Comments received on poems by arqios



Hey! You bit my sandwich!
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just conceivably be right......................

September 18th, 2022 19:02

is it not your day?
Doggerel Dave said:

I think I\'d file that under \'grunge\' - and non the worse for that . Definitely has echoes of my past....

September 17th, 2022 07:06

the insolent bystander
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.

September 17th, 2022 07:00

thanks for the applause
Doggerel Dave said:

At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my crap as a token of gratitude?

September 17th, 2022 06:54

re(ad)writing poetry
sorenbarrett said:

This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing poetry, I had a muse for reading. I particularly liked the imagery of the first stanza.

September 17th, 2022 06:49

impervious impermeability
Mr. Not said:

A beautiful poem.

September 15th, 2022 15:37

impervious impermeability
Bella Shepard said:

To see, yet not to attend and comprehend, the ultimate blind spot. Open the mind and you open endless possibilities. This is what I take away from this well penned verse. Thank you my friend!

September 15th, 2022 10:52

impervious impermeability
sorenbarrett said:

Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it strikes home.

September 15th, 2022 09:02

would-be people\'s queen
Bella Shepard said:

Exquisite!

September 12th, 2022 06:12

would-be people\'s queen
orchidee said:

A fine write and tribute CB. Those gone, those left behind........

September 12th, 2022 02:07

non-elegy
Bella Shepard said:

A wonderfully fitting write my dear poet, a legacy that will continue to unfold for years to come.

September 9th, 2022 14:21

do you still remember
orchidee said:

Nope, I had forgotten all this! lol.

September 8th, 2022 14:02

waterfront solitude
Bella Shepard said:

There is something special about water; flowing, falling, babbling, meandering, that does soothe the soul. Beautifully captured dear friend.

September 7th, 2022 14:33

waterfront solitude
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

September 7th, 2022 10:52

the insolent bystander
Bella Shepard said:

Cryptic? You\'ve got me thinking real hard.

September 6th, 2022 12:53

thanks for the applause
Mr. Not said:

im not good with words, but i like this poem a lot.

September 6th, 2022 02:27

thanks for the applause
Bella Shepard said:

A fond adieu, may these sweet words find gentle rest in ethereal bliss. A well deserved standing O.

September 5th, 2022 13:04

thanks for the applause
orchidee said:

Yep, a standing ovation from me, for these fine words CB!

September 5th, 2022 12:00

that\'s a wrap
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

September 4th, 2022 13:47

tempest
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
If I had not got the message of this, I would say - oohh, you need a brolly there! lol.

September 3rd, 2022 11:31

dangling carrot
Doggerel Dave said:

I get that completely (now I\'ve found it!)
Let them go, I say - I cannot get my head around what \'success\' means anyway....

September 2nd, 2022 21:04

What is \'forever\' to a heart?
jk said:

wow! thank you for sharing.

September 2nd, 2022 18:10

and the moon whispered
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

September 2nd, 2022 14:20

the other side of the coin
orchidee said:

It\'s not too dark for my teef to read!
Whatever am I talking about?! lol.

September 2nd, 2022 02:01

forsaking all else
Bella Shepard said:

So profoundly stated my friend. In love and in life, acuity and mindfulness do go hand in hand.

August 31st, 2022 11:14

forsaking all else
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 31st, 2022 07:19

dangling carrot
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 30th, 2022 14:43

dangling carrot
Bella Shepard said:

I love this wonderful poem dear poet, free to be the person you can love and respect on your own terms. Superbly said!

August 30th, 2022 14:19

new moon
Osei Zion said:

Nice poem

August 26th, 2022 23:45

new moon
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 26th, 2022 05:50



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