Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Crazy sonnet
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello, your sense of internal rhythmic structure is excellent and you weave a compelling narrative whilst maintaining the cadence and stocatto of your rhyme. Well done on a macabre and interesting piece of poetic work, Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:20
ElizabethMoroz said:
Hello, your sense of internal rhythmic structure is excellent and you weave a compelling narrative whilst maintaining the cadence and stocatto of your rhyme. Well done on a macabre and interesting piece of poetic work, Sincerely, Elizabeth Moroz
July 14th, 2025 04:20
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Goldfinch60 said:
This is all our experience in life soren and you cannot teach experience.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
This is all our experience in life soren and you cannot teach experience.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:22
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Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said my friend, the gift of giving returns to us a hundred fold. Thank you for this lovely contemplation!
July 13th, 2025 14:45
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said my friend, the gift of giving returns to us a hundred fold. Thank you for this lovely contemplation!
July 13th, 2025 14:45
Probability
RSM0812 said:
Light at the end of a dark tunnel. Good will always win. I really liked this poem. Thank you for commenting on my work also.
July 13th, 2025 12:22
RSM0812 said:
Light at the end of a dark tunnel. Good will always win. I really liked this poem. Thank you for commenting on my work also.
July 13th, 2025 12:22
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Salvia.S š¹ said:
Beautifully captures the quiet pain of loss and the deep meaning behind giving of oneself. It\'s heartfelt, reflective, and leaves a lasting impression. Very well written!!!!
July 13th, 2025 10:28
Salvia.S š¹ said:
Beautifully captures the quiet pain of loss and the deep meaning behind giving of oneself. It\'s heartfelt, reflective, and leaves a lasting impression. Very well written!!!!
July 13th, 2025 10:28
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Tony Grannell said:
The sacrifices of life, be they large or small so that others may possess and benefit from that which offered, be that at the expense, pain or a gift of the benefactor. It\'s the kindness and the essence therein that is humanity. Of those who have lost, that is, out of kindness have been found in the rewards of the recipients. A wonderful poem in all. Composed with insight and compassion. Very well done, Soren.
All the very best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 10:19
Tony Grannell said:
The sacrifices of life, be they large or small so that others may possess and benefit from that which offered, be that at the expense, pain or a gift of the benefactor. It\'s the kindness and the essence therein that is humanity. Of those who have lost, that is, out of kindness have been found in the rewards of the recipients. A wonderful poem in all. Composed with insight and compassion. Very well done, Soren.
All the very best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 10:19
I love roses
Priya Tomar said:
What a beautiful poetry, it seems metaphor of life from birth to death
July 13th, 2025 09:03
Priya Tomar said:
What a beautiful poetry, it seems metaphor of life from birth to death
July 13th, 2025 09:03
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully said, Soren. Thereās something deeply human in the way you frame loss...not just as suffering, but as offering. That final line especially struck meā¦giving our best piece so that it endures. Quietly profound, my friend. Thank you for this. š¹š
July 13th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully said, Soren. Thereās something deeply human in the way you frame loss...not just as suffering, but as offering. That final line especially struck meā¦giving our best piece so that it endures. Quietly profound, my friend. Thank you for this. š¹š
July 13th, 2025 08:15
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Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion of loss and the act of giving oneself to others. It reflects on the pieces of ourselves that we lose over timeāwhether through experiences, relationships, or the passage of timeāand how these lost fragments shape our identity. You emphasize the beauty and significance of sharing parts of ourselves with others, suggesting that the act of giving can lead to emotional fulfillment and connection. seeks to encourage readers to embrace the act of giving pieces of themselves to others, the poet suggesting that while we may lose parts of ourselves, the act of sharing can lead to deeper connections and a sense of purpose. It invites reflection on the beauty of vulnerability and the importance of cherishing the connections we make throughout life.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion of loss and the act of giving oneself to others. It reflects on the pieces of ourselves that we lose over timeāwhether through experiences, relationships, or the passage of timeāand how these lost fragments shape our identity. You emphasize the beauty and significance of sharing parts of ourselves with others, suggesting that the act of giving can lead to emotional fulfillment and connection. seeks to encourage readers to embrace the act of giving pieces of themselves to others, the poet suggesting that while we may lose parts of ourselves, the act of sharing can lead to deeper connections and a sense of purpose. It invites reflection on the beauty of vulnerability and the importance of cherishing the connections we make throughout life.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
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Poetic Licence said:
I have always got so much more pleasure out of giving than recieving, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
I have always got so much more pleasure out of giving than recieving, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 05:35
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Jeremy Leach said:
I really like this. A very thoughtful, and well crafted poem. Distilling ideas of giving and having bits taken, but it\'s far from superficial. Makes me introspect and think deeply. I personally think it never perishes because the act of giving ultimately brings greater reward.
July 13th, 2025 04:29
Jeremy Leach said:
I really like this. A very thoughtful, and well crafted poem. Distilling ideas of giving and having bits taken, but it\'s far from superficial. Makes me introspect and think deeply. I personally think it never perishes because the act of giving ultimately brings greater reward.
July 13th, 2025 04:29
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Caring dove said:
A good writing tho sad .. I think often we can have parts of ourselves that can feel very hurt / or yesh wounded .
I can sometimes feel like Iāve lost parts of me or that Iāve lost myself ( sad really
I like your words anyway especially the last lines about those parts we cherish
July 13th, 2025 04:28
Caring dove said:
A good writing tho sad .. I think often we can have parts of ourselves that can feel very hurt / or yesh wounded .
I can sometimes feel like Iāve lost parts of me or that Iāve lost myself ( sad really
I like your words anyway especially the last lines about those parts we cherish
July 13th, 2025 04:28
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David Wakeling said:
a wonderful sentiment. I have given away a few things in my life and the joy it brought others is far more important than the loss I might of had A clever and wise poem. I\'m learning something new every day. In fact this poem is a major gift to all
July 13th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
a wonderful sentiment. I have given away a few things in my life and the joy it brought others is far more important than the loss I might of had A clever and wise poem. I\'m learning something new every day. In fact this poem is a major gift to all
July 13th, 2025 04:25
Lost art
Jeremy Leach said:
Oh I like this a lot. Beautifully written and a very interesting subject. I think it\'s so true that memories get shaped over time, and I love the clay and bronze analogies. The shattering caught me off guard but so true. I\'ve had quite a few discussions about how the same people can see past events differently. Some remembering rose-tinted positives and some remembering negatives, with everyone defending their beliefs. Great write.
July 13th, 2025 04:12
Jeremy Leach said:
Oh I like this a lot. Beautifully written and a very interesting subject. I think it\'s so true that memories get shaped over time, and I love the clay and bronze analogies. The shattering caught me off guard but so true. I\'ve had quite a few discussions about how the same people can see past events differently. Some remembering rose-tinted positives and some remembering negatives, with everyone defending their beliefs. Great write.
July 13th, 2025 04:12
Probability
Goldfinch60 said:
Just follow the light soren and life will be highlighted.
Andy
July 13th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Just follow the light soren and life will be highlighted.
Andy
July 13th, 2025 01:44
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Bella Shepard said:
Time is perception, and perception is unique to each of us. The reality I think, is what we do with it. A very illuminating and thought provoking write!
July 12th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
Time is perception, and perception is unique to each of us. The reality I think, is what we do with it. A very illuminating and thought provoking write!
July 12th, 2025 12:19
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels like a meditation unfolding in layersātime slipping between perception and possibility. That closing movement especiallyā¦āno real, no dreamsā...it lingers. Thereās something eternal humming beneath these lines. Beautifully done, as always. š¹š A fave for sure.
July 12th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels like a meditation unfolding in layersātime slipping between perception and possibility. That closing movement especiallyā¦āno real, no dreamsā...it lingers. Thereās something eternal humming beneath these lines. Beautifully done, as always. š¹š A fave for sure.
July 12th, 2025 08:20
Probability
Lorenz said:
Time is this fluctuating probable of which our ego is the center .
July 12th, 2025 07:54
Lorenz said:
Time is this fluctuating probable of which our ego is the center .
July 12th, 2025 07:54
Probability
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, your poem explores the concept of time and existence, suggesting that reality is shaped by individual perception and desire. It posits that events are inevitable if one is patient, and that the journey through life is marked by a subjective experience of time. The poet is provoking thought about the nature of reality and time, encouraging readers to reflect on their own perceptions and experiences. It seeks to illuminate the idea that understanding and patience can lead to clarity and enlightenment in the face of life\'s uncertainties. { the nature of time!}
July 12th, 2025 06:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren, your poem explores the concept of time and existence, suggesting that reality is shaped by individual perception and desire. It posits that events are inevitable if one is patient, and that the journey through life is marked by a subjective experience of time. The poet is provoking thought about the nature of reality and time, encouraging readers to reflect on their own perceptions and experiences. It seeks to illuminate the idea that understanding and patience can lead to clarity and enlightenment in the face of life\'s uncertainties. { the nature of time!}
July 12th, 2025 06:34
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Poetic Licence said:
I get confused regarding time, some say time is a collection of stages and those stages continue even in afterlife, so effectively time never ends, then there are those who think we don\'t have enough time to do what we want before time runs out, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
I get confused regarding time, some say time is a collection of stages and those stages continue even in afterlife, so effectively time never ends, then there are those who think we don\'t have enough time to do what we want before time runs out, an interesting and enjoyable read
July 12th, 2025 05:45
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David Wakeling said:
I always wonder if we can really understand Time. Does it even exist? A interesting poem that made me think that it is just seeing.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:21
David Wakeling said:
I always wonder if we can really understand Time. Does it even exist? A interesting poem that made me think that it is just seeing.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:21
Not too smart
Goldfinch60 said:
Such bravery soren, so glad that you overcame the snake.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such bravery soren, so glad that you overcame the snake.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:15
Not too smart
David Wakeling said:
Just trying to survive. A snake will kill and have no guilt.A fascinating tale of survival here.To kill the snake you need to cut off its head.Well done
July 11th, 2025 19:26
David Wakeling said:
Just trying to survive. A snake will kill and have no guilt.A fascinating tale of survival here.To kill the snake you need to cut off its head.Well done
July 11th, 2025 19:26
Not too smart
Kevin Hulme said:
Here in England I can\'t imagine being attacked by a Rattlesnake.
Would being bothered by a Butterfly be of any use.
Good Write.
July 11th, 2025 18:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Here in England I can\'t imagine being attacked by a Rattlesnake.
Would being bothered by a Butterfly be of any use.
Good Write.
July 11th, 2025 18:26
Not too smart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaāthis was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way through. That final punchline landed perfectly. Grit, humor, and a dash of self-awareness. Totally you. Loved this! š¹š
July 11th, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaāthis was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way through. That final punchline landed perfectly. Grit, humor, and a dash of self-awareness. Totally you. Loved this! š¹š
July 11th, 2025 16:39
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