Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Yesterday\'s embers
David Wakeling said:
I see the burning of a great tree here. Very well written with emotive imagery
February 3rd, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
I see the burning of a great tree here. Very well written with emotive imagery
February 3rd, 2025 05:48
Yesterday\'s embers
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of a falling crown and fading life, enjoyable read to start the week
February 3rd, 2025 04:25
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of a falling crown and fading life, enjoyable read to start the week
February 3rd, 2025 04:25
Deflowered
Mysty Monroe said:
This is very good. I love how you did this and the raw yet exotic take on the subject
February 3rd, 2025 04:22
Mysty Monroe said:
This is very good. I love how you did this and the raw yet exotic take on the subject
February 3rd, 2025 04:22
Yesterday\'s embers
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified I can see the beginning of the end. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 3rd, 2025 03:40
Teddy.15 said:
Most dignified I can see the beginning of the end. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
February 3rd, 2025 03:40
Ants
Goldfinch60 said:
Ants are very clever insects soren, to see them walk in lines one behind the other is fascinating.
Andy
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Ants are very clever insects soren, to see them walk in lines one behind the other is fascinating.
Andy
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Ants
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember a certain author saying that ants are a fallen race.
Great write, Soren.
February 2nd, 2025 18:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember a certain author saying that ants are a fallen race.
Great write, Soren.
February 2nd, 2025 18:30
Ants
Cassie58 said:
Amazing creatures to watch. Hard working and they have incredible strength. They can move mountains by comparison to us. I reckon they could teach us a trick or two. Very well composed and enjoyed sorenbarrett.
February 2nd, 2025 12:24
Cassie58 said:
Amazing creatures to watch. Hard working and they have incredible strength. They can move mountains by comparison to us. I reckon they could teach us a trick or two. Very well composed and enjoyed sorenbarrett.
February 2nd, 2025 12:24
Ants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ants are some of the most incredible creatures. A wonderful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹
February 2nd, 2025 07:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ants are some of the most incredible creatures. A wonderful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹
February 2nd, 2025 07:17
Ants
Teddy.15 said:
So very dark and a much deserved kudos from me. Yes we are all similar in the end. 🌹
February 2nd, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
So very dark and a much deserved kudos from me. Yes we are all similar in the end. 🌹
February 2nd, 2025 05:55
Ants
arqios said:
Watching ant docos on nature channels have had me in awe of these creatures and put me off being anywhere near them but they literally surround us. Something underneath this poem says so much! 🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 04:48
arqios said:
Watching ant docos on nature channels have had me in awe of these creatures and put me off being anywhere near them but they literally surround us. Something underneath this poem says so much! 🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 04:48
Night visitor
Goldfinch60 said:
That phantom may be bringing love and joy to you soren.
Andy
February 2nd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That phantom may be bringing love and joy to you soren.
Andy
February 2nd, 2025 02:48
Night visitor
Dan Williams said:
A breath of darkness, mysteries\' wind? This is brilliant. I can\'t help but wonder if you have ever been published, and if not, why? Such fine imagery. Bravo!
February 2nd, 2025 01:15
Dan Williams said:
A breath of darkness, mysteries\' wind? This is brilliant. I can\'t help but wonder if you have ever been published, and if not, why? Such fine imagery. Bravo!
February 2nd, 2025 01:15
Night visitor
David Wakeling said:
Memories of past love can haunt the mind .Well constructed poem. Enjoyed the style
February 1st, 2025 15:30
David Wakeling said:
Memories of past love can haunt the mind .Well constructed poem. Enjoyed the style
February 1st, 2025 15:30
Night visitor
Neville said:
this is the second time in a relatively very short space of time you have penned a poem that contains subject matter and associated imagery (in this case, a white moth) that I have been working on .. and although you may see it differently, I think it a bit spooky .. I also think this is better than the one I have just deleted .. if it happens again, I shall have to get my house exorcised .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:40
Neville said:
this is the second time in a relatively very short space of time you have penned a poem that contains subject matter and associated imagery (in this case, a white moth) that I have been working on .. and although you may see it differently, I think it a bit spooky .. I also think this is better than the one I have just deleted .. if it happens again, I shall have to get my house exorcised .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:40
Night visitor
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, when my mother died a giant beast that must have been la moth flew into my home and flew up the stairs into my attic, I was completely terrified. The weird thing was it had never happened before and has never happened again, nor had I ever seen such in Italy, a chance meeting or a sign? I know the answer already. Your rhyming is superb and so is your Imagery. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 10:41
Teddy.15 said:
Goosebumps, when my mother died a giant beast that must have been la moth flew into my home and flew up the stairs into my attic, I was completely terrified. The weird thing was it had never happened before and has never happened again, nor had I ever seen such in Italy, a chance meeting or a sign? I know the answer already. Your rhyming is superb and so is your Imagery. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 10:41
Night visitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I might not have much company joining me on this, but I love moths. No, I don\'t love them in my closet, but I always love seeing them, and when they land, I love to observe them. That aside, this is quite the chilling piece and quite the metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
February 1st, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I might not have much company joining me on this, but I love moths. No, I don\'t love them in my closet, but I always love seeing them, and when they land, I love to observe them. That aside, this is quite the chilling piece and quite the metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
February 1st, 2025 08:48
Night visitor
Cassie58 said:
A haunting. Superb description and chilling. Very well written sorenbarrett.
February 1st, 2025 08:09
Cassie58 said:
A haunting. Superb description and chilling. Very well written sorenbarrett.
February 1st, 2025 08:09
Peace on earth, good will
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Harmony And Rhythms Soren
February 1st, 2025 04:59
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Harmony And Rhythms Soren
February 1st, 2025 04:59
Little boy blue come blow your horn
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
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