Comments received on poems by arqios
new day
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful title for putting the clay back together one of my most favourite forms of poetry is Senryu and haiku and this one is wonderful inner depth and profound meaning. Kudos. 🌹 Ps well done on inspiring Michael, that\'s amazing too.
January 19th, 2025 05:45
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful title for putting the clay back together one of my most favourite forms of poetry is Senryu and haiku and this one is wonderful inner depth and profound meaning. Kudos. 🌹 Ps well done on inspiring Michael, that\'s amazing too.
January 19th, 2025 05:45
new day
sorenbarrett said:
The duality involved in this haiku is amazing itself. So few words in a haiku with one of the longest author notes I have seen. But every word necessary for the ignorant. I had forgoten compleatly about this art and your reminding me opened another door in my mind for which I am grateful. This poem a work of art is worth a Fave and much of the fave is going to the note that opens the interpretive door to the art itself
January 19th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
The duality involved in this haiku is amazing itself. So few words in a haiku with one of the longest author notes I have seen. But every word necessary for the ignorant. I had forgoten compleatly about this art and your reminding me opened another door in my mind for which I am grateful. This poem a work of art is worth a Fave and much of the fave is going to the note that opens the interpretive door to the art itself
January 19th, 2025 04:48
new day
Michael Edwards said:
Being an artist who also dabbles in paper clay and air dry clay I recognise this elegant Japanese form - I hope you don\'t mind but your superb write has inspired me to write my own 757 with rhyme:
Repairing the old
broken pieces joined with gold
in splendour behold
January 19th, 2025 03:50
Michael Edwards said:
Being an artist who also dabbles in paper clay and air dry clay I recognise this elegant Japanese form - I hope you don\'t mind but your superb write has inspired me to write my own 757 with rhyme:
Repairing the old
broken pieces joined with gold
in splendour behold
January 19th, 2025 03:50
new day
orchidee said:
Good write A. We humans are biblically described as dust, worms, etc, and as earthenware pots. So maybe that\'s why we say we\'re \'cracking up!\' lol. Spot of interesting Japanese info there.
January 19th, 2025 03:01
orchidee said:
Good write A. We humans are biblically described as dust, worms, etc, and as earthenware pots. So maybe that\'s why we say we\'re \'cracking up!\' lol. Spot of interesting Japanese info there.
January 19th, 2025 03:01
new day
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Thank you very much for enlightening me! Beautifully rendered with great imagery and a lingering, haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
January 19th, 2025 02:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Thank you very much for enlightening me! Beautifully rendered with great imagery and a lingering, haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
January 19th, 2025 02:51
bicnic py the sea
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay away - I think it might be catching...😜
January 19th, 2025 00:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay away - I think it might be catching...😜
January 19th, 2025 00:36
bicnic py the sea
Teddy.15 said:
bicnic py the sea
Could also be, piknik buy the see 🌹
January 18th, 2025 17:30
Teddy.15 said:
bicnic py the sea
Could also be, piknik buy the see 🌹
January 18th, 2025 17:30
bicnic py the sea
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah goating around I see, ok you got me good arqios, I would be the first human to say it\'s absolutely no fun being perfect, it is in fact those imperfections that make us special. On Saturdays I teach a bunch of 12 year old Italians English, let me tell you there is a lot of laughter, mostly when I speak italian. 🤣
January 18th, 2025 17:29
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah goating around I see, ok you got me good arqios, I would be the first human to say it\'s absolutely no fun being perfect, it is in fact those imperfections that make us special. On Saturdays I teach a bunch of 12 year old Italians English, let me tell you there is a lot of laughter, mostly when I speak italian. 🤣
January 18th, 2025 17:29
bicnic py the sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal with and, in this poem, you gave us a glimpse of what that is like. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 And, this was really a fun read too! Easily faved!
January 18th, 2025 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal with and, in this poem, you gave us a glimpse of what that is like. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 And, this was really a fun read too! Easily faved!
January 18th, 2025 11:28
bicnic py the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2025 07:53
bicnic py the sea
arqios said:
Thanks cheeky missy, for some reason I have no access to your comment inbox; would you mind checking if I’m somehow blocked from access? Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
January 18th, 2025 07:28
arqios said:
Thanks cheeky missy, for some reason I have no access to your comment inbox; would you mind checking if I’m somehow blocked from access? Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
January 18th, 2025 07:28
bicnic py the sea
Cheeky Missy said:
I likewise have dyslexia. Looks like a fun piece in pig Latin, or igpay atinlay, or similar. Humorously rendered with excellent imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 07:19
Cheeky Missy said:
I likewise have dyslexia. Looks like a fun piece in pig Latin, or igpay atinlay, or similar. Humorously rendered with excellent imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 07:19
CTRL + ALT + DLT
cellinic said:
A very deep and sincere statement, dear arqios. Best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:48
cellinic said:
A very deep and sincere statement, dear arqios. Best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:48
CTRL + ALT + DLT
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always restart our lives on each new day arqios.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always restart our lives on each new day arqios.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:24
CTRL + ALT + DLT
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I see a dance with Pain that we want to come to an end but sadly it never does. Made me think
January 17th, 2025 16:18
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I see a dance with Pain that we want to come to an end but sadly it never does. Made me think
January 17th, 2025 16:18
time’s no friend
Cassie58 said:
A clever write arqios and so true. Time is no friend. We have absolutely no control over it. A profound piece of poetry. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we could stop it at certain points in our lives.
January 17th, 2025 13:26
Cassie58 said:
A clever write arqios and so true. Time is no friend. We have absolutely no control over it. A profound piece of poetry. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we could stop it at certain points in our lives.
January 17th, 2025 13:26
CTRL + ALT + DLT
sorenbarrett said:
So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that wears off, then emotional pain and our use of distractions that wear off. Other relationships that can never substitute the original and as the pain returns the relationship burns. With the physical the addiction to pain killers and their build up of tolerance and how they don\'t last. This one is just mysterious enough to bring thoughts of one\'s own past experience.
January 17th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that wears off, then emotional pain and our use of distractions that wear off. Other relationships that can never substitute the original and as the pain returns the relationship burns. With the physical the addiction to pain killers and their build up of tolerance and how they don\'t last. This one is just mysterious enough to bring thoughts of one\'s own past experience.
January 17th, 2025 12:26
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me, it speaks of the reality of pain and suffering\'s omnipresence in human existence. One cannot escape pain in life. It is a part of the whole package, unfortunately. Or is it unfortunate? A philosophical question, for sure. But when one is experiencing it, it feels most unfortunate. Some might say shitty, even. And the title! Ah, isn\'t this what we desire to do? Reboot and start all over. Indeed, sometimes that very act is the only way to move forward and function.Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me, it speaks of the reality of pain and suffering\'s omnipresence in human existence. One cannot escape pain in life. It is a part of the whole package, unfortunately. Or is it unfortunate? A philosophical question, for sure. But when one is experiencing it, it feels most unfortunate. Some might say shitty, even. And the title! Ah, isn\'t this what we desire to do? Reboot and start all over. Indeed, sometimes that very act is the only way to move forward and function.Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:11
CTRL + ALT + DLT
Neville said:
there are times when those three little keys can make all the difference to the outcome .. at the end of a long day .. or indeed at any time .. make me stop n ponder why don\'tcha until I am content with my own solution .. Nice one my friend .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 07:03
Neville said:
there are times when those three little keys can make all the difference to the outcome .. at the end of a long day .. or indeed at any time .. make me stop n ponder why don\'tcha until I am content with my own solution .. Nice one my friend .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 07:03
time’s no friend
Neville said:
No aint that the absolute truth in a nutshell .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 04:15
Neville said:
No aint that the absolute truth in a nutshell .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 04:15
time’s no friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Time goes at ever changing speeds in life arqios.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Time goes at ever changing speeds in life arqios.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:09
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m just going to say that the mobile phone has really taken away the need to have physical interaction with humans, I see it here on a daily basis although in the small towns people still have so great traditions like the Saturday market but I agree it\'s a sad way and I hope humanity will soon come back out of their shells, or should I say
I- Phones 🌹
January 16th, 2025 15:20
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m just going to say that the mobile phone has really taken away the need to have physical interaction with humans, I see it here on a daily basis although in the small towns people still have so great traditions like the Saturday market but I agree it\'s a sad way and I hope humanity will soon come back out of their shells, or should I say
I- Phones 🌹
January 16th, 2025 15:20
time’s no friend
Kevin Hulme said:
Times like Oxygen: it’s all around us, but we can’t see it.
You described it so well in the Poem. Well said.
January 16th, 2025 09:49
Kevin Hulme said:
Times like Oxygen: it’s all around us, but we can’t see it.
You described it so well in the Poem. Well said.
January 16th, 2025 09:49
time’s no friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
time’s no friend
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
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