Comments received on poems by arqios
new car
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
germinant style birthed
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
new car
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
new car
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
germinant style birthed
orchidee said:
I get fussy - oohh, it must rhyme, I say sometimes. It does not have to rhyme though.
And lest an extra syllable creep in, Fido reads all me poems before I post them. lol.
November 22nd, 2022 07:28
orchidee said:
I get fussy - oohh, it must rhyme, I say sometimes. It does not have to rhyme though.
And lest an extra syllable creep in, Fido reads all me poems before I post them. lol.
November 22nd, 2022 07:28
germinant style birthed
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir, ink well spent in my humble opinion .. N
November 22nd, 2022 03:55
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib sir, ink well spent in my humble opinion .. N
November 22nd, 2022 03:55
negotiable leave
Neville said:
the ending came too quick .. and took my breath away :)
November 21st, 2022 14:02
Neville said:
the ending came too quick .. and took my breath away :)
November 21st, 2022 14:02
negotiable leave
Fay Slimm. said:
The chosen music leads into the lament so well Rik - the superb imagery underscores how weary a battered heart can feel. Love that final line and having this penning of tearful endings in my list of favourites
November 21st, 2022 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The chosen music leads into the lament so well Rik - the superb imagery underscores how weary a battered heart can feel. Love that final line and having this penning of tearful endings in my list of favourites
November 21st, 2022 11:44
negotiable leave
sorenbarrett said:
A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks to me of deception and falseness in the words \"get off your knee\" and the reference to continued \"lucid hate\". Also the reference to rainbow tears. That false promise that there would be no further floods. Tired of continued pleas not even the mirror can give a true reflection of this person and you are forced to face a new birth or start. But maybe this is just my take. Wonderful imagery regardless..
November 21st, 2022 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks to me of deception and falseness in the words \"get off your knee\" and the reference to continued \"lucid hate\". Also the reference to rainbow tears. That false promise that there would be no further floods. Tired of continued pleas not even the mirror can give a true reflection of this person and you are forced to face a new birth or start. But maybe this is just my take. Wonderful imagery regardless..
November 21st, 2022 10:28
negotiable leave
orchidee said:
Ohh, don\'t bother about daft ole Orchi, they say! He dunno what year it is, let alone what day of the orchilenge it is! lol.
If you don\'t complete the orchilenge he will set his imaginary dog on you. He is a sandwich short of a picnic, and his dog\'s short of a bone!
November 21st, 2022 08:32
orchidee said:
Ohh, don\'t bother about daft ole Orchi, they say! He dunno what year it is, let alone what day of the orchilenge it is! lol.
If you don\'t complete the orchilenge he will set his imaginary dog on you. He is a sandwich short of a picnic, and his dog\'s short of a bone!
November 21st, 2022 08:32
fastidious malignment
Neville said:
as soon as I arrived here, a certain feeling of deja vu came over me ..
November 20th, 2022 13:02
Neville said:
as soon as I arrived here, a certain feeling of deja vu came over me ..
November 20th, 2022 13:02
fastidious malignment
orchidee said:
The only haranguing of mine is if I start singing to others. arrghhh! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:02
orchidee said:
The only haranguing of mine is if I start singing to others. arrghhh! lol.
November 19th, 2022 13:02
fastidious malignment
sorenbarrett said:
Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the poem as it rolled off the tongue. I did get the feel that laundry day was yesterday but maybe that is just because mine was. But then disparagement and vilification does leave a stench in the air. Nicely written.
November 19th, 2022 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the poem as it rolled off the tongue. I did get the feel that laundry day was yesterday but maybe that is just because mine was. But then disparagement and vilification does leave a stench in the air. Nicely written.
November 19th, 2022 07:09
substacking
Neville said:
nope, neva heard of it .. hope nowt like it pops up around my neck o the woods .. sounds more than merely a pain in the pocket to me ........ :)
November 19th, 2022 04:03
Neville said:
nope, neva heard of it .. hope nowt like it pops up around my neck o the woods .. sounds more than merely a pain in the pocket to me ........ :)
November 19th, 2022 04:03
capricious recollections
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that poetry will kee us together Rik.
Andy
November 19th, 2022 02:58
capricious recollections
Doggerel Dave said:
Took several readings for again my literal mind to to work at this one Rik, but worthwhile. As a paean to poetry with a relationship and memories thrown in - a bonus, I arrived in the end.
November 18th, 2022 23:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Took several readings for again my literal mind to to work at this one Rik, but worthwhile. As a paean to poetry with a relationship and memories thrown in - a bonus, I arrived in the end.
November 18th, 2022 23:37
capricious recollections
Bella Shepard said:
The musical accompaniment seems to embody the different moods of poetry so well. Where else can you feel the freedom to express inner most thoughts and be accepted unconditionally. Bravo dear Poet!
November 18th, 2022 15:39
Bella Shepard said:
The musical accompaniment seems to embody the different moods of poetry so well. Where else can you feel the freedom to express inner most thoughts and be accepted unconditionally. Bravo dear Poet!
November 18th, 2022 15:39
capricious recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Poems evoke so much more than words dear Rik - - memory can be kept alive by lines poets pen - - I really relate to the heart-moving music too
November 18th, 2022 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Poems evoke so much more than words dear Rik - - memory can be kept alive by lines poets pen - - I really relate to the heart-moving music too
November 18th, 2022 14:21
capricious recollections
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, poetry is the glue that holds so much more than it is often given credit for ..
Nicely penned sir .. Neville :)
November 18th, 2022 14:17
Neville said:
As far as I am concerned, poetry is the glue that holds so much more than it is often given credit for ..
Nicely penned sir .. Neville :)
November 18th, 2022 14:17
where might you be?
Neville said:
I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville
November 18th, 2022 04:36
Neville said:
I could of course try & be clever and pen something profound .. but shall resist and just say this is an excellent bit o poetry CB and no kiddin sir ..... Neville
November 18th, 2022 04:36
where might you be?
Bella Shepard said:
I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!
November 17th, 2022 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
I feel past, present and future converge, to beguile and entreat. So well done!
November 17th, 2022 12:43
where might you be?
orchidee said:
Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under \'irregular\' format!
I\'ve tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14\'s into 8.6\'s. heehee.
Sounds like I\'m playing Bingo here! lol.
November 17th, 2022 09:04
orchidee said:
Phew! This is something like a 9.2.9.2. format. Or if not that, it comes under \'irregular\' format!
I\'ve tackled a 14.14.4.7.8. format before. I split the 14\'s into 8.6\'s. heehee.
Sounds like I\'m playing Bingo here! lol.
November 17th, 2022 09:04
where might you be?
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line \"revive severed umbilical dreams\"
November 17th, 2022 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded that it hypnotizes and bears one on a journey, carried in the arms of Morpheus. The cycle of life is beautiful. I love the line \"revive severed umbilical dreams\"
November 17th, 2022 08:33
substacking
Bella Shepard said:
Nice treatment of a sticky subject. I have never heard of Substack. I listened to the video and can truthfully say that I have never really understood all the internet jargon, so I can\'t really comment. However, I commiserate with you because I get other emails that pull the same stuff. Actually, I think that they should get stuffed.
November 16th, 2022 09:59
Bella Shepard said:
Nice treatment of a sticky subject. I have never heard of Substack. I listened to the video and can truthfully say that I have never really understood all the internet jargon, so I can\'t really comment. However, I commiserate with you because I get other emails that pull the same stuff. Actually, I think that they should get stuffed.
November 16th, 2022 09:59
substacking
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik - my procedure is: email? Substack? no request from me... WTF? delete (doesn\'t get past the viewing pane)
Am I missing something again?.
November 16th, 2022 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik - my procedure is: email? Substack? no request from me... WTF? delete (doesn\'t get past the viewing pane)
Am I missing something again?.
November 16th, 2022 07:20
substacking
orchidee said:
Ah yes, we stumble along the line - payment requested page, or join up now for a fee page.
Also, we may have about 5 million (well seems liek it) e-mails in our Bin/Trash. Never knew it was so many!
November 16th, 2022 04:34
orchidee said:
Ah yes, we stumble along the line - payment requested page, or join up now for a fee page.
Also, we may have about 5 million (well seems liek it) e-mails in our Bin/Trash. Never knew it was so many!
November 16th, 2022 04:34
irreconcilably different?
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the answer is more than one as well.
November 15th, 2022 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the answer is more than one as well.
November 15th, 2022 10:37
irreconcilably different?
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Aren\'t we on Day 746 or summat of the challenge now?! lol.
November 15th, 2022 08:35
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Aren\'t we on Day 746 or summat of the challenge now?! lol.
November 15th, 2022 08:35
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