Comments received on poems by arqios
stars and gripes
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
orchidee said:
You been doing that astronomy course as I have?!
I thought I found a new object in space, but a bird had pooped on me telescope lens!
May 13th, 2023 10:12
giant\'s demise
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
Neville said:
I like it as is and think it would be a crying shame to supernosedive and become just another black whole, even if it was heart shaped 🖤
May 12th, 2023 12:53
giant\'s demise
orchidee said:
As it happens, I\'m doing a short astronomy course. Oh no, they say the Sun\'s only got about 5 billion years left. Now that\'s not long! Doh! lol.
I\'m travelling to Mars by bus. It goes at the speed of light.
May 12th, 2023 11:04
orchidee said:
As it happens, I\'m doing a short astronomy course. Oh no, they say the Sun\'s only got about 5 billion years left. Now that\'s not long! Doh! lol.
I\'m travelling to Mars by bus. It goes at the speed of light.
May 12th, 2023 11:04
giant\'s demise
2781 said:
How to frame such magnificence in words is beyond me. Just thinking about Light speed give me a short circuit.
May 12th, 2023 07:38
2781 said:
How to frame such magnificence in words is beyond me. Just thinking about Light speed give me a short circuit.
May 12th, 2023 07:38
bygones gone by
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be identified with. Thinking back I have been working on nothing most of my life. And yes \"the words are never few\"
May 11th, 2023 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be identified with. Thinking back I have been working on nothing most of my life. And yes \"the words are never few\"
May 11th, 2023 08:28
bygones gone by
2781 said:
My wife thinks I have early onset dementia. I call it a blessing.
May 11th, 2023 08:08
2781 said:
My wife thinks I have early onset dementia. I call it a blessing.
May 11th, 2023 08:08
bygones gone by
Neville said:
who needs a frontal lobe when one can always refer back to this ..
May 11th, 2023 07:30
Neville said:
who needs a frontal lobe when one can always refer back to this ..
May 11th, 2023 07:30
bygones gone by
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever switch - --- your forceful message comes over not only in your title but in those telling few lines.
May 11th, 2023 07:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever switch - --- your forceful message comes over not only in your title but in those telling few lines.
May 11th, 2023 07:07
plumbing depths
Mr. Not said:
Might the paperplane be a metaphor for someone who was let down by a person close to them, and then they struggle without them perhaps?
and the last verse, that no matter how well you turn out without that person, the thought of them and why they left you will forever be weighing you down?
Very nice poem crypticbard! All the meanings hidden under the simple words makes me think lots and lots!
May 10th, 2023 13:45
Mr. Not said:
Might the paperplane be a metaphor for someone who was let down by a person close to them, and then they struggle without them perhaps?
and the last verse, that no matter how well you turn out without that person, the thought of them and why they left you will forever be weighing you down?
Very nice poem crypticbard! All the meanings hidden under the simple words makes me think lots and lots!
May 10th, 2023 13:45
wilderness calling, again
Neville said:
I have been working full on so seem to have missed out on a whole lotta news .. this post reads well but I need to know what exactly inspired it ..
I guess I have just proved that old adage write \'All work and no play makes Nev a dull boy\' ... N
May 10th, 2023 12:35
Neville said:
I have been working full on so seem to have missed out on a whole lotta news .. this post reads well but I need to know what exactly inspired it ..
I guess I have just proved that old adage write \'All work and no play makes Nev a dull boy\' ... N
May 10th, 2023 12:35
plumbing depths
Bella Shepard said:
There is something in the air these days that insidiously wraps us in dismay, dispair, disharmony. When and how it began is hard to say, and when it will end I guess is up to us, if we\'re up to the task. This is such a thought provoking and soul searching write dear poet. Thank you for putting into words something I think we are all sharing.
May 9th, 2023 11:45
Bella Shepard said:
There is something in the air these days that insidiously wraps us in dismay, dispair, disharmony. When and how it began is hard to say, and when it will end I guess is up to us, if we\'re up to the task. This is such a thought provoking and soul searching write dear poet. Thank you for putting into words something I think we are all sharing.
May 9th, 2023 11:45
plumbing depths
Neville said:
very interesting but must confess I got lost somewhere along the proverbial line ..
May 9th, 2023 07:29
Neville said:
very interesting but must confess I got lost somewhere along the proverbial line ..
May 9th, 2023 07:29
coronated
L. B. Mek said:
\'looping forward on
a midday pumpkin ride\'
indeed,
not quite the Cinderella fairy-tale
I imagined as a kid
then again, apparently they\'re all
nightmare stories
\'touched-up\' to sale a reality, devoid
of accountability..
(a great read! thank you dear Poet)
May 8th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'looping forward on
a midday pumpkin ride\'
indeed,
not quite the Cinderella fairy-tale
I imagined as a kid
then again, apparently they\'re all
nightmare stories
\'touched-up\' to sale a reality, devoid
of accountability..
(a great read! thank you dear Poet)
May 8th, 2023 03:50
coronated
Eugene S. said:
Thought I\'d see more written on the topic, but I guess that really says it all. Appreciate your perspective & well said.
May 8th, 2023 03:30
Eugene S. said:
Thought I\'d see more written on the topic, but I guess that really says it all. Appreciate your perspective & well said.
May 8th, 2023 03:30
coronated
Neville said:
how extraordinarily cerebral .. I very muchly enjoyed the ride sir ..
May 8th, 2023 02:12
Neville said:
how extraordinarily cerebral .. I very muchly enjoyed the ride sir ..
May 8th, 2023 02:12
coronated
Bella Shepard said:
The pomp and circumstance of the spectacle over, celebrations at an end, and now the future begins. Time will tell, it always does. Quite a thought provoking read dear poet.
May 7th, 2023 13:46
Bella Shepard said:
The pomp and circumstance of the spectacle over, celebrations at an end, and now the future begins. Time will tell, it always does. Quite a thought provoking read dear poet.
May 7th, 2023 13:46
coronated
Parisab said:
This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
May 7th, 2023 09:51
Parisab said:
This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
May 7th, 2023 09:51
we\'re living in a meridian world
Neville said:
Bet that cat lands on its feet again tho\'
Hey, you should maybe listen in on my clinic one day ..
that\'s a polite invitation, not an order by the way ..
But then, we\'re all just living in a meridian world ...🐧..
May 6th, 2023 23:14
Neville said:
Bet that cat lands on its feet again tho\'
Hey, you should maybe listen in on my clinic one day ..
that\'s a polite invitation, not an order by the way ..
But then, we\'re all just living in a meridian world ...🐧..
May 6th, 2023 23:14
young love\'s shimmer
Neville said:
I like nothing more than to slow down and drag out fleeting possibilities :)
May 6th, 2023 05:46
Neville said:
I like nothing more than to slow down and drag out fleeting possibilities :)
May 6th, 2023 05:46
young love\'s shimmer
Rocky Lagou said:
I have yet to engage in romance, but this poem was like the perfect simulation.
May 5th, 2023 07:56
Rocky Lagou said:
I have yet to engage in romance, but this poem was like the perfect simulation.
May 5th, 2023 07:56
Johnnie Walker
Neville said:
after but a few tentative sips and a largish slug .. I feel like my Americano has been laced with acid .. Cheers N
May 5th, 2023 05:14
Neville said:
after but a few tentative sips and a largish slug .. I feel like my Americano has been laced with acid .. Cheers N
May 5th, 2023 05:14
Johnnie Walker
L. B. Mek said:
\'betwixt verdant cascading foliage\'
why do I feel like Hemingway
would Earnestly, enjoy this poem
😎
salut! dear Poet
yet another memorable sip
of your potent poetry, thank you!
May 5th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'betwixt verdant cascading foliage\'
why do I feel like Hemingway
would Earnestly, enjoy this poem
😎
salut! dear Poet
yet another memorable sip
of your potent poetry, thank you!
May 5th, 2023 02:56
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