Comments received on poems by arqios
time’s no friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
time’s no friend
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
time’s no friend
Mutley Ravishes said:
Mechanical time
Grinds
Us down
Effortlessly!
\"An unhurried force.\" Great line, Arquios!
January 16th, 2025 05:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
Mechanical time
Grinds
Us down
Effortlessly!
\"An unhurried force.\" Great line, Arquios!
January 16th, 2025 05:35
time’s no friend
sorenbarrett said:
You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in most poetic terms. The words though few are deeply profound in this poem. This one deserves a Fave
January 16th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in most poetic terms. The words though few are deeply profound in this poem. This one deserves a Fave
January 16th, 2025 04:27
time’s no friend
orchidee said:
It\'s \'time\' for my quip: \'I never knew there was some much about* time, but I know now! lol. [*insert subject here, in this case - time].
January 16th, 2025 03:34
orchidee said:
It\'s \'time\' for my quip: \'I never knew there was some much about* time, but I know now! lol. [*insert subject here, in this case - time].
January 16th, 2025 03:34
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
I think ‘Covid’ has changed a lot of our way of life.
Good one.
January 16th, 2025 03:13
Kevin Hulme said:
I think ‘Covid’ has changed a lot of our way of life.
Good one.
January 16th, 2025 03:13
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and so true, I have seen them all and still do on occasion arqios.
Andy
January 16th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and so true, I have seen them all and still do on occasion arqios.
Andy
January 16th, 2025 02:16
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice writing.
January 15th, 2025 20:49
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice writing.
January 15th, 2025 20:49
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Are we meant to catch up with the times when it comes to the increasing isolation and hyper-individualism we see pervasively spreading throughout Western Civilization? That, for me, is the question. I will say this, my friend, you do paint a pre-dystopian world...one that is foreign to the dystopic state of things we\'re in now. When reading this poem, it becomes clear (if it weren\'t already clear to the reader) that we are in a dystopia. Well done on this very thought-provoking poem that is as much a reflection on our current times as it is a nostalgic look back. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Are we meant to catch up with the times when it comes to the increasing isolation and hyper-individualism we see pervasively spreading throughout Western Civilization? That, for me, is the question. I will say this, my friend, you do paint a pre-dystopian world...one that is foreign to the dystopic state of things we\'re in now. When reading this poem, it becomes clear (if it weren\'t already clear to the reader) that we are in a dystopia. Well done on this very thought-provoking poem that is as much a reflection on our current times as it is a nostalgic look back. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:41
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Doggerel Dave said:
Dystopia - the here and now. Arrived. Oh yes!
January 15th, 2025 16:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Dystopia - the here and now. Arrived. Oh yes!
January 15th, 2025 16:32
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
sorenbarrett said:
What were once face to face social ties now facebook connections. People we used to know now internet connecotions We have traded humanity for technology. Your poem as you noted seems to be a thing of the past the glue that used to hold us together has dried up. A very nidce write
January 15th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
What were once face to face social ties now facebook connections. People we used to know now internet connecotions We have traded humanity for technology. Your poem as you noted seems to be a thing of the past the glue that used to hold us together has dried up. A very nidce write
January 15th, 2025 10:16
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Mutley Ravishes said:
That was fun. I used to imagine stuff like this when I was a kid! Nothing like a rhyme to bring it back online.
January 14th, 2025 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
That was fun. I used to imagine stuff like this when I was a kid! Nothing like a rhyme to bring it back online.
January 14th, 2025 18:41
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Now, I\'m hungry.
January 14th, 2025 18:09
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Now, I\'m hungry.
January 14th, 2025 18:09
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Cassie58 said:
This poem reminds me very much how I had to encourage our Robbie as a three year old to eat his veg. We had to play games. Lots of them. Airplanes incoming. The spoon descending from a height with a full load and then a handclap when the cargo landed safely in a little open mouth. It worked a treat. Your stew looks delicious. Straight down the hatch. Yummy.
January 14th, 2025 12:49
Cassie58 said:
This poem reminds me very much how I had to encourage our Robbie as a three year old to eat his veg. We had to play games. Lots of them. Airplanes incoming. The spoon descending from a height with a full load and then a handclap when the cargo landed safely in a little open mouth. It worked a treat. Your stew looks delicious. Straight down the hatch. Yummy.
January 14th, 2025 12:49
once there was a boy
Kevin Hulme said:
Wow , Nice Poem about the Journey through life to the Present age . Something I can relate to. With ‘Dreams’ and ‘Ambitions ‘ Won or lost. Saddest words in the English language are ‘What might have been’. Good one.
January 14th, 2025 10:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Wow , Nice Poem about the Journey through life to the Present age . Something I can relate to. With ‘Dreams’ and ‘Ambitions ‘ Won or lost. Saddest words in the English language are ‘What might have been’. Good one.
January 14th, 2025 10:33
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have never been much of a soup fan...but stew...now you are talking. And, damn, if I had a dragon in my stew I would be playing as opposed to eating! LOL! Such a fun poem that warmed the cockles of my heart as surely as a bowl o\' warm stew would warm and satiate my belly. Well done, friend! 🙏❤️
January 14th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have never been much of a soup fan...but stew...now you are talking. And, damn, if I had a dragon in my stew I would be playing as opposed to eating! LOL! Such a fun poem that warmed the cockles of my heart as surely as a bowl o\' warm stew would warm and satiate my belly. Well done, friend! 🙏❤️
January 14th, 2025 08:20
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
Teddy.15 said:
Structured poetry for me is a big task so we\'ll done, as for the imagery exceptional my friend. A fun read and what a way to promote stew 🤣 🍲 try to make one with Guinness my friend. 🌹
January 14th, 2025 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
Structured poetry for me is a big task so we\'ll done, as for the imagery exceptional my friend. A fun read and what a way to promote stew 🤣 🍲 try to make one with Guinness my friend. 🌹
January 14th, 2025 04:21
Help! There’s a dragon in my stew!
sorenbarrett said:
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to fast for pictures to form. Several metaphors here and yet the main plot seems litteral and delicious
January 14th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to fast for pictures to form. Several metaphors here and yet the main plot seems litteral and delicious
January 14th, 2025 04:14
once there was a boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words arqios, we all have those memories of times gone by, may the good times always outweigh the bad times.
Andy
January 14th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words arqios, we all have those memories of times gone by, may the good times always outweigh the bad times.
Andy
January 14th, 2025 02:45
spaces we inhabit: with every breath
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
January 13th, 2025 13:51
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
January 13th, 2025 13:51
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes nice One. It must have been a Solitary life for these people, but a important one.
When I was a Kid I always wanted to live in a Lighthouse, don’t know why. ( Calling Dr Freud, Patient to see you).
A good write.
January 13th, 2025 08:54
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes nice One. It must have been a Solitary life for these people, but a important one.
When I was a Kid I always wanted to live in a Lighthouse, don’t know why. ( Calling Dr Freud, Patient to see you).
A good write.
January 13th, 2025 08:54
once there was a boy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the loss of innocence...and in particular I like how that loss comes through with the crumbling or loss of the sandcastle. A brilliant extended metaphor, my friend. Well done! 👏🌹
January 13th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the loss of innocence...and in particular I like how that loss comes through with the crumbling or loss of the sandcastle. A brilliant extended metaphor, my friend. Well done! 👏🌹
January 13th, 2025 08:41
the lighthouse keeper’s watch
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. You really paint the scene. A fine write.
January 13th, 2025 07:32
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. You really paint the scene. A fine write.
January 13th, 2025 07:32
once there was a boy
David Wakeling said:
I remember these feelings so well. This poem capture the sad and wonderful moments of childhood and how they fade into adulthood.There is a great sadness in this process. But the heart still remembers how to dream.Wonderful line and amazing poem
January 13th, 2025 05:03
David Wakeling said:
I remember these feelings so well. This poem capture the sad and wonderful moments of childhood and how they fade into adulthood.There is a great sadness in this process. But the heart still remembers how to dream.Wonderful line and amazing poem
January 13th, 2025 05:03
once there was a boy
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering our journey into adulthood and all it`s good, bad, sad and happy times along the way, yet still arriving with hope for the future to come. Loved it
January 13th, 2025 05:02
Poetic Licence said:
Remembering our journey into adulthood and all it`s good, bad, sad and happy times along the way, yet still arriving with hope for the future to come. Loved it
January 13th, 2025 05:02
« Return to the profile of arqios
