Comments received on poems by arqios
beneath the nightingale’s call
arqios said:
Looks like it’s back to the drawing board with you Philly🪶
February 21st, 2025 14:02
arqios said:
Looks like it’s back to the drawing board with you Philly🪶
February 21st, 2025 14:02
beneath the nightingale’s call
orchidee said:
Cccoooeee!!! My impression of a nightingale\'s call. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido to me. lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
Cccoooeee!!! My impression of a nightingale\'s call. Do shut up Orchi, says Fido to me. lol.
February 21st, 2025 11:22
beneath the nightingale’s call
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her, my friend! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her, my friend! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:08
beneath the nightingale’s call
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t know anything about this subject till I read this write, will look it up later and then truly understand this eloquent read
February 21st, 2025 06:06
Poetic Licence said:
I didn\'t know anything about this subject till I read this write, will look it up later and then truly understand this eloquent read
February 21st, 2025 06:06
beneath the nightingale’s call
sorenbarrett said:
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male Nightingale that sings. Here revenge a brutal one serving the son cooked for the man to eat. Quite the tale of lust and revenge nicely portrayed in this poem it rings through the years in the song of the Nightingale. Masterfully done and deserving of a fave
February 21st, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male Nightingale that sings. Here revenge a brutal one serving the son cooked for the man to eat. Quite the tale of lust and revenge nicely portrayed in this poem it rings through the years in the song of the Nightingale. Masterfully done and deserving of a fave
February 21st, 2025 05:25
Three dots dancing
David Wakeling said:
This is a well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.Those dots will make you think
February 20th, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
This is a well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.Those dots will make you think
February 20th, 2025 15:23
untitled (bemused rumination)
Cassie58 said:
Very much admire the structure of this poem, but the message is far more important. Kindness counts. Fine writing arqios.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Cassie58 said:
Very much admire the structure of this poem, but the message is far more important. Kindness counts. Fine writing arqios.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Three dots dancing
Cassie58 said:
Dancing dots, a lovely way to poem communication off the page and in private. What a unique idea for a poem arqios. Enjoyed the end rhyme to your stanzas.
February 20th, 2025 13:34
Cassie58 said:
Dancing dots, a lovely way to poem communication off the page and in private. What a unique idea for a poem arqios. Enjoyed the end rhyme to your stanzas.
February 20th, 2025 13:34
Three dots dancing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Three dots dancing...they can be a source of hope, dread, or unnoticed completely. In your poem, hope and connection. Eager anticipation for the words the other has to offer to you. A wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏 Easy fave.
February 20th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Three dots dancing...they can be a source of hope, dread, or unnoticed completely. In your poem, hope and connection. Eager anticipation for the words the other has to offer to you. A wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏 Easy fave.
February 20th, 2025 08:16
Three dots dancing
arqios said:
A much younger set have yet to opine… but that’s the way of things. Perhaps later in the day, they too will have their say.
February 20th, 2025 06:06
arqios said:
A much younger set have yet to opine… but that’s the way of things. Perhaps later in the day, they too will have their say.
February 20th, 2025 06:06
Three dots dancing
Neville said:
there is considerable significance to those there three dots .. and these ones two .. Nice & I aint talking about the National Institute of Clinical Evidence neither ..👍
February 20th, 2025 05:18
Neville said:
there is considerable significance to those there three dots .. and these ones two .. Nice & I aint talking about the National Institute of Clinical Evidence neither ..👍
February 20th, 2025 05:18
Three dots dancing
jim56 said:
love this cleverly written
nice flow and rhyme
and words used express poem so well
brilliant
February 20th, 2025 05:13
jim56 said:
love this cleverly written
nice flow and rhyme
and words used express poem so well
brilliant
February 20th, 2025 05:13
Three dots dancing
Poetic Licence said:
The joining up of the dots in the correct way, which we do not always do, yet have been correctly joined in this poem, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
The joining up of the dots in the correct way, which we do not always do, yet have been correctly joined in this poem, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 05:03
Three dots dancing
sorenbarrett said:
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a dance of dots indeed. Loved it Cryptic it left a sense of distant closeness just as the phone does. Well worded my friend
February 20th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a dance of dots indeed. Loved it Cryptic it left a sense of distant closeness just as the phone does. Well worded my friend
February 20th, 2025 04:23
untitled (bemused rumination)
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Cool And Nice Rhythms
February 20th, 2025 04:12
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One arqios
Cool And Nice Rhythms
February 20th, 2025 04:12
Three dots dancing
orchidee said:
Behind those dots on computer screens there is \'More\' - all sorts.
Meanwhile, I\'m fussing over ellipses (if that\'s the plural of \'ellipsis\'). I\'ve always use three dots for them. Some people use two dots. Oh well, it saves a milli-second each time, if using only two dots. And think of the ink that can be saved, if using two dots each time in writing! lol.
February 20th, 2025 03:25
orchidee said:
Behind those dots on computer screens there is \'More\' - all sorts.
Meanwhile, I\'m fussing over ellipses (if that\'s the plural of \'ellipsis\'). I\'ve always use three dots for them. Some people use two dots. Oh well, it saves a milli-second each time, if using only two dots. And think of the ink that can be saved, if using two dots each time in writing! lol.
February 20th, 2025 03:25
Three dots dancing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dots will become letters and the letters become words and the words become poetry arqios.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dots will become letters and the letters become words and the words become poetry arqios.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:18
untitled (bemused rumination)
arqios said:
Perhaps kindness can be overrated
February 19th, 2025 16:13
arqios said:
Perhaps kindness can be overrated
February 19th, 2025 16:13
untitled (bemused rumination)
Poetic Licence said:
We will all hope for a better day, and i am sure in the end kindness will prevail, enjoyed today\'s read
February 19th, 2025 08:17
Poetic Licence said:
We will all hope for a better day, and i am sure in the end kindness will prevail, enjoyed today\'s read
February 19th, 2025 08:17
untitled (bemused rumination)
Michael Edwards said:
This one jumped out at me - original, beautifully written and conveying a hope for the new day. A great write.
February 19th, 2025 06:35
Michael Edwards said:
This one jumped out at me - original, beautifully written and conveying a hope for the new day. A great write.
February 19th, 2025 06:35
untitled (bemused rumination)
David Wakeling said:
I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem about the hope of a new day
February 19th, 2025 05:22
David Wakeling said:
I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem about the hope of a new day
February 19th, 2025 05:22
untitled (bemused rumination)
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar but have gotten caught up in the technicalities complications. Maybe someday I\'ll work it out. Here the use of the single word serves as an echo that comes back again and again reverberating a message sent. Lovely work my friend
February 19th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar but have gotten caught up in the technicalities complications. Maybe someday I\'ll work it out. Here the use of the single word serves as an echo that comes back again and again reverberating a message sent. Lovely work my friend
February 19th, 2025 04:38
untitled (bemused rumination)
orchidee said:
I \'ignited\'. I lit a match while leaving the gas on. Doh!
February 19th, 2025 03:21
orchidee said:
I \'ignited\'. I lit a match while leaving the gas on. Doh!
February 19th, 2025 03:21
untitled (bemused rumination)
Goldfinch60 said:
May hat kindness arise each day arqios.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
May hat kindness arise each day arqios.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 03:01
sheen of young love
Parisab said:
This Smiths’ song is a perfect pairing with your fresh harvest of a poem…
February 18th, 2025 17:45
Parisab said:
This Smiths’ song is a perfect pairing with your fresh harvest of a poem…
February 18th, 2025 17:45
sheen of young love
arqios said:
Not quite enough to weigh in, I suppose… oh well… 🪶🍗
February 18th, 2025 16:18
arqios said:
Not quite enough to weigh in, I suppose… oh well… 🪶🍗
February 18th, 2025 16:18
sheen of young love
Neville said:
Most voyeurs can’t bare the thought of being watched or even worse, observed but I know for a fact you make a very good point here and I’m glad I felt compelled to swing by .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 09:06
Neville said:
Most voyeurs can’t bare the thought of being watched or even worse, observed but I know for a fact you make a very good point here and I’m glad I felt compelled to swing by .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 09:06
sheen of young love
David Wakeling said:
This is a gentle respectful treatment of lovers. Enjoyed reading.Welll done
February 18th, 2025 05:25
David Wakeling said:
This is a gentle respectful treatment of lovers. Enjoyed reading.Welll done
February 18th, 2025 05:25
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