Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk
Tony36 said:
BRAVO, wonderful tribute to one of the finest Curly
February 25th, 2025 08:23
Tony36 said:
BRAVO, wonderful tribute to one of the finest Curly
February 25th, 2025 08:23
Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present president he would do just fine better than the last 47. I used to think some were great until I learned about each. Oh well I guess we all have our faults even if history tries to gloss over them for the privileged few.
February 25th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present president he would do just fine better than the last 47. I used to think some were great until I learned about each. Oh well I guess we all have our faults even if history tries to gloss over them for the privileged few.
February 25th, 2025 04:10
Wear your wig bleach your skin
sorenbarrett said:
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful, emotional and motivational. It talks to all people because it is not only black but any difference that can be felt in this poem. Masterfully written in a most poetic way. This is a fave
February 23rd, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful, emotional and motivational. It talks to all people because it is not only black but any difference that can be felt in this poem. Masterfully written in a most poetic way. This is a fave
February 23rd, 2025 11:20
In my dreams I’m a master
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
Confused and dying
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
Who is more civilized
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
Who’s behind the stereotypes
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
A reflection from behind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
A reflection from behind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
A reflection from behind
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
When sleeping gods awaken
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Power over power?
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Power over power?
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
How far behind are we
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
The one in us all
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Christmas at mom’s house
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Christmas at mom’s house
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
Christmas at mom’s house
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
It’s only two ways out
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
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