Comments received on poems by arqios
unveiling
NafisaSB said:
i agree - verse wins over long winded prose any day
keep composing
March 26th, 2025 23:36
NafisaSB said:
i agree - verse wins over long winded prose any day
keep composing
March 26th, 2025 23:36
nocturne
Poetic Licence said:
This has a very calming soothing feel to it, nicely written
March 26th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
This has a very calming soothing feel to it, nicely written
March 26th, 2025 07:00
nocturne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love a good Nocturne, such as the one you provided a video for by Chopin, and I love a good sunset and evening. This poem, for me, was stunning. Well done, my friend, well done! 🌹👏
March 26th, 2025 05:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love a good Nocturne, such as the one you provided a video for by Chopin, and I love a good sunset and evening. This poem, for me, was stunning. Well done, my friend, well done! 🌹👏
March 26th, 2025 05:40
nocturne
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is so well written. It left me wanting more.I like the use of adjectives.So important I think.Well done compadre
March 26th, 2025 05:30
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is so well written. It left me wanting more.I like the use of adjectives.So important I think.Well done compadre
March 26th, 2025 05:30
nocturne
sorenbarrett said:
The flow of the day melts through this poem running downward from morning to night. Delicious
March 26th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The flow of the day melts through this poem running downward from morning to night. Delicious
March 26th, 2025 03:56
nocturne
Goldfinch60 said:
Chopin\'s nocturnes are sop wonderful arqios as are you words.
Andy
March 26th, 2025 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Chopin\'s nocturnes are sop wonderful arqios as are you words.
Andy
March 26th, 2025 03:03
Zara’s Choice
Kevin Hulme said:
Your Poem reads as a \'Dystopian\' Novel of the Past. Was it \'Hal\' in 2001 a Space Odyssey taking over? The fact that a lot of the Technical Jargon you mentioned I didn\'t understand makes me sleep with the Light on tonight: Frightening!
Have \'Love is in the Air\' in my Phone: Great Song.
March 25th, 2025 20:42
Kevin Hulme said:
Your Poem reads as a \'Dystopian\' Novel of the Past. Was it \'Hal\' in 2001 a Space Odyssey taking over? The fact that a lot of the Technical Jargon you mentioned I didn\'t understand makes me sleep with the Light on tonight: Frightening!
Have \'Love is in the Air\' in my Phone: Great Song.
March 25th, 2025 20:42
Zara’s Choice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, arqios! Technology has always been both our greatest achievement to our biggest downfall. What I love about this poem is that it shows the people behind the technology. We forget that. Now, are all of those people in it for the best interest of society, or are they in it for profit. That\'s the question, and it\'s not a new one! The average programmer, just doing their job faithfully, no doubt. The systemic institution they work for, with their corporate think and, more than likely, greed???? This poem has lots of teeth because it can be read straight as poem about the humanity behind code, it could be read as a a sort of love story between programmers, and it also provokes thought about these devices that shape our lives and how much control we inevitably allow other people (aka corporations) have over us. This poem gets a major fave from me for all of those reasons and more. Wonderful job, my friend! 🙏🐦⬛🖤
March 25th, 2025 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, arqios! Technology has always been both our greatest achievement to our biggest downfall. What I love about this poem is that it shows the people behind the technology. We forget that. Now, are all of those people in it for the best interest of society, or are they in it for profit. That\'s the question, and it\'s not a new one! The average programmer, just doing their job faithfully, no doubt. The systemic institution they work for, with their corporate think and, more than likely, greed???? This poem has lots of teeth because it can be read straight as poem about the humanity behind code, it could be read as a a sort of love story between programmers, and it also provokes thought about these devices that shape our lives and how much control we inevitably allow other people (aka corporations) have over us. This poem gets a major fave from me for all of those reasons and more. Wonderful job, my friend! 🙏🐦⬛🖤
March 25th, 2025 07:51
Zara’s Choice
Poetic Licence said:
The greatest battle we will have to fight man against the machine, I have said for many years man is to clever for its own good, now with something man invented we face the real possibility of being surplus to requirements, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:28
Poetic Licence said:
The greatest battle we will have to fight man against the machine, I have said for many years man is to clever for its own good, now with something man invented we face the real possibility of being surplus to requirements, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:28
Zara’s Choice
David Wakeling said:
This is interesting.John and Zara a love story around computers.I often wonder if computers have improved the world or not. An important poem that made me think.Excellent
March 25th, 2025 05:25
David Wakeling said:
This is interesting.John and Zara a love story around computers.I often wonder if computers have improved the world or not. An important poem that made me think.Excellent
March 25th, 2025 05:25
Zara’s Choice
sorenbarrett said:
A in vivo metaphor in this poem. This is the first time that I have heard this topic presented in this manner. Man vs machine. Nicely worked out in words.
March 25th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A in vivo metaphor in this poem. This is the first time that I have heard this topic presented in this manner. Man vs machine. Nicely worked out in words.
March 25th, 2025 04:08
Zara’s Choice
Goldfinch60 said:
This world is being controlled by computing arqios, that is why I think outside the box.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
This world is being controlled by computing arqios, that is why I think outside the box.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:54
waterfront recital: reprise
Kevin Hulme said:
Some fine Images spring out from your lines . Nice One.
March 24th, 2025 20:42
Kevin Hulme said:
Some fine Images spring out from your lines . Nice One.
March 24th, 2025 20:42
and then us, content creators
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, if more people would see their influence, no matter how big or small, no matter if digital or in-person, as genuinely and responsibly as this, we wouldn\'t have such a bad world to live in! Excellent job, my friend! Truth bytes! 🌹👏
March 24th, 2025 06:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, if more people would see their influence, no matter how big or small, no matter if digital or in-person, as genuinely and responsibly as this, we wouldn\'t have such a bad world to live in! Excellent job, my friend! Truth bytes! 🌹👏
March 24th, 2025 06:47
and then us, content creators
arqios said:
Probably not as catchy as its predecessor
March 24th, 2025 06:18
arqios said:
Probably not as catchy as its predecessor
March 24th, 2025 06:18
and then us, content creators
Poetic Licence said:
The power and influence it has is terrifying really, moulding our future generations without our knowledge or understanding, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
The power and influence it has is terrifying really, moulding our future generations without our knowledge or understanding, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:35
and then us, content creators
David Wakeling said:
wow this poem packs a punch.You are right about the power of Social Media and influencing. Well written and thought provoking
March 24th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
wow this poem packs a punch.You are right about the power of Social Media and influencing. Well written and thought provoking
March 24th, 2025 05:19
and then us, content creators
sorenbarrett said:
Influence has grown with the internet. What was once just a neighborhood thing is now worldwide. People count their influence in hundreds of thousands it not more. A great metaphor for the spread of information and the issue of perceived trust is big.
March 24th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Influence has grown with the internet. What was once just a neighborhood thing is now worldwide. People count their influence in hundreds of thousands it not more. A great metaphor for the spread of information and the issue of perceived trust is big.
March 24th, 2025 04:06
a royal pain
NafisaSB said:
history is full of such tales- thanks for reviving my interest in it - had read about it
March 23rd, 2025 23:47
NafisaSB said:
history is full of such tales- thanks for reviving my interest in it - had read about it
March 23rd, 2025 23:47
waterfront recital: reprise
Poetic Licence said:
The washing away of the old allowing fresh new memories to be made, a lovely read
March 23rd, 2025 05:22
Poetic Licence said:
The washing away of the old allowing fresh new memories to be made, a lovely read
March 23rd, 2025 05:22
waterfront recital: reprise
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life explored in great detail.Enjoyed reading
March 23rd, 2025 05:06
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life explored in great detail.Enjoyed reading
March 23rd, 2025 05:06
waterfront recital: reprise
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where footprints are cast and the future,( time ) or the sea that washes away every trace. A poem with a somewhat melancholy feel. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where footprints are cast and the future,( time ) or the sea that washes away every trace. A poem with a somewhat melancholy feel. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
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