Comments received on poems by arqios
sunrising sunset
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between temperatures night to day can be extreme.
Sunset the gateway to relief - hopefully....
October 2nd, 2022 23:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between temperatures night to day can be extreme.
Sunset the gateway to relief - hopefully....
October 2nd, 2022 23:34
and I try to be brave
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Rik about passed friendship.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Rik about passed friendship.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:32
and I try to be brave
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I did manage to regain contact after 35 years once, email correspondence only, but at least the questions you pose were answered.
Deeply felt write I related to completely.
October 1st, 2022 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I did manage to regain contact after 35 years once, email correspondence only, but at least the questions you pose were answered.
Deeply felt write I related to completely.
October 1st, 2022 07:53
as the smoke clears
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Rik.
Spring will come, it always does.
September 30th, 2022 09:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Rik.
Spring will come, it always does.
September 30th, 2022 09:32
as the smoke clears
Goldfinch60 said:
That kindness will be there for all each day as each day is so special cb.
Andy
September 30th, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That kindness will be there for all each day as each day is so special cb.
Andy
September 30th, 2022 01:55
behind each poem
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry is that it does come from the heart, the mind, the soul and you have expressed this so beautifully. No fear in poetry; no inhibition, free flowing, often intimate , truthful, angry, loving, kind, understanding, every emotion you can think of. And the greatest part is that no matter what the subject, someone had a thought and had the courage to share it. A great write my friend, and a fave.
September 29th, 2022 09:48
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry is that it does come from the heart, the mind, the soul and you have expressed this so beautifully. No fear in poetry; no inhibition, free flowing, often intimate , truthful, angry, loving, kind, understanding, every emotion you can think of. And the greatest part is that no matter what the subject, someone had a thought and had the courage to share it. A great write my friend, and a fave.
September 29th, 2022 09:48
behind each poem
Doggerel Dave said:
Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more often...at times I get incensed by the ideas produced under the guise of poetry.
September 29th, 2022 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more often...at times I get incensed by the ideas produced under the guise of poetry.
September 29th, 2022 05:27
behind each poem
Mr. Not said:
a very meaningful poem cb. the stories behind poems are deep and people who\'ve been through different things might even understand the poems in their own way.
September 29th, 2022 04:23
Mr. Not said:
a very meaningful poem cb. the stories behind poems are deep and people who\'ve been through different things might even understand the poems in their own way.
September 29th, 2022 04:23
to be seen
sorenbarrett said:
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written and with many thoughts to be processed.
September 27th, 2022 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written and with many thoughts to be processed.
September 27th, 2022 13:23
darkside bright
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us all cb.
Andy
September 27th, 2022 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us all cb.
Andy
September 27th, 2022 01:48
darkside bright
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem captures so exquisitely the rush of life that seems so pervasive in our world today. I think it\'s so nice just to linger in those cooling embers and savor. Such a lovely write my friend.
September 26th, 2022 13:35
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem captures so exquisitely the rush of life that seems so pervasive in our world today. I think it\'s so nice just to linger in those cooling embers and savor. Such a lovely write my friend.
September 26th, 2022 13:35
deep water treading
Goldfinch60 said:
If I was in the water I would drown cb.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If I was in the water I would drown cb.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:51
deep water treading
orchidee said:
Cooee! Is it painful being \'cut orf\' for nearly 2 weeks? Depends what\'s cut orf I suppose. swoon! lol.
September 25th, 2022 13:00
orchidee said:
Cooee! Is it painful being \'cut orf\' for nearly 2 weeks? Depends what\'s cut orf I suppose. swoon! lol.
September 25th, 2022 13:00
come together a-poeting
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure we will all come together a-poeting one day.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure we will all come together a-poeting one day.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:23
come together a-poeting
Neville said:
What a perfectly delightful sentiment poemed .. and subsequently enjoyed in its entirety ................. Neville
September 24th, 2022 04:48
Neville said:
What a perfectly delightful sentiment poemed .. and subsequently enjoyed in its entirety ................. Neville
September 24th, 2022 04:48
days of the living dead
Fay Slimm. said:
Heaviness has to be worded at some time my friend and your poetic honesty is not lost to the journeying mind of serious scribes as the process of any continued ascent is often most gruelling.
September 23rd, 2022 15:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Heaviness has to be worded at some time my friend and your poetic honesty is not lost to the journeying mind of serious scribes as the process of any continued ascent is often most gruelling.
September 23rd, 2022 15:42
hands off that snooze button!
sorenbarrett said:
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the soul\'s query how can one forgive what is forgotten\" A great line that gives pause.
September 23rd, 2022 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the soul\'s query how can one forgive what is forgotten\" A great line that gives pause.
September 23rd, 2022 07:08
Hey! You bit my sandwich!
Neville said:
liked by me despite the cryptic indentations contained therein :)
September 23rd, 2022 04:30
Neville said:
liked by me despite the cryptic indentations contained therein :)
September 23rd, 2022 04:30
Ballad of Billy McGee
Doggerel Dave said:
Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid portrait of of a shit situation, Rik
September 22nd, 2022 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid portrait of of a shit situation, Rik
September 22nd, 2022 18:32
hands off that snooze button!
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
hands off that snooze button!
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
hands off that snooze button!
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
live fed matins
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
live fed matins
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
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