Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Sigh of a storm
spilleronsheet said:

And these are lines are giving me glimmer amidst darknessโ€ฆkeep writing dear poet

March 16th, 2025 12:18

Canned expression
spilleronsheet said:

Those poetic words truly playing with every noteโ€ฆgood one dear, keep penningโ€ฆ

March 16th, 2025 12:17

Smell of color
orchidee said:

Good write SB. KP has lovely smell of colour of rotten maggots that I feed her with for dinner. lol. It\'s gross here at meal-times.

March 16th, 2025 11:29

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ginny jayne said:

That is lovely, at the same time sad.

March 16th, 2025 10:43

Smell of color
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This my friend, is a lovely shape. At first I saw a mushroom, or it could be a tree, but it looks like a fully bloomed mushroom or tree, which totally mirrors the content. Bravo on this, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘ Instant fave.

March 16th, 2025 07:51

Verses of dust
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

March 16th, 2025 07:36

Smell of color
aDarkerMind said:

yet another from the pen of Soren to add to my favourites list.

a stunning write;

March 16th, 2025 06:11

Smell of color
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of the positive impact colours and smells can have on us, and a nice smell can open up a wonderful world in your mind, enjoyed the read

March 16th, 2025 05:31

Smell of color
Teddy.15 said:

Stunning dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน ๐Ÿฟ ๐ŸŒจ๏ธ ๐ŸŒผ

March 16th, 2025 03:21

Smell of color
arqios said:

Smells and colours have a magic in the music ๐ŸŽถ of the day ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 16th, 2025 03:19

Leaves
cellinic said:

very deep work with philosophical connotations. Liked it.

March 15th, 2025 20:45

Leaves
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..

I like how you wrote this


March 15th, 2025 15:50

Leaves
David Wakeling said:

This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.

March 15th, 2025 15:23

Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

March 15th, 2025 14:31

Leaves
Ellen Marsell said:

Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!

March 15th, 2025 14:30

Leaves
Salvia.S ๐ŸŒน said:

Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....

March 15th, 2025 10:56

Leaves
Teddy.15 said:

How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. ๐ŸŒน

March 15th, 2025 07:13

Verses of dust
rebellion_in_sanity said:

So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.

March 15th, 2025 06:13

Leaves
arqios said:

Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 15th, 2025 05:51

Leaves
Poetic Licence said:

I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read

March 15th, 2025 05:47

Leaves
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I\'m a big tree; KP\'s a big weed! lol.

March 15th, 2025 04:39

Verses of dust
Goldfinch60 said:

We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.

Andy

March 15th, 2025 02:10

Verses of dust
Ellen Marsell said:

Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.

March 14th, 2025 14:05

Verses of dust
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 14th, 2025 12:16

Verses of dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

March 14th, 2025 09:58

Verses of dust
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 14th, 2025 09:49

Verses of dust
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,

March 14th, 2025 09:22

Verses of dust
Teddy.15 said:

And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. ๐ŸŒน Love this. ๐ŸŒน

March 14th, 2025 08:55

Verses of dust
arqios said:

Amazing ๐Ÿคฉ a vivid portrayal that Iโ€™ve myself experienced ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•ŠLiked and Faved

March 14th, 2025 05:35

Verses of dust
Salvia.S ๐ŸŒน said:

Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.

March 14th, 2025 05:25



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