Comments received on poems by arqios
a moment in between
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis in that moment in between that all is as you wish it to be arqios. Enjoy the moment while it\'s yours. 😉
December 16th, 2024 15:21
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis in that moment in between that all is as you wish it to be arqios. Enjoy the moment while it\'s yours. 😉
December 16th, 2024 15:21
season\'s jailbreak
Cassie58 said:
So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.
December 16th, 2024 12:59
Cassie58 said:
So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.
December 16th, 2024 12:59
season\'s jailbreak
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the cost of freedom...🦃...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. 😂 A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! 🌹👏 Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! 🤘😎
December 16th, 2024 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the cost of freedom...🦃...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. 😂 A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! 🌹👏 Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! 🤘😎
December 16th, 2024 09:24
season\'s jailbreak
Neville said:
This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 🍮🍮🍮👍
December 16th, 2024 09:01
Neville said:
This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 🍮🍮🍮👍
December 16th, 2024 09:01
season\'s jailbreak
sorenbarrett said:
A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
December 16th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
December 16th, 2024 05:26
season\'s jailbreak
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual 🤣😂 oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!
December 16th, 2024 05:13
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual 🤣😂 oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!
December 16th, 2024 05:13
season\'s jailbreak
Poetic Licence said:
It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you
December 16th, 2024 03:49
Poetic Licence said:
It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you
December 16th, 2024 03:49
a moment in between
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is now arqios.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is now arqios.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:58
a moment in between
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing wrong with this work of art at all, indeed .. everything is perfectly all write & that, is an understatement if ever there was in my personal opinion .. from the opening stanza which was a brilliant way to kick off and introduce the whole thing, write through to its polar opposite conclusion .. everything fits with such exact precision .. I suggest this is more than just a little gem .. indeed much more .. 👍😎👍
December 16th, 2024 02:12
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing wrong with this work of art at all, indeed .. everything is perfectly all write & that, is an understatement if ever there was in my personal opinion .. from the opening stanza which was a brilliant way to kick off and introduce the whole thing, write through to its polar opposite conclusion .. everything fits with such exact precision .. I suggest this is more than just a little gem .. indeed much more .. 👍😎👍
December 16th, 2024 02:12
a moment in between
Dan Williams said:
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04
a moment in between
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thought provoking indeed! 🤔
That moment in-between is
all that counts sounds like,, \"now\"! 😲
Thanks for sharing
my pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 20:53
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem
and thought provoking indeed! 🤔
That moment in-between is
all that counts sounds like,, \"now\"! 😲
Thanks for sharing
my pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 20:53
a moment in between
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The questions of \"why\" and \"where\"
dissolve in the distant horizons
leaving only the hushed tones of \"now.\"
The end stanza says it all. For all of the questions we have...the whys...the hows...we never seem to \"know\" the answers...and, perhaps...maybe, just maybe...that is okay. Maybe we have all we need to discover in the current moment...in the now. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully wise, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The questions of \"why\" and \"where\"
dissolve in the distant horizons
leaving only the hushed tones of \"now.\"
The end stanza says it all. For all of the questions we have...the whys...the hows...we never seem to \"know\" the answers...and, perhaps...maybe, just maybe...that is okay. Maybe we have all we need to discover in the current moment...in the now. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderfully wise, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:00
a moment in between
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured, planned or noticed. Time not lived, another dimension where everything is decided and fate turns the page. Well written my friend
December 15th, 2024 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured, planned or noticed. Time not lived, another dimension where everything is decided and fate turns the page. Well written my friend
December 15th, 2024 11:43
a moment in between
Poetic Licence said:
I will be honest i am still working this one out, but i have still enjoyed the read
December 15th, 2024 11:36
Poetic Licence said:
I will be honest i am still working this one out, but i have still enjoyed the read
December 15th, 2024 11:36
a moment in between
orchidee said:
I can never catch \'this moment\'. It seems to be gone in a, erm, moment! lol.
December 15th, 2024 08:39
orchidee said:
I can never catch \'this moment\'. It seems to be gone in a, erm, moment! lol.
December 15th, 2024 08:39
The Silent Herald
Cassie58 said:
The voice of poets. We have a duty not to be silent. Our job is to be heard surely and long may your words continue to have their impact arqios.
December 14th, 2024 16:14
Cassie58 said:
The voice of poets. We have a duty not to be silent. Our job is to be heard surely and long may your words continue to have their impact arqios.
December 14th, 2024 16:14
The Silent Herald
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true arqios, those pens can leak out many unsung words.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true arqios, those pens can leak out many unsung words.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:50
The Silent Herald
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem 🌟
great brevity,!! 👍
I\'m one of those
silent heralds,
but sometimes noisy!! 😳
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 22:49
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem 🌟
great brevity,!! 👍
I\'m one of those
silent heralds,
but sometimes noisy!! 😳
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 22:49
The Silent Herald
Neville said:
One tries to be .. I think .. and tho\' I prefer deep, I am content to dwell in the shallows .. Nice one my good man 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:43
Neville said:
One tries to be .. I think .. and tho\' I prefer deep, I am content to dwell in the shallows .. Nice one my good man 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:43
The Silent Herald
Poetic Licence said:
I think i am, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
I think i am, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 10:26
The Silent Herald
sorenbarrett said:
You have depicted well, the voice of a poet. Very nicely worded in this poem.Cryptc
December 13th, 2024 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
You have depicted well, the voice of a poet. Very nicely worded in this poem.Cryptc
December 13th, 2024 10:09
The Silent Herald
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe I am, my friend! Though, depending on which piece of mine one is reading, one might beg to differ on how silent of a herald I am! 🤣 I truly relate to this. Well done with a poignant question at the end! 👏🌹
December 13th, 2024 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe I am, my friend! Though, depending on which piece of mine one is reading, one might beg to differ on how silent of a herald I am! 🤣 I truly relate to this. Well done with a poignant question at the end! 👏🌹
December 13th, 2024 08:43
Glimmer of Frost
Doggerel Dave said:
Beauty on a postcard; \'chills to the core\' - the reality . Noted that you have elected to settle in warmer climes....
A rich read though.
December 12th, 2024 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Beauty on a postcard; \'chills to the core\' - the reality . Noted that you have elected to settle in warmer climes....
A rich read though.
December 12th, 2024 19:38
Glimmer of Frost
Cassie58 said:
Wishing you warmer climes. A sad and frosty poem, albeit beautifully penned with fine imagery arqios. Reminds me of a poem I wrote some time back. Some men search for silver, others search for gold,
December 12th, 2024 14:02
Cassie58 said:
Wishing you warmer climes. A sad and frosty poem, albeit beautifully penned with fine imagery arqios. Reminds me of a poem I wrote some time back. Some men search for silver, others search for gold,
December 12th, 2024 14:02
Glimmer of Frost
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write that words on several levels. Nicely done.
December 12th, 2024 09:36
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write that words on several levels. Nicely done.
December 12th, 2024 09:36
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