Comments received on poems by arqios
con un beso (with a kiss)
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and gentle write, a kiss can dry a thousand tears, lovely write
May 25th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and gentle write, a kiss can dry a thousand tears, lovely write
May 25th, 2025 05:15
con un beso (with a kiss)
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is quite a beautiful poem. Very sensitive approach to an intimate meeting. Very well done commendatore
May 25th, 2025 04:26
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is quite a beautiful poem. Very sensitive approach to an intimate meeting. Very well done commendatore
May 25th, 2025 04:26
con un beso (with a kiss)
sorenbarrett said:
The two the same but at the same time not. English is my first language and Portuguese my second at a very lame third is Spanish and yet in this poem that is the one that I prefer. It has a sensuous appeal that goes deeper despite it being the exact same translation. Funny how associations with words are not able to be translated exactly even when the words are. Loved the poem that is very tender. Nice Cryptic
May 25th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
The two the same but at the same time not. English is my first language and Portuguese my second at a very lame third is Spanish and yet in this poem that is the one that I prefer. It has a sensuous appeal that goes deeper despite it being the exact same translation. Funny how associations with words are not able to be translated exactly even when the words are. Loved the poem that is very tender. Nice Cryptic
May 25th, 2025 03:34
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
orchidee said:
Good write Peaty, erm, Arqois.
May 24th, 2025 08:24
orchidee said:
Good write Peaty, erm, Arqois.
May 24th, 2025 08:24
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
arqios said:
Should be but it isn\'t, off for another run through...
May 24th, 2025 06:32
arqios said:
Should be but it isn\'t, off for another run through...
May 24th, 2025 06:32
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
Poetic Licence said:
Have to be honest, this ones above my station, still working it out, nicely composed write
May 24th, 2025 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
Have to be honest, this ones above my station, still working it out, nicely composed write
May 24th, 2025 04:27
Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend
sorenbarrett said:
This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds philosophic to begin with then comes my favorite line (Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills) From there it becomes more epic in nature and the battle cry can be heard. Very nice Cryptic
May 24th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds philosophic to begin with then comes my favorite line (Ink the slate - etched by wound-dipped quills) From there it becomes more epic in nature and the battle cry can be heard. Very nice Cryptic
May 24th, 2025 04:10
constants of change
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that constance of life be forever there.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that constance of life be forever there.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:16
constants of change
orchidee said:
Did you know that Pythagoras guy and his theorem?!
May 23rd, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
Did you know that Pythagoras guy and his theorem?!
May 23rd, 2025 09:55
it walks, not me
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. Love the title and the repetition through the poem. Brilliant work.
May 23rd, 2025 07:01
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate. Love the title and the repetition through the poem. Brilliant work.
May 23rd, 2025 07:01
constants of change
Poetic Licence said:
I never liked maths teachers, the subject was ok but I enjoyed this write. Clever write that as we mature in life, the issues we have in our youth gradually reveal the answers, very nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
I never liked maths teachers, the subject was ok but I enjoyed this write. Clever write that as we mature in life, the issues we have in our youth gradually reveal the answers, very nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 05:59
constants of change
arqios said:
Thanks Salvia for the Fave of this poem. Much appreciated 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:41
arqios said:
Thanks Salvia for the Fave of this poem. Much appreciated 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:41
constants of change
David Wakeling said:
I used to be a Maths Teacher so this poem was right up my algorithm. Very clever the fact taht in youth we struggle with the solutions and as we get older the truth reveals itself. Friendship is the key solution.Very clever poem.I enjoyed reading
May 23rd, 2025 04:57
David Wakeling said:
I used to be a Maths Teacher so this poem was right up my algorithm. Very clever the fact taht in youth we struggle with the solutions and as we get older the truth reveals itself. Friendship is the key solution.Very clever poem.I enjoyed reading
May 23rd, 2025 04:57
constants of change
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem where mathematical features are turned mythical in a great metaphor of deeper meaning and so all myths are made. Lovely Cryptic
May 23rd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem where mathematical features are turned mythical in a great metaphor of deeper meaning and so all myths are made. Lovely Cryptic
May 23rd, 2025 04:31
it walks, not me
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the past was the palce we walked.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, the past was the palce we walked.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 00:56
it walks, not me
Salvia.S said:
This gently explores how the past moves on without us. The repeating lines and soft images create a calm, reflective feeling. Well written!!!
May 22nd, 2025 12:18
Salvia.S said:
This gently explores how the past moves on without us. The repeating lines and soft images create a calm, reflective feeling. Well written!!!
May 22nd, 2025 12:18
it walks, not me
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is the past that walks and changes in peoples minds but we have already walked it and can not go back and walk it again. It has already been walked. A lovely write deeper that the surface so nicely worded its message seeps through soft words and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is the past that walks and changes in peoples minds but we have already walked it and can not go back and walk it again. It has already been walked. A lovely write deeper that the surface so nicely worded its message seeps through soft words and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:48
it walks, not me
Poetic Licence said:
As the past slowly passes, the footsteps slowly disappear, another loss is gained, loved the write
May 22nd, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
As the past slowly passes, the footsteps slowly disappear, another loss is gained, loved the write
May 22nd, 2025 04:26
it walks, not me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and time—each step fading before it’s fully grasped. The repetition and imagery of dissolving footprints evoke a quiet, inevitable loss. A hauntingly reflective piece.
May 22nd, 2025 04:14
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and time—each step fading before it’s fully grasped. The repetition and imagery of dissolving footprints evoke a quiet, inevitable loss. A hauntingly reflective piece.
May 22nd, 2025 04:14
it walks, not me
David Wakeling said:
A very pleasant cadence here with an abrupt stop at the \"theme\".The theme being that the Past does all the walking not the author.I haven\'t viewed the Past that way before.Its a clever twist.Enjoyable read mi amigo
May 22nd, 2025 04:07
David Wakeling said:
A very pleasant cadence here with an abrupt stop at the \"theme\".The theme being that the Past does all the walking not the author.I haven\'t viewed the Past that way before.Its a clever twist.Enjoyable read mi amigo
May 22nd, 2025 04:07
hair in the wind
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist like strands of sunlit hair. Brief, but it lingers.
May 21st, 2025 13:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist like strands of sunlit hair. Brief, but it lingers.
May 21st, 2025 13:15
hair in the wind
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 05:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing
May 21st, 2025 05:55
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