Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dinner with an old friend
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I feed KP with food from the sewers. Urgh! lol.
January 25th, 2025 03:48
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I feed KP with food from the sewers. Urgh! lol.
January 25th, 2025 03:48
Deflowered
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the things we see in our lives soren we learn more.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the things we see in our lives soren we learn more.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:54
Wake of a muse
Cassie58 said:
When the muse is with you, how great that can feel. Mine is lazy and I have far more scribbles half started than I’ve ever posted. This reminds me how I can start with a couple of good lines only for them to descend into cast offs. Nothing cast off here sorenbarrett. Some great imagery.
January 24th, 2025 17:03
Cassie58 said:
When the muse is with you, how great that can feel. Mine is lazy and I have far more scribbles half started than I’ve ever posted. This reminds me how I can start with a couple of good lines only for them to descend into cast offs. Nothing cast off here sorenbarrett. Some great imagery.
January 24th, 2025 17:03
Deflowered
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is powerful.The fight between Nature and the senses.Nature often wins.Well done
January 24th, 2025 16:01
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is powerful.The fight between Nature and the senses.Nature often wins.Well done
January 24th, 2025 16:01
Deflowered
Bella Shepard said:
You extoll nature\'s rapture in breathtaking words of surrender. Exquisite!!!
January 24th, 2025 10:51
Bella Shepard said:
You extoll nature\'s rapture in breathtaking words of surrender. Exquisite!!!
January 24th, 2025 10:51
Deflowered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone with major seasonal allergies, I started to sniffle reading this one! Just glad you chose roses over lilac! 🤣 Well done, my friend. Your descriptions are second to none! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone with major seasonal allergies, I started to sniffle reading this one! Just glad you chose roses over lilac! 🤣 Well done, my friend. Your descriptions are second to none! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:09
Deflowered
Poetic Licence said:
I find it refreshing to read a piece of poetry that pushes against expected limits of poetry, i enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
I find it refreshing to read a piece of poetry that pushes against expected limits of poetry, i enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:21
Deflowered
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! 🌹🌹🌹
January 24th, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the exhilaration is beyond description but you have done so in poem! 🌹🌹🌹
January 24th, 2025 06:16
Deflowered
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. 🌻😎👍
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Neville said:
This is quite simply exquisite my friend .. all my senses have been aroused & then some .. if you would kindly excuse the pun .. 🌻😎👍
January 24th, 2025 05:30
Deflowered
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. 🌹
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Teddy.15 said:
You have uncovered the rose and it\'s mystical beauty my dear friend. Like everything in our lives time takes its toll. 🌹
January 24th, 2025 04:41
Deflowered
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
Good write again SB. I admit I don\'t get some of the more cryptic meanings in people\'s poems, but don\'t let that stop you - or anyone else!
January 24th, 2025 04:25
Wake of a muse
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all rise in time soren and be together in a wonderful place of love and peace.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:14
Wake of a muse
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct,
a most captivating
and emotional write!!
Though your muse became
flaming clouds of smoke. 🔥
It will return,
So don\'t give up the fight! 🙏👍
Great read thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:25
Wake of a muse
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, you certainly woke me, I could smell the smouldering lines. Wonderful. 🌹 Love your title
January 23rd, 2025 12:27
Wake of a muse
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love the imagery, it makes me very pleased.
January 23rd, 2025 12:23
Between heartbeats
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. I love the way this flows. Great work.
January 23rd, 2025 10:30
Wake of a muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not seem like it because I keep publishing) have been muse wakes for me. I go, I pay my respects, I try to write something...anything...cannot do it. Depression certainly does not help. Anywho, if this poem is the resurrected \"trash\", I\'ll become a raccoon any day, my friend. This was superbly written! Well done! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 08:56
Wake of a muse
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines here Soren. It almost feels like you are writing backwards, if that makes sense?!
January 23rd, 2025 06:17
Wake of a muse
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Poetic Licence said:
Wow a quite hard heavy piece today, hopefully something good will come out off the resurected trash, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:48
Between heartbeats
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Neville said:
I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:36
Wake of a muse
arqios said:
That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:09
Between heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Between heartbeats
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! 👍
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! 🏆
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! 👍
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! 🏆
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:58
The muse\'s dirge
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy
January 22nd, 2025 22:50
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