Comments received on poems by arqios
door
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
Neville said:
who in their write mind wants to be lonely and locked in ..
where would we be without them eh .. friends and doors that is .. Neville
July 8th, 2023 02:38
manicured thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Cryptic this one has roots that go deep. Sounds do travel through the ground and plants do respond. Sometimes we do not hear the most essential or needful. Such a nice metaphor.
July 6th, 2023 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Cryptic this one has roots that go deep. Sounds do travel through the ground and plants do respond. Sometimes we do not hear the most essential or needful. Such a nice metaphor.
July 6th, 2023 10:00
manicured thoughts
2781 said:
Their predicting a dry year.
Need to get the roots into good deep soil.
Good gardening.
July 6th, 2023 09:44
2781 said:
Their predicting a dry year.
Need to get the roots into good deep soil.
Good gardening.
July 6th, 2023 09:44
manicured thoughts
orchidee said:
A fine write CB.
Could be a windy write - fresh sprouts - brussels?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:01
orchidee said:
A fine write CB.
Could be a windy write - fresh sprouts - brussels?! lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:01
pop goes resolve
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words my friend. Vivid images ignighting emotions.
July 5th, 2023 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words my friend. Vivid images ignighting emotions.
July 5th, 2023 10:14
pop goes resolve
Neville said:
Could this possibly be when she finally gave up her secret .. Just asking for a friend you understand ... Neville
July 5th, 2023 05:26
Neville said:
Could this possibly be when she finally gave up her secret .. Just asking for a friend you understand ... Neville
July 5th, 2023 05:26
squelch
Bobby O said:
And hopefully before the paint dries I could add influence and an escape window ?? Dude , I wanna be Sundance.
July 1st, 2023 00:03
Bobby O said:
And hopefully before the paint dries I could add influence and an escape window ?? Dude , I wanna be Sundance.
July 1st, 2023 00:03
mimesis by torchlight
orchidee said:
I (and Bobby too probably) are lost in the cryptic maze! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:31
orchidee said:
I (and Bobby too probably) are lost in the cryptic maze! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:31
mimesis by torchlight
Bobby O said:
I got excited when thinking if I knew what a fortnight was I could taste some oranges but then I got all scared about the daggers. ???
June 17th, 2023 10:08
Bobby O said:
I got excited when thinking if I knew what a fortnight was I could taste some oranges but then I got all scared about the daggers. ???
June 17th, 2023 10:08
empty bookends
L. B. Mek said:
inspirational words, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try n pen
the feeble poetic reply below
thank you!
(that \'green room\' of perhaps
a pretence of betwixt, coveting
assurances, while yearning
to throw that dice of innate
take a chance on ourselves
if only, our heart\'s and mind\'s
came with fireproof vests
to lessen those scorching
bruises, of life\'s menacing
indiscriminate, ill-Fate...)
June 16th, 2023 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
inspirational words, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try n pen
the feeble poetic reply below
thank you!
(that \'green room\' of perhaps
a pretence of betwixt, coveting
assurances, while yearning
to throw that dice of innate
take a chance on ourselves
if only, our heart\'s and mind\'s
came with fireproof vests
to lessen those scorching
bruises, of life\'s menacing
indiscriminate, ill-Fate...)
June 16th, 2023 01:29
splice and sail
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor, old as Homer but seaworthy still. I always loved Melville. Indeed words that search thoughts and not only the unseen wind of our words but its effect driving vessels forward. Thank you for the call to join this inky journey.
June 13th, 2023 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor, old as Homer but seaworthy still. I always loved Melville. Indeed words that search thoughts and not only the unseen wind of our words but its effect driving vessels forward. Thank you for the call to join this inky journey.
June 13th, 2023 05:53
beats
orchidee said:
I\'m getting out me 78RPMs. A record player we had, had 45, 33, and 16 RPMs on it!
16RPM for singhing showly if ya been at the gin! lol.
June 8th, 2023 08:19
orchidee said:
I\'m getting out me 78RPMs. A record player we had, had 45, 33, and 16 RPMs on it!
16RPM for singhing showly if ya been at the gin! lol.
June 8th, 2023 08:19
leap of faith
Bella Shepard said:
Truth does seem to be a leap of faith these days, as you so eloquently say. How we will navigate that winding thoroughfare will determine our destiny. Good write my friend!
June 3rd, 2023 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Truth does seem to be a leap of faith these days, as you so eloquently say. How we will navigate that winding thoroughfare will determine our destiny. Good write my friend!
June 3rd, 2023 12:31
leap of faith
orchidee said:
I knew an un-cultured or un-educated guy (me!) who spent so long finding out what Carpe Diem meant, that there was no time left in the day to seize. Well, I was looking in a fishing book for 3 hours. I thought it was a French fish - carpe? lol.
June 1st, 2023 10:47
orchidee said:
I knew an un-cultured or un-educated guy (me!) who spent so long finding out what Carpe Diem meant, that there was no time left in the day to seize. Well, I was looking in a fishing book for 3 hours. I thought it was a French fish - carpe? lol.
June 1st, 2023 10:47
leap of faith
orchidee said:
Would I fancy a bit of \'perfunctory\' if I knew what it was exactly?! lol.
A leap of \'blind faith\' by me, as I try, very un-culturedly, to unravel some cryptic poems.
Fido understand them perfectly of course. lol.
June 1st, 2023 10:46
orchidee said:
Would I fancy a bit of \'perfunctory\' if I knew what it was exactly?! lol.
A leap of \'blind faith\' by me, as I try, very un-culturedly, to unravel some cryptic poems.
Fido understand them perfectly of course. lol.
June 1st, 2023 10:46
a little poem’s wayfaring
Bobby O said:
I’ll take my chances with that finest miss! Or is it mist ?
May 31st, 2023 18:08
Bobby O said:
I’ll take my chances with that finest miss! Or is it mist ?
May 31st, 2023 18:08
a little poem’s wayfaring
Rocky Lagou said:
I’m perplexed but in complete awe. Thank you for this gem of a poem; your words always penetrate right to the soul. The subtle weight of the “melodies” you mention hover over me like a gliding bird.
May 31st, 2023 10:14
Rocky Lagou said:
I’m perplexed but in complete awe. Thank you for this gem of a poem; your words always penetrate right to the soul. The subtle weight of the “melodies” you mention hover over me like a gliding bird.
May 31st, 2023 10:14
a little poem’s wayfaring
orchidee said:
Erm, \'friad I get lost in the meanings of your poems often. I say \'good write\', which I\'m sure they are, but - it\'s me - sometimes not knowing the foggiest what you\'re meaning! lol.
Wish the fog would clear. hehee.
May 31st, 2023 09:27
orchidee said:
Erm, \'friad I get lost in the meanings of your poems often. I say \'good write\', which I\'m sure they are, but - it\'s me - sometimes not knowing the foggiest what you\'re meaning! lol.
Wish the fog would clear. hehee.
May 31st, 2023 09:27
leading you home
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, dear Poet
so well written
\'like a milestone along that long road\'
(a memento\'s reprieve, upon
that bustling sea
of life\'s cherished memories)
May 29th, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, dear Poet
so well written
\'like a milestone along that long road\'
(a memento\'s reprieve, upon
that bustling sea
of life\'s cherished memories)
May 29th, 2023 02:02
fare thee well
L. B. Mek said:
\'fare ye well\'
is one of my most cherished sayings of old
a great write, dear Poet
thank you!
May 29th, 2023 01:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'fare ye well\'
is one of my most cherished sayings of old
a great write, dear Poet
thank you!
May 29th, 2023 01:57
fare thee well
Bella Shepard said:
It is the poet who finds hidden treasures and brings them to life, or takes simple things and makes them extraordinary with magical words. Their work lives on to delight and inspire us. Beautifuly worded dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
It is the poet who finds hidden treasures and brings them to life, or takes simple things and makes them extraordinary with magical words. Their work lives on to delight and inspire us. Beautifuly worded dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 13:28
fare thee well
Neville said:
I am inclined to agree CB and may they each rest in peace now the long shift is over .................. Neville
May 27th, 2023 13:24
Neville said:
I am inclined to agree CB and may they each rest in peace now the long shift is over .................. Neville
May 27th, 2023 13:24
fare thee well
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can\'t understand Dylan Thomas. Some of his stuff is daft, I think: \'I am not there; I did not die.....\' Is he a zombie then?
May 27th, 2023 10:25
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can\'t understand Dylan Thomas. Some of his stuff is daft, I think: \'I am not there; I did not die.....\' Is he a zombie then?
May 27th, 2023 10:25
leading you home
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine write expressed swell, poetic impressions wow! Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
May 26th, 2023 05:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine write expressed swell, poetic impressions wow! Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
May 26th, 2023 05:44
leading you home
Neville said:
indeed, tis very much like that same old same old winding road ..
The long and winding road
That leads to your door
Will never disappear
I\'ve seen that road before ... blah de blah de blah ... 🎵🎶🎵🎶
May 26th, 2023 01:12
Neville said:
indeed, tis very much like that same old same old winding road ..
The long and winding road
That leads to your door
Will never disappear
I\'ve seen that road before ... blah de blah de blah ... 🎵🎶🎵🎶
May 26th, 2023 01:12
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