Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Possessed by a poet
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49
Mother Nature is not innocent
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans and the rest. Humans adapted to whatever environment was presented, then over time fucked it up.
December 6th, 2024 07:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans and the rest. Humans adapted to whatever environment was presented, then over time fucked it up.
December 6th, 2024 07:12
One of Life’s soliders hidden in the brush
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of each rhyming word is like the throb of one’s pulse. This poem runs along toward its end with a chug of a locomotive. Nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of each rhyming word is like the throb of one’s pulse. This poem runs along toward its end with a chug of a locomotive. Nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:18
What’s in the box; torture
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Mosquito Mafia
Got a lot to answer for
And their lieutenants
From Europe and Africa
To say nothing of Arabia
It’s been said that way back in the day
The European boreal forests
Were hunted for slaves
By ones from the South
Thank heavens
There is a beginning, middle,
And end
To everything except awareness
Of Being
November 29th, 2024 19:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Mosquito Mafia
Got a lot to answer for
And their lieutenants
From Europe and Africa
To say nothing of Arabia
It’s been said that way back in the day
The European boreal forests
Were hunted for slaves
By ones from the South
Thank heavens
There is a beginning, middle,
And end
To everything except awareness
Of Being
November 29th, 2024 19:03
What’s in the box; torture
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for vengeance and justice.
November 29th, 2024 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for vengeance and justice.
November 29th, 2024 12:12
Obtuse
Doggerel Dave said:
Denial (particularly if it is in your best interests to do so) rulz....👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Denial (particularly if it is in your best interests to do so) rulz....👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:14
The God scope
Mutley Ravishes said:
That`s the kind of questing I like!
Your writing is going up and up (imo).
November 18th, 2024 21:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
That`s the kind of questing I like!
Your writing is going up and up (imo).
November 18th, 2024 21:35
The God scope
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for sure.
November 18th, 2024 00:39
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for sure.
November 18th, 2024 00:39
Does god need God
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tell it to `em!
This fifth sun race
We need a slap in the face!
\"The real man is a magnificent Imagination.\"
N.G
November 13th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tell it to `em!
This fifth sun race
We need a slap in the face!
\"The real man is a magnificent Imagination.\"
N.G
November 13th, 2024 18:49
What the dying see
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great contemplation
Beautifully written
Thanks a million!
November 11th, 2024 19:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great contemplation
Beautifully written
Thanks a million!
November 11th, 2024 19:34
Protect the babies
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Life’s slight of hand
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Those black jobs
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Those black jobs
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
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