Comments received on poems by arqios
twilight trek
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
twilight trek
Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
twilight trek
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
twilight trek
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
but a flesh wound
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
but a flesh wound
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
but a flesh wound
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for good 5-star gourmet cuisine. Anyone want to buy? 🤣 A most wonderful, alluring, and enticing read. You had me salivating all the way down. 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for good 5-star gourmet cuisine. Anyone want to buy? 🤣 A most wonderful, alluring, and enticing read. You had me salivating all the way down. 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:06
but a flesh wound
David Wakeling said:
An amazing tale of the culinary arts.An enjoyable read chef
April 17th, 2025 05:32
David Wakeling said:
An amazing tale of the culinary arts.An enjoyable read chef
April 17th, 2025 05:32
but a flesh wound
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the scene and the imagery is superb depicting the gluttony present in individuals, corporations, countries a whole race and it\'s result. Quit a picture it is. All we can do is get out of the way
April 17th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the scene and the imagery is superb depicting the gluttony present in individuals, corporations, countries a whole race and it\'s result. Quit a picture it is. All we can do is get out of the way
April 17th, 2025 04:08
but a flesh wound
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s a bit different and to me certainly a mind bender, one for me to work on, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:27
but a flesh wound
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Can I have the main course now please arqios.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:58
pot plants
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:46
pot plants
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 14:52
pot plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:24
pot plants
arqios said:
Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
April 16th, 2025 06:25
pot plants
David Wakeling said:
Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in summer.There is always depth in your work.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:29
David Wakeling said:
Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in summer.There is always depth in your work.Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:29
pot plants
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead unjustified beliefs become something else. I see this a second level metaphor and message to be careful what you think for it may well be something else. Enjoyed this one
April 16th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead unjustified beliefs become something else. I see this a second level metaphor and message to be careful what you think for it may well be something else. Enjoyed this one
April 16th, 2025 04:40
pot plants
Poetic Licence said:
Be careful where you let your mind wander, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
Be careful where you let your mind wander, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 04:33
midnight courage
NafisaSB said:
definitely worth picking on - yes the muse does strike me sometimes at midnight, or sometimes after reading a good forward.
thanks for the inspiration
April 16th, 2025 02:49
NafisaSB said:
definitely worth picking on - yes the muse does strike me sometimes at midnight, or sometimes after reading a good forward.
thanks for the inspiration
April 16th, 2025 02:49
letting go: Anton Ego
Goldfinch60 said:
Food critics can ruin dishes if they are well known but your words were fine arqios.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Food critics can ruin dishes if they are well known but your words were fine arqios.
Andy
April 16th, 2025 02:21
letting go: Anton Ego
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a great message! Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a great message! Well done on this! 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 07:48
letting go: Anton Ego
MDStone said:
I was drawn in, I could feel the tension in the air. I could smell, the aroma wafting in the air. I long to taste the dish. To recognize the simplicity and beauty, that is often right before us. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 07:13
MDStone said:
I was drawn in, I could feel the tension in the air. I could smell, the aroma wafting in the air. I long to taste the dish. To recognize the simplicity and beauty, that is often right before us. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 07:13
letting go: Anton Ego
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to animation.
April 15th, 2025 05:56
letting go: Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
David Wakeling said:
I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to judge anothers food.Certainly a well written detailled piece.Excellent work
April 15th, 2025 05:39
letting go: Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
That reminds me of one of the most brutal forms of journalism, if you can call it that,a food critic, and in he got the result that in his heart he didnt want, it tasted really good, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:32
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