Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Wake of a muse
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Wake of a muse
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Wake of a muse
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
Between heartbeats
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Wake of a muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Wake of a muse
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Wake of a muse
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Between heartbeats
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Wake of a muse
arqios said:
That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
Between heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Between heartbeats
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! 👍
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! 🏆
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! 👍
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! 🏆
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
The muse\'s dirge
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
Between heartbeats
David Wakeling said:
Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent
January 22nd, 2025 19:33
David Wakeling said:
Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent
January 22nd, 2025 19:33
Between heartbeats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Between heartbeats
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 🖌️
of natures fine art!! 👏
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! 🏆
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 🖌️
of natures fine art!! 👏
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! 🏆
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
Nature\'s poem
Salvia.S said:
Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!
January 21st, 2025 20:25
Salvia.S said:
Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!
January 21st, 2025 20:25
Nature\'s poem
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Nature is peaceful as is this write
January 21st, 2025 19:33
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Nature is peaceful as is this write
January 21st, 2025 19:33
Nature\'s poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:28
Nature\'s poem
arqios said:
This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:54
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