Comments received on poems by arqios



on the banks of the Oise
Mr. Not said:

beautifully worded as always

January 8th, 2023 11:24

the silent quill
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

January 7th, 2023 10:51

I am not your cup of tea!
BoxMyHeart said:

Excellent! We cannot be everyone\'s cup of tea just our own WHISKEY.or Rum :) dark rum preferably

January 7th, 2023 08:09

the silent quill
BoxMyHeart said:

This poem is magic.adding to my favourites, loved your wordsmanship.

I hope you may enjoy some of mine if you have the time. I have many please pick a few topics you might fancy and leave a comment for my growth as a poet.

January 7th, 2023 08:07

on the banks of the Oise
Bella Shepard said:

Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.

January 6th, 2023 14:28

on the banks of the Oise
L. B. Mek said:

\'be tender, be kind while you may\'
a timeless, nugget
of humane wisdom!
brilliant! dear cherished Poet
Happy New Year

January 6th, 2023 07:26

on the banks of the Oise
orchidee said:

Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
Fido says to me: \'No \'ear ear\' - \'hear, hear\' - jokes, please!\'

January 6th, 2023 07:04

on the banks of the Oise
sorenbarrett said:

This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting

January 6th, 2023 06:50

put a ring on it
Bella Shepard said:

Makes perfect sense my friend, and love the way you have presented the mystery of time that we grapple with.

January 5th, 2023 13:48

basted glow
orchidee said:

I gotta get me dictionary out for metaphed!

January 5th, 2023 02:47

basted glow
orchidee said:

I thought this was gonna be about cooking ya turkey! lol.

January 5th, 2023 02:34

put a ring on it
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

January 3rd, 2023 10:18

a vantaged perch
Bella Shepard said:

The act of simply sitting and observing our surroundings can bring such contentment, we should do it more. Thank you for reminding us of how sweet it can be, just to be.

January 2nd, 2023 15:31

a vantaged perch
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people or noise. I only hear the the songs of birds with granite rocks all around and it doesn\'t take much to picture your scene. Very peaceful is the mood it left me with.

January 2nd, 2023 10:15

a vantaged perch
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
I was on a panoramic height, then I fell down a hill! lol.

January 2nd, 2023 06:16

aubade 2023
thinkerbell said:

A wonderful way to greet the new year...Happy new year to you dear poet🥰

January 1st, 2023 12:27

aubade 2023
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you dear bard for sharing these words of infinite wisdom, and hope as we enter the new year. May 2023 be a new beginning.

January 1st, 2023 12:22

silver threaded web
thinkerbell said:

Beautifully written dear poet..the imagery is so crystal clear to me🥰

January 1st, 2023 11:39

aubade 2023
orchidee said:

A fine aubade (poem) that is, CB, I says, after getting out dictionary!
That\'s a good enough word to be starting a new year, or new day with!

January 1st, 2023 03:24

aubade 2023
Neville said:



may you have a most contented 2023

January 1st, 2023 03:15

silver threaded web
Bella Shepard said:

Beautifully worded my friend. The passage of time seems so much more tangible as we wade through the winter months. Thank you for this delightful end of the year verse.

December 31st, 2022 14:48

silver threaded web
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
You spent that extra second we had one year, or you saving it up for later?! lol.

December 31st, 2022 03:20

I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:

Yuk, tastes like drinking perfume, I imagine. Not that I ever have drank perfume. Well, smells like it anyway!

December 31st, 2022 03:11

grand coterie
Bella Shepard said:

Time to come together as one, for the good of all? Time for truth to prevail?

December 30th, 2022 17:31

I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:

I was about to have a pot of tea! lol.

December 30th, 2022 13:02

grand coterie
sorenbarrett said:

This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the seriousness implied by the first line. Then I read the ending two lines and it takes me to another place.

December 29th, 2022 20:51

not all that glisters is gold
Bella Shepard said:

Enticing, the image of that beautiful, juicy orange. Perhaps taunting, as it may roll away to entice another day. Good one dear friend, always fun.

December 23rd, 2022 14:19

not all that glisters is gold
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully crisp imagery
so open to personalisation, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope you have a great festive season
stay safe!

December 23rd, 2022 08:07

not all that glisters is gold
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

December 23rd, 2022 03:02

Mr Right
Bella Shepard said:

Years of writing has given me arth-writis in my writing hand, but I do prefer the written word. This is a wonderful tongue, and brain twister dear bard, such fun.

December 22nd, 2022 15:36



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