Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Giving Up Poetry
spilleronsheet said:
Truthfully it is so powerful and brut truth
Life isn’t set of rules
Nothing works according to norms
And the pent up emotions shall swell one day
And come outside beautifully by your pen dear Rocky
I honestly liked your courageous sword
It slashed right inside
Totally rocked in feels
And finished the wars of emotions raising inside
Pen up as you wish
Cause you truly shine
With that beautiful mind
April 2nd, 2022 14:51
spilleronsheet said:
Truthfully it is so powerful and brut truth
Life isn’t set of rules
Nothing works according to norms
And the pent up emotions shall swell one day
And come outside beautifully by your pen dear Rocky
I honestly liked your courageous sword
It slashed right inside
Totally rocked in feels
And finished the wars of emotions raising inside
Pen up as you wish
Cause you truly shine
With that beautiful mind
April 2nd, 2022 14:51
Giving Up Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write in our own way to put our feelings onto paper and what ever they say means so much to ourselves and if others like them that is a bonus.
Good words Rocky.
Andy
April 2nd, 2022 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write in our own way to put our feelings onto paper and what ever they say means so much to ourselves and if others like them that is a bonus.
Good words Rocky.
Andy
April 2nd, 2022 00:22
Poet in the Beast
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Mental health is still something that so many struggle with but it’s still too stigmatized to talk about. This poem holds much meaning to me. Thank you for sharing this Rocky.
April 1st, 2022 22:30
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Mental health is still something that so many struggle with but it’s still too stigmatized to talk about. This poem holds much meaning to me. Thank you for sharing this Rocky.
April 1st, 2022 22:30
Giving Up Poetry
Bella Shepard said:
I think your poem speaks to the kernel of poetry, which for me is the expression of self. We may all do that in different ways; wordy, brief, rhyming, free flow of thoughts, and so on, but it\'s the expression, the gift of self to others that is truly wonderful. And in return we love each other for the offering of that gift. I applaud the gift you have given all of us in this poem. Write on dear friend!
April 1st, 2022 15:37
Bella Shepard said:
I think your poem speaks to the kernel of poetry, which for me is the expression of self. We may all do that in different ways; wordy, brief, rhyming, free flow of thoughts, and so on, but it\'s the expression, the gift of self to others that is truly wonderful. And in return we love each other for the offering of that gift. I applaud the gift you have given all of us in this poem. Write on dear friend!
April 1st, 2022 15:37
Giving Up Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Rocky well said. We all write for different reasons and they are all right. We all use different styles and they are all right. If we choose not to write it is ok, if we choose to write it is ok. Never stop the voice in your brain.
April 1st, 2022 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Rocky well said. We all write for different reasons and they are all right. We all use different styles and they are all right. If we choose not to write it is ok, if we choose to write it is ok. Never stop the voice in your brain.
April 1st, 2022 13:15
Giving Up Poetry
orchidee said:
OOhhh, I dunno - why use 5 words when 20 or 30 will do?! heehee.
But sometimes limiting words can help us to focus more, I find (as in some of my shorter poems).
Ohh, I\'m enjoying sunny spells and short snow showers here in UK. April showers - yes, snowy ones just for now. Doh! And that\'s no April Fool joke.
I was delivering some Easter cards for a church. I could have said \'Merry Christmas\' to the folk! Well It looked like it, by the weather!
April 1st, 2022 10:04
orchidee said:
OOhhh, I dunno - why use 5 words when 20 or 30 will do?! heehee.
But sometimes limiting words can help us to focus more, I find (as in some of my shorter poems).
Ohh, I\'m enjoying sunny spells and short snow showers here in UK. April showers - yes, snowy ones just for now. Doh! And that\'s no April Fool joke.
I was delivering some Easter cards for a church. I could have said \'Merry Christmas\' to the folk! Well It looked like it, by the weather!
April 1st, 2022 10:04
Giving Up Poetry
dean langmuir said:
Rocky as always your poetry gets me,on the same page so to speak,seems like all us contemplators are a little tired but realize the joys in life also,take care.
April 1st, 2022 09:47
dean langmuir said:
Rocky as always your poetry gets me,on the same page so to speak,seems like all us contemplators are a little tired but realize the joys in life also,take care.
April 1st, 2022 09:47
Giving Up Poetry
Christina8 said:
I\'m so glad it\'s a metaphorical title and not for real even though it is April Fools Day. Cuz you have so much to offer, so much to say! As you say, we were born to spread our wings! And maybe this is what you were meant to do. I like the quotes too. But, I truly think you have a gift and a calling, mister! :)
April 1st, 2022 09:40
Christina8 said:
I\'m so glad it\'s a metaphorical title and not for real even though it is April Fools Day. Cuz you have so much to offer, so much to say! As you say, we were born to spread our wings! And maybe this is what you were meant to do. I like the quotes too. But, I truly think you have a gift and a calling, mister! :)
April 1st, 2022 09:40
Giving Up Poetry
Caring dove said:
I think we should write in the way we want to .. if we want to rhyme then yeah , I never do , least not intentionally
April 1st, 2022 09:33
Caring dove said:
I think we should write in the way we want to .. if we want to rhyme then yeah , I never do , least not intentionally
April 1st, 2022 09:33
Giving Up Poetry
Caring dove said:
We all write for different reasons .. I’ve been feeling anxious and overwhelmed today .. for several reasons , just tired emotionally right now . I guess we want our writings to be liked but sometimes we simply write for ourselves ? I like your line about loving ourselves and others . We can’t always write to want to impress sonetimes we simply write for ourselves , and that’s ok
April 1st, 2022 09:32
Caring dove said:
We all write for different reasons .. I’ve been feeling anxious and overwhelmed today .. for several reasons , just tired emotionally right now . I guess we want our writings to be liked but sometimes we simply write for ourselves ? I like your line about loving ourselves and others . We can’t always write to want to impress sonetimes we simply write for ourselves , and that’s ok
April 1st, 2022 09:32
Giving Up Poetry
dusk arising said:
LOL I gave up poetry ages ago when some one wrote to me \"if youve got something to say, say it in four lines, if you can\'t manage that, say it in three\"
April 1st, 2022 09:21
dusk arising said:
LOL I gave up poetry ages ago when some one wrote to me \"if youve got something to say, say it in four lines, if you can\'t manage that, say it in three\"
April 1st, 2022 09:21
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Rocky; You have a good poem here, full of rich imagery and a deep underlying theme....But Shakespearean sonnet it ain\'t.
Stick to what you do best, write your poetry which is interesting and lively.
March 31st, 2022 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Rocky; You have a good poem here, full of rich imagery and a deep underlying theme....But Shakespearean sonnet it ain\'t.
Stick to what you do best, write your poetry which is interesting and lively.
March 31st, 2022 19:35
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
sorenbarrett said:
Life limits the light of hope. Everything is a cycle. Instead of waiting for hope live the now. Time will bring everything back around,
March 31st, 2022 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Life limits the light of hope. Everything is a cycle. Instead of waiting for hope live the now. Time will bring everything back around,
March 31st, 2022 15:57
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Paul Bell said:
I like this.
Death is a painful subject and needs to be gently trodden. The writer is in a reflective mood, but also wants to move on. Alas, moving on can never really happen, not when seasons return each year.
March 31st, 2022 13:33
Paul Bell said:
I like this.
Death is a painful subject and needs to be gently trodden. The writer is in a reflective mood, but also wants to move on. Alas, moving on can never really happen, not when seasons return each year.
March 31st, 2022 13:33
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
orchidee said:
And furthermore - some of us were taking our coats off in the UK last week, in a mini-heatwave. Was still chilly first thing in mornings though. Now we\'ve got them out of the cupboard again!
Here ends UK weather report. lol.
March 31st, 2022 12:49
orchidee said:
And furthermore - some of us were taking our coats off in the UK last week, in a mini-heatwave. Was still chilly first thing in mornings though. Now we\'ve got them out of the cupboard again!
Here ends UK weather report. lol.
March 31st, 2022 12:49
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
How is the cringe-worthy one?! heehee.
Parts of the UK almost forgot what snow is this winter. Then I goes and get caught in a snow flurry, and then a hailstorm today! Ouch, like little stones thrown at ya!
March 31st, 2022 12:40
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
How is the cringe-worthy one?! heehee.
Parts of the UK almost forgot what snow is this winter. Then I goes and get caught in a snow flurry, and then a hailstorm today! Ouch, like little stones thrown at ya!
March 31st, 2022 12:40
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky,
A thought provoking one for sure.
Loved these line..
They spirally fall, slowly giving...
Themselves to the Earth’s art,
Very artistic and very true !!
Thanks for the wonderful sonnet !!
March 31st, 2022 12:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Rocky,
A thought provoking one for sure.
Loved these line..
They spirally fall, slowly giving...
Themselves to the Earth’s art,
Very artistic and very true !!
Thanks for the wonderful sonnet !!
March 31st, 2022 12:33
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve never read a Shakespeare sonnet, but now I know I must. As I read each stanza aloud, with the inflection that it deserves, I feel the pure beauty of what you are describing. I think Shakespeare would be proud of such a worthy apprentice. Well done dear friend!
March 31st, 2022 12:14
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve never read a Shakespeare sonnet, but now I know I must. As I read each stanza aloud, with the inflection that it deserves, I feel the pure beauty of what you are describing. I think Shakespeare would be proud of such a worthy apprentice. Well done dear friend!
March 31st, 2022 12:14
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Laura🌻 said:
Rocky,
A captivating write which I’ve enjoyed reading. You are a very talented writer. Onward and upward with your poetry my dear poet.👏
Thank you for sharing.😄
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 11:00
Laura🌻 said:
Rocky,
A captivating write which I’ve enjoyed reading. You are a very talented writer. Onward and upward with your poetry my dear poet.👏
Thank you for sharing.😄
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 11:00
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t know what a sonnet was if it walked up and bit me but i know what this is... it\'s darned good.
March 31st, 2022 09:51
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t know what a sonnet was if it walked up and bit me but i know what this is... it\'s darned good.
March 31st, 2022 09:51
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Christina8 said:
Very good sonnet they are hard to do!! I like your take on life and nature. This is great! (speaking of nature it is snowing today! Yikes!) Great job!
March 31st, 2022 09:44
Christina8 said:
Very good sonnet they are hard to do!! I like your take on life and nature. This is great! (speaking of nature it is snowing today! Yikes!) Great job!
March 31st, 2022 09:44
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
Caring dove said:
A great writing )) I like your words . I’ve never tried writing a sonnet before ,
An engaging read
March 31st, 2022 09:40
Caring dove said:
A great writing )) I like your words . I’ve never tried writing a sonnet before ,
An engaging read
March 31st, 2022 09:40
Peripheral Happiness (Sonnet)
dean langmuir said:
Very nice Rocky,sonnets are very interesting to write,good job.take care poet on.
March 31st, 2022 09:37
dean langmuir said:
Very nice Rocky,sonnets are very interesting to write,good job.take care poet on.
March 31st, 2022 09:37
Waves Roll Off of Me
Neville said:
the term epic springs to mind .. I kinda feel rejuvenated having visited and pondered ... well penned my friend .. Neville
March 31st, 2022 08:21
Neville said:
the term epic springs to mind .. I kinda feel rejuvenated having visited and pondered ... well penned my friend .. Neville
March 31st, 2022 08:21
Waves Roll Off of Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, may that incarnation take you to the wonder of your life.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rocky, may that incarnation take you to the wonder of your life.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:41
Waves Roll Off of Me
Christina8 said:
This is another great poem! My favorite line is \"Is the jewels and pearls and skin!\" You are a jewel in your own right and you make powerful statements here. Great job!!
March 30th, 2022 17:22
Christina8 said:
This is another great poem! My favorite line is \"Is the jewels and pearls and skin!\" You are a jewel in your own right and you make powerful statements here. Great job!!
March 30th, 2022 17:22
Waves Roll Off of Me
orchidee said:
Erm, I was just writing a poem about our \'little life\' (not posted yet). Not that we are door-mats to be trampled over by everyone; nor lamp-posts to be treated as \'things\' that just stand there unfeeling, immovable, etc.
Ohh, I dunno about being the living display of glory. To me, it would seem like I need a large slice of humble pie, if I say that!
March 30th, 2022 11:55
orchidee said:
Erm, I was just writing a poem about our \'little life\' (not posted yet). Not that we are door-mats to be trampled over by everyone; nor lamp-posts to be treated as \'things\' that just stand there unfeeling, immovable, etc.
Ohh, I dunno about being the living display of glory. To me, it would seem like I need a large slice of humble pie, if I say that!
March 30th, 2022 11:55
Waves Roll Off of Me
Quijote said:
liked the lines
I’m a shipwreck lying at the seabed,
And every mossy barrel carries a part of who I am.
I think we all sometimes feel we are at the bottom of the sea looking up to the top of the ocean where everyone else is
March 30th, 2022 10:59
Quijote said:
liked the lines
I’m a shipwreck lying at the seabed,
And every mossy barrel carries a part of who I am.
I think we all sometimes feel we are at the bottom of the sea looking up to the top of the ocean where everyone else is
March 30th, 2022 10:59
Waves Roll Off of Me
Paul Bell said:
We are all of the sea till she takes us back. What we do in-between is for us to decide and destiny at the end.
March 30th, 2022 10:56
Paul Bell said:
We are all of the sea till she takes us back. What we do in-between is for us to decide and destiny at the end.
March 30th, 2022 10:56
Waves Roll Off of Me
dean langmuir said:
Good one Rocky,they manifest like condensation,wow.poet on.
March 30th, 2022 10:36
dean langmuir said:
Good one Rocky,they manifest like condensation,wow.poet on.
March 30th, 2022 10:36
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