Comments received on poems by arqios
Chatterton\'s redress
Neville said:
I could read this all day ..
near perfect in my humble opinion .. far more cerebral than might appear at first glance ..
I tried hitting the like button a dozen times or so but gave up when the blister burst...................Neville
August 26th, 2022 02:28
Neville said:
I could read this all day ..
near perfect in my humble opinion .. far more cerebral than might appear at first glance ..
I tried hitting the like button a dozen times or so but gave up when the blister burst...................Neville
August 26th, 2022 02:28
with you
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words CB, maybe one day the nearness will return.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words CB, maybe one day the nearness will return.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:06
with you
Fay Slimm. said:
Applied with poetic imagery to sigh for is this description of how distant love can lengthen the feel of missing. One to remember as into my list of favourites it goes.
August 25th, 2022 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Applied with poetic imagery to sigh for is this description of how distant love can lengthen the feel of missing. One to remember as into my list of favourites it goes.
August 25th, 2022 04:21
read to your satisfaction
Bella Shepard said:
Love, love, love this! Being old school I need the feel of a book in my hands, turning pages, using my favorite bookmark, even the smell of older books. Reading has been a passion since childhood, and I thank you for this wonderful poem.
August 22nd, 2022 13:56
Bella Shepard said:
Love, love, love this! Being old school I need the feel of a book in my hands, turning pages, using my favorite bookmark, even the smell of older books. Reading has been a passion since childhood, and I thank you for this wonderful poem.
August 22nd, 2022 13:56
read to your satisfaction
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor Thoth inventor of the written word, who later in, Greek mythology, became Hermes the winged messenger enlightens this metaphor. Great wright
August 22nd, 2022 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor Thoth inventor of the written word, who later in, Greek mythology, became Hermes the winged messenger enlightens this metaphor. Great wright
August 22nd, 2022 07:29
read to your satisfaction
Aradhya said:
\"Free your mind upon these winged lines\" such a true and beautiful phrase! Books indeed fly you to another world and free yourself from mind\'s worries. Great job!
August 22nd, 2022 06:49
Aradhya said:
\"Free your mind upon these winged lines\" such a true and beautiful phrase! Books indeed fly you to another world and free yourself from mind\'s worries. Great job!
August 22nd, 2022 06:49
What\'s a decade here and there?
L. B. Mek said:
(I love speaking to the real elderly
85 plus
and still seeing that twinkle of mischief
and fun in their eyes, it reassures me
there\'s more to life than
what our eyes can see and our senses, can feel..)
this is a wonderfully encouraging message
especially, since modernity
has embarrassingly
decided, to pretend that the elderly
are no longer a societal issue...
...
indeed, after a certain age
we\'re either side of a decade
nearer, to that wisdom we seek!
thank you! dear Poet
August 22nd, 2022 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
(I love speaking to the real elderly
85 plus
and still seeing that twinkle of mischief
and fun in their eyes, it reassures me
there\'s more to life than
what our eyes can see and our senses, can feel..)
this is a wonderfully encouraging message
especially, since modernity
has embarrassingly
decided, to pretend that the elderly
are no longer a societal issue...
...
indeed, after a certain age
we\'re either side of a decade
nearer, to that wisdom we seek!
thank you! dear Poet
August 22nd, 2022 02:53
the budding senescent
sorenbarrett said:
They say you are only as young as you think you are. Although the body ages the mind still feels young. This poem is good advice for a person of any age. Although my son is 45 I take this as good advice for me as well as him
August 21st, 2022 21:50
sorenbarrett said:
They say you are only as young as you think you are. Although the body ages the mind still feels young. This poem is good advice for a person of any age. Although my son is 45 I take this as good advice for me as well as him
August 21st, 2022 21:50
the budding senescent
orchidee said:
Doh! I saw a soap serial with mainly young people in it. One line was \'Ohhh, he (or she) is so OLD. He will be 30 soon!\'
August 20th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Doh! I saw a soap serial with mainly young people in it. One line was \'Ohhh, he (or she) is so OLD. He will be 30 soon!\'
August 20th, 2022 02:00
the budding senescent
orchidee said:
As with cheese - you gone mouldy, or matured with age?! lol.
August 20th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
As with cheese - you gone mouldy, or matured with age?! lol.
August 20th, 2022 01:59
the budding senescent
Thekkinkkattil said:
Don\'t worry cryptic we have all safely crossed this age.Now they say senescence comes only after 70 so stay young
August 20th, 2022 01:21
Thekkinkkattil said:
Don\'t worry cryptic we have all safely crossed this age.Now they say senescence comes only after 70 so stay young
August 20th, 2022 01:21
outback
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, thought provoking..
(this be that magnitude
found
within nature\'s, miniscule)
thank you! dear Poet
August 19th, 2022 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, thought provoking..
(this be that magnitude
found
within nature\'s, miniscule)
thank you! dear Poet
August 19th, 2022 03:39
outback
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I read it first as \'Dusty orchid plains\'. What am I doing on dusty plains?! lol.
August 19th, 2022 01:54
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I read it first as \'Dusty orchid plains\'. What am I doing on dusty plains?! lol.
August 19th, 2022 01:54
reminiscences
L. B. Mek said:
\'and waiting, like all-things
for its worth, to be affirmed...\'
(distilled wisdom, a precious gift
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
I read and learn
August 18th, 2022 01:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'and waiting, like all-things
for its worth, to be affirmed...\'
(distilled wisdom, a precious gift
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
I read and learn
August 18th, 2022 01:32
long night
L. B. Mek said:
congrats! dear Poet
brilliantly succinct, true
poetic brevity
thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2022 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
congrats! dear Poet
brilliantly succinct, true
poetic brevity
thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2022 03:03
tidy groomy trim
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose, because they are always on display, we need to keep them neat and tidy. But they do have a very evolutionary basis. We can do so many things with them; grow them, cut them, buff them, paint them, chew them, scratch with them, peel labels with them. What would we do without them?
August 4th, 2022 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose, because they are always on display, we need to keep them neat and tidy. But they do have a very evolutionary basis. We can do so many things with them; grow them, cut them, buff them, paint them, chew them, scratch with them, peel labels with them. What would we do without them?
August 4th, 2022 14:23
tidy groomy trim
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this is deep, dear Poet:
\'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
while soldiers, must
be in uniform to be and act, \'as one\'..
while society\'s first impressions
are dependant on clean shoes and
trimmed nails..
meanwhile our cupboards, just can\'t
get clean!
(deep!
could unpack this all day long..
well done!)
August 4th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
this is deep, dear Poet:
\'cleanliness is next to godliness\'
while soldiers, must
be in uniform to be and act, \'as one\'..
while society\'s first impressions
are dependant on clean shoes and
trimmed nails..
meanwhile our cupboards, just can\'t
get clean!
(deep!
could unpack this all day long..
well done!)
August 4th, 2022 03:58
tidy groomy trim
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone\'s integuments are trim. It\'s all right for some, having trim integuments! I might faint if I didn\'t know what they were. lol.
August 4th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone\'s integuments are trim. It\'s all right for some, having trim integuments! I might faint if I didn\'t know what they were. lol.
August 4th, 2022 01:55
pact
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Hope me teef don\'t flow away anywhere. I talk some rubbish. lol.
August 2nd, 2022 11:28
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Hope me teef don\'t flow away anywhere. I talk some rubbish. lol.
August 2nd, 2022 11:28
pact
L. B. Mek said:
if you, but
thread
a reminiscing
nod
my way, once
in a while
oh, poetic kin
of mine...
August 2nd, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
if you, but
thread
a reminiscing
nod
my way, once
in a while
oh, poetic kin
of mine...
August 2nd, 2022 05:16
promise
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m lost in \"dusky swirls of distant pealing thunder\", beautiful imagery, beautiful words!
July 31st, 2022 10:42
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m lost in \"dusky swirls of distant pealing thunder\", beautiful imagery, beautiful words!
July 31st, 2022 10:42
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