinic said:
Spectacular imagery and impressive line of associations! Best wishes,
September 10th, 2025 04:05
cellinic said:
Spectacular imagery and impressive line of associations! Best wishes,
September 10th, 2025 04:05
To spill one\'s guts
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, showing poems come from everywhere.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, showing poems come from everywhere.
Andy
September 10th, 2025 00:52
To spill one\'s guts
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! There is sometimes just such a strong burning to tell someone, anyone, what we think and feel.
September 9th, 2025 19:49
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! There is sometimes just such a strong burning to tell someone, anyone, what we think and feel.
September 9th, 2025 19:49
To spill one\'s guts
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , a powerful way of explaining the process of writing a poem.
Nice one.
September 9th, 2025 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , a powerful way of explaining the process of writing a poem.
Nice one.
September 9th, 2025 18:45
Fear myths of the unknown
Sami Mulaj said:
A wonderful poem, one that will remain indelibly etched in your mind!
September 9th, 2025 12:06
Sami Mulaj said:
A wonderful poem, one that will remain indelibly etched in your mind!
September 9th, 2025 12:06
To spill one\'s guts
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
A poet\'s art laid bare in three powerful stanzas. Skin, bone and innards without apology as the truth demands. Excellent, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 11:00
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
A poet\'s art laid bare in three powerful stanzas. Skin, bone and innards without apology as the truth demands. Excellent, truly.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 11:00
To spill one\'s guts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
September 9th, 2025 10:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
September 9th, 2025 10:57
Father, God, nation
Keeter C said:
Let’s hope he leads into battle, woe the day we go it alone. Very nice.
September 9th, 2025 09:05
Keeter C said:
Let’s hope he leads into battle, woe the day we go it alone. Very nice.
September 9th, 2025 09:05
To spill one\'s guts
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"\"Allegories painted on the edge of time\". Memorable work👍👋
September 9th, 2025 08:47
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"\"Allegories painted on the edge of time\". Memorable work👍👋
September 9th, 2025 08:47
To spill one\'s guts
2781 said:
Reminds me of that scripture-
But I say unto you, That every idle word that men shall speak, they shall give account thereof in the day of judgement.
September 9th, 2025 08:33
2781 said:
Reminds me of that scripture-
But I say unto you, That every idle word that men shall speak, they shall give account thereof in the day of judgement.
September 9th, 2025 08:33
To spill one\'s guts
Friendship said:
Well said, this poem explores the tumultuous relationship between creativity and madness, emphasizing how deep emotional experiences and existential struggles can lead to profound artistic expression. It suggests that truth often arises from pain and conflict, and that the act of writing poetry is a visceral and transformative process.
September 9th, 2025 08:22
Friendship said:
Well said, this poem explores the tumultuous relationship between creativity and madness, emphasizing how deep emotional experiences and existential struggles can lead to profound artistic expression. It suggests that truth often arises from pain and conflict, and that the act of writing poetry is a visceral and transformative process.
September 9th, 2025 08:22
To spill one\'s guts
Teddy.15 said:
Some what hard to chew some of your imagery today 🤣 what an excellent piece. Every poets truth. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
Some what hard to chew some of your imagery today 🤣 what an excellent piece. Every poets truth. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 05:16
No worries
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren and they can be very true but not in my case with my Mary.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren and they can be very true but not in my case with my Mary.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:16
No worries
Keeter C said:
Words of humor and wisdom why is it I continually fly too high or to close to the flame. Never understanding which is my lane or the league in which I belong.
A very fun read and nicely done!
September 8th, 2025 23:30
Keeter C said:
Words of humor and wisdom why is it I continually fly too high or to close to the flame. Never understanding which is my lane or the league in which I belong.
A very fun read and nicely done!
September 8th, 2025 23:30
No worries
Kevin Hulme said:
I think it was Serge Gainsourg who said \' Ugly is better than Beauty because it\'s does not fade\' .
All in all a fine Poem.
September 8th, 2025 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
I think it was Serge Gainsourg who said \' Ugly is better than Beauty because it\'s does not fade\' .
All in all a fine Poem.
September 8th, 2025 18:47
No worries
NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha maybe I will end up in a relationship by this logic! =D in all silliness, there is some truth to this, but I\'m not sure I totally agree
September 8th, 2025 18:43
NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha maybe I will end up in a relationship by this logic! =D in all silliness, there is some truth to this, but I\'m not sure I totally agree
September 8th, 2025 18:43
Night spells
A Boy With Roses said:
\"Molding reality into metaphors\" is cool but \"hospitality in brutality\" takes the damn cake! Nice rhythm and mouthfuls of words!
September 8th, 2025 16:02
A Boy With Roses said:
\"Molding reality into metaphors\" is cool but \"hospitality in brutality\" takes the damn cake! Nice rhythm and mouthfuls of words!
September 8th, 2025 16:02
No worries
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem has a sharp, satirical edge, it plays with irony while touching on themes of insecurity, relationships, and social judgment. Love the Rhyme of life / wife gives it a catchy, memorable sound.
Paradox / Irony; It suggests happiness comes from marrying someone society might consider “undesirable,” which flips expectations. Satire is humorously critiques shallow standards of attraction and relationship insecurity. Honestly shocking, but nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:03
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem has a sharp, satirical edge, it plays with irony while touching on themes of insecurity, relationships, and social judgment. Love the Rhyme of life / wife gives it a catchy, memorable sound.
Paradox / Irony; It suggests happiness comes from marrying someone society might consider “undesirable,” which flips expectations. Satire is humorously critiques shallow standards of attraction and relationship insecurity. Honestly shocking, but nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 12:03
No worries
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh this is fabulous a chuckle moment with an incredibly wise ending, I can\'t help but love the first stanza your language is hilarious, but actually it is throughout 😁 🤣 yes we seem to always be close in though 🤔
September 8th, 2025 07:59
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh this is fabulous a chuckle moment with an incredibly wise ending, I can\'t help but love the first stanza your language is hilarious, but actually it is throughout 😁 🤣 yes we seem to always be close in though 🤔
September 8th, 2025 07:59
No worries
orchidee said:
Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:38
orchidee said:
Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:38
No worries
Priya Tomar said:
Nice poem ...
Good poem on a happy relationship
But women worship bravery, and she loves a powerful man and a man wants beauty....
September 8th, 2025 07:21
Priya Tomar said:
Nice poem ...
Good poem on a happy relationship
But women worship bravery, and she loves a powerful man and a man wants beauty....
September 8th, 2025 07:21
No worries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut sharp, mocking how love gets twisted into status and appearance. That closing turn sticks hard—dark, witty, and honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Truthfully, the script could be flipped to men picking the \"right\" woman. Either way, the satire works and if it rubs a few the wrong way...so be it. That\'s what satire is for! A must fave from me.
September 8th, 2025 07:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut sharp, mocking how love gets twisted into status and appearance. That closing turn sticks hard—dark, witty, and honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Truthfully, the script could be flipped to men picking the \"right\" woman. Either way, the satire works and if it rubs a few the wrong way...so be it. That\'s what satire is for! A must fave from me.
September 8th, 2025 07:06
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