Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ma an me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering a phone that never rings. Grief lives in the spaces between your words. Stunning and sorrowful.
May 22nd, 2025 04:10
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering a phone that never rings. Grief lives in the spaces between your words. Stunning and sorrowful.
May 22nd, 2025 04:10
Ma an me
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like \"The Real Housewives of the Appalachians\" Just kidding.An enjoyable fun accent and poem
May 22nd, 2025 04:03
David Wakeling said:
This sounds like \"The Real Housewives of the Appalachians\" Just kidding.An enjoyable fun accent and poem
May 22nd, 2025 04:03
Unknown greatness
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many good things that are just never seen. Some of my best poems are never read, my best artwork never seen, the best parts of me hidden away...
May 21st, 2025 22:37
NinjaGirl said:
There are so many good things that are just never seen. Some of my best poems are never read, my best artwork never seen, the best parts of me hidden away...
May 21st, 2025 22:37
Empathy
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like this piece. We should all have empathy for others. Empathy lets people know that they are not alone in their pain. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 21st, 2025 19:40
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like this piece. We should all have empathy for others. Empathy lets people know that they are not alone in their pain. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 21st, 2025 19:40
Unknown greatness
orchidee said:
Shakey chose some daft names for people, and verges on daftness at times I think. Not all his sayings are wise. Not that I\'ve read his Complete Works! lol.
I wish KP never saw the light of day, but she does. She never hibernates. heehee.
May 21st, 2025 11:47
orchidee said:
Shakey chose some daft names for people, and verges on daftness at times I think. Not all his sayings are wise. Not that I\'ve read his Complete Works! lol.
I wish KP never saw the light of day, but she does. She never hibernates. heehee.
May 21st, 2025 11:47
Unknown greatness
Teddy.15 said:
On reading your title I imagined this could be about me! 🤣 Indeed I too reflect on the fact that those greats had a platform even if for some it was in their afterlife. Wow this is a wonderful piece 👏 🌹
May 21st, 2025 10:30
Teddy.15 said:
On reading your title I imagined this could be about me! 🤣 Indeed I too reflect on the fact that those greats had a platform even if for some it was in their afterlife. Wow this is a wonderful piece 👏 🌹
May 21st, 2025 10:30
Unknown greatness
arqios said:
A pain I can hardly describe has been lifted. You know and see and feel 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
A pain I can hardly describe has been lifted. You know and see and feel 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 06:12
Unknown greatness
Poetic Licence said:
Straight to the heart, if anything in life is never seen it just fades away as if it was never there, such a waste, nicely written and enjoyed
May 21st, 2025 05:01
Poetic Licence said:
Straight to the heart, if anything in life is never seen it just fades away as if it was never there, such a waste, nicely written and enjoyed
May 21st, 2025 05:01
Unknown greatness
Salvia.S said:
Your poem says a lot in just a few lines—it\'s a powerful reminder that even the greatest things can be forgotten if no one sees them. Simple, deep, and true.
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Salvia.S said:
Your poem says a lot in just a few lines—it\'s a powerful reminder that even the greatest things can be forgotten if no one sees them. Simple, deep, and true.
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Unknown greatness
David Wakeling said:
A sad fact but true. So many great works never see the light of day.A well constructed piece
May 21st, 2025 03:56
David Wakeling said:
A sad fact but true. So many great works never see the light of day.A well constructed piece
May 21st, 2025 03:56
Empathy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we just need to be aware of all that you have mentioned and try and deal with ot in a positive and kind manner.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we just need to be aware of all that you have mentioned and try and deal with ot in a positive and kind manner.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:57
Floral memories
NafisaSB said:
sight, smell and sound - these are what attract us - and yes the olfactory nerves seem to seek out each beautiful flower in your poem
well done
May 21st, 2025 00:20
NafisaSB said:
sight, smell and sound - these are what attract us - and yes the olfactory nerves seem to seek out each beautiful flower in your poem
well done
May 21st, 2025 00:20
Empathy
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Empathy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Empathy
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Salvia.S said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Empathy
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Empathy
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
Empathy
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
Empathy
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
Floral memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful floral words soren, may they always bring joy to all.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful floral words soren, may they always bring joy to all.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:19
Floral memories
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my comments on the poem \"Cobra chemistry 2\" by Mutley Ravishes. Thanks.
May 19th, 2025 22:13
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my comments on the poem \"Cobra chemistry 2\" by Mutley Ravishes. Thanks.
May 19th, 2025 22:13
Old closet
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have a Closet like that . Very good.
May 19th, 2025 19:04
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have a Closet like that . Very good.
May 19th, 2025 19:04
Floral memories
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s lovely that scent has so much influence on our memory. And lovelier still the garden planted of lessons, memories, and hopes.
May 19th, 2025 12:09
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s lovely that scent has so much influence on our memory. And lovelier still the garden planted of lessons, memories, and hopes.
May 19th, 2025 12:09
Floral memories
Soman Ragavan said:
Clearly you have a good grasp of flowers\' names and their characteristics. Good rhyming as well.
May 19th, 2025 11:02
Soman Ragavan said:
Clearly you have a good grasp of flowers\' names and their characteristics. Good rhyming as well.
May 19th, 2025 11:02
Floral memories
orchidee said:
This is a good write in fact, SB, even a good olfactory write!
May 19th, 2025 09:26
orchidee said:
This is a good write in fact, SB, even a good olfactory write!
May 19th, 2025 09:26
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