Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Never
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 29th, 2024 09:28

Never
Neville said:



I\'m much more a hardly ever kinda guy .. and rarely if ever say neva .. no kiddin

October 29th, 2024 09:06

Never
arqios said:

Never! Never ever! Ever, ever, never!


October 29th, 2024 05:08

Never
Teddy.15 said:

Dipends on my mood, sometimes I\'d sell my soul to the devil. So very powerful in imagery and emotion πŸ’™ 🌹

October 29th, 2024 04:35

More than clay
Teddy.15 said:

Wow πŸ’œ

October 29th, 2024 04:03

More than clay
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the core of our body and mind can be infinite soren

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:46

More than clay
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The opening lines are simply captivating, then the rest of the piem seems to flow naturally like a stream on a hilly terrain. Loved it πŸŽ‡

October 29th, 2024 03:08

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
sunshine777 said:

Very unique, one of a kind no doubt

October 28th, 2024 19:28

More than clay
Neilton said:

Great work here sorenbarret ! You never fail to impress me with your talent πŸ’“

October 28th, 2024 16:49

More than clay
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 28th, 2024 12:48

More than clay
Neville said:



and there at the heart of the matter, having dug deep, it lies patiently just waiting to be found ..

October 28th, 2024 11:29

More than clay
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderfully captivating
and evocative write!! πŸ‘
Great rhyme, rhythm and
flow, way to go!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed
a pleasure to recite!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

October 28th, 2024 10:03

More than clay
Tristan Robert Lange said:

\"When memory\'s prick revives the sting of yesterday\'s thorn / and the scent of rot on today\'s breeze is born\"...excellent! These opening lines grabs you from the outset and don\'t let go. Deep and relatable. Memory\'s can be both beautiful and eternally haunting. I have had many-a-memory pricks that have revived yesterday\'s thorn, that is for sure. And then the rest of the poem ensues, building upon that initial prick, with an ending that provides a glimpse of hope, that as we confront the memories of the past and the shame they can bring, that we can put those winds to our heels and move onward. We are more than the things that bring us shame, guilt and pain. Excellent write! πŸ–€β€οΈπŸ–€πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

October 28th, 2024 07:28

More than clay
arqios said:

It brings a thought about that we feed and tend and shear and spindle and knit what we eventually wear in our daily lives. Oh my. ☺️

October 28th, 2024 07:02

More than clay
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 28th, 2024 04:54

Ember
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, trees are so important in our lives with Nature.

Andy

October 28th, 2024 02:23

Ember
Dan Williams said:

The Wizard of Rhyme strikes again.

October 27th, 2024 23:00

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Dan Williams said:

Here I sit, broken hearted . . .you know the rest.

October 27th, 2024 22:55

Piled logs
Young Fella said:

Great work. Enjoyed reading your lines.

October 27th, 2024 16:00

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve often thought of writing such a poetic verse, but could never manage to come up with a clean way to put it. You Sir have achieved what I could not. I congratulate you. πŸ˜πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 13:38

Ember
Teddy.15 said:

Having just had lunch with one of my most favourite people in my life who has recently been diagnosed with a type of dementia that also takes her eye sight, this is so very much appreciated today dear friend, memories we have so many and today we made yet another. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 πŸ’™

October 27th, 2024 10:52

Ember
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 27th, 2024 09:32

Ember
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

A poignant poem. You reminded me that memories are indeed very precious πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 09:03

Ember
Lorenz said:

Such a mighty majestuous tree...Embers !

October 27th, 2024 06:37

Ember
Neville said:



it only takes something miniscule a micro-second to undo what it has taken a millennium to nurture ..

October 27th, 2024 06:22

Ember
arqios said:

Life’s yolk, YES! Our lot is quite a think to deal with from day to day. Just this morning a breakfast egg flew off the β€œegg perch” in the fridge door, the white splattered against the kitchen counter but the yolk remained whole from the glancing impact; the yolk of the yolk or was that yoke?

October 27th, 2024 05:08

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I have almost made it a ritual for me to read one of your poems after writing a couple. Each read tells me the long path I would need to traverse before becoming better. This time also it was no different. Absolutely loved it.

October 27th, 2024 03:30

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Neville said:


May I respectfully suggest that you neck a trug of tomatoes on a daily basis & when not in season, tinned ones will do the job just as well your Majesty πŸ…πŸ‘

October 27th, 2024 02:31

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Goldfinch60 said:

Pee away dear soren, pee away. LOL

Andy

October 27th, 2024 02:28

A nursery rhyme for us mature children
Thomas W Case said:

Lol. Funny stuff.

October 26th, 2024 23:43



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