Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Visit with a dream
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich experience gained from a rich and varied life. Sounded richly authentic to me, Soren.
June 25th, 2025 08:07
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich experience gained from a rich and varied life. Sounded richly authentic to me, Soren.
June 25th, 2025 08:07
Visit with a dream
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of poetic fun in the voice of an American farm hand, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of poetic fun in the voice of an American farm hand, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 05:25
Visit with a dream
David Wakeling said:
Ah this was fun. Really fun accent sounds like Farm hands in America. great poem mi amigo
June 25th, 2025 04:12
David Wakeling said:
Ah this was fun. Really fun accent sounds like Farm hands in America. great poem mi amigo
June 25th, 2025 04:12
Be more
orchidee said:
I will have to leave KP out of all this! You think more of Fido than you do of me, she says to me. Yep, I reply! LOL.
June 24th, 2025 10:07
orchidee said:
I will have to leave KP out of all this! You think more of Fido than you do of me, she says to me. Yep, I reply! LOL.
June 24th, 2025 10:07
Be more
Poetic Licence said:
I am not of faith but I would of been happier being the above than the bible, as above are the components for humanity, not easy to adhere or abide by, but we and the world would bettet for it if we did, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
I am not of faith but I would of been happier being the above than the bible, as above are the components for humanity, not easy to adhere or abide by, but we and the world would bettet for it if we did, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 06:07
Be more
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is reminiscent of the Sermon on the Mount. So thoughtful and filled with wisdom. Made me think a lot. Well done.Amazing
June 24th, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is reminiscent of the Sermon on the Mount. So thoughtful and filled with wisdom. Made me think a lot. Well done.Amazing
June 24th, 2025 04:33
Redemption in deception
Precious Chukwudi said:
The honesty behind the lie, when done out of love is something we rarely talk about.
Really a wonderful piece.
June 24th, 2025 03:11
Precious Chukwudi said:
The honesty behind the lie, when done out of love is something we rarely talk about.
Really a wonderful piece.
June 24th, 2025 03:11
Is something there?
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can bring back memories of all types soren.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can bring back memories of all types soren.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:25
What a man is
NafisaSB said:
a thought provoking poem - what an honorable man who would throw away his riches and keep his word. i salute him and his kind
June 24th, 2025 01:17
NafisaSB said:
a thought provoking poem - what an honorable man who would throw away his riches and keep his word. i salute him and his kind
June 24th, 2025 01:17
Is something there?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Many of us come into this world being told that we were \"planned\", we can be anything we choose to be, that if you work hard you will be met with success, and that life will be overall beautiful. Yet, and this is a VERY BIG YET, most of those things cannot be known let alone guaranteed. Life is uncertain from conception on. No amount of it is guaranteed. We say we plan our children, yet our children do not turn out according to plan. So...as I see it...this poem is speaking to the uncertainty of life and yet we keep producing more life with complete certainty. Ironic at the least. Anyway, that is how this hit me first couple go-rounds, hope I am somewhere in the vicinity, but regardless, a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Many of us come into this world being told that we were \"planned\", we can be anything we choose to be, that if you work hard you will be met with success, and that life will be overall beautiful. Yet, and this is a VERY BIG YET, most of those things cannot be known let alone guaranteed. Life is uncertain from conception on. No amount of it is guaranteed. We say we plan our children, yet our children do not turn out according to plan. So...as I see it...this poem is speaking to the uncertainty of life and yet we keep producing more life with complete certainty. Ironic at the least. Anyway, that is how this hit me first couple go-rounds, hope I am somewhere in the vicinity, but regardless, a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:49
Is something there?
Poetic Licence said:
To me fears accumulated through life are arising and prepairing for the next journey and are looking for somewhere to reside, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
To me fears accumulated through life are arising and prepairing for the next journey and are looking for somewhere to reside, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:26
Is something there?
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting write, sorenbarrett. Still reading it.
June 23rd, 2025 05:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting write, sorenbarrett. Still reading it.
June 23rd, 2025 05:34
Is something there?
David Wakeling said:
It amazes me that people are not terrified by life considering the end and the troubles they have along the way.For me this poem explores the fear of the unknown and the horrors that might be around the corner. For me it is a very real journey into the darkness.Well done
June 23rd, 2025 04:20
David Wakeling said:
It amazes me that people are not terrified by life considering the end and the troubles they have along the way.For me this poem explores the fear of the unknown and the horrors that might be around the corner. For me it is a very real journey into the darkness.Well done
June 23rd, 2025 04:20
Is something there?
arqios said:
Your poem stirs like breath on a mirror—uncertain, intimate, and chillingly tactile. It feels like the echo of memory searching for a body to haunt. Hauntingly awesome. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 23rd, 2025 04:11
arqios said:
Your poem stirs like breath on a mirror—uncertain, intimate, and chillingly tactile. It feels like the echo of memory searching for a body to haunt. Hauntingly awesome. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 23rd, 2025 04:11
Is something there?
Teddy.15 said:
When you write like this it reminds me of my darling friend who has Dementia, this is a magnificent piece filled with emotional imagery. 🌹 I bow to you 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
When you write like this it reminds me of my darling friend who has Dementia, this is a magnificent piece filled with emotional imagery. 🌹 I bow to you 🌹
June 23rd, 2025 03:43
Now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The universe is aligning my friend. Last week, during therapy, I had this insight, coming from my Spirituality, of course: In God there is no was, in God there is no will be. In God…there just is. We only have and only ever will live in the now and until we realize that, we will never truly be living. Take God out of my statement, for those who don’t believe, the truth remains. There is no was, there is no will be. There just is. This poem expresses that so beautifully and succinctly it is a must fave for me, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
June 22nd, 2025 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The universe is aligning my friend. Last week, during therapy, I had this insight, coming from my Spirituality, of course: In God there is no was, in God there is no will be. In God…there just is. We only have and only ever will live in the now and until we realize that, we will never truly be living. Take God out of my statement, for those who don’t believe, the truth remains. There is no was, there is no will be. There just is. This poem expresses that so beautifully and succinctly it is a must fave for me, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
June 22nd, 2025 08:10
Now
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and filled with emotion - engraves itself in the mind
June 22nd, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and filled with emotion - engraves itself in the mind
June 22nd, 2025 06:09
Now
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful crafted write, for some poverty is a life long issue and struggle and I mean real poverty. While those around them just get fatter and fatter. Poignant and to me sad write on the current world
June 22nd, 2025 05:12
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful crafted write, for some poverty is a life long issue and struggle and I mean real poverty. While those around them just get fatter and fatter. Poignant and to me sad write on the current world
June 22nd, 2025 05:12
Now
Soman Ragavan said:
A description of some unhappy experiences in life. Sometimes we feel that all is going against us. It\'s just a long struggle.
June 22nd, 2025 05:03
Soman Ragavan said:
A description of some unhappy experiences in life. Sometimes we feel that all is going against us. It\'s just a long struggle.
June 22nd, 2025 05:03
Now
David Wakeling said:
I sense an element of despair in this poem.Seasoning has lost its flavour. It ends with one of the most powerful lines I have ever read.\" Sensations washed away in muddy tears ,time its engraver.Excellent
June 22nd, 2025 04:40
David Wakeling said:
I sense an element of despair in this poem.Seasoning has lost its flavour. It ends with one of the most powerful lines I have ever read.\" Sensations washed away in muddy tears ,time its engraver.Excellent
June 22nd, 2025 04:40
Now
Adiii said:
Wow such a great poetry on poverty
As someone from a third world country I have seen and faced it as well
I also like to write on difficult/sensitive /social topics and I have wrote on several already like nationalism , 3rd world struggle, immigration but I am not sure that should I release them in public maybe people will get offended Because Everyone have their own perspective on looking at things :)
June 22nd, 2025 04:20
Adiii said:
Wow such a great poetry on poverty
As someone from a third world country I have seen and faced it as well
I also like to write on difficult/sensitive /social topics and I have wrote on several already like nationalism , 3rd world struggle, immigration but I am not sure that should I release them in public maybe people will get offended Because Everyone have their own perspective on looking at things :)
June 22nd, 2025 04:20
Now
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed, poverty a really hard jar to escape from, your empathy compassion and poetic skills are truly felt in here, much like in all your work dear friend. 🌹a history lesson 🌹
June 22nd, 2025 03:08
Teddy.15 said:
Indeed, poverty a really hard jar to escape from, your empathy compassion and poetic skills are truly felt in here, much like in all your work dear friend. 🌹a history lesson 🌹
June 22nd, 2025 03:08
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