Comments received on poems by arqios
a grasp away
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write and love the sentiment.
January 10th, 2025 10:29
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write and love the sentiment.
January 10th, 2025 10:29
reflection by the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love poem but I feel greater depth in the nature references and how nature itself is the love. Just my take on this beautifully worded proclamation of love to whomever it is directed.
January 10th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love poem but I feel greater depth in the nature references and how nature itself is the love. Just my take on this beautifully worded proclamation of love to whomever it is directed.
January 10th, 2025 08:56
reflection by the sea
Poetic Licence said:
Looking out at natures beauty reflecting and remembering loved lost ones, there is something magical about the sea, i find, enjoyed me read, all the best
January 10th, 2025 08:01
Poetic Licence said:
Looking out at natures beauty reflecting and remembering loved lost ones, there is something magical about the sea, i find, enjoyed me read, all the best
January 10th, 2025 08:01
reflection by the sea
orchidee said:
I imagined I met you, and you said to me: \'No need to go mad and chop down the whole laurel tree\'. Doh! lol.
January 10th, 2025 07:00
orchidee said:
I imagined I met you, and you said to me: \'No need to go mad and chop down the whole laurel tree\'. Doh! lol.
January 10th, 2025 07:00
a grasp away
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A most captivating
and insightful write!!💯👌
Strong feelings
and message and
to read a delight!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:16
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A most captivating
and insightful write!!💯👌
Strong feelings
and message and
to read a delight!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:16
grappling with Today
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Philosophical. Something we must take on board
in our days.
Good one.
January 9th, 2025 20:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Philosophical. Something we must take on board
in our days.
Good one.
January 9th, 2025 20:16
tears you could have cried
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, and love the song choice. Excellently matched.
January 9th, 2025 10:34
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, and love the song choice. Excellently matched.
January 9th, 2025 10:34
a grasp away
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, we live in a world of extending swords instead of laurels. This is a great call to action, which is what this poem is about. The offering of peace and forgiveness...not just the mere wish of having it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, we live in a world of extending swords instead of laurels. This is a great call to action, which is what this poem is about. The offering of peace and forgiveness...not just the mere wish of having it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:45
a grasp away
Poetic Licence said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
a grasp away
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
a grasp away
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
tears you could have cried
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
tears you could have cried
Poetic Licence said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
Poetic Licence said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
tears you could have cried
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
tears you could have cried
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
tears you could have cried
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
tears you could have cried
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
tarkovsky-esque
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
tarkovsky-esque
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
tarkovsky-esque
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
tarkovsky-esque
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
tarkovsky-esque
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
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