Comments received on poems by arqios
Castle Keep
Cassie58 said:
So much learned by those sandcastles when we were children. Life long lessons taught. Fabulous metaphor and great imagery here arqios. Lovely.
March 2nd, 2025 17:03
Cassie58 said:
So much learned by those sandcastles when we were children. Life long lessons taught. Fabulous metaphor and great imagery here arqios. Lovely.
March 2nd, 2025 17:03
Eclipse
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I stayed too busy and seemingly aloof for dunno how many years, until my present reality and a chance comment here tempted me out of obscurity. Since then there\'s nothing like the tantalizing camaraderie of these forums, is there?! Beautifully rendered with superb intrigue, excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I stayed too busy and seemingly aloof for dunno how many years, until my present reality and a chance comment here tempted me out of obscurity. Since then there\'s nothing like the tantalizing camaraderie of these forums, is there?! Beautifully rendered with superb intrigue, excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:19
Eclipse
Neville said:
Absence does indeed make the heart grow fonder doesn\'t it .. Neville
March 2nd, 2025 11:43
Neville said:
Absence does indeed make the heart grow fonder doesn\'t it .. Neville
March 2nd, 2025 11:43
Eclipse
arqios said:
Your voices have been precious and continue to resound as this journey continues… thanks for the goodness you have shown 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 08:22
arqios said:
Your voices have been precious and continue to resound as this journey continues… thanks for the goodness you have shown 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 08:22
Eclipse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I hear you hear. Not sure when your hiatus was. I started on DarkPoetry.com, which despite its name, was not that good of a fit for me. It wasn\'t until 2017 that I felt brave enough to give online poetry sharing another try. I shared a some between then and 2024...however, for a whole host of reasons, 2024 woke up the sleeping poet and he\'s back! But this is not about me, now is it? I am certainly glad that both of our hiatuses came to an end so we could meet the hell up here and get to know each other! As you can see, I relate to this poem. 🤣 It gets a fave. Well done, poet and friend! 🌹👏
March 2nd, 2025 07:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I hear you hear. Not sure when your hiatus was. I started on DarkPoetry.com, which despite its name, was not that good of a fit for me. It wasn\'t until 2017 that I felt brave enough to give online poetry sharing another try. I shared a some between then and 2024...however, for a whole host of reasons, 2024 woke up the sleeping poet and he\'s back! But this is not about me, now is it? I am certainly glad that both of our hiatuses came to an end so we could meet the hell up here and get to know each other! As you can see, I relate to this poem. 🤣 It gets a fave. Well done, poet and friend! 🌹👏
March 2nd, 2025 07:09
Eclipse
Poetic Licence said:
I am a nubie and beginner on here so I cannot comment on before, but i have enjoyed reading your work, don\'t always understand straight away but that\'s what i like, sometimes to have too think, and I look forward to reading many more
March 2nd, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
I am a nubie and beginner on here so I cannot comment on before, but i have enjoyed reading your work, don\'t always understand straight away but that\'s what i like, sometimes to have too think, and I look forward to reading many more
March 2nd, 2025 05:35
Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
Your voice is always welcome and your poetry enjoyed. Memories are never the same as the real thing.
March 2nd, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Your voice is always welcome and your poetry enjoyed. Memories are never the same as the real thing.
March 2nd, 2025 04:25
Eclipse
Goldfinch60 said:
You must stay here arqios we all look forward to your words.
Andy
March 2nd, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
You must stay here arqios we all look forward to your words.
Andy
March 2nd, 2025 02:57
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
whats write for me said:
This sounds like a Metallica song, I can actually hear the music. Bravo!
March 1st, 2025 08:35
whats write for me said:
This sounds like a Metallica song, I can actually hear the music. Bravo!
March 1st, 2025 08:35
Castle Keep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Sandcastles, and our lives, are temporal. The tide carries the sand in for the keep to be built...and, lo, before you know it, the tide carries it back out again. Wonderfully powerful metaphor, my friend. 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Sandcastles, and our lives, are temporal. The tide carries the sand in for the keep to be built...and, lo, before you know it, the tide carries it back out again. Wonderfully powerful metaphor, my friend. 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 08:27
Castle Keep
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful poem! The imagery and metaphors are stunning.
March 1st, 2025 07:06
Salvia.S said:
Breathtakingly beautiful poem! The imagery and metaphors are stunning.
March 1st, 2025 07:06
Castle Keep
Poetic Licence said:
That is a stunning sand castle but like life it will eventually disappear, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
That is a stunning sand castle but like life it will eventually disappear, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:23
Castle Keep
David Wakeling said:
Thats the sad truth about sand castles they get re-possesed.Delightful poem
March 1st, 2025 06:18
David Wakeling said:
Thats the sad truth about sand castles they get re-possesed.Delightful poem
March 1st, 2025 06:18
Blossoming (2017)
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Nice Canopy of Blossoms
March 1st, 2025 05:42
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Nice Canopy of Blossoms
March 1st, 2025 05:42
Castle Keep
sorenbarrett said:
And such is childhood with its growing change simple, honest views of splendors beyond comprehension, and disillusionment with the erosion of time\'s tides. In older reflection one leaves footprints that one realizes will be swept away with each incoming wave. This poem carries feelings of youthful amazement, and ages resignation. Nicely done Cryptic
March 1st, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
And such is childhood with its growing change simple, honest views of splendors beyond comprehension, and disillusionment with the erosion of time\'s tides. In older reflection one leaves footprints that one realizes will be swept away with each incoming wave. This poem carries feelings of youthful amazement, and ages resignation. Nicely done Cryptic
March 1st, 2025 05:00
Castle Keep
orchidee said:
That\'s a great sandcastle you\'ve built there. lol.
March 1st, 2025 03:27
orchidee said:
That\'s a great sandcastle you\'ve built there. lol.
March 1st, 2025 03:27
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
Goldfinch60 said:
Those echoes bring us such memories arqios.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those echoes bring us such memories arqios.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:42
Three dots dancing
NafisaSB said:
loved those dancing dots - may they join and tumble into beautiful verse, as above, always
March 1st, 2025 00:03
NafisaSB said:
loved those dancing dots - may they join and tumble into beautiful verse, as above, always
March 1st, 2025 00:03
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
sheta said:
I looove the anime picture awesome poem
February 28th, 2025 18:26
sheta said:
I looove the anime picture awesome poem
February 28th, 2025 18:26
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, thus quoth the wizened sage, holding up a shriveled finger to the more youthful listener who was still too immature to fully grasp what was being said, yet caught the import. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 28th, 2025 11:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, thus quoth the wizened sage, holding up a shriveled finger to the more youthful listener who was still too immature to fully grasp what was being said, yet caught the import. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 28th, 2025 11:58
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Paul Gerard Reed said:
Enjoyed this, I like lighthouses as well!
February 28th, 2025 11:33
Paul Gerard Reed said:
Enjoyed this, I like lighthouses as well!
February 28th, 2025 11:33
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
arqios said:
Hard sells are typical of the day, it seems….
February 28th, 2025 08:48
arqios said:
Hard sells are typical of the day, it seems….
February 28th, 2025 08:48
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
Poetic Licence said:
It is a journey we will all take to be an echo,next step forgotton, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:51
Poetic Licence said:
It is a journey we will all take to be an echo,next step forgotton, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:51
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\'Tis True. We are but dust. Here one minute, floating off in the breeze the next. What lingers on? What remains. While people who knew us are alive, memories. Regardless, our echoes linger on, bouncing from place to place until they are heard no more. Profoundly powerful and true. Well done on this, friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\'Tis True. We are but dust. Here one minute, floating off in the breeze the next. What lingers on? What remains. While people who knew us are alive, memories. Regardless, our echoes linger on, bouncing from place to place until they are heard no more. Profoundly powerful and true. Well done on this, friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:19
untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely poetic metaphors play in this poem of musical images a painting of the unseen but felt. Very nicely done my friend it tickles the mind.
February 28th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely poetic metaphors play in this poem of musical images a painting of the unseen but felt. Very nicely done my friend it tickles the mind.
February 28th, 2025 04:18
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