Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flames of cold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No joyful relationship is without pain and, though cliché, no pain, no gain. This poem speaks truth, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No joyful relationship is without pain and, though cliché, no pain, no gain. This poem speaks truth, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:38
Flames of cold
Damaso said:
Wonderful, my friend. I enjoyed it very much, and I even felt part of that cold beginning. Thanks for sharing. Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:39
Damaso said:
Wonderful, my friend. I enjoyed it very much, and I even felt part of that cold beginning. Thanks for sharing. Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:39
Flames of cold
Soman Ragavan said:
The stages some people go through as they age. Worries, deceptions pile up. Those around us start disappearing. The few that remain might turn sour, disillusioned and spoil our mood in turn. Hope exists in youth, as we know our life is yet to be lived.
June 26th, 2025 07:33
Soman Ragavan said:
The stages some people go through as they age. Worries, deceptions pile up. Those around us start disappearing. The few that remain might turn sour, disillusioned and spoil our mood in turn. Hope exists in youth, as we know our life is yet to be lived.
June 26th, 2025 07:33
Flames of cold
arqios said:
Here is such an ache with emotional paradox; the flames of cold are a contradiction in themselves, that may hint at a relationship once burning with passion that’s now frozen into something painful and inescapable. The cold isn’t just physical; it’ could be an emotional detachment, the withdrawal of warmth once shared. “Passion’s sweat turned solid glue” could suggest that intense intimacy has become a binding force, no longer freeing but constricting. The icy touch that “burns like fire” captures how emotional numbness can hurt just as deeply as raw feeling. Superb stuff. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 26th, 2025 07:10
arqios said:
Here is such an ache with emotional paradox; the flames of cold are a contradiction in themselves, that may hint at a relationship once burning with passion that’s now frozen into something painful and inescapable. The cold isn’t just physical; it’ could be an emotional detachment, the withdrawal of warmth once shared. “Passion’s sweat turned solid glue” could suggest that intense intimacy has become a binding force, no longer freeing but constricting. The icy touch that “burns like fire” captures how emotional numbness can hurt just as deeply as raw feeling. Superb stuff. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 26th, 2025 07:10
Flames of cold
Poetic Licence said:
The essence and reality of marriage/relationships, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 06:04
Poetic Licence said:
The essence and reality of marriage/relationships, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 06:04
Flames of cold
Teddy.15 said:
Sorrenbarret you just described marriage 🤣 sorry my darling friend I just couldn\'t resist, your too good my friend. 🌹
June 26th, 2025 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
Sorrenbarret you just described marriage 🤣 sorry my darling friend I just couldn\'t resist, your too good my friend. 🌹
June 26th, 2025 04:21
Flames of cold
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human relationships. They are often touch that turns cold and burns like fire. It explores the contradictory nature of relationships.A thoughtful piece
June 26th, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about human relationships. They are often touch that turns cold and burns like fire. It explores the contradictory nature of relationships.A thoughtful piece
June 26th, 2025 04:14
Visit with a dream
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I do love the craft on the accent, and yes that\'s fine by me. 🌹 Wonderful.
June 26th, 2025 03:31
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I do love the craft on the accent, and yes that\'s fine by me. 🌹 Wonderful.
June 26th, 2025 03:31
Visit with a dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes that is fine with me soren, thank you.
Andy
June 26th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes that is fine with me soren, thank you.
Andy
June 26th, 2025 01:24
Visit with a dream
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A moving glimpse into rural hardship and quiet resilience—loved the raw, authentic voice and tender hope within.
Felt like sitting beside the speaker, sharing warmth in a dry, dusty world.
June 25th, 2025 14:03
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A moving glimpse into rural hardship and quiet resilience—loved the raw, authentic voice and tender hope within.
Felt like sitting beside the speaker, sharing warmth in a dry, dusty world.
June 25th, 2025 14:03
Visit with a dream
Jeremy Leach said:
Comes across as very authentic. Skilfully put together and I enjoyed reading it.
June 25th, 2025 10:37
Jeremy Leach said:
Comes across as very authentic. Skilfully put together and I enjoyed reading it.
June 25th, 2025 10:37
Visit with a dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A really fun read my friend. Having grown up in rural, farmland in the Skylands region of NJ (if one outside of NJ can believe that exists...it does). Love mountains, love nature, love farms (not factory farms...but farms). So, this hit home for me, my friend! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A really fun read my friend. Having grown up in rural, farmland in the Skylands region of NJ (if one outside of NJ can believe that exists...it does). Love mountains, love nature, love farms (not factory farms...but farms). So, this hit home for me, my friend! 🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 09:23
Visit with a dream
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich experience gained from a rich and varied life. Sounded richly authentic to me, Soren.
June 25th, 2025 08:07
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich experience gained from a rich and varied life. Sounded richly authentic to me, Soren.
June 25th, 2025 08:07
Visit with a dream
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of poetic fun in the voice of an American farm hand, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of poetic fun in the voice of an American farm hand, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 05:25
Visit with a dream
David Wakeling said:
Ah this was fun. Really fun accent sounds like Farm hands in America. great poem mi amigo
June 25th, 2025 04:12
David Wakeling said:
Ah this was fun. Really fun accent sounds like Farm hands in America. great poem mi amigo
June 25th, 2025 04:12
Be more
orchidee said:
I will have to leave KP out of all this! You think more of Fido than you do of me, she says to me. Yep, I reply! LOL.
June 24th, 2025 10:07
orchidee said:
I will have to leave KP out of all this! You think more of Fido than you do of me, she says to me. Yep, I reply! LOL.
June 24th, 2025 10:07
Be more
Poetic Licence said:
I am not of faith but I would of been happier being the above than the bible, as above are the components for humanity, not easy to adhere or abide by, but we and the world would bettet for it if we did, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
I am not of faith but I would of been happier being the above than the bible, as above are the components for humanity, not easy to adhere or abide by, but we and the world would bettet for it if we did, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 06:07
Be more
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is reminiscent of the Sermon on the Mount. So thoughtful and filled with wisdom. Made me think a lot. Well done.Amazing
June 24th, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is reminiscent of the Sermon on the Mount. So thoughtful and filled with wisdom. Made me think a lot. Well done.Amazing
June 24th, 2025 04:33
Redemption in deception
Precious Chukwudi said:
The honesty behind the lie, when done out of love is something we rarely talk about.
Really a wonderful piece.
June 24th, 2025 03:11
Precious Chukwudi said:
The honesty behind the lie, when done out of love is something we rarely talk about.
Really a wonderful piece.
June 24th, 2025 03:11
Is something there?
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can bring back memories of all types soren.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things can bring back memories of all types soren.
Andy
June 24th, 2025 01:25
What a man is
NafisaSB said:
a thought provoking poem - what an honorable man who would throw away his riches and keep his word. i salute him and his kind
June 24th, 2025 01:17
NafisaSB said:
a thought provoking poem - what an honorable man who would throw away his riches and keep his word. i salute him and his kind
June 24th, 2025 01:17
Is something there?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Many of us come into this world being told that we were \"planned\", we can be anything we choose to be, that if you work hard you will be met with success, and that life will be overall beautiful. Yet, and this is a VERY BIG YET, most of those things cannot be known let alone guaranteed. Life is uncertain from conception on. No amount of it is guaranteed. We say we plan our children, yet our children do not turn out according to plan. So...as I see it...this poem is speaking to the uncertainty of life and yet we keep producing more life with complete certainty. Ironic at the least. Anyway, that is how this hit me first couple go-rounds, hope I am somewhere in the vicinity, but regardless, a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Many of us come into this world being told that we were \"planned\", we can be anything we choose to be, that if you work hard you will be met with success, and that life will be overall beautiful. Yet, and this is a VERY BIG YET, most of those things cannot be known let alone guaranteed. Life is uncertain from conception on. No amount of it is guaranteed. We say we plan our children, yet our children do not turn out according to plan. So...as I see it...this poem is speaking to the uncertainty of life and yet we keep producing more life with complete certainty. Ironic at the least. Anyway, that is how this hit me first couple go-rounds, hope I am somewhere in the vicinity, but regardless, a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:49
Is something there?
Poetic Licence said:
To me fears accumulated through life are arising and prepairing for the next journey and are looking for somewhere to reside, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
To me fears accumulated through life are arising and prepairing for the next journey and are looking for somewhere to reside, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 06:26
Is something there?
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting write, sorenbarrett. Still reading it.
June 23rd, 2025 05:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting write, sorenbarrett. Still reading it.
June 23rd, 2025 05:34
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