Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Warning
Friendship said:
Disturbing images of neglect, yet unfortunately, they ring true. We inhabit a world plagued by sickness, where we have collectively failed to safeguard our most vulnerable members. This poem, Soren, is a masterpiece. Your work employs potent imagery to craft a vivid tableau of the suffering endured by infants and children, as well as the surrounding decay. Despite our education, society has failed our children. While some of us possess a moral compass, a significant proportion of individuals are unfit to assume parental responsibilities.
February 7th, 2025 13:47
Friendship said:
Disturbing images of neglect, yet unfortunately, they ring true. We inhabit a world plagued by sickness, where we have collectively failed to safeguard our most vulnerable members. This poem, Soren, is a masterpiece. Your work employs potent imagery to craft a vivid tableau of the suffering endured by infants and children, as well as the surrounding decay. Despite our education, society has failed our children. While some of us possess a moral compass, a significant proportion of individuals are unfit to assume parental responsibilities.
February 7th, 2025 13:47
Warning
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever read from you Soren.
with every word ringing true.
a most outstanding write my friend;
February 7th, 2025 13:35
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever read from you Soren.
with every word ringing true.
a most outstanding write my friend;
February 7th, 2025 13:35
Warning
Cassie58 said:
Dark as dark can be, and this is still going on in some places. Hard to believe, but it is a shocking truth. Well penned Soren. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:04
Cassie58 said:
Dark as dark can be, and this is still going on in some places. Hard to believe, but it is a shocking truth. Well penned Soren. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:04
Warning
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love this line ... \"Shake and shake, in an oven bake,\"
February 7th, 2025 11:59
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I love this line ... \"Shake and shake, in an oven bake,\"
February 7th, 2025 11:59
Warning
arqios said:
It is said that there will always the the vulnerable ones in any grouping, hence vigilance and compassion, proactive participation is necessary. In some cultures it is understood that the whole “village” in its entirety is responsible and the heart of rearing its children. Apathy and the blind eye are among the silent killers of society.
February 7th, 2025 06:18
arqios said:
It is said that there will always the the vulnerable ones in any grouping, hence vigilance and compassion, proactive participation is necessary. In some cultures it is understood that the whole “village” in its entirety is responsible and the heart of rearing its children. Apathy and the blind eye are among the silent killers of society.
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Warning
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very graphic and disturbing picture, in a good way. Reminds me off a scene of that Shakespeare play you cannot mention, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a very graphic and disturbing picture, in a good way. Reminds me off a scene of that Shakespeare play you cannot mention, enjoyed the read
February 7th, 2025 06:18
Warning
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is graphic.It certainly paints a picture imprisonment.Excellent
February 7th, 2025 04:51
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is graphic.It certainly paints a picture imprisonment.Excellent
February 7th, 2025 04:51
Warning
Teddy.15 said:
So incredibly powerful dark and true to what the world is fast becoming. Some humans don\'t deserve to see the light of day. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 04:43
Teddy.15 said:
So incredibly powerful dark and true to what the world is fast becoming. Some humans don\'t deserve to see the light of day. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 04:43
Musings
Michael Edwards said:
Such great use of the laguage - a masterful write.
February 7th, 2025 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Such great use of the laguage - a masterful write.
February 7th, 2025 02:51
Musings
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a picture of Calliope in the room where I write my words so she is always with me as I am sure she will be with you soren and she will fill you inkwell.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a picture of Calliope in the room where I write my words so she is always with me as I am sure she will be with you soren and she will fill you inkwell.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 02:48
Musings
Simurgh said:
Musings---- beautiful, seraphic and what not!
Great in style and beautiful composition of words. Your poems are always great!
I loved this poem very much.
February 6th, 2025 19:28
Simurgh said:
Musings---- beautiful, seraphic and what not!
Great in style and beautiful composition of words. Your poems are always great!
I loved this poem very much.
February 6th, 2025 19:28
Musings
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Let the light continue to shine; very touching write.
February 6th, 2025 14:46
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Let the light continue to shine; very touching write.
February 6th, 2025 14:46
On edge
Simurgh said:
You have a way with the words. I enjoy your poems. On edge... really great!
February 6th, 2025 12:29
Simurgh said:
You have a way with the words. I enjoy your poems. On edge... really great!
February 6th, 2025 12:29
Time bandit
aDarkerMind said:
tho I have read many of you poems Soren, and have most impressed with them all....
this is, in my opinion, you at your very best;
superb!
February 6th, 2025 11:28
aDarkerMind said:
tho I have read many of you poems Soren, and have most impressed with them all....
this is, in my opinion, you at your very best;
superb!
February 6th, 2025 11:28
Musings
Cassie58 said:
Your muse has been able to inspire you with many a fine poem. However sometimes the words do dry out. It happens to most writers, you aren’t alone there. What I can say is, the muse will return when she is ready. Have a good rest of day. I enjoyed this poem very much. It is relatable.
February 6th, 2025 08:35
Cassie58 said:
Your muse has been able to inspire you with many a fine poem. However sometimes the words do dry out. It happens to most writers, you aren’t alone there. What I can say is, the muse will return when she is ready. Have a good rest of day. I enjoyed this poem very much. It is relatable.
February 6th, 2025 08:35
Musings
Teddy.15 said:
And some beautiful musing you do own. A lesson to all, kudos 🌹💐🌹
February 6th, 2025 05:52
Teddy.15 said:
And some beautiful musing you do own. A lesson to all, kudos 🌹💐🌹
February 6th, 2025 05:52
Musings
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. I like the Greek references, Excellent
February 6th, 2025 05:51
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. I like the Greek references, Excellent
February 6th, 2025 05:51
Reflections
Emile Dubois said:
The imagery is akin to painting on film. Evocative.
February 6th, 2025 05:51
Emile Dubois said:
The imagery is akin to painting on film. Evocative.
February 6th, 2025 05:51
Musings
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt light will appear in the writings, shining brighter than ever out of the darkness, Lovely write
February 6th, 2025 05:29
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt light will appear in the writings, shining brighter than ever out of the darkness, Lovely write
February 6th, 2025 05:29
Musings
orchidee said:
If no inspiration you could write poems sub-titled \'A Load of Rubbish\' as I do - maybe in an occasional series. lol. I\'ve done mad musings today.
February 6th, 2025 03:31
orchidee said:
If no inspiration you could write poems sub-titled \'A Load of Rubbish\' as I do - maybe in an occasional series. lol. I\'ve done mad musings today.
February 6th, 2025 03:31
Musings
arqios said:
There are times when a change of scene, a different point of view or an altering of pace allows more wiggle room in writing. A well deserved break also does wonders. We each find our own groove. 🙏🏻🕊
February 6th, 2025 03:12
arqios said:
There are times when a change of scene, a different point of view or an altering of pace allows more wiggle room in writing. A well deserved break also does wonders. We each find our own groove. 🙏🏻🕊
February 6th, 2025 03:12
Time bandit
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does take it all soren but looking at all the things we had during those times can give us so much joy.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Time does take it all soren but looking at all the things we had during those times can give us so much joy.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:53
Reflections
NinjaGirl said:
This makes me smile! I\'ve taken a recent interest in physics, and this was quite the joy to read and interpret!
February 5th, 2025 18:46
NinjaGirl said:
This makes me smile! I\'ve taken a recent interest in physics, and this was quite the joy to read and interpret!
February 5th, 2025 18:46
Time bandit
Cassie58 said:
I sense regret for past actions but also a feint glimmer of hope for the cobwebs. Time is such a thief. Beautiful poetry sorenbarrett.
February 5th, 2025 15:18
Cassie58 said:
I sense regret for past actions but also a feint glimmer of hope for the cobwebs. Time is such a thief. Beautiful poetry sorenbarrett.
February 5th, 2025 15:18
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