Comments received on poems by sadkw33n
Now you can rest
JudyStella said:
So sentimental š„ŗā¤ļøLoved the way you have worded it!
September 19th, 2023 09:36
JudyStella said:
So sentimental š„ŗā¤ļøLoved the way you have worded it!
September 19th, 2023 09:36
I\'m sorry, but I\'m proud
tallisman said:
Itās great to know that! Thanksā¦.I keep popping in.itās good to here from you. I will move some of them over here I think as itās still my favourite site, lots of friends!
February 2nd, 2023 14:06
tallisman said:
Itās great to know that! Thanksā¦.I keep popping in.itās good to here from you. I will move some of them over here I think as itās still my favourite site, lots of friends!
February 2nd, 2023 14:06
I\'m sorry, but I\'m proud
tallisman said:
Hi SadQ, this has depth and is well put togetherā¦ you have a great ability. How are you doing? T
February 2nd, 2023 01:55
tallisman said:
Hi SadQ, this has depth and is well put togetherā¦ you have a great ability. How are you doing? T
February 2nd, 2023 01:55
Grandma\'s prophecy
tallisman said:
Hi SadQ, hope you are well, good write, thanks!
November 11th, 2022 01:53
tallisman said:
Hi SadQ, hope you are well, good write, thanks!
November 11th, 2022 01:53
Now you can rest
Crystal Hope said:
the rhyme in this was excellent as was the story. Well done.
November 10th, 2022 13:21
Crystal Hope said:
the rhyme in this was excellent as was the story. Well done.
November 10th, 2022 13:21
Grandma\'s prophecy
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Yeah i too recall bullying days when i was made fun off and this poem is so heartwarming great to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 07:37
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Yeah i too recall bullying days when i was made fun off and this poem is so heartwarming great to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 07:37
Grandma\'s prophecy
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
\'face-palming grandma\'s\' looking over us
from the other side of that six feet divide
is a warming image, to contemplate..
š¤¦āāļøš
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 31st, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
\'face-palming grandma\'s\' looking over us
from the other side of that six feet divide
is a warming image, to contemplate..
š¤¦āāļøš
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 31st, 2022 06:38
Why i think you\'re brave
_lonely__side said:
I enjoyed reading it. It touched me!!
October 12th, 2022 14:37
_lonely__side said:
I enjoyed reading it. It touched me!!
October 12th, 2022 14:37
Are you proud of me?
JudyStella said:
I am almost in tearsā¦ I am the comparatively weaker child in the house. My brother though younger ,enjoys life yet scores well. He is really talented in everything he does! Yet I should try hard in everything but still it doesnāt seem to be enough because I can never top off that bar that is set for me. I was never good at math and that made my father feel really bad but my brother is great in it, so they bond a lot. I often feel that my dad is not proud of me and considers me a weaker child. This literally speaks to me like most of your poems! Sorry for blabbing about myself š I couldnāt help it.
July 11th, 2022 15:13
JudyStella said:
I am almost in tearsā¦ I am the comparatively weaker child in the house. My brother though younger ,enjoys life yet scores well. He is really talented in everything he does! Yet I should try hard in everything but still it doesnāt seem to be enough because I can never top off that bar that is set for me. I was never good at math and that made my father feel really bad but my brother is great in it, so they bond a lot. I often feel that my dad is not proud of me and considers me a weaker child. This literally speaks to me like most of your poems! Sorry for blabbing about myself š I couldnāt help it.
July 11th, 2022 15:13
School reunion
tallisman said:
Give them hell Sadq, I suffered at school as wellā¦ if I could turn back the clockā¦. Wishing you well! T
July 8th, 2022 13:46
tallisman said:
Give them hell Sadq, I suffered at school as wellā¦ if I could turn back the clockā¦. Wishing you well! T
July 8th, 2022 13:46
School reunion
JudyStella said:
School can be really tough when people donāt turn out to be the ones who you thought they were, judgmental and mean. Itās worse when the teachers start to bully you for your weaknesses too. This is a very relatable line,
The more you talked the less you helped
With your cruel words and dirty looks
And I wish you strength for your school reunion! Hope it turns out to be an okay dayš
July 8th, 2022 10:31
JudyStella said:
School can be really tough when people donāt turn out to be the ones who you thought they were, judgmental and mean. Itās worse when the teachers start to bully you for your weaknesses too. This is a very relatable line,
The more you talked the less you helped
With your cruel words and dirty looks
And I wish you strength for your school reunion! Hope it turns out to be an okay dayš
July 8th, 2022 10:31
Why i think you\'re brave
JudyStella said:
Thatās why I think you are brave my friend!š a sensitive subject close to the heart, portrayed wellš and when I look back at my dark period I feel happy that I lived through it and that gives me courage to fight through the present! Thanks for sharing! And keep fighting! We ll reach peace and happiness one day!
July 5th, 2022 09:53
JudyStella said:
Thatās why I think you are brave my friend!š a sensitive subject close to the heart, portrayed wellš and when I look back at my dark period I feel happy that I lived through it and that gives me courage to fight through the present! Thanks for sharing! And keep fighting! We ll reach peace and happiness one day!
July 5th, 2022 09:53
Why i think you\'re brave
tallisman said:
Itās a great poem, full of feeling. I hope your ok, T
July 4th, 2022 00:38
tallisman said:
Itās a great poem, full of feeling. I hope your ok, T
July 4th, 2022 00:38
Why i think you\'re brave
tallisman said:
A great write! I enjoyed reading this.
July 3rd, 2022 15:46
tallisman said:
A great write! I enjoyed reading this.
July 3rd, 2022 15:46
Drinking issues
JudyStella said:
The interpretation of feeling cold inside by your thoughts is mind blowing!
Your tears were flowing while my eyes were dry
Sorry but i didn\'t really have the strength to cry
This line is so relatable when you reach a point where you feel that you donāt even have the strength to express yourself because you are tired and you canāt even gather up the strength to let it out. I love the imagery in this one! And the last 2 lines emit a feeling of warmth!
June 29th, 2022 03:22
JudyStella said:
The interpretation of feeling cold inside by your thoughts is mind blowing!
Your tears were flowing while my eyes were dry
Sorry but i didn\'t really have the strength to cry
This line is so relatable when you reach a point where you feel that you donāt even have the strength to express yourself because you are tired and you canāt even gather up the strength to let it out. I love the imagery in this one! And the last 2 lines emit a feeling of warmth!
June 29th, 2022 03:22
Drinking issues
Blueledge said:
Thoughtful poem. Sums up well the problem with alcohol. It\'s distructive.
I heard someone sum it up well the other day.
\"One drink is too many but ten is not enough.\"
June 26th, 2022 02:33
Blueledge said:
Thoughtful poem. Sums up well the problem with alcohol. It\'s distructive.
I heard someone sum it up well the other day.
\"One drink is too many but ten is not enough.\"
June 26th, 2022 02:33
Hey people pleaser
Chris Duffy said:
This one spoke to me.
Very cleverly written piece.
June 25th, 2022 02:30
Chris Duffy said:
This one spoke to me.
Very cleverly written piece.
June 25th, 2022 02:30
Drinking issues
Raven333 said:
really enjoyed your poem.it was penned and the flow was good.
June 25th, 2022 00:01
Raven333 said:
really enjoyed your poem.it was penned and the flow was good.
June 25th, 2022 00:01
Bullied
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Kids indeed can be cruel and bullies are the worst of the lot. Your awesome poem has a superb rhyme scheme wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 22nd, 2022 14:08
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Kids indeed can be cruel and bullies are the worst of the lot. Your awesome poem has a superb rhyme scheme wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 22nd, 2022 14:08
Bullied
JudyStella said:
As a person who went through bullying myself, I could relate a lot. You feel like hiding yourself from the world feeling as if itās your fault that they bully you. The pain felt at that moment is immeasurableš your poem does justice to the topic! Brought back awful memories but felt better with the uplifting words!
Better days are ahead
You have a lifetime left
Love this verse! Thankyou so much for sharing! You have no idea how this made my day just by knowing that there will be better days!
June 21st, 2022 12:53
JudyStella said:
As a person who went through bullying myself, I could relate a lot. You feel like hiding yourself from the world feeling as if itās your fault that they bully you. The pain felt at that moment is immeasurableš your poem does justice to the topic! Brought back awful memories but felt better with the uplifting words!
Better days are ahead
You have a lifetime left
Love this verse! Thankyou so much for sharing! You have no idea how this made my day just by knowing that there will be better days!
June 21st, 2022 12:53
Bullied
Blueledge said:
Bullies are always emotionally immature.
But they\'re everywhere.
June 21st, 2022 07:30
Blueledge said:
Bullies are always emotionally immature.
But they\'re everywhere.
June 21st, 2022 07:30
Bullied
L. B. Mek said:
its unfair and inhumane
but, truth is
hopefully, we\'ll have
long futures
shorter memories
so
snap surrender\'s, void
our innate capacity
to strengthen ourselves
like diamonds, under duress
and re-emerge, later in life
\'when it counts most!\'
brighter, than
all our forgotten nightmares
combined..
(life-affirmingly
Beautiful message yet again
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
June 21st, 2022 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
its unfair and inhumane
but, truth is
hopefully, we\'ll have
long futures
shorter memories
so
snap surrender\'s, void
our innate capacity
to strengthen ourselves
like diamonds, under duress
and re-emerge, later in life
\'when it counts most!\'
brighter, than
all our forgotten nightmares
combined..
(life-affirmingly
Beautiful message yet again
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
June 21st, 2022 04:42
Bullied
tallisman said:
For someone who was bullied-a lot- this strikes a real chord. Thanks for sharing, T
June 21st, 2022 03:58
tallisman said:
For someone who was bullied-a lot- this strikes a real chord. Thanks for sharing, T
June 21st, 2022 03:58
Your favourite song
tallisman said:
It is indeed beautiful and touching, , love it!
June 20th, 2022 12:08
tallisman said:
It is indeed beautiful and touching, , love it!
June 20th, 2022 12:08
Your favourite song
JudyStella said:
Such an emotional tear- jerking poem! I am so sorry for your loss, itās evident you had a close relationship with your grandmother. But I am sure sheās is watching over you and that she is really proud of her granddaughter ā¤ļø So beautiful indeed!š„ŗ one of my favorites!
June 20th, 2022 03:27
JudyStella said:
Such an emotional tear- jerking poem! I am so sorry for your loss, itās evident you had a close relationship with your grandmother. But I am sure sheās is watching over you and that she is really proud of her granddaughter ā¤ļø So beautiful indeed!š„ŗ one of my favorites!
June 20th, 2022 03:27
To the girl in the mirror
JudyStella said:
And if the times i fall amount to ninety nine
Then I\'m going to get up one hundred times
These lines are so motivational! Indeed it is very difficult to accept ourselves and love us for who we are. A very long journey to heal our selves, we ll get there someday, don\'t you worry!
June 19th, 2022 09:26
JudyStella said:
And if the times i fall amount to ninety nine
Then I\'m going to get up one hundred times
These lines are so motivational! Indeed it is very difficult to accept ourselves and love us for who we are. A very long journey to heal our selves, we ll get there someday, don\'t you worry!
June 19th, 2022 09:26
Hey people pleaser
JudyStella said:
Such wise words to live by! I wish I had seen this poem sooner but glad it isn\'t too late ā¤
June 19th, 2022 08:25
JudyStella said:
Such wise words to live by! I wish I had seen this poem sooner but glad it isn\'t too late ā¤
June 19th, 2022 08:25
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