Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ants
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true of many people soren but I tend to think outside the box.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true of many people soren but I tend to think outside the box.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:46
Ants
MendedFences27 said:
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to the slaughter. Yet we can \"dance.\" Music and dance are universal and powerful. Maybe, a saving grace of humanity.
Loved your poem. _ Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:23
MendedFences27 said:
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to the slaughter. Yet we can \"dance.\" Music and dance are universal and powerful. Maybe, a saving grace of humanity.
Loved your poem. _ Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:23
Ants
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Great read, 💯
Busy, busy little
creatures, we are, life sacrificed
for a greater number indeed!! 🐜 🐜
Great use of metaphor,
and a treat to read!!
November 14th, 2024 17:22
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Great read, 💯
Busy, busy little
creatures, we are, life sacrificed
for a greater number indeed!! 🐜 🐜
Great use of metaphor,
and a treat to read!!
November 14th, 2024 17:22
Ants
Neville said:
it can be a very big and brave thing thinking outside the box .. but there\'s nothing selfish about looking at the big picture .. is there .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 07:54
Neville said:
it can be a very big and brave thing thinking outside the box .. but there\'s nothing selfish about looking at the big picture .. is there .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 07:54
Ants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great metaphor, Soren. Much said in very few words. This is certainly how life feels...the endless droning on and on and on. The loss of individuality. Your poem is excellent and causes the reader to pause and reflect! A hallmark of great poetry. You are spot on with this! Well done, my friend! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great metaphor, Soren. Much said in very few words. This is certainly how life feels...the endless droning on and on and on. The loss of individuality. Your poem is excellent and causes the reader to pause and reflect! A hallmark of great poetry. You are spot on with this! Well done, my friend! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:52
Ants
Cassie58 said:
Fascinating creatures to watch. Amazing workers. They know how to get a job done. Humans by comparison don’t cut the mustard. Multi meanings here. I also thought of world war 1 in particular. Enjoyed my visit.
November 14th, 2024 07:25
Cassie58 said:
Fascinating creatures to watch. Amazing workers. They know how to get a job done. Humans by comparison don’t cut the mustard. Multi meanings here. I also thought of world war 1 in particular. Enjoyed my visit.
November 14th, 2024 07:25
Ants
Doggerel Dave said:
In many ways, I\'d say.....
Worth thinking on, Soren.
November 14th, 2024 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
In many ways, I\'d say.....
Worth thinking on, Soren.
November 14th, 2024 07:09
Ants
arqios said:
All we like ants are up for extermination, that’s how it feels on certain days. And speaking of scents, there were the tiniest of flowers that I caught a whiff of association, a scent that reminded me of bees, while I was walking to the mailbox today.
November 14th, 2024 05:28
arqios said:
All we like ants are up for extermination, that’s how it feels on certain days. And speaking of scents, there were the tiniest of flowers that I caught a whiff of association, a scent that reminded me of bees, while I was walking to the mailbox today.
November 14th, 2024 05:28
Ants
Demar Desu said:
Have you ever seen the movie Antz?! I believe you would really enjoy it. That being said, I’m just happy people are dancing
November 14th, 2024 04:58
Demar Desu said:
Have you ever seen the movie Antz?! I believe you would really enjoy it. That being said, I’m just happy people are dancing
November 14th, 2024 04:58
Scraps
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, brutal, and the last line just nails it.
November 14th, 2024 03:21
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, brutal, and the last line just nails it.
November 14th, 2024 03:21
Scraps
Goldfinch60 said:
Strnge things can happen behind closed doors soren, we may never know.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Strnge things can happen behind closed doors soren, we may never know.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 02:59
Scraps
Dan Williams said:
OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
November 14th, 2024 00:24
Dan Williams said:
OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
November 14th, 2024 00:24
Scraps
Mutley Ravishes said:
Time to get off the wheel?!
Great write, Soren.
November 13th, 2024 18:56
Mutley Ravishes said:
Time to get off the wheel?!
Great write, Soren.
November 13th, 2024 18:56
Scraps
Teddy.15 said:
I see the need to be grateful for what we have 🌹 beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:11
Teddy.15 said:
I see the need to be grateful for what we have 🌹 beautiful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:11
Romp (acrostic)
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Soren. Can relate to this from my own childhood scrapes.
November 13th, 2024 10:52
Tom Dylan said:
Love this, Soren. Can relate to this from my own childhood scrapes.
November 13th, 2024 10:52
Scraps
Neville said:
familiarity does not always breed contempt .. sometimes, and more often than not, behind closed doors, it fosters fear too .. Neville
November 13th, 2024 08:46
Neville said:
familiarity does not always breed contempt .. sometimes, and more often than not, behind closed doors, it fosters fear too .. Neville
November 13th, 2024 08:46
Scraps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerfully provocative, Soren! This poem hits and causes us to reflect on our own desensitization to the suffering we see around us! Brilliantly done my friend! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 13th, 2024 07:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerfully provocative, Soren! This poem hits and causes us to reflect on our own desensitization to the suffering we see around us! Brilliantly done my friend! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 13th, 2024 07:12
Scraps
arqios said:
Wow! Now that’s a style I can’t say I see often from you…. Wow, just wow!
November 13th, 2024 05:22
arqios said:
Wow! Now that’s a style I can’t say I see often from you…. Wow, just wow!
November 13th, 2024 05:22
Romp (acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, you rarely saw lads without scabs on their knees when I was a kid.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, you rarely saw lads without scabs on their knees when I was a kid.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:18
Glass prison
RSM0812 said:
The one that got away. That\'s what this reminds me of.
November 13th, 2024 00:44
RSM0812 said:
The one that got away. That\'s what this reminds me of.
November 13th, 2024 00:44
Whispers
RSM0812 said:
I really liked this one. You have definitely mastered rhyme and contemplation bringing your reader through a journey of words that have more inner meaning than they can comprehend. It\'s like understanding the vastness of the universe in infinite thought and emotion.
November 13th, 2024 00:42
RSM0812 said:
I really liked this one. You have definitely mastered rhyme and contemplation bringing your reader through a journey of words that have more inner meaning than they can comprehend. It\'s like understanding the vastness of the universe in infinite thought and emotion.
November 13th, 2024 00:42
Romp (acrostic)
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A great Acrostic!! 💯
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! 😳
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 12th, 2024 15:08
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A great Acrostic!! 💯
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! 😳
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 12th, 2024 15:08
Romp (acrostic)
David Wakeling said:
Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived
November 12th, 2024 15:05
David Wakeling said:
Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived
November 12th, 2024 15:05
Differences
FrasMac said:
Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.
November 12th, 2024 12:44
FrasMac said:
Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.
November 12th, 2024 12:44
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