Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A parent\'s burden
L. B. Mek said:
even reading your relationship disharmony, hopefully only momentary
is it wrong
I\'m still jealous, you\'ve been granted
the wondrous privilege of parenthood...
not all of us are so lucky my wise friend
remember that, next time you sigh
🍻
August 25th, 2023 01:06
L. B. Mek said:
even reading your relationship disharmony, hopefully only momentary
is it wrong
I\'m still jealous, you\'ve been granted
the wondrous privilege of parenthood...
not all of us are so lucky my wise friend
remember that, next time you sigh
🍻
August 25th, 2023 01:06
The seasons of a life
L. B. Mek said:
\'a small wooden mining house weathered white\'
\'my father’s face appears in my mirror
what I once feared now grows nearer
the snows of age in my hair today\'
genuine tears in my eyes
I am a witness to your bravery, dear Poet
this is my favourite of all your brilliant poems, cherished friend
thank you! stay strong
\'\'The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.\'\'
Robert Frost
August 25th, 2023 01:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'a small wooden mining house weathered white\'
\'my father’s face appears in my mirror
what I once feared now grows nearer
the snows of age in my hair today\'
genuine tears in my eyes
I am a witness to your bravery, dear Poet
this is my favourite of all your brilliant poems, cherished friend
thank you! stay strong
\'\'The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.\'\'
Robert Frost
August 25th, 2023 01:02
Awakening
L. B. Mek said:
\'Here the inverted solar pendulum oscillates, swinging its refining forge to its peak, pouring molten gold from it\'s crucible.\'
\'His repose reveals the hour when the stitching of the clouds are rent asunder, spilling, from those pockets of the milky way\'
(just a privilege to share this inking journey with you
watching your artform evolve
!!!BRILLIANT!!!)
I read and learn wise Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Here the inverted solar pendulum oscillates, swinging its refining forge to its peak, pouring molten gold from it\'s crucible.\'
\'His repose reveals the hour when the stitching of the clouds are rent asunder, spilling, from those pockets of the milky way\'
(just a privilege to share this inking journey with you
watching your artform evolve
!!!BRILLIANT!!!)
I read and learn wise Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:56
The Old Brick Walkway
L. B. Mek said:
\'weeds break from cracks\'
such vivid imagery
enjoyed how you kept the same image theme all through the poem
great skill, a great write
thank you! dear Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'weeds break from cracks\'
such vivid imagery
enjoyed how you kept the same image theme all through the poem
great skill, a great write
thank you! dear Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:53
Where it all began
orchidee said:
I don\'t know some of these guys - Vulcan, Tiamat, etc.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi! lol.
August 24th, 2023 14:07
orchidee said:
I don\'t know some of these guys - Vulcan, Tiamat, etc.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi! lol.
August 24th, 2023 14:07
Where it all began
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! My head is reeling from the very scope of this masterpiece. The richness and texture all consuming with every stroke of the masters brush, for it becomes a sensory experience as he draws such imagery from his palette. Brilliant!
August 24th, 2023 10:48
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! My head is reeling from the very scope of this masterpiece. The richness and texture all consuming with every stroke of the masters brush, for it becomes a sensory experience as he draws such imagery from his palette. Brilliant!
August 24th, 2023 10:48
Where it all began
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review and kind words
August 24th, 2023 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review and kind words
August 24th, 2023 07:32
Where it all began
Doggerel Dave said:
The primordial soup becomes more textured - words as rich as the reality must have been.
Thanks Soren.
August 24th, 2023 07:28
Doggerel Dave said:
The primordial soup becomes more textured - words as rich as the reality must have been.
Thanks Soren.
August 24th, 2023 07:28
A parent\'s burden
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, our children are our life.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, our children are our life.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 01:06
A parent\'s burden
Bella Shepard said:
No matter how old they are, the tug of the heart string that connects them to you is unbreakable, expressed so beautifully in this poem. This one is very special, thank you.
August 22nd, 2023 11:23
Bella Shepard said:
No matter how old they are, the tug of the heart string that connects them to you is unbreakable, expressed so beautifully in this poem. This one is very special, thank you.
August 22nd, 2023 11:23
A parent\'s burden
sorenbarrett said:
If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you won\'t have to have an automatic ball return. Thanks for the review Orchi
August 22nd, 2023 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you won\'t have to have an automatic ball return. Thanks for the review Orchi
August 22nd, 2023 09:37
A parent\'s burden
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I cannot divorce KP - boohoo! She\'s got the divorce papers somewhere, but she has locked this ball and chain on my leg, and thrown away the key. What mad adventures KP and I have! lol.
August 22nd, 2023 09:23
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I cannot divorce KP - boohoo! She\'s got the divorce papers somewhere, but she has locked this ball and chain on my leg, and thrown away the key. What mad adventures KP and I have! lol.
August 22nd, 2023 09:23
The seasons of a life
Bella Shepard said:
I murmured these words as I read the beautifully flowing lines, and they touched me so profoundly. Sweet, enduring memories that are etched indelibly on the heart. You made my day, thank you!
August 20th, 2023 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
I murmured these words as I read the beautifully flowing lines, and they touched me so profoundly. Sweet, enduring memories that are etched indelibly on the heart. You made my day, thank you!
August 20th, 2023 13:09
The seasons of a life
jarcher54 said:
Breathtaking and lovely in its modesty and packed with allusions that trigger the reader\'s imagination and memory. Very little commentary, just the flow of the narrative and the universal humanity and vulnerability shared at the end. Wonderful!
August 20th, 2023 11:05
jarcher54 said:
Breathtaking and lovely in its modesty and packed with allusions that trigger the reader\'s imagination and memory. Very little commentary, just the flow of the narrative and the universal humanity and vulnerability shared at the end. Wonderful!
August 20th, 2023 11:05
Awakening
Neville said:
a captivating tale so well poured into a poetic form ..
and subsequently thoroughly enjoyed ..................... Neville
August 18th, 2023 04:40
Neville said:
a captivating tale so well poured into a poetic form ..
and subsequently thoroughly enjoyed ..................... Neville
August 18th, 2023 04:40
The Old Brick Walkway
Caring dove said:
It wasn’t useless .. it helped someone else . A great writing I like your words ))
August 17th, 2023 23:58
Caring dove said:
It wasn’t useless .. it helped someone else . A great writing I like your words ))
August 17th, 2023 23:58
Awakening
jarcher54 said:
PS check for typos... descent, it\'s... but yes the last line is breathtaking.
August 17th, 2023 23:37
jarcher54 said:
PS check for typos... descent, it\'s... but yes the last line is breathtaking.
August 17th, 2023 23:37
Awakening
jarcher54 said:
Bigguy nailed it... a lot of modern verse is so stuffed with images and unexpected words it has little clear meaning or tone... this is mesmerizing and coherent and so sonorous it\'s perfect. I\'m saving this one.
August 17th, 2023 23:33
jarcher54 said:
Bigguy nailed it... a lot of modern verse is so stuffed with images and unexpected words it has little clear meaning or tone... this is mesmerizing and coherent and so sonorous it\'s perfect. I\'m saving this one.
August 17th, 2023 23:33
Awakening
Bella Shepard said:
The stunning imagery of each line fills my senses to the brim, in this beautiful poem. \"cobwebs of childhood dreams, sewn into pillowcase clouds, drifting on an upended sapphire sea of memories\", I love this so much. Your closing line captures it all dear friend, this is breathtaking!
August 17th, 2023 10:43
Bella Shepard said:
The stunning imagery of each line fills my senses to the brim, in this beautiful poem. \"cobwebs of childhood dreams, sewn into pillowcase clouds, drifting on an upended sapphire sea of memories\", I love this so much. Your closing line captures it all dear friend, this is breathtaking!
August 17th, 2023 10:43
The Old Brick Walkway
Neville said:
seems like the writing is on the wall ..
August 16th, 2023 12:42
Neville said:
seems like the writing is on the wall ..
August 16th, 2023 12:42
The Old Brick Walkway
Goldfinch60 said:
That walkway is from your past soren and it has led you to the wonderful life that you now have.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That walkway is from your past soren and it has led you to the wonderful life that you now have.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 02:14
The Old Brick Walkway
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this, Soren - fate of your walkway, the fate of the universe.....
August 15th, 2023 07:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this, Soren - fate of your walkway, the fate of the universe.....
August 15th, 2023 07:25
The Old Brick Walkway
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
There\'s a row about a \'wonky pub\' being demolished. New owners didn\'t care about it or its history.
August 15th, 2023 07:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
There\'s a row about a \'wonky pub\' being demolished. New owners didn\'t care about it or its history.
August 15th, 2023 07:19
Progress?
Bella Shepard said:
You have given us a most accurate tableau of technology superseding our humanity, in perfect verse. Every line rings so true, you would think that the warning bell would wake us up, but when you wear earplugs you never hear it. Hats off my friend, for such an incredible write.
August 13th, 2023 14:07
Bella Shepard said:
You have given us a most accurate tableau of technology superseding our humanity, in perfect verse. Every line rings so true, you would think that the warning bell would wake us up, but when you wear earplugs you never hear it. Hats off my friend, for such an incredible write.
August 13th, 2023 14:07
The Great Pretender
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to bring this topic into the arena of general speculation with your usual polish, Soren.
Here’s my take on this subject: AI will bring great change, and some of this will be good: searching, hunting selecting from massive data sets in medicine, to name just one discipline. Doubtless it will take over (and do better than) many human driven processes (job loss). In the wrong hands….and so on.
But become ‘more intelligent than\'…and take over…rule us.. just BS – The solution? PTP, Pull The Plug.
August 11th, 2023 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to bring this topic into the arena of general speculation with your usual polish, Soren.
Here’s my take on this subject: AI will bring great change, and some of this will be good: searching, hunting selecting from massive data sets in medicine, to name just one discipline. Doubtless it will take over (and do better than) many human driven processes (job loss). In the wrong hands….and so on.
But become ‘more intelligent than\'…and take over…rule us.. just BS – The solution? PTP, Pull The Plug.
August 11th, 2023 19:09
The Great Pretender
Bobby O said:
It sure is a scary plot that lies before us to on over , except it’s not a book or movie, it’s literally all the marbles. Nice write good read
August 11th, 2023 14:32
Bobby O said:
It sure is a scary plot that lies before us to on over , except it’s not a book or movie, it’s literally all the marbles. Nice write good read
August 11th, 2023 14:32
The Great Pretender
orchidee said:
I\'m half-human, half guinea-pig, so I say. We\'ve had different piggies for over 20 years now, continually! lol.
August 11th, 2023 11:24
orchidee said:
I\'m half-human, half guinea-pig, so I say. We\'ve had different piggies for over 20 years now, continually! lol.
August 11th, 2023 11:24
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