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Cassie58 said:
The stars in the night sky can offer hope when life in the real world can at times be hard for some, as they journey through. That’s where your lines took me arqios. Lovely brevity.
January 25th, 2025 11:17
Cassie58 said:
The stars in the night sky can offer hope when life in the real world can at times be hard for some, as they journey through. That’s where your lines took me arqios. Lovely brevity.
January 25th, 2025 11:17
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Teddy.15 said:
I have always found the richest education possible is that of travel. This is stunning. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 08:27
Teddy.15 said:
I have always found the richest education possible is that of travel. This is stunning. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 08:27
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sorenbarrett said:
Ursa minor guidance or direction by Polaris the tip of the bear\'s tail. Callisto turned iby Artemis nto a bear for breaking her chatity vow. A great poem of a wander.
January 25th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ursa minor guidance or direction by Polaris the tip of the bear\'s tail. Callisto turned iby Artemis nto a bear for breaking her chatity vow. A great poem of a wander.
January 25th, 2025 07:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, the first comment. As for your poem, I spot my beloved Ursa Minor. Was just looking up at the smaller bear, or little dipper, last night. I pretty much do any night I am outside and it is clear out. Love the stars. As I read this along with your note, I get a sense of a specific place really having an impact on who you are and where you\'ve ended up. The Ursa Minor, then, is a metaphor for guidance and constancy. Connecting 30 years ago to today. A beautiful, powerful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 07:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, the first comment. As for your poem, I spot my beloved Ursa Minor. Was just looking up at the smaller bear, or little dipper, last night. I pretty much do any night I am outside and it is clear out. Love the stars. As I read this along with your note, I get a sense of a specific place really having an impact on who you are and where you\'ve ended up. The Ursa Minor, then, is a metaphor for guidance and constancy. Connecting 30 years ago to today. A beautiful, powerful poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 07:08
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Goldfinch60 said:
Those disorientations will soon become one again arqios.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Those disorientations will soon become one again arqios.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 03:03
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Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes less is more and by that I mean don\'t over think it. Tomorrow is a new day. Very emotional write 🌹
January 25th, 2025 03:02
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes less is more and by that I mean don\'t over think it. Tomorrow is a new day. Very emotional write 🌹
January 25th, 2025 03:02
looking glass
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s a tricky question although the answer, i feel is that cracked mirrors can also reflect properly from the right sides that are not shattered - and if they don\'s mirrors may lie, but the truth is there inspite of it
January 24th, 2025 23:30
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s a tricky question although the answer, i feel is that cracked mirrors can also reflect properly from the right sides that are not shattered - and if they don\'s mirrors may lie, but the truth is there inspite of it
January 24th, 2025 23:30
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Cassie58 said:
Mental exhaustion. Not a good place to be. When I can’t sleep and am over tired, the place you describe sounds familiar. A complete break helps.
January 24th, 2025 21:13
Cassie58 said:
Mental exhaustion. Not a good place to be. When I can’t sleep and am over tired, the place you describe sounds familiar. A complete break helps.
January 24th, 2025 21:13
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Cheeky Missy said:
I like your play on Sleepless in Seattle, and the eloquent description of a bewildering reality which beautifully illustrates the winter perspective spot on, as it were. Ergo, gorgeously rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 24th, 2025 17:42
Cheeky Missy said:
I like your play on Sleepless in Seattle, and the eloquent description of a bewildering reality which beautifully illustrates the winter perspective spot on, as it were. Ergo, gorgeously rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. I love it. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 24th, 2025 17:42
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David Wakeling said:
I think you are just exhausted. Writing is a tough journey.It is a marathon event. Coming up with new ideas is difficult.My advice is take a holiday get some new views to look at. The world wants to see what you see but more importantly it wants to know how you feel about that scene.Anyway good luck. A profound and important poem
January 24th, 2025 15:56
David Wakeling said:
I think you are just exhausted. Writing is a tough journey.It is a marathon event. Coming up with new ideas is difficult.My advice is take a holiday get some new views to look at. The world wants to see what you see but more importantly it wants to know how you feel about that scene.Anyway good luck. A profound and important poem
January 24th, 2025 15:56
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Spencer Wilhelm said:
We\'ll put, that\'s the stage I\'m in, hence I\'m trying to experiment with something new within poetry
January 24th, 2025 12:59
Spencer Wilhelm said:
We\'ll put, that\'s the stage I\'m in, hence I\'m trying to experiment with something new within poetry
January 24th, 2025 12:59
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orchidee said:
Erm, you\'ve said it all - nearly! lol. *gets dictionary out*.
January 24th, 2025 11:28
orchidee said:
Erm, you\'ve said it all - nearly! lol. *gets dictionary out*.
January 24th, 2025 11:28
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Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what emotional and
poignant feelings indeed!! 😳
Been there, felt that way
glad it was temporary!! 🙏
Awesome penning my friend,
Thanks for sharing,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 24th, 2025 10:30
Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what emotional and
poignant feelings indeed!! 😳
Been there, felt that way
glad it was temporary!! 🙏
Awesome penning my friend,
Thanks for sharing,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 24th, 2025 10:30
don’t know
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling...not knowing what to say, think or feel. Honestly, I am feeling a bit that way right now. Just blah. Hate that feeling. With happiness or pain, there\'s at least a sense of being alive. The moments of blah-ness...they\'re almost unbearable if that makes any sense. Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏 Not sure if this is where you were going with it, but it is how it hit me on reading it a couple of times.
January 24th, 2025 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling...not knowing what to say, think or feel. Honestly, I am feeling a bit that way right now. Just blah. Hate that feeling. With happiness or pain, there\'s at least a sense of being alive. The moments of blah-ness...they\'re almost unbearable if that makes any sense. Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏 Not sure if this is where you were going with it, but it is how it hit me on reading it a couple of times.
January 24th, 2025 09:18
not for lack of trying
Neville said:
Reminds me pretty much of a hypnogogic experience I once had and can still recall from yonks back when I was messing around with Marion and her old man threatened to blow both my knee caps off .. jeez .. I dunno why I disclosed that here .. have I consciously missed some subliminal message contained herein by any chance .. Neville
January 24th, 2025 09:05
Neville said:
Reminds me pretty much of a hypnogogic experience I once had and can still recall from yonks back when I was messing around with Marion and her old man threatened to blow both my knee caps off .. jeez .. I dunno why I disclosed that here .. have I consciously missed some subliminal message contained herein by any chance .. Neville
January 24th, 2025 09:05
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Caring dove said:
I don’t know what to write about anymore .. unless I have a picture to write from , I can find myself a bit stuck ….
January 24th, 2025 07:29
Caring dove said:
I don’t know what to write about anymore .. unless I have a picture to write from , I can find myself a bit stuck ….
January 24th, 2025 07:29
not for lack of trying
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios but in our life I know there are better times leading to love and happiness.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios but in our life I know there are better times leading to love and happiness.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:16
not for lack of trying
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and dream i\'d say!! 😊
The imagery just blows me away!!🏆
Mellifluously penned,
Thanks for sharing much
enjoyed my friend!!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:46
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and dream i\'d say!! 😊
The imagery just blows me away!!🏆
Mellifluously penned,
Thanks for sharing much
enjoyed my friend!!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:46
not for lack of trying
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, love that picture! 🤣 It really does say it all! As for the poem...But of ill return, indeed. I think this is relatable on so many different levels...but it is always disheartening when one invests themselves only to come up dry...not for a lack of trying... but just because. Well done, my friend.
January 23rd, 2025 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, love that picture! 🤣 It really does say it all! As for the poem...But of ill return, indeed. I think this is relatable on so many different levels...but it is always disheartening when one invests themselves only to come up dry...not for a lack of trying... but just because. Well done, my friend.
January 23rd, 2025 09:04
not for lack of trying
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember seeing a video of a cat that was dreaming. It was making the movements of trying to catch a bird while still asleep!
January 23rd, 2025 06:07
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember seeing a video of a cat that was dreaming. It was making the movements of trying to catch a bird while still asleep!
January 23rd, 2025 06:07
not for lack of trying
Poetic Licence said:
I found this really interesting to read, they always say you cannot beat a tryer, but if that tryer never gets it returned, do they still keep trying, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:54
Poetic Licence said:
I found this really interesting to read, they always say you cannot beat a tryer, but if that tryer never gets it returned, do they still keep trying, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 05:54
looking glass
Neville said:
Looks splendid to me and in so many ways and no matter how I look at it .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:29
Neville said:
Looks splendid to me and in so many ways and no matter how I look at it .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 05:29
not for lack of trying
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of the (what ifs) of life and those that might have been but for bad fortune. Woven with most interesting wording that, whether intentional of not, lured me in. \"Cryptic lines weave through winding tales\" I had to ask if this intentional of just coincidental. The next line with curtailed again used emphasized the point. I had to ask, am I looking too deep? I think not I see the poem itself as metaphoric woven fabric with its own tale of a chase for meaning that in the meaning of the last stanza the last line gives the answer to . In a Lewis Carroll Hunting of the Smark type of way \"not for lack of trying but of ill return\" There is no Snark only Boojums.
January 23rd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of the (what ifs) of life and those that might have been but for bad fortune. Woven with most interesting wording that, whether intentional of not, lured me in. \"Cryptic lines weave through winding tales\" I had to ask if this intentional of just coincidental. The next line with curtailed again used emphasized the point. I had to ask, am I looking too deep? I think not I see the poem itself as metaphoric woven fabric with its own tale of a chase for meaning that in the meaning of the last stanza the last line gives the answer to . In a Lewis Carroll Hunting of the Smark type of way \"not for lack of trying but of ill return\" There is no Snark only Boojums.
January 23rd, 2025 04:32
looking glass
Goldfinch60 said:
You just see more than just one of the person you are arqios.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
You just see more than just one of the person you are arqios.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:24
looking glass
Cassie58 said:
Brevity with many levels arqios. For such a short piece, there is much to contemplate here. Shattered mirrors can make interesting poetry.
January 22nd, 2025 12:41
Cassie58 said:
Brevity with many levels arqios. For such a short piece, there is much to contemplate here. Shattered mirrors can make interesting poetry.
January 22nd, 2025 12:41
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