Comments received on poems by arqios
Mr Right
sorenbarrett said:
Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll shut right up. Love plays on words. Right well done.
December 15th, 2022 21:49
sorenbarrett said:
Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll shut right up. Love plays on words. Right well done.
December 15th, 2022 21:49
Mr Right
orchidee said:
I writed (is that a word?!) that this rightly is a good write to read CB.
You got me at it now. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
I writed (is that a word?!) that this rightly is a good write to read CB.
You got me at it now. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:09
shapeshifting
orchidee said:
You turned over a leaf of your notebook and wrote this fine poem?!
Please excuse me - I can\'t shay that middlesh line as I\'ve had a gin or threesh!
December 11th, 2022 03:12
orchidee said:
You turned over a leaf of your notebook and wrote this fine poem?!
Please excuse me - I can\'t shay that middlesh line as I\'ve had a gin or threesh!
December 11th, 2022 03:12
there
sorenbarrett said:
It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to evoke feelings at times unidentifiable but locked in some form they do linger as you say and this is what makes a poem, or any work of art, art to me. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2022 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to evoke feelings at times unidentifiable but locked in some form they do linger as you say and this is what makes a poem, or any work of art, art to me. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2022 07:33
there
Neville said:
some wholes are simply just too hard to fill ............... sadly but true
December 9th, 2022 07:48
Neville said:
some wholes are simply just too hard to fill ............... sadly but true
December 9th, 2022 07:48
there
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was a confused laddie with that poe, potato, whatever stuff! lol.
December 9th, 2022 07:00
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was a confused laddie with that poe, potato, whatever stuff! lol.
December 9th, 2022 07:00
head gear all in poe
Neville said:
could this be noun sense by any chance :)
December 9th, 2022 00:56
Neville said:
could this be noun sense by any chance :)
December 9th, 2022 00:56
head gear all in poe
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of the word-- words. It makes sense to me but then I\'ve had a beer. I wonder if it would make sense to E. Poe? Loved it.
December 8th, 2022 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of the word-- words. It makes sense to me but then I\'ve had a beer. I wonder if it would make sense to E. Poe? Loved it.
December 8th, 2022 19:06
head gear all in poe
orchidee said:
You been on that gin or whisky?! I will understand this poem when I\'ve had about 6 of \'em!
December 8th, 2022 04:08
orchidee said:
You been on that gin or whisky?! I will understand this poem when I\'ve had about 6 of \'em!
December 8th, 2022 04:08
booth chill
orchidee said:
Eek! It\'s become too cryptic for me too! Good write though I\'m sure.
Me brain cells threaten to go on holiday if it\'s too cryptic. I never know when they\'re coming back. lol.
December 7th, 2022 04:06
orchidee said:
Eek! It\'s become too cryptic for me too! Good write though I\'m sure.
Me brain cells threaten to go on holiday if it\'s too cryptic. I never know when they\'re coming back. lol.
December 7th, 2022 04:06
angel envy
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you better stay with orchi - I\'m out of my depth again....🙂
December 6th, 2022 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you better stay with orchi - I\'m out of my depth again....🙂
December 6th, 2022 19:46
angel envy
orchidee said:
Angles? typo? in last verse. and - just call me Gabriel! lol.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
orchidee said:
Angles? typo? in last verse. and - just call me Gabriel! lol.
December 6th, 2022 05:04
eternally connected
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, I thought it was all done via magic. So it\'s technology after all, and me still with paper and pencil. Does the \"m\" stand for mystery? Presumably 10 of them?This was fun, even if I don\'t understand it all.
December 5th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Bard, I thought it was all done via magic. So it\'s technology after all, and me still with paper and pencil. Does the \"m\" stand for mystery? Presumably 10 of them?This was fun, even if I don\'t understand it all.
December 5th, 2022 14:14
eternally connected
Paul Bell said:
Just finishing 5g at my bit. 6 g must be round the corner. Definitely better than it used to be.
December 5th, 2022 12:19
Paul Bell said:
Just finishing 5g at my bit. 6 g must be round the corner. Definitely better than it used to be.
December 5th, 2022 12:19
inimitable contrivances
Mr. Not said:
\"Politicians hide themselves away
They only started the war
Why should they go out to fight?
They leave that role to the poor, yeah
Time will tell on their power minds
Making war just for fun
Treating people just like pawns in chess
Wait till their judgement day comes, yeah!\" - black sabbath, \'war pigs\'
fine read crypticbard
December 5th, 2022 08:06
Mr. Not said:
\"Politicians hide themselves away
They only started the war
Why should they go out to fight?
They leave that role to the poor, yeah
Time will tell on their power minds
Making war just for fun
Treating people just like pawns in chess
Wait till their judgement day comes, yeah!\" - black sabbath, \'war pigs\'
fine read crypticbard
December 5th, 2022 08:06
eternally connected
orchidee said:
A fine write CB
There\'s a kerfuffle in a posh area here, of a possible 5G mast to be plonked outside someone\'s home. Doh!
Oh they are ancient, some of them. They don\'t know what a fax machine is, let alone a mobile phone!
December 5th, 2022 07:44
orchidee said:
A fine write CB
There\'s a kerfuffle in a posh area here, of a possible 5G mast to be plonked outside someone\'s home. Doh!
Oh they are ancient, some of them. They don\'t know what a fax machine is, let alone a mobile phone!
December 5th, 2022 07:44
carillon
Paul Bell said:
This has everything going for it, plus, I used to live on Carillion rd.
December 4th, 2022 06:59
Paul Bell said:
This has everything going for it, plus, I used to live on Carillion rd.
December 4th, 2022 06:59
with John and Paul
Neville said:
Yeah yeah yeah yeah .. You can beat an egg & a drum of course, but you just can\'t beat \'The Beatles\' now can ya :)
December 4th, 2022 00:41
Neville said:
Yeah yeah yeah yeah .. You can beat an egg & a drum of course, but you just can\'t beat \'The Beatles\' now can ya :)
December 4th, 2022 00:41
with John and Paul
Bella Shepard said:
You have hit the old memory button with this one. Roughly 40 years ago I danced in a recital to Stars on 45 Beatles Medley, and it all came flooding back reading this poem and listening to the music. The knees and hips may have aged, but the joy is still there. Thank you dear friend for this wonderful walk down memory lane, I\'ll be dancing the rest of the day, just hope I don\'t hurt myself.
December 3rd, 2022 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
You have hit the old memory button with this one. Roughly 40 years ago I danced in a recital to Stars on 45 Beatles Medley, and it all came flooding back reading this poem and listening to the music. The knees and hips may have aged, but the joy is still there. Thank you dear friend for this wonderful walk down memory lane, I\'ll be dancing the rest of the day, just hope I don\'t hurt myself.
December 3rd, 2022 14:38
crypticbard
Bella Shepard said:
Verse on a shoestring? Short and oh, so very sweet. Love it!
December 2nd, 2022 15:10
Bella Shepard said:
Verse on a shoestring? Short and oh, so very sweet. Love it!
December 2nd, 2022 15:10
crypticbard
orchidee said:
It\'s a fine character writing this, whoever he is. Do I know the guy?! heehee.
December 2nd, 2022 06:17
orchidee said:
It\'s a fine character writing this, whoever he is. Do I know the guy?! heehee.
December 2nd, 2022 06:17
crypticbard
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'if i may say so myself...!\' 😎
I envy your skill and hard-earned confidence
such a fun read, thank you!
December 2nd, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'if i may say so myself...!\' 😎
I envy your skill and hard-earned confidence
such a fun read, thank you!
December 2nd, 2022 05:53
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