Comments received on poems by arqios
your holy book or mine?
L. B. Mek said:
(words speak, beyond
what writer\'s imbue
as, to read is to question
for a line can anchor our mind
or make us doubt, our once
untouchable dogmatic zeal;
what truly matters
is that we listen
when we come across those words
fated, to open possibilities
in our journey of life...)
forgive my feeble attempt at a poetic reply, dear Poet
i couldn\'t resist..
thank you for sharing such a memorable read
March 6th, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
(words speak, beyond
what writer\'s imbue
as, to read is to question
for a line can anchor our mind
or make us doubt, our once
untouchable dogmatic zeal;
what truly matters
is that we listen
when we come across those words
fated, to open possibilities
in our journey of life...)
forgive my feeble attempt at a poetic reply, dear Poet
i couldn\'t resist..
thank you for sharing such a memorable read
March 6th, 2023 04:28
within reach
L. B. Mek said:
life-affriming poetry
to nourish our zest for life
beautifully paced and worded
what polished skill!
sorry for my tardiness dear Poet
March 6th, 2023 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
life-affriming poetry
to nourish our zest for life
beautifully paced and worded
what polished skill!
sorry for my tardiness dear Poet
March 6th, 2023 04:21
no longer mine
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is lie that if you have had a good day, and you must have had a good day.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is lie that if you have had a good day, and you must have had a good day.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:57
no longer mine
Bella Shepard said:
I was just getting ready to say something really witty and profound, but a nanosecond passed, and the thought was gone, oh well. It is whimsical and sobering at the same time dear poet.
March 3rd, 2023 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
I was just getting ready to say something really witty and profound, but a nanosecond passed, and the thought was gone, oh well. It is whimsical and sobering at the same time dear poet.
March 3rd, 2023 14:52
no longer mine
Neville said:
time flies like the wind .. and fruit flies like banana\'s :)
March 3rd, 2023 13:44
Neville said:
time flies like the wind .. and fruit flies like banana\'s :)
March 3rd, 2023 13:44
no longer mine
orchidee said:
A verse there in 6.7.5. format I recognise!
I don\'t say \'metres\' now, as that\'s something technical, to do with stress on certain syllables.
I only end up stressed about them syllables if I try to \'metre\'!
March 3rd, 2023 10:47
orchidee said:
A verse there in 6.7.5. format I recognise!
I don\'t say \'metres\' now, as that\'s something technical, to do with stress on certain syllables.
I only end up stressed about them syllables if I try to \'metre\'!
March 3rd, 2023 10:47
no longer mine
orchidee said:
You must have been enjoying yourself then, as it\'s said \'Time goes quickly when you\'re enjoying yourself\'. Fido don\'t let me have too much enjoyment, in case I swoon!
I really must \'get out more\'. lol.
March 3rd, 2023 10:45
orchidee said:
You must have been enjoying yourself then, as it\'s said \'Time goes quickly when you\'re enjoying yourself\'. Fido don\'t let me have too much enjoyment, in case I swoon!
I really must \'get out more\'. lol.
March 3rd, 2023 10:45
no longer mine
sorenbarrett said:
So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?
March 3rd, 2023 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?
March 3rd, 2023 08:39
confrontational history
Mr. Not said:
humanity might be a curse and a blessing. depends on what sides of us you want to look at and which you choose to ignore. there\'s always a reason, nothing is black and white..
March 2nd, 2023 12:30
Mr. Not said:
humanity might be a curse and a blessing. depends on what sides of us you want to look at and which you choose to ignore. there\'s always a reason, nothing is black and white..
March 2nd, 2023 12:30
wharfside reverie
Mr. Not said:
your poems usually teach me new words, and tumultuous might be a new favorite.
March 2nd, 2023 12:21
Mr. Not said:
your poems usually teach me new words, and tumultuous might be a new favorite.
March 2nd, 2023 12:21
headstone mash
orchidee said:
Doh! Me light bulb\'s gone dim. The one in me head that light up and says \'Idea!\' or \'Thought!\'
Me 3 brain cells must be on holiday. lol.
March 2nd, 2023 08:13
orchidee said:
Doh! Me light bulb\'s gone dim. The one in me head that light up and says \'Idea!\' or \'Thought!\'
Me 3 brain cells must be on holiday. lol.
March 2nd, 2023 08:13
wharfside reverie
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
But Fido is suspect of \'reverie\'. He won\'t allow me any in case it gets too jolly, or any hint of hotness! Nor any ardour or excitement. He says it\'s for my own good, in case I swoon too much! lol.
March 1st, 2023 13:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
But Fido is suspect of \'reverie\'. He won\'t allow me any in case it gets too jolly, or any hint of hotness! Nor any ardour or excitement. He says it\'s for my own good, in case I swoon too much! lol.
March 1st, 2023 13:31
wharfside reverie
Bella Shepard said:
You pose such an intriguing scenario dear poet. Do we truly listen, or simply look to distract ourselves. Such a good write!
March 1st, 2023 12:13
Bella Shepard said:
You pose such an intriguing scenario dear poet. Do we truly listen, or simply look to distract ourselves. Such a good write!
March 1st, 2023 12:13
confrontational history
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write, because it\'s neither \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'.
And \'I wouldn\'t have done that when I was your age\' does not ring true, because they would have done it at our age! Whatever \'it\' was.
February 27th, 2023 13:10
orchidee said:
It\'s a true write, because it\'s neither \'the good old days\' nor \'the bad old days\'.
And \'I wouldn\'t have done that when I was your age\' does not ring true, because they would have done it at our age! Whatever \'it\' was.
February 27th, 2023 13:10
confrontational history
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun, it\'s all been here before. Good writing.
February 27th, 2023 06:58
2781 said:
There\'s nothing new under the sun, it\'s all been here before. Good writing.
February 27th, 2023 06:58
within reach
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,\"if a measure of wisdom still remains\" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
February 26th, 2023 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you direct our attention to the state of the world in a most profound way. Your second stanza,\"if a measure of wisdom still remains\" begs the question do we realize what we have lost? Your last stanza a vision of what can be. Brilliant!
February 26th, 2023 13:55
cursors and curses
Bella Shepard said:
That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers flying, striking keys I don\'t want to strike and inadvertently hitting a button from which there is no recovery. If this is the dilema, you\'ve it the nail on the head. This one\'s fun!
February 19th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers flying, striking keys I don\'t want to strike and inadvertently hitting a button from which there is no recovery. If this is the dilema, you\'ve it the nail on the head. This one\'s fun!
February 19th, 2023 14:14
cursors and curses
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed indeed are the hours I spend trying to find the right keyboard dance .
February 19th, 2023 12:18
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed indeed are the hours I spend trying to find the right keyboard dance .
February 19th, 2023 12:18
star signed
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step out on my deck each night and see Orion and the The Big Dipper, and bid them goodnight before I go to bed. Thank you dear poet, for this love of constellations!
February 16th, 2023 13:38
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step out on my deck each night and see Orion and the The Big Dipper, and bid them goodnight before I go to bed. Thank you dear poet, for this love of constellations!
February 16th, 2023 13:38
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