Comments received on poems by arqios
spiral noose
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
gems inside
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
gems inside
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
gems inside
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
here
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
here
arqios said:
Thanks, L.B. This is a summing up of sorts in poetry or a life dedicated to the art.
June 7th, 2022 05:25
arqios said:
Thanks, L.B. This is a summing up of sorts in poetry or a life dedicated to the art.
June 7th, 2022 05:25
here
L. B. Mek said:
in drips, they filter
realisations of gleaned, awareness
to that accumulating wisdom
in our lives
awaiting, our readiness
to be utilised, in those choices
that carve out life\'s
most cherished mementos...
(simply beautiful, dear Poet
I so appreciate that gentleness
in your tonality)
June 7th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
in drips, they filter
realisations of gleaned, awareness
to that accumulating wisdom
in our lives
awaiting, our readiness
to be utilised, in those choices
that carve out life\'s
most cherished mementos...
(simply beautiful, dear Poet
I so appreciate that gentleness
in your tonality)
June 7th, 2022 05:12
Midnight Rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'classis imagery of antiquity
utilised
within modernity\'s concepts
empowered
to shed clarifying waters
on life\'s, stormy oceans..
this that profound, talent
of a Poet in love, with poesy\'s
cyclical capacity
to thread, that same fight
to awaken: Awareness
one Inked generation
after, another\'s inked
Volition...\'
(so well realised
and executed, with such practised
skill
I laud your poetic ambition)
I read and learn, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'classis imagery of antiquity
utilised
within modernity\'s concepts
empowered
to shed clarifying waters
on life\'s, stormy oceans..
this that profound, talent
of a Poet in love, with poesy\'s
cyclical capacity
to thread, that same fight
to awaken: Awareness
one Inked generation
after, another\'s inked
Volition...\'
(so well realised
and executed, with such practised
skill
I laud your poetic ambition)
I read and learn, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 06:36
Midnight Rendezvous
orchidee said:
Ooohh, I dunno! What\'s all these goings-on at midnight? I gotta get to bed by oh, 6.30pm, for me beauty sleep! They say I\'m ugly without it! heehee.
Or - Oh yes, I fancy a bit of that. Sounds good to me!
i can\'t decide. lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:48
orchidee said:
Ooohh, I dunno! What\'s all these goings-on at midnight? I gotta get to bed by oh, 6.30pm, for me beauty sleep! They say I\'m ugly without it! heehee.
Or - Oh yes, I fancy a bit of that. Sounds good to me!
i can\'t decide. lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:48
if we had wings to fly
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams and goals, no matter how large or small, what would we be without them? So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams and goals, no matter how large or small, what would we be without them? So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:52
\'til all my breath is you
L. B. Mek said:
you had me with your very first two lines..
such a memorable read, dear Poet
\'I admire
that quality of sincere, tonality
imbued
in everything I\'ve read from you\'..
June 3rd, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
you had me with your very first two lines..
such a memorable read, dear Poet
\'I admire
that quality of sincere, tonality
imbued
in everything I\'ve read from you\'..
June 3rd, 2022 04:00
a lullaby
JudyStella said:
It emits this cozy feeling 💖 I am gonna imagine a mama bird tucking its baby to sleep
June 2nd, 2022 12:42
JudyStella said:
It emits this cozy feeling 💖 I am gonna imagine a mama bird tucking its baby to sleep
June 2nd, 2022 12:42
a lullaby
Rocky Lagou said:
I think what I love most is the ambiguity of whether you\'re actually addressing a \"pet\" or a loved one.
Wonderful.
June 2nd, 2022 08:06
Rocky Lagou said:
I think what I love most is the ambiguity of whether you\'re actually addressing a \"pet\" or a loved one.
Wonderful.
June 2nd, 2022 08:06
steadfast chestplate
orchidee said:
You got that \'breastplate of righteousness\' on in that spiritual battle, or spiritual warfare?!
Is there anything to protect our teef (teeth) in battle?
If you answer, you\'ll be drawn into Teddy and my nuttiness about teef. lol.
June 1st, 2022 02:20
orchidee said:
You got that \'breastplate of righteousness\' on in that spiritual battle, or spiritual warfare?!
Is there anything to protect our teef (teeth) in battle?
If you answer, you\'ll be drawn into Teddy and my nuttiness about teef. lol.
June 1st, 2022 02:20
ode to the ferry pilot
L. B. Mek said:
what a life-affriming poetic message!
the greatest gift
and the most straightforward
we can offer, anyone
is to make them feel, noticed
valued;
your words, do this
for so many, empathetically
how kind, dear Poet
(I read and humbly
learn)
May 31st, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
what a life-affriming poetic message!
the greatest gift
and the most straightforward
we can offer, anyone
is to make them feel, noticed
valued;
your words, do this
for so many, empathetically
how kind, dear Poet
(I read and humbly
learn)
May 31st, 2022 05:08
ode to the ferry pilot
orchidee said:
Me ignorance is not bliss. lol *Gets out dictionary for \'diorama\'* - an actual word.
Did an \'o\' sneak into \'drama\' as a typo?
May 31st, 2022 02:03
orchidee said:
Me ignorance is not bliss. lol *Gets out dictionary for \'diorama\'* - an actual word.
Did an \'o\' sneak into \'drama\' as a typo?
May 31st, 2022 02:03
report card demolition
JudyStella said:
The imagery🤩is brilliant! brought back memories when I hid a term paper under the bed and found it months after 😂 A well written poem💖
May 29th, 2022 12:45
JudyStella said:
The imagery🤩is brilliant! brought back memories when I hid a term paper under the bed and found it months after 😂 A well written poem💖
May 29th, 2022 12:45
when roses bloomed
Jonas Robinson said:
This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 14:49
Jonas Robinson said:
This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 14:49
when roses bloomed
JudyStella said:
Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome
May 28th, 2022 09:05
JudyStella said:
Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome
May 28th, 2022 09:05
when roses bloomed
Aradhya said:
\'When Roses bloomed in the garden \' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤
May 28th, 2022 06:31
Aradhya said:
\'When Roses bloomed in the garden \' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤
May 28th, 2022 06:31
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