Comments received on poems by arqios
boarding pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
boarding pass
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
boarding pass
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
panhandler’s timepiece
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
panhandler’s timepiece
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
panhandler’s timepiece
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
panhandler’s timepiece
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
panhandler’s timepiece
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
panhandler’s timepiece
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
panhandler’s timepiece
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
panhandler’s timepiece
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
a royal pain
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
a royal pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
see you there
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
a royal pain
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
a royal pain
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It leaves me wanting to know more.
March 11th, 2025 05:22
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting poem.It leaves me wanting to know more.
March 11th, 2025 05:22
a royal pain
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an irresistible force when meeting they go nowhere. A well worded and beautifully painted image in this very short piece.
March 11th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an irresistible force when meeting they go nowhere. A well worded and beautifully painted image in this very short piece.
March 11th, 2025 04:54
a royal pain
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of the Tudor period in our history books. A brutal time, and as for Henry VIII, a right royal bar steward. An absolute tyrant and so religious !! Said his prayers all the time. I am assuming 2016 was the year you wrote this poem arqios? Or does it refer to something else.
March 11th, 2025 04:43
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of the Tudor period in our history books. A brutal time, and as for Henry VIII, a right royal bar steward. An absolute tyrant and so religious !! Said his prayers all the time. I am assuming 2016 was the year you wrote this poem arqios? Or does it refer to something else.
March 11th, 2025 04:43
a royal pain
Neville said:
kneel down, stand firm, hold fast & with that, she promptly breathed her last .. history is full of such woe .. 💛👍
March 11th, 2025 03:26
Neville said:
kneel down, stand firm, hold fast & with that, she promptly breathed her last .. history is full of such woe .. 💛👍
March 11th, 2025 03:26
a royal pain
orchidee said:
There were dreadful days of Mary I. She and Henry VIII were murderers. Now that\'s no way to treat our mother-in-laws! lol.
March 11th, 2025 03:15
orchidee said:
There were dreadful days of Mary I. She and Henry VIII were murderers. Now that\'s no way to treat our mother-in-laws! lol.
March 11th, 2025 03:15
see you there
Cassie58 said:
Fine imagery here arqios, especially in the first stanza. Lovely.
March 10th, 2025 22:21
Cassie58 said:
Fine imagery here arqios, especially in the first stanza. Lovely.
March 10th, 2025 22:21
see you there
Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
Friendship said:
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
March 10th, 2025 15:32
see you there
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
March 10th, 2025 08:08
see you there
Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
March 10th, 2025 06:35
see you there
David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
March 10th, 2025 05:24
see you there
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
March 10th, 2025 04:07
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