Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Waking up (a mind scrub)
Goldfinch60 said:

Your mind is there soren, I find mine at 6 0\'clock in the morning.

Andy

January 26th, 2024 02:50

Waking up (a mind scrub)
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery leaves me right there. Beautiful dear Sorenbarrett. ☀️

January 25th, 2024 05:53

A crime commited
Goldfinch60 said:

Such sadly emotive words soren.

Andy

January 25th, 2024 02:26

A crime commited
Doggerel Dave said:

Regrets? yeh - me too. Redemption in later life, but life\'s early transgressions cannot be wiped or excused, in my mind at least...
A short nugget which says it all. Thanks Soren.


January 24th, 2024 17:24

To sleep perchance to wake
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words soren, I always say to people \"I woke up this morning so all is fine\"

Andy

January 24th, 2024 02:47

A slippery slope
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren and so true, do we sacrifice one to move on, I haven\'t in my life.

Andy

January 22nd, 2024 02:20

A slippery slope
Bella Shepard said:

The questions of such sacrifice seem almost unanswerable, and yet at times, must be answered. You pose the dilemma of conscience. A mind challenging write my friend!

January 21st, 2024 13:56

Technology
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words soren, we need to ensure that our reality is not overtaken by technology. (he says writing these words on a computer!)

Andy

January 21st, 2024 02:25

Technology
Firefall said:

Great writing on our sad state of affairs.

January 20th, 2024 22:05

Technology
Doggerel Dave said:

Neat ingenious write, Soren.
And for once (once only, mind) I\'m not going to leap onto my soapbox and lecture about the use of \'we\' ........

January 20th, 2024 17:33

Once
Accidental Poet said:

\"Passion is only skin deep
but love goes to the bone\"

Oh, I know this all too well. Brilliant soren. 👍

January 19th, 2024 11:05

Once
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love always be there for you soren.

Andy

January 19th, 2024 02:20

Once
Doggerel Dave said:

Not all life can be beautiful for many I suspect - certainly occasionally not for me. However I have also experienced your redemption, which helps see me through.
Thanks Soren: neat work.

January 18th, 2024 17:03

Once
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

January 18th, 2024 13:10

Once
orchidee said:

Ooh you could do a series - once, twice, thrice, erm, whatever comes next - quadruple?! heehee.

January 18th, 2024 08:58

Ghost
Goldfinch60 said:

\"I\'m behind you!\"

Andy

January 17th, 2024 02:19

Ghost
Bella Shepard said:

You are the Ghost of thoughts that hide in the recesses of our minds. Without shape or form you plague us in those dark places. A remarkable ghost story, all too real my friend. A great write!

January 16th, 2024 14:19

Ghost
orchidee said:

You a ghost-writer?! lol.

January 16th, 2024 05:45

Discarded
Goldfinch60 said:

It seems to be happening more and more, children come into this world with such innocence and need treating with love and respect, why do people do this to them!

Andy

January 15th, 2024 01:46

Discarded
orchidee said:

There\'s horrible eugenics too - getting rid of \'lesser\' or \'sub-standard\' people.

January 14th, 2024 15:46

Love\'s fugacity
Goldfinch60 said:

May that resurrection be always with you soren.

Andy

January 13th, 2024 02:09

Love\'s fugacity
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

January 12th, 2024 18:04

Love\'s fugacity
orchidee said:

A fugi-wotsit poem?
If fugacity is \'fleeting or evanescent\', as I looked it up, this is the opposite - a lasting poem!

January 12th, 2024 05:54

Love\'s fugacity
2781 said:

Food for thought, I think you are onto something.

January 12th, 2024 05:41

Crude and rude
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren, living with nature can be wonderful.

Andy

January 11th, 2024 02:09

Crude and rude
Bella Shepard said:

You had me going until the last stanza, and then bazinga! Irony at its best!

January 10th, 2024 14:48

Crude and rude
orchidee said:

Ahh, is this about a typical person who shops at the Co-op?! lol.

January 10th, 2024 08:42

Crude and rude
Doggerel Dave said:

Not Gregory P Smith are you?
https://drgregorypsmith.com/
Either way, a good Yarn, Soren.

PS: Wot about Darth?

January 10th, 2024 06:04

Crude and rude
Teddy.15 said:

LOL
the only thing we cannot live with out wi-fi such a brilliant and unique piece.

January 10th, 2024 05:26

Darth
Goldfinch60 said:

Those dogs can be missed so much soren.

Andy

January 9th, 2024 02:20



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