Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Too bad (metaphor)
Poetic Licence said:
Achieving anything by default is invalid really, I played for a football team once that won the last game of the season by the other team not turning up because they thought they would lose anyway, we won the league because of that, but the opposition not showing took all the shine of off it, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
Achieving anything by default is invalid really, I played for a football team once that won the last game of the season by the other team not turning up because they thought they would lose anyway, we won the league because of that, but the opposition not showing took all the shine of off it, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:29
Too bad (metaphor)
arqios said:
That indeed is sad. Not so sure if that’s gonna change anytime soon. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:36
arqios said:
That indeed is sad. Not so sure if that’s gonna change anytime soon. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:36
Too bad (metaphor)
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn up.Interesting poem about the challenge being taken away when the opposition doesn\'t get involved.Excellent
March 22nd, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn up.Interesting poem about the challenge being taken away when the opposition doesn\'t get involved.Excellent
March 22nd, 2025 05:19
Flies
Jan bach said:
Loved this poem. Enjoyed the style of writing. Very clever and subtle.
The content really sums up my thoughts about flies in the kitchen. ( Why can\'t they stay outside?)
Extremely well written, you feel the frustration of a delicious meal spoilt.
Jan W
March 22nd, 2025 03:56
Jan bach said:
Loved this poem. Enjoyed the style of writing. Very clever and subtle.
The content really sums up my thoughts about flies in the kitchen. ( Why can\'t they stay outside?)
Extremely well written, you feel the frustration of a delicious meal spoilt.
Jan W
March 22nd, 2025 03:56
Old coat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, my friend! The metaphor works so well and yet can also be read literally. Speaking of literally, when I was a kid we would literally wear our clothes out. Like it was cool for holes to appear in them and wear them that way until you couldn\'t anymore. Now, we simply design clothes to have holes in them and charge extra for it! 🤷♂️ That\'s neither here nor there regarding the poem, but it made me think of that, so I share! 🤣 Well done, Soren! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!
March 21st, 2025 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, my friend! The metaphor works so well and yet can also be read literally. Speaking of literally, when I was a kid we would literally wear our clothes out. Like it was cool for holes to appear in them and wear them that way until you couldn\'t anymore. Now, we simply design clothes to have holes in them and charge extra for it! 🤷♂️ That\'s neither here nor there regarding the poem, but it made me think of that, so I share! 🤣 Well done, Soren! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!
March 21st, 2025 08:38
Old coat
arqios said:
What a saga! And the imagery of the \"wild wings flap at zipper\'s gap\" particularly evocative. It\'s as if the coat has a life of its own, fluttering like wings despite its age.🙏🏻🕊
March 21st, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
What a saga! And the imagery of the \"wild wings flap at zipper\'s gap\" particularly evocative. It\'s as if the coat has a life of its own, fluttering like wings despite its age.🙏🏻🕊
March 21st, 2025 05:27
Old coat
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know if the younger generation do this anymore but my generation kept their clothing until the bitter end, and the favourite item of clothing was nearly always the tattiest, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know if the younger generation do this anymore but my generation kept their clothing until the bitter end, and the favourite item of clothing was nearly always the tattiest, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 05:02
Old coat
David Wakeling said:
I see a much loved jumper here keeping warm even if it isa little tattered.I liked the rhyme Excellent
March 21st, 2025 04:52
David Wakeling said:
I see a much loved jumper here keeping warm even if it isa little tattered.I liked the rhyme Excellent
March 21st, 2025 04:52
Old coat
orchidee said:
Yes, I bought KP a \'new\' coat just like that one! lol.
March 21st, 2025 03:13
orchidee said:
Yes, I bought KP a \'new\' coat just like that one! lol.
March 21st, 2025 03:13
Liberated
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
The rain is reflective
Nourishing with enlightenment
March 20th, 2025 18:21
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
The rain is reflective
Nourishing with enlightenment
March 20th, 2025 18:21
Liberated
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If you\'re a tree, how do ya get past the verify check on here? I\'m getting obsessed with that! lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If you\'re a tree, how do ya get past the verify check on here? I\'m getting obsessed with that! lol.
March 20th, 2025 13:45
Liberated
Lorenz said:
A wonderful landscape that blends words, colors,and seasons in a tender dawn dance !
March 20th, 2025 10:25
Lorenz said:
A wonderful landscape that blends words, colors,and seasons in a tender dawn dance !
March 20th, 2025 10:25
The circle
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for \"Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity\"
March 20th, 2025 10:08
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for \"Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity\"
March 20th, 2025 10:08
Liberated
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, to be truly free of our human trappings to be, completely one, as opposed to at war, with nature. This poem speaks to that yearning we all have, whether we realize it or not. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. Either way, my friend, this is a wonderful poem! An easy fave for its connection to nature and for its beautiful profundity. 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, to be truly free of our human trappings to be, completely one, as opposed to at war, with nature. This poem speaks to that yearning we all have, whether we realize it or not. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. Either way, my friend, this is a wonderful poem! An easy fave for its connection to nature and for its beautiful profundity. 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:08
Liberated
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful, a poetic longing for transcendence and creative freedom!
March 20th, 2025 07:20
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful, a poetic longing for transcendence and creative freedom!
March 20th, 2025 07:20
Liberated
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!
March 20th, 2025 05:40
Liberated
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Poetic Licence said:
To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write
March 20th, 2025 05:05
Liberated
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
arqios said:
There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 04:05
The circle
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:22
The circle
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....
Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.
March 19th, 2025 17:42
The circle
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
Neilton said:
Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work
March 19th, 2025 15:30
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