Comments received on poems by sadkw33n
It\'s alright
L. B. Mek said:
great message, wonderful flow
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 16th, 2022 03:01
L. B. Mek said:
great message, wonderful flow
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 16th, 2022 03:01
It\'s alright
tallisman said:
A positive and well phrased poem, nicely put together!
June 16th, 2022 00:34
tallisman said:
A positive and well phrased poem, nicely put together!
June 16th, 2022 00:34
It\'s alright
Blueledge said:
Each day you are learning to be stronger don\'t give up.
June 15th, 2022 11:18
Blueledge said:
Each day you are learning to be stronger don\'t give up.
June 15th, 2022 11:18
To the girl in the mirror
Paul Bell said:
Never get upset over failure, it\'s the pointer to success. Never think everyone else is better off than you, they\'re not. No baby ever ran, so small steps it is, and before you know it, you\'ve arrived.
June 14th, 2022 07:04
Paul Bell said:
Never get upset over failure, it\'s the pointer to success. Never think everyone else is better off than you, they\'re not. No baby ever ran, so small steps it is, and before you know it, you\'ve arrived.
June 14th, 2022 07:04
To the girl in the mirror
tallisman said:
Personal battles are the hardest. I love this, both as a poem but also as a blueprint for survival. Thank you for sharing.
June 14th, 2022 00:47
tallisman said:
Personal battles are the hardest. I love this, both as a poem but also as a blueprint for survival. Thank you for sharing.
June 14th, 2022 00:47
Do me a favour
JudyStella said:
All so true, people pretend like they care and and ask us to be open but when we do,we find that they are not really willing to listen as they offered. At the end of the day it’s not their problem and we are left alone. But at some rare occasions we come across people who really care and who are willing to listen. But it pisses us when people tend to pity us, it’s not like we are asking for sympathy but a little bit of understanding and a shoulder to cry on. The content is really relatable!
June 12th, 2022 13:50
JudyStella said:
All so true, people pretend like they care and and ask us to be open but when we do,we find that they are not really willing to listen as they offered. At the end of the day it’s not their problem and we are left alone. But at some rare occasions we come across people who really care and who are willing to listen. But it pisses us when people tend to pity us, it’s not like we are asking for sympathy but a little bit of understanding and a shoulder to cry on. The content is really relatable!
June 12th, 2022 13:50
A letter from the sky
JudyStella said:
I am so sorry for your loss😔 you have composed this piece in his point of view which makes it more sad. Thanks for sharing! His soul was taken up too soon, May he Rest In Peace!
June 12th, 2022 13:41
JudyStella said:
I am so sorry for your loss😔 you have composed this piece in his point of view which makes it more sad. Thanks for sharing! His soul was taken up too soon, May he Rest In Peace!
June 12th, 2022 13:41
Don\'t forget me yet
GON said:
best we can do is set a good example while we\'re here.
June 12th, 2022 11:58
GON said:
best we can do is set a good example while we\'re here.
June 12th, 2022 11:58
Don\'t forget me yet
JudyStella said:
Such a heartbreaking poem. It portrays the lowest moment in ones life. And the beautiful friendship shared between two souls. It’s really heart wrenching ! Well written my friend ❤️
June 12th, 2022 08:37
JudyStella said:
Such a heartbreaking poem. It portrays the lowest moment in ones life. And the beautiful friendship shared between two souls. It’s really heart wrenching ! Well written my friend ❤️
June 12th, 2022 08:37
He loves you
JudyStella said:
People pleaser but full of hate
There\'s a sadness you can\'t shake
These lines hit me home! Yet another beautiful heart touching poem. I have no words!
June 11th, 2022 15:49
JudyStella said:
People pleaser but full of hate
There\'s a sadness you can\'t shake
These lines hit me home! Yet another beautiful heart touching poem. I have no words!
June 11th, 2022 15:49
A letter from the sky
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
indeed, may he rest in peace
this is a complex and impressive
poetically ambitious, undertaking
and brave..
thanks for sharing
June 10th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
indeed, may he rest in peace
this is a complex and impressive
poetically ambitious, undertaking
and brave..
thanks for sharing
June 10th, 2022 04:51
Do me a favour
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cause if i meet your eyes
I will struggle to fight\'
\'Cause your words aren\'t enough
Too fake to light up the dark\'
\'Do me a favour and don\'t ever come close
Cause this \"puppy eye\" look
that says \"I\'m sorry for you\"
Is what i hate the most
Do me that favour\'..
(indeed
we must be wary, of our own
intensions
for however, impassioned our intent
for good
if all our presence, adds
is toxicity, to that individuals
Fight..
then, we must Learn
to surrender
so as, to Empower
that individual\'s, right
to interpret
the worlds, as and how
they wish to..
we just have to find
the strength
to offer them, the distance
they need
while being ready, to catch them
should they ever
call out for us
at sometime, in the future)
a Brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
sorry for messing with your poem
and for my lengthy comment
try to believe
I meant no disrespect, in doing so
just got carried away
with your poetry\'s, profound message
June 9th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cause if i meet your eyes
I will struggle to fight\'
\'Cause your words aren\'t enough
Too fake to light up the dark\'
\'Do me a favour and don\'t ever come close
Cause this \"puppy eye\" look
that says \"I\'m sorry for you\"
Is what i hate the most
Do me that favour\'..
(indeed
we must be wary, of our own
intensions
for however, impassioned our intent
for good
if all our presence, adds
is toxicity, to that individuals
Fight..
then, we must Learn
to surrender
so as, to Empower
that individual\'s, right
to interpret
the worlds, as and how
they wish to..
we just have to find
the strength
to offer them, the distance
they need
while being ready, to catch them
should they ever
call out for us
at sometime, in the future)
a Brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
sorry for messing with your poem
and for my lengthy comment
try to believe
I meant no disrespect, in doing so
just got carried away
with your poetry\'s, profound message
June 9th, 2022 05:30
Do me a favour
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes there\'s help, and that\'s great, but sometimes you just want people to listen to you.
June 9th, 2022 04:25
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes there\'s help, and that\'s great, but sometimes you just want people to listen to you.
June 9th, 2022 04:25
Filthy hands
JudyStella said:
First of all I am so proud of you for talking it out. It’s so much better when you let it out and release that beast inside of you that gnaws you. I really appreciate you shedding light on this. I am very sorry for the bad experiences. And also it isn’t your fault at all. I just love how you have constructed the poem and those raw emotions flowing beautifully.
When your filthy hands snatched from me the faith i had in men?
This line is so touching and has this strong impact. Thankyou so much for sharing this poem!
June 8th, 2022 15:07
JudyStella said:
First of all I am so proud of you for talking it out. It’s so much better when you let it out and release that beast inside of you that gnaws you. I really appreciate you shedding light on this. I am very sorry for the bad experiences. And also it isn’t your fault at all. I just love how you have constructed the poem and those raw emotions flowing beautifully.
When your filthy hands snatched from me the faith i had in men?
This line is so touching and has this strong impact. Thankyou so much for sharing this poem!
June 8th, 2022 15:07
To my dear best friend
JudyStella said:
I hope you keep me in your heart though i belong to your past
These lines are just beautiful! It’s so true that once friends move away it won’t be the same ,though the connection remains. Memories truly resurrect beautiful moments and beautiful people. I love this poem and the fact it has a hopeful ring to it!
June 8th, 2022 14:57
JudyStella said:
I hope you keep me in your heart though i belong to your past
These lines are just beautiful! It’s so true that once friends move away it won’t be the same ,though the connection remains. Memories truly resurrect beautiful moments and beautiful people. I love this poem and the fact it has a hopeful ring to it!
June 8th, 2022 14:57
Near suicide
Blueledge said:
I\'ve felt this way too. Especially when my daughter died.
Now I have come to realise that there is a 100% chance that one day I will die. So I may as well find something today that I know I will enjoy doing. I\'ll find something tomorrow too. Because when I do eventually die I\'ll never enjoy anything ever again.
Your poem was interesting to read and I hope you can find enjoyment.
June 8th, 2022 02:22
Blueledge said:
I\'ve felt this way too. Especially when my daughter died.
Now I have come to realise that there is a 100% chance that one day I will die. So I may as well find something today that I know I will enjoy doing. I\'ll find something tomorrow too. Because when I do eventually die I\'ll never enjoy anything ever again.
Your poem was interesting to read and I hope you can find enjoyment.
June 8th, 2022 02:22
Filthy hands
L. B. Mek said:
\'You violated something sacred which I cannot replace\'..
this is that True, consequence
those filthy, Beasts
will never, fathom..
that their seconds worth
of warped, self-gratification
can destroy
the Art in nature
and sweetness of Life
for those
they chose
to opportunistically, assault and abuse..
but dear Poet
although it may take Time
and a lot of restarts
you can fight your way, back
to that you
of before
and in doing so, Defiantly
triumph
over, that Animal\'s actions
reassert
Your Will
over
Your Life
and claim it all back
it just may need, some Time
and a lot
of gripped fists and sighs..
(I\'m so sorry for your suffering
but I feel privileged, to read
your Warrior\'s Poetry
stay strong!
may peace and kindness
pave your horizons)
and I don\'t care
what You think, your mirror
says about you
to me, that you can weave
these words
tells me, You
are Beautiful!
where it counts the most
baggy clothes or miniskirts
makes no difference
you just do, You
loud and Proud!
cos
fck that shtty, ill-Fate
you\'re gonna overcome
and Shine, bright
again
just take your time, to truly
heal...
June 7th, 2022 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'You violated something sacred which I cannot replace\'..
this is that True, consequence
those filthy, Beasts
will never, fathom..
that their seconds worth
of warped, self-gratification
can destroy
the Art in nature
and sweetness of Life
for those
they chose
to opportunistically, assault and abuse..
but dear Poet
although it may take Time
and a lot of restarts
you can fight your way, back
to that you
of before
and in doing so, Defiantly
triumph
over, that Animal\'s actions
reassert
Your Will
over
Your Life
and claim it all back
it just may need, some Time
and a lot
of gripped fists and sighs..
(I\'m so sorry for your suffering
but I feel privileged, to read
your Warrior\'s Poetry
stay strong!
may peace and kindness
pave your horizons)
and I don\'t care
what You think, your mirror
says about you
to me, that you can weave
these words
tells me, You
are Beautiful!
where it counts the most
baggy clothes or miniskirts
makes no difference
you just do, You
loud and Proud!
cos
fck that shtty, ill-Fate
you\'re gonna overcome
and Shine, bright
again
just take your time, to truly
heal...
June 7th, 2022 04:15
Filthy hands
tallisman said:
Hi Sadkw, (auto correct keeps putting in Sadie!).I thought your poem was really good! Unlike the experience it described. You have a talent with words…
June 7th, 2022 00:51
tallisman said:
Hi Sadkw, (auto correct keeps putting in Sadie!).I thought your poem was really good! Unlike the experience it described. You have a talent with words…
June 7th, 2022 00:51
Filthy hands
Blueledge said:
It helps to be assertive. It\'s an important tool to learn.
June 7th, 2022 00:41
Blueledge said:
It helps to be assertive. It\'s an important tool to learn.
June 7th, 2022 00:41
Filthy hands
Blueledge said:
Some men\'s behaviour is unacceptable. Let\'s be honest. Most men\'s behaviour is unacceptable. I feel like apologising but what good would it do. We education from a young age. I believe we could teach empathy and make the world a better place.
June 7th, 2022 00:33
Blueledge said:
Some men\'s behaviour is unacceptable. Let\'s be honest. Most men\'s behaviour is unacceptable. I feel like apologising but what good would it do. We education from a young age. I believe we could teach empathy and make the world a better place.
June 7th, 2022 00:33
To my dear best friend
L. B. Mek said:
sweet themes, really well written
that you cherish your connections
at such a young age, is testimony
to the wisdom
you\'re cultivating, thanks for sharing
June 6th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
sweet themes, really well written
that you cherish your connections
at such a young age, is testimony
to the wisdom
you\'re cultivating, thanks for sharing
June 6th, 2022 05:32
To my dear best friend
jarcher54 said:
I\'ll meet you in our memories... a very sweet way of saying it... such a sincere little song. Makes me start missing old friends. Thank you.
June 6th, 2022 01:14
jarcher54 said:
I\'ll meet you in our memories... a very sweet way of saying it... such a sincere little song. Makes me start missing old friends. Thank you.
June 6th, 2022 01:14
Twin brothers
JudyStella said:
You have portrayed the distinction beautifully 💖 I just wanted to confirm if one brother killed the other? a very emotional poem indeed! Well written!
May 31st, 2022 12:24
JudyStella said:
You have portrayed the distinction beautifully 💖 I just wanted to confirm if one brother killed the other? a very emotional poem indeed! Well written!
May 31st, 2022 12:24
Near suicide
Jonas Robinson said:
Sometimes, I would like to murder the doctor. But, others I\'m grateful. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2022 14:36
Jonas Robinson said:
Sometimes, I would like to murder the doctor. But, others I\'m grateful. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2022 14:36
Near suicide
JudyStella said:
But hang in there, it’s worth it to fight the struggles of present for a better future
May 28th, 2022 08:57
JudyStella said:
But hang in there, it’s worth it to fight the struggles of present for a better future
May 28th, 2022 08:57
Near suicide
JudyStella said:
I’ve been there too and this is a perfect interpretation of the feelings you feel when you reach the abyss, a dark place where you feel lonely and hopeless.
May 28th, 2022 08:54
JudyStella said:
I’ve been there too and this is a perfect interpretation of the feelings you feel when you reach the abyss, a dark place where you feel lonely and hopeless.
May 28th, 2022 08:54
Goodbye grandmother
JudyStella said:
A very emotional poem dear friend 🥺 I was able to visualize it and picture the beautiful bond between you and your grandmother. I am so sorry for your loss 😔 stay strong!
May 25th, 2022 06:33
JudyStella said:
A very emotional poem dear friend 🥺 I was able to visualize it and picture the beautiful bond between you and your grandmother. I am so sorry for your loss 😔 stay strong!
May 25th, 2022 06:33
I can\'t sleep
Christina8 said:
I feel you I didn\'t sleep last night either and it kinda makes you lose your mind. Great write!
May 17th, 2022 08:10
Christina8 said:
I feel you I didn\'t sleep last night either and it kinda makes you lose your mind. Great write!
May 17th, 2022 08:10
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