Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
We\'ll Be the Sunrise! (Haiku/Senryū #2)
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Rocky. A wonderful Haiku.
February 25th, 2022 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Rocky. A wonderful Haiku.
February 25th, 2022 17:26
We\'ll Be the Sunrise! (Haiku/Senryū #2)
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful compilations with emotions penned
A wonderful haiku ringing motivations at end
Giving me gentle advice as they weave by
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece my dear friend
February 25th, 2022 15:13
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful compilations with emotions penned
A wonderful haiku ringing motivations at end
Giving me gentle advice as they weave by
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece my dear friend
February 25th, 2022 15:13
We\'ll Be the Sunrise! (Haiku/Senryū #2)
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome to the world of 575s - a great form if you forget the strict rules and just maintain the syllable count - great 575s by the way.
February 25th, 2022 14:56
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome to the world of 575s - a great form if you forget the strict rules and just maintain the syllable count - great 575s by the way.
February 25th, 2022 14:56
We\'ll Be the Sunrise! (Haiku/Senryū #2)
junia said:
I really like this, Rocky! Especially \"cry with me once more\". It\'s not about suddenly giving up crying, but about slowly getting better, choosing to be happy. The sunrise is a great metaphor. You think it might take a long time but at one point you look up and the sun has risen and you wonder how it got there so quickly. That\'s how it goes with being happy as well.
February 25th, 2022 11:03
junia said:
I really like this, Rocky! Especially \"cry with me once more\". It\'s not about suddenly giving up crying, but about slowly getting better, choosing to be happy. The sunrise is a great metaphor. You think it might take a long time but at one point you look up and the sun has risen and you wonder how it got there so quickly. That\'s how it goes with being happy as well.
February 25th, 2022 11:03
Insipid Cups of Coffee
Rozina said:
The next cup of coffee I drink I\'ll remember your poem and explanation. I love coffee but can drink tea without any problems.
February 24th, 2022 21:54
Rozina said:
The next cup of coffee I drink I\'ll remember your poem and explanation. I love coffee but can drink tea without any problems.
February 24th, 2022 21:54
Insipid Cups of Coffee
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful and well written poem! i get the religion and the purity of it you write about, if not careful, it can turn people off. Wonderful and engaging poem!
February 24th, 2022 13:27
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful and well written poem! i get the religion and the purity of it you write about, if not careful, it can turn people off. Wonderful and engaging poem!
February 24th, 2022 13:27
Insipid Cups of Coffee
Paul Bell said:
Like the mad tea drinkers trying to convert me away from coffee.
You can try, but it ain\'t going to happen.
February 24th, 2022 13:03
Paul Bell said:
Like the mad tea drinkers trying to convert me away from coffee.
You can try, but it ain\'t going to happen.
February 24th, 2022 13:03
On the Passing of my Mother
littlegreenbag said:
I got teary-eyed while reading this. Sad to admit but I know exactly how you feel. Losing someone is never easy, especially if that person means a lot to you.
Sending love! ❤
February 24th, 2022 12:34
littlegreenbag said:
I got teary-eyed while reading this. Sad to admit but I know exactly how you feel. Losing someone is never easy, especially if that person means a lot to you.
Sending love! ❤
February 24th, 2022 12:34
Insipid Cups of Coffee
Caring dove said:
It’s certainly an engaging poem ! Great writing 🙂
February 24th, 2022 11:33
Caring dove said:
It’s certainly an engaging poem ! Great writing 🙂
February 24th, 2022 11:33
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
orchidee said:
You were just in time. Fido was about to bark, when he did NOT see the 18+. lol
He barked at me, in my poem called ******. Here\'s part of it:
Ohhh, *&^%$(^ *&^%$!!
And furthermore (*&^%£! *(^]{~
Grrrr! *&^%$£ }{_( *&^% $ __
And even (*^%~} )*&^% £\"!!
Don\'t ask me to translate it or Fido\'s ears will be burning!
February 24th, 2022 09:32
orchidee said:
You were just in time. Fido was about to bark, when he did NOT see the 18+. lol
He barked at me, in my poem called ******. Here\'s part of it:
Ohhh, *&^%$(^ *&^%$!!
And furthermore (*&^%£! *(^]{~
Grrrr! *&^%$£ }{_( *&^% $ __
And even (*^%~} )*&^% £\"!!
Don\'t ask me to translate it or Fido\'s ears will be burning!
February 24th, 2022 09:32
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good thoughts Rocky, I write a lot of haiku, senryu and tanka, I have also created a type I have called Wordiku which only use three words but the words contain five, seven, five syllables, for example:
Intimidating
Conceptualisation.
Obligatory.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good thoughts Rocky, I write a lot of haiku, senryu and tanka, I have also created a type I have called Wordiku which only use three words but the words contain five, seven, five syllables, for example:
Intimidating
Conceptualisation.
Obligatory.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:52
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
Rozina said:
So much meaning in just 3 short lines. Great! I also want to give haiku/senryu a go. Inspired by so many poets.
February 24th, 2022 00:56
Rozina said:
So much meaning in just 3 short lines. Great! I also want to give haiku/senryu a go. Inspired by so many poets.
February 24th, 2022 00:56
MY SILENT PROTEST (A Rant Against My Homophobic Father)
Ok Waleed said:
Have you found forgiveness
February 23rd, 2022 22:07
Ok Waleed said:
Have you found forgiveness
February 23rd, 2022 22:07
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
spilleronsheet said:
It so difficult to attempt a haiku
Simply beautiful dear Rocky
Challenging the world of its orthodoxy
February 23rd, 2022 16:06
spilleronsheet said:
It so difficult to attempt a haiku
Simply beautiful dear Rocky
Challenging the world of its orthodoxy
February 23rd, 2022 16:06
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
orchidee said:
My (imaginary) \'watch-dog\', Fido, crops up at times. He\'s got a policy. If people don\'t mark poems 18+ where they should be, he barks ferociously at them.
He\'s a reading, talking, carpet-slipper wearing dog, ya know, relaxing by the fire in winter, or in the garden in summer, reading these poems! lol.
February 23rd, 2022 15:34
orchidee said:
My (imaginary) \'watch-dog\', Fido, crops up at times. He\'s got a policy. If people don\'t mark poems 18+ where they should be, he barks ferociously at them.
He\'s a reading, talking, carpet-slipper wearing dog, ya know, relaxing by the fire in winter, or in the garden in summer, reading these poems! lol.
February 23rd, 2022 15:34
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Hehe yeah I feel this a lot, ESPECIALLY in 2022. May y\'all rest in peace when we go extinct.
February 23rd, 2022 14:36
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Hehe yeah I feel this a lot, ESPECIALLY in 2022. May y\'all rest in peace when we go extinct.
February 23rd, 2022 14:36
On the Brink of Memories
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, its so well written and as you say, open to interpretation. Love this!
February 23rd, 2022 13:21
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, its so well written and as you say, open to interpretation. Love this!
February 23rd, 2022 13:21
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
Ok Waleed said:
Forget a haiku! Do a kuhai instead! Haha great poem seriously
February 23rd, 2022 13:01
Ok Waleed said:
Forget a haiku! Do a kuhai instead! Haha great poem seriously
February 23rd, 2022 13:01
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
Neville said:
You can beat an egg mate
but you just can\'t beat a flippin haiku
can ya .......................... Neville :)
February 23rd, 2022 12:29
Neville said:
You can beat an egg mate
but you just can\'t beat a flippin haiku
can ya .......................... Neville :)
February 23rd, 2022 12:29
On the Passing of my Mother
junia said:
I am so sorry for your loss! Thank you for sharing, the poem is beautiful. It almost feels wrong to pick lines that I liked best but I think details like \"natural hair color\" and \"kiss you on your upper cheek\" are what makes this poem so heartbreakingly captivating.
February 23rd, 2022 11:19
junia said:
I am so sorry for your loss! Thank you for sharing, the poem is beautiful. It almost feels wrong to pick lines that I liked best but I think details like \"natural hair color\" and \"kiss you on your upper cheek\" are what makes this poem so heartbreakingly captivating.
February 23rd, 2022 11:19
Fucked Upness (Haiku/Senryū #1)
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your first Haiku---yes the world is a bit fucked up but there\'s always light the end of the tunnel if you let it. Love this!
February 23rd, 2022 10:36
Christina8 said:
I enjoyed your first Haiku---yes the world is a bit fucked up but there\'s always light the end of the tunnel if you let it. Love this!
February 23rd, 2022 10:36
On the Passing of my Mother
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always got different views on open caskets. Death at anytime is bad enough, but when it\'s your own, it\'s like your world ending.
Hope sharing has helped you.
February 23rd, 2022 10:03
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always got different views on open caskets. Death at anytime is bad enough, but when it\'s your own, it\'s like your world ending.
Hope sharing has helped you.
February 23rd, 2022 10:03
On the Passing of my Mother
Rozina said:
I am sorry for your loss. My mum passed away 2 years ago. I have so many memories of her too.Thank you for sharing this beautiful personal story with us. All the very best to you.
February 22nd, 2022 18:19
Rozina said:
I am sorry for your loss. My mum passed away 2 years ago. I have so many memories of her too.Thank you for sharing this beautiful personal story with us. All the very best to you.
February 22nd, 2022 18:19
On the Passing of my Mother
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I had a hard time reading this,as it brought back memories of my moms funeral service. I praise your strength,I could never write such a detailed picture of such a painful memory. The love you have for your mom and grandmother shine through bright and strong here. Nothing short of a beautiful piece of you. Thanks so much for sharing Rocky.🍻🤗🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I had a hard time reading this,as it brought back memories of my moms funeral service. I praise your strength,I could never write such a detailed picture of such a painful memory. The love you have for your mom and grandmother shine through bright and strong here. Nothing short of a beautiful piece of you. Thanks so much for sharing Rocky.🍻🤗🌞🕊
February 22nd, 2022 16:01
Vertigo
HassanKossar said:
This is great poem, it carries the spiritual
And physical feelings of all humanity. Simply put, \"We are equal\" our blood is all red, we have all the same equal number of organs, heads, hands, legs, and, we all have hair on our bodies, so, Fuck the skin colour.
Thanks Rocky. Well done for sharing with us!
February 22nd, 2022 13:56
HassanKossar said:
This is great poem, it carries the spiritual
And physical feelings of all humanity. Simply put, \"We are equal\" our blood is all red, we have all the same equal number of organs, heads, hands, legs, and, we all have hair on our bodies, so, Fuck the skin colour.
Thanks Rocky. Well done for sharing with us!
February 22nd, 2022 13:56
On the Passing of my Mother
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely heart wrenching and memories from my own mothers funeral came flooding behind tears. My grandmother too stood before her casket. I just want to say you have penned a beautiful memory though sad and I offer my condolences for your loss!
February 22nd, 2022 13:20
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely heart wrenching and memories from my own mothers funeral came flooding behind tears. My grandmother too stood before her casket. I just want to say you have penned a beautiful memory though sad and I offer my condolences for your loss!
February 22nd, 2022 13:20
On the Brink of Memories
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording. Beautiful images. Well done.
February 22nd, 2022 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording. Beautiful images. Well done.
February 22nd, 2022 13:17
On the Passing of my Mother
Jane Clemons said:
This poem is so sensitive, yet intense. There are two phrases that caught my heart: \"Silence hugs each one of us\", as there is a certain death we experience in our spirit when a loved one loses their physical being. The other term I liked was \"My warrior inspiration \". You really shine in the area of sensitivity ! Love, comfort, joy & peace to you.....
February 22nd, 2022 12:29
Jane Clemons said:
This poem is so sensitive, yet intense. There are two phrases that caught my heart: \"Silence hugs each one of us\", as there is a certain death we experience in our spirit when a loved one loses their physical being. The other term I liked was \"My warrior inspiration \". You really shine in the area of sensitivity ! Love, comfort, joy & peace to you.....
February 22nd, 2022 12:29
On the Passing of my Mother
spilleronsheet said:
A very heart wrenching poetry
I know she is physically no more
But she is inside you
Your her reflection
Her desires you carry
Her wishes remain
And cherish those memories she kept with you
I am sure, watching from heaven above she would be so proud of you
Each word you wrote, I could see that sad scene
I could feel the pain building inside
And it is very courageous of you, to pen your saddest emotions
Dear Rocky, your mother is alive in your poetries
Keep penning dear friend
Don’t stop
February 22nd, 2022 12:26
spilleronsheet said:
A very heart wrenching poetry
I know she is physically no more
But she is inside you
Your her reflection
Her desires you carry
Her wishes remain
And cherish those memories she kept with you
I am sure, watching from heaven above she would be so proud of you
Each word you wrote, I could see that sad scene
I could feel the pain building inside
And it is very courageous of you, to pen your saddest emotions
Dear Rocky, your mother is alive in your poetries
Keep penning dear friend
Don’t stop
February 22nd, 2022 12:26
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