Comments received on poems by arqios



searching for a season
Poetic Licence said:

Very touching and sad, awaking some memory`s, Beautiful poem

December 18th, 2024 05:17

life\'s no faerie tale
Melancholic~Onion said:

โ€œShe walks the path where dreams ascendโ€ Thatโ€™s my favorite part.

December 18th, 2024 03:50

searching for a season
cellinic said:

That\'s quite fair, that touches of love, affection and respect remain in the consciousness of the narrator/persona. best wishes, Like)

December 18th, 2024 03:43

searching for a season
orchidee said:

A fine write A.

December 18th, 2024 03:35

searching for a season
Neville said:



Yes indeed beautiful & sad .. ๐Ÿง๐Ÿ‘

December 18th, 2024 03:29

searching for a season
Caring dove said:

Sad yet beautiful .. very nice way with words ))

December 18th, 2024 03:16

autumn chofu
Goldfinch60 said:

We were walking by Our River arqios yesterday and there was barely a leaf on the trees. But we did also notice fresh buds on one of the trees so Nature is still coming.

Andy

December 18th, 2024 02:52

autumn chofu
Teddy.15 said:

Outstanding imagery I felt I was literally inside your words, beautiful I love this. ๐ŸŒน ๐Ÿ

December 18th, 2024 02:29

autumn chofu
Neville said:



Wow, you wield words so wonderfully well & then whisk them into something splendid .. Enjoyed mulchly my friend & then some ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

December 18th, 2024 01:41

autumn chofu
Dan Williams said:

Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.

December 18th, 2024 01:06

autumn chofu
cellinic said:

Very nice and poetic. Liked and faved! )

December 18th, 2024 00:26

autumn chofu
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery.

December 17th, 2024 22:53

autumn chofu
Thad Wilk said:

Ahhh Autumn ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ‚๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚
my favorite time
of the year really!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Wonderful brevity,
stunning imagery!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace. Thad

December 17th, 2024 21:33

autumn chofu
Doggerel Dave said:

Cherry blossoms are in Spring, aren\'t they? A shame..... next time?

December 17th, 2024 17:35

autumn chofu
David Wakeling said:

Poetry in motion.Very powerful . The autumn leaves falling like a ballet dancer.Wonderful

December 17th, 2024 14:42

winterโ€™s embrace
vicecream said:

โ„๏ธ lovee

December 17th, 2024 13:03

autumn chofu
Poetic Licence said:

Completing the cycle of nature, very enjoyable

December 17th, 2024 10:57

autumn chofu
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to its destination. Very nice

December 17th, 2024 07:48

season\'s jailbreak
Goldfinch60 said:

May those turkeys keep on going arqios.

Andy

December 17th, 2024 02:46

a moment in between
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes , Now is so important .
We can look at old photos when young and long for โ€˜thatโ€™ now. Or Pictures with our Parents now gone. But in this Now there are new Loves.

December 16th, 2024 19:37

season\'s jailbreak
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic.

December 16th, 2024 17:11

season\'s jailbreak
Doggerel Dave said:

Go turkeys - who do you think clipped the wire mesh?

December 16th, 2024 17:05

a moment in between
Accidental Poet said:

\'Tis in that moment in between that all is as you wish it to be arqios. Enjoy the moment while it\'s yours. ๐Ÿ˜‰

December 16th, 2024 15:21

season\'s jailbreak
Cassie58 said:

So visual, those poor turkeys on their way to satisfy the hunger of so many sitting round the table for Christmas dinner. I have to say, turkey is off the menu in our home, we prefer beef. This poem however was quite a feast. Much enjoyed arqios.

December 16th, 2024 12:59

season\'s jailbreak
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 16th, 2024 10:49

season\'s jailbreak
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah the cost of freedom...๐Ÿฆƒ...there\'s always a catch Mr. Tom the Turkey says. ๐Ÿ˜‚ A profoundly true write, both literally for the turkeys...and metaphorically. Truly bravo, Mr. Cryptic...you inner bard shines again! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘ Easily faved...and thank you to Teddy for the inspiration! ๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿ˜Ž

December 16th, 2024 09:24

season\'s jailbreak
Neville said:



This is extraordinarily graphic .. my mouth went dry and it felt like spitting feathers .. I shall skip the main course & dive straight into the pudding if you don\'t mind .. ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ๐Ÿฆƒ ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿ‘

December 16th, 2024 09:01

season\'s jailbreak
sorenbarrett said:

A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic

December 16th, 2024 05:26

season\'s jailbreak
Teddy.15 said:

I\'d like to say hilarious but your imagery is incredibly visual ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚ oh Mr Bard 10/10 for a grand and very humble challenge. I may never eat turkey again LOL kudos!

December 16th, 2024 05:13

season\'s jailbreak
Poetic Licence said:

It would great if one year they did a break for freedom, enjoyable read , Thank you

December 16th, 2024 03:49



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