Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Rocky; You have a good poem here, full of rich imagery and a deep underlying theme....But Shakespearean sonnet it ain\'t.
Stick to what you do best, write your poetry which is interesting and lively.
March 31st, 2022 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Rocky; You have a good poem here, full of rich imagery and a deep underlying theme....But Shakespearean sonnet it ain\'t.
Stick to what you do best, write your poetry which is interesting and lively.
March 31st, 2022 19:35
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
sorenbarrett said:
Life limits the light of hope. Everything is a cycle. Instead of waiting for hope live the now. Time will bring everything back around,
March 31st, 2022 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Life limits the light of hope. Everything is a cycle. Instead of waiting for hope live the now. Time will bring everything back around,
March 31st, 2022 15:57
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Paul Bell said:
I like this.
Death is a painful subject and needs to be gently trodden. The writer is in a reflective mood, but also wants to move on. Alas, moving on can never really happen, not when seasons return each year.
March 31st, 2022 13:33
Paul Bell said:
I like this.
Death is a painful subject and needs to be gently trodden. The writer is in a reflective mood, but also wants to move on. Alas, moving on can never really happen, not when seasons return each year.
March 31st, 2022 13:33
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
orchidee said:
And furthermore - some of us were taking our coats off in the UK last week, in a mini-heatwave. Was still chilly first thing in mornings though. Now we\'ve got them out of the cupboard again!
Here ends UK weather report. lol.
March 31st, 2022 12:49
orchidee said:
And furthermore - some of us were taking our coats off in the UK last week, in a mini-heatwave. Was still chilly first thing in mornings though. Now we\'ve got them out of the cupboard again!
Here ends UK weather report. lol.
March 31st, 2022 12:49
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
How is the cringe-worthy one?! heehee.
Parts of the UK almost forgot what snow is this winter. Then I goes and get caught in a snow flurry, and then a hailstorm today! Ouch, like little stones thrown at ya!
March 31st, 2022 12:40
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
How is the cringe-worthy one?! heehee.
Parts of the UK almost forgot what snow is this winter. Then I goes and get caught in a snow flurry, and then a hailstorm today! Ouch, like little stones thrown at ya!
March 31st, 2022 12:40
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky,
A thought provoking one for sure.
Loved these line..
They spirally fall, slowly giving...
Themselves to the Earth’s art,
Very artistic and very true !!
Thanks for the wonderful sonnet !!
March 31st, 2022 12:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky,
A thought provoking one for sure.
Loved these line..
They spirally fall, slowly giving...
Themselves to the Earth’s art,
Very artistic and very true !!
Thanks for the wonderful sonnet !!
March 31st, 2022 12:33
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve never read a Shakespeare sonnet, but now I know I must. As I read each stanza aloud, with the inflection that it deserves, I feel the pure beauty of what you are describing. I think Shakespeare would be proud of such a worthy apprentice. Well done dear friend!
March 31st, 2022 12:14
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve never read a Shakespeare sonnet, but now I know I must. As I read each stanza aloud, with the inflection that it deserves, I feel the pure beauty of what you are describing. I think Shakespeare would be proud of such a worthy apprentice. Well done dear friend!
March 31st, 2022 12:14
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Laura🌻 said:
Rocky,
A captivating write which I’ve enjoyed reading. You are a very talented writer. Onward and upward with your poetry my dear poet.👏
Thank you for sharing.😄
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 11:00
Laura🌻 said:
Rocky,
A captivating write which I’ve enjoyed reading. You are a very talented writer. Onward and upward with your poetry my dear poet.👏
Thank you for sharing.😄
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 11:00
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t know what a sonnet was if it walked up and bit me but i know what this is... it\'s darned good.
March 31st, 2022 09:51
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t know what a sonnet was if it walked up and bit me but i know what this is... it\'s darned good.
March 31st, 2022 09:51
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Christina8 said:
Very good sonnet they are hard to do!! I like your take on life and nature. This is great! (speaking of nature it is snowing today! Yikes!) Great job!
March 31st, 2022 09:44
Christina8 said:
Very good sonnet they are hard to do!! I like your take on life and nature. This is great! (speaking of nature it is snowing today! Yikes!) Great job!
March 31st, 2022 09:44
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Caring dove said:
A great writing )) I like your words . I’ve never tried writing a sonnet before ,
An engaging read
March 31st, 2022 09:40
Caring dove said:
A great writing )) I like your words . I’ve never tried writing a sonnet before ,
An engaging read
March 31st, 2022 09:40
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
dean langmuir said:
Very nice Rocky,sonnets are very interesting to write,good job.take care poet on.
March 31st, 2022 09:37
dean langmuir said:
Very nice Rocky,sonnets are very interesting to write,good job.take care poet on.
March 31st, 2022 09:37
Waves Roll Off of Me
Neville said:
the term epic springs to mind .. I kinda feel rejuvenated having visited and pondered ... well penned my friend .. Neville
March 31st, 2022 08:21
Neville said:
the term epic springs to mind .. I kinda feel rejuvenated having visited and pondered ... well penned my friend .. Neville
March 31st, 2022 08:21
Waves Roll Off of Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, may that incarnation take you to the wonder of your life.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, may that incarnation take you to the wonder of your life.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:41
Waves Roll Off of Me
Christina8 said:
This is another great poem! My favorite line is \"Is the jewels and pearls and skin!\" You are a jewel in your own right and you make powerful statements here. Great job!!
March 30th, 2022 17:22
Christina8 said:
This is another great poem! My favorite line is \"Is the jewels and pearls and skin!\" You are a jewel in your own right and you make powerful statements here. Great job!!
March 30th, 2022 17:22
Waves Roll Off of Me
orchidee said:
Erm, I was just writing a poem about our \'little life\' (not posted yet). Not that we are door-mats to be trampled over by everyone; nor lamp-posts to be treated as \'things\' that just stand there unfeeling, immovable, etc.
Ohh, I dunno about being the living display of glory. To me, it would seem like I need a large slice of humble pie, if I say that!
March 30th, 2022 11:55
orchidee said:
Erm, I was just writing a poem about our \'little life\' (not posted yet). Not that we are door-mats to be trampled over by everyone; nor lamp-posts to be treated as \'things\' that just stand there unfeeling, immovable, etc.
Ohh, I dunno about being the living display of glory. To me, it would seem like I need a large slice of humble pie, if I say that!
March 30th, 2022 11:55
Waves Roll Off of Me
Quijote said:
liked the lines
I’m a shipwreck lying at the seabed,
And every mossy barrel carries a part of who I am.
I think we all sometimes feel we are at the bottom of the sea looking up to the top of the ocean where everyone else is
March 30th, 2022 10:59
Quijote said:
liked the lines
I’m a shipwreck lying at the seabed,
And every mossy barrel carries a part of who I am.
I think we all sometimes feel we are at the bottom of the sea looking up to the top of the ocean where everyone else is
March 30th, 2022 10:59
Waves Roll Off of Me
Paul Bell said:
We are all of the sea till she takes us back. What we do in-between is for us to decide and destiny at the end.
March 30th, 2022 10:56
Paul Bell said:
We are all of the sea till she takes us back. What we do in-between is for us to decide and destiny at the end.
March 30th, 2022 10:56
Waves Roll Off of Me
dean langmuir said:
Good one Rocky,they manifest like condensation,wow.poet on.
March 30th, 2022 10:36
dean langmuir said:
Good one Rocky,they manifest like condensation,wow.poet on.
March 30th, 2022 10:36
Waves Roll Off of Me
LMTobin said:
This is good! I especially liked \"I am the living display of glory,
And I am not a knot to be undone.\"
Very powerful!
March 30th, 2022 10:34
LMTobin said:
This is good! I especially liked \"I am the living display of glory,
And I am not a knot to be undone.\"
Very powerful!
March 30th, 2022 10:34
Poet in the Beast
sorenbarrett said:
A very open write, revealing and raw. I noticed that the I\'s have attempted to be the therapist but to no avail while the psychiatrist has been equally unsuccessful. There\'s a feeling of isolation and sterility. The abandoned cradle contributes to this alienation. It ends positively in that you are sure to find your way back home and piece things back together, Well done
March 29th, 2022 21:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very open write, revealing and raw. I noticed that the I\'s have attempted to be the therapist but to no avail while the psychiatrist has been equally unsuccessful. There\'s a feeling of isolation and sterility. The abandoned cradle contributes to this alienation. It ends positively in that you are sure to find your way back home and piece things back together, Well done
March 29th, 2022 21:31
Poet in the Beast
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I just fell in love with your words. You have undeniable skill and talent and you convey your emotions with such adept language- I don\'t even know where to begin. As someone who struggles with mental health, is openly lgbtqia+, and is also 16 years old- this is really hitting home for me. It\'s reminding me of when I used to break my mirrors because I couldn\'t stand the reflection. Brilliant work, Rocky.
March 29th, 2022 15:03
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I just fell in love with your words. You have undeniable skill and talent and you convey your emotions with such adept language- I don\'t even know where to begin. As someone who struggles with mental health, is openly lgbtqia+, and is also 16 years old- this is really hitting home for me. It\'s reminding me of when I used to break my mirrors because I couldn\'t stand the reflection. Brilliant work, Rocky.
March 29th, 2022 15:03
Poet in the Beast
Rebeccaslit said:
Love this poem, its the first one of yours I\'ve read :) It flows so well and is captivating. Happy reader ☺️
March 29th, 2022 13:34
Rebeccaslit said:
Love this poem, its the first one of yours I\'ve read :) It flows so well and is captivating. Happy reader ☺️
March 29th, 2022 13:34
Poet in the Beast
dean langmuir said:
Good write Rocky,Oooh the deeper I.You will see it when your I-s are ready.take care,poet on.
March 29th, 2022 13:19
dean langmuir said:
Good write Rocky,Oooh the deeper I.You will see it when your I-s are ready.take care,poet on.
March 29th, 2022 13:19
Poet in the Beast
Christina8 said:
I love this piece, Rocky! Yes, I see you in the cracked reflection. Your psychiatrist doesn\'t sound very helpful, idk just me maybe. I want you to know you are not alone with mental health issues. I struggle too, though as I\'ve gotten older, I struggle less. Hopefully time heals all wounds. Good luck on your journey!
March 29th, 2022 11:39
Christina8 said:
I love this piece, Rocky! Yes, I see you in the cracked reflection. Your psychiatrist doesn\'t sound very helpful, idk just me maybe. I want you to know you are not alone with mental health issues. I struggle too, though as I\'ve gotten older, I struggle less. Hopefully time heals all wounds. Good luck on your journey!
March 29th, 2022 11:39
Poet in the Beast
Crowns4Christ said:
That therapy has never worked for me, only love and God, great job
March 29th, 2022 11:34
Crowns4Christ said:
That therapy has never worked for me, only love and God, great job
March 29th, 2022 11:34
A Swan, Named Freedom, Swims
bellflower said:
With swan as the metaphor you painted life of a human who visits and meets many people but he never forgets its own purpose. He listens to all but attends to none. He learns from all so that he could complete his purpose at last. Wonderful and enjoyable poem.
March 29th, 2022 01:38
bellflower said:
With swan as the metaphor you painted life of a human who visits and meets many people but he never forgets its own purpose. He listens to all but attends to none. He learns from all so that he could complete his purpose at last. Wonderful and enjoyable poem.
March 29th, 2022 01:38
A Swan, Named Freedom, Swims
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !
Rocky you Rock !!
A swan a metophor for Paramahamasa
Swan is so sacred in philosophy
Only creature which separates the water from the milk...
A very interesting write and loved reading all along !! Thankls
March 29th, 2022 01:07
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wow !
Rocky you Rock !!
A swan a metophor for Paramahamasa
Swan is so sacred in philosophy
Only creature which separates the water from the milk...
A very interesting write and loved reading all along !! Thankls
March 29th, 2022 01:07
A Swan, Named Freedom, Swims
dean langmuir said:
The other comments say it,enjoy your day
March 28th, 2022 20:44
dean langmuir said:
The other comments say it,enjoy your day
March 28th, 2022 20:44
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