Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Ye Wings of Wisdom
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely wonderful Rocky, really captivating poem
April 18th, 2022 20:57
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely wonderful Rocky, really captivating poem
April 18th, 2022 20:57
Ye Wings of Wisdom
sorenbarrett said:
Eye opening. It is not only at birth or childhood that we can awaken to this world but at every instant as we see things from a different light a different angle. Anthropomorphism a wonderful tool as is the metaphor. Almost a parable or fable. Well done.
April 18th, 2022 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
Eye opening. It is not only at birth or childhood that we can awaken to this world but at every instant as we see things from a different light a different angle. Anthropomorphism a wonderful tool as is the metaphor. Almost a parable or fable. Well done.
April 18th, 2022 18:35
Ye Wings of Wisdom
Rozina said:
Yes I have learnt much from the poets on this site, young and old and they have given me encouragement and motivation to continue writing. And I am an old person learning to write poems! Your poems are really original and definitely connect. So keep on writing your fine poems. Thank you.
April 18th, 2022 17:52
Rozina said:
Yes I have learnt much from the poets on this site, young and old and they have given me encouragement and motivation to continue writing. And I am an old person learning to write poems! Your poems are really original and definitely connect. So keep on writing your fine poems. Thank you.
April 18th, 2022 17:52
Ye Wings of Wisdom
dusk arising said:
And you fly ! Yes you do, we see it.
What a super way to convey your message in this poem. I was intrigued and very quickly smiling whilst reading.
Great creative work and a message for us all.
April 18th, 2022 16:32
dusk arising said:
And you fly ! Yes you do, we see it.
What a super way to convey your message in this poem. I was intrigued and very quickly smiling whilst reading.
Great creative work and a message for us all.
April 18th, 2022 16:32
Ye Wings of Wisdom
Neville said:
... what an original post you have pinned here today Rocky ..
... and I live and I learn and I learn & I live .......................... Neville :)
April 18th, 2022 13:01
Neville said:
... what an original post you have pinned here today Rocky ..
... and I live and I learn and I learn & I live .......................... Neville :)
April 18th, 2022 13:01
A Letter to Whomever it Corresponds to
Paul Bell said:
The Californian fires, like the Australian fires, usually started deliberately by fools who don\'t understand the speed of fire.
We\'re living in strange times, and it seems like the loonies are running the asylums now.
April 18th, 2022 11:35
Paul Bell said:
The Californian fires, like the Australian fires, usually started deliberately by fools who don\'t understand the speed of fire.
We\'re living in strange times, and it seems like the loonies are running the asylums now.
April 18th, 2022 11:35
Ye Wings of Wisdom
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes we never stop to actually see what is around us.
Maybe that\'s the human condition, constantly on the rubber band stretching for something or praying for the immpossible.
April 18th, 2022 11:27
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes we never stop to actually see what is around us.
Maybe that\'s the human condition, constantly on the rubber band stretching for something or praying for the immpossible.
April 18th, 2022 11:27
Ye Wings of Wisdom
Caring dove said:
Such an engaging writing I really like this ! That sense of awe we feel when looking around us .. like that little bird amazed at the world
Beautiful writing 🙂🙂
April 18th, 2022 10:10
Caring dove said:
Such an engaging writing I really like this ! That sense of awe we feel when looking around us .. like that little bird amazed at the world
Beautiful writing 🙂🙂
April 18th, 2022 10:10
A Letter to Whomever it Corresponds to
Rozina said:
Wow! A brilliant poem that would resonate with every reader.
April 14th, 2022 17:48
Rozina said:
Wow! A brilliant poem that would resonate with every reader.
April 14th, 2022 17:48
A Letter to Whomever it Corresponds to
Bella Shepard said:
You have most accurately penned this letter to YOU. I wonder sometimes if entropy will become the natural state of our existence, when we\'ve used up all the energy of life. Our future is already there , we make it every minute of every day, we just lack the vision to see it. Ignorance can be cured through education, if the ignorant are willing to learn. But as the saying goes, there\'s no cure for stupid, especially when it is worn as a badge of honor. A great intuitive, thought provoking piece, Kudos to you!
April 14th, 2022 12:18
Bella Shepard said:
You have most accurately penned this letter to YOU. I wonder sometimes if entropy will become the natural state of our existence, when we\'ve used up all the energy of life. Our future is already there , we make it every minute of every day, we just lack the vision to see it. Ignorance can be cured through education, if the ignorant are willing to learn. But as the saying goes, there\'s no cure for stupid, especially when it is worn as a badge of honor. A great intuitive, thought provoking piece, Kudos to you!
April 14th, 2022 12:18
A Letter to Whomever it Corresponds to
spilleronsheet said:
This is a fine and splendid work
Summing up the disasters that are wrecking our life
Which still continue to plague our life
You didn’t miss even a single one
I hope this ends soon
April 14th, 2022 12:11
spilleronsheet said:
This is a fine and splendid work
Summing up the disasters that are wrecking our life
Which still continue to plague our life
You didn’t miss even a single one
I hope this ends soon
April 14th, 2022 12:11
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Neville said:
nice way to build up an appetite and in no time at all ................... Z :)
April 14th, 2022 09:47
Neville said:
nice way to build up an appetite and in no time at all ................... Z :)
April 14th, 2022 09:47
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
sorenbarrett said:
Rocky this piece of work goes way beyond. So many elements incorporated in one Haiku is unusual. Alliteration, philosophical, metaphor, maintaining a single theme, meter, Wow!!! Impressive.
April 14th, 2022 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Rocky this piece of work goes way beyond. So many elements incorporated in one Haiku is unusual. Alliteration, philosophical, metaphor, maintaining a single theme, meter, Wow!!! Impressive.
April 14th, 2022 08:37
A Golden Ocean Anchorage
theneophiles_words said:
This poem is a remarkable spectacle of that close-knitted tender bond.
The line \'You have to learn to anchor yourself first\' is engaging. We forget such a simple thing and get carried away with every other thing, and when you said, \'and decided to make it into a canvas\'; it showed no matter what life tosses us into, it\'s our steadiness and decisiveness that will help us sail throw it. Astonishing!😊✨
April 14th, 2022 07:31
theneophiles_words said:
This poem is a remarkable spectacle of that close-knitted tender bond.
The line \'You have to learn to anchor yourself first\' is engaging. We forget such a simple thing and get carried away with every other thing, and when you said, \'and decided to make it into a canvas\'; it showed no matter what life tosses us into, it\'s our steadiness and decisiveness that will help us sail throw it. Astonishing!😊✨
April 14th, 2022 07:31
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Rozina said:
Yes you are right. Often we get it wrong sometimes we get it right. But being a parent was harder than any exam I ever sat.
April 14th, 2022 04:31
Rozina said:
Yes you are right. Often we get it wrong sometimes we get it right. But being a parent was harder than any exam I ever sat.
April 14th, 2022 04:31
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Michael Edwards said:
i read it and enjoyed for what it is - then I read your description of it and it took on a new meaning - either way a gem of a write.
April 13th, 2022 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
i read it and enjoyed for what it is - then I read your description of it and it took on a new meaning - either way a gem of a write.
April 13th, 2022 14:30
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
orchidee said:
Good write R.
April 13th, 2022 13:22
orchidee said:
Good write R.
April 13th, 2022 13:22
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
spilleronsheet said:
Wonder in her senyru
I witnessed childhood of many
In her senyru
I found advice
That spoke of kid and parents teaching in life
So well crafted dear Rocky
April 13th, 2022 12:52
spilleronsheet said:
Wonder in her senyru
I witnessed childhood of many
In her senyru
I found advice
That spoke of kid and parents teaching in life
So well crafted dear Rocky
April 13th, 2022 12:52
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Bella Shepard said:
I heard a discussion recently on our Public Radio about gentle parenting. I wonder where that would fit in. Maybe a cake server instead of spatula. Short but sweet!
April 13th, 2022 11:32
Bella Shepard said:
I heard a discussion recently on our Public Radio about gentle parenting. I wonder where that would fit in. Maybe a cake server instead of spatula. Short but sweet!
April 13th, 2022 11:32
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I think one of the greatest songs about the relationship of parents and their children is Cats In The Cradle by Harry Chapin. Great write Rocky🍻👏🕊🌞
April 13th, 2022 11:07
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I think one of the greatest songs about the relationship of parents and their children is Cats In The Cradle by Harry Chapin. Great write Rocky🍻👏🕊🌞
April 13th, 2022 11:07
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Paul Bell said:
Parents, who would have them.
I suppose, though, you do get to pick their care homes. You can see why kids divorce their parents now.
April 13th, 2022 10:42
Paul Bell said:
Parents, who would have them.
I suppose, though, you do get to pick their care homes. You can see why kids divorce their parents now.
April 13th, 2022 10:42
The Spatula Can Support... or Slaughter (Haiku/Senryū #4)
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful--so deep for a Haiku/Senryu. I actually thought the spatula was meant to hurt but as you say, it\'s the parent. Sometimes we\'re succulent--well reared and others \"scared stoic\". Great piece of work Rocky, keep it up!
April 13th, 2022 09:34
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful--so deep for a Haiku/Senryu. I actually thought the spatula was meant to hurt but as you say, it\'s the parent. Sometimes we\'re succulent--well reared and others \"scared stoic\". Great piece of work Rocky, keep it up!
April 13th, 2022 09:34
Living Lady Lilac
Neville said:
these words are more than worthy of each & every one of my twelve reviewing predecessors comments .. and as many more who I would not be at all surprised shall eventually follow ...for tis truly splendid ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 09:24
Neville said:
these words are more than worthy of each & every one of my twelve reviewing predecessors comments .. and as many more who I would not be at all surprised shall eventually follow ...for tis truly splendid ............. Neville
April 13th, 2022 09:24
Living Lady Lilac
spilleronsheet said:
How wonderfully you played with words dear Rocky….always amazed my the ease with which you string the words….some advices, some satires, a bit of smirk yet posing intriguing questions….really enjoyed it….
And simply adored every line
Yet this caught me many a times
“ Light.
A promise to show you the door –
A door that ought to be opened of course.
A light that slowly flickers, however, – a Lie.”
April 13th, 2022 09:01
spilleronsheet said:
How wonderfully you played with words dear Rocky….always amazed my the ease with which you string the words….some advices, some satires, a bit of smirk yet posing intriguing questions….really enjoyed it….
And simply adored every line
Yet this caught me many a times
“ Light.
A promise to show you the door –
A door that ought to be opened of course.
A light that slowly flickers, however, – a Lie.”
April 13th, 2022 09:01
A Golden Ocean Anchorage
Rozina said:
Thank you for sharing this very meaningful beautiful poem. Mothers love unconditionally. We hope that whatever we shared and taught and bonded and loved with our sons and daughters will help to light their paths and ease their burden at some point in their lives.
April 12th, 2022 00:26
Rozina said:
Thank you for sharing this very meaningful beautiful poem. Mothers love unconditionally. We hope that whatever we shared and taught and bonded and loved with our sons and daughters will help to light their paths and ease their burden at some point in their lives.
April 12th, 2022 00:26
A Golden Ocean Anchorage
dean langmuir said:
Rocky,Keep leaving your shining sea on,take care.
April 11th, 2022 17:32
dean langmuir said:
Rocky,Keep leaving your shining sea on,take care.
April 11th, 2022 17:32
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