Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
arqios said:
They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back to the Middle Ages.
December 19th, 2024 04:12
arqios said:
They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back to the Middle Ages.
December 19th, 2024 04:12
Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of today\'s world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 19th, 2024 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a fan of today\'s world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 19th, 2024 04:10
The fly
Dan Williams said:
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations have let you produce valid explanations in verse for what we mostly already know. Bravo.
December 19th, 2024 02:02
Dan Williams said:
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations have let you produce valid explanations in verse for what we mostly already know. Bravo.
December 19th, 2024 02:02
The fly
NinjaGirl said:
I like it--definitely makes me a little uneasy, but so does the person, so it was a beautiful metaphor!
December 18th, 2024 20:53
NinjaGirl said:
I like it--definitely makes me a little uneasy, but so does the person, so it was a beautiful metaphor!
December 18th, 2024 20:53
The fly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow…excellent running metaphor that makes me want to sing, “shoo fly…” 😂 Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Seriously rich, and creepy, imagery!
December 18th, 2024 18:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow…excellent running metaphor that makes me want to sing, “shoo fly…” 😂 Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Seriously rich, and creepy, imagery!
December 18th, 2024 18:01
The fly
Thad Wilk said:
I guess the fly
has a meaning in life,
but I haven\'t figured
out yet what it is¿? 🤔
Awesome write!
Great use of metaphor
and creepy good imagery!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:18
Thad Wilk said:
I guess the fly
has a meaning in life,
but I haven\'t figured
out yet what it is¿? 🤔
Awesome write!
Great use of metaphor
and creepy good imagery!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:18
The fly
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should get an honourable mention for the pollination they do...irritating health hazard they may be...
A rich write, Soren.
December 18th, 2024 17:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry to be a fly in the ointment (ho ho ho) but I do think they should get an honourable mention for the pollination they do...irritating health hazard they may be...
A rich write, Soren.
December 18th, 2024 17:01
The fly
Ellen Marsell said:
A confused fly, repeating its disorderly choreography over and over... the perfect image of this chaotic creature.
December 18th, 2024 15:45
Ellen Marsell said:
A confused fly, repeating its disorderly choreography over and over... the perfect image of this chaotic creature.
December 18th, 2024 15:45
The fly
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read about one of life`s real pains, and i love the last line, great read.
December 18th, 2024 14:16
Poetic Licence said:
A really enjoyable read about one of life`s real pains, and i love the last line, great read.
December 18th, 2024 14:16
The fly
Cassie58 said:
Waiter there’s a fly in my soup.
Don’t worry, it won’t eat much.
Flies are a nuisance but they make for great metaphors. Also many jokes. Even flies have a purpose in life. Well penned Soren.
December 18th, 2024 10:57
Cassie58 said:
Waiter there’s a fly in my soup.
Don’t worry, it won’t eat much.
Flies are a nuisance but they make for great metaphors. Also many jokes. Even flies have a purpose in life. Well penned Soren.
December 18th, 2024 10:57
Call of the earth
NafisaSB said:
comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure
December 18th, 2024 07:22
NafisaSB said:
comes to all of us, my friend, that\'s for sure
December 18th, 2024 07:22
Words of the prophets
NafisaSB said:
it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread
December 18th, 2024 07:11
NafisaSB said:
it is true that lots of prophecy, dark humor, profound or obscene messages are to be found on the walls of public toilets - some are good as written in a state when the truth spouts forth without control, while some best left unread
December 18th, 2024 07:11
The fly
Teddy.15 said:
There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb 🌹
December 18th, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
There is certainly always something to spoil the soup, your imagery and metaphor superb 🌹
December 18th, 2024 06:00
The fly
Melancholic~Onion said:
These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.
December 18th, 2024 03:52
Melancholic~Onion said:
These are the type I enjoy, indie you-never-know-what-to-expect works. They\'re my favourite so far. And I like the fact that its about a fly.
December 18th, 2024 03:52
The fly
arqios said:
Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
December 18th, 2024 03:47
arqios said:
Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
December 18th, 2024 03:47
Call of the earth
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope you are not suffering from dementia soren, my wife had it and I know all about it, she passed five years ago with dementia.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope you are not suffering from dementia soren, my wife had it and I know all about it, she passed five years ago with dementia.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:49
Call of the earth
Neville said:
I have thought about it long and hard and now conclude there is no way you could have chosen a more apt title to front a topic that if we take enough breaths will have a vast impact on us all .. I have never been afraid of dying or of my own departure, but I am not keen on this getting old malarky .. the losses seem to occur back on back & with increasing ferociousness .. I still have my hair and a few marbles but still feel like a casualty .. I am not in the least bit surprised by the number of folk ho rate these words of yours so highly my friend .. and believe me, I do too .. Neville 👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:28
Neville said:
I have thought about it long and hard and now conclude there is no way you could have chosen a more apt title to front a topic that if we take enough breaths will have a vast impact on us all .. I have never been afraid of dying or of my own departure, but I am not keen on this getting old malarky .. the losses seem to occur back on back & with increasing ferociousness .. I still have my hair and a few marbles but still feel like a casualty .. I am not in the least bit surprised by the number of folk ho rate these words of yours so highly my friend .. and believe me, I do too .. Neville 👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:28
Call of the earth
Dan Williams said:
It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding things to counter this mood get harder and harder to find. \"Now winter\'s cold is coming\".
December 18th, 2024 00:51
Dan Williams said:
It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding things to counter this mood get harder and harder to find. \"Now winter\'s cold is coming\".
December 18th, 2024 00:51
Call of the earth
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll circle around for a bit longer if you don\'t mind - if I take this too seriously, I\'ll crash...
Not sure if you are serious about the cost of living, Soren - be interesting, as I can\'t see metaphors being very handy there....😜
December 17th, 2024 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll circle around for a bit longer if you don\'t mind - if I take this too seriously, I\'ll crash...
Not sure if you are serious about the cost of living, Soren - be interesting, as I can\'t see metaphors being very handy there....😜
December 17th, 2024 23:16
Call of the earth
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work, time never loses. Carpe Diem, my friend.
December 17th, 2024 22:52
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work, time never loses. Carpe Diem, my friend.
December 17th, 2024 22:52
Call of the earth
Ladywithaquill said:
Death and decay make for great poetry!
December 17th, 2024 19:44
Ladywithaquill said:
Death and decay make for great poetry!
December 17th, 2024 19:44
Call of the earth
Mutley Ravishes said:
This body will rot
Only if it\'s in the grave
Is that not the intention
Of the Creator, I say?!
Look to the east
On your quest
Then take the journey
To the west
December 17th, 2024 19:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
This body will rot
Only if it\'s in the grave
Is that not the intention
Of the Creator, I say?!
Look to the east
On your quest
Then take the journey
To the west
December 17th, 2024 19:38
Call of the earth
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Open. Honest. Truth. Very well written!
December 17th, 2024 15:47
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Open. Honest. Truth. Very well written!
December 17th, 2024 15:47
Call of the earth
David Wakeling said:
In each life there is a rise and fall. There secret is not to care.A powerful existential poem
December 17th, 2024 14:40
David Wakeling said:
In each life there is a rise and fall. There secret is not to care.A powerful existential poem
December 17th, 2024 14:40
Call of the earth
gray0328 said:
We must accept the aging process, but we don\'t have to like it. I still have all my hair, but I\'m losing other things. Nice work Soren
December 17th, 2024 13:34
gray0328 said:
We must accept the aging process, but we don\'t have to like it. I still have all my hair, but I\'m losing other things. Nice work Soren
December 17th, 2024 13:34
Peace on earth, good will
vicecream said:
Much for us to learn from our woody brethren
December 17th, 2024 12:58
vicecream said:
Much for us to learn from our woody brethren
December 17th, 2024 12:58
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