Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Between heartbeats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❤️
January 22nd, 2025 09:17
Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Poetic Licence said:
Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:40
Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Teddy.15 said:
I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹
January 22nd, 2025 05:12
Between heartbeats
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 04:06
Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.
Andy
January 22nd, 2025 02:43
Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 🖌️
of natures fine art!! 👏
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! 🏆
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 🖌️
of natures fine art!! 👏
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! 🏆
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:32
Nature\'s poem
Salvia.S said:
Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!
January 21st, 2025 20:25
Salvia.S said:
Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!
January 21st, 2025 20:25
Nature\'s poem
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Nature is peaceful as is this write
January 21st, 2025 19:33
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Nature is peaceful as is this write
January 21st, 2025 19:33
Nature\'s poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:28
Nature\'s poem
arqios said:
This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 06:54
Nature\'s poem
Teddy.15 said:
Our lives are certainly a poem, and your imagery is extraordinary in beauty love it all but your last stanza is a wow 🌹
January 21st, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
Our lives are certainly a poem, and your imagery is extraordinary in beauty love it all but your last stanza is a wow 🌹
January 21st, 2025 05:55
Nature\'s poem
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in Nature. Well, I know now! lol.
January 21st, 2025 03:51
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in Nature. Well, I know now! lol.
January 21st, 2025 03:51
Homographs
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren giving a great deal to think about.
Andy
January 21st, 2025 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren giving a great deal to think about.
Andy
January 21st, 2025 02:51
Homographs
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever and fun to read. Gotta love those homographs,
January 20th, 2025 19:25
David Wakeling said:
This is very clever and fun to read. Gotta love those homographs,
January 20th, 2025 19:25
Homographs
Thad Wilk said:
Brilliantly penned, 🖊️
very witty indeed!! 👍
Wonderful brevity,
Really enjoyed the read!🥇
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:39
Thad Wilk said:
Brilliantly penned, 🖊️
very witty indeed!! 👍
Wonderful brevity,
Really enjoyed the read!🥇
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:39
Homographs
Cassie58 said:
I had to look up homographs - a new word for me
Intriguing, but I did find alliteration and rhyme and also groupings of words. There is probably much I have missed sorenbarrett. I am hopeless at cryptic stuff:)
January 20th, 2025 17:04
Cassie58 said:
I had to look up homographs - a new word for me
Intriguing, but I did find alliteration and rhyme and also groupings of words. There is probably much I have missed sorenbarrett. I am hopeless at cryptic stuff:)
January 20th, 2025 17:04
Homographs
NinjaGirl said:
Reading this took a minute, and that\'s what makes it so awesome!
January 20th, 2025 10:27
NinjaGirl said:
Reading this took a minute, and that\'s what makes it so awesome!
January 20th, 2025 10:27
Homographs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into poetic form. Well done! 🌹👏 Absolutely loved this! So unique and original, Soren!
January 20th, 2025 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into poetic form. Well done! 🌹👏 Absolutely loved this! So unique and original, Soren!
January 20th, 2025 10:03
Homographs
arqios said:
Such a delightful labyrinthine poem, highlighting the dualities of our language! Almost like decoding a message as well.
January 20th, 2025 07:22
arqios said:
Such a delightful labyrinthine poem, highlighting the dualities of our language! Almost like decoding a message as well.
January 20th, 2025 07:22
Homographs
Neville said:
Most intriguing and I like very much .. a pondersome poem for more in-depth consideration later methinks .. well me knows actually .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:45
Neville said:
Most intriguing and I like very much .. a pondersome poem for more in-depth consideration later methinks .. well me knows actually .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:45
Homographs
Teddy.15 said:
You have used your poetic licence on this one I love your play on words dear sorrenbarret a superb and very unique piece.🌹
January 20th, 2025 04:29
Teddy.15 said:
You have used your poetic licence on this one I love your play on words dear sorrenbarret a superb and very unique piece.🌹
January 20th, 2025 04:29
Wound
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, this is immensely powerful I can see all your imagery and even smell the meat. Your title is especially meaningful to the emotions in this most gracious poem. 🌹
January 20th, 2025 04:26
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, this is immensely powerful I can see all your imagery and even smell the meat. Your title is especially meaningful to the emotions in this most gracious poem. 🌹
January 20th, 2025 04:26
Wound
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, sometimes those memories are hard to let go but remember there is always a better day tomorrow.
Andy
January 20th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, sometimes those memories are hard to let go but remember there is always a better day tomorrow.
Andy
January 20th, 2025 02:44
Wound
Dan Williams said:
Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to where it begins\". Rings of edgar Poe. Very nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:06
Dan Williams said:
Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to where it begins\". Rings of edgar Poe. Very nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:06
Wound
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
Poignant and heart wrenching! 😢
I can feel the pain and loss
between each skillfully
expressed poetic line!!! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:35
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
Poignant and heart wrenching! 😢
I can feel the pain and loss
between each skillfully
expressed poetic line!!! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:35
Wound
NinjaGirl said:
no matter how deep the wound, it will always scar. scars may hurt occasionally, but they remind us of the power we had to heal
January 19th, 2025 16:40
NinjaGirl said:
no matter how deep the wound, it will always scar. scars may hurt occasionally, but they remind us of the power we had to heal
January 19th, 2025 16:40
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