Comments received on poems by arqios
recuperation
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Good Luck. While I\'m not trying to minimize your experience, (I didn\'t know you lived up there) I in general am quite bored with it as we have had nothing much else on the news (sandbagging preparations etc) for the past week. My point is that they only classify this one as a category two, when in far North Queensland they regularly have categories 3 and four, which gain brief news items. Maybe because fewer people and Murri (indigenous) live in those regions.....
Take care - look after yourselves.
March 6th, 2025 01:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Well Good Luck. While I\'m not trying to minimize your experience, (I didn\'t know you lived up there) I in general am quite bored with it as we have had nothing much else on the news (sandbagging preparations etc) for the past week. My point is that they only classify this one as a category two, when in far North Queensland they regularly have categories 3 and four, which gain brief news items. Maybe because fewer people and Murri (indigenous) live in those regions.....
Take care - look after yourselves.
March 6th, 2025 01:20
slipping away
Neville said:
an insidious demise springs to mind .. I doubt you could have crafted it better .. indeed I\'m pretty sure that nobody could .. so very sadly but very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:27
Neville said:
an insidious demise springs to mind .. I doubt you could have crafted it better .. indeed I\'m pretty sure that nobody could .. so very sadly but very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:27
slipping away
Poetic Licence said:
I get a small sense of confidence and belief so slipping away but not knowing why, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
I get a small sense of confidence and belief so slipping away but not knowing why, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:00
slipping away
arqios said:
Much thought about how our surroundings may set us on a mood or a journey.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
Much thought about how our surroundings may set us on a mood or a journey.
March 5th, 2025 06:21
slipping away
sorenbarrett said:
From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to entropy the second law of thermodynamics. It is a constant in nature from birth to death and from empathy to disinterest. I found this poem very nicely woven and hope that I didn\'t unravel it.
March 5th, 2025 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to entropy the second law of thermodynamics. It is a constant in nature from birth to death and from empathy to disinterest. I found this poem very nicely woven and hope that I didn\'t unravel it.
March 5th, 2025 06:02
slipping away
David Wakeling said:
Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful piece.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful piece.Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:13
slipping away
Cassie58 said:
the tides return twice a day, and birds migrate and return too, but the river is something else. Once that water has gone beneath the bridge, it never returns. My mind drifted reading you, excuse my ramblings. I didn’t see permanent in your poem, but then I seek light rather than darkness. Thought provoking. Have a good day arqios.
March 5th, 2025 04:14
Cassie58 said:
the tides return twice a day, and birds migrate and return too, but the river is something else. Once that water has gone beneath the bridge, it never returns. My mind drifted reading you, excuse my ramblings. I didn’t see permanent in your poem, but then I seek light rather than darkness. Thought provoking. Have a good day arqios.
March 5th, 2025 04:14
‘bear pottery’
Kevin Hulme said:
You’d think the other Two Bears would help-out .
Good one.
March 4th, 2025 19:20
Kevin Hulme said:
You’d think the other Two Bears would help-out .
Good one.
March 4th, 2025 19:20
minuet of the reeds
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful image created.
March 4th, 2025 15:59
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful image created.
March 4th, 2025 15:59
minuet of the reeds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, natural, sensual, linguistically, lyrically titillating. All of this and above. Loved this, my friend. An easy fave. By the way what would coffee be without xanthine? Decaf of course! LOL! 🙏🌹
March 4th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful, natural, sensual, linguistically, lyrically titillating. All of this and above. Loved this, my friend. An easy fave. By the way what would coffee be without xanthine? Decaf of course! LOL! 🙏🌹
March 4th, 2025 09:11
minuet of the reeds
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images painted with the dancing of the reeds, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images painted with the dancing of the reeds, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 07:57
minuet of the reeds
arqios said:
Poor thing must be sweating in the breeze… must be tough-going 😔🫥
March 4th, 2025 07:47
arqios said:
Poor thing must be sweating in the breeze… must be tough-going 😔🫥
March 4th, 2025 07:47
minuet of the reeds
sorenbarrett said:
Botanical fireworks set to music in this poem in a metaphoric work of passion. Chef\'s kiss to this
March 4th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Botanical fireworks set to music in this poem in a metaphoric work of passion. Chef\'s kiss to this
March 4th, 2025 04:13
minuet of the reeds
orchidee said:
It\'s that well-known friend again, xanthine, though I\'m talking gibberish. Being uncultured, I dunno what it is! lol. Good write Mr Minuet.
March 4th, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
It\'s that well-known friend again, xanthine, though I\'m talking gibberish. Being uncultured, I dunno what it is! lol. Good write Mr Minuet.
March 4th, 2025 03:26
minuet of the reeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing the beauty of the reeds argios.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words showing the beauty of the reeds argios.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:16
minuet of the reeds
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery. I often see those reeds with their feathery plumes at the marina and on the river bank. They take on a life of their own in the wind. You have used some fine vocab in this poem arqios. Lovely and sensual too.
March 4th, 2025 02:49
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery. I often see those reeds with their feathery plumes at the marina and on the river bank. They take on a life of their own in the wind. You have used some fine vocab in this poem arqios. Lovely and sensual too.
March 4th, 2025 02:49
untitled 575 (feathered frolick)
NafisaSB said:
this poem has such a positive and cheerful note about it - an everyday sight converted into wonderful verse - enjoyed it
March 4th, 2025 00:10
NafisaSB said:
this poem has such a positive and cheerful note about it - an everyday sight converted into wonderful verse - enjoyed it
March 4th, 2025 00:10
‘bear pottery’
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Springtime...this bear cannot wait! Much enjoyed my friend! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Springtime...this bear cannot wait! Much enjoyed my friend! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:08
‘bear pottery’
arqios said:
Bad news bears like an elephant in a chinaware shoppe 🐘 🐻🫖🍽🫗
March 3rd, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Bad news bears like an elephant in a chinaware shoppe 🐘 🐻🫖🍽🫗
March 3rd, 2025 06:25
‘bear pottery’
Poetic Licence said:
I think there could be a market for that, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
I think there could be a market for that, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:55
‘bear pottery’
sorenbarrett said:
It does make one wonder. The picture fits the occasion and after all what else is a bear going to do while waiting for salmon?
March 3rd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
It does make one wonder. The picture fits the occasion and after all what else is a bear going to do while waiting for salmon?
March 3rd, 2025 04:46
‘bear pottery’
Salvia.S said:
The concept of bear pottery is incredibly unique. Enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2025 03:03
Salvia.S said:
The concept of bear pottery is incredibly unique. Enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2025 03:03
‘bear pottery’
Mutley Ravishes said:
Well, I guess it takes one\'s mind off of salmon?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
Well, I guess it takes one\'s mind off of salmon?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:24
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