Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Homographs
Neville said:



Most intriguing and I like very much .. a pondersome poem for more in-depth consideration later methinks .. well me knows actually .. Neville

January 20th, 2025 04:45

Homographs
Teddy.15 said:

You have used your poetic licence on this one I love your play on words dear sorrenbarret a superb and very unique piece.🌹

January 20th, 2025 04:29

Wound
Teddy.15 said:

My dear sorrenbarret, this is immensely powerful I can see all your imagery and even smell the meat. Your title is especially meaningful to the emotions in this most gracious poem. 🌹

January 20th, 2025 04:26

Wound
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren, sometimes those memories are hard to let go but remember there is always a better day tomorrow.

Andy

January 20th, 2025 02:44

Wound
Dan Williams said:

Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to where it begins\". Rings of edgar Poe. Very nice.

January 20th, 2025 01:06

Wound
Thad Wilk said:

A powerful poem,
Poignant and heart wrenching! 😒
I can feel the pain and loss
between each skillfully
expressed poetic line!!! πŸ‘
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 19th, 2025 21:35

Wound
NinjaGirl said:

no matter how deep the wound, it will always scar. scars may hurt occasionally, but they remind us of the power we had to heal

January 19th, 2025 16:40

Wound
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Different wounds lead to different outcomes. The most minor are not even noticeable over time; however, the larger the wound, the longer the healing time, and the less likely they will go away, whether they end up healing as scars or become festering wounds that can lead to serious illness and death. Well done, my friend. This is thought-provoking, for sure. And completely visceral imagery. This poem is felt more than it is read. Wonderful job! πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

January 19th, 2025 16:11

Wound
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

January 19th, 2025 13:26

Wound
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 19th, 2025 12:10

Wound
Bella Shepard said:

We do indeed own our histories, and sometimes the most difficult part is to embrace the mistakes of the past, for the negative often seem more powerful than the positive in retrospect. This is a beautiful poem of self reflection, incredibly versed.

January 19th, 2025 11:18

Gone
Salvia.S said:

Hauntingly beautiful, a poignant reflection on the fleeting nature of love and desire.

January 19th, 2025 10:22

Wound
Cassie58 said:

A somber write. There are wounds that scratch the surface and then there are those that carve deep into the flesh leaving scars. Some amazing description here. The scars may never heal and act as a reminder of what has been and gone. Brilliantly conveyed sorenbarrett.

January 19th, 2025 09:18

Wound
David Wakeling said:

This certainly packs a punch. There is a lot of anger here and hurt that hasn\'t healed.It is very troubling.Well written indeed

January 19th, 2025 06:29

Wound
Neville said:



I think healed or not, they are here to stay and should serve as a reminder of what is and once was .. it simply doesn\'t do to forget .. such great poetry makes one both wonder and think .. Neville

January 19th, 2025 05:54

Wound
arqios said:

In some real ways wounds don’t ever go away. Some things are hard to put to words but then have to be voiced out.

January 19th, 2025 04:28

Tequila
Goldfinch60 said:



January 19th, 2025 02:12

Tequila
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, I have never tasted Tequila in my life.

Andy

January 19th, 2025 02:11

Tequila
Thad Wilk said:

Fantabulous poem
a tasty treat
indeed to read today! πŸ’―
Made me wanna tequila
Or two, to pass the time away!! 🍸 🍸
Best regards ✌️ 🍸 Thad

January 18th, 2025 22:49

Tequila
NinjaGirl said:

Ha ha! So you do take requests... good job!

January 18th, 2025 14:15

Tequila
Tristan Robert Lange said:

One tequila, two tequila, three tequila...floor! LOL! Love this poem, my friend! Bottom\'s up! πŸ₯ƒ (they need to come up with a shot glass emoji, just saying. 🀣). Here\'s to Teddy for the challenge! 🍻

January 18th, 2025 11:16

Tequila
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 18th, 2025 10:18

Tequila
arqios said:

Oh, I say.. this was a challenge, not your typical flair.. one tequila, two tequila, three tequila, FLOOR! History can be so much fun and poetry even β€œfunner!”

January 18th, 2025 06:49

Tequila
Teddy.15 said:

Applause, applause, applause, I felt we needed to be cheered up, a bit of a sad week on MPS but you have surpassed any expectation I could have on the subject, if anyone could write about tequila it would be you, thank you for taking up this challenge that was purely to cheer us up and you most certainly have, superb and now I wish we could have a Latin dance my dear friend sorrenbarret 🍹 biggest amount of hugs from Italy to you dearest of friends. ❀️

January 18th, 2025 06:24

Tequila
Neville said:



You just done good .. I know this stuff you are on about .. made me salivate just thinking about it .. Funnily enough I have never sampled it anywhere other than in Mexico where I drank far too much of it .. Neville

January 18th, 2025 06:08

Tequila
Mutley Ravishes said:

Now I want to drink some Okinawan snake liqor!

January 18th, 2025 06:01

Muddy shoes
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren covering the times before into new times.

Andy

January 18th, 2025 02:22

Muddy shoes
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Clapping!
Wonderfully penned,
short and succinct, and
thought provoking and true! πŸ€”
Great use of metaphor
much enjoyed thank you!!πŸ‘Œ
Best regards ✌️ Thad



January 17th, 2025 20:41

Muddy shoes
NinjaGirl said:

while one can clean mud off a tile floor, it stains the carpet so easily

January 17th, 2025 19:14

Muddy shoes
John Prophet said:

Well done. Nice write…
John


January 17th, 2025 19:09



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