Comments received on poems by arqios
not to the swift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quality over quantity. This, by the way, is a quality poem about the writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Loved the flow of it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Quality over quantity. This, by the way, is a quality poem about the writing that I thoroughly enjoyed. Loved the flow of it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:26
not to the swift
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is the issue. Very nicely said
January 31st, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is the issue. Very nicely said
January 31st, 2025 07:12
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Dan Williams said:
Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I think you have this figured out.. Well done.
January 30th, 2025 23:55
Dan Williams said:
Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I think you have this figured out.. Well done.
January 30th, 2025 23:55
bridge is out
Dan Williams said:
So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some wounds will never truly mend.\", very nice.
January 30th, 2025 23:53
Dan Williams said:
So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some wounds will never truly mend.\", very nice.
January 30th, 2025 23:53
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NafisaSB said:
Wow that’s so brave and inspirational
Loved the concept of empathy
January 30th, 2025 23:07
NafisaSB said:
Wow that’s so brave and inspirational
Loved the concept of empathy
January 30th, 2025 23:07
bridge is out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Breaking up is never easy and, truth, some wounds never truly heal. I have a few of them myself. This is an easy fave for me my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Breaking up is never easy and, truth, some wounds never truly heal. I have a few of them myself. This is an easy fave for me my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:29
bridge is out
Teddy.15 said:
A superbly written piece dear arqios
We deceive ourselves,
clutching memories like
fragments of a broken mirror,
forgetting the faces we wore,
the warmth that once held us close,
burying the past
in shallow graves.
Isn\'t it truly a tragedy when two people feel there is nothing left to say or do. Absolutely heartfelt my friend. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:58
Teddy.15 said:
A superbly written piece dear arqios
We deceive ourselves,
clutching memories like
fragments of a broken mirror,
forgetting the faces we wore,
the warmth that once held us close,
burying the past
in shallow graves.
Isn\'t it truly a tragedy when two people feel there is nothing left to say or do. Absolutely heartfelt my friend. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:58
bridge is out
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well the message of past pain and hurt of burnt bridges and lost relationships. It offers little hope but the consolation that others too have walked this path. I deserves a fave
January 30th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well the message of past pain and hurt of burnt bridges and lost relationships. It offers little hope but the consolation that others too have walked this path. I deserves a fave
January 30th, 2025 04:25
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David Wakeling said:
Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called entropy.This a thoughtful poem linking many of the emotions involved in breaking up.Well done
January 30th, 2025 03:21
David Wakeling said:
Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called entropy.This a thoughtful poem linking many of the emotions involved in breaking up.Well done
January 30th, 2025 03:21
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Poetic Licence said:
Breaking up isn`t easy, breaking up in the right way is even harder either way memories take a long time to fade. A lovely read.
January 30th, 2025 03:09
Poetic Licence said:
Breaking up isn`t easy, breaking up in the right way is even harder either way memories take a long time to fade. A lovely read.
January 30th, 2025 03:09
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Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand this arqios but it is harder when your loved one dies as my wife did five years ago.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand this arqios but it is harder when your loved one dies as my wife did five years ago.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:48
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Cheeky Missy said:
ABBA!!!! Oh, I love them! Quintessentially perfect for this painfully eloquent number, where love is in the entire affair, I wonder since that\'s the only glue which holds. [Keeping it playing on repeat...] Exquisite and rendered superbly with perfect imagery and a bitter poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:46
Cheeky Missy said:
ABBA!!!! Oh, I love them! Quintessentially perfect for this painfully eloquent number, where love is in the entire affair, I wonder since that\'s the only glue which holds. [Keeping it playing on repeat...] Exquisite and rendered superbly with perfect imagery and a bitter poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:46
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that Spirit soar forever.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may that Spirit soar forever.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:26
into the arms of night
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done
January 29th, 2025 23:25
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done
January 29th, 2025 23:25
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Cassie58 said:
A determination to rise above
That takes much courage but is the only way to deal with the situation. Stand up to them, then they will go elsewhere. Much wisdom in your fine words arqios.
January 29th, 2025 17:59
Cassie58 said:
A determination to rise above
That takes much courage but is the only way to deal with the situation. Stand up to them, then they will go elsewhere. Much wisdom in your fine words arqios.
January 29th, 2025 17:59
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David Wakeling said:
I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to life.Live longer than your bullys.Bullys are just impotent .Excellent poem enjoyed
January 29th, 2025 15:45
David Wakeling said:
I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to life.Live longer than your bullys.Bullys are just impotent .Excellent poem enjoyed
January 29th, 2025 15:45
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Neville said:
Sage words for the downtrodden .. excellent .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 12:56
Neville said:
Sage words for the downtrodden .. excellent .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 12:56
bully-free
Poetic Licence said:
I guess bullying comes in all shapes and sizes and as someone who suffered a lot this when young i can connect with this writing. It took a long time to find the strength to rise above it, but i eventually came to the conclusion that they had more insecurities and fear inside of them than i did and i learnt that they can control me physically, but they could never control what goes on in my head. Nice to see a piece like this as it still so relevant even today, Thank you
January 29th, 2025 10:31
Poetic Licence said:
I guess bullying comes in all shapes and sizes and as someone who suffered a lot this when young i can connect with this writing. It took a long time to find the strength to rise above it, but i eventually came to the conclusion that they had more insecurities and fear inside of them than i did and i learnt that they can control me physically, but they could never control what goes on in my head. Nice to see a piece like this as it still so relevant even today, Thank you
January 29th, 2025 10:31
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is very true. Of course, when one is being bullied, it is hard to see all of that nuance. The truth is that hurt people hurt other people. It\'s what we tend to do, sadly. A well-written poem, my friend. Profoundly wise.🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is very true. Of course, when one is being bullied, it is hard to see all of that nuance. The truth is that hurt people hurt other people. It\'s what we tend to do, sadly. A well-written poem, my friend. Profoundly wise.🙏❤️
January 29th, 2025 08:28
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sorenbarrett said:
Have always believed that people do the best they can with what they have to work with at that moment and in so doing pity the bully rather than hate. Pity is a more powerful weapon than hate. A great poem with good advice to those that feel victimized
January 29th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Have always believed that people do the best they can with what they have to work with at that moment and in so doing pity the bully rather than hate. Pity is a more powerful weapon than hate. A great poem with good advice to those that feel victimized
January 29th, 2025 06:41
into the arms of night
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful calming words arqios.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful calming words arqios.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:48
into the arms of night
Cassie58 said:
A most calming poem, soft words of embrace into a restful night or maybe something even longer. Stillness, serenity, calm, gentle, kind vocabulary. A beautiful piece arqios.
January 29th, 2025 02:28
Cassie58 said:
A most calming poem, soft words of embrace into a restful night or maybe something even longer. Stillness, serenity, calm, gentle, kind vocabulary. A beautiful piece arqios.
January 29th, 2025 02:28
into the arms of night
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poem,
wonderfully vivid imagery,!! 🤩
Flows like a gentle stream,
and really penned, superbly!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 28th, 2025 11:21
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poem,
wonderfully vivid imagery,!! 🤩
Flows like a gentle stream,
and really penned, superbly!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 28th, 2025 11:21
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