Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Are we sure of our role
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Are we sure of our role
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
Are we sure of our role
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
The Wrong Talents
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
Gold digger
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
Bruce Lee
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
Bruce Lee
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
A few rocks in Africa’s shoe
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
We don’t live long enough
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
We don’t live long enough
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
The lost have been found
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
Dream science. Energize!
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
Dream science. Energize!
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Traveling through our mistakes
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Traveling through our mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
Self hate came home to roost
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
Self hate came home to roost
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me represents the lack of esteem and value that one should have for others that we tell others we love. An old time macho view of the male role. Dominance does not mean love. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me represents the lack of esteem and value that one should have for others that we tell others we love. An old time macho view of the male role. Dominance does not mean love. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:29
Let’s not touch mustaches
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of standing up for oneself and one\'s decisions well done.
May 6th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of standing up for oneself and one\'s decisions well done.
May 6th, 2025 09:37
Those Amphibious Beings
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most lovely
May 5th, 2025 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most lovely
May 5th, 2025 17:52
In a state of heaven or not
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in masked rhyme. A most lovely write
May 4th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in masked rhyme. A most lovely write
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Unknown child at home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystery that leaves the reader with a question. I love poems like this that provoke thought and open-endedly allow each reader to superimpose their own meaning. Well done I would say they took my certainty and peace of mind, my security. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystery that leaves the reader with a question. I love poems like this that provoke thought and open-endedly allow each reader to superimpose their own meaning. Well done I would say they took my certainty and peace of mind, my security. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 04:13
A finger can be misleading
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many hoping for an external savior to come along and rescue them, even though it\'s been made clear that the savior is within. Ignorance must be Satan\'s favorite mistress!
Great write.
April 29th, 2025 19:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many hoping for an external savior to come along and rescue them, even though it\'s been made clear that the savior is within. Ignorance must be Satan\'s favorite mistress!
Great write.
April 29th, 2025 19:25
A finger can be misleading
sorenbarrett said:
Deep, profound, and intriguing. Osiris and his resurrection being brought back to life by Isis there are many instances in mythology of such comparisons. Well written.
April 29th, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
Deep, profound, and intriguing. Osiris and his resurrection being brought back to life by Isis there are many instances in mythology of such comparisons. Well written.
April 29th, 2025 12:24
Renegotiations
sorenbarrett said:
A lot of discontent shows in this poem. Tiered of being treated as a fool there seems to be a desire to overturn the system. Nicely written
April 27th, 2025 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lot of discontent shows in this poem. Tiered of being treated as a fool there seems to be a desire to overturn the system. Nicely written
April 27th, 2025 17:52
Voters
sorenbarrett said:
Strong this poem advocates more rapid change and so it was with abolition and emancipation. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Strong this poem advocates more rapid change and so it was with abolition and emancipation. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:31
Faces of death
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and its contrast with life and death. Great usage of rhyme and images. I think that death has the edge in this race in that entropy always wins.
April 24th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and its contrast with life and death. Great usage of rhyme and images. I think that death has the edge in this race in that entropy always wins.
April 24th, 2025 04:33
Revelations
sorenbarrett said:
Fears and desires do in fact make up the seeds that lead to demise. A good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Fears and desires do in fact make up the seeds that lead to demise. A good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:42
A Chaos explained
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of abuse and wish for freedom from it. There is nice rhyme included that makes it flow. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of abuse and wish for freedom from it. There is nice rhyme included that makes it flow. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 10:49
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