Comments received on poems by arqios
Glimmer of Frost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A sad poem with a haunting beauty to it. My kind of poem, friend! 🌹👏🙏🖤 If only they had black rose, I’d give you that, so wilting will have to do! 🥀 😂 That kind of cold…btw…does indeed chill to the core. Love the social commentary!
December 12th, 2024 06:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A sad poem with a haunting beauty to it. My kind of poem, friend! 🌹👏🙏🖤 If only they had black rose, I’d give you that, so wilting will have to do! 🥀 😂 That kind of cold…btw…does indeed chill to the core. Love the social commentary!
December 12th, 2024 06:54
Glimmer of Frost
Poetic Licence said:
A clever poem, it reminds me of the filthy rich of this world, and the frozen hearts they keep in order to maintain their wealth.
December 12th, 2024 04:06
Poetic Licence said:
A clever poem, it reminds me of the filthy rich of this world, and the frozen hearts they keep in order to maintain their wealth.
December 12th, 2024 04:06
Glimmer of Frost
sorenbarrett said:
As his usual, your wordplay and clever writing has made this poem not only fun to read, but quite poignant. I loved your throwing in a bit of German that I had forgotten since my high school classes.
December 12th, 2024 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
As his usual, your wordplay and clever writing has made this poem not only fun to read, but quite poignant. I loved your throwing in a bit of German that I had forgotten since my high school classes.
December 12th, 2024 03:59
Glimmer of Frost
David Wakeling said:
Half the world, half the time is Frozen. This certainly paints a vivid image of the cold.Excellent
December 12th, 2024 03:54
David Wakeling said:
Half the world, half the time is Frozen. This certainly paints a vivid image of the cold.Excellent
December 12th, 2024 03:54
Glimmer of Frost
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of finding treasure are soon dispelled arqios.
Andy
December 12th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of finding treasure are soon dispelled arqios.
Andy
December 12th, 2024 02:51
Glimmer of Frost
Caring dove said:
Beautiful and interesting writing .. yet seems sad
December 12th, 2024 02:47
Caring dove said:
Beautiful and interesting writing .. yet seems sad
December 12th, 2024 02:47
Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Poetic Licence said:
A must have for amateurs like me, a fantastic piece of poetry, wish i had found it before
December 11th, 2024 17:35
Poetic Licence said:
A must have for amateurs like me, a fantastic piece of poetry, wish i had found it before
December 11th, 2024 17:35
life\'s no faerie tale
NafisaSB said:
nice and positive message - beautiful
December 11th, 2024 06:53
NafisaSB said:
nice and positive message - beautiful
December 11th, 2024 06:53
unlikely treasures
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor and imagery, a wonderful piece of poetry, I was once told by a very wise poet that in fact it is the poet who should enjoy his poem, if others do then it\'s a bonus. Gorgeous dear arqios 🌹
December 11th, 2024 03:05
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful metaphor and imagery, a wonderful piece of poetry, I was once told by a very wise poet that in fact it is the poet who should enjoy his poem, if others do then it\'s a bonus. Gorgeous dear arqios 🌹
December 11th, 2024 03:05
unlikely treasures
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of the past often come back to be written down arqios.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words of the past often come back to be written down arqios.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:16
unlikely treasures
David Wakeling said:
Pickaxes unearthing jewels, Great work. It captures the creative mind
December 10th, 2024 15:24
David Wakeling said:
Pickaxes unearthing jewels, Great work. It captures the creative mind
December 10th, 2024 15:24
unlikely treasures
Cassie58 said:
You have summed up a poet’s lot here. All those discarded thoughts and graveyard poems. Very relatable arqios. Nicely composed.
December 10th, 2024 12:47
Cassie58 said:
You have summed up a poet’s lot here. All those discarded thoughts and graveyard poems. Very relatable arqios. Nicely composed.
December 10th, 2024 12:47
unlikely treasures
Neville said:
its what we do and how we go about achieving it .. each individual word a potential gem or invaluable nugget .. building blocks .. a part of a whole .. a process of construction .. or something very much like that .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:19
Neville said:
its what we do and how we go about achieving it .. each individual word a potential gem or invaluable nugget .. building blocks .. a part of a whole .. a process of construction .. or something very much like that .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:19
unlikely treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, bejeweled write, my friend! I always enjoy stopping by and reading your words! 🌹👏 Faved.
December 10th, 2024 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, bejeweled write, my friend! I always enjoy stopping by and reading your words! 🌹👏 Faved.
December 10th, 2024 10:16
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Caring dove said:
Nice soft words .. I like your writing
December 10th, 2024 09:20
Caring dove said:
Nice soft words .. I like your writing
December 10th, 2024 09:20
unlikely treasures
Poetic Licence said:
I have learnt a lot reading your poetry, i enjoy reading it and it always raises questions for me, this one makes me think of me. Thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
I have learnt a lot reading your poetry, i enjoy reading it and it always raises questions for me, this one makes me think of me. Thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:44
where is home?
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. I found this rather thought-provoking, about the idea of what is home, and where is it. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2024 08:28
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. I found this rather thought-provoking, about the idea of what is home, and where is it. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2024 08:28
unlikely treasures
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
where is home?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
where is home?
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
where is home?
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
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