Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Steps
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Life has its ups and downs, but one must always remain optimistic, until the day that brings delight.
Well expressed feelings even though I feel depression.
Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2024 05:21
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Life has its ups and downs, but one must always remain optimistic, until the day that brings delight.
Well expressed feelings even though I feel depression.
Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2024 05:21
Shadow\'s reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
There are always opposites in life soren hopefully we all have the opposite of hate in our lives.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
There are always opposites in life soren hopefully we all have the opposite of hate in our lives.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:19
Shadow\'s reflection
Dan Williams said:
Again you say things so simply but completely. Reflections shadows, a shadows reflection, brilliant.
August 19th, 2024 00:29
Dan Williams said:
Again you say things so simply but completely. Reflections shadows, a shadows reflection, brilliant.
August 19th, 2024 00:29
Shadow\'s reflection
arqios said:
What remains clings for but a flash! That is quite a formidable conclusion and defines for me in its way how poetry can sometimes be- a reflection or a shadow, rainy or sunny and either way. Superb experience as my return to the land of the ‘living.’
August 18th, 2024 20:34
arqios said:
What remains clings for but a flash! That is quite a formidable conclusion and defines for me in its way how poetry can sometimes be- a reflection or a shadow, rainy or sunny and either way. Superb experience as my return to the land of the ‘living.’
August 18th, 2024 20:34
Shadow\'s reflection
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine how insane
We’d be
Without pain?!
Great write, Soren
August 18th, 2024 18:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
Imagine how insane
We’d be
Without pain?!
Great write, Soren
August 18th, 2024 18:27
Shadow\'s reflection
Thad Wilk said:
Heads or tails
this is one awesome write!!
The message and thoughts
are just dynamite! 🌛🌜
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 18th, 2024 17:47
Thad Wilk said:
Heads or tails
this is one awesome write!!
The message and thoughts
are just dynamite! 🌛🌜
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 18th, 2024 17:47
Yesterday
Accidental Poet said:
That rear-view mirror is there for a reason, even more than one. Wonderfully penned soren. 😉👍
August 18th, 2024 10:19
Accidental Poet said:
That rear-view mirror is there for a reason, even more than one. Wonderfully penned soren. 😉👍
August 18th, 2024 10:19
Shadow\'s reflection
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning. sorrenbarret to look at both side of the coin, a wonderful and very important tool. Exquisite my dear poet. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 09:36
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning. sorrenbarret to look at both side of the coin, a wonderful and very important tool. Exquisite my dear poet. 🌹
August 18th, 2024 09:36
Shadow\'s reflection
orchidee said:
I played heads or tails with KP. Guess I cheated somehow - my coin had two sides, but both the same! lol.
August 18th, 2024 07:38
orchidee said:
I played heads or tails with KP. Guess I cheated somehow - my coin had two sides, but both the same! lol.
August 18th, 2024 07:38
Ripples
AuburnScribbler said:
A very nice twosome here sorenbarrett.
The rhythm you have written such a scene, mirrors the rippling effect, that makes each read of this poem more immersive.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
AuburnScribbler said:
A very nice twosome here sorenbarrett.
The rhythm you have written such a scene, mirrors the rippling effect, that makes each read of this poem more immersive.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
Shadow\'s reflection
Bobby O said:
Both things are true. Read a book back on college that expounded on that theme as it relates to human nature. Stressing patience and faith that good will rise as many times the less positive pokes its head up first , using the proliferation of pornography when the VCR was new etc…
August 18th, 2024 06:03
Bobby O said:
Both things are true. Read a book back on college that expounded on that theme as it relates to human nature. Stressing patience and faith that good will rise as many times the less positive pokes its head up first , using the proliferation of pornography when the VCR was new etc…
August 18th, 2024 06:03
Yesterday
rhmn_7 said:
Time alters everybody, like it or not, but in essence some still manage to stay the same.
August 18th, 2024 05:58
rhmn_7 said:
Time alters everybody, like it or not, but in essence some still manage to stay the same.
August 18th, 2024 05:58
Time eroded memories
Vsevolod Fomin said:
You have a very interesting poetic rhythm in your poems, the lines rhyme through one, there is a melodiousness when you listen to the poems to yourself. The lines are a little longer at the end, which creates a strong pulse effect and creates an atmosphere of total immersion in the poem.
August 18th, 2024 05:12
Vsevolod Fomin said:
You have a very interesting poetic rhythm in your poems, the lines rhyme through one, there is a melodiousness when you listen to the poems to yourself. The lines are a little longer at the end, which creates a strong pulse effect and creates an atmosphere of total immersion in the poem.
August 18th, 2024 05:12
Yesterday
Dan Williams said:
See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21
Dan Williams said:
See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21
Ripples
Dan Williams said:
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling. Very nice.
August 17th, 2024 23:18
Dan Williams said:
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling. Very nice.
August 17th, 2024 23:18
Yesterday
Cheeky Missy said:
[https://youtu.be/c3rkEeFS7Ng?si=fGqfiF5p0UsjwQsl]
They showed us when we were young about the glorious future which lay ahead, but only lent us hints about the ugly face its elder being owned.
Paul McCartney\'s tribute seemed too fitting, so I included it.
August 17th, 2024 17:59
Cheeky Missy said:
[https://youtu.be/c3rkEeFS7Ng?si=fGqfiF5p0UsjwQsl]
They showed us when we were young about the glorious future which lay ahead, but only lent us hints about the ugly face its elder being owned.
Paul McCartney\'s tribute seemed too fitting, so I included it.
August 17th, 2024 17:59
Yesterday
Garth Rakumakoe said:
With every sentence one can feel how the hammer drives the nail home on this one. It starts of candidly, only to sober raw hurt, that stares one in the face, only to leave you peacefully, and without confrontation. Message delivered, gifted one.
August 17th, 2024 12:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
With every sentence one can feel how the hammer drives the nail home on this one. It starts of candidly, only to sober raw hurt, that stares one in the face, only to leave you peacefully, and without confrontation. Message delivered, gifted one.
August 17th, 2024 12:17
Yesterday
MendedFences27 said:
The constant change of life, exemplified by your poem. It reads like a sad story, with a not too happy ending. Sometimes, in reflection, we are able to select the good bits and enjoy those memories in later years. A fine poem. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:45
MendedFences27 said:
The constant change of life, exemplified by your poem. It reads like a sad story, with a not too happy ending. Sometimes, in reflection, we are able to select the good bits and enjoy those memories in later years. A fine poem. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:45
Yesterday
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of the most touching poems I\'ve ever read about missing ones wife, loved every line especially about your son, I really understand. Beautiful as can be and so creative. Bravo my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:10
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of the most touching poems I\'ve ever read about missing ones wife, loved every line especially about your son, I really understand. Beautiful as can be and so creative. Bravo my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:10
Yesterday
Neville said:
there are those who insist that nothing is new, or nothing ever changes ..
I say nothing stays the same and you just gone and proved it .. nice, very ..
August 17th, 2024 07:24
Neville said:
there are those who insist that nothing is new, or nothing ever changes ..
I say nothing stays the same and you just gone and proved it .. nice, very ..
August 17th, 2024 07:24
Yesterday
Doggerel Dave said:
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I think you covered that nicely.
August 17th, 2024 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I think you covered that nicely.
August 17th, 2024 05:52
Ripples
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, those ripples can go on forever.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:17
Ripples
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 16th, 2024 17:54
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write, ✍️
great imagery my friend! 👍
Captivating beginning
to end! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 16th, 2024 17:54
Ripples
Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Ripples
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
Ripples
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
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