Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Neville said:
this reinforces the view that nothing happens in isolation & that everything is in some way or ways interconnected & likewise influenced ..
August 16th, 2024 10:23
Ripples
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
My poem goes something like:
In muddy waters much sewage is found
And plenty green algae...
All stuff I give KP to eat and drink! heehee.
August 16th, 2024 09:00
Ripples
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, I love your title too. Wonderful imagery and a soothing tone. 🌹
August 16th, 2024 04:56
A taste of honey
Goldfinch60 said:
No never been kissed by a bee but have been kissed many times by my beeautiful lover.
Andy
August 16th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
No never been kissed by a bee but have been kissed many times by my beeautiful lover.
Andy
August 16th, 2024 01:19
Silent colors
Parisab said:
The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….
August 16th, 2024 01:03
Parisab said:
The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….
August 16th, 2024 01:03
Memory the cruelest reward
Dan Williams said:
Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This might be the most optimistic thing ever. Thanks, I needed that.
August 15th, 2024 23:58
Dan Williams said:
Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This might be the most optimistic thing ever. Thanks, I needed that.
August 15th, 2024 23:58
A taste of honey
Dan Williams said:
Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16
Dan Williams said:
Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16
A taste of honey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem is 🐝 the bee’s knees! 🐝 Thank you please! Excellent write! Enjoyed it a lot! A sweet 🍯 and beautiful poetic musing! Bravo!
August 15th, 2024 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem is 🐝 the bee’s knees! 🐝 Thank you please! Excellent write! Enjoyed it a lot! A sweet 🍯 and beautiful poetic musing! Bravo!
August 15th, 2024 22:46
A taste of honey
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
A taste of honey
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
A taste of honey
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
A taste of honey
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
A taste of honey
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
A taste of honey
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly sweet. Did you know, some of the best honey in Europe can be found in Tuscany and indeed on the island of Elba, fun fact. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 03:58
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly sweet. Did you know, some of the best honey in Europe can be found in Tuscany and indeed on the island of Elba, fun fact. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 03:58
A bad rap(tor)?
Dan Williams said:
Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07
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2781 said:
I saw an angel standing in the sun, shouting to all the flying birds in Middle-Heaven, \"Come to the Great Supper of God! Feast on the flesh of kings, captains and champions, horses and their riders. Eat your fill of them all- free and slave, small and great!\"
For wheresoever the carcass is, there the vultures will gather.
August 14th, 2024 21:49
2781 said:
I saw an angel standing in the sun, shouting to all the flying birds in Middle-Heaven, \"Come to the Great Supper of God! Feast on the flesh of kings, captains and champions, horses and their riders. Eat your fill of them all- free and slave, small and great!\"
For wheresoever the carcass is, there the vultures will gather.
August 14th, 2024 21:49
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Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
captivating write! 👍
Intriguing to the
very last bite! 👌
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!! 🦤
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:48
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
captivating write! 👍
Intriguing to the
very last bite! 👌
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!! 🦤
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:48
A bad rap(tor)?
Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Time eroded memories
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
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Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
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Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
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Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
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