Comments received on poems by arqios
branches of a tree
Bella Shepard said:
I love your shape poem! I see that beautiful tree summer green, with the nest that was home to hatchlings who now come to my feeder. What would we do without their beauty?
July 30th, 2022 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
I love your shape poem! I see that beautiful tree summer green, with the nest that was home to hatchlings who now come to my feeder. What would we do without their beauty?
July 30th, 2022 13:57
branches of a tree
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I saw some pines. No branches on most of them for about 30 feet - maybe more.
July 30th, 2022 01:32
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I saw some pines. No branches on most of them for about 30 feet - maybe more.
July 30th, 2022 01:32
some things we overlook
orchidee said:
I\'m not overlooking this fine write CB.
July 28th, 2022 08:35
orchidee said:
I\'m not overlooking this fine write CB.
July 28th, 2022 08:35
home
Neville said:
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is ........................... Neville
July 28th, 2022 03:19
Neville said:
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is ........................... Neville
July 28th, 2022 03:19
silent glow
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful emotion, expressed so beautifully. Simple, true, fav!
July 27th, 2022 09:40
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful emotion, expressed so beautifully. Simple, true, fav!
July 27th, 2022 09:40
silent glow
Neville said:
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the attention and recognition that it so writefully deserves ............... Neville
July 27th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the attention and recognition that it so writefully deserves ............... Neville
July 27th, 2022 09:36
home
L. B. Mek said:
bricks, curated
into a custom fit, home
with tears of laughter and fear
as cement, a mix bag
of our experiences of life..
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 01:57
L. B. Mek said:
bricks, curated
into a custom fit, home
with tears of laughter and fear
as cement, a mix bag
of our experiences of life..
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 01:57
Summer Moon
Neville said:
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest otherwise ..
July 25th, 2022 02:57
Neville said:
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest otherwise ..
July 25th, 2022 02:57
Summer Moon
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written, such a personality you\'ve given this glorious moon. It is my routine to bid her goodnight before I go to bed, and good morning when I step out for my walk. Love the moon, absolutely love this poem, such a fav.
July 20th, 2022 14:59
Bella Shepard said:
So beautifully written, such a personality you\'ve given this glorious moon. It is my routine to bid her goodnight before I go to bed, and good morning when I step out for my walk. Love the moon, absolutely love this poem, such a fav.
July 20th, 2022 14:59
The Rhymester
Neville said:
awesome on it\'s own would be both an injustice and an understatement, so I shall say bloody awesome and just leave it at that ............. Neville
July 18th, 2022 03:18
Neville said:
awesome on it\'s own would be both an injustice and an understatement, so I shall say bloody awesome and just leave it at that ............. Neville
July 18th, 2022 03:18
The Rhymester
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this aloud to do it justice; adding the inflections, pauses, timbre. Powerful and thought provoking. nothing trivial about this piece my friend, as the title might suggest.
July 10th, 2022 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this aloud to do it justice; adding the inflections, pauses, timbre. Powerful and thought provoking. nothing trivial about this piece my friend, as the title might suggest.
July 10th, 2022 13:36
that focal moment
Neville said:
this is so good my poor old eyes can see for yards ..
all joking aside though, I think this is a little blinder .. and has clarified and confirmed my love of poetry ...
July 7th, 2022 02:00
Neville said:
this is so good my poor old eyes can see for yards ..
all joking aside though, I think this is a little blinder .. and has clarified and confirmed my love of poetry ...
July 7th, 2022 02:00
change that rope
Neville said:
this reads like an old un ..
but on reflection, maybe its the font ..
anyway regardless, as far as I\'m concerned its bloomin brill and I ant talkin fish neither, nor am I kidding .. on reflection, I believe \'change that rope\' is far more cerebral than many might otherwise imagine .. not that I\'m knocking anyone else mind .. I\'m just saying ... cheers for sharing crypticbard .. N :)
July 5th, 2022 07:35
Neville said:
this reads like an old un ..
but on reflection, maybe its the font ..
anyway regardless, as far as I\'m concerned its bloomin brill and I ant talkin fish neither, nor am I kidding .. on reflection, I believe \'change that rope\' is far more cerebral than many might otherwise imagine .. not that I\'m knocking anyone else mind .. I\'m just saying ... cheers for sharing crypticbard .. N :)
July 5th, 2022 07:35
change that rope
sorenbarrett said:
Age takes its toll on all but there are some things that remain the same or even get better.
July 3rd, 2022 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Age takes its toll on all but there are some things that remain the same or even get better.
July 3rd, 2022 09:26
let\'s dare to hope again
Poetic Dan said:
Your words are always so mesmerising and pleasure to absorb! Thank you for your energy and transformational spirit that is you...
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
July 3rd, 2022 05:54
Poetic Dan said:
Your words are always so mesmerising and pleasure to absorb! Thank you for your energy and transformational spirit that is you...
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
July 3rd, 2022 05:54
that focal moment
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was gonna change a light bulb that fizzled out, but it was night. I fell down the stairs in the dark, before I got the light bulb from the cupboard downstairs. Doh!
Did I? lol.
July 3rd, 2022 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was gonna change a light bulb that fizzled out, but it was night. I fell down the stairs in the dark, before I got the light bulb from the cupboard downstairs. Doh!
Did I? lol.
July 3rd, 2022 01:51
at the table, with you
L. B. Mek said:
\'Alongside me your visage bright\'
a great read, thank you
that divisive, Great and \'O Rare\'
Ben Jonson would be proud
(
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50672/inviting-a-friend-to-supper
)
July 1st, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Alongside me your visage bright\'
a great read, thank you
that divisive, Great and \'O Rare\'
Ben Jonson would be proud
(
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50672/inviting-a-friend-to-supper
)
July 1st, 2022 03:59
let\'s dare to hope again
ela said:
It\'s interesting how you begin with feelings of hope and then lets nature be the calming piece.
June 30th, 2022 10:00
ela said:
It\'s interesting how you begin with feelings of hope and then lets nature be the calming piece.
June 30th, 2022 10:00
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