Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Depends
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, questions that many do ask that have no answers.
Andy
April 6th, 2024 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren, questions that many do ask that have no answers.
Andy
April 6th, 2024 00:38
Depends
Teddy.15 said:
You have turned the soul inside out my friend. Incredibly provoking. ๐น
April 5th, 2024 16:14
Teddy.15 said:
You have turned the soul inside out my friend. Incredibly provoking. ๐น
April 5th, 2024 16:14
Depends
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
For me - will my day be good? Depends - if I see KP or not! lol.
April 5th, 2024 10:39
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
For me - will my day be good? Depends - if I see KP or not! lol.
April 5th, 2024 10:39
Reflection of a whisper
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that vision change to one of hope and love.
Andy
April 5th, 2024 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that vision change to one of hope and love.
Andy
April 5th, 2024 01:07
Reflection of a whisper
Teddy.15 said:
Oh this is truly stunning I\'m overwhelmed by this the imagery the meaning just stunning, I particularly love this line
Lacrimal rains pours ..... Tears just beautiful. Kudos dear sorrenbarret ๐น
April 4th, 2024 12:30
Teddy.15 said:
Oh this is truly stunning I\'m overwhelmed by this the imagery the meaning just stunning, I particularly love this line
Lacrimal rains pours ..... Tears just beautiful. Kudos dear sorrenbarret ๐น
April 4th, 2024 12:30
A one way street
Bella Shepard said:
The selfless heart recognizes need in others, before the self. To truly love, is to give, and in giving find the life worth living. I love your last line, I love the whole package. Increcible!
April 4th, 2024 08:21
Bella Shepard said:
The selfless heart recognizes need in others, before the self. To truly love, is to give, and in giving find the life worth living. I love your last line, I love the whole package. Increcible!
April 4th, 2024 08:21
Reflection of a whisper
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery in this poem of a doomed love, and the last word seems to beg a question. Incredible words my friend.
April 4th, 2024 08:08
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery in this poem of a doomed love, and the last word seems to beg a question. Incredible words my friend.
April 4th, 2024 08:08
Reflection of a whisper
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Ain\'t no double meanings with KP. She says - it\'s about all she says - is \'Botox is botox, and nothing else, and I must have it more, more, more!\' heehee.
April 4th, 2024 08:03
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
Ain\'t no double meanings with KP. She says - it\'s about all she says - is \'Botox is botox, and nothing else, and I must have it more, more, more!\' heehee.
April 4th, 2024 08:03
A one way street
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
It\'s a one-way street with KP, to be sure. The street is called \'Me, me, me\' - that\'s KP who is \'me\'. lol.
April 3rd, 2024 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
It\'s a one-way street with KP, to be sure. The street is called \'Me, me, me\' - that\'s KP who is \'me\'. lol.
April 3rd, 2024 02:45
A one way street
Teddy.15 said:
One way streets I\'ve had mine in my lifetime, lucky I was bright enough to close the book. I\'ve read this so many times dear sorenbarret, it\'s absolutely beautiful it breathes such power, one has to love and respect one\'s self I will never choose one sided love over my dignity. So truly brilliant. Inspired as always sir. ๐น
April 3rd, 2024 02:32
Teddy.15 said:
One way streets I\'ve had mine in my lifetime, lucky I was bright enough to close the book. I\'ve read this so many times dear sorenbarret, it\'s absolutely beautiful it breathes such power, one has to love and respect one\'s self I will never choose one sided love over my dignity. So truly brilliant. Inspired as always sir. ๐น
April 3rd, 2024 02:32
A one way street
Goldfinch60 said:
When that one you love is found and you ae loved back as I am life is wonderful.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
When that one you love is found and you ae loved back as I am life is wonderful.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:13
A one way street
Doggerel Dave said:
\"To give more than all that you find\" Is, I feel a good starting point for a perhaps partial answer to a definition of \'love\' as a concept, Soren. Far too many of the poems I found here (or this was so until I gave up) seemed to be seeking to be loved....on what grounds?
Your piece is full of good questions.
April 2nd, 2024 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
\"To give more than all that you find\" Is, I feel a good starting point for a perhaps partial answer to a definition of \'love\' as a concept, Soren. Far too many of the poems I found here (or this was so until I gave up) seemed to be seeking to be loved....on what grounds?
Your piece is full of good questions.
April 2nd, 2024 18:33
Visions of not
Bobby O said:
A bent line is shortest and a funnel is wherever we dance. I love this. I donโt yet no why but maybe thatโs the special element , I keep going back
March 21st, 2024 07:09
Bobby O said:
A bent line is shortest and a funnel is wherever we dance. I love this. I donโt yet no why but maybe thatโs the special element , I keep going back
March 21st, 2024 07:09
Up mine
Teddy.15 said:
Up yours? LoL this is fabulous I feel like this most days. This is so wonderful , hey I\'m one of those who see the funny side of everything, Italians don\'t really get it though. ๐น Fabulous one of my new favourite faves of yours lol ๐
March 20th, 2024 07:20
Teddy.15 said:
Up yours? LoL this is fabulous I feel like this most days. This is so wonderful , hey I\'m one of those who see the funny side of everything, Italians don\'t really get it though. ๐น Fabulous one of my new favourite faves of yours lol ๐
March 20th, 2024 07:20
Up mine
Bragee said:
Nobody can successfully ridicule one laughs at himself first
March 19th, 2024 23:30
Bragee said:
Nobody can successfully ridicule one laughs at himself first
March 19th, 2024 23:30
Visions of not
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
We are never doing nothing, in one sense. We are at least breathing, if doing nothing else.
Well, I was breathing the last time I checked. How about you?! lol.
March 19th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
We are never doing nothing, in one sense. We are at least breathing, if doing nothing else.
Well, I was breathing the last time I checked. How about you?! lol.
March 19th, 2024 02:57
Visions of not
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing is what we see
A mirror of nonexistence
We live in painted clouds of illusion
A bent line is the shortest distance
My dear sorrenbarret kudos. Such poetic power throughout. ๐น
March 19th, 2024 02:05
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing is what we see
A mirror of nonexistence
We live in painted clouds of illusion
A bent line is the shortest distance
My dear sorrenbarret kudos. Such poetic power throughout. ๐น
March 19th, 2024 02:05
Visions of not
Doggerel Dave said:
You are making it all up, Soren....๐
With my inability to fully appreciate metaphor - I can still agree/endorse your first three lines. You cracked it then, as far as I\'m concerned.
March 18th, 2024 16:20
Doggerel Dave said:
You are making it all up, Soren....๐
With my inability to fully appreciate metaphor - I can still agree/endorse your first three lines. You cracked it then, as far as I\'m concerned.
March 18th, 2024 16:20
Yellow
orchidee said:
I don\'t like yellow (I do like it really). I looked for yellow things but tripped on a banana skin! lol (Did I?).
March 18th, 2024 03:27
orchidee said:
I don\'t like yellow (I do like it really). I looked for yellow things but tripped on a banana skin! lol (Did I?).
March 18th, 2024 03:27
Yellow
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, the colour yellow, supposed to bring happiness and sunshine, yet for me, my most unfavourable colour. Your poem is beautiful and truly appreciate that deep yellow ๐
March 18th, 2024 03:11
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, the colour yellow, supposed to bring happiness and sunshine, yet for me, my most unfavourable colour. Your poem is beautiful and truly appreciate that deep yellow ๐
March 18th, 2024 03:11
Time squozen
Teddy.15 said:
A dark reality beautiful and you too have invented a new word? squozen
wonderful Dear sorrenbarret ๐น
March 15th, 2024 01:47
Teddy.15 said:
A dark reality beautiful and you too have invented a new word? squozen
wonderful Dear sorrenbarret ๐น
March 15th, 2024 01:47
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