Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Expectations
Aloo Denish Obiero said:

Wow, what great poem with a powerful message! Indeed societal expectations can weigh you down; and unmet expectations bring untold frustrations

November 4th, 2024 13:09

Dance
Lorenz said:

\"The public hangman dancing the tyburn jig !\'\'
Gruesom story that I have just discovered ...

November 4th, 2024 12:01

Dance
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Theres\' the hymn \'Lord of the dance\'. It\'s balanced, not that life is just some escapism of dance at every step - pun intended there! So olde writers speak of \'the dance of life\'.

November 4th, 2024 10:11

Dance
Teddy.15 said:

During which act? 🀣 Hilarious imagery 🌹

November 4th, 2024 05:27

King of day queen of night
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, the sun and the moon bring such wonders to us.

Andy

November 4th, 2024 02:44

Bear
Thad Wilk said:

🀣🀣
After the first
5 lines I couldn\'t
\"BEAR IT\" 🐻 I had to laugh!
πŸ‘‰ (No pun) ,πŸ‘ˆπŸ˜‚
Thanks fur sharing my friend!
Beast regards ✌️ peace. Thad


November 3rd, 2024 19:43

Birth of a poem
Ladywithaquill said:

Just the right inspiration to write about anything and everything!

November 3rd, 2024 19:15

King of day queen of night
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 3rd, 2024 12:51

King of day queen of night
Lorenz said:

Some lines seem to come from the centuries of Nostradamus !

November 3rd, 2024 11:27

King of day queen of night
Thad Wilk said:

An outstanding poem,
eye pleasing imagery!πŸŒžπŸŒ›
The rhyme, the metaphor,
woven wonderfully!! πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad


November 3rd, 2024 11:09

King of day queen of night
arqios said:

Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Don’t know enough of that science to calculate.

November 3rd, 2024 07:27

King of day queen of night
Teddy.15 said:

One of the finest ever nature poems I\'ve ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret 🌹

November 3rd, 2024 07:10

King of day queen of night
Accidental Poet said:

An interesting read soren. I like it. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

November 3rd, 2024 05:00

King of day queen of night
Neville said:



Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..

November 3rd, 2024 04:39

Birth of a poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems come from so many places in our lives and thoughts soren and always will do.

Andy

November 3rd, 2024 02:18

Birth of a poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem on poetic inspiration my friend. Well done!!!

November 3rd, 2024 01:22

Birth of a poem
Dan Williams said:

Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one word. \"Born from mind\'s womb, words lost in menses\" sums that up nicely. Fine work.

November 2nd, 2024 23:38

Birth of a poem
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 2nd, 2024 21:16

Birth of a poem
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
Powerful penning,
awesomazing word choices!! 🌞
Love the rhyme and flow,
way to go bro!! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 2nd, 2024 20:41

Birth of a poem
John Prophet said:

Well done! Nice work.

November 2nd, 2024 17:31

Birth of a poem
David Wakeling said:

This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi amigo

November 2nd, 2024 17:08

Birth of a poem
Neville said:



darn well conceived if you ask me .. Neville

November 2nd, 2024 10:05

Birth of a poem
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 2nd, 2024 09:21

Birth of a poem
arqios said:

Wide is the poet’s scope and larger still is poetry’s reach!

November 2nd, 2024 08:21

Birth of a poem
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

November 2nd, 2024 06:10

Birth of a poem
Teddy.15 said:

The smell of pain, taste of a sunbeam
color of rain, sound of a dream
echoes of rhyme cut shards of time
Can you touch a bell\'s chime?
When a yolk becomes the sun
infinity to zero power becomes one

How very inspiring dear sorrenbarret
A poem can be born from anything, from dirty socks to a dentist and a love gone wrong or a death of a song.

Superbly crafter dear friend. 🌹

November 2nd, 2024 04:50

Glimpses of the past
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful memories soren, they mean so much to us.

Andy

November 2nd, 2024 02:10

Glimpses of the past
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem
and thoughts of the past!! πŸ‘
Fond mem\'ries that
will forever last!! πŸ‘
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 1st, 2024 10:07

Glimpses of the past
arqios said:

That’s the beauty of having made memories! It’s a stash that can be retrieved at any time and for most occasions πŸ‘πŸ»

November 1st, 2024 07:01

Glimpses of the past
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful poem about the joy of memories. In fact memories are everything. Well done

November 1st, 2024 06:13



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