Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Teddy.15 said:
Yes, totally in agreement dear Sorenbarret how so beautifully expressed. My son is 10 I feel every bit of this poem he thinks I\'m mean as I don\'t let him have all the technology his friends have I limit it. I only hope one day he will thank me. It\'s hard to.live in today\'s world 🌎❣️
October 1st, 2023 05:36
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, totally in agreement dear Sorenbarret how so beautifully expressed. My son is 10 I feel every bit of this poem he thinks I\'m mean as I don\'t let him have all the technology his friends have I limit it. I only hope one day he will thank me. It\'s hard to.live in today\'s world 🌎❣️
October 1st, 2023 05:36
On the edge of a dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I was taken there as well.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I was taken there as well.
Andy
October 1st, 2023 01:04
On the edge of a dream
Pop64 said:
Aah, this read is magical with its created tone, rhyme and flow as they all weave into the write that provides beauty of the dream. Well done!
September 29th, 2023 05:32
Pop64 said:
Aah, this read is magical with its created tone, rhyme and flow as they all weave into the write that provides beauty of the dream. Well done!
September 29th, 2023 05:32
On the edge of a dream
L. B. Mek said:
on the edge of dreams
where poetic imagery
is delivered exquisite
abundant in each line...
so well written dear Poet
(vividity at its refined finest)
September 29th, 2023 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
on the edge of dreams
where poetic imagery
is delivered exquisite
abundant in each line...
so well written dear Poet
(vividity at its refined finest)
September 29th, 2023 05:12
Blind poet
L. B. Mek said:
Oh this flow, so effortless
Yet punctuated by raw energy
I bet this was a one session write
!Brilliant!
Insightful, vulnerable
commentary
executed
with practised skill!
i Love this!
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
Oh this flow, so effortless
Yet punctuated by raw energy
I bet this was a one session write
!Brilliant!
Insightful, vulnerable
commentary
executed
with practised skill!
i Love this!
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:58
On the edge of a dream
Teddy.15 said:
You took me into my very own dream of reading such poetic verse. Wow wow loved your first stanza for the imagery I do love the clouds, a superb poem. You should definitely take a bow sir. Wonderful.
September 29th, 2023 04:37
Teddy.15 said:
You took me into my very own dream of reading such poetic verse. Wow wow loved your first stanza for the imagery I do love the clouds, a superb poem. You should definitely take a bow sir. Wonderful.
September 29th, 2023 04:37
Mockingbird
Pop64 said:
Then so be it, be a mockingbird and fill our ears with song and eyes with words. Beautiful!
September 28th, 2023 09:03
Pop64 said:
Then so be it, be a mockingbird and fill our ears with song and eyes with words. Beautiful!
September 28th, 2023 09:03
Blind poet
Bobby O said:
I love that last line. It adds a power and calls out the necessity that a humble poet impacts with hallowed status.
September 28th, 2023 00:40
Bobby O said:
I love that last line. It adds a power and calls out the necessity that a humble poet impacts with hallowed status.
September 28th, 2023 00:40
Blind poet
Doggerel Dave said:
You like the challenges (done in different schemes before) None the worse for that, Soren.
September 27th, 2023 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
You like the challenges (done in different schemes before) None the worse for that, Soren.
September 27th, 2023 18:06
Blind poet
Pop64 said:
The travesty is that the poem ended. Subject matter to the poet is many times irrelevant as a poem can take form from a single word, as it then births the subject. But, in retrospect, this write makes perfect sense. Well done!
September 27th, 2023 08:30
Pop64 said:
The travesty is that the poem ended. Subject matter to the poet is many times irrelevant as a poem can take form from a single word, as it then births the subject. But, in retrospect, this write makes perfect sense. Well done!
September 27th, 2023 08:30
Blind poet
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of \'itys\'! lol.
Heehee how about fiendish difficult to rhyme words, like courage, orange, even God? I fit Him in, but rarely at the end of lines of poetry!
And who is Kudos? I\'m talking rubbish now!
September 27th, 2023 05:06
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of \'itys\'! lol.
Heehee how about fiendish difficult to rhyme words, like courage, orange, even God? I fit Him in, but rarely at the end of lines of poetry!
And who is Kudos? I\'m talking rubbish now!
September 27th, 2023 05:06
Blind poet
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry at it\'s finest verse dear Sorenbarret utter beauty and a vision of something we are all blinded by. Kudos sir.
September 27th, 2023 05:03
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry at it\'s finest verse dear Sorenbarret utter beauty and a vision of something we are all blinded by. Kudos sir.
September 27th, 2023 05:03
Between a rock and a hard place
Neville said:
not a good place to be .. wrong place and wrong time .. nature eh who would have it .. a captivating account of true events is hard to beat in whatever form it is delivered .. 10/10 ... Neville
September 26th, 2023 06:53
Neville said:
not a good place to be .. wrong place and wrong time .. nature eh who would have it .. a captivating account of true events is hard to beat in whatever form it is delivered .. 10/10 ... Neville
September 26th, 2023 06:53
Between a rock and a hard place
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words soren, such a moving poem.
Andy
September 26th, 2023 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words soren, such a moving poem.
Andy
September 26th, 2023 01:18
Between a rock and a hard place
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece of poetry. Your last lines had my hairs standing on the back of my neck. Kudos. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 10:40
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece of poetry. Your last lines had my hairs standing on the back of my neck. Kudos. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 10:40
Between a rock and a hard place
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(cherished friend
may i be so bold as to humbly
suggest you revisit
some of Homer\'s Iliad lines
and reflect on how
your poet\'s theme, as been plaguing
humanity, since
the first poet, chose to ink
of life\'s cruelties...)
from (Iliad VI, 403)
\'and the heir apparent\'s firstborn son.
the child Astyanax
thrown from the walls of Troy
as his mother Andromache looks\'
...
may the universe have mercy
on humanity\'s
collective
soiled souls...
September 25th, 2023 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(cherished friend
may i be so bold as to humbly
suggest you revisit
some of Homer\'s Iliad lines
and reflect on how
your poet\'s theme, as been plaguing
humanity, since
the first poet, chose to ink
of life\'s cruelties...)
from (Iliad VI, 403)
\'and the heir apparent\'s firstborn son.
the child Astyanax
thrown from the walls of Troy
as his mother Andromache looks\'
...
may the universe have mercy
on humanity\'s
collective
soiled souls...
September 25th, 2023 06:05
Mockingbird
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So out of this mirror of sound
from poets I covet, I steal a word\'
I so relate!
September 25th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So out of this mirror of sound
from poets I covet, I steal a word\'
I so relate!
September 25th, 2023 03:47
Mockingbird
Goldfinch60 said:
Birds can give us so many different thoughts in our lives with the differences they have soren.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Birds can give us so many different thoughts in our lives with the differences they have soren.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:56
Mockingbird
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked the tenor of your argument, Soren.
Birds, like humans are a pretty diverse lot. For me a tuneful antipodean might include an Australian magpie or a lyrebird. Delinquents dressed in feathers? We have a few.......
September 23rd, 2023 21:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked the tenor of your argument, Soren.
Birds, like humans are a pretty diverse lot. For me a tuneful antipodean might include an Australian magpie or a lyrebird. Delinquents dressed in feathers? We have a few.......
September 23rd, 2023 21:33
Mockingbird
Teddy.15 said:
The crows , would be magpies here they are the ones who apparently steal lol such a gorgeous poem, steal away my friend mockingbirds are most entertaining. 💜
September 23rd, 2023 05:26
Teddy.15 said:
The crows , would be magpies here they are the ones who apparently steal lol such a gorgeous poem, steal away my friend mockingbirds are most entertaining. 💜
September 23rd, 2023 05:26
If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought)
Doggerel Dave said:
I don’t think we have evolved sufficiently to make that kind of choice, Soren.
And the danger of articulating those kind of propositions is that the wrong people might take them up and run with them …Be careful….
September 22nd, 2023 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
I don’t think we have evolved sufficiently to make that kind of choice, Soren.
And the danger of articulating those kind of propositions is that the wrong people might take them up and run with them …Be careful….
September 22nd, 2023 06:15
If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought)
L. B. Mek said:
I ask, my wise friend
where do we curate
a new generation\'s dreams
school rooms
war field bedrooms, or
maybe just maybe
in the hope we imbue, in ink
in that black n white of imagination
.. is that why poetry\'s legacy
outshines, the fallibility of the Poet\'s
voicing Poesy\'s truths
maybe our world too
can finetune an art
from all that divisiveness
and wide eyed ignorance
maybe, by enduringly hopeful words
like yours
oh kind Poet and cherished friend
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
I ask, my wise friend
where do we curate
a new generation\'s dreams
school rooms
war field bedrooms, or
maybe just maybe
in the hope we imbue, in ink
in that black n white of imagination
.. is that why poetry\'s legacy
outshines, the fallibility of the Poet\'s
voicing Poesy\'s truths
maybe our world too
can finetune an art
from all that divisiveness
and wide eyed ignorance
maybe, by enduringly hopeful words
like yours
oh kind Poet and cherished friend
thank you!
September 22nd, 2023 03:59
Have you ever
L. B. Mek said:
God is relative, I find
I like your God
rain scents and natures soothing scenes
a healing love, as an icon Ideal
but by your window
war drums, collide with zealot heartbeats
.. they too speak of a God..
such is Belief, such is Humanity\'s
need to warp, all that once started
with the greatest intentions...
September 22nd, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
God is relative, I find
I like your God
rain scents and natures soothing scenes
a healing love, as an icon Ideal
but by your window
war drums, collide with zealot heartbeats
.. they too speak of a God..
such is Belief, such is Humanity\'s
need to warp, all that once started
with the greatest intentions...
September 22nd, 2023 03:52
All living things
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me dear Poet
I read your words and just couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! for these important and ever timely words)
black nor light
refracted atoms and gases, electron painted
as a façade of identity and skies
we look at a mirror
point at skin tonality, fight to find
differences
us and them mindset
learned behaviour, so as to narrow perspective
we\'re too scared of potential\'s: potential
so we limit horizon to our zip codes
its scary
how childish our adult years become
as children, we run around
light as our rainbow of skip in our heart
never caring of the who, just the act
in their what..
Luther\'s dream, is merely a recollection of our childhood years
but we\'re too stubborn
so we point fingers
and hate at our life\'s mirrors...
wage wars at our kin
Hate, that we recognise as natural
just, so we can belong
to a herd, who would abandon us
the minute we started to limp...
reaching for ghosts
we paint our dreams, into nightmares
make reality a scapegoat for our incredulity\'s belligerent ignorance
September 22nd, 2023 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me dear Poet
I read your words and just couldn\'t help being inspired
thank you! for these important and ever timely words)
black nor light
refracted atoms and gases, electron painted
as a façade of identity and skies
we look at a mirror
point at skin tonality, fight to find
differences
us and them mindset
learned behaviour, so as to narrow perspective
we\'re too scared of potential\'s: potential
so we limit horizon to our zip codes
its scary
how childish our adult years become
as children, we run around
light as our rainbow of skip in our heart
never caring of the who, just the act
in their what..
Luther\'s dream, is merely a recollection of our childhood years
but we\'re too stubborn
so we point fingers
and hate at our life\'s mirrors...
wage wars at our kin
Hate, that we recognise as natural
just, so we can belong
to a herd, who would abandon us
the minute we started to limp...
reaching for ghosts
we paint our dreams, into nightmares
make reality a scapegoat for our incredulity\'s belligerent ignorance
September 22nd, 2023 03:48
If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, Nature is there for us all and compassion helps us see Nature in its true wonder.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren, Nature is there for us all and compassion helps us see Nature in its true wonder.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:58
If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought)
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful subject personally I believe each individual is worth the same as another regardless to richness colour or education or job choice. The world we live in is of greed unfortunately. Ah you make a poetess think deeply. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:16
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful subject personally I believe each individual is worth the same as another regardless to richness colour or education or job choice. The world we live in is of greed unfortunately. Ah you make a poetess think deeply. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:16
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