Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Unknot the not
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful, my friend! Amen. I was just saying that to someone...I don\'t write poetry just for myself. It starts there, of course, but it merely starts there. This applies for all potential...and what a tragedy when one\'s potential is not met. Well done. Urgent message. A fave from me. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 6th, 2025 08:01

Unknot the not
Teddy.15 said:

It is in fact much of what is wrong with our world. ๐ŸŒน

April 6th, 2025 06:13

Unknot the not
Salvia.S said:

Thought provoking poem. Very well written!!!

April 6th, 2025 05:59

Unknot the not
Poetic Licence said:

As the read says what\'s the point, live your life and not be one of those who say, I wish I had, enjoyed the read

April 6th, 2025 05:33

Unknot the not
Lorenz said:

So many questions about the meaning of life ...But I keep running towards that horizon line !

April 6th, 2025 05:20

Unknot the not
arqios said:

Sober, solemn and sublime- to me ingredients of pure poetry. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

April 6th, 2025 05:19

Weeping
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all able to step from the shade soren, that light will always be there for us all.

Andy

April 6th, 2025 01:25

Poems in the wind
NafisaSB said:

what a beautiful poem - and the emotions behind it shine out.
thanks for sharing

April 6th, 2025 01:01

Two daughters
NafisaSB said:

lovely message straight from the heart. liked it

April 6th, 2025 00:36

Broken toys
NafisaSB said:

time moves relentlessly forward - how we wish the clock could turn back
beautiful musings..keep them coming

April 6th, 2025 00:35

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Doggerel Dave said:

Your โ€˜just a poemโ€™ has provoked many detailed and complex responses, Soren. Raises the question: what purpose has โ€˜just a poemโ€™? Iโ€™m not going there โ€“ this was just a comment.
My simple mind sees it quiteโ€ฆ. simply. Religion and Science try to answer two different questions: Religions asks โ€˜whyโ€™? (and in my view havenโ€™t found the answer yet, but seem very satisfied with their conclusions), while Science continually attempts to answer the question โ€˜howโ€™ and is never satisfied, realizing the depths of our ignorance and the existence of multiple unknowns.
Finally, there is no need for the \'why\' and \'how\' to ever collide, they should be on two different pathways.


April 5th, 2025 19:06

Too much
rrodriguez said:

Soren, your poem, \'Too Much,\' is indeed the lot we all share. But life is beautiful, and there\'s much more for us to experience. I\'ve enjoyed your poem and reflected on it. Life is indeed, at times, \"too much\" to bear.

April 5th, 2025 18:03

Two daughters
Courtnie McKern said:

Very beautiful! S

April 5th, 2025 14:13

Weeping
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This speaks of grief and uses what I imagined to be a Weeping Willow Tree as its metaphor. Powerful and true. Grief overrun, unchecked, can shade out any chance of life or growth, leading to decay. As I see it, psychological decay, physiological decay, and spiritual decay. On needs to find balance to have the ability to move from shade to light. Well done, my friend! A fave. ๐Ÿ–ค๐ŸŒน

April 5th, 2025 12:32

Weeping
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

Sad but beautiful. This is the cycle of life and it\'s beautiful in every way. Happiness, sadness, pain, life, death and decay. We just need to understand it.

April 5th, 2025 12:02

Weeping
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 5th, 2025 10:18

Weeping
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful and poignant with powerful imagery and metaphors.

April 5th, 2025 06:54

Weeping
Teddy.15 said:

Maintenance, is vital in almost everything. This is beautiful, emotions a rife and a picture that tells a million stories ๐ŸŒน


April 5th, 2025 05:56

Weeping
arqios said:

For some reason it joined with a moving image of the apple ๐Ÿ falling beneath the tree ๐ŸŒณโ€ฆ very moving๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

April 5th, 2025 05:34

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Goldfinch60 said:

We each form our own faith in our own ways soren.

Andy

April 5th, 2025 01:22

A grip too tight
shadowbones said:

I like the iron glove line

April 4th, 2025 23:16

Hands that grasp
Courtnie McKern said:

Nicely written

April 4th, 2025 20:04

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Profound, my friend. In this I see a wisdom often absent from most discussions on science and religion, often treated as if one is familiar and superior and the other foreign and primitive. Any who are classically trained, however, understand that theology, just like biology or physiology, is one of many schools of science. It is only until more recently that we\'ve limited the word science to mean \"the natural sciences\". Still, all of the sciences, while unique and distinct, do intersect at points and places. And each has their place and wisdom to impart. Even \"dead\" religions and theologies have much to teach us about ourselves, if nothing else. No science, therefore, is foreign to the other, no matter how much it may seem so. In essence, there\'s science in religion and religion in science, both roads lead to deeper human understanding, if harnessed by the right people in the right ways. If not...well, we\'ve all seen the consequences of that both in science and religion. Anywho, this poem has teeth and they really tear through many myths. It doesn\'t take a side, it just presents the view. I love it. Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 4th, 2025 17:50

Sigh of a storm
falcon_mn said:

I read several of your poems.
Words are chosen and set like artisans decorate their clay pots. With patience and oassion.
I like descriptions of the nature.
Someone who observe the nature with passion can send a message to readers and place the moment of nature play into their minds.
That is a gift
Thanks for sharing your poems and thank you for the comments you give on my poems.

April 4th, 2025 15:53

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
orchidee said:

I grow a beard, so I am in disguise to KP! lol.

April 4th, 2025 10:08

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Mutley Ravishes said:

I love the title! I need to read the poem again. I\'m just too tired to absorb it fully today.

April 4th, 2025 08:03

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Poetic Licence said:

The lines are wonderful, connecting two things I have little knowledge of in one write, science and religion, I would say there is some of each in each, was a very enjoyable read

April 4th, 2025 06:22

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
arqios said:

Wow. Thatโ€™s the way sentences are created! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

April 4th, 2025 05:21

Science in a Nazarene\'s hair
Teddy.15 said:

So very powerful, two subjects science and religion that should never go together and you do it perfectly ๐ŸŒน

April 4th, 2025 04:39

Child innocence
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren, the world has certainly turned into a darker place in our lives.

Andy

April 4th, 2025 01:14



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