Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Dance of Breath and Breeze
spilleronsheet said:
Splendid dear Rocky…
A beautiful depiction
An engaging imagery
Wedding my thoughts with geography
As I ventured across the layers of air
I found myself flying in the air
Yet a music kept playing in mind
Thanks to your poetry, I could remember the lines
Demi lovata’s song “ skyscraper”
Truly wonderful and engaging read dear Rocky
And the last lines just hooked me
“ And with every breath we take,
And with every incoming breeze
We embrace the past,
And I welcome – the overture and the decline.”
Telling me to let go of the fallen yesterday and rise with today
March 15th, 2022 22:45
spilleronsheet said:
Splendid dear Rocky…
A beautiful depiction
An engaging imagery
Wedding my thoughts with geography
As I ventured across the layers of air
I found myself flying in the air
Yet a music kept playing in mind
Thanks to your poetry, I could remember the lines
Demi lovata’s song “ skyscraper”
Truly wonderful and engaging read dear Rocky
And the last lines just hooked me
“ And with every breath we take,
And with every incoming breeze
We embrace the past,
And I welcome – the overture and the decline.”
Telling me to let go of the fallen yesterday and rise with today
March 15th, 2022 22:45
Dance of Breath and Breeze
Christina8 said:
You don\'t have to welcome the overture and the decline just yet, Rocky! Your poem was beautiful! The swaying, the light and the skycraper, oh my! You didn\'t leave any details out. Thanks for taking me to the heavens! christina
March 15th, 2022 12:17
Christina8 said:
You don\'t have to welcome the overture and the decline just yet, Rocky! Your poem was beautiful! The swaying, the light and the skycraper, oh my! You didn\'t leave any details out. Thanks for taking me to the heavens! christina
March 15th, 2022 12:17
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I thought, Villanelle, was the baddy in, KILLING EVE.
Will you be doing another, that is the question?
March 15th, 2022 06:04
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I thought, Villanelle, was the baddy in, KILLING EVE.
Will you be doing another, that is the question?
March 15th, 2022 06:04
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
G-Buda said:
This was a fantastic visual performance of lyrical art. Love this piece poet!
March 14th, 2022 18:59
G-Buda said:
This was a fantastic visual performance of lyrical art. Love this piece poet!
March 14th, 2022 18:59
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
sorenbarrett said:
I have to admit that I am not sure that the way I took this is the way it was intended. We are all locked in our own world and trust of anyone outside is difficult at best. We feel that others are incapable of understanding and our own lack of understanding creates an abyss that is impossible to cross. Fear of the unknown creates an impediment to understanding. I may have run amuck but this seems to be a very deep poem. I loved it.
March 14th, 2022 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
I have to admit that I am not sure that the way I took this is the way it was intended. We are all locked in our own world and trust of anyone outside is difficult at best. We feel that others are incapable of understanding and our own lack of understanding creates an abyss that is impossible to cross. Fear of the unknown creates an impediment to understanding. I may have run amuck but this seems to be a very deep poem. I loved it.
March 14th, 2022 16:53
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Christina8 said:
I\'m really glad you tried your hand at a villanelle. The last one I read was Sylvia Plath, maybe? I LOVE her. Anyway, this was tricky for you, I get that. I understand everything you said in your notes too. All in all, a very good first villanelle!!
March 14th, 2022 14:58
Christina8 said:
I\'m really glad you tried your hand at a villanelle. The last one I read was Sylvia Plath, maybe? I LOVE her. Anyway, this was tricky for you, I get that. I understand everything you said in your notes too. All in all, a very good first villanelle!!
March 14th, 2022 14:58
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Neville said:
Hell, this is one hell of a Villanelle .. Neville ......................................... :)
March 14th, 2022 12:44
Neville said:
Hell, this is one hell of a Villanelle .. Neville ......................................... :)
March 14th, 2022 12:44
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Bella Shepard said:
I will admit in my ignorance I did not know what a Villanelle is, so I googled it. What and undertaking, and what a wonderful result. I\'m able to do simple rhymes, but this goes far beyond, and I love the fact that you are teaching me something new and powerful. Thank you Rocky!
March 14th, 2022 11:57
Bella Shepard said:
I will admit in my ignorance I did not know what a Villanelle is, so I googled it. What and undertaking, and what a wonderful result. I\'m able to do simple rhymes, but this goes far beyond, and I love the fact that you are teaching me something new and powerful. Thank you Rocky!
March 14th, 2022 11:57
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
orchidee said:
A good villanelle - having looked up what it is! lol.
No use asking me of \'professional\' comments - very un-cultured as I am. Never written one, not heard of them much. I thought ya meant vanilla ice cream. heehee.
March 14th, 2022 11:52
orchidee said:
A good villanelle - having looked up what it is! lol.
No use asking me of \'professional\' comments - very un-cultured as I am. Never written one, not heard of them much. I thought ya meant vanilla ice cream. heehee.
March 14th, 2022 11:52
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Desertwind said:
A nice write, has a projection of strength and power in it.
March 14th, 2022 11:04
Desertwind said:
A nice write, has a projection of strength and power in it.
March 14th, 2022 11:04
Trust Not Them (Villanelle)
Ok Waleed said:
Damn I’ve only scratched the surface with poetry
March 14th, 2022 10:49
Ok Waleed said:
Damn I’ve only scratched the surface with poetry
March 14th, 2022 10:49
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
bellflower said:
I liked this collection. Nice to see beautiful views through eyes of beautiful poets.
March 13th, 2022 12:47
bellflower said:
I liked this collection. Nice to see beautiful views through eyes of beautiful poets.
March 13th, 2022 12:47
Was Tomorrow Always Honeyed?
spilleronsheet said:
When struggles seems so hard
And self doubts ebbs inside
The words of your poetry shall ring in mind
That will resurrect the pillars of hope
For a beautiful future tomorrow
Wonderfully inked dear Rocky
March 9th, 2022 14:44
spilleronsheet said:
When struggles seems so hard
And self doubts ebbs inside
The words of your poetry shall ring in mind
That will resurrect the pillars of hope
For a beautiful future tomorrow
Wonderfully inked dear Rocky
March 9th, 2022 14:44
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
spilleronsheet said:
I was late to notice
This priceless peace
Why so precious ?
Cause someone cherished the words the others sew
The sparkle isn’t a gem
Until praises by a special one
Thanks a ton dear Rocky for remembering me
It means a lot
This is a wonderful ode
As well as a positivity booster for me
Where all the best collections are mentioned
How I wish I could add to this list
A beautiful poet I know
Wonder who ?
That’s you my dear friend
In your words of sweet empathy
Your emotions that connect
The voice that calls for justice
I hope you can add your words too
Cause it’s an ode to all poets here
And I truly agree with Teddy
This is a beautiful family
Who supports each other
And you stringed together all members here
Thanks a million dear Rocky for such a beautiful compilation and it made me fluttery inside
To see my name up there
I am glad I could ink the lines that you could adore it
And I really loved the way, you even mentioned the work of the poets whose lines it corresponds
Hats off to your efforts dear Rocky
And I am sorry for being late to reply
Caught up in loads of backlogs
March 9th, 2022 14:24
spilleronsheet said:
I was late to notice
This priceless peace
Why so precious ?
Cause someone cherished the words the others sew
The sparkle isn’t a gem
Until praises by a special one
Thanks a ton dear Rocky for remembering me
It means a lot
This is a wonderful ode
As well as a positivity booster for me
Where all the best collections are mentioned
How I wish I could add to this list
A beautiful poet I know
Wonder who ?
That’s you my dear friend
In your words of sweet empathy
Your emotions that connect
The voice that calls for justice
I hope you can add your words too
Cause it’s an ode to all poets here
And I truly agree with Teddy
This is a beautiful family
Who supports each other
And you stringed together all members here
Thanks a million dear Rocky for such a beautiful compilation and it made me fluttery inside
To see my name up there
I am glad I could ink the lines that you could adore it
And I really loved the way, you even mentioned the work of the poets whose lines it corresponds
Hats off to your efforts dear Rocky
And I am sorry for being late to reply
Caught up in loads of backlogs
March 9th, 2022 14:24
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
junia said:
aww, thank you so much for including me! and thanks for introducing me to so many great poems i hadn’t had the pleasure of reading yet! this is extremely beautiful and inspirational
March 9th, 2022 11:54
junia said:
aww, thank you so much for including me! and thanks for introducing me to so many great poems i hadn’t had the pleasure of reading yet! this is extremely beautiful and inspirational
March 9th, 2022 11:54
Hold Me Like Clair De Lune
theneophiles_words said:
This piece is one of my favorites after a long day at work or when my brain buzzes off or after being through the thick coursebooks, or at lonely dusk. I sometimes listen to this one on repeat just for the soothing effect on the soul. I could feel and visualize each word of the poem with the music playing in the backdrop.
Awe-inspiring as always, Rocky. ✨💞
March 9th, 2022 07:23
theneophiles_words said:
This piece is one of my favorites after a long day at work or when my brain buzzes off or after being through the thick coursebooks, or at lonely dusk. I sometimes listen to this one on repeat just for the soothing effect on the soul. I could feel and visualize each word of the poem with the music playing in the backdrop.
Awe-inspiring as always, Rocky. ✨💞
March 9th, 2022 07:23
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
theneophiles_words said:
A phenomenal mosaic; that has my heart from now on. You are such a sweetheart, and I loved this one; I do others as well. Each of your art is unique in its way, filled with Inspiration, Emotions, Thoughts, Expressions, and Feelings that are hard to describe, yet you communicate it subtly. What amazed me; even more; is SOMETIMES was worth enough of a mention. I never expected it to be a part of this. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you so much.......Rocky.
March 9th, 2022 06:38
theneophiles_words said:
A phenomenal mosaic; that has my heart from now on. You are such a sweetheart, and I loved this one; I do others as well. Each of your art is unique in its way, filled with Inspiration, Emotions, Thoughts, Expressions, and Feelings that are hard to describe, yet you communicate it subtly. What amazed me; even more; is SOMETIMES was worth enough of a mention. I never expected it to be a part of this. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you so much.......Rocky.
March 9th, 2022 06:38
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Rocky.
MPS is certainly a wonderful site to share with all.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Rocky.
MPS is certainly a wonderful site to share with all.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:04
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for the tribute my friend,your so sweet
March 8th, 2022 23:57
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for the tribute my friend,your so sweet
March 8th, 2022 23:57
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Hi Rocky! This is REALLY AWSOME!!! I\'m so touched,as I\'m sure we all are. I used to reject the Internet at one time. I didn\'t believe a genuine relationship of any kind with someone on another continent was possible. I don\'t know why,but I just thought it would be so fake and impersonal. The beautiful people here on MPS have joyfully proven me wrong. And you\'ve just empowered the proof. Cheers🍻🌞🕊
March 8th, 2022 22:47
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Hi Rocky! This is REALLY AWSOME!!! I\'m so touched,as I\'m sure we all are. I used to reject the Internet at one time. I didn\'t believe a genuine relationship of any kind with someone on another continent was possible. I don\'t know why,but I just thought it would be so fake and impersonal. The beautiful people here on MPS have joyfully proven me wrong. And you\'ve just empowered the proof. Cheers🍻🌞🕊
March 8th, 2022 22:47
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Rozina said:
Thank you Rocky for being such an encouraging friend to new and old poets. Your poem gives out a warm happy feeling as I read it. I put up “If MPS poets met….” on the 21st Jan but hadn’t “met” you then. Would definitely want to have you at our picnic! Have a lovely day.
March 8th, 2022 18:30
Rozina said:
Thank you Rocky for being such an encouraging friend to new and old poets. Your poem gives out a warm happy feeling as I read it. I put up “If MPS poets met….” on the 21st Jan but hadn’t “met” you then. Would definitely want to have you at our picnic! Have a lovely day.
March 8th, 2022 18:30
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Christina8 said:
OMG that was AMAZING and awww, you didn\'t forget me. How hard this must have been to include everybody! This makes MPS feel like family for sure. Awesome job Rocky!!!!--Christina
March 8th, 2022 17:06
Christina8 said:
OMG that was AMAZING and awww, you didn\'t forget me. How hard this must have been to include everybody! This makes MPS feel like family for sure. Awesome job Rocky!!!!--Christina
March 8th, 2022 17:06
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
RainningHearts said:
That\'s really sweet of you to make this ode Rocky. It\'s a wonderful and creative way of saying thank you to everyone here. < 3
March 8th, 2022 13:34
RainningHearts said:
That\'s really sweet of you to make this ode Rocky. It\'s a wonderful and creative way of saying thank you to everyone here. < 3
March 8th, 2022 13:34
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Vamsi Sudha said:
That\'s a great Ode to the all wonderful poets at MPS !! Nice thought !!
March 8th, 2022 12:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
That\'s a great Ode to the all wonderful poets at MPS !! Nice thought !!
March 8th, 2022 12:51
POETS ON POETS (Ode to the MPS Family)
Caring dove said:
Really nice of you ! And Thankyou for mentioning one of my poems and my sisters too . This is a nice site
March 8th, 2022 12:23
Caring dove said:
Really nice of you ! And Thankyou for mentioning one of my poems and my sisters too . This is a nice site
March 8th, 2022 12:23
Was Tomorrow Always Honeyed?
Rozina said:
When we have undergone much pain and suffering, we then appreciate how precious life is, a new day, a fresh bloom, a friendly smile, an encouraging word....Thank you.
March 7th, 2022 22:08
Rozina said:
When we have undergone much pain and suffering, we then appreciate how precious life is, a new day, a fresh bloom, a friendly smile, an encouraging word....Thank you.
March 7th, 2022 22:08
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