Comments received on poems by arqios
hair in the wind
arqios said:
There up on a hill a parliament sat, hung on a bill....
May 21st, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
There up on a hill a parliament sat, hung on a bill....
May 21st, 2025 05:37
hair in the wind
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely feel to these reworkings of chilhood memories and favourites, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely feel to these reworkings of chilhood memories and favourites, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:58
hair in the wind
sorenbarrett said:
This rework of past childhood rhyme casts a special feel to this poem as if one has been here before but can not place where or when. That surreal feel make the rhyme haunting. Lovely with the feel of a message that I remain oblivious to
May 21st, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This rework of past childhood rhyme casts a special feel to this poem as if one has been here before but can not place where or when. That surreal feel make the rhyme haunting. Lovely with the feel of a message that I remain oblivious to
May 21st, 2025 04:17
hair in the wind
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful re-take on some old nursery rhymes.It bounces along really well. Enjoyable read
May 21st, 2025 03:58
David Wakeling said:
Some powerful re-take on some old nursery rhymes.It bounces along really well. Enjoyable read
May 21st, 2025 03:58
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
NafisaSB said:
so beautifully writtenc- can imagine the tranquility of the scene before the hordes pour in and the rush starts.
thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
so beautifully writtenc- can imagine the tranquility of the scene before the hordes pour in and the rush starts.
thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 00:17
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful piece. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:40
Tom Dylan said:
A really powerful piece. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:40
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is lovely! It beautifully captures the quiet arrival of winter with vivid imagery and a peaceful tone.
May 20th, 2025 06:39
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is lovely! It beautifully captures the quiet arrival of winter with vivid imagery and a peaceful tone.
May 20th, 2025 06:39
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful poem. A great tribute to the first snows of Thredbo.Well done compadre
May 20th, 2025 04:11
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful poem. A great tribute to the first snows of Thredbo.Well done compadre
May 20th, 2025 04:11
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into winter can feel this change in my memories of winter\'s onset. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into winter can feel this change in my memories of winter\'s onset. Loved it
May 20th, 2025 04:03
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Doggerel Dave said:
Well when you put it like that, It\'s beautiful. Full marks for the poetry.
Once upon a time I experienced Thredbo in winter..............
May 20th, 2025 02:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Well when you put it like that, It\'s beautiful. Full marks for the poetry.
Once upon a time I experienced Thredbo in winter..............
May 20th, 2025 02:41
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds of the one time i went skiing, absolutely hated it, the most fake environment I have ever been in, that said this is a lovely write, with lovely images of the first virgin snow falling, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:40
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds of the one time i went skiing, absolutely hated it, the most fake environment I have ever been in, that said this is a lovely write, with lovely images of the first virgin snow falling, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:40
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the snow-dusted peaks. A lovely, serene start to the season in Thredbo!
May 20th, 2025 02:14
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the snow-dusted peaks. A lovely, serene start to the season in Thredbo!
May 20th, 2025 02:14
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:
Hear it is the start of summer and all is yellow and green arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Hear it is the start of summer and all is yellow and green arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:44
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is where the heart is arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is where the heart is arqios.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:17
soul of time
NafisaSB said:
beautiful whispers from the past...lovely poem - enjoyed it
May 20th, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
beautiful whispers from the past...lovely poem - enjoyed it
May 20th, 2025 01:05
Thredbo (Winter 2025)
arqios said:
A preliminary Fave 🤩 this is a harbinger of sorts. May the winds shift favourable to travel. 🧳🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:56
arqios said:
A preliminary Fave 🤩 this is a harbinger of sorts. May the winds shift favourable to travel. 🧳🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:56
a reckoning of voices
Kevin Hulme said:
History remains the same throughout; only Ladies and Men\'s fashions change. A Poem well said.
May 19th, 2025 19:08
Kevin Hulme said:
History remains the same throughout; only Ladies and Men\'s fashions change. A Poem well said.
May 19th, 2025 19:08
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you realize you\'re pretending to belong. My mind is perpetually carving out niches for me where I\'ve never belonged nor can, the inhabitants of wherever looking askance at me. This being a stranger on earth is my normal yet I keep thinking I belong. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy, its ability to resonate swallowing me whole. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 09:10
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you realize you\'re pretending to belong. My mind is perpetually carving out niches for me where I\'ve never belonged nor can, the inhabitants of wherever looking askance at me. This being a stranger on earth is my normal yet I keep thinking I belong. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy, its ability to resonate swallowing me whole. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 09:10
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
David Wakeling said:
Hey this poem is better than anything I could write,Very powerful images here with minimal effort.I see a party where the usual guests arrive and immediately play the usual games and irritate the host. I enjoyed reading
May 19th, 2025 04:45
David Wakeling said:
Hey this poem is better than anything I could write,Very powerful images here with minimal effort.I see a party where the usual guests arrive and immediately play the usual games and irritate the host. I enjoyed reading
May 19th, 2025 04:45
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a sense of an existential voyage beyond the shores of comfort and in that foreign land the discomfort and the questioning of where home is. A great metaphor for a life\'s journey leaving a feeling of uncertainty, a wistful sense of longing for the unfound and a general sense of being lost on foreign shores. Maybe I project too much. Very nice my friend
May 19th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a sense of an existential voyage beyond the shores of comfort and in that foreign land the discomfort and the questioning of where home is. A great metaphor for a life\'s journey leaving a feeling of uncertainty, a wistful sense of longing for the unfound and a general sense of being lost on foreign shores. Maybe I project too much. Very nice my friend
May 19th, 2025 03:51
Sven\'s Uninvited Guest
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the story of a lady of the night,a lost soul going through the motions yet wishing they were elsewhere, wanting somewhere to belong and call home, but not knowing where home is, apologies if i am wrong, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 02:44
Poetic Licence said:
I sense the story of a lady of the night,a lost soul going through the motions yet wishing they were elsewhere, wanting somewhere to belong and call home, but not knowing where home is, apologies if i am wrong, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 02:44
a reckoning of voices
Goldfinch60 said:
History was written by the winners arqios, what if the losers were right?
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
History was written by the winners arqios, what if the losers were right?
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:25
stirred by the breeze
Pandy said:
Now I know where to come for the metaphorical poetics I love ! Plus the way you weave nature into the fabric. LOVE!
May 18th, 2025 20:54
Pandy said:
Now I know where to come for the metaphorical poetics I love ! Plus the way you weave nature into the fabric. LOVE!
May 18th, 2025 20:54
starshift
Kevin Hulme said:
Something so Wonderful just looking Up and Seeing light that took Centuries to reach us.
An Astronomer last year said the Film \'Titanic\' made him angry because when Rose was in the Sea looking at the Stars: She would not have seen those Stars because of her Position in the World. The Film Makers put any old Configuration on the screen. But picky I think. A very Deep poem.
May 18th, 2025 15:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Something so Wonderful just looking Up and Seeing light that took Centuries to reach us.
An Astronomer last year said the Film \'Titanic\' made him angry because when Rose was in the Sea looking at the Stars: She would not have seen those Stars because of her Position in the World. The Film Makers put any old Configuration on the screen. But picky I think. A very Deep poem.
May 18th, 2025 15:52
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