Comments received on poems by arqios
Anton Ego
Goldfinch60 said:
We connect with each other in so many ways arqios.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We connect with each other in so many ways arqios.
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:49
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spilleronsheet said:
Lyrics told, my feet lightens as I step to dance….spurring hope in last lines…wonderfully written dear poet…keep writing
April 11th, 2025 14:31
spilleronsheet said:
Lyrics told, my feet lightens as I step to dance….spurring hope in last lines…wonderfully written dear poet…keep writing
April 11th, 2025 14:31
Anton Ego
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on this poem, my friend. \"To taste is to connect\" indeed. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on this poem, my friend. \"To taste is to connect\" indeed. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:42
Anton Ego
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Your poem serves to remind readers (and perhaps critics themselves) of the deeper significance of food beyond mere technicality—highlighting the importance of connection, memory, and emotional engagement in the appreciation of culinary art. You seem to suggest that true artistry lies not only in perfection but in the willingness to take risks and connect with others through shared experiences.
April 11th, 2025 06:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done,Your poem serves to remind readers (and perhaps critics themselves) of the deeper significance of food beyond mere technicality—highlighting the importance of connection, memory, and emotional engagement in the appreciation of culinary art. You seem to suggest that true artistry lies not only in perfection but in the willingness to take risks and connect with others through shared experiences.
April 11th, 2025 06:50
Anton Ego
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful tale of the relationship with food with an amazing conclusion that to taste is to connect. Great poem
April 11th, 2025 05:27
David Wakeling said:
What a wonderful tale of the relationship with food with an amazing conclusion that to taste is to connect. Great poem
April 11th, 2025 05:27
Anton Ego
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their taste as do those that consume them vary in theirs. A poem may be perfect but is it perfect for the taste of its reader? No one can tell so all the cook or author can do is make it perfect for themselves. I have always said that what makes a poem a poem to me is the emotion it evokes not the nicety of form or rhyme.
April 11th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their taste as do those that consume them vary in theirs. A poem may be perfect but is it perfect for the taste of its reader? No one can tell so all the cook or author can do is make it perfect for themselves. I have always said that what makes a poem a poem to me is the emotion it evokes not the nicety of form or rhyme.
April 11th, 2025 04:06
Anton Ego
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very poetic and nicely written poem, nice way to end the week, enjoyed
April 11th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very poetic and nicely written poem, nice way to end the week, enjoyed
April 11th, 2025 03:19
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Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing arqios it brings joy to our lives.
Andy
April 11th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep dancing arqios it brings joy to our lives.
Andy
April 11th, 2025 01:25
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words practically dance as you read them, whether silently or out loud. Wonderful job. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:14
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MDStone said:
Danced my way through the lines. The rhyme giving those sharp deliberate movements every good waltz deserves. Very Nice. Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 05:31
MDStone said:
Danced my way through the lines. The rhyme giving those sharp deliberate movements every good waltz deserves. Very Nice. Thanks for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 05:31
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David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.I see Lord of the Dance dancing to this cadence and rhythm.Enjoyable
April 10th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.I see Lord of the Dance dancing to this cadence and rhythm.Enjoyable
April 10th, 2025 05:21
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Poetic Licence said:
Nicely done, just need the music now to accompany it
April 10th, 2025 04:03
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely done, just need the music now to accompany it
April 10th, 2025 04:03
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sorenbarrett said:
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice Cryptic
April 10th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice Cryptic
April 10th, 2025 04:01
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Cheeky Missy said:
If only we heard the strains whileas your lyrics trip down the page, I daresay we\'d waltz gaily. Fascinating and sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Thank you as well for the note on it!
April 10th, 2025 02:17
Cheeky Missy said:
If only we heard the strains whileas your lyrics trip down the page, I daresay we\'d waltz gaily. Fascinating and sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Thank you as well for the note on it!
April 10th, 2025 02:17
windswept smiles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my face. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my face. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:51
windswept smiles
Friendship said:
lovely done, your poem revolves around summer activities and experiences, such as enjoying fruits, laughter, and leisure time spent with loved ones. It paints a vivid picture of sunny days, playful interactions, and the warmth of human connection.
April 9th, 2025 07:43
Friendship said:
lovely done, your poem revolves around summer activities and experiences, such as enjoying fruits, laughter, and leisure time spent with loved ones. It paints a vivid picture of sunny days, playful interactions, and the warmth of human connection.
April 9th, 2025 07:43
windswept smiles
arqios said:
Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
April 9th, 2025 05:13
arqios said:
Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
April 9th, 2025 05:13
windswept smiles
Poetic Licence said:
A drive down more youthful days, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:01
Poetic Licence said:
A drive down more youthful days, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:01
windswept smiles
sorenbarrett said:
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with your opening lines
long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
Here the imagery first line is reinforced in the second, a top down drive (in a convertible) is seen as a top down in shirtless tans. Sweet strawberry kisses is seen in the red watermelon stains of the second line. This is most ingenious and certainly most poetic on another level. My congratulations and a fave
April 9th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with your opening lines
long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
Here the imagery first line is reinforced in the second, a top down drive (in a convertible) is seen as a top down in shirtless tans. Sweet strawberry kisses is seen in the red watermelon stains of the second line. This is most ingenious and certainly most poetic on another level. My congratulations and a fave
April 9th, 2025 04:53
Vilvoorde: wash
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, may that moonlight polish all our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words arqios, may that moonlight polish all our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:14
Vilvoorde: wash
David Wakeling said:
This creates a melancholic mood of a mind nit yet defeated.Enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 22:14
David Wakeling said:
This creates a melancholic mood of a mind nit yet defeated.Enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 22:14
Vilvoorde: wash
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I also love how the shape of the poem resembles, at least to me, sheets hung out in the wind. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I also love how the shape of the poem resembles, at least to me, sheets hung out in the wind. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:23
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