Comments received on poems by arqios
unsending love
Friendship said:
Wow, emotional journey of retracting love, reflecting on shared moments, and the transformation of a once-vibrant relationship into silence and absence. It addresses themes of memory, loss, and the fleeting nature of love.
August 5th, 2025 18:16
Friendship said:
Wow, emotional journey of retracting love, reflecting on shared moments, and the transformation of a once-vibrant relationship into silence and absence. It addresses themes of memory, loss, and the fleeting nature of love.
August 5th, 2025 18:16
unsending love
Cheeky Missy said:
Tagore was so exquisite and passionately all about love, love, love romance, I was swept away on those golden wings, intoxicated. Curiously, therein I found a kinship with the loving relationship I thought I had with the LORD of the holy Scriptures. Finding how unbiblical his love was in contrast to the God of the Bible, I saw the error of my ways and repudiated them. It\'s fascinating you reference him, playing off his excellence with this lovely piece in eloquent tribute to divorce. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 17:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Tagore was so exquisite and passionately all about love, love, love romance, I was swept away on those golden wings, intoxicated. Curiously, therein I found a kinship with the loving relationship I thought I had with the LORD of the holy Scriptures. Finding how unbiblical his love was in contrast to the God of the Bible, I saw the error of my ways and repudiated them. It\'s fascinating you reference him, playing off his excellence with this lovely piece in eloquent tribute to divorce. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painful poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 17:35
unsending love
Poetic Licence said:
Apologies Arqios I thought I had left feedback this, morning. I guess there are some people who might be able to do this and relieve themselves of the pain and hurt, it certainly is a logical and ideal way to deal with lost love. The write is really well thought out and written, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:02
Poetic Licence said:
Apologies Arqios I thought I had left feedback this, morning. I guess there are some people who might be able to do this and relieve themselves of the pain and hurt, it certainly is a logical and ideal way to deal with lost love. The write is really well thought out and written, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:02
unsending love
arqios said:
It can be reimagined thusly: \"In one fleeting breath I held your name,
Once, just once—no age-old reverie to bind us.
My heart unraveled its songs before they formed,
No necklace of memories, only shards of now.
When I scroll through screens of touch and text,
You blur before me—a spark that flickers, then fades.\"
August 5th, 2025 05:13
arqios said:
It can be reimagined thusly: \"In one fleeting breath I held your name,
Once, just once—no age-old reverie to bind us.
My heart unraveled its songs before they formed,
No necklace of memories, only shards of now.
When I scroll through screens of touch and text,
You blur before me—a spark that flickers, then fades.\"
August 5th, 2025 05:13
unsending love
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem but maybe not for if love can be unsent then never felt and now not remembered there will be no pain and in that a sun raises on new terrain of a reborn world. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem but maybe not for if love can be unsent then never felt and now not remembered there will be no pain and in that a sun raises on new terrain of a reborn world. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 04:35
reader, read her
Dan Williams said:
This is what poetry is supposed to be all about. I mean \"the page expands—
a breath between lines, a lull between thoughts\" is classic. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 01:49
Dan Williams said:
This is what poetry is supposed to be all about. I mean \"the page expands—
a breath between lines, a lull between thoughts\" is classic. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 01:49
reader, read her
orchidee said:
Oh, I dunno, this is probably too cryptic for me. Summat about some bloke not climbing Everest? I knew I wouldn\'t get the hidden meanings! I must ask Fido, who knows of course. heehee.
August 4th, 2025 10:37
orchidee said:
Oh, I dunno, this is probably too cryptic for me. Summat about some bloke not climbing Everest? I knew I wouldn\'t get the hidden meanings! I must ask Fido, who knows of course. heehee.
August 4th, 2025 10:37
reader, read her
Poetic Licence said:
How relatable is that to so many, as we ponder life and the next flow of words in our head, and I do love the pun in the title, sorry as they say little things please little minds and that tickles me, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:50
Poetic Licence said:
How relatable is that to so many, as we ponder life and the next flow of words in our head, and I do love the pun in the title, sorry as they say little things please little minds and that tickles me, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:50
reader, read her
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we can all familiarise with this Poem and it\'s sentiments. The draft of a Poem is always Whispering in your ear in a Marilyn Monroe Breathless way. Well Said.
August 4th, 2025 08:39
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we can all familiarise with this Poem and it\'s sentiments. The draft of a Poem is always Whispering in your ear in a Marilyn Monroe Breathless way. Well Said.
August 4th, 2025 08:39
reader, read her
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, arqios. This poem reached a deep spot.
August 4th, 2025 06:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, arqios. This poem reached a deep spot.
August 4th, 2025 06:55
reader, read her
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a pun on \"reader\" : read her...
August 4th, 2025 04:48
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a pun on \"reader\" : read her...
August 4th, 2025 04:48
reader, read her
sorenbarrett said:
A mysterious and quiet opening to this poem. Set in the early hours past bed time a seductive entrance of the siren, sensuality swells then the awakening but behind it all she is still there. The use of blinking is a great effect to emphasize the presence in the background. Very nicely written Cryptic
August 4th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A mysterious and quiet opening to this poem. Set in the early hours past bed time a seductive entrance of the siren, sensuality swells then the awakening but behind it all she is still there. The use of blinking is a great effect to emphasize the presence in the background. Very nicely written Cryptic
August 4th, 2025 04:17
reader, read her
arqios said:
It\'s the start of another work week. Hope everyone is doing well and may your poetry bloom and your reading be inspirational. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 4th, 2025 03:56
arqios said:
It\'s the start of another work week. Hope everyone is doing well and may your poetry bloom and your reading be inspirational. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 4th, 2025 03:56
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy all life arqios.
Andy
August 4th, 2025 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy all life arqios.
Andy
August 4th, 2025 01:47
the road to here and there
Cheeky Missy said:
Your rewrite elevates the original to unforeseen heights until a playful poem becomes a nearly breathtaking thing of beauty, incorporating the ideas with an extraordinary twist. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Your rewrite elevates the original to unforeseen heights until a playful poem becomes a nearly breathtaking thing of beauty, incorporating the ideas with an extraordinary twist. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:14
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @Bella Shephard
August 3rd, 2025 15:56
arqios said:
Thanks for the Fave @Bella Shephard
August 3rd, 2025 15:56
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Bella Shepard said:
This piece of positivity is turning those lemons into lemonade. Another round of happy thoughts for all, beautifully rendered!
August 3rd, 2025 11:52
Bella Shepard said:
This piece of positivity is turning those lemons into lemonade. Another round of happy thoughts for all, beautifully rendered!
August 3rd, 2025 11:52
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
arqios said:
Thanks for the Faves @Friendship & @ CM 🤩
August 3rd, 2025 09:30
arqios said:
Thanks for the Faves @Friendship & @ CM 🤩
August 3rd, 2025 09:30
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
arqios said:
Thanks for reading this one. So good to hear about your journey with this poem as well 🙏🏻🕊️
August 3rd, 2025 09:27
arqios said:
Thanks for reading this one. So good to hear about your journey with this poem as well 🙏🏻🕊️
August 3rd, 2025 09:27
\"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite)
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to remind people to take time out from the grind of everyday life enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 08:53
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to remind people to take time out from the grind of everyday life enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 08:53
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